托福写作名人素材

2020年托福写作素材模板：纳尔逊·曼德拉托福写作素材模板：纳尔逊·曼德拉素材段落While working as a lawyer in his early forties, Nelson Mandela was repeatedly arrested for attempting to overthrow the radically divisive apartheid government that existed in South Africa. Instead of giving up his idea of establishing a nation without institutionalized racism, he secretly joined the South African Communist Party. Mandela successfully mobilized a sabotage campaign which advocated the betterment of the country as well as its people. Due to his tireless efforts, he was arrested again several years later and sentenced to life imprisonment. For the next 27 years, Mandela never stopped campaigning for racial equality, despite the fact that he was incarcerated. Accordingly, people all over the world started to respect him as the most influential anti-apartheid politician and revolutionary of the 20th century.单词和词组overthrow *、*=abolishadvocate 呼吁、主张=aim atadvocate life quality improvementadvocate a well-developed educational systemadvocate the government support for environmental protectiontireless efforts 不懈的努力continuous/unceasing/unwavering efforts 持续的努力combined/joint efforts 共同的努力话题词汇美德 virtue忠实的 loyal坚持不懈的 persistent/perseverant有决心的 determined热情的 enthusiastic/passionate有天赋的 talented适用考题All university students should be required to takehistory courses regardless of the field they study.(2020.5.9/2020.9.29)People should have goals that are challenging rather than goals that are safe and practical. (2020.2.5)。

英语考试作文托福写作名人名言 Sucess话题常用名人名言整理托福写作中，尤其是独立写作，应用一些名人名言能让自己的观点更具说服力，也能让阅卷老师觉得眼前一亮。

在平时的学习备考中，大家可以根据不同的话题积累一些名人名言作为备用。

为大家整理了Sucess（成功）话题常用的名人名言，希望对大家有帮助。

I succeeded because I willed it ;I never hesitated .(Bonaparte Napoleon , French emperor )我成功是因为我有决心，从不踌躇。

(法国皇帝拿破仑.B .)If you wish to succeed , you should use persistence as your good friend , experience as your reference , prudence as your brother and hope as your sentry. (Thomas Edison , American inventor )如果你希望成功，当以恒心为良友、以经验为参谋、以谨慎为兄弟、以希望为哨兵。

(美国发明家爱迪生. T.)Achievement provides the only real pleasure in life .( Thomas Edison , American inventor)有所成就是人生唯一的真正乐趣。

(美国发明家爱迪生. T. )But has the last word been said ? Is all hope to be lost ? Is the defeat final No !(Charles De Gaulle , French president )但是难道败局已定，胜利已经无望?不，不能这样说! (法国总统戴高乐. C.)Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily . (Friedrich Schiller , German Dramatist and poet).只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人，才能够轻而易举地完成困难的事。

1．Do you agree or disagree: A person’s dress and appearances is a good indication of his or her personality or character. 2010年4月24日北美You can not judge a person only by his or her appearance. This can be best exemplified by Susan Boyle whose appearance has even been made fun of by a TV presenter, but her incredible voice and her stunning performance on BGT has won her great popularity。

