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湖北省黄冈市2014高考英语作文训练题连载(9)及参考范文【广东省茂名市二模】基础写作 (共1小题,满分15分)假设你的同学因自己的肥胖而苦恼,请根据以下建议写一篇英语短文。
[写作内容]Don’ts Dos不要吃过多油腻的食物;睡觉前不要吃零食。
否则可能增加体重或消化不良(indigestion)。
要保持均衡饮食;每天需要至少一个小时的运动,比如可以选择步行上学,这样既有利于减肥,又可以保护环境。
做到持之以恒,只有这样才会在不久的将来拥有苗条的身材。
[写作要求]1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;2. 首句已经给出,不计入总句数。
[评分标准]句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
Dear classmate,I’ve learned that you are trying to lose weight and I am glad to give you some suggestions.________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________【参考范文】基础写作 (共1小题,满分15分)I’ve learned that you are trying to lose weight and I am glad to give you some suggestions.On (the) one hand, you shouldn't eat too much fatt y food or eat snacks before you sleep. Otherwise, you may gain weight or suffer from indigestio n. On the other hand, you should keep a balanced diet. Meanwhile, doing exercise for at least one hour per day is needed, like walking to school, which is not only beneficial for your weight loss, but also helps protect the environment.Above all, you should be persistent, because only in this way can you become slim in the near future.【陕西省西安市长安一中2014第二次模拟】书面表达(满分30分)假定你是中学生李华。
2014年10月全国自考英语写作基础考前密卷00597(含答案)一、重写句子(20 points,2 points each)Revise the following sentences according to the requirements. Example: The history of English words is the history of our civilization in many ways.(periodic sentence) I第1题We are watering the trees. We don’t have any rain for a month. (compound sentence)【正确答案】We are watering the trees, for we don’t have rain for a month.【你的答案】本题分数2分你的得分修改分数第2题Jane walked out of his life,bursting into tears as she left the room. (peri odic sentence)【正确答案】Bursting into tears as she left the room,Jane walked out of his life.【你的答案】本题分数2分你的得分修改分数第3题In 1976, John Adams was elected President of the United States. (loose sente nce)【正确答案】John Adams was elected President of the United States in 1976.【你的答案】本题分数2分你的得分修改分数第4题Han Solo is one of the heroes of Star Wars. He is a brave but self?center ed pilot. (simple sentence)【正确答案】Han Solo,a brave but self?centered pilot,is one of the heroes of Star Wars.【你的答案】本题分数2分你的得分修改分数第5题The course was not very difficult but I didn’t receive a high grade.(period ic sentence)【正确答案】Although I didn’t receive a high grade, the course was not very difficult.【你的答案】本题分数2分你的得分修改分数第6题A burglar stole into the Davis’ house last night. The front door was unloc ked. (complex sentence)【正确答案】A burglar stole into the Davis’ house last night because the front door was unlocked.【你的答案】本题分数2分你的得分修改分数第7题There are many exercises to do if you want to build a muscular body.(period ic sentence)【正确答案】If you want to build a muscular body, there are many exercise to do.【你的答案】本题分数2分你的得分修改分数第8题A strong wind changed the course of our sailboat. We lost an hour’s time. (coordinate sentence)【正确答案】We lost an hour’s time because a strong wind has damaged our sailboat.【你的答案】本题分数2分你的得分修改分数第9题We must get up early in the morning to do morning exercise if we want to be strong and healthy. (peridic sentence)【正确答案】If we want to be strong and healthy,we must get up early in the morning to do morning exercise.【你的答案】本题分数2分你的得分修改分数第10题His vision begins to fade. He knows he’d better get some rest. (complex se ntence)【正确答案】 When his vision begins to fade,he knows he’d better get some rest.