高三英语看图作文讲评
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高三英语看图作文讲评汇编文字讲稿7 看下列六幅图,请你以Save Water为题写一篇120字以上的短文。
第一步:认真审图,了解大意仔细看图,图中出现了两个人物.为了叙述的方便,我们分别给他们取名为:李明和李冬.大意是:李明玩水,李冬看到了,及时纠正,提醒人们节约用水.第二步:围绕主题,提炼要点围绕确立的主题,仔细看图,初步列出每幅图的要点,并简要译出.图1:李明打开水龙头玩水,把水溅得满地都是.Li Ming turned on the tap to play with water and splashed water here and there on the ground. 图2:李冬正好路过,李明把水溅在他身上,李明被弄得浑身湿透.Li Dong happened to pass by when Li Ming splashed him with water and made him all wet. 图3:李明没有关水龙头就逃走了.Li Ming ran away without turning off the tap.图4:李冬走过去关上水龙头.Li Dong went over and turned off the water.图5:李冬写好布告贴在水龙头附近的墙上.Li Dong wrote a notice and put it up on the wall near the tap.图6:李明返回后看到布告,布告上写着“节约用水”Li Ming went back and saw the notice,reading “Save Water”.第三步:合理想象,补出要点将六幅图连起来并结合考虑每幅图中的各个细节进行想象,将隐藏的要点补出来,使故事连贯。
第一幅图:补出故事发生的时间:如放学后的某一天第四幅图:补出:李冬看到这一切……,怎么做(关上水龙头);心里怎么想:非常生气,认为不应该浪费水.第五幅图:补出:写布告的地点.如:回家写第六幅图:补出:过了一段时间…..(李明返回,看到布告后的)愧疚心理.第四步:连句成篇,过渡自然Save WaterOne day after school, Li Ming turned on a tap and splashed water here and there on the ground. Li Dong happened to pass by when Li Ming played a joke on him to splash him with water and made him all wet. Li Ming was afraid that Li Dong would puish him so he ran away without turning off the tap. When Li Dong saw this, he went over and turned off the water. He was angry because he thought water shouldn‟t be wasted. Then he went home and wrote a notice,reading…Save Water‟.He put it up on the wall near the tap. After some time, Li Ming went back and saw the notice. He felt sorry for what he had done.江苏省石庄高级中学高三英语看图作文讲评汇编文字讲稿8为迎接高考,你常常复习功课到深夜。
高三英语看图作文讲评汇编文字讲稿3试题:根据下列六幅图所反映的内容,结合写作提示,以“Changes In Our Life”为题写一篇120左右的短文.写作要点提示:过去寄信、听收音机、住房拥挤现在打电话、看电视、住房宽敞设想一下图中所反映的过去到现在的变化就发生在你的家里。
图中人物就是你、你的父母。
还要讲明变化的大体时间(可根据常识)一、提炼要点1、与外界联系方式上的变化过去:父辈寄信与别人联系现在:我们可以在家里打电话与别人联系2、获取信息方面的变化过去:父辈听收音机获取信息现在:我们看电视获取信息3、居住条件方面的变化过去:父辈结婚时住在一间挤满家具的小房间里现在:我们已经搬进了两层楼的楼房里了(可以设想)总结点题:过去二十年的变化给我们带来了什么(可以设想)二、简要译出要点1。
In the past my parents got in touch with others by sending letters but now we can get in touch with othersover the telephone at home.2.In the past my parents listened to the radio for news and otherinformation,but now we can get much newsand information by watching TV.3.In the past when my parents got married about twenty years ago, theyhad to live in a small room crowdedwith furniture, but now we have moved into a two-storeyed building with quite a few rooms inside it。