中考英语作文专题复习课件 .ppt

范文
A Visit to a Farm
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We enjoyed ourselves. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.
Key points： visited a farm had a picnic danced· · · sang Time order:
met · · · bus played chess told jokes· · · stories
Today· · · early in the morning · · · then· · ·at noon · · · After a short rest· · · the time passed quickly· · ·

the question to identify the most important information
Language expression skills
Vocabulary
Building a good vocabulary is essential for effective language expression Memorize new words, their meanings, and examples to enhance your language skills
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Conclusion
End your paragraph with a strong conclusion that summarizes your main point Ensure that your conclusion ties back to your opening presence and leaves the reader with a satisfying ending
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Body
Develop your paragraph by supporting your main idea with relevant details and examples Use transitions to connect different senses and ideas, making the paragraph flow smoothly
Grammar knowledge
Grammar knowledge is also essential for writing, but students may make misses in sense structure, tense, or punctation

practice speaking English 练习讲英语 later on 后来，随后 take grammar notes 作语法笔记
the secrets of becoming a good language learner 成为一名好的语言学习者的秘诀 lots of listening practice 大量的听力练习
In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
2. 词数80左右，已给出的句子不计人总词数。
How to be a good learner? As a good learner, we should____________________
We must learn how to change the problems into challenges. h the help of my teacher, I make much progress in
English. 在老师的帮助下，我的英语取得了很大进步。
_____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________

Advice 2
Doing more exercise is also a good way to keep healthy.
Advice 3
We are supposed to have enough sleep.
Advice 4
Keeping in a good mood（心情）every day is good for health .
Remember choosing proper ways can help you sleep better.
Discussion and Answer 1.How long do you spend in sleeping?
2.Why is it dangerous to take sleeping pills?
Firstly, healthy eating habits are very important for your health. You should eat less junk food and more fruit and vegetables. Secondly, you should learn to relax yourself. You can do some sports such as running, swimming and playing basketball and listen to music to reduce your pressure. Thirdly, you are supposed to have enough sleep to keep your brain active in class.
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（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 电子邮件
（3）词数：80~100
（4）邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总 4.主题：
词数。
研学活动
书面表达第二步：列
（用简单的短语或者句子列出文章的要点）
内容要点
参考词汇
When and where to go Zhejiang University, this Saturday
为了衔接紧密和避免逐条翻译，可以 在适当的地方添加事例或紧密相连的 话, 然后连成句。
例: My classmates and I will go to Zhejiang University this Saturday.
1. My classmates and I will go to Zhejiang
How to go
by train
What to do
Visit…,talk with…,learn about…,…
What to take
Passport….
Others
Meet at the school gate, 7:30 a.m.,…
For Example: 1. My classmates and I will go to Zhejiang University this Saturday. 2. 3 4. 5.
3. 4. …
书面表达用总分总，分总结构。开头和结尾应注意 简洁，漂亮，最好采用开门见山的形式，结尾应 注意与题目或开头相呼应，并且要扣题有力。
Beginning：Dear Mike,
Ending:
How is everything going?
A. Best wishes!
假如你叫Daming，本周六你们班要去浙江 1.人称：

Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether it is necessary for middle school students to go to training classes or have tutors on weekends.
Music plays an important part in my life.
Write a topic sentence for the report.
A big problem 90% of the city’s rivers are polluted. The air in the city is getting dirtier. Noise is becoming a big headache for
Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life. With the Internet，we can get the latest news. It is fast and convenient. We can find and download information that we need. We can send emails to friends. We can play games on it.
we need. 4. We can send some emails to our friends.
5. We can play games on it.
Steps towards writing a good paragraph
Step 2 How to change it into a well- organized 组织 paragraph