【你的答案】二、改写病句(15 points,3 points each)Correct the errors in the following sentences. Example: After seeing an offensive mouthwash ad on television. I resolved never to buy that brand again. After seeing an o第1题Our new car not only is more economical but also it is more comfortable th an our old one.【正确答案】Our new car is not only more economical but also more comfortable than our old one.【你的答案】本题分数3分你的得分修改分数第2题 I cannot decide whether I should remain in school or to withdraw.【正确答案】I cannot decide whether to remain in school or to withdraw. 【你的答案】本题分数 3 分你的得分修改分数第3题He talked for fifty minutes without taking his eyes off his notes. Apparentl y not noticing that half the class was asleep.【正 确答案】 He talked for fifty minutes without taking his eyes off his notes. Apparently he did not notice that half the class was asleep. 【你的答案】本题分数3 分你的得分修改分数第4题 I plan on working overtime. To get this job finished.【正确答案】 I plan on working overtime to get this job finished. 【你的答案】本题分数 3 分你的得分修改分数第5题He walked over to the library. And took out the history book he needed.【正确答案】 He walked over to the library and took out the history book he needed.【你的答案】三、标出主题句(15 points,5 points each)第1题Read the following paragraph carefully and select a topic sentence for it. Topic Sentence:We should not simply consider the world as the solid globe, but as internat ional society of human relationship. With the economy growth, the distance be tween peoples and between nations is bridging. We can easily acknowledge each others’ minds and actions, then we are able to deliver our own opinions freely.A.The world is a solid globe.B.People in different countries have difficulty communicating with one another.C.The economy in the world is developing quickly in recent years.D.The world is becoming smaller and smaller.【正确答案】Read the following paragraph carefully and select a topic sentence for it.D.The world is becoming smaller and smaller.【你的答案】本题分数5分你的得分修改分数第2题 Choose the best topic sentence from the group below.A.The region is a gateway for foreign capital, technology and management skil ls to enter China.B.Hongkong is an important source of surplus for Chinese foreign trade bought and sold with foreign exchange.C.China has obtained foreign loans via Hongkong.D.Each year about 1.5 percent of China’s domestic output is financed by dir ect overseas investment.【正确答案】 Choose the best topic sentence from the group below.B.Hongkong is an important source of surplus for Chinese foreign trade bought and sold with foreign exchange.【你的答案】题分数5分你的得分修改分数第3题Read the following paragraph carefully and select a topic sentence for it. Topic Sentence:My chief reason for choosing Bingston University was its wonderful work/studyprograme in agriculture, my chosen field. The university requires all its agr iculture students to gain practical experience by working on farms in the ar ea while they are still going to school; I knew that this would provide in valuable experience and prepare me to use the skills I had learned in the classroom. Second, Bingston hires only the finest teachers. Then, too, there was Bingston’s deferred payment plan; this represented a great convenience to my parents. A final reason was the reasonable tuition.A.Bingston University has excellent teachers.B.Bingston University provides wonderful work/study programme in agriculture.C.There were several reasons why I decided to attend Bingston University.D.The tuition of Bingston University is reasonable.