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2. Go over the pictures
(who, what, where, when, why, how)
2. Go over the pictures
(who, what, where, when, why, how)
• A woman/ remember the number of the car
• The police The driver/ catch
Key words
ride a bike /run fast to
sentences
When Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him.
hit him /fall off his bike
be frightened /run away
The car hit him. And he fell off his bike.
The driver was so frightened that he ran away.
see the accident /remember the
number /call the police /be caught
1. 并列 and, both…and 2. 转折 but, however, though, while 3. 因果 so, therefore, because
4. 其他 when, suddenly, immediately, as soon as , unfortunately, so…that… , finally, as a result, What was worse
5、字数是否达到要求?
看图作文
How to write a picture story?
• Go over the requirement (person, tense, style)
•Go over the pictures(who, what, where, when, why, how)
Sample 1
根据下 列图画中 Tom 骑自 行车的经 历,用英 语写一篇 故事。
短文要写 得连贯、 完整。
1. Go over the requirement
• 1. topic : A story (a traffic accident) • 2. Tense( generally): past tense • 3. Person: Tom , he
English Writing
评价的标准
1、文章是否有内容? (是否离题?是否切合话题?)
2、文章是否有标题? (是否书写正确?) 3、文章是否具有语法错误?
A)标点符号;B)大、小写;C) 单词拼写; D)书写;E)句型、时态
4、好词好句
(是否采用名言名句,好的 句型句式,是否真实地表达 自己的感情?)
2. Go over the pictures
(who, what, where, when, why, how)
• Tom /ride a bike
• Along the street/road
• A few days ago/ the other day/ one day
2. Go over the pictures
(who, what, where, when, why, how)
2. Go over the pictures
(who, what, where, when, why, how)
• A car / run fast to/run into him
• Tom/ fall off hs bike•Write a passage (using connectives and adding details and
specific information. )
基本篇章结构
① 点题(时间、地点、人物、事件) ② 事件的起因 ③ 事件的发展/过程 ④ 事件的结果 ⑤ 扣题
Using connectives
• Suddenly
2. Go over the pictures
(who, what, where, when, why, how)
2. Go over the pictures
(who, what, where, when, why, how)
• The driver/ frightened / run away
passage 2
The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.
A woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. Finally,the driver was caught.
3. Writing a passage
Passage 1
Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver was frightened. He ran away. A woman saw the accident. She remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman. The driver was caught.