高考真题短文改错15篇

高考复习必看短文改错专项训练15篇（附答案）1Dear Jack，Next Saturday will my birthday.I’m going to hold a birthday party at home on the evening.It will start at 7：30.Some classmates as good as some foreign friends have been invited.The activities include singing，dancing and sharing interesting experiences.Surely，we’ll have a good time.I would feel honoring if you could come.I live at 656 Minzu Street.You can take Bus No.11 or No.15 and got off at the stop of Guang Ming High School.Justly on the opposite side is my house，what is red with a white door.I’m sure of you can’t miss it.I do hope they will come.Best wish.Yours，Li Hua2(2017·昆明市高三复习教学质量检测)I’m one of the students in our class who has ever been to st summer I was lucky enough to be sent there to study.As soon as I arrived on England by plane.I was picked up by the Smiths，which I would live with for the next two weeks.We felt like a fish out of water when I got there.The Smiths did what they could make me feel at home.I study at an international school，where I met friend from all over the world.I seized the opportunity to practise my speak English.Soon I made such a rapid progress that I received highly praise from all the people around.答案I’m one of the students in our class whohashave ever been to stsummer I was lucky enough to be sent there to study.As soon as I arrived onin Englandby plane.I was picked up by the Smiths，whichwhom I would live with for the next twoweeks.WeI felt like a fish out of water when I got there.The Smiths did what theycould make me feel at home.Istudystudied at an international school，where I metfriendfriends from all over the world.I seized the opportunity to practise myspeak spokenEnglish.Soon I made such a rapid progress that I received highlyhigh praise from all thepeople around.3When news came that I was not chosen as the member of the volleyball team，I was such frustrated that I almost decided to give up.However，my best friend Miranda analyzed my problems，pointed out that my laziness and poor preparation led my failure.From then on，I devoted all my spare time to practice playing and consulting his teachers about skills every day.When another chance came up，I had got fully prepared.As a result of，I was selected and became one of the most important player in our school team.From this story，I am definite convinced that the better prepared we are，the much likely we are able to achieve our goals.4(2017·太原市高三模拟)Last week，a football match was hold between Class One and us.The player from both sides are all excellent football players，so the match went on fierce at first.At last our team lost the match，so we didn’t lose a heart.Since we all tried our best，we had no regretful.In our life we may meet much failures，but so long as we try your best，there’s no need to feel regretful for these failures.We should analyze the reasons for the failures avoid the same mistakes in the next competition.In a word，success is important，and such is failure，because it’s the mother of success.5(2017·东北三省四市教研联合体高考模拟)Of all the teachers in my primary school，the one which impressed me most was Mrs.Huang.She was my 5th grade teacher.She was able to making learning fun and Iliked her classes very much.Besides，she made me leader of many group project，which gave me confidence.That was with her help that I soon became top student in our class.Looked back on it，I’m very proud for having such an excellent teacher.The reason why I did so good was that she made me to feel confident.I am really grateful to her and I hoped one day I will become a teacher like her.6Some of my classmates hate them when they have to get up early in the morning.However，I’m one of those early birds.Get up ear ly，in my opinion，is of greatly importance to our health，our study and our life.Every day I do morning exercise keep fit.After morning exercise，I spend some time reading aloud in the open air，which help me memorize that I’ve learned in class.Some of my clas smates are in the habits of skipping breakfast.By getting up early，I had enough time for breakfast before going to school.In the word，I benefit a lot of from getting up early.7My parents run teahouse near the square of our ancient st Sunday I was helping out here when two foreign visitors came in.By talked to them with simple English，I learned they were from Canada.Because they had a deep interest in Chinese culture，so they came to Beijing to study Chinese last year.They come to our ancient town to travel.Attracted by the beauty of our town，they decided to stay for other three days.In fact，they even told me they’d like to introduce our beautifully town to friend around them.They both praised me for my spoken English，that gave me a lot of confidence.8(2017·郑州市高中毕业班第二次质量检测)It was on a hot afternoon that I serve as a volunteer collecting money for a badly injured farmer by sell newspapers.With a pile of newspapers in his hands，I walked along the street to find none who would like to buy one copy.I tried，wearing a big smile，explain my purpose to the passer－by.Many of them were generous and kind enough to give me too more money than the newspaper cost.Eventually，an injured person received a timely operation with the money I collected and recoveredcomplete.Help is of very significance to every receiver.9(2017·石家庄高中毕业班第一次模拟)Jane and Jack are high school students.Both of them work hard but they have different learning method.Jane listens to her teachers attentively and make notes carefully，trying to catch everything the teachers saying in class.She often asks her teachers questions if she felt puzzled，so she spends little time on her homework than others.It’s certain that she can go to bed earlier，so she always keeps energetically in the day.However，Jack likes to stay up late at night doing his homework，so he often falls sleepy in class.As consequence of this，he misses lots of key points and it usually takes up him more time to finish his homework.It is difficult of him to manage his study.10(2017·绵阳市高中第二次诊断性考试)A funny thing happened my sister Tina last month.In Japan，people usually don’t wear his outdoor shoes in the house or at school，and a lot of buildings had places for shoes.Her school has a special place for shoes，either.It’s a shoe box.Tina teach es English in the evening.One Friday，she went to school and put her shoes in the shoe boxes as usual.After class she got ready to leave.But to the surprise，her shoes weren’t in the box.There were only one pair of shoes there，and they weren’t her shoes！She had to leave with a hurry，so she put on the shoes and left off.On Monday，in her next English class，her shoes were in a shopping bag on her desk.There was a note saying，“I’m so sorry.I take your shoes by mistake！”11When I was a little child，my parents took me to Dalian，an attractively city by sea.The moment I saw the sea，I fell in love with them.We walked slowly along the shore，having a lot of funs.Everything there had left too deep an impression on me that I was eager to see the city again.For the beginning of this month，together with my parents I went to Dalian for a trip.Great changes have been taken place in the pastyears.I met some foreigners there and talked with them.Only then had I realize the importance of learn English.After staying there for ten days，we returned home，tired or happy.12Chen Yang，one of my best friend，is a top student.Not only she fond of singing and dancing，but also she has a gift on languages.In a word，I can’t speak too high of her.Before giving a performance in the school hall yesterday，he went to the hospital with me to see my mother.It was the first time my mother has seen Chen Yang.My mother，who was ill in the bed，didn’t seem to like Chen Yang.She kept silent all the time，that made us feel embarrassed.When asking later，my mother said，“Don’t you see the nose ring she had？”“She wore it because she would give a performance，”I answered.13Many students fail to perform well in an exam not because of they lack ability，but because of the unique pressure in the exam room—the tense atmosphere，the ticking clock on the wall，the teacher walk around，and the thought that their future will be decided by the exam.It’s not just students which will face pressure.Human beings are competitive animal and we tend to evaluate each other，whether in exams or in job interviews，so all of us occasional get nervous.Remove pressure from life is a impossible dream.Therefore，there are some ways that can help reduce our pressure.It turn out that we are more likely overcome the pressure when we are familiar with the situation we are about to face.14Dear classmates，I think it was very necessary for us to talk about friendship at the meeting today.As a member of society，we need friend and friendship.Healthy friendship may help people get on well and benefit one another.On contrary，unhealthy friendshipmay bring up bad things.For example，some so－called friends often smoke or drinking together.They never point out of each other’s mistakes.So deeds are against school rules.In fact，they are doing harms to their friends.In mine opinion，friends should help each other.Additional，we should encourage each other so that we may learn well and achieve great success.15Books bring us knowledges which makes our lives meaningful.As a book lover，I loved the feel of books and its smell.Believe it or not，my dream is to open a bookshop for my own.In my bookshop，there will have all kinds of books waited to be picked out.Readers can sit down and read their favorite books.Even if they don’t buy the books，they can enjoy the wonderfully moment in my shop.So far，I’ve made list of names for my dream bookshop.When I have enough money or find a perfect place，I will start my bookshop.I’m sure the dream will come out true.高考复习必看短文改错专项训练15篇答案1Dear Jack，Next Saturday will my birthday.I’m going to hold a birthday party at homeonin the evening.It will start at 7：30.Some classmates as goodwell as some foreign friendshave been invited.The activities include singing，dancing and sharing interestingexperiences.Surely，w e’ll have a good time.I would feel honoringhonored if you couldcome.I live at 656 Minzu Street.You can take Bus No.11 or No.15 and gotget off at thestop of Guang Ming High School.JustlyJust on the opposite side is my house，whatwhich isred with a white door.I’m sure you can’t miss it.I do hope theyyou will come.Bestwishwishes.Yours，Li Hua2I’m one of the students in our class whohashave ever been to stsummer I was lucky enough to be sent there to study.As soon as I arrived onin Englandby plane.I was picked up by the Smiths，whichwhom I would live with for the next twoweeks.WeI felt like a fish out of water when I got there.The Smiths did what theycould make me feel at home.Istudystudied at an international school，where I metfriendfriends from all over the world.I seized the opportunity to practise myspeak spokenEnglish.Soon I made such a rapid progress that I received highlyhigh praise from all thepeople around.3When news came that I was not chosen as thea member of the volleyball team，Iwas suchso frustrated that I almost decided to give up.However，my best friendMiranda analyzed my problems，pointedpointing out that my laziness and poor preparationled my failure.From then on，I devoted all my spare time topractice practicing playingand consulting hismy teachers about skills every day.When another chance came up，Ihad got fully prepared.As a result ，I was selected and became one of the mostimportant playerplayers in our school team.From this story，I amdefinitedefinitely convinced thatthe better prepared we are，the muchmore likely we are able to achieve our goals.4Last week，a football match was holdheld between Class One and us.Theplayerplayersfrom both sides are all excellent football players，so the match went onfierce fiercely atfirst.At last our team lost the match，sobut we didn’t lose heart.Since we all triedour best，we had no regretfulregret.In our life we may meetmuchmany failures，but so long aswe try yourour best，there’s no need to feel regretful for these failures.We shouldanalyze the reasons for the failures avoid the same mistakes in the nextcompetition.In a word，success is important，and suchso is failure，because it’s themother of success.5Of all the teachers in my primary school，the onewhichthat或whoimpressed me mostwas Mrs.Huang.She was my 5th grade teacher.She was able to makingmake learning funand I liked her classes very much.Besides，she made me leader of many groupprojectprojects，which gave me confidence.ThatIt was with her help that I soon becametop student in our class.LookedLooking back on it，I’m very proud forof having such anexcellent teacher.The reason why I did so goodwell was that she made me feelconfident.I am really grateful to her and I hopedhope one day I will become a teacher likeher.6Some of my classmates hate themit when they have to get up early in themorning.However，I’m one of those early birds.GetGetting up early，in my opinion，isof greatlygreat importance to our health，our study and our life.Every day I do morningexercise keep fit.After morning exercise，I spend some time reading aloud in theopen air，which helphelps me memorizethatwhat I’ve learned in class.Some of myclassmates are in the habitshabit of skipping breakfast.By getting up early，Ihadhaveenough time for breakfast before going to school.In thea word，I benefit a lotfrom getting up early.7My parents run teahouse near the square of our ancient st Sunday Iwas helping out herethere when two foreign visitors came in.Bytalkedtalking to themwithinsimple English，I learned they were from Canada.Because they had a deep interest inChinese culture，they came to Beijing to study Chinese last year.They come came toour ancient town to travel.Attracted by the beauty of our town，they decided to stayforotheranother three days.In fact，they even told me they’d like to introduce ourbeautifully beautiful town to friendfriends around them.They both praised me for my spokenEnglish，thatwhich gave me a lot of confidence.8It was on a hot afternoon that I serveserved as a volunteer collecting money for abadly injured farmer bysellselling newspapers.With a pile of newspapers inhismy hands，I walked along the street to findnonesomeone who would like to buy one copy.I tried，wearing a big smile，explain my purpose to the passer－by passers－by.Manyof them were generous and kind enough to give me more moneythan the newspaper cost.Eventually，anthe injured person received a timely operationwith the money I collected and recoveredcompletecompletely.Help is ofverygreat significance toevery receiver.9Jane and Jack are high school students.Both of them work hard but they havedifferent learning methodmethods.Jane listens to her teachers attentively andmakemakes notescarefully，trying to catch everything the teachers sayingsay in class.She often asks herteachers questions if shefeltfeels puzzled，so she spendslittleless time on her homeworkthan others.It’s certain that she can go to bed earlier，so she always keeps energeticallyenergetic in the day.However，Jack likes to stay up late at night doing hishomework，so he often falls sleepyasleep in class.As consequence of this，he misseslots of key points and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework.Itis difficult offor him to manage his study.10A funny thing happened0020 my sister Tina last month.In Japan，peopleusually don’t wearhistheir outdoor shoes in the house or at school，and a lot ofbuildings hadhave places for shoes.Her school has a special place for shoes，eithertoo.It’s ashoe box.Tina teaches English in the evening.One Friday，she went to school and puther shoes in the shoe boxesbox as usual.After class she got ready to leave.But tothehersurprise，her s hoes weren’t in the box.There werewas only one pair of shoes there，andthey weren’t her shoes！She had to leave within a hurry，so she put on the shoes andleft .On Monday，in her next English class，her shoes were in a shopping bag onher desk.There was a note saying，“I’m so sorry.I taketook your shoes by mistake！”When I was a little child，my parents took me to Dalian，an attractively attractive city bysea.The moment I saw the sea，I fell in love with themit.We walked slowly alongthe shore，having a lot of funsfun.Everything there had lefttooso deep an impression onme that I was eager to see the city again.ForAt the beginning of this month，togetherwith my parents I went to Dalian for a trip.Great changes have taken placein the past years.I met some foreigners there and talked with them.Only then had did Irealize the importance oflearnlearning English.After staying there for ten days，wereturned home，tired orbut happy.12Chen Yang，one of my best friendfriends，is a top student.Not only she fond ofsinging and dancing，but also she has a gift onfor languages.In a word，I can’t speak toohighhighly of her.Before giving a performance in the school hall yesterday，heshe went tothe hospital with me to see my mother.It was the first time my mother hashad seen ChenYang.My mother，who was ill in bed，didn’t seem to like Chen Yang.She keptsilent all the time，thatwhich made us feel embarrassed.Whenaskingasked later，my mothersaid，“Don’tDidn’tyou see the nose ring she had？”“She wore it because she wouldgive a performance，”I answered.13Many students fail to perform well in an exam not because they lack ability，but because of the unique pressure in the exam room—the tense atmosphere，the ticking clock on the wall，the teacherwalkwalking around，and the thought that theirfuture will be decided by the exam.It’s not just studentswhichwho/that will face pressure.Human beings are competitiveanimalanimals或在are后加aand we tend to evaluate each other，whether in exams or in jobinterviews，so all of usoccasionaloccasionally get nervous.RemoveRemoving pressure from life isaanimpossible dream.ThereforeHowever，there are some ways that can help reduce our pressure.Itturnturns out that we are more likely overcome the pressure when we are familiar with the situation we are about to face.14Dear classmates，I think itwasis或去掉wasvery necessary for us to talk about friendship at themeeting today.As a member of society，we need friendfriends and friendship.Healthyfriendship may help people get on well and benefit one another.On contrary，unhealthy friendship may bringupabout或去掉upbad things.For example，some so－called friends often smoke or drinkingdrink together.They never point out eachother’s mistakes.SoSuch deeds are against school rules.In fact，they are doingharmsharm totheir friends.In minemy opinion，friends should help each other.AdditionalAdditionally，we shouldencourage each other so that we may learn well and achieve great success.15Books bring us knowledgesknowledge which makes our lives meaningful.As a booklover，I lovedlove the feel of books anditstheir smell.Believe it or not，my dream is toopen a bookshop forof my own.In my bookshop，there willhavebe all kinds of bookswaitedwaiting to be picked out.Readers can sit down and read their favorite books.Even ifthey don’t buy the books，they can enjoy the wonderfullywonderful moment in my shop.Sofar，I’ve made list of names for my dream bookshop.When I have enough money orand find a perfect place，I will start my bookshop.I’m sure the dream will come true.。

