【推荐K12】2018_2019学年高中英语Module1DeepSouth写作园地_说明文:地点介绍外研版选修8

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Module 1 Deep South写作园地-说明文:地点介绍[感悟范文]假设你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Nick将于八月来四川旅游,特来信询问有关旅游景点情况。

请根据下表所提供的要点,写一封回信,并表示盼望他的到来。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:海子lake; 都江堰水利工程the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project[范文]Dear_Nick,I'm_glad_to_hear_that_you're_coming_to_Sichuan_in_August.①You've made the wise choice to travel here. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-f amous places of interest, ②such as Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, ③of which the water is clear and looks colorful. It can excite visitors' imagination. Another attraction is the Dujiangya n Irrigation Project, ③which was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation today. And the ④newly-built Wenchuan Earthquake Museum can make all the people present ④call up that ④breathtaking moment. ②Besides, the nice w eather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. I'm sure you'll have a good time.I'm looking forward to your coming.Yours_sincerely,Li_Hua [技法讨论]介绍一个地方,就是对其大致状况进行描述,向人们展示该地方的地貌特征、风土人情、历史文化等。

写此类文章应注意以下几点:1.内容一般包括该地方的位置、面积、人口、历史、气候、特产等。

也可以适当地融入人文风貌,简单介绍当地的文化遗址、民间风俗及有趣的生活方式等。

但是一定要抓住该地方的主要特色,这样才能给读者留下深刻的印象。

2.写作顺序:介绍地理位置的说明文,它的写作顺序建议如下:“地、面、气、城、著(地名)”,应介绍这个地方的地(地理位置)面(面积人口)气(气候状况)城(两个著名城市)著(与众不同之处)。

3.结构:三段式是最好的选择。

开头简要介绍某地的地理位置,第二段详细介绍,第三段进行总结、感想或邀请人们到被介绍的地方游玩。

黄金表达1.所处位置和地位、历史be located/situated in ...lie in ...stand on the top of/at the foot of ...Located in ..., ×××is a city ...with a history of ...be surrounded by/with ...face ...neighbor ...political/commercial/cultural center ...the capital ...2.面积和人口It covers an area of ...with a population of ...It covers ..., making it the rgest city in ...3.气候It is warm all the seasons (dry, cold, sunny ...)The weather is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer.4.地域特色be famous for..., known as ..., attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.be rich in ...be home to ......has many places of interest, among which are ...and ...What attracts tourists most is ...亮点分析:本篇行文层次清楚,组织材料周密,语言清晰、严谨,写作时能运用合理的连接成分将文章所给信息流畅地表达出来,这是一篇优秀的习作。

①用了导游语言,引人入胜,符合本文的题材。

②such as,besides等的使用增强了文章的逻辑性。

③定语从句的恰当运用提高了文章的可读性和层次感。

④恰当地运用较高级词汇,增加了文章的亮点,提升了文章的档次。

[类文演练]假设某英语报社正在举办以“地球母亲大家说”为主题的征文比赛。

请你根据以下提示,写一篇介绍南极洲的英语短文,向该报社投稿。

内容包括:1.位于地球的最南端,面积约1400万平方公里,几乎占地球陆地总面积的1/10;2.是最冷的洲,常年冰雪不融;冬季很长,从四月持续到十月;3.这里植物很少,海岸和岛屿附近有企鹅、海狮、海豚、鲸等海洋动物;4.富含铁、煤、天然气等自然资源,不同国家的科学家都来这里考察。

注意:1.词数100左右;2.内容完整,要点齐全,可以适当发挥。

___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[联想词汇]1. 在地球的最南端in the ________ south of the earth答案:extreme2. 占地面积为…… ________ an area of ...答案:cover3. 被冰雪覆盖 be ________ with ice and snow答案:covered4. 从四月持续到十月 ________ from April to October答案:last5. 富含铁、煤、天然气等自然资源be ________ in iron, coal, gas and other natural resources答案:rich[连词成句]1.它的面积约1400万平方公里,几乎占地球陆地总面积的1/10。

It ________ an area of about 14 million square kilometres, which ________ almost ________ of the world's total land area.答案:covers; makes up; one tenth2. 它的冬季很长,从4月持续到10月。

Its winter is very ________, ________ from April to October.答案:long; lasting3. 因为太冷了,所以能在那里生长的植物很少。

It is ________ cold ________ very few plants can live there.答案:so; that4. 那里虽然没有人类居住,但却富含铁、煤、天然气等自然资源。

________ there are no humans ________, it ________ iron, coal, gas and other natural resources.答案:Although; living there; is rich in[连句成章]___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________答案:Antarctica is a continent in the extreme south of the earth. It covers an area of about 14 million square kilometres, which makes up almost one tenth of the world's total land area.Antarctica is the coldest continent on the earth, covered with ice and snow all the year round. Its winter is very long, which lasts from April to October. It is so cold that very few plants can live there. There are many penguins, sea lions, dolphins, whales, etc. on the coast and near the islands.Although there are no humans living there, it is rich in iron, coal, gas and other natural resources. Scientists from many countries, including China, have started research work there.。