【正确答案】 Read the following paragraph carefully and select a topic sentence for it.C.There were several reasons why I decided to attend Bingston University.【你的答案】四、重新组合段落(10 points,2 points each)Rearrange the following numbered sentences so that they will read logically. Put the numbers in proper sequence in the boxes provided below.第1题19.A few people try to learn a language fast by studying for 6 or more ho urs a day.20.However, most people don’t have the chance to do it, and for many it i s not necessary.21.Whether the language is learnt quickly or slowly, it is hard work.22.They need the language in order to do their work better.23.Machines and good books will help, but they cannot do the student’s work for him.24.If they use the language only 2 or 3 times a week, learning it will ta ke a long time, like language learning at school.25.Some people try at home, with books and recorders; some use radio or tel evision program; others go to evening classes.26.For example, scientists and doctors need to be able to read books and re ports in the foreign language.27.It is clearly easier to learn the language in the country where it is spoken.【正确答案】【你的答案】五、标出与段落内容无关的句子(10 points,5 points each)Read the following paragraph and underline the TWO irrelevant sentences.第1题We had a short spring this year. The weather was cold through March and in to April due to storms moving down from Canada. There was still snow on th e mountains in late April, although it was usually gone by the end of Marc h, we had only two nice weeds in May with the temperatures in the low 70s .The winter was unusually mild, however. But by mid?May, temperature was in the 90s, and it was hot from then on.【正确答案】 Read the following paragraph and cross out the irrelevant sentences.We had a short spring this year. The weather was cold through March and into April due to storms moving down from Canada. There was still snow on the mountains in late Ap ril, although it was usually gone by the end of March, we had only two nice weeds in May with the temperatures in the low 70s. (删The winter was unusually mild, however).But by mid?May, temperature was in the 90s, a nd it was hot from then on.【你的答案】本题分数5你的得分修改分数分第2题Ordinary People is a movie about the problems faced by a family. Before the film opens, one of the teenage sons has drowned in a boating accident. Th e other son attempted suicide and was hospitalized. Unable to forget her dea d son the mother has difficulty communicating with her surviving child. Thislack of communication eventually leads to the break of the family. The US c oast Guard offers courses in boating safety that help to prevent accidents.【正确答案】Ordinary People is a movie about the problems faced by a family. Before the film opens , one of the teenage sons has drowned in a boating accident. The other son attempted s uicide and was hospitalized. Unable to forget her dead son the mother has difficulty c ommunicating with her surviving child. This lack of communication eventually leads to the break of the family. (删The US coast Guard offers courses in boating safety that help to prevent accidents). 【你的答案】六、写信(30 points)Write a letter.