假设你叫李明，你打算向某学生英文网站投稿，分享你做过的一个有趣 的梦。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文。
写作要求： (1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 (3)语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
An Interesting Dream by Li Ming I have an interesting dream to share with you.
假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困 扰： 自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习. 请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对该问题的见解。 参考词汇: diet (v.节食) , appearance (n.外貌) , inner beauty (内在美)
dances
Pray for health and happiness for the
whole year
2
the MidAutumn Festival
in
the middle autumn
of
Moon cakes
watch the moon; tell the story
celebrate harvest; get together
Glad to receive your e-mail.
Yours, Zhang Ming
Dear John, Glad to receive your email. You asked me about festivals in China. Let me introduce some important ones to you. First of all, I want to introduce the Lantern Festival. It comes in January or February. On that day, we eat yuanxiao, go to watch lantern shows and dragon dances to pray for health and happines s for the whole year. The Mid Autumn Festival is in the middle of autumn. It is a time for the family to get together and celebrate harvest. At night, the whole family eat delicious moon cakes and tell the story of Chang'e while watching the big bright moon. The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese. It's the beginning of a new year. We usually eat dumplings, meat and set off fireworks and visit our relatives. Everyone, young or old, has a happy smile on their face. Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Zhang Ming

because they are helpful and important.
结构清晰
总分总结构
第一段要开门见山，直 接拿出主题
可以用以下短语或句型帮助 美化第一段：as we all know; There is no doubt that; with the development of society
1.What’s the advantages of bringing mobile phones to schools?
2.What’s the disadvantages of bringing mobile phones to schools?
Can students bring the telephones into schools?
because，as ，so， as a result，thus
as far as I know， in my opinion
2.What’s the disadvantages of bringing mobile phones to schools?
spend too much time playing games;cheat in exams
3.What’s your opinions ?
can not bring smartphones into school; pay attention to their study
结构清晰
总分总结构
第二和第三段就要说对所写内容加 以说明
第四步：对所完成的句子进行润色。
1.运用所学知识，添加句子来辅助说明
本段为文章的关键部分
1.What’s the advantages of bringing mobile phones to schools?

关联词
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and,
not only…but also, neither…nor;
2.表示选择: or, either…or;
3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all,
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore
专题复习解析讲解课件
写作第二步
列
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要
点。
加 写作第三步：
• 加首尾，使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构 ，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁， 漂亮。
专题复习解析讲解课件
连 写作第四步：
• 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清 晰，各个部分衔接自然。
专题复习解析讲解课件
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but,
on the one hand…on the other hand;
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words;
专题复习解析讲解课件
一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 • 1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； • 2) 单词拼写错误； • frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … • 3) 动词缺失； • Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. • 4）前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等） • Eg: All people have their own dream. •

语意要合情合理
段
落
要
清 晰 明 了 今天去看了一下昨天那篇文章的收益，只有四分钱，超级超级少，不过这一篇的单价比前面几篇文章都要高。因此虽然这篇文章的雪阅读量不高，但最终的收益还是不错的，至少要比前面的一分钱要高一点点。
语法要恰当正确
过渡要自然顺畅
语 句 要 有 今天去看了一下昨天那篇文章的收益，只有四分钱，超级超级少，不过这一篇的单价比前面几篇文章都要高。因此虽然这篇文章的雪阅读量不高，但最终的收益还是不错的，至少要比前面的一分钱要高一点点。
今天去看了一下昨天那篇文章的收益 ，只有 四分钱 ，超级 超级少 ，不过 这一篇 的单价 比前面 几篇文 章都要 高。因 此虽然 这篇文 章的雪 阅读量 不高， 但最终 的收益 还是不 错的， 至少要 比前面 的一分 钱要高 一点点 。
今天去看了一下昨天那篇文章的收益 ，只有 四分钱 ，超级 超级少 ，不过 这一篇 的单价 比前面 几篇文 章都要 高。因 此虽然 这篇文 章的雪 阅读量 不高， 但最终 的收益 还是不 错的， 至少要 比前面 的一分 钱要高 一点点 。
在这里添加相关的文字描述，可以从您的文案中复制需要的内容到这里。
主讲教师： XXX
一篇优秀的书面表达应该是：
今天去看了一下昨天那篇文章的收益 ，只有 四分钱 ，超级 超级少 ，不过 这一篇 的单价 比前面 几篇文 章都要 高。因 此虽然 这篇文 章的雪 阅读量 不高， 但最终 的收益 还是不 错的， 至少要 比前面 的一分 钱要高 一点点 。
a gooAdlswo,asymile before you speak and do not feel shy.
(2) You should start it with greetings or a question （1）每天在纸上写四到五个单词