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短文改错（2013---2019全国卷高考）真题汇编（共18篇附答案详解）一、2013年全国卷(新课标I卷)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.76.【参考答案】holding改为hold【考查内容】固定结构【解析思路】used to do sth 过去常常做某事。

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历年高考短文改错真题汇总Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove. I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. “Not that way, ”my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished.(2020全国1)Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.(2020全国2)My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.(2020全国3)I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football feel just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now. (2019全国1)Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.(2019全国2)I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it requireda lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.(2019全国3)During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.(2018全国1)When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.(2018全国2)It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.(2018全国3)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.(2017全国1)Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pickthe vegetables！(2017全国2)When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically.and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time,car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.(2017全国3)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.（2016全国1）The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.（2016全国2）The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. （2016全国3）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it . （2015全国1）One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later.Tony saw parents.Mom said,”How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.（2015全国2）Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden. Since then --- for all these year --- we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!（2014全国1）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（2014全国2）。

短文改错15篇1．（2024·宁夏银川·二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

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In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before get into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor orders. Once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot that what he had said to me altogether. She kept repeating the words. “Speeding up!” “Slow down!” “Turn left!” I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, he asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle on the road.2．（2024·四川成都·一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

高考英语短文改错精炼20篇一、I am good at all the subjects, and always ready help others．At school I get along well with my classmates．Therefore, I havea problem that troubles myself all the time．It’s the relationship among my desk mate and me．He is a hard-working student, who keeps school rule well．But he’s a person with few words．What’s more, he got angry easily．I don’t know what to deal with him．Maybe that ’s why we’ve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughts．I value our friendship．I hope we can know more about with each other and understand each other better．I do hope we will be close to each other than before.【答案】【小题1】加上to【小题2】Therefore--However【小题3】myself--me【小题4】among--between【小题5】rule--rules【小题6】got--gets【小题7】what--how【小题8】why--because【小题9】去掉with【小题10】close--closer二、Dear mum and dad,I still cannot believe that I am taking up this prize I won last year. I have toremind yourself constantly that I am real in AD 3008. Worrying about the journey,I was unsettled for the first a few days. As a result, I suffer from “time lag”. Thisis similar with the “jet lag” you get from flying, but it seems that you keep gettingflashbacks from your previous time period. So I was very nervous and uncertainat first. However, Wang Ping, my friend and guide, were very understandingbut gave me some green tablet which helped a lot. Well-known for their expertise,his parents company transported me safely into the future in a time capsule.…Yours,Li Qiang【答案】【小题1】yourself—myself【小题2】real—really【小题3】Worrying--Worried【小题4】去掉a【小题5】suffer--suffered【小题6】with--to【小题7】were--was【小题8】but--and【小题9】tablet--tablets【小题10】parents—parents’三、In China, people and giant pandas had been living together for thousands of years. But China’s human population has been great growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most damaged result of development has been that it has divided the panda’s habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas which people live. The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and have babies.Besides, to our relief, there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas.【答案】【小题1】had-- have【小题2】great-- greatly【小题3】mean--means【小题4】live 前加to【小题5】damaged --damaging【小题6】panda-- pandas【小题7】of划掉【小题8】which--- where / in which/ live后加in【小题9】can--can’t /cannot【小题10】Besides --However四、Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of the experiences.【答案】【小题1】去掉a【小题2】minute----minutes【小题3】and --but【小题4】with ---on【小题5】when --- than【小题6】waited前面加had【小题7】other-- another【小题8】do --did【小题9】possible --- possibly【小题10】lose---losing五、One cold evening during the holiday season, a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window. The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags. A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes. She took the child by the hand and led him into the store. There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing. They walked back outside into the street, so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday. The little boy looked her and asked how she was God. She smiled and replied that she was just one of His child.【答案】【小题1】去掉the【小题2】has--had【小题4】her---him【小题5】warm---warmly【小题6】so---and【小题7】come---go【小题8】looked 后面加at【小题9】how---if /whether【小题10】child---children六、Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. May I have your attention, please?I have something important to tell you. Our plan to visit the countryside has to put off till tomorrow because the rain. Now I will introduce their plan for today. we would go to visit a middle school by bus on this morning. A school has a history of 85 years. Then we’ll go to an exhibition of some new invention. I think it will be interested. The bus will wait at the gate of the hotel. We’ll set out at 8:30. Taking everything necessary with you and please get on the bus on time. You are welcome to ask me unless you still have any questions. Thank you for listening.【答案】【小题1】加上be【小题2】加上of【小题3】their--our【小题4】would--will【小题5】去掉on【小题6】A--The【小题7】invention--inventions【小题8】interested--interesting【小题9】Taking--Take【小题10】unless--if七、Miss Jones was math teacher. Her home not far from her school, but she always walked there in the morning. All the pupils in the school was very young. In a cold and windy morning, Miss Jones walked to the school, and the cold wind goes into her eyes. and big tear began to run out . she reached school. opened the door and going into the classroom. It was nice and warm here and Miss Jones was happily, but then a small boy looked at her for a few seconds, to put his arms around her and said kind. "Don't cry, Miss Jones .School isn't very bad."【答案】【小题1】加上a【小题2】but--and【小题3】was--were【小题4】In--On【小题5】goes--went【小题6】tear--tears【小题7】going--went【小题8】happily--happy【小题9】去掉to【小题10】kind--kindly八、Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch. As I was waiting my order to come, I noticed the old man in a wheel chair roll himself over to a table. No one and me seemed to notice him. I got up and go over to his table and asked if that I could getgetting ready to leave, I walked by the old man’s table to saying goodbye. He thanked me again and told me I had made his days, coming over and helping him out. I gave him a hug and told him he had made my day, either.【答案】【小题1】waiting后面加for【小题2】the改为an【小题3】and改为but/except【小题4】go改为went【小题5】去掉if后面的that【小题6】generously改为generous【小题7】any改为some【小题8】saying改为say【小题9】days改为day【小题10】either改为too九、I was working in a beer company, helped the president do something important. At the same time, my mother was in the final stages of the cancer. I worked during the day and drive 40 miles home to be with her every night. It was tired, but it was that I wanted to do. I didn’t want to bother the president with my trouble, yet I felt someone at the company needed to know about it. So I told a friend and asked him not to share the information with someone. Therefore, the president called me into his office one day. He faced me from across her large desk, looked at me and said, “Alice, I hear your mother is very ill.” I was caught by surprise and burst into tear. He just gentle said a sentence I will never forget: “Whatever you need.”【答案】【小题1】helped ---helping【小题2】the cancer【小题3】drive – drove【小题4】tired---tiring【小题5】that --- what【小题6】someone---anyone【小题7】Therefore--- However【小题8】her --- his【小题9】tear---tears【小题10】gentle---gently十、Lin Qiaozhi was a specialist in women’s disease. She lived in a generation that girl’s education was second to boy’s. It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school. What made her success later on was the kindness and consideration the showed to her patients. There is story after story of how she, tiring after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family who could not pay for her. She was said to have devoted her whole life to her patients and safe delivered about 50,000 babies. It seemed that she had been busy with her choosing career, in traveling abroad to study as well as write books and articles She also wrote a book intended for woman in the countryside. How greatly she was!【答案】【小题1】that--when【小题2】which--that【小题3】is--was【小题4】tiring--tired【小题5】去掉for【小题6】safe--safely【小题7】choosing--chosen【小题9】woman--women【小题10】greatly--great十一、This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a Patience is of a great importance in our daily life. One day I waited for a bus to come at a stop. 30 minute had passed, and no bus came. Upset and annoyed, I decided to walk with foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I had chosen to take the next bus, I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.【答案】【小题1】去掉a【小题2】minute----minutes【小题3】and --but【小题4】with ---on【小题5】when --- than【小题6】waited前面加had【小题7】other-- another【小题8】do --did【小题9】possible --- possibly【小题10】lose---losing十二、My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. There have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time for after-school activities. For an example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.【答案】【小题1】have--are【小题2】didn’t—don’t【小题3】many--much【小题4】去掉an【小题5】hour--hours【小题6】look--looks【小题7】去掉the【小题8】sat--sit【小题9】加上to【小题10】helpfully--helpful十三、We’ll never forget a day when my classmates and I paid a visit a chemistry factory. It is a large one with nearly 20, 000 workers. It looks like a garden but we saw colorful flowers, grass and trees there. We also visited some workshop and found workers working hard. We talked to them and learned a lot of. We understood them farther. On the way home we felt very tiring, but we both thought we had a very good day. We really hoped what we could get more chances of learn about society.【答案】【小题1】a the【小题3】but and【小题4】workshop workshops【小题5】去掉of【小题6】farther further【小题7】tiring tired【小题8】both all【小题9】去掉what或改为that【小题10】learn learning十四、Senior Three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination. “Should I choose a good major and a good university ?” Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested . It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs. In my opinion , a best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we couldn’t obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.【答案】【小题1】student → students【小题2】去掉by【小题3】and →or【小题4】在interested 后加in【小题5】impossibly→ possible【小题6】believes→believe【小题7】graduate →graduating或graduate前加who【小题8】a→ the【小题9】can→ can't 或后加not【小题10】they →we十五、It is three years now since I graduate from Jixing High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in touch with everybody and set a properly time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together. It reminded us of the interesting stories and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places【答案】【小题1】graduate→graduated【小题2】on→in【小题3】time 后加to【小题4】properly→proper【小题5】a→the【小题6】remember→remembering【小题7】they→we【小题8】which→that【小题9】去掉abroad前面的to【小题10】card→cards十六、since I am in high school. Right now, she is studying English at the University of Maryland. When I visit her, she will have to go to her classes, but we will have lots of free time together either. When we go to high school together, she didn’t stud y very much hard. She wasn’t getting very good grades. And now she is a very good student in American. She know that she should study hard to success. We will have a great time together this summer.【答案】【小题1】wonderfully--wonderful【小题2】friends→friend【小题3】am→was【小题4】either→ too【小题5】go→went【小题6】去掉much【小题7】and→ but【小题8】American→ America【小题9】know→knows【小题10】success→succeed十七、I’m an senior high school student. I’m upset these days because my parents. They pay too much attention on my study. I have to report my test results to them every time. If I get good grades, they will be happy and satisfied. But if not, they will be worrying about me, especially my mom. I never want to let them down, but she has made a plan for my future. I was very bored with it and don’t know how to do. I know they really love me. I also know knowledges is important for everybody. Therefore, I can’t stand they are always making me to study. I really expect they can understand me.【答案】【小题1】an→a【小题2】because后加of【小题3】on--to【小题4】worrying—worried【小题5】them—her【小题6】was—am【小题7】how--what【小题8】knowledges—knowledge【小题9】Therefore –However【小题10】to study去掉to十八、With the growing popularity of the Internet, more and more children are addicted to play online games day and night. It does harm not only to their health, especial their eyes, but also to their studies.Comparing with online games, many traditional games, like hide-and-seek, benefits kids mentally and physically. They were ever popular to several generations, which not only learned something valuable but also had fun playing the games. Therefore, the games are dying away now.Personally, I think teachers and parents should take measure to limit their children's Internet time. Let children to know the harm of online games and the benefits of traditional games. Help children judge healthy and unhealthy games. What's more, we should often organize events for children in which traditional games played.【答案】【小题1】把play online改成playing online【小题2】把especial改成especially【小题3】把Comparing with改成Compared with【小题4】把benefits kids改成benefit kids【小题6】把which not改成who not【小题7】把Therefore改成However【小题8】把measure改成measures【小题9】Let children to去掉to【小题10】games played 改为games are played十九、The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.【答案】【小题1】made改为makes；【小题2】at改为to；【小题3】movie改为movies【小题4】去掉the；【小题5】How改为What；【小题6】different 改为differently【小题7】加to；【小题8】fallen改为fall；【小题9】Beside改为Besides；【小题10】keeping改为kept；二十、There are lots of experience in our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year. I’m interested in English. When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation. I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally，I do a good job. When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confident that makes people successfully.【答案】【小题1】experience→experiences【小题2】holding→held【小题3】been∧chosen【小题4】me→myself【小题5】such→so【小题6】a去掉【小题7】do→did【小题8】in→with【小题9】confident→confidence【小题10】successfully→successful/succeed。