Another example is the great president of US Abraham Lincoln whose looks has long been mocked by his opponent.Do you agree or disagree: Good looks and dresses are more important for success thangood ideas. 2009年11月8日大陆Do you agree or disagree: Good looks and dresses are more important for success than good ideas. 2008年06月21日北美2．Do you agree or disagree: All students should be required to study history in any major. 2009年6月13日Franklin Roosevelt, for instance, saved America from a severe economic crisis in 1930s: the Great Depression. He created the New Deal to provide relief to the unemployed, and to the banks which were nearly facing bankruptcy. Roosevelt's successful measures can not onlygive us a full understanding of economy, but also can provide us with valuable experience for economic crisis handling.此例子同样适用于：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. All university students should be required to take history course no matter what field they study in.2007年07月28大陆In order to solve the problems in the present and future, it is necessary to understand past.201003063. Do you agree or disagree: Children should not be allowed to play computer games. 20080607Almost everyone has heard of or even played the classic game--world of warcraft, which is produced by Blizzard, the most famous game producer of the world. In this game, players alone can not enter some large 40-player raid to complete a huge mission, so they must gather into a group with different careers such as warriors, priests, and warlocks: only with a suitable career configuration and good communication among players can they accomplish the complicated missions. In this sense, the game does offer children a perfect platform to improve their abilities of communications, teamwork and leadership.此例子同样适用于：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Playing computer games is a waste of time for children. 2008.6.64. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Students should work at part-time jobs when attending university.Andrew Carnegie, known as the king of steel, built the steel industry in the United States and became one of the wealthiest men in America. By 1897, he controlled almost the entire steel industry in the United States. Carnegie has lived a full life by working during the daytime andreading during the night since he was just 13. Not only his work experience but also his abundant knowledge brings him the great success. Therefore, he attached great importance to education, and he donated a large sum of money to schools and libraries of the country.此例子同样适用于：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is easier to success nowadays than in the past. 20091010Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Most business people are motivated only by thedesire for more money.20100626Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Parents should help their children prepare for future life through encouraging them to take part-time jobs. 2009.10.245. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:The government should support scientific research that does not have any practical use.The Apollo 11, for instance, could not succeed in landing the moon, not to mention the famoussaying" One small step for man, one giant leap for human" could come from Armstrong. Thanks to the considerable fund from United States government, NASA can launch hundreds of satellites or spaceships, which eventually benefit the human being. Besides, to protect the environment, new energy must be explored out to replace the fossil fuel. Because of the worldwide investment from government, the new energy, say solar energy, wind energy and nuclear energy, could be applied now. Therefore, the importance of funds on the science research is obvious.此例子同样适用于：Which one: Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? 200811236. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Being creative is more important in finding the best solution to a problem than planning carefully. 2008.2.1One of Abraham Lincoln’s most renowned achievement is the Gettysburg Address. With only three minutes to prepare, the Gettysburg address contains only 268 words. Everyone thinks it a great success which motivated enormous people.On the contrary, the president of Harvard University, Edward Everett, prepared a long time for an elaborate 2-hour long lecture that contains over 1500 words.此例子同样适用于：It’s better to achieve high efficiency with possibly more mistakes than to work with lowerefficiency but possibly fewer mistakes.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure everything is correct.200908227.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country. 2009.2.21Newspapers and magazines have great influence on people. And sometimes they can manipulate people’s mind by simply concealing some information. For, example, the American mediaavoided taking pictures showing that FDR walked with crutches. Thus, fewer foreigners know the fact that FDR is handicapped. In this way, they let people know what they want people to know instead of giving a full display of the thing.Another example that shows the great power of media is the famous Obama girl. The girl is just an ordinary American actor and model. Only by “I have a crush on Obama”, she is known to the whole world.此例子同样适用于：We need to have different sources of news andinformation to know which one is the real one or who is telling the truth. 20100514 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:In order to become well-informed, one has to get information from different news resources.(Media) 2009.2.148.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children ages 5 to 10 should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science, and history. 20090530Beethoven is the great German composer. He has showed great interest in music since he was young. He began to learn to play violin and piano when he was very young.Mozart is the great Austria composer. He played piano when he was just 3, and began to compose when he was four. He was a child prodigy. However, the real society deserted him pitilessly and the arch was hard on him. Unfortunately, he passed away at the age of 35.此例子同样适用于：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Younger school children (aged five to ten)should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history. 201011219.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.The government should spend more money on improving access to the Internet than on the public transportation. 20100522Beijing is a huge international city with millions of people living in it, and the pressure on the city’s transportation system is extremely heavy. Therefore, public transportation plays an important role to relieve the transportationstress. According to the latest data released by the government, Beijing’s public transportation system bears 70% of the city’s total amount of traffics.In China, some villages or areas are blocked from the modern society by huge mountain or deep valley: villagers don't know about the outside world since there is no radio or TV; children there must walk 10 miles to have class in a humid and gloomy hut; they have no concept of cars since no mobiles can drive through the tough mountainous region. In this case, it is the government's responsibility to improve the conditions in the villages: it is terrible for human to lose communication withthe world.