金版教程2020高考英语二轮复习训练:4-2-3 高级表达与过渡衔接b Word版含解析
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课下练习3一、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
All students from our class go to the exhi bition displaying China’s outstanding achievements in last month.As soon as we arrived,a guide gave us a introduction to the exhibition.While listen,we made some notes carefully.We felt excitedly and couldn’t wait to start the visit.We were both inspired b y the various exhibits,including the models of the high-speed train.We took a lot of photo and were proud of the achievements of our country.The next day,we decided have a class meeting to present which we had seen.Immediately we devoted ourselves to prepare the presentations.二、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
建议用时:45分钟Ⅰ.完形填空[2015·江西南昌一模] On Thanksgiving morning, I got up early to run in the local 5-Kilometer. It was __1__ that morning so everyone was jumping around to stay warm.Sitting in the grass was a man __2__ in a blanket. It was pretty __3__ he was homeless. As usual, most people __4__ not to see him. I went over and talked with him for several minutes. He said that he was a __5__ and had hoped he might earn a few dollars to go buy a Thanksgiving __6__.It was time for the race. I told him I'd talk to him more __7__ the race. He said he would be there __8__ “the parade” that he hadn't expected that __9__. I'm in the military. It always __10__ to see someone who served going through a rough time. He hadn't asked me for anything, __11__ I wanted to do something for him. I only had a couple of dollars, __12__ not enough for a Thanksgiving dinner.After the race I sat in the __13__ next to him, which got me a few odd looks from other runners. We talked for half an hour about sorts of things, including the __14__ we share in Christ. During our __15__ I gave him the cash. He didn't want to accept it. He said something that I didn't __16__. He said “Thank you. I haven't really talked to anybody in a long time.” This man is thanking me for just talking to him? I'm nobody __17__. I went up to other persons to ask if they had some dollars for a homeless veteran. I went to the run to do something for myself, but he did more for me than I could ever have gotten out of __18__. He showed me how to smile through the __19__ times and reminded me not to take for __20__ the many blessings I have.本文讲述的是作者在参加一个跑步比赛时看到一个无家可归的人,作者想要在金钱方面帮助他,但是他拒绝了作者的好意,反而他对作者的精神方面有所帮助。
专题一解题策略写好高考“书面表达”绝非一日之功,关键在于平时扎扎实实的训练。
但是,在夯实语言基本功的前提下,熟悉、掌握一定的应试技巧,也非常重要。
根据“书面表达”常见错误及评卷要求,建议使用“一式,两头,三写,四关”的应试抢分技巧。
具体为:一式写对格式要求记住英语常用文体的格式和应用文体的写作方式和特点。
二头写好两头要求灵活运用熟悉的句式和表达手法,使文章开头和结尾结构正确,言简意赅。
三写规范三写在高考英语书面表达的评分标准中,正确拼写和使用标点符号及书写的美观程度也是影响得分的一个重要指标,因此考生要高度重视。
许多考生只重视书面表达内容的训练和提高,却忽视了卷面规范书写的训练,导致本不该的失分。
四关突破四关所谓“四关”是指突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关和习惯表达关。
要求内容要点准确全面,行文逻辑通顺严密,语言运用正确得当,表达方式符合英语习惯。
当然,在备考过程中,有针对性地背诵一些高分句式,套用合适的写作模块,可以帮助大家在短时间内在书面表达上抢得高分!真题导练(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。
请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:1.时间;2.活动安排;3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题谋篇】体裁邀请信人称第一、二人称为主时态一般现在时和一般将来时为主要点1.音乐节举办的时间;2.活动内容安排;3.欢迎他表演节目【提纲要点】1.第一段——①点明主题A Chinese classical music concert will_be_held in the music hall of our school.②发出邀请I'd like to invite_you_to_join me.③活动安排Many music masterpieces will_be_played by a famous band.④欢迎他表演节目You_are_welcome_to_give a performance.2.第二、三段——表达期盼,期待回复⑤表达期盼——我将在音乐厅入口等你I'll meet you at_the_entrance_of the music hall.⑥期待回复Looking forward to your reply!【润色升级】1.I'm glad to_tell_you_that_a_Chinese_classical_music_concert_ will_be _held_in_the_music_hall_of_our_school_on_November_8th.2.将②句用非谓语动词作状语表达,并与④句合并Knowing_that you are fond of classical music, I'd_like_to_invite_you _to_join_me_and_you_are_welcome_to_give_a_performance.3.将⑤句用if条件句表达,并增加细节If_it_is_convenient_for_you,_I'll meet you at_the_entrance_of_the_music_hall_at_7:00_that_evening.【规范誊写】真题导练(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