《高考短文改错--专项训练30篇—-及答案解析》1。

短文改错1. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉.修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2。

只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起)不计分.Dear Peter，As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples。

One of the most popular words are Dianzan，which is often use when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing，you mean that they will do whatever they liked。

The phrase Miaosha first came on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it’s wide used when you achieve your purpose in very short time。

If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich。

1、【题文】Last night my wife and I had dinner at a restaurant not far from our home. We like this place very much, but we have eaten there many times. Last night, otherwise, the service was not very good. We had to wait a long time after a waiter came to our table. He was very nice, but he didn't do the very good job. I ordered chicken with mushroom, but he bring me chicken with cream sauce. My wife got her main course OK, but she put the wrong kind of salad dressing on her salad. We didn't say something to the waiter. We just ate what he brought us. I know that 15% is the unusual amount for a tip. I wanted to leave 10% show that we were not happy. Did I do the right thing?2、【题文】It is five years now since I graduate from No.3 High School. Last Saturday, the class that I was on held aget-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybodyand set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed this precious day greatly, remember the time we spenttogether and the people they were familiar with.It was a pity which some of us were not present as they hadgone abroad for further studies, but they calls back or sent greeting card from different places.3、【题文】I was walking home from school while suddenly it rained heavy. What should I do? I didn’t have an umbrella and a raincoat with me. I looked around and see some students walking happily under their umbrellas. They must listened to the weather forecast. I began to run and caught in the rain. I kept running until I got to a bookstore which I could wait until the rain stopped and in the same time I could read my favorite books. After about half a hour, the rain stopped and I go home.4、【题文】My family was very poor when I was child. My parents were workers but couldn’t afford to buy toysfrom me. As a result, my dolls looked a lot differently from those bought from toy stores. My dolls werehome-made. The first doll I owned it was made of a glass Coca-Cola bottle. I was such excited to make a doll byitself. Soon I became a collector of empty Coca-Cola bottles because I see each bottle as a possible baby doll atthat time. People whom worked in the store selling Coca-Cola could see me pick up empty bottles almost everyday. Those home-made toys brought me a lot of happy.5、【题文】How an unbelievable scene ! A modern young couple were eating fruit in public and had thrown a plenty of waste on the ground. When an old cleaner comes to clean up, the man was very angry. He pointed at the cleaner, said in a loud voice," How impolite! They haven't finished eating!" " How could people behave such badly?" I thought. Obvious, in their eyes, they could do all they liked and ignore other's feelings. In my opinion, we should pay attention our behavior, obey public rules and respect other's works. We should know that really civilized people are those who have good manners but a beautiful mind all the t ime.6、【题文】Dearfriends,It is real a good chance to have met all of you here．We have spent several weekend in learning in the English Club．Although we had been members for a short period of time, we have made a great progress．That is because we are all very active but the activities are not only enjoyable but also helpful．Beside, the foreign teachers here work hard and try their best to make the activities lively and interested．I am very pleased say that all of us have greatly improved our speaking English so far．I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!7、【题文】My friend Li Hua come to visit me on May Day. During the following days I showed he around the city of Hangzhou. We went to the Museum in the morning of May 2, and we learned many about the history of Zhejiang. In the afternoon, we made a tour to the West Lake. It was really great funny! In the evening I took Li Hua to the night zoo .It was too interesting to see animal at night. The next day we went to the book shop to buy books. Though we were very tiring in those two days, but we enjoyed ourselves very much.8、【题文】I’m a senior student and I’m now in the need of your help although I can’t stand the great pressure.Every day I have to have lesson at school for nine hours and take at least three to four hours doing my homework at home. Our teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do that we want. Besides, we don’t even have enough sleep. There seem to have threecases about the overload: the pressure of examinations, too many homework and high expectation s from the parents. We often warned that if we don’t do our best we won’t have the chance to go university. The pressure often makes me awake at night.9、【题文】Dear Alice,I have just got a good news to tell you. I win a national prize for painting last week. My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying there for half a month, visiting place of interest and practicing my Engl ish as well. We’ve been written to each other for nearly a year now. I have often dreamed of talk face to face with you.I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that time. Perhaps you will go out do some sightseeing together. Best,Lily10、【题文】The oth er day, I was invited my friend Sam’s home for dinner. I felt a bit surprising when I saw Bill there. It was two month since we two had quarreled, so I was embarrassed and didn’t know how to do. I sat down on the sofa but began to watch TV. Later Sam came to ask me to make up with Bill. Until then I realize that Sam had arranged the meeting on purpose. He went up to Bill and greeted him warmly, smiled at him. He looked very happily and talked with me excitedly. That night, we had a great fun together.11、【题文】I was walking home from school while suddenly it rained heavy. What should I do? I didn’t have an umbrella and a raincoat with me. I looked around and see some students walking happily under their umbrellas. They must listened to the weather forecast. I began to run and caught in the rain. I kept running until I got to a bookstore which I could wait until the rain stopped and in the same time I could read my favorite books. After about half a hour, the rain stopped and I go home.【答案】1.【小题1】but→and【小题2】otherwise→however【小题3】after→before【小题4】the→a【小题5】mushroom-mushrooms【小题6】bring→brought【小题7】she→he【小题8】something→anything【小题9】unusual→usual【小题10】show→showing2.【小题1】graduate 改为graduated【小题2】on 改为in【小题3】time 后面加to【小题4】去掉the【小题5】Well 改为good【小题6】Remember 改为remembering 【小题7】They 改为we【小题8】Which 改为that【小题9】Calls 改为called【小题10】Card 改为cards3.【小题1】while 改为when【小题2】heavy 改为heavily【小题3】and 改为or【小题4】see 改为saw【小题5】must 后加have【小题6】and 后加got / was【小题7】which 改为where 或前加in 【小题8】in—at【小题9】an【小题10】go—went4.【小题1】child 前加a【小题2】but-and【小题3】from-for【小题4】differently-different.【小题5】it 去掉【小题6】such-so【小题7】itself-myself【小题8】see-saw【小题9】whom-who【小题10】happy-happiness5.【小题1】how- what;【小题2】去掉 a plenty of 中的a; 【小题3】comes-came;【小题4】said-saying;【小题5】they-we;【小题6】such-so;【小题7】obvious-obviously;【小题8】pay attention 后加to;【小题9】works-work;【小题10】but-and6.【小题1】Real 改为really【小题2】Weekend 改为weekends 【小题3】Had 改为have【小题4】去掉 a【小题5】but 改为and【小题6】Beside 改为Besides【小题7】Interested 改为interesting 【小题8】Say 前面加to【小题9】Speaking 改为spoken 【小题10】See 改为seeing7.【小题1】come---came【小题2】he—him【小题3】in---on【小题4】many-much【小题5】fun—funny【小题6】too—so/very/quite【小题7】animal—animals【小题8】the ---a【小题9】tiring—tired【小题10】but---\8.【小题1】the need 去掉the【小题2】although——because【小题3】lesson ——lessons【小题4】take——spend【小题5】Our——We【小题6】that——what【小题7】have——be【小题8】many——much【小题9】we∧are often【小题10】go ∧to university9.【小题1】got a good →去掉a【小题2】win→won【小题3】pleasing→pleased【小题4】staying→stay【小题5】place→places【小题6】written→writing【小题7】talk→talking【小题8】at→on【小题9】you →we【小题10】go out∧do→to10.【小题1】invited 后面加to【小题2】surprising 改成surprised 【小题3】month 改成months【小题4】how 改成what【小题5】but 改成and【小题6】realize 改成realized【小题7】he 改成I【小题8】smiled 改成smiling【小题9】happily 改成happy【小题10】去掉 a11.【小题1】while 改为when【小题2】heavy 改为heavily【小题3】and 改为or【小题4】see 改为saw【小题5】must 后加have【小题6】and 后加got / was【小题7】which 改为where 或前加in 【小题8】in—at【小题9】an【小题10】go—went“”“”At the end, Xiao Bian gives you a passage. Minand once said, "people who learn to learn are very happy people.". In every wonderful life, learning is an eternal theme. As a professional clerical and teaching position, I understand the importance of continuous learning, "life is diligent, nothing can be gained", only continuous learning can achieve better self. Only by constantly learning and mastering the latest relevant knowledge, can employees from all walks of life keep up with the pace of enterprise development and innovate to meet the needs of the market. This document is also edited by my studio professionals, there may be errors in the document, if there are errors, please correct, thank you!。