此例子同样适用于：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People should not pay for the public transportation.2009-01-10/2007-12-01 2010091210.The best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teachers' salary. 20090403Every student who needs to take English test, such as TOEFL, GRE, GMAT, is familiar with NEW ORIENTAL, the renowned educationalinstitution of China. NEW ORIENTAL is equipped with a team of high qualified teachers because it provides them with satisfactory salary. The elite teachers are attracted here and are willing to teach with all their heart and soul due to the high return.此例子同样适用于：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be rewarded with incomes comparable to those of doctors, lawyers, or business leaders. 2009-02-28/2007-05-19Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Teachers should be paid according to how well their students perform.20090808Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The best way to improve the quality of the education in a country is to increase teachers' salaries.20101113Leonardo da Vinci is best remembered as the painter of the Mona Lisa (1503-1506) and The Last Supper (1495). But he's almost equally famous for his astonishing multiplicity of talents: he dabbled in architecture, sculpture, engineering, geology, hydraulics and the militaryarts, all with success, and in his spare time doodled parachutes and flying machines that resembled inventions of the 19th and 20th centuries. He made detailed drawings of human anatomy which are still highly regarded today. Leonardo also was quirky enough to write notebook entries in mirror (backwards) script, a trick which kept many of his observations from being widely known until decades after his death.People are concerned about the efficiency with the accelerating tempo of life. The more the better. The fast the better. In this regard, XX takes the top priority. For instance, wheneverpeople click on a search engine and key in a few words into the search box, they will get huge amounts of information. The amazing thing is, all the searching is done in a few seconds, which spares people a great deal of time to enjoy the entertainment such as body-building, watching opera or a movie in their leisure time. Christopher Columbus As a child, he helped his father as a weaver. He always liked the sea. Genoa was an important seaport. There is no doubt that as a child he caught rides on ships. He had little schooling but was a genius with the sea. His plan was not to prove that the world was flat, but it was to find a shortcut to the Spice Islands. He wanted to establish a city therefor trade, seaports, and much more. When he grew into a man he was interested in sailing to Asia by going west.Bill Gates, for example, gave up the precious chance that studying in Harvard without hesitation, and he eventually established the Microsoft Corp, proving his decision was highly wise. On the other hand, what other people thought of Bill Gates when he made the "crazy" decision? They might discourage Bill from dropping out. Considering if Bill took the others' advice, what person he would be? Maybe no more than a normal technician in amiddle-size company. From this case, it can be concluded that people should make decisions themselves, since people learn more about themselves both mentally and physically than any otherspeople sharing a similar or even same career could communicate with each other more easily, and thus they influence positively each others wider and deeper. Watson and Crick, for instance, might illustrate this point clearly. Watson and Crick are both molecular biologists, and they are not only partners but also good friends. With their combination of imagination,intelligence, and hard-working, they eventually co-discovered the structure of the DNA molecule: the double helix. Then, of course, they got the Noble Prize for this significant contribution to the entire human race. But if they worked alone on this complicated and huge project, I believe, the prevailing gene engineering might be a no more than a daydream. In this sense, people make friends with similar career could work highly effectivelyTake myself as an example: I have ever made friends with hundreds of Gters, which literally mean the people who prepare the GRE and theTOEFL tests, because we are chasing a same goal: to study in the best university in America. And thus, we engaged ourselves in a group to carefully revise others' issue or arguments with red lines and circles, to talk about how tough the GRE words were such as "juggernaut" or "gargoyle", to encourage each other when we could hardly bear the 5-hour sleep for every daythe EA game company also worth noting: its slogan is "challenging everything". The famous games, that the EA produced such as NBA Live series and FIFA series both urge game players to try their best to get a champion, and sticking tothis faith could encourage players to the end. Besides, some RPG adventure games also encourage people to face and overcome frustration by endless events. Thus, both the two kinds of games help people lead a positive life attitude: challenge and adventure.To begin with, from a personal rather than a theoretical perspective, changes make my life more brilliant and new experiences make me understand the world more thoroughly. Every man dies, but not every man really lives. If my life is filled with a sole hobby or I always repeat the same pattern of life, then there is no big difference between living and death.Furthermore, in some ocassions,(occasions) it is necessary for people to change. Take the business world for instance: in the society of rapid development, nobody can assure what will happen in next minute to the market, and therefore marketing managers can easily make some flawed policies which might directly lead to a decrease in sales or stocks. In this sense, these flawed policies must be corrected, in other words, the policies should be changed in time. Because the significance of the changes in marketing policy, it makes sense for the existence of Mckinsey--the biggest consultantcompany. So, in terms of company, changes are necessary.政府與環境問題For example, the Golf of Mexico oil spill has influenced many aspects, like the fishing industry, tourism and so forth. The money lost of this case is as much as 50 billion. And it also made President Obama furious when he talked about this case in the Larry King show. He even visit there three times, which is more than that he visited Afghanistan.個人與環境In 2010, nearly 1billion people turned off theirlights for Earth Hour. Three years before, Earth Hour was only the idea of some editors of the Sydney Morning Herald. However, currently it is the biggest awareness campaign in the world. Thus, individual’s effort on our environment cannot be ignored.Charles Moore is a famous photographer during the black power movement. Even he was opposed by the mainstream media, Charles uses his camera showing us the nightmare of the Africa-American in the south of America, including the arrestment of Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. by the police.電影應該娛樂還是嚴肅Most of Americans had not heard the film Hunt Locker before it got six Academy Awards. Even most of the professionals critically claimed for the film, claiming that it is the best war movie ever. But it is so serious that nobody is willing to go to cinemas to watch this film. Movies are produced for entertaining the public and earning money. Thus, a movie cannot be titled as a successful one despite it is the best from a professional aspect..精选范本。