建议用时:40分钟Ⅰ.语法填空A.单句语法填空在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。
1.[2021·江苏四市一模]—What an easy examination paper, isn't it?—Quite right.How I regretted that I ________ (make) such a silly mistake.答案:should have made考查情态动词的用法。
“should have made”表示对过去做的事情感到惊异。
2.[2021·陕西西工大附中四模]—My husband and I really liked that car,but we didn't have enough money at that time.—Or you ________ (buy) it. What a pity!答案:would have bought考查虚拟语气的用法。
依据语境可知or/otherwise 后的句子表示“与过去事实相反的事实”。
3.[2021·福建三校联考]Had I followed your advice, I ________ (be) in such an embarrassing situation now.答案:wouldn't be考查虚拟语气的用法。
依据两句子之间无连词且助动词had提前无问号,可知该句是省略if后的倒装句。
前句是过去的状况,后句是与现在事实相反的状况。
4.[2021·福州毕业班质检]—How I wish I________ (pass) the geography exam!—So you're sorry that you didn't work hard.答案:had passed考查虚拟语气的用法。
wish后的宾语从句表示与过去事实相反的虚拟语气,故填had passed。
建议用时:45分钟Ⅰ.语法填空A.单句语法填空在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。
1.[2021·北京朝阳区一模]Studies show that people who have a glass of wine per day do better than ________ who don't.答案:those考查代词用法。
依据句意可知此空格代替的是people,而且有定语修饰,故特指可数名词复数需填those。
2.[2021·陕西渭南一模]After three months of hard work, I wish to travel in a nice small town, especially ________ with an ocean view.答案:one考查代词用法。
代替a nice small town,为泛指可数名词单数,故填one。
3.[2021·四川南充二诊]The total darkness made ________ possible to make out what the notice said.答案:it考查代词用法。
依据句式结构可以分析出,该空格代替的是不定式的内容,故填it作形式宾语。
4.[2021·重庆南开中学一诊]Animals do not “talk” with words. They use smells, sounds and movements to communicate with ________ animal.答案:another考查代词用法。
依据空格位置可知需填可以修饰名词的代词,且animal为单数,由句意可知填“另外一个,其他的”,another表示“三者或三者以上的另外一个”。
5.[2021·安徽合肥质检一]—Which of these trip plans do you like best?—________. They are both expensive and boring.答案:None考查代词用法。
45分语言知识运用练(二)语言知识运用(共两节,满分45分)第一节(共20小题;每小题1.5分,满分30分)阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
[2019·九江二模]Isabel Frey, a 35-year-old architect from Switzerland, is on her way to the Pottery (陶器) Workshop in Shanghai. She willingly __1__ the training courses of the workshop every Tuesday, spending three or four hours __2__ there.After five weeks of __3__,she is looking forward to taking home the first bowl she made with her own hands as a __4__ souvenir. “I've enjoyed every minute at the workshop. It enables me to make friends and learn how to make pottery with the directions and __5__ from others,”Frey says. Also, she feels very comfortable in the workshop, which creates a __6__ atmosphere like classroom in which people from different backgrounds gather __7__ to create their works. As a foreigner, Frey has adopted pottery making to __8__ her own ideas and thoughts. “The whole process of making a piece of pottery may look rather __9__ to a beginner, but I still keep on, and __10__ I will leave with a whole case of my works by the end of our stay,” Frey says.Sharing the same passion, Maggie Guo, a former clothes __11__ and now a housewife is trying to complete her “pottery dream”. “I __12__ to study the pottery when I applied to university many years ago, but I eventually got engaged in clothes design, which became my __13__ .”Guo says. Now, after years in that field, she still __14__ studying the pottery. She attends the workshop to finally realize the __15__ she had put on the shelf for so many years. “I am always surprised and __16__ to see the final works of my own, and that __17__ me to learn the real meaning of being an __18__ .”They both think more people should __19__ into the world of pottery making to experience the __20__ of creativity with simple materials.体裁:记叙文题材:人物故事主题:体验陶器制作的魅力【语篇解读】文章叙述了建筑师伊莎贝尔·弗雷和服装设计师玛吉学习陶器制作的故事,并鼓励更多的人参与其中去体验用简单的材料进行创造的魅力。