新高考英语短文改错150篇Passage 1In our everyday life we see much moving 1 _______ things. We saw cars, bikes , buses and trucks; 2_______ moved along the roads. We see planes flying 3_______ in sky and ships sailing on the sea. Do you 4 _______ know what makes things to move? The answer 5_______ is force. A force can a push or a pull. 6 _______ If you are use a force on a cart, it will 7 _______ move and keeps moving for some time before 8_______ it stop. It is the same when we ride a bike. 9_______ The bike will stop moving if we don't keep on pedaling. 10_______ Passage 2Last year summer I went to London for a holiday. 1_______ I spent just a week there. While I am staying there I visited 2_______ many places of interests and had lots of friendly talks; with 3 _______ all kinds people. I found a very interesting thing there. 4_______ One of my Chinese friends who have been lived in London 5_______ told me that many English families don't like to buy new 6_______ television sets. There are many shops where can lend you 7_______ TV sets. The shops are often filled by a great many people. 8_______ Here they can borrow a set very easy, and it costs them only 9 _______ a little. Then it can be taken home or used for long. 10_______ Passage 3I think it is time that we did something to helping 1 _______ animals. Firstly, the fur farms should be closed. 2_______ Animals should not be keep in small places, and 3_______ treated cruel. They should be given the right to 4_______ live in the wild where they are belong. Secondly, 5_______ the general public should not sell fur coats. If there 6_______ is no longer a demand at the coats, factories will 7_______ stop making them. This would save the life of many 8_______ animals, some of them have almost died out as a 9 _______ result of what we have done them. Please give them a chance. 10 _______My grandpa, he is seventy-six years of age, is the 1 _______ oldest member of our family. He has always been lived 2_______ with us, as far back as I can remember. He wears glasses 3_______ which look as old as he is. He walks very quickly, but he 4_______ has a slight limp as result of a fall that he had ten 5_______ years ago in which he broke his leg. Though he was old, 6_______ he has never stopped working. Every day, besides Sundays, 7_______ he goes to a local factory and work there, making beautiful 8_______ piece of furniture, from eight o'clock until one o'clock. It 9_______ is a wonder to me that he keeps so actively. 10 _______Passage 5I am a senior 3 student. Recently I have made a survey 1_______ between 100 boys and 100 girls. The result of the survey is as 2_______ the following: what boys like to do most is to become businessmen. 3while the girls' favorite work is to be teachers. Only few 4_______ boys want to do this job. It is interested that the number of 5_______ boys and girls who want to be doctors are equal. As for 6_______ lawyers, more boys expect to have this job. Therefore, there 7 _______ are still students who are not clear about our future. In a word, 8 _______ they all express they would work hard at their study for the College 9 _______ Entrance Examination. As long as they do this badly, they will 10 _______ realize their great dreams.Passage 6Two hundreds years ago, 9 5% American workers 1_______ were farmers. Today little than 3 % of American 2_______ workers are farmers. Yet America farmers are 3_______ more than worker in any other industry. 4 _______ American farmers used to grown only enough 5_______ food to raise their families. Now each farmer 6_______ grows enough to feeding 78 other people. They 7_______ produce more because of they use modern farming 8_______ methods. They have to learn much than before. 9_______ They must learned about soil, weather, plants 10_______ and even computers.Dear Jim,I was so please to hear from you and I'm writing to tell 1_______you anything about my school. You are right. Quite a few 2_______ changes have been taken place in our school. On one side 3_______of the road, there is a new teaching building. On other 4_______ side, where the playground used to be, now stand 5_______ another new building. It is ours library. In it there are all 6_______ kinds books, newspapers and magazines. The playground 7_______ now is in the front of our school. We also have planted many 8 _______ tree around our school. I hope you come and pay 9_______a visit in our school yourself some day in the future. 10_______Yours,Li HuaPassage 8It was 7:15 in the .morning of February 8, 2000. I was 1_______ walking along Park Road towards east when an elderly 2_______ man came out of the park on the other side of the street. 3_______ Then I saw a yellow car to drive up Third Street and 4_______ made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment 5_______ the car hit the man while he was acrossing the road. 6_______ He felt with a cry. The car didn't stop but drove off 7_______ at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver 8_______ was young woman and the plate number was AC 864. 9_______ About two minutes before I stopped a passing car and 10_______ took the old man to the nearest hospital.Passage 9When we are travelling lonely in a ship or an 1_______ aeroplane in night or in fog, we are much happier 2_______ if we know that the captain of the ship, and the 3_______ pilot of the plane, know where rocks or mountain 4_______ tops are, so that he can keep away out from them. 5_______ Till the Second World War, travellers could not 6_______ have this feeling safety, because there was no 7_______ ways of "seeing" dangers through fog or cloud. 8_______ But now there is "radar", wonderful wartime 9_______ invention, that has saved the lives of many 10 _______ thousands, both in war and in peace.Passage 10Dear Helen,Thank you very much for your last letter. You asked meto tell you something about my hobbies.Well, I like playing the piano, dancing and do sports, especially 1 _______ reading. I'd like to read books if I have time. I read a lot of, 2_______ included storybooks, science books, newspapers and magazines, 3 _______ etc. I'm sometimes happy, sometimes joy, sometimes angry, 4 _______ sometimes even sad with the people in the books while I 5_______ am reading. Recently I have read book Who Moved My Cheese. 6 _______ I have learned a lot on it. It encourages me to do things with 7 _______ great efforts. Books brings me not only happiness but also 8_______ knowledge. I very like books. And I want to be a writer in the future. 9 _______ I have to stop here to do my homeworks. Please write to me soon. 10 _______Yours,Zhang Hong Passage 11Dear Doctor Helper,I am a senior student. I am now in greatly need of your 1 _______ help because of I can hardly stand the great pressure. 2_______ Every day I had to stay at school for nine hours to have 3_______ lesson and spend at least three to four hours doing my 4_______ homework at home. We teenagers are eager to playing and 5 _______ enjoy ourselves, and we hardly have any time to do what we 6 _______ want. Besides, we don't even have enough sleep. 7_______ We often warned that if we don't do our best we 8_______ won't have the chance to go to the university. 9_______ I write this letter only wish I could have someone to 10_______ talk to. I'm looking forward to your advice.Yours sincerely,Wang Lei Passage 12Dear Sir,We are glad to know what you are going to take over 1_______ and rebuilding Tourists' Hotel. The people living next to; your 2 _______ hotel ask me write to you about the problems we are facing. 3 _______ Our residential area sits next to your hotels. The traffic jams 4 _______ have caused by cars and trucks coming into and out of the parking 5 _______ lot often result from inconveniences. And children also find it 6 _______ unsafe to go to school. What's more, we cannot put up the 7_______ noises from the karaoke hall no more. Dirty water flows into 8 _______ our courtyard and it smells terribly. All the people are looking 9 _______ forward to effective changes that you are going to bring about. 10 _______Yours,Li HuaPassage 13Good health is the person's most valuable possession. 1_______ Today, it is much easier to be healthy than it was the 2_______ past. Modern people know more than health, 3_______ have better food, and live in clean surroundings. 4_______ Also, scientists and doctors had learnt how to deal with 5_______ many diseases. Most people can quickly get for help 6_______ from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill. As a 7_______ result, people in the modern world generally live longer 8_______ than people used to. People in developing countries can 9_______ expect to live twice as long as people lived a few 10_______ hundred years ago.Passage 14The train which I am traveling on was already half an hour 1______ late. I had to reach to Vienna at 7:15 in order to catch 2_______ the 7:25 train to Paris—but that was impossible now. 3_______ I explained the situation to the conductor, which advised 4_______ me to get off two stops after Vienna station and take 5_______ a taxi. While the time came, he even helped me with my 6_______ bags. He hoped me good luck as I jumped off, and a few 7_______ minutes later,! was going to the direction of the city in a 8_______ taxi. It was exactly 7:20 the taxi stopped outside the 9_______ station. I paid the driver quickly, seizing my bags and 10_______ hurried inside.Passage 15It helps us understand the world better if we knew 1_______ a few geography and have some maps at hand. But with 2_______ maps in Chinese only, misunderstanding is possible on 3_______ studying world events. The names of places in a map in 4_______ Chinese usually are long, hardly to pronounce and without 5 _______ means to a foreigner. For the opening of the country, maps 6 _______ are important and helpful and are needed them badly. 7_______At last I wish maps in various language, such 8_______ as those using in the United States, will come out and 9_______ can sold in all of the bookstores open to Chinese. 10_______ Passage 16I am back in Brighton now through a great holiday 1_______ with Rosie in Dublin. I really enjoyed it. We travel by 2_______ train and boat. I hated a boat journey—I tried to sleep 3_______ but it was very difficult. We both very tired when we 4_______ arrived. We lived with her parents for two weeks and 5_______ they cooked lovely meals for us. I practised English 6_______ all the time. We visited the Rosie's friends and also some 7_______ of Dublin's beautiful buildings. The castle closed so we 8_______ didn't get in. We just looked at the outside. I liked 9_______ the university very much. What great to be a student! 10_______ Passage 17I have always quite irrationally proud myself on my 1 _______ good health, for I only occasionally had to take a day 2_______ off the work when I have had a cold. So I was quite 3_______ offended by my doctor whom, when we ran to each other 4 _______ in the street the other day, taking one look at me and 5_______ told me that I was definitely fat and that I did not 6_______ make effort to lose some weight,! could expect to 7_______ have a heart attack long before. He added that, as many 8_______ middle-aged man, I led an inactive life. It was true that I 9_______ had been getting fatter, but it was because I was getting older. 10 _______Passage 18We went to the Town Hall in Wednesday evening. 1_______ It was the last day of the year and large crowd of 2_______ the people had gathered under the Town Hall clock. It would 3 _______ strike twelve after twenty minutes' time. Fifteen minutes 4_______ passed and then, at five past twelve, the clock stopped. 5_______ The big minute's hand did not move. We waited and waited, 6 _______ therefore nothing happened. Suddenly someone shouted, "It 7_______is two minutes past twelve! The clock had stopped!" I 8_______ looked my watch. It was true. The big clock refused to 9_______ welcome the New Year. At that moment, everybody began 10_______ to laugh and sing.Passage 19Dear friends,It give us a great pleasure together here. 1 _______ First of all, I'd like to introduce to us Mr. Smith, 2_______ our guest today. Mr. Smith is famous professor 3_______ from England. It is well known that he is the writer 4_______ of Practical English Usage, that we like best. 5_______ It is two years when he came to China to teach 6_______ at Xiamen University. Today, he invited to visit 7_______ our school and has a free talk with us. I think 8_______ it's a good chance of us to learn from him. If you 9_______ have questions on English, please you ask Mr. 10_______ Smith for advice.Passage 20After I finished the school this year, I began 1_______ to look for work. Now several month later, I still 2_______ hadn't found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday 3_______ morning I received a phone call from a man calling him 4_______ Mr. Smith. He said to me on the phone,"! hear you do 5_______ very well in your studies. I may have a job for you. " 6_______ I entered his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped 7_______ that I will go through the job-hunting talk today and he 8_______ would take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9_______ what he said disappointing. He only needed a model. 10_______ Passage 21You may think that America is a free country and thatAmericans kiss the ir friends. Well, it is, and if you 1 _______ kiss a wrong person you might get in trouble. That is 2_______ that happened to John, a six-year-old primary pupil. 3_______He kissed a girl. They were in same class. However, 4_______ a teacher saw it and told the headmaster, he thought 5_______ that John should be punished.John told to leave his classroom and stayed in another 6_______ classroom by himself. His mother asked the headmaster 7_______ why the school punished her son for kissing another one 8_______ six-year-old girl. The headmaster still thought the boy kissed 9 _______ the girl was wrong, though they were only six year old. 10_______Passage 22I am very thankful you for inviting me to go 1_______ and stay with you in Nanjing. I often heard that 2_______ Nanjing is a beautiful city and that I have been 3_______ longing to see you again so that I can get more help 4______ from you in my English study. And I am afraid 5_______ I can't come this coming summer vacations. My 6 ______ grandmother, who lives in the country, asked me 7 ______ again and again and to go and spend the vacation 8_______ together with him. She misses me so much that I 9_______ have no choice but obey her. I wish I could come 10_______ and see you at the end of this year.Passage 23I have two foreign friends, Kari and Vance, they 1_______ come from the USA. Now they are teaching English 2_____in the university in Nanjing. Last year they paid a 3 _______ visit to our school. I never met any foreigners 4______ before and wanted very much know how I was 5_______ getting on with my spoken English, because I went 6_______ over to talk with them. All of them were surprised that a 7_______ school student could speak English and suggested to 8_______ taking a photo together. Since then we become good 9_______ friends and now write English letter to each other often. 10_______Passage 24Dear editor,I am a self-taught student. I study very hard to pass allmy exams with high scores. Many of 1 _______ friends are self-taught students, either. We often 2_______。

短文改错（2020全国1卷）Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove，I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together.＂Not that way,＂my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tu rn out as I had wished.短文改错（2020全国2卷）Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung f u in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.短文改错（2020全国3卷）My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced A eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.短文改错（2020兰州市第一次诊断卷）At about 9 o'clock last night, I was busy prepare for my test when a loud noise came through next door. My neighbor watched the football game on TV and kept the sound so much high that I couldn't go on studying. I covered my ear with hands, buried my head in books, and tried even to recite English texts and it was no use. I became impatient and decided to explain my difficult even if he might turned a deaf ear. To his great surprise, after hearing what I said, my neighbor apologized and turned down the TV immediate. Everything was back normal and in 30 seconds, the problem is solved.短文改错（2019全国1卷）I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football feel just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From nowon, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.短文改错（2019全国2卷）Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.短文改错（2019全国3卷）I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style. 短文改错（2018全国2卷）When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.短文改错（2018全国1卷）During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond, which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.短文改错（2018全国3卷）It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of alarger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.短文改错（2017全国1卷）In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.短文改错（2017全国2卷）Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！短文改错（2017全国3卷）When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time, car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kings of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.短文改错（2017兰州1诊断）Now I’d like to share with you a strange experience I hada month before. It may sound funny, and it’s true. After a day’s hard work I went to bed early than usual. It was about two o’clock in the morning, and suddenly I woke up. I heard a noise. I got out of bed and went slow downstairs. I listened carefully. I could heard two men speaking quietly. I believed two thieves had broken into my house and I was really frightened, so I went back to upstairs, and immediately phone the police from my bedroom. The police arrived quickly. They opened front door with a special key and went into the living room. You can imagine what embarrassed I was when theycame upstairs and told me we had turned the television off for me and everything was all right.短文改错（2017甘肃1诊断）The most important festival in Tibet is the Tibetan New Year, in January 1st of the Tibetan calendar. It is for say goodbye to the past year and welcoming the New Year. From mid-December, people start to prepare or do festival shopping. A lot of activity are held in the streets of the Lhasa during the New Year Festival. There is an interested competition on this day. A young man from each family tried to get the first bucket of water from the river. It is believed be gold water. According to the Tibetan tradition, they will bring good luck, happiness and wealth to those which get it.短文改错（2016全国1卷）My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I love. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.短文改错（2016全国2卷）The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.短文改错（2016全国3卷）The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.短文改错（2016浙江卷）When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,we’d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and mymother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.短文改错（2016四川卷）It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.短文改错（2016甘肃1诊）Traditional Chinese culture is facing extinction because of the developing society. As a result of, China is spare no effort to protect it. The protection of national culture is not only of great significant to Chinese cultural diversity but also to the harmonious development between local economy and society. Which is reported, special attention has paid by the Cuangdong government in order to protect Chaoju（潮剧）．In my opinion, some measures should be taken to protect traditional culture efficient. To start with, we should make a law to protect traditional culture. Otherwise, we should draw more people's attention to them. The more they know about the importance of culture protection, the strong support we can get from the public. In the word, it is high time that we should treasure our own valuable culture.短文改错（2015全国1卷）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it .短文改错（2015全国2卷）One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying andtelling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,” How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.短文改错（2015陕西卷）My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up. At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to ret ire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.” My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!短文改错（2015浙江卷）My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.短文改错（2015四川卷）Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him? Please help with me and give me some advice.Grave短文改错（2015兰州1诊）Recently our local government has decided to broaden a narrow road and there is a temple of over 100 years old along a road. Whet her the temple should pulleddown have caused a heated discussion. Some agree that we should pull it down to carrying out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problem and make our life convenient. Beside, it helps improve the image of our city. But the people who are for the idea believe that we can have another one solution. How should we pull it down? The temple has a long history and tells us something of our city. We can move it away and keep it as long as we like. So far there had been no conclusion over the matter.短文改错（2014全国1卷）Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!短文改错（2014全国2卷）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.短文改错（2014四川卷）Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.短文改错（2014辽宁卷）Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo. We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The earlymorning barking have been disturbing us as we arc often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us. considering how closely the houses ar e. We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.短文改错（2014陕西卷）My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky---- they were looked like rain ! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.短文改错（2014浙江卷）I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success. No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.短文改错（2013全国2卷）The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.短文改错（2013陕西卷）My grandfather and I enjoy fishing. One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught . Within the next few minute, mygrandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.短文改错（2013新标准1卷）I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.短文改错（2013四川卷）Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat.I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?短文改错（2013浙江卷）Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to fin d other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend. Yours, Rosemary短文改错（2013辽宁卷）Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. Iunderstood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.短文改错（2013甘肃1诊）Last summer, my family made a trip to Qingdao, where is famous for its beautiful scenery. After a three-days sightseeing, we took a taxi to airport. But to our surprised, my mother couldn' t find her handbag when we arrived at there. Suddenly she realized that she has left her handbag in a drawer of the hotel room. My dad made a phone call to the hotel to see how they could do for us. Luckily, when knowing what was happened to us, the manager arranged his assistant to bring the handbag to the airport immediately．To our relief, he made it just after we boarded the plane. This special experience made our trip was unforgettable for it proves that kindness still exists in today' s world．短文改错（2012全国1卷）I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last My attitude changed from then on.短文改错（2012新标准）I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That’s it. No more toys to you." My punishme nt lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.短文改错（2012辽宁卷）Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind tor you to let us bring Anne's friend. Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park Gina nearly got knocked over as A car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.短文改错（2012浙江卷）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.短文改错（2012陕西卷）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.短文改错（2011新标准）My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.短文改错（2011辽宁卷）In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady, around three per weeks. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television, there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler, who (is) directly responsible for the study all such reports, decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article, which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation, there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings, because the rate remained above the previous level.短文改错（2011浙江卷）I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I gues sed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong.。