2020年托福写作模板素材：玛丽·居里托福写作素材模板：玛丽·居里素材段落Marie Curie was so passionate about her love of science that she was able to overcome numerous adverse conditions which hindered her work and studies. She believed in the pursuit of science, for science’s sake, and retained this enthusiasm throughout her life. As a scientist, she never patented her work, leaving the door open for other scientists to build on her work during her life and after her death. During World War I, she was so passionate about the therapeutic benefits of her discoveries that, with the help of her daughter Irene, she helped equip ambulances with X-ray machines to identify fractures and locate shrapnel and bullets. In honor of her unparalleled contribution to the scientific world, she became the first woman to win the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903. She was also the first person ever to be awarded the Nobel Prize twice when she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Chemistry in 1911.单词和词组adverse 不利的、敌对的=unfavorable, hostile, maliciousunder adverse conditionsexert an adverse eff ect/impact on …for one’s sake 为了…的利益for the country’s sakefor the sake of safetyretain 保持=keep, withholdretain the right to …retain an effective control over …unparalleled 无比的、前所未有的=incomparable, unmatched, unrivaledan unparalleled success适用考题In order to succeed, we should be more like others than be different from others. (2020.9.12/2020.10.12)Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing the things they know well. (TPO 20)。

Rosa Parks Randy Pausch Ronald Reagan 大家都喜欢举 Martin Luther King 的例子，难道这位 refused to betreated as a second-class human being and give her seat on a bus to a white man 最终导致了最高法院裁决公交上实行种族隔离违宪的黑人阿姨不值得我们尊敬么？ Carnegie Mellon professor, the last lecture, great sense of humor, an inspiration to millions "the most successful actor in the American history", served two terms as President of the U.S. the leading voice in the American intellectual culture, dreamed about helping to free slaves, abolitionist a total failure at business, helped organize the Sons of Liberty, the Boston Tea Part, the minuteman "Knowledge is always good, and certainly always better than ignorance."/ Google/ access to information 2005 年 Rosa Parks 以 92 岁高龄去世， Pat 在 Arizona 看电视上播放这个消息的时候心中一凛：不走寻常路，造就女英雄…… 幽默的教师 vs. 严肃的教师敢于挑战自己的重要性 "To be great is to be misunderstood."个人开心是否比责任更重要成功需要的素质 Ralph Waldo Emerson Samuel Adams Sergey Brin 科技是否减少创造力Steve Jobs（可以不知道美国副总 creativity, marketing prowess（造诣）娱乐的重要性统是谁，但是决不能不知道他是谁） Steven Spielberg Theodore Dreiser a science fiction fan when he was little An American Tragedy, based on a real-life criminal case cut off all U.S. trade with foreign countries to stop the British and French raids on American ships/ seriously damaged the American economy "These are the times that try men's souls."/the American Revolutionary cause/ Common Sense/ signed over all the royalties （版税）to Congress 是否应该只读关于事实的书看关于事实的书还是虚构的书历史的教训帮助解决今天的问题 Thomas Jefferson Thomas Paine 工作难道只为了金钱 6Theodore Roosevelt (Teddy William Faulkner Washington Irving a "human dynamo"/ progressivism/ America's youngest President at 42 (Barack Obama is the fifth-youngest President, at 47./ the Panama Canal the deep South, Yoknapatawpha country, a fictional country short stories and historical works, his stay in Europe inspired some of his greatest works old vs. young 只看有事实的书么写实的书 vs. 虚构的书/ 出国旅行的好处 7。