第1题Your name is Wang Hao. You’re a second?year college student majoring in Eng lish at the Dongfang Community College in Shenyang, Liaoning Province. You’ve learned from a newspaper ad. that the manager of a local company wants to hire a part?time translator. Write a letter to apply for this job. In you r letter, provide the necessary information about yourself.(150-200 words)【正确答案】 October 20, 2001Dear Mr. Smith,From an ad. in the New Shengyang Daily Newspaper I’ve learned that you are interested in hiring a part?time translator. I feel that my academic background and my working e xperience qualify me for this position.I am a second?year English major at the Dongfang Community College in Shenyang, Liaoning Province. During the past year, I have taken courses in listening, speaking , writi ng and reading. Last spring, I gained practical experience in translation by working i n a local translation company.I am confident that my experience in translation as well as my academic background sho uld enable me to make useful contributions to your company.Enclosed my resume. I will be available for an interview any time after my examinatio ns, which end on October 25. You can reach me at my pager, 126-9393. I am looking forw ard to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours,Wang Hao【你的答案】。
国家开放大学(中央广播电视大学)2014年春季基础写作试题2014年7月一、名词解释(每小题3分。
共12分1.耽思所谓“耽思”,主要是在主体对内部世界的自我展示、审度、调整、反思过程中,将“瞻物”过程中出现的某种朦胧的、不清晰的、不具体的体验或思想,提炼成清晰、具体而富于创造性的文本思想。
2.言之有序所谓“言之有序”,就是要求文本的结构安排能够符合语言表达的线性特征所体现的本质要求,是文本思想内容的表现过程具有严密而又灵活的线性表达秩序,其目的在于使阅读者能够循此而实现与作者的精神交流。
3.表达方式所谓表达方式,是由写作者的写作目的和文本的表现内容所要求的语言运用的具体手段和方法。
一般认为表达方式有叙述、描写、说明、议论和抒情五种。
4.诗歌所谓“诗歌”,是一种重要的审美性文体,它运用精练和富有音乐性的语言,通过描写丰富的想象和优美的意境,来抒发作者对生活的感受、理想和愿望。
二、简答题(每小题9分,共18分)5.从写作的一般属性来看,其主要特征表现在哪几个方面?(1)写作的个体性特征;(2)写作的实践性特征;(3)写作的创造性特征。
每个要点各3分。
三、分析论述(20分)7.分析并阐述实用性文体、析理性文体、审美性文体的基本特征。
(1)实用性文体的基本特征:其写作内容是写作者依据已有知识对客观事实的一种确认;其写作目的在于以告知的方式交流信息,如报告、解说。
(2)析理性文体的基本特征:其写作内容是写作者依据已有理论对客观事实的一种推论;其结构方式直接体现了理性思维的逻辑特征。
(3)审美性文体的基本特征:文学作为艺术的审美心理特征:超功利性、(感性)形象性、情感性;文学作为语言艺术的审美表现特征:塑造艺术形象的间接性、反映社会生活的灵活性、揭示心灵世界的具体性。
中央广播电视大学2013-2014学年度第一学期“开放专科”期末考试基础写作试题注意事项一、名词解释(每小题3分,共12分)1.瞻物所谓“瞻物”,主要是积累材料。
中央电大汉语言专科《基础写作》期末考试近6年(09至14年)试题及答案国家开放大学(中央广播电视大学)2014年春季学期“开放专科”期末考试基础写作试题2014年7月注意事项一、将你的学号、姓名及分校(工作站)名称填写在答题纸的规定栏内。
考试结束后,把试题和答题纸放在桌上,试题和答题纸均不得带出考场。
监考人收完考卷和答题纸后才能离开考场。
二、仔细读懂题目的说明,并按题目要求答题。
答案一定要写在答题纸的指定位置上,写在试题上的答案无效。
三、用蓝、黑圆珠笔或钢笔(含签字笔)答题,使用铅笔答题无效。
一、名词解释(每小题3分。
共12分)1.耽思2.言之有序3.表达方式4.诗歌二、简答题(每小题9分,共18分)5.从写作的一般属性来看,其主要特征表现在哪几个方面?6.追求书面语言表达的准确性特征,需要注意哪些方面?请简要说明。
三、分析论述(20分)7.分析并阐述实用性文体、析理性文体、审美性文体的基本特征。
四、写作(50分)8.阅读下面一段文字,根据要求作文。
联合国教科文组织的一项调查显示:全世界每年阅读书籍排名第一的是犹太人,一年平均每人是64本。
上海在中国排名第一,只有8本。
而中国13亿人口,扣除教科书,平均每人一年读书一本都不到。
有人说,“一个不读书的人是一个缺少精神力量的人”。
对此你有什么看法,请就以上材料,以“阅读”为话题,写一篇文章。
写作要求:(1)自选角度,文体不限;(2)文体特征突出,表达方式恰切;中心明确,内容充实,选材合理;结构完整,语言流畅;书写规范,文面整洁。
(3)不少于1000字。
评分标准46-50分达到试卷所提出的各项要求。
41-45分文体特征突出,表达方式恰切;中心明确,内容充实,选材合理;结构完整,语言流畅;书写规范,文面整洁。
30-40分文体特征较为突出,表达方式较为恰切;内容充实,选材合理;结构完整,语句通顺;书写规范,文面整洁。
16-29分基本具备文体特征,内容较为具体,结构较为完整,语句较为通顺,偶有病句和错别字。
高中英语真题:2014高考英语作文训练题连载(8)及参考范文【四川省成都七中2014三诊考试】书面表达(满分35分)假设你叫李华,你的一个朋友John刚从美国归来,邀请你参加本周日在他家举办的朋友聚会,但你不能参加,请你根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件:1. 表达想参加的意愿;2. 忙于准备高考;3. 由于感冒,身体不适;4. 表示歉意并另约时间。
注意:可适当添加细节以使行文连贯;词数120左右,开头和结尾已给,不计入总字数。