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此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

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1This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 77. ___________ Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world 78. ___________ but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just 79. ___________ couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was 80. ___________ about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 81. ___________ the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘ It 82. ___________ isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize 83. ___________ and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You 84. ___________ know, that was a dinner we had waited fo r several month.” 85. ___________2Friendship is importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all 76.our lives we can’t live without friendship just like we can’t77.live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on 78.well with one another to go ahead under different kind of 79.difficulties in front of us. But real friendship is easy to 80.come by, True friendship must be sincerely and be based 81.on understand each other but not on benefits of each 82.other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. 83.By his advice we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore 84.more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves. 85.3Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over 91. _______the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since 92. _______long ago , many adults and children called their friends together 93. _______to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people 94. _______ like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words, 95. _______they help to keep people strongly and feeling good . When people are 96. _______ playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 97. _______for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy. 98. _______Many people enjoy sports by watch others play. In American 99. _______big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 100 _______4Last week life didn’t look very well for heart transplant patient.76.Barry Brooks from London. He was told six month ago that he would 77.need the operation if he is to survive. He immediately planned to make 78.the across Atlantic journey to the hospital in Chicago to have the 79. operation on. While he was in transit（中转）at JFK airport in New York,80.he received the news that his new heart had accidentally transported 81.to other hospital. Barry then had to get on a different plane to 82. convey him to the other hospital, there the operation was carried. 83.out in time. Barry is now gradually recovering from the transplant. 84.but he told us,“I feel like being a new man-this new heart has”85. changed my life.”5Have you ever asked you why children 76.go to school You’ll probably say that they 77.go to learn their native languages and other 78.languages, physics, geography, history or all 79.the other subject. That’s quite true, but 80.why they learn these things And are these 81.things all what they learn at school 82.There is much in school education than 83.just learning knowledge. We go school, above 84.all, to learn how to learn, so th at when we’ll 85.finish school, we can continue to learn.6The Chinese diet is the healthy in the world. 61.It contains lots of fruit and green vegetables. 62.It's high at fibre and low in sugar and fat. 63.But the western diet contains too many 64.fat and sugar in form of creams, cakes and so on. 65.Because this, westerners very easily 66.put to weight. As a result, scores of people 67.die from heart illness, some suffer from 68.bad teeth. So the doctor suggests us not 69.to do that. We'd better to eat our healthy food. 70.7Dear classmates ,Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English. 1.I often read English aloud and try learn something 2.important by hearts , which helps me remember it easily and 3.form the good habit of thinking in English 4.I listen to a lot and talk with others in English . 5.In this way , I was improved both my hearing 6.and my spoken English.I keep a diary in English every day but my 7.spoken English is becoming better and better. 8.I also try my best to master the necessary grammarknowledge. By this means , I can express itself 9.in English correct . That’s the way I have been learning10.English . I hope it will be useful to you .That’s all . Thank you.8Dear Mr. Smith,I am writing to tell you a piece of excited news:I won first place in the Spoken English Competition ofour city . The achievement that I made it is due to yourkind help. You spent so much time help me with my spokenEnglish that I made rapid progress, I remember you advice" Speak slowly and clearly. " Thank you very much all your timeand advice . I heard that you and your wife will visitour school before long. I'm very glad and look forward tosee you. I sent you a telescope as a small gift.Please check the mail and I hope you will like them.YoursLi Ming9Nowadays more and more people, specially schoolboys and schoolgirls, are 76_____ give to video games. Many of them spend all of their spare time 77_____to the games, and some even stay at the game machines all day 78_____ long. The reason is that they can enrich their lives as well as 79_____ knowledge by playing video games. But it’s a good way of relaxing 80_____ after a day’s work and study , as video games can bring a fun to 81_____ people’s life. However, on the other hand , play video games too 82_____ much can waste time and money, and has an ill effect on 83_____ people’s eyesight and healthy .So, video games, like coins, have two sides. 84_____ The key point is that we should make of the games properly. 85_____10Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly and often 76.broke down. So he decided to make a best car himself, 77.and in 1904 he produced his first new model. Charles Rolls, 78.a car maker, was very interested in Royce' s car, but soon 79.Rolls and Royce go into business together. One of their first 80.model was the Silver Ghost. In 1907, a Silver Ghost broke the 81.world’s record by drive 14,371 miles without breaking down 82.once. After the drive, it was cost just over ￡2 to put the car 83.back into perfect condition. This is not surprising that the Silver 84.Ghost was regarded “the best car in the world”. 85.11Most families in China hoped their single children will 61. ______have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 62. ______So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 63. ______ homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 64. ______ The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 65. ______ wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 66. ______ attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 67. ______ already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 68. ______ Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents Now our 69. ______ government is carry out a plan to solve the education problems. 70. ______12One day, on her way school, Li Lan found a small bagnear a bus station. She opened it and found a lot of moneyas soon as a calling card inside. From the calling card, sheinvented the owner’s address and his telephone number.She thought the owner must very worried. So she wentto the public telephones and called the owner. Then shewaited for the bus station. The owner came by taxi verysoon, and Li Lan gave the bag to him. The owner is so gratefulto her that he took out from 100 yuan to reward Li Lan,But Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school.13Fishing is my favorite sport. I often fished forhour without catching anything, but this doesn’t worry 77. ________________ me. Some fishermen are unlucky. Instead catching fish, 78. ________________ they catch old boots and rubbish. I’m even less luck. Inever catch everything—even old boots after having 80. ________________ spent a whole morning on the river. So I always go home 81. ________________ with empty bag. “You should give up fishing,” my friends 82. ________________ say, “It’s a waste time.” But they don’t realize one 83. ________________ important thing. I’m not real interested in fishing. I’m 84. ________________ only interested in sitting in a boat and do nothing at all. 85. ________________14Life is made up from success and failure. No 76. ______one is always success and also no one is always afailure. So it doesn’t make much differentwhether you are successful or not. The mostimportant thing is simply that you do before your successor failure. If you lost heart when you failor show proud when you succeed, you willnever succeed. Instead, you should face to itbravely and keep up with your courage when yousuccess, and then your failure can be changed into15I went to the Summer Palace last week. At the gateI happened to meet some American tourists. I greeted tothem in English and then we began to chat. I got knowthat they were college students travel in China. Most ofthem were found of Chinese medicine. They are busy takingpictures and were much impressed with the changes thathad been taken place in the past few years as well. Afterthat, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write toeach other in future. They thanked us again and again. Iwas very glad to have a chance to practicing my oral English.16Tom and Dick are next door neighbor who both 76. ____work in same office. They often walk together to and 77. ____from work. Once they were walking to home together 78. ____while it suddenly started to rain. Tom quickly opened 79. ____his umbrella and said proud, “My wife r eally was great 80. ____ foresight. She said this morning it would rain and tell 81. ____me to carry my umbrella.” Dick smiled and walked 82. ____up to him under the protection of the umbrella, said, 83. ____“Mine has even great foresight. She didn’t l et me 84. ____carry one as she knew you’d share yours with you.”85. ____17Before he was a teacher , Bob told me what he 76 ___________ would like to be a lawyer when he was at school . 77 ___________ He worked very hard in his lessons and tried to 78___________ enter into a famous university , but something unhappy 79 ___________ happened in his family , which make necessary for him 80___________to make for a living . As a young man , he had been a 81___________ bus driver ,a dustman and a salesman .But he spends his 82 ___________ spare time studying and finally becoming a college 83___________ teacher . “Young people,” he often said ,“full of wishes 84 ___________ and dreams before they step into the society” 85 ___________18As is known , that is interesting to teach children to 76__________ swim while they are still babies . Most the large towns in 77 __________ Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for 78__________ babies . The idea has quickly spread to Europe from where, 79__________in several countries , special courses are now offered to 80 __________he children who are from 7 to 24 month old . 81 __________The first step is to have child get rid of fear of 82 __________water . Next , he is teaching to float in water . Once he 83__________can do that naturally and can swim with fear , the child can 84__________master the technique and push him forward through the water. 85__________19(2005广东卷)I’ve really got to do something to lose weight becauseI’m getting much too fat．I wasn’t worried about it until l goto see the doctor．He told me that I’d probably had a heart 77. ______ attack while l started eating less．When you’re on a diet you 78. ______ have to stop eat too much even though you are always hungry．79. ______ They may be very hard to do and you certainly need a lot 80. ______ of will-power to succeed．So I will stay on a health farm for a 81. ______ month 1 won’t be able to eat much and so I’ll have to stick 82. ______ to my diet．I’ll also do plenty of exercise，which won’t give 83. ______ me any harm too．Both the diet and the exercise will 84. ______ help me to lose weight and feel more better．85. ______20There are advantage for students to work while 76. __________studying at school. One of them was that 77. __________they can earn money. For the most part, 78. __________students working to earn money for their own 79. __________use. Earning their own money allow them 80. __________to spend on anything as if they please. 81. __________They would have to ask their parents for 82. __________money or for permission to do things by 83. __________the money. Some students may also to save 84. __________up for our college or future use. 85. __________21My sister found a bird on the roadside. We named himJack and keep him for about three years. He would greet usin a tree outside our bedroom, calling "Hello" as we lay inbed in a morning. He also passed "Hello" to the cats whenthey came into the room. We often played a trick on himself.We'd throw a coin as far as possibly. Jack would fly awayand bring it back for us throw again. He would also catchthe food throwing to him from the other side of the room andsing happily. But for the most wonderful thing about Jackwere his musical ability. Leaving him at home all day, wewould return at night to hear that he'd picked up from theradio in the day.22My car just wouldn’t move any further .It was complete 76．________dead,and I was a few miles far away from anywhere on a cold, 77．_______wet night .I decided walk around a little before accepting I’d 78．_______have to spend the night in the car .Maybe I can find a 79．________ telephone .Actually ,I didn’t have to walk far before I80．________found a small house standing on a field with a light 81．________shone from the sitting room .I knocked at the door and 82．________was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the 83．________door but listened to my story carefully .He said he had 84．________no telephone, and it wasn’t’ one within walking distance,85．________but offered to come and look at my car.23(2004广西卷)You can find all kinds information in just 76. __________a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a 77. __________ huge library without have to walk around to find 78. __________ your books. Recently even though, many people 79. __________ have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. 80. __________ They have been reports in America about people 81. __________ trying to steal person information for bad purposes. 82. __________ Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all 83. __________ information are good to society. For example, you 84. __________ can find such information like how to kill people. 85. __________ The problem will become more serious in the future.24I often dream of a teacher , I dream of standing on the 76．platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys 77．and girls . I teach them , play with them , but watch them 78．growing up . I am always young when I was staying 79．with them . I know there is not easy to be a teacher . You 80．have to learn in order to teach . Without enough knowledge, 81．you can never learn well .What is more , you have to 82．be friends with your pupils and take good care of him . 83．Only in this way can you be a good teacher and win 84．respect from them . Though I am a student now , I willwork as very hard to make my dream come true . 85．25When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handingin the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had not studied 76. _____________at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. 77. _____________ I went through the test for many times but I could only answer 78. _____________ three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail 79. _____________the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it 80. _____________ and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't 81. _____________ looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand 82. _____________on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't 83. _____________ know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not push forcheating but instead gave me a second chance. 85. _____________26Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 76. _____describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 77. _____it seems always difficult for roe to do things well as 78. _____them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as 79. _____a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 80. _____Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they 81. _____don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 82. _____very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 83. _____once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t 84. _____seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do 85. _____Yours,27On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself 76. ________do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a trip 77. ________to London, and visit the British Museum and some 78. ________parks. But I have spent lost my money, so I cannot 79. ________even go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. 80. ________Yes, a concert can be very excited. You can watch your 81. ________stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a 82. ________concert cost so much. I may just listen to music, I have 83. ________some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen 84. ________to my own records, there are no need to spend money. 85. ________All right. That' s what I' m going to do.28I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76.in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home 77.at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78.had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79.we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life . 80.At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool 81.or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat 82.each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any 83. difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84.It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories 85.are as sweet as ever before .29Though great progress has been made in science these years, thereare still many people living in poor conditions. They make their livesby collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to schoolbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there.Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty nowThe answer lies on the population explosion. A presidentof a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame forthe poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.”Although this few words sound simple enough, they haveclear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.1This is a story told by my father: “When I was∧boy, a ______the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 77. ___ when ___ Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world 78. ___ cook ___but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just 79. ___ and _____couldn’t wait f or the Spring Festival dinner. As I was 80. __√______about∧take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 81. ___ to _the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘ It 82. __ Shaking _isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize 83. __ apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You 84. ___ myself ___know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.” 85. ___ months __276. important; 前加of 77. like--as 78. get 79. kinds 80. easy前加not81. sincere 82. understanding 83. 正确84. persueded 85. more前加the376. and －but 77. woman－women 78. called前加had 79. play- playing80．正确81. feel-feeling 82. how-why 83. make-makes84.去掉the 85. sell-buy476. well-good/fine/nice/ok —was—a 去掉∧been—another —where 84.正确—and576. 第二个you改为yourself。