英语考试作文托福写作中可以用到的名言分享在托福考试中，很多在中国人眼中写作水平良好、用词也相对比较准确的同学，在托福考试写作部分中成绩却并不如人意。

究其原因，一是表达不符合英语思维;二是对西方文化知之甚少，导致无话可说。

新托福写作的评分标准和雅思写作的评分标准基本相似，在语言上的考察点也很高，所以新托福考试在语言上一定要引起高度的重视。

托福词汇的重要性，包括遣词和造句两个方面。

本文将为同学们带来托福写作中可以用到的名言分享，希望能够帮助到正在备考托福的同学们！托福写作的SUCCESS 成功篇Achievement provides the only real pleasure in life .( Thomas Edison , American inventor)有所成就是人生唯一的真正乐趣。

( 美国发明家爱迪生. T. )But has the last word been said ? Is all hope to be lost ? Is the defeat final No !(Charles De Gaulle , French president )但是难道败局已定，胜利已经无望?不，不能这样说! (法国总统戴高乐. C.)I succeeded because I willed it ; I never hesitated .(Bonaparte Napoleon , French emperor )我成功是因为我有决心，从不踌躇。

(法国皇帝拿破仑.B .)If you wish to succeed , you should use persistence as your good friend , experience as your reference , prudence as your brother and hope as your sentry. (Thomas Edison , American inventor )如果你希望成功，当以恒心为良友、以经验为参谋、以谨慎为兄弟、以希望为哨兵。

【必备资料】如何为托福写作添分加彩？经典名人名言不容错过在托福写作过程中，想让阅卷人在阅读过程中能有眼前一亮的效果，那么学会使用一些经典名句是再好不过的选择了。

在以下内容中，小编将为大家带来经典名人名言，大家可以用这些例句作为作文的参考，也可以挑选一些用在自己的口语中，希望能帮助大家的托福备考哦。

Achievement provides the only real pleasure in life .（Thomas Edison , American inventor）有所成就是人生唯一的真正乐趣。

（美国发明家爱迪生. T. ）But has the last word been said ? Is all hope to be lost ? Is the defeat final No !（Charles De Gaulle , French president ）但是难道败局已定，胜利已经无望?不，不能这样说！（法国总统戴高乐. C.）I succeeded because I willed it ; I never hesitated .（Bonaparte Napoleon , French emperor ）我成功是因为我有决心，从不踌躇。

（法国皇帝拿破仑. B .）If you wish to succeed , you should use persistence as your good friend , experience as your reference , prudence as your brother and hope as your sentry. （Thomas Edison , American inventor ）如果你希望成功，当以恒心为良友、以经验为参谋、以谨慎为兄弟、以希望为哨兵。

（美国发明家爱迪生. T.）Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily . （Friedrich Schiller , German Dramatist and poet）.只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人，才能够轻而易举地完成困难的事。

^| You have to believe, there is a way. The ancients said:" the kingdom of heaven is trying to enter". Only when the reluctant step by step to go to it 's time, must be managed to get one step down, only have struggled to achieve it.-- Guo Ge Tech托福写作常用名人名言1Do not , for one repulse , give up the purpose that you resolved to effect 。

(William Shakespeare , British dramatist)不要只因一次失败，就放弃你原来决心想达到的目的。

(英国剧作家莎士比亚.W。

)2Don’t part with your illusions . When they are gone you may still exist , but you have ceased to live. (Mark Twain , American writer)不要放弃你的幻想。

当幻想没有了以后，你还可以生存，但是你虽生犹死。

(美国作家马克"吐温)3I want to bring out the secrets of nature and apply them for the happiness of man . I don"t know of any better service to offer for the short time we are in the world 。

