英语六级作文范文

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【话题分析】和谐社会是目前中国建设的目标之一,是比较热门的社会话题。

报纸、杂志、电视新闻等,经常讨论此话题。

考生应多关注社会新闻,为写作收集素材。

【范文解析】Nowadays, it seems known to everybody that one of the objectives of China's modern construction is to build a harmonious society. All of a sudden, "a harmonious society" has become a frequently-used phrase in media news, newspaper etc. It is the trend of China's development.But what is a harmonious society? In my mind, there are several aspects included in building a harmonious society. First, a harmonious society has democracy in its politics to ensure the maximum benefits of the people. Second, a harmonious society has equality and justice to protect the rights of every citizen. Third, a harmonious society has good faith and friendly relation between people to create a favorable atmosphere for living and doing business. Forth, a harmonious society has energy to make sure its creativity. Fifth, a harmonious society has stability and order to provide people with a comfortable environment. Sixth, a harmonious society has harmony between humankind and nature for a sustainable development of economy.To be true, it needs joint efforts of every person in China to realize this great goal. For me, I am a student in college. What I can do is develop good relations with people around me, help others as much as possible, spread this awareness to as many people as possible, laying a foundation for this tall building.文章一开始就提到目前中国现代化建设的目标之一,就是构建和谐社会。

一时之间,构建社会成为中国发展的趋势。

第二段从六个方面讲述了和谐社会的内涵:1)民主政治,保证人们的最大利益;2)公平正义,保证每个公民的权利;3)诚信友好,为生活和生产提供良好环境;4)充满活力,确保社会的创造力;5)稳定有序,保证生活平稳安定;6)人与自然和谐相处,实现经济可持续性发展。

第三段从自身出发,讨论在构建和谐社会时自己该如何做。

作为一名学生,作者认为:和周围人发展友好关系,乐于助人,传播“和谐社会”的意识,为这个宏伟目标奠定基础。

【高分妙招】六级作文很贴近国家大事,因为对时事政治的了解是对当代大学生的要求之一。

出现一个新的命题,考生应多关注其内涵及相关评论,这样写作过程中才能做到“胸有成竹”,写出来的作文才“言之有物”。

预测作文(一)Aging Before Wealthy1.物价上涨,通货膨胀,社会压力越来越大,很多白领出现“未富先老”的现象。

2.作为一个大学生,走出校门后,你将如何应对这种情况。

【范文】Stress has been around human beings ever since its existence; it is an unavoidable consequence of life. In current society, everyone is required to work in a fast pace with the competition getting more and more hectic. What one earns does not make ends meet. Therefore a lot of white collars are suffering from “aging before wealthy”.As university students, we will face those issues in no time. The first thing we should do is to stay positive. Secondly, knowledge is power. A competent person will accomplish his/her goal easier than others. So when we are still in campus, we shall spend more time in improving our skills, as well as broadening our horizons. In addition, everyone needs to learn stress managementthat suits them in order to cope with the current pace of the society.All in all, by following the above steps and recognizing the seriousness of the reality, I am quite confident that we can face the future challenges and eventually survive.【点评】首段交待“未富先老”的历史和社会背景,先讲压力自古有之,后讲现代社会的压力更大。

不仅如此,收入与支出的不和谐更是导致当今社会白领压力过大的重要原因。

三句话步步深入,层层递进。

“收支不平衡”使用whatone earns does not make ends meet。

第二段提供了三个应对措施。

第一是从心理上保持乐观积极。

第二是增强自身的业务技能。

第三是进行压力管理。

整段长短句结合,在表达“某人应该做某事”这个意思时,分别使用了sb.should do, sb. shall do, sb. needs todo等,使语言更加丰富。

另外,在遇到和就业压力、升学压力、生存压力、心理健康等话题时,可供参考的短语和词组有:hectic(疯狂的)competition,suffer from, stay positive, a competent person(有竞争力的人),stress management, cope with, confident和survive.。

预测作文(二)Audaciousness (出位)1.目前,互联网上有很多出位的现象,比如裸奔(streaking) 等。

2.是不是在新时代要获取关注,就要靠出位呢?3.你如何看待这种现象?【范文】Currently, audaciousness online like streaking has grabbed many people’s attention. It seems that in order to be famous, people have to resort to audaciousness. However, I believe that audaciousness may not be a proper way to draw public attention and realize one’s self-value.To acquire fame and success, one has to consider three basic factors, namely goal, methods, and persistence. First, one needs to set a crystal-clear goal. This goal should aim at achieving the wholesomeness of the society. Second, one has to make the most of the mass media, since we are in an information age, and people gain news from various kinds of ways. Finally, persistence makes sure that succes s is within one’s reach.In conclusion, by doing right things at the right time, we can also grab the public’s attention. Y et it is without doubt that audaciousness is not a good choice.【点评】第一句话开门见山,用sth. has grabbed(抓住)sb’s attention。

接下来使用的“have to resort to”表现了一种被迫和无奈之感,但转折词however马上话锋一转,引出了作者的观点。

在表达对像搏出位这样的社会现象时,切不可武断使用bad一类的词语进行价值评判。

一会显得措辞鲁莽,二会显得过于主观。