中考英语二轮复习作文优享编(四)

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2019中考英语作文优享编（四）

Passage--A

在你所学的科目中，你最喜欢的科目是什么？请你以“ My Favorite Subject ”为题， 根据以下写作要点，用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文。

要点提示： 1. 介绍你最喜欢的科目；

2．你喜欢该科目的原因；

3．谈谈你今后的学习打算。

写作要求： 1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2．语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。

My Favorite Subject

In school we study many subjects.My favorite subject is English.

I think English is very interesting.It's widely used in the world.Wherever you go， you can use it.I

can not only learn many new words and phrases but also get the latest news about western

countries.Besides ，I can make many foreign friends ，too. In the future ， I will take notes carefully

and focus on correct spelling and

grammar.When I have some problems with my English ， I will turn to my teachers and

friends for help.

Passage--B

最近你校进行了一次“说出你的烦恼” ( “ Don' t keep your worries ”) 的调查活动，请你

用英语写一篇短文。

2、词数 80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。

One possible version:

Our school has made a survey — "Don't keep your worries" ． Here are the results ．

About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework．They have so much

homework to do every day ． And they feel stressed too much ． About thirty

percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them 要求： 1、内容包括：调查结果(如图所示) 、对老师和父母的建议。

in their 2

studies ）．It's difficult for them to get along/on well with their parents ． The other twenty percent of

them say they are weak in health ． They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or

after-school activities ．

Dear teachers, would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves? Dear

momand dad, we want to take more exercise to keep fit/healthy,/stay healthy ． We will try/do our best

and we also want to play on our own ．

Passage--C

假如你校英语报七月份将开展 "校园之星”（Star of the CampuS评选活动，请你根据图

中的信息，向校英语报写一篇短文，介绍你心目中 "校园之星 "康康的情况。

提示词：help …with spare time get along with do housework

要求： 1．文章内容符合题意，可参考所给提示词；

2 ．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；

3 ．词数 100左右（文章首段已给出，不计人总词数） ．

Our school will select （挑选）"Star of the Campus （校园） "in July ．I think Kangkang is the most

suitable one．

【参考范文】

At school ， KangKang studies very hard at his lessons ， so he is always one of the top

students in our class ．He also loves sports ． He often plays football at weekends with his friends ． What's more ， he cares for other students ， so he always helps them with

their lessons after class ．

At home， he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare time ． Besides ， KangKang gets

along well with his neighbors ． This is why KangKang is so popular ．

In short ， KangKang is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in need． He sets a

good example for us ．

【解析】 3

Our school will select （挑选）"Star of the Campus （校园）

"in July ． I think Kangkang is the most suitable

At school ， KangKang studies very hard at his lessons ， so he is

always one of the top students in our class ．He also loves sports ．He often plays football at weekends

with his friends ． What's more， he cares for other students ，so he always helps them with their

lessons after class ．【高分句型】 （在学校的表现）

At home，he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare time ．Besides ，KangKang gets along

well with his neighbors ． This is why KangKang is so popular ．【高分句 型】（在家的表现）

In short ， KangKang is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others

in need ．【高分句型】 He sets a good example for us ．

这是一篇图画作文． 内容是介绍你心目中 "校园之星 "康康的情况． 时态主要为一般现在时． 人

称主要为第三人称．

写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 描述图画；在学校：康康学习努力，成绩好，爱足球，关心同学帮助同学 在家：帮助妈妈做家务，邻里关系好

常用到的重点短语：

study hard 努力学习

what's more 再者

care for 照顾

help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事

get along well with sb 与某人相处的好

【高分句型】

1. ① What's more, he②cares for other students , so he always ③helps them with their lessons after

class ．

① what's more 再者

② care for 照顾

③ help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事 one． 4

2. This is why KangKang is so popular .

why 引导的从句和 is 构成系表结构．

3.① In short , KangKang is an excellent student and he ②is always ready to help

others ③in need .

① in short 简言之，做插入语.

② be ready to do sth 乐意做某事

③ in need在危急中，做后置定语，修饰 others .

这是一篇看图作文．看图作文要注意一下几点（ 1）弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，根据图

画在脑海中串联出完整的故事， 注意图画中的细节． （ 2）结合提示词， 明确考查意图． 所

给提示词可帮助理解画面内容， 也是组成句子的必用材料． 有时还会给出起始句 （这就给出 了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展 开，联想，就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了． （ 3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用

适当的连词使句子流畅， 连贯． （4）注意书写的规范： 大小写，标点符号等的正确运用． （ 5） 注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等．

Passage--D

给出 , 不计入总词数。

提示词语： collect bottles turn off duty make a real difference

Good environment is important for everyone.

【参考范文】

Good environment is important for everyone. To help with it, I pick up the litter when

I see it on the floor. Besides, I always collect bottles and I never forget to turn