(Thomas Edison , American inventor)我想揭示大自然的秘密，用来造福人类。

托福写作素材整理托福写作需要大量的素材，下面小编就给大家整理一些托福的写作素材，希望对你们有帮助。

托福写作素材之改编自books的电影在看金刚狼，爱乐之城blah blah的时候，你还需要…嗯，还需要准备些纸巾，因为这俩都挺好哭的。

还需要…想想你的upcoming TOEFL exam, 毕竟托福写作考过这种题…许多电影人make movies based on books. 有的人倾向于read the book before they watch the movie. Which one do you prefer?很多同学看到这个话题的时候内心是有点崩溃的，因为他们的问题是1. 哪些电影是小说改编的啊2. 哦想起了!好像豆瓣排名第一(还是第二?)的肖申克救赎是的，但是英文名是啥? Xiao Shen Ke De Jiu ShuWe really don't want to get ourselves into this kind of situation, do we?所以大家就趁着蹲个厕所的功夫来看一些改编自books的电影吧，shall we?1. Beauty and the Beast美女与野兽你们的女神屈臣氏小姐(Emma Watson)的这部美女与野兽要很快就要上映了，这个可以算是made based on books(fairy tales, actually:) 的电影吧?感觉是可以写进文章里的? 如果你要把这个电影用做你的例子，你会同意先看电影再看书还是先看书再看电影呢…BTW，据说Emma Watson 接了这部戏就拒绝了La La Land的邀约……2. Arrival 降临这部降临也是改编自小说的呀!小说名字叫做Story of Your Life. IMDB评分8.1其实是很高的了，但是如果我要用这个电影来做例子的话，我肯定会支持I prefer to read the novel first, because currentlythe technology is not yet amazing enough to get the picture to measure up to our expectation. By the way, the physicist in my imagination is much more handsome. :3. The Martian 火星救援呆萌(Matt Damon) looks so cute in his spacesuit, doesn't he? Anyway 如果用这个例子的话我应该会支持先看电影吧…因为如果不是这个电影我可能对火星都没啥兴趣，not to mention to pick up a book about how to survive on Mars 了，哈哈~4. Gone Girl 消失的爱人提到呆萌怎么能不提提他的好基友Ben Affleck呢!两个有颜(至少曾经有颜，sad)又有才的好兄弟自从当时的Good Will Hunting就一直是大众津津乐道的couple。

托福写作常用事例很多学生会选择店铺，那么托福写作常用事例有哪些呢?跟着一起来看看吧!下面是小编收集的有关托福写作常用事例的资讯，欢迎阅读。

托福写作常用事例托福写作常用事例一：生活常事生活常事意味着用自己或身边的人来举例，这一类的事例具备很强的代表性，并且能在一定程度上唤起考官的共鸣。

对于大多数备考时间比较紧的考生来说，准备第一种例子性价比不高，并且时间不够。

因此，性价比较高的第二种例子更适合于备考时间比较短的考生。

托福考试仅仅是语言能力考试，只要能用恰当的例子论述清楚问题就可以，因此用生活常事来举例对于考官来说也有很大的说服力。

有的考生仍然会问，如果我身边真的没有发生这么多事情怎么办?这个时候，考生们就不能这么“死心眼”了，就要学会“编例子”。

但是“编例子”也要有技巧，也要让考官信服，绝非信口胡编这里介绍三个小窍门，帮助考生们把例子编得更贴切，更生动。

1. 例子中加上姓名、时间、地点等具体细节很多中国学生在写例子的时候会使用“For example, some people...”这样的表达。

这样的表达看起来底气不足，且中式思维严重，很难受到考官青睐。

考生完全可以改用另外的表达“One of my friends, John, ...four years ago.”甚至可以加上这个人的职位、身份等信息，这样写看起来就具体实在多了。

在叙述个人类例子的时候，尽量使用具体的人名、地名和时间。

这样能使例子看上去更丰满、富有细节，也更像真实的事件，有说服力。

2. 与论点结合，写出事件发生之前与之后的变化需要特别注意的是，例子一定是为论证服务的，绝不能脱离主题举例子。

有的考生编例子编得很投入，写得也很精彩，但是却忘了自己在写托福作文，编造的故事并不能证明全文的观点，那这样的文章得不到高分一点也不奇怪。

恰当的例子会紧扣主题，代入关键词，并适当运用对比的技巧使得例子所服务的论点更加突出。

例如在写一个话题：私家车的影响时，有一个分论点是写私家车数量的增加对生活环境有着明显的负面影响。