高考短文改错题型训练（17篇）含答案2012年：（4套）课程标准卷，陕西卷，辽宁卷，浙江卷2011年：（4套）课程标准卷，陕西卷，辽宁卷，浙江卷2010年：（4套）课程标准卷，陕西卷，辽宁卷，浙江卷2009年：（3套）辽宁卷，浙江卷，宁夏、海南卷2008年：（1套）宁夏、海南卷2007年：（1套）宁夏、海南卷2012年课程标准卷I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “That’s it. No more toys to you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.2012年陕西卷My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.2012年辽宁卷Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind f or you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona2012年浙江卷Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.2011年课程标准卷My summer travel started terribly. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag form the floor and then I realized thatsomeone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.2011年陕西卷Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favorite actor．I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get．Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere．I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building．He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck——not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!2011年辽宁卷In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady, around three per weeks. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television, there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler, who directly responsible for the study of all such reports, decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article, which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation, there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings, because the rate remained above the previous level.2011年浙江卷I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousinagain; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.2010年课程标准卷My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US, which was very interested. One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help. As the old man looked over the things on the yard that were to be sold, he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees. On the box was a card say: “25 cents each.” “You will never sell these for that much.” he told Nick.Convinced, Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece. Without a moment’s delay, my neighbor picked up the box but annou nced: “I’ll take them.”2010年陕西卷My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny!2010年辽宁卷Christine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. She didn’t talk many. Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater, although in the summer. She was, in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I didn’t reallywant to closest to her. It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did.2010年浙江卷After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They are silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. “Excuse me,” she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. “You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug(拥抱) you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, “That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didn’t think she looked like Grandma.”“Neither did me.”said Mother cheerfully.2009年辽宁卷When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.2009年浙江卷One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a trunk came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down theroad. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.2009年宁夏、海南卷Dear Mrs. Winthrop,So my first week at college is ov er! No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going.I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.Well, I had better to stop now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for I’ve got some preparation to make, Keep in touch.Best,Carol2008年宁夏、海南卷Dear Ms Smith,I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city. This will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 paining will be on show, but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students, we’d like to invite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day. Looking forward to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Ming2007年宁夏、海南卷I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Me ng’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other.参考答案2012年课程标准卷76. little→less 77. toy→toys78. did ∧wrong→go/went 79. it→them80. while ∧parents→my 81. which→what82. tear→tore 83. to→for84. must→could/might 85. make my toys→去掉my2012年陕西卷76. visit→visited 77. but→so/and78. to去掉79. comfortably→comfortable80. were→was 81. for→with82. taking→taken 83. dish→dishes784. such ∧great→a 85. me→mine2012年辽宁卷1．第1句have→had 2. 第2句for→of3. 第3句Unfortunate→Unfortunately4. 第4句for→as5. 第4句mile→miles6. 第5句unless→until7. 第6句here→there8. 第6句car前加a9. 第7句they→we 10. 第7句去掉to2012年浙江卷66. before→ago 67. for去掉68. Unfortunate→Unfortunately 69. week→weeks70. so→but 71. will→would72. myself→me 73. father→far74. interested→interesting 75. knew ∧truth→the2011年课程标准卷76. buy→buying 77. here→there78. for ∧long→a 79. but→and80. on→in 81. was→were82. luggages→luggage 83. friend→friend’s 84. feel→felt 85. lent to me→去掉to2011年陕西卷76. make→making 77. actor→actors78. but→so/and 79. get后加it80. have→had 81. everywhere→anywhere82. disappointing→disappointed 83. out后加of84. in the front→去掉the 85. had→have2011年辽宁卷76. were→was 77. weeks→week78. to→from 79. the→an80. who ∧directly→was/is 81. making→make82. They→he 83. explained for quite→去掉for 84. Follow→Following 85. because→although/though/but/yet2011年浙江卷66. cousin→cousin’s67. rich→richer68. on→in 69. put→put it/that70. enjoy to→enjoy 71. Faced→face72. Late→Later 73. slow→slowly74. knows→knew 75. ever→never2010年课程标准卷76. me ∧story→a 77. interested→interesting78. come→came 79. on→in或yard→ground80. ball→balls 81. say→saying82. Nick has bought→去掉has 83. up→down84. my→his 85.but→and2010年陕西卷76. are→were 77. actor→actors78. picked ∧up→加it 79. a→the80. his→her 81. hardly→hard82. wanted ∧get→加to 83. that→which84. embarrassing→embarrassed 85. for→but/yet/while/and2010年辽宁卷76. except for→去掉for 77. many→much78. worn→wore 79. although→even80. attractively→attractive 81. seemed ∧care→加to 82. classmate→classmates 83. closest→close84. their→our 85. begin→began2010年浙江卷66. notice→noticed 67. occupy→occupied68. young之前加上a 69.clearly→clear70. on→by/at 71．Put→putting72. many→much 73. 去掉to74. So→But 75．me改为I2009年辽宁卷76. friend→friends 77. it→one78. that→which 79. the money前加for80. He→I 81. after the school→去掉the 82. if→when 83. after→later1084. gives→gave 85. 去掉happy前的much2009年浙江卷66. friend→friends 67. besides→beside68. a→an 69. 去掉believe后的in70. is→was 71. grateful→gratefully72. and→but 73. everyone→someone/somebody 74. possible后面用to 75. expect→expecting2009年宁夏、海南卷76. what→how 77. anything→everything78. find→found 79. second前面加the80. friend→friends 81. on→with82. warmly→warm 83. better to stop→去掉to84. mine→my 85. for→so2008年宁夏、海南卷76. were→are 77. in city→in the city78. This→It 79. painting→paintings80. but→and 81.popularly→popular82. invite for you→invite you 83. when you could→if you could 84. join them→join us 85. hear→hearing2007年宁夏、海南卷76. friend→friend’s 77. in my place→to my place 78. listen→listened 79. invite I→invite me80. week→weeks 81. beautiful→beautifully82. but→and 83. came see me→came to see me 84. has changed→changed 85. haven’t see→haven’t seen。

第一期专题08 短文改错15篇1．（2023春·河南南阳·高三南阳中学校考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

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注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir,Choose a career is a very important stage in people’s life. Almost everything depend on your choice. I’d like to be a interpreter. It’s a very interesting profession where requires advancing knowledge of the foreign language as well as excellent social skills. In my opinion, English and literature is the most important subjects for my future profession, because of my knowledge of English will help me communicate with foreigners fluently and accurately. Literature will not only help me broaden my horizons, but also give me some background knowledges of different cultures. To sum, I’d like to say that the choice of our future career path is extremely important, so we must think twice after making our choice.2．（2023秋·内蒙古赤峰·高三统考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