【参考范文】写作:Dear John,I’m extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your par ty this Sunday.It is very kind of you to invite me to your house and I really look forward to going to your party and sharing your happy experien ces abroad. Much to my regret, I will be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just aroundthe corner, for which I am now really busy preparing.What’s worse, I have caughta bad cold lately and I’d rather I stayed at home instead of goin g anywhere.Anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. Wou ld it be convenient for you if we make it after the exam?I’m truly sorry. I hope you will forgive me and accept my sincere apologies. I look forward to your reply!Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【2013界广东省揭阳市一模】基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)你是校报记者,最近进行了一次采访。
2014年高考材料作文及范文2014年高考材料作文及范文材料2012年12月2日,毕业于哈尔滨某著名高校哲学专业的研究生小孙早早来到哈尔滨技师学院,等待参加哈尔滨市环卫系统公开招聘清洁员的面试。
由于此次招聘的清洁员岗位纳入正式事业编制,所以吸引了大批高学历人员报考,其中很多报考者坦言:“图的就是事业编制的稳定,安稳胜过一切。
”例文一:别为了安稳而放弃追求舞台的信念就业压力如此巨大的今天,许多追求梦想的人,迫于无奈只能选择放弃,去追求一份安稳的工作,开始了养家糊口的生活。
我们未必能够清楚地判断是否是正确地选择,但是倘若一名研究生在该拼搏创造生活的年纪选择了安稳的度过生活,做为旁观者的我们,多少都会为这个人感到悲哀,并不是安稳不可取,只因为我想说,别为了安稳而放弃追求舞台的信念。
求别人给予的安稳不如求自己创造的安稳。
许多人没有勇气独自创造环境,而更希望去加入别人提供的环境中去,也许在温室中的花朵会长的漂亮,但是外表光鲜亮丽,经不住风吹雨打,充其量只是一支花瓶。
我们为何不学习那些在野外立足生根发芽的花儿呢?它们的姿色并不以温室中的花儿美,甚至比室内的花儿接地气儿。
更容易让人们接近。
野花并不是不追求安稳,它们只是有一种靠自己的独立精神,通过改变自己,立足自身。
人类也一样,特别是像小孙一样的大学生,树立靠自己,完善自身的意识十分重要。
要想在社会上立足脚跟,必须有一技之长,有过人之处。
毕竟,别人提供的安稳也只是暂时的,自己创造的安稳才是有保障的。
趁年轻,坚持追求舞台的信念。
一份称心如意的工作就像能够展现十八般武艺的大舞台,在这个舞台上,每个人都可以发挥自身优势,创造美丽的舞剧。
但是舞台也分大小舞台若是选小了,则才华不能充分展现;舞台若大了,一个人却撑不起台面。
总而言之,找到属于自己的舞台,找到最合适自己的舞台,同时把小舞台让给能够展现的人,将大舞台让给能力超群的人,这样不显得更加安稳吗?尽管社会生活“压力山大”,但是追求内心舞台的信念却别放弃,世界这么大,舞台属于自己!努力追逐,先实现自己的梦想,在追求人生的安稳。
国家开放大学(中央广播电视大学)2014年春季基础写作试题2014年7月一、名词解释(每小题3分。
共12分1.耽思所谓“耽思”,主要是在主体对内部世界的自我展示、审度、调整、反思过程中,将“瞻物”过程中出现的某种朦胧的、不清晰的、不具体的体验或思想,提炼成清晰、具体而富于创造性的文本思想。
2.言之有序所谓“言之有序”,就是要求文本的结构安排能够符合语言表达的线性特征所体现的本质要求,是文本思想内容的表现过程具有严密而又灵活的线性表达秩序,其目的在于使阅读者能够循此而实现与作者的精神交流。
3.表达方式所谓表达方式,是由写作者的写作目的和文本的表现内容所要求的语言运用的具体手段和方法。
一般认为表达方式有叙述、描写、说明、议论和抒情五种。
4.诗歌所谓“诗歌”,是一种重要的审美性文体,它运用精练和富有音乐性的语言,通过描写丰富的想象和优美的意境,来抒发作者对生活的感受、理想和愿望。
二、简答题(每小题9分,共18分)5.从写作的一般属性来看,其主要特征表现在哪几个方面?(1)写作的个体性特征;(2)写作的实践性特征;(3)写作的创造性特征。
每个要点各3分。
三、分析论述(20分).分析并阐述实用性文体、析理性文体、审美性文体的基本特征。
7.(1)实用性文体的基本特征:其写作内容是写作者依据已有知识对客观事实的一种确认;其写作目的在于以告知的方式交流信息,如报告、解说。
(2)析理性文体的基本特征:其写作内容是写作者依据已有理论对客观事实的一种推论;其结构方式直接体现了理性思维的逻辑特征。
(3)审美性文体的基本特征:文学作为艺术的审美心理特征:超功利性、(感性)形象性、情感性;文学作为语言艺术的审美表现特征:塑造艺术形象的间接性、反映社会生活的灵活性、揭示心灵世界的具体性。
中央广播电视大学2013-2014学年度第一学期“开放专科”期末考试基础写作试题注意事项一、名词解释(每小题3分,共12分)1.瞻物所谓“瞻物”,主要是积累材料。
知识讲义(一)基础写作指导:一,重组材料,合理编排。
二,可以尝试不同类型的从句相结合。
1,非谓语(1),不定式:To finish the work in ten minutes is very hard.(做主语)(2),动名词:Walking is a good form of exercise for both young and old. (做主语)(3) 现在分词和过去分词:ing/ed 后置作定语Mary, the girl standing there, is a nurse.,= Mary, the girl who is standing there , is a nurse.The cup being found by Tom beongs to Tim.2,宾语从句 Doctors suggested that we should do morning exercises which is good to us.3,定语从句,The house which has a garden belongs to Mr bai.Beijing is the place where (in which) I was born.This is the house, which has a garden, belongs to Mr bai.4,同位语The cave, the hiding-place , is secret.5,同位语从句 The news that the war is probably to break out makes us frightened.三,用and,but,while,when,because,四,分析结构和成分:Luo Xuejuan, born in Zhejiang Province, nicknamed Luoluo, is a 23–year–old Chinese female Olympic swimming champion.(二)课堂演练:1. 基础写作(介绍游泳运动员罗雪娟)[写作内容]请用英语为上海出版的《学生英文报》写一段人物介绍,介绍奥运会游泳冠军罗雪娟。