A2019·甘肃天水一中高三下学期三模Having a healthy family life can lower the risk of heart attack and boost your chance of living longer. __1__Care for elders in a loving wayCaring for an elderly loved one is a wonderful way to show compassion and service, and it doesn't mean you have to sacrifice everything. __2__ Kids and marriages can be powerfully impacted by how these decisions are handled,both negatively and positively. They thoroughly think through the potential impact of moving an aging parent into the home or providing extended care. A good boundary with an aging parent is to do occasional outgoings.Cultivate an attitude of gratitudeHealthy families set a culture of being grateful for the things you appreciate in life, big and small. Set up a respectful space where at the end of each day, each family member share what they are grateful for. __3__Keep treats out of sight(and out of mind)What you see is what you want to eat. __4__ Put the sugary treats out of sight and leave colorful fruits and vegetables out on the counter or on the most visible shelves in the fridge so that you're more likely to reach for a nutritious snack.___5__Healthy families will create a safe environment for healthy communication, where each individual feels like their feelings are acknowledged. When conflict arises, they don't have to agree with each other but they still need to acknowledge each other's feelings. They still feel their opinions are valued. They also learn tools for how conflicts can be resolved. No one shuts down, or runs away when there is disagreement. They work it out.A.Fight fairB.Live healthilyC.If you keep fighting,you will hurt your family.D.Keep healthy snacks highly visible in your kitchen.E. Here's how to maximize this amazing health asset(资产).F. This sets up an atmosphere of appreciation that all can benefit from.G. Healthy families have boundaries with aging parents and grandparents.[语篇解读] 本文是一篇说明文。
A阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
He met her at a party.She was so outstanding, with many boys around her, while he was so ordinary, with nobody paying attention to him.At the end of the party, he invited her to have coffee with him.She was surprised, but out of politeness, she agreed.They sat in a nice coffee shop.He was too nervous to say anything, and she felt uncomfortable,__thinking, “Please let me go home.”Suddenly he asked the waiter, “Would you please give me some salt? I’d like to put it in my co ffee.”Everybody stared at him.So strange! His face turned red, but, still, he put the salt in his coffee and drank it.She asked him curiously, “Why do you have this hobby?”He replied,__“When I was a little boy, I was living near the sea.I liked playing in the sea, and I could feel the taste of the sea, just like the taste of the__salty__coffee. Now every__time I have the salty coffee, I always think of my childhood. I miss so much my hometown and my parents who are still living there.”While saying that he couldn’t hold back his tears.She was deeply touched.That’s his