高考复习必看短文改错专项训练15篇（附答案）1Dear Jack ，Next Saturday will my birthday.I ’m going to hold a birthday party at home onthe evening.It will start at 7：30.Some classmates a s good as some foreign friendshave been invited.The activities include singing ，dancing and sharing interestingexperiences.Surely ，we ’ll have a good time.I would feel honoring if you could come.Ilive at 656 Minzu Street.You can take Bus No.11 or No.15 and got off at the stop ofGuang Ming High School.Justly on the opposite side is my house ，what is red with awhite door.I ’m sure of you can ’t miss it.I do hope they will come.Best wish.Yours ，Li Hua2(2017·昆明市高三复习教学质量检测)I ’m one of the students in our class who has ever been to st summer Iwas lucky enough to be sent there to study.As soon as I arrived on England by plane.Iwas picked up by the Smiths ，which I would live with for the next two weeks.We feltlike a fish out of water when I got there.The Smiths did what they could make me feelat home.I study at an international school ，where I met friend from all over the world.Iseized the opportunity to practise my speak English.Soon I made such a rapidprogress that I received highly praise from all the people around.答案I ’m one of the students in our class who has haveever been to st summer I was lucky enough to be sent there to study.As soon as I arrived on inEngland by plane.I was picked up by the Smiths ，which whom I would live with for the next twoweeks.We Ifelt like a fish out of water when I got there.The Smiths did what they could make me feel at home.I study studied at an international school ，where I metfriend friends from all over the world.I seized the opportunity to practise my speak spokenEnglish.Soon I made such a rapid progress that I received highly highpraise from all the people around.3When news came that I was not chosen as the member of the volleyball team ，Iwas such frustrated that I almost decided to give up.However ，my best friend Mirandaanalyzed my problems ，pointed out that my laziness and poor preparation led myfailure.From then on ，I devoted all my spare time to practice playing and consultinghis teachers about skills every day.When another chance came up ，I had got fullyprepared.As a result of ，I was selected and became one of the most important player inour school team.From this story ，I am definite convinced that the better prepared weare ，the much likely we are able to achieve our goals.4(2017·太原市高三模拟)Last week ，a football match was hold between Class One and us.The player fromboth sides are all excellent football players ，so the match went on fierce at first.At lastour team lost the match ，so we didn ’t lose a heart.Since we all tried our best ，we hadno regretful.In our life we may meet much failures ，but so long as we try your best ，there ’s no need to feel regretful for these failures.We should analyze the reasons forthe failures avoid the same mistakes in the next competition.In a word ，success i simportant ，and such is failure ，because it’s the mother of success.5(2017·东北三省四市教研联合体高考模拟) Of all the teachers in my primary school ，the one which impressed me most wasMrs.Huang.She was my 5th grade teacher.She was able to making learning fun and Iliked her classes very much.Besides，she made me leader of many group project，which gave me confidence.That was with her help that I soon became top student inour class.Looked back on it，I’m very proud for having such an excellent teacher.The reason why I did so good was that she made me to feel confident.I am really gratefulto her and I hoped one day I will become a teacher like her.6Some of my classmates hate them when they have to get up early in the morning.However，I’m one of those early birds.Get up ear ly，in my opinion，is of greatly importance to our health，our study and our life.Every day I do morning exercise keep fit.After morning exercise，I spend some time reading aloud in the opensmates are inair，which help me memorize that I’ve learned in class.Some of my clasthe habits of skipping breakfast.By getting up early，I had enough time for breakfast before going to school.In the word，I benefit a lot of from getting up early.7My parents run teahouse near the square of our ancient st Sunday I was helping out here when two foreign visitors came in.By talked to them with simple English，I learned they were from Canada.Because they had a deep interest in Chinese culture，so they came to Beijing to study Chinese last year.They come to our ancient town to travel.Attracted by the beauty of our town，they decided to stay for other three days.In fact，they even told me they’d like to introduce our beautifully town to friend around them.They both praised me for my spoken English，that gave me a lot of confidence.8(2017·郑州市高中毕业班第二次质量检测)It was on a hot afternoon that I serve as a volunteer collecting money for a badly injured farmer by sell newspapers.With a pile of newspapers in his hands，I walkedalong the street to find none who would like to buy one copy.I tried，wearing a big smile，explain my purpose to the passer－by.Many of them were generous and kind enough to give me too more money than the newspaper cost.Eventually，an injured person received a timely operation with the money I collected and recoveredcomplete.Help is of very significance to every receiver.9(2017·石家庄高中毕业班第一次模拟)Jane and Jack are high school students.Both of them work hard but they have different learning method.Jane listens to her teachers attentively and make notes carefully，trying to catch everything the teachers saying in class.She often asks her teachers questions if she felt puzzled，so she spends little time on her homework than others.It’s certain that she can go to bed earlier，so she always keeps energetically inthe day.However，Jack likes to stay up late at night doing his homework，so he oftenfalls sleepy in class.As consequence of this，he misses lots of key points and it usually takes up him more time to finish his homework.It is difficult of him to manage his study.10(2017·绵阳市高中第二次诊断性考试)A funny thing happened my sister Tina last month.In Japan，people usually don’t wear his outdoor shoes in the house or at school，and a lot of buildings had places fora shoe box.Tina teaches shoes.Her school has a special place for shoes，either.It’sEnglish in the evening.One Friday，she went to school and put her shoes in the shoe，her shoes weren’t boxes as usual.After class she got ready to leave.But to the surprise！Shein the box.There were only one pair of shoes there，and they weren’t her shoeshad to leave with a hurry，so she put on the shoes and left off.On Monday，in her next，English class，her shoes were in a shopping bag on her desk.There was a note saying！”“I’m so sorry.I take your shoes by mistake11When I was a little child，my parents took me to Dalian，an attractively city by sea.The moment I saw the sea，I fell in love with them.We walked slowly along the shore，having a lot of funs.Everything there had left too deep an impression on methat I was eager to see the city again.For the beginning of this month，together withmy parents I went to Dalian for a trip.Great changes have been taken place in the pastyears.I met some foreigners there and talked with them.Only then had I realize the importance of learn English.After staying there for ten days，we returned home，tiredor happy.12Chen Yang，one of my best friend，is a top student.Not only she fond of singing and dancing，but also she has a gift on languages.In a word，I can’t speak too high of her.Before giving a performance in the school hall yesterday，he went to the hospital with me to see my mother.It was the first time my mother has seen Chen Yang.My mother，who was ill in the bed，didn’t seem to like Chen Yang.She kept silent all the time，that made us feel embarrassed.When asking later，my mother said，“Don’t you see the nose ring she had？”“She wore it because she would give a performance，”I answered.13Many students fail to perform well in an exam not because of they lack ability，but because o f the unique pressure in the exam room—the tense atmosphere，the ticking clock on the wall，the teacher walk around，and the thought that their future will be decided by the exam.not just students which will face pressure.Human beings are competitive It’sanimal and we tend to evaluate each other，whether in exams or in job interviews，soall of us occasional get nervous.Remove pressure from life is a impossible dream.Therefore，there are some ways that can help reduce our pressure.It turn out that we are more likely overcome the pressure when we are familiar with the situation we are about to face.14Dear classmates，I think it was very necessary for us to talk about friendship at the meeting today.As a member of society，we need friend and friendship.Healthy friendship may help people get on well and benefit one another.On contrary，unhealthy friendshipmay bring up bad things.For example ，some so －called friends often smoke ordrinking together.They never point out of each other ’s mistakes.So deeds are against school rules.In fact ，they are doing harms to their friends.In mine opinion ，friendsshould help each other.Additional ，we should encourage each other so that we maylearn well and achieve great success.15Books bring us knowledges which makes our lives meaningful.As a book lover ，I loved the feel of books and its smell.Believe it or not ，my dream is to open abookshop for my own.In my bookshop ，there will have all kinds of books waited to bepicked out.Readers can sit down and read their favorite books.Even if they don’the books ，they can enjoy the wonderfully moment in my shop.So far ，I ’ve made listof names for my dream bookshop.When I have enough money or find a perfect place ，I will start my bookshop.I ’m sure the dream will come out true.高考复习必看短文改错专项训练15篇答案1Dear Jack ，Next Saturday will my birthday.I ’m going to hold a birthday party at homeonin the evening.It will start at 7：30.Some classmates as goodwell as some foreign friendshave been invited.The activities include singing ，dancing and sharing interestingexperiences.Surely ，we ’ll have a good time.I would feel honoringhonored if you couldcome.I live at 656 Minzu Street.You can take Bus No.11 or No.15 and gotget off at thestop of Guang Ming High School.JustlyJust on the opposite side is my house ，whatwhich isred with a white door.I ’m sure you can ’t miss it.I do hope theyyou will come.Best wish wishes. Yours ，Li Hua2I ’m one of the students in our class who has have ever been to stsummer I was lucky enough to be sent there to study.As soon as I arrived on inEngland by plane.I was picked up by the Smiths ，which whomI would live with for the next two weeks.We I felt like a fish out of water when I got there.The Smiths did what theycould make me feel at home.I study studiedat an international school ，where I met friend friends from all over the world.I seized the opportunity to practise my speak spokenEnglish.Soon I made such a rapid progress that I received highly high praise from all thepeople around.3When news came that I was not chosen as the amember of the volleyball team ，I was such so frustrated that I almost decided to give up.However ，my best friendMiranda analyzed my problems ，pointed pointingout that my laziness and poor preparation led my failure.From then on ，I devoted all my spare time to practice practicingplaying and consulting his my teachers about skills every day.When another chance came up ，Ihad got fully prepared.As a result ，I was selected and became one of the mostimportant player players in our school team.From this story ，I am definite definitelyconvinced that the better prepared we are ，the much more likely we are able to achieve our goals.4Last week ，a football match was hold held between Class One and us.The player playersfrom both sides are all excellent football players ，so the match went on fierce fiercelyat first.At last our team lost the match ，so but we didn ’t lose heart.Since we all triedour best ，we had no regretful regret .In our life we may meet much manyfailures ，but so long as we try your our best ，there ’s no need to feel regretful for these failures.We shouldanalyze the reasons for the failures avoid the same mistakes in the nextcompetition.In a word ，success is important ，and such sois failure ，because i t ’s the mother of success.5Of all the teachers in my primary school ，the one which that 或whoimpressed me most was Mrs.Huang.She was my 5th grade teacher.She was able to making makelearning fun and I liked her classes very much.Besides ，she made me leader of many group project projects ，which gave me confidence.That Itwas with her help that I soon became top student in our class.Looked Looking back on it ，I ’m very proud for ofhaving such an excellent teacher.The r eason why I did so good well was that she made me feelconfident.I am really grateful to her and I hoped hopeone day I will become a teacher like her.6Some of my classmates hate them it when they have to get up early in themorning.However ，I ’m one of those early birds.Get Gettingup early ，in my opinion ，is of greatly greatimportance to our health ，our study and our life.Every day I do morning exercise keep fit.After morning exercise ，I spend some time reading aloud in theopen air ，which help helps me memorize that whatI ’ve learned in class.Some of my classmates are in the habits habit of skipping breakfast.By getting up early ，I had haveenough time for breakfast before going to school.In the aword ，I benefit a lot from getting up early.7My parents run teahouse near the square of our ancient st Sunday Iwas helping out here there when two foreign visitors came in.By talked talking to them with insimple English ，I learned they were from Canada.Because they had a deep interest in Chinese culture ，they came to Beijing to study Chinese last year.They come came to our ancient town to travel.Attracted by the beauty of our town ，they decided to stayfor other anotherthree days.In fact ，they even told me they ’d like to introduce our beautifully beautiful town to friend friendsaround them.They both praised me for my spoken English ，that whichgave me a lot of confidence. 8It was on a hot afternoon that I serve servedas a volunteer collecting money for a badly injured farmer by sell selling newspapers.With a pile of newspapers in his my hands，I walked along the street to find none someonewho would like to buy one copy.I tried ，wearing a big smile ，explain my purpose to the passer －by passers －by.Manyof them were generous and kind enough to give me more moneythan the newspaper cost.Eventually ，an the injured person received a timely operationwith the money I collected and recovered complete completely .Help is of very greatsignificance to every receiver.9Jane and Jack are high school students.Both of them work hard but they havedifferent learning method methods .Jane listens to her teachers attentively and make makesnotes carefully ，trying to catch everything the teachers saying say in class.She often asks herteachers questions if she felt feels puzzled ，so she spends little lesstime on her homework than others.It ’s certain that she can go to bed earlier ，so she always keeps energetically energeticin the day.However ，Jack likes to stay up late at night doing his homework ，so he often falls sleepy asleepin class.As consequence of this ，he misses lots of key points and it usually takeshim more time to finish his homework.Itis difficult of forhim to manage his study. 10 A funny thing happened0020 my sister Tina last month.In Japan ，peopleusually don ’t wear his theiroutdoor shoes in the house or at school ，and a lot of buildings had have places for shoes.Her school has a special place for shoes ，either too.It ’s a shoe box.Tina teaches English in the evening.One Friday ，she went to school and puther shoes in the shoe boxes box as usual.After class she got ready to leave.But to the hersurprise ，her s hoes weren ’t in the box.There were wasonly one pair of shoes there ，and they weren ’t her shoes ！She had to leave with ina hurry ，so she put on the shoes and left .On Monday ，in her next English class ，her shoes were in a shopping bag onher desk.There was a note saying ，“I ’m so sorry.I take took your shoes by mistake！”When I was a little child ，my parents took me to Dalian ，an attractively attractivecity by sea.The moment I saw the sea ，I fell in love with them it.We walked slowly along the shore ，having a lot of funs fun .Everything there had left too so deep an impression onme that I was eager to see the city again.For Atthe beginning of this month ，together with my parents I went to Dalian for a trip.Great changes have taken placein the past years.I met some foreigners there and talked with them.Only then had did Irealize the importance of learn learningEnglish.After staying there for ten days ，we returned home ，tired or but happy.12Chen Yang ，one of my best friend friends ，is a top student.Not only she fond ofsinging and dancing ，but also she has a gift on forlanguages.In a word ，I can ’t speak too high highly of her.Before giving a performance in the school hall yesterday ，he shewent to the hospital with me to see my mother.It was the first time my mother has hadseen Chen Yang.My mother ，who was ill in bed ，didn ’t seem to like Chen Yang.She keptsilent all the time ，that which made us feel embarrassed.When asking askedlater ，my mother said ，“Don ’t Didn ’tyou see the nose ring she had ？”“She wore it because she wouldgive a performance ，”I answered.13Many students fail to perform well in an exam not because they lack ability ，but because of the unique pressure in the exam room —the tense atmosphere ，the ticking clock on the wall ，the teacher walk walkingaround ，and the thought that their future will be decided by the exam.It ’s not just students which who/thatwill face pressure.Human beings are competitive animal animals 或在are 后加aand we tend to evaluate each other ，whether in exams or in job interviews ，so all of us occasional occasionally get nervous.Remove Removing pressure from life is a animpossible dream.Therefore However，there are some ways that can help reduce our pressure.It turn turns out that we are more likely overcome the pressure when we are familiar with the situation we are about to face.14Dear classmates ，I think it was is 或去掉wasvery necessary for us to talk about friendship at the meeting today.As a member of society ，we need friend friendsand friendship.Healthy friendship may help people get on well and benefit one another.On contrary ，unhealthy friendship may bring up about 或去掉upbad things.For example ，some so －called friends often smoke or drinking drinktogether.They never point out each other ’s mistakes.So Such deeds are against school rules.In fact ，they are doing harms harmto their friends.In mine my opinion ，friends should help each other.Additional Additionally，we should encourage each other so that we may learn well and achieve great success.15Books bring us knowledgesknowledgewhich makes our lives meaningful.As a booklover，I lovedlovethe feel of books anditstheirsmell.Believe it or not，my dream is toopen a bookshop forofmy own.In my bookshop，there willhavebeall kinds of bookswaitedwaitingto be picked out.Readers can sit down and read their favorite books.Even ifthey don’tbuy the books，they can enjoy the wonderfullywonderful moment in my shop.Sofar，I’ve made list of names for my dream bookshop.When I have enough money orandfind a perfect place，I will start my bookshop.I’m sure the dream will come true.。