true feeling, from the bottom of his heart.A man who can speak out his homesickness must be a man who loves home, cares about home, and has responsibility for his family.Then she also started to speak about her faraway hometown, her childhood, and her family.That was a really nice talk, also a beautiful beginning of their story.They continued to date. She found that actually he was a man who met all her demands: he was kindhearted,__warm and careful.He was such a good person but she almost missed him!Thanks to his salty coffee!Then the story went on just like every beautiful love story: the princess married the prince, and then they were living in happiness...And, every time she made coffee for him, she put some salt in the coffee.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
建议用时:45分钟Ⅰ.语法填空A.单句语法填空在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。
1.[2015·北京朝阳区一模]Studies show that people who have a glass of wine per day do better than ________ who don't.答案:those考查代词用法。
根据句意可知此空格代替的是people,而且有定语修饰,故特指可数名词复数需填those。
2.[2015·陕西渭南一模]After three months of hard work, I wish to travel in a nice small town, especially ________ with an ocean view.答案:one考查代词用法。
代替a nice small town,为泛指可数名词单数,故填one。
3.[2015·四川南充二诊]The total darkness made ________ possible to make out what the notice said.答案:it考查代词用法。
根据句式结构可以分析出,该空格代替的是不定式的内容,故填it作形式宾语。
4.[2015·重庆南开中学一诊]Animals do not “talk” with words. They use smells, sounds and movements to communicate with ________ animal.答案:another考查代词用法。
根据空格位置可知需填可以修饰名词的代词,且animal为单数,由句意可知填“另外一个,其他的”,another表示“三者或三者以上的另外一个”。
5.[2015·安徽合肥质检一]—Which of these trip plans do you like best?—________. They are both expensive and boring.答案:None考查代词用法。
建议用时:45分钟Ⅰ.语法填空A.单句语法填空在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。
1.[2021·陕西西工大附中二模]Tom ________ (plan) to go upstairs to his room and rest a while, but his aunt urged him to finish his homework first.答案:had planned表示方案、打算类的动词,用于过去完成时态表示“本打算做而未做的事情”,依据语境可知填过去完成时。
2.[2021·安徽安庆一中四模]-I'd like a bike which ________ (ride) well.-Will this one do?答案:rides定语从句中的时态与主句时态全都,且依据语意可知,从句叙述的是自行车的特性,故填一般现在时态的主动形式表被动。
3.[2021·安徽合肥质检一]-You look so tired and pale. Anything wrong?-I hate to complain, but a new road ________ (build) throughout the night.答案:is being built依据语境可知,语境是现在的时间,整晚在修路,且“road”与“build”之间为被动关系,故用现在进行时态的被动语态。
4.[2021·北京海淀区期末]-Have you heard about the shark attack accident at the Sea World Show?-Yes, how horrible! A trainer ________ (kill) in front of the audience.答案:was killed依据语境可知“shark attack”大事发生在过去,“a trainer”被杀也在大事过程中,因此“kill”发生在过去,陈述当时发生的事,故用一般过去时,“trainer”与“kill”之间为被动关系,故填was killed。
建议用时:55分钟 Ⅰ.完形填空 [2015·黑龙江大庆质检二]I believe different people have experienced different adolescence. I must admit I was still an angry __1__ in my first year of college. My __2__ was that my parents didn't please me at all. Our finances were __3__, so I chose to go to a (n) __4__ college and take a bus to classes every day. One day I had a(n)__5__ fight with my father. We both exploded into shouts. I __6__ out of the house and missed my bus to school. I rushed all the way to school. As I __7__ across the campus toward my class, I suddenly realized I didn't have the __8__ that was due: a thought card. My professor asked us to __9__ an index card with our names and the dates every Tuesday. __10__ what was on the rest of the card, we could write a thought, a question or something else. Now, outside the door, ten minutes later, I took an index card. __11__ to write something on it, I could only think about the __12__ I'd just had with my dad. I wrote “I am the son of an idiot!”, then __13__ into the room, and handed it to our professor. Next day, our professor __14__ the thought cards and I __15__ he wrote, “What does the ‘son of an idiot’ do with the rest of his life?” The professor's innocent-seeming question __16__ me to the issue: whose problem is it? __17__, my thinking began to shift. I realized that I had created a life __18__ I was not a central figure! The __19__ of growth wasn't easy or fast. __20__ later, from a struggling student, I became a successful student and then a successful teacher. 青春期的作者有一次与父亲发生冲突,但在教授的“thought card”的启发下,作者慢慢地走出了青春期叛逆的心境,最终走向了成功。 1.A.child B.adult C.adolescent D.student 答案:C “我”必须承认,大学一年级时“我“仍是一个愤青。adolescent“青少年”,文中的第一句话已经给出了提示。 2.A.temper B.anger C.mood D.pain 答案:B 根据空格前的“I was still an angry __1__ in my first year of college”可知,“我”生气是因为“我”的父母让“我”不高兴。 3.A.limited B.special C.practical D.fantastic 答案:A 由下文可知,“我”经常乘公交车上学,因此此处表示“我们家的经济不宽裕”,故选A项。 4.A.ordinary B.private C.local D.state 答案:C 我们家的经济条件不宽裕,因此“我”选择去上“当地的”一所大学,每天乘公交车去上学。ordinary“普通的”;local“当地的”;private“私人的”;state“政府的,州的”。 5.A.serious B.controversial C.unfriendly D.anxious 答案:A 由后文中的“We both exploded into shouts”可知,“我与父亲发生了一次严重的(serious)争吵”。故选A项。 6.A.stormed B.wandered C.slipped D.stepped 答案:A 由语境可知,“我”和父亲发生冲突之后,“气冲冲地走”出了屋子。storm“气冲冲地走”;wander“游荡,漫游,闲逛”;slip“滑倒”;step“迈步”。 7.A.leaped B.walked C.ran D.headed 答案:C 由空格前的“I rushed all the way to school”可知,“我”跑(ran)向教室。leap“跳跃”;walk“步行”;head“朝(某个方向)行进”。 8.A.duty B.assignment C.commitment D.material 答案:B 教授布置的任务就是我们要在每周二带来自己的“thought card”,写上自己的姓名、日期、想法、问题或者其他事情。assignment“任务”符合语境,故选B项。 9.A.take up B.put down C.hand out D.bring along 答案:D 参见上题答案。take up“开始从事,继续,占据”;put down“镇压,放下”;hand out“分发”;bring along“带上,带来”。 10.A.Due to B.Regardless of C.As for D.Thanks to 答案:C 卡片上要写姓名,日期,至于余下的部分,可以写想法、问题或其他事情。As for“至于”;Thanks to“幸亏,由于”;Regardless of“不管,不顾”;Due to“由于,归功于”。 11.A.Concerned B.Desperate C.Excited D.Active 答案:B 作者刚与父亲发生冲突,又忘记带教授布置的作业,因此应是“绝望地”在上面写了一些东西。故选B。 12.A.issue B.conversation C.dispute D.fight 答案:D 由上文中的“One day I had a(n) __5__ fight with my father”可知,此处应选D项。 13.A.poured B.entered C.dashed D.approached 答案:C 根据语境可知,此处应该是“冲进”教室,故选C项。dash“猛冲,急奔”。 14.A.gave back B.checked out C.put away D.passed on 答案:A 第二天,教授归还了我们的卡片。give back“归还”;check out“结账离开”;put away“将……收起”;pass on“转交,递给”。 15.A.explored B.recognized C.discovered D.ignored 答案:C 教授归还了卡片,“我”发现(discovered)教授写的话。故选C项。 16.A.awoke B.forced C.scared D.adjusted 答案:A 教授看似平淡的问题“唤醒”(awoke)了“我”。 17.A.Slowly B.Rapidly C.Generally D.Swiftly 答案:A 根据空格后的“my thinking began to shift”可知,作者的想法“慢慢地”改变了。 18.A.what B.in which C.which D.that 答案:B 此处应该是“in which”引导的定语从句,在从句中作状语,先行词为“life”。 19.A.process B.progress C.period D.challenge 答案:A 成长的“过程”既不容易,也不快。 20.A.Weeks B.Terms C.Months D.Years 答案:D 由上文可知,成长过程时间长,而作者后来又成为一位成功的老师,故此处选D项。 Ⅱ.阅读理解 A [2015·贵州七校联考]Having experiencedW1 a shocking electrical accident, which caused him to become both blind and deaf, James Franco's world became completely dark and quiet for almost ten years. The loss of sight and hearing threw him into such sorrow that he tried a few times to put an end toP1 his life. His family, especially his wife, did their bestP2 to tendW2 and comfort him and finally he regained the will to live. One hot summer afternoon, he was taking a walk with a stick near his house when a thunderstorm started all at once.S He stood under a large tree to avoid getting wet, but he was struck by the lightning. WitnessesW3 thought he was dead but he woke up 20 minutes later, lying face down in muddy water. He was trembling