⾼考英语专题短⽂改错中⾼难度20篇（附答案）1. Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour, we passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn’t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my f riend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won’t forget his good nature or character.2. Dear Brad,I’m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don’t think love built on house and car s is true love, and I doubt how long it will last.As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future.Li Hua3. Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Some of us are having problems about our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are comfortable about it, but it is no need to feel too sadly. Our parents are checking in our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into troubles. They have probably heard of some horrible stories about other kids and thinking we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around --- they are bound to read it.Thank you!4. We spend two weeks in London last year. We went there in the autumn .We think it is the best season to visit England. The weather is usually good but there aren’t too many tourists in October. We stayed in a small hotel in the West End .It was convenient as we did most of our traveling by foot. We went to look at the places where all tourists see. We saw Buckingham Palace and the National Gallery. We went to shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money .What we liked most, though, was going to theatre. We don’t have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home .A lot of people say English food is very badly. We didn’t think so. It’s true that most of the restaurants are French or Italian or Chinese, but we had some very good meal.5. Tom is a senior two students who devotes himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses. In the evening, he studies at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work effectively. In Sunday morning, Tom was about to study when his father came up and advised him to have break. Soon they had a good idea. They bought a kite which they liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs where Tom enjoyed fly the kite himself. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Tom was energetic and actively in class. He said it was only why he had a better weekend.6.People often have troubles getting used to a new culture. They are usually curious when they first arrive a foreign country. Therefore, if they stay for a long time, they may start to feel different stages of culture shock. They can feel alone or sad because he can’t deal with the local people. How quick people get used to culture differences may be depend on the way they lea rn. That’s a problem if they can’t speak the language. On other hand, some can study the situation and make good guesses about the culture. When they finally began to understand some of the language and make some new friends, they will gradually enjoy themselves and feel satisfying.7.I’m the only daughter of my parents. So they worried about everything I do. For example, when I ride my bike, my parents won’t let me to ride by myself. They are afraid I might fall off my bike and hurt myself. They are taking great trouble to support a bike, with my mother even carried a first-aid box. I’m not free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not let me ride alone?”Now, most family have one child. Parents want to do everything for his children. This does no good on them. Too many love from parents may prevent children from independent. In my opinion, parents should let their children do that they should do alone.8.Maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad news to her friend Freddy. She was upsett ing about the news herself. In the spring, Maria’s mother had said Maria might be allowed bring a friend along on the family two-week vacation at the beach. Since then, Maria and Freddy had been doing nothing and planning all the thing they would do togeth er. By the time August had arrived, Maria’s mother had total forgotten her promise. When Maria reminded her, she said that she was sorry but that it wouldn’t be enough room for Freddy because Maria’s cousin, Theresa, would be going to the shore withthem. Now Freddy was in his way to Maria’s house.9.Get a good education is more important today than ever before .In Canada mostly children attend public schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments through tax income. Students in Canada taught in English and in French. The rests of Canadian children attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees paying by parents. By law, children must attend the school from age 5 to 16. There are several different levels in the Canadian education system. The first was called Elementary Schools, which includes kindergartens through grade 7 or 8.10. My friend Dick was seven years old, and her sister Katherine was five. One day their mother takethem to their aunt’s to play while she went to the city bu y some new clothes. They played for a hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece to your sister. But remembering to do it like a gentleman.”“How do gentlemen do it？” Dick asked. “They always give the bigger one piece to the other person,” answered his aunt. Dick thought up this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine. ”11. Attention please, everyone. I have announcement to make. You will pay a visit to the museum on October 1st. I think we will be interest in it. In the course of the visit, the guide will give us an account of the past or the development of the city. She say something about the advanced workers, included some teachers. We will see many pictures there. I’m sure of that we can learn a lot. After the visit, we’ll have a discussion in group and each of us must write a composition. We are to start out as earlier as 7:00 am. We must gather against time at the school gate. That’s all. Thanks.13.A few days ago I saw an instructive program on TV. It was about what the traffic problem in cities. It seems that a great deal of damages is done by traffic．All our cities are suffering from this. Some buildings are actual falling to pieces . It's often fast to walk than to go by car and by bus. The problem has been getting worse day by day．This is only one of the thousands problems in our cities. All sorts of terrible things were happening to our cities.The question is how we can do about it．0ur roads were never designing for such heavy traffic．It is time the government does something about these problems．14. One day I pushed my cousin Li Dong in wheelchair on an especial narrow sidewalk. We struggled along with one wheel on the sidewalk or the other on the road. Suddenly, a man riding his motorcycle past us rapidly, missing Li Dong by several inch. Immediately, he turned round, stopped his motorcycle and came over. We were worried she would blame us for have stood in his way. To our surprise, he said nothing at all and helped out push the wheelchair until we reached a slightly wider sidewalk. Then he left after we could say thanks to him. We were leaving ashamed of what we thought.15. Good morning, everyone. It’s great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and sports. I’m easy-going, get along well with my classmates.It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.16. Recently I have been quarrel ling about my mother over whether I can watch TV after the school. She holds the view that Senior Three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lesson. It seem to her that I am allowed to watch TV, I won’t be able to control me and I’ll forget all about my studies. She also thinks that it is bad to my eyes. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set m y mind at rest after a day’s hard work. Besides, it is important for me to know what had happened both at home and abroad. However, I shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.17.I still remember my middle school life in Zhengzhou. I was then in school for student from Tibet. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been three years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.18. Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by. It used to be a quiet, clean and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed after a chemical factory was built near our school one year ago. Every day the factory produces many waste water and some harmful gases. The terribly pollution is harmful to our health. What’s bad, the great noise from the factory had a bad effect on our activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it used to. Our teachers and students are miserable beyond the description.19.I’m glad to know what you have been studying Chinese in an university in Beijing for about one month. Just as you have found, Chinese differ from English greatly. The pronunciation and the spelling of the Chinese words are very complicated,and so is the sentence structures. That is because many people, especially the foreigners, have great difficulty in learning Chinese. However, practice makes perfect. If you can read and write Chinese as many as you can, you have a good command of it. In addition, you should look for more opportunities to communicate with the native people to get familiar to different accents as well as our cultures, which will help you a lot.Don’t give up. I’m sure you can learn Chinese well. I can offer you some help if it necessary.20.Three years ago I failed a important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patiently and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided make the best of it. I worked hard and get along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, and which greatly increased my confidence and got him motivated.My experience tell me that it is not what you are given but how you make use for it that determines who you are.【答案】1、1. was—were 2. 去掉over 3. stopped—stopping 4. slows—slowed 5.在pull 后加up 6. immediate—immediately 7. where —which/that 8.them—it 9. help—helping 10. but—and2、1.ask__asked 2. the__a 3. 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原文：In my childhood, I was always fascinated by the stars. I would spend hours looking at the night sky, wondering about the mysteries of the universe. My parents were very supportive of my interest, and they bought me a telescope. With it, I could see much clearer the stars and planets than before. I was thrilled to learn about the constellations and the stories behind them. As I grew older, my passion for astronomy didn't wane. In fact, it grew stronger. I started to read books and articles about the latest discoveries in space exploration. I even joined a astronomy club at my school, where we would discuss and share our knowledge about the cosmos. Now, I am planning to study astronomy at university and hope to contribute to the field one day.改正后：In my childhood, I was always fascinated by the stars. I would spend hours looking at the night sky, wondering about the mysteries of the universe. My parents were very supportive of my interest, and they bought me a telescope. With it, I could see the stars and planets much clearer than before. I was thrilled to learn about the constellations and the stories behind them. As I grew older, my passion for astronomy didn't wane. In fact, it grew stronger. I startedto read books and articles about the latest discoveries in space exploration. I even joined an astronomy club at my school, where we would discuss and share our knowledge about the cosmos. Now, I am planning to study astronomy at university and hope to contribute to the field one day.错误及改正：1. "much clearer" 应改为 "much clearer"，因为此处应使用比较级来表示“比以前更清晰”。

短文改错高考真题练习之迟辟智美创作高考短文改错 1普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(浙江卷)I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking.I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.高考短文改错 2普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady,around three perweek. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study all such reports,decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow thisexplanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,because the rate remainedabove the previous level.高考短文改错3普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(陕西卷) Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I cameacross a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I didn’t have my camerawith me at that time，but I rushed back home to get．Unfortunately，by the time I gotback，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere．I was reallydisappointing and about to leave when he walked outa building．He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my lucknot only did I had my photo taken with him，but he signed his name on my shirt!高考短文改错 4高考英语试题（新课标卷）My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes Ihad was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend，he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.高考短文改错 5浙江高考英语试题Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident andhit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I didnot tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because Iwas so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told theminterested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think thatit was the right thing to do.高考短文改错 6普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷) Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on through highway and, for a result, there was a longline of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to the service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.Much loveFiona高考短文改错7全国英语高考真题陕西卷My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath. What I liked best were the free highspeed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.高考短文改错 8普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. Fromthe time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. Iwas happy when the toys worked,but when things did wrong, I got angry andbroke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they beganto see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.高考短文改错 9普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（四川卷）Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher wa s angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?高考短文改错 10高考英语试卷真题Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find otherone.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school, or just everything elseI love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary 高考短文改错 11普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷) Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.高考短文改错 12普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（陕西）My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.高考短文改错13普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅱ卷)The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not b e served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(磁器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cupswithout handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.高考短文改错14普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅰ卷)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.高考短文改错 15高考辽宁卷Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as wc arc often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us.considering how closely the houses are. We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.高考短文改错 16陕西卷My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!高考短文改错 17新课标二卷My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lesson in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with afterschool activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds ofthe flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.高考短文改错 18新课标一卷Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!高考短文改错 19四川高考试题Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm andthere is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.高考短文改错 20全国新课标卷第II卷All of us need friendship. The understanding between two friends mean both of them have similar i deas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is impossible for him to help each other and to make their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes，“A friend in need is a friend indee d.” So really friendshipshould able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is wise to have as many good friends that we can.The more friends we have，the more we can learn forone another, but the more pleasure we can share together.高考短文改错 21高考浙江卷I was t aking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticketowner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.高考短文改错 22全国一卷When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .高考短文改错 23高考陕西英语试卷短文改错My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I waspacking them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!高考短文改错 24全国二卷One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.高考短文改错 25四川高考短文改错Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of theproblems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch andafter school. We'vebeen spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdaysnow and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.高考短文改错 26浙江卷My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the lefthand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.高考短文改错 27全国卷三The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time forme . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yoursel f. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.高考短文改错 28全国卷二The summer holiday is coming. My Classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.高考短文改错 29全国卷一My uncle 13 the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. Itis always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.高考短文改错 30In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.高考短文改错 31全国英语卷3When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically. and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a newmember of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time, car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.高考短文改错 32全国卷2Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！谜底一1.cousin –cousin’s2. rich – richer3.on in4.put put it/that5. enjoy to enjoy6.faced face7. Late Later8.slow slowly9. knows knew 10. ever never二第1个考查主谓一致，were—was;第2个考查名词单复数 weeksweek第3个考查介词从外面来，介词应该用from.第4个考查冠词 thea第5个考查非限制性定语从句注意be responsible for 暗示对什么负责.who后加 was或is第6个考查非谓语 decide to do sth. making—make第7个考查代词指代前面Wayne Tyler，因此用TheyHe.第8个考查动词explain是及物动词，不需要介词.去失落for 第9个考查非谓语做状语用followfollowing.第10个考查连词 because 暗示原因，根据上文应该是暗示转折关系的连词.becausealthough/though/but/yet三谜底：Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I cameacross a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I did n’t have my cameramaking actorswith me at that time，but I rushed back home to get．Unfortunately，by the time I gotso／and itback，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere．I was reallyhad anywheredisappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building．He was right there indisappointed ofthe front of me! I couldn’t believe my lucknot only did I had my photo taken with him，havebut he signed his name on my shirt!四谜底：My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy abu yingTicket to HangZhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go tothereXiamen for ∧long holiday.I bought my ticket butturned around to pick up my baga andfrom the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all mymoney on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I hadon. It felt veryin werestrange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived atmy fiend he lentluggage friend’sto me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change myclothes at last.Felt五 .第一节短文改错Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for acar. Unfortunate, I had an accident andago 去失落 Unfortunately hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at leasttwo week. 1 called my parents, so I didweeksbutnot tell them what had happened. I knew that they will beworried about myself because Iwould mewas so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told themfarinterested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew∧ truth. I still think thatinterestingtheit was the right thing to do.六谜底：Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bringhad ofAnne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There hadUnfortunatelybeen a terrible accident on through highway and, for a result, there was a long line ofastraffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to the service station and waited theremilesunless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as ∧caruntil/till there adrove out too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’Weand made our own way to home.去失落七八谜底：第一行：因为与more patient对应，little要改为less第二行：each of 后面要用可数名词复数toy要改为toys第三行：do sb. Wrong意思为冤枉某人，不符合句意.改为go wrong或过去时went wrong意思是“出问题”，“出毛病”符合句意.第四行：与toys对应，故it要改为复数them.Parents指代不明，所以要加上my.第五行：由句意“发生了什么事”，可知which哪个分歧毛病，应该为what.由后文said可知tear要用过去式tore.第六行：为某人买玩具应该用for而不是to.第七行：由found out that with patience可知must语气太强，应该为could或might.十谜底：Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dadlost his job and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find othermoved anotherone.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate,my school, or just everything elseclassmates andI love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share aroom with my younger sister,worseMaggie. Tomorrow is∧ first day of school. I am awfully tiring,but I know I will never fall sleep.the/my tired asleepGood night and remember, you, dear diary, is my onlysouvenir from my past life and my only friend. are6.visit前加 a7.herhis8.step—stepped9.picturepictures10.many—much十二谜底：My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles andwent ourheaded for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water.Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wantedAfter impatientto give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were abut wassudden pull at the pole and ∧fish was caught. Within the next few minute, mya minutesgrandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake andfeelingbarbecued the fish. It was delicious.十三谜底：1.of去失落 2.Have—Having 3.thatwhich 4.becomesbecome 5.day前加the 6.InterestingInterestingly7.bywith/to 8.drank—drunk 9.cup—cups 10.grow—growth十四谜底：I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was onlyhold four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.passedI remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from blackwell / clearlyshoulderstoward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town,∧he wasto / into\him andstrong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or dowhenhomework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.Ever十五Dear Jeremy and Alice，Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settlesomething that bothers to(去失落) us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult totimesunderstanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barkingunderstandhave been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tendshas Besides to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even beforean started5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.closeWe appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure ∧ ayour outgood way of settling the matter.十六短文改错【谜底与解析】want ∧teachto.want后跟非谓语动词做宾语时用动词不定式，to不能省略.【谜底与解析】comecame.本文主体时态是一般过去式，故come改为came.【谜底与解析】havehaving.前一句已有谓语动词，have做陪伴状语，逻辑主语是句子的主语，与逻辑主语是主动关系，且与谓语动词举措同事进行，故用ving形式.【谜底与解析】immediateimmediately.修饰动词jumped，应用副词immediately.【谜底与解析】onat.介词与shot构成搭配，意思是“向……瞄准”，故介词用at.【谜底与解析】NeitherNone.前文中未提到箭的数量，但根据意思可以推断出射出的不止两支，故此处不定代词应暗示“（三者以上）都不……”，用none.【谜底与解析】waswere.主语是复数arrows，动词也要用复数.【谜底与解析】were或looked去失落.主语与谓语之间不是主动关系，故去失落助动词were.【谜底与解析】butand.根据句意可知前后两句是顺延关系，无转折之一，故用and.【谜底与解析】aan.冠词后的形容词impressive第一个音素是元音，故不定冠词用an.十七My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessonTherein the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework.don’t muchTherefore , we have more time with afterschool activities. For example, we can do readingforfor one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.hoursMy dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowerslooksand trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by thesitlake listening∧ music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only ourto helpfulteachers but also our friends.十八Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes ago of（圣女果）in our back garden, since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self years haveseed where they please . As∧result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but a everywherejuicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tasty manytomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect 或yetattack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost! Wonderful十九短文改错。