英语写作常见语法错误PPT课件
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高考英语二轮复习 专题五 短文改错 第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误课件.pptx
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【真题例析 1】(2016·全国卷Ⅰ) My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. 答案：that→where 解析：考查宾语从句。此处表达的是“靠近我所住 的地方”，故需将 that 改为 where。where 在此引导宾 语从句，并在从句中作地点状语。
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【真题例析 1】(2016·全国卷Ⅰ) Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area. 答案：去掉 but 解析：考查行文逻辑错误。从属连词 though(虽然) 不能与并列连词 but 一起使用，故去掉 but。
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句法类错误设置重点考察基本句法知识，包括句子 成分的划分，句子结构分析及连词的用法，特殊句式的 基本结构及其用法等，要求考生有一定的复合句结构分 析能力和辨别能力。行文逻辑错误设置重点考察对短文 前后逻辑语义的把握能力。
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技巧 1 短文改错题涉及时态的考查点通常为： (1)一般现在时和一般过去时的混用； (2)短文中时态的使用前后不一致； (3)在特定语境条件下时态的误用(含有状语从句的 复合句，主句用将来时态，而从句中则用一般现在时态)； (4)有时也涉及对其他时态的考查。
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专题五 短文改错
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第 讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误
高考英语短文改错常见的句法错误有动词的时态、 语态错误，非谓语动词使用错误，主谓一致错误，名词 性从句、定语从句和状语从句等三大从句出现的错误以 及句子成分的赘余等。还有语气的误用，主要体现在虚 拟语气的误用、主从句语气不一致等。这些错误通常与 句子成分的分析紧密相关，所以难度较大。行文逻辑错 误主要设置连词、代词和否定词。
【真题例析 1】(2016·全国卷Ⅰ) My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. 答案：that→where 解析：考查宾语从句。此处表达的是“靠近我所住 的地方”，故需将 that 改为 where。where 在此引导宾 语从句，并在从句中作地点状语。
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【真题例析 1】(2016·全国卷Ⅰ) Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area. 答案：去掉 but 解析：考查行文逻辑错误。从属连词 though(虽然) 不能与并列连词 but 一起使用，故去掉 but。
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句法类错误设置重点考察基本句法知识，包括句子 成分的划分，句子结构分析及连词的用法，特殊句式的 基本结构及其用法等，要求考生有一定的复合句结构分 析能力和辨别能力。行文逻辑错误设置重点考察对短文 前后逻辑语义的把握能力。
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技巧 1 短文改错题涉及时态的考查点通常为： (1)一般现在时和一般过去时的混用； (2)短文中时态的使用前后不一致； (3)在特定语境条件下时态的误用(含有状语从句的 复合句，主句用将来时态，而从句中则用一般现在时态)； (4)有时也涉及对其他时态的考查。
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第 讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误
高考英语短文改错常见的句法错误有动词的时态、 语态错误，非谓语动词使用错误，主谓一致错误，名词 性从句、定语从句和状语从句等三大从句出现的错误以 及句子成分的赘余等。还有语气的误用，主要体现在虚 拟语气的误用、主从句语气不一致等。这些错误通常与 句子成分的分析紧密相关，所以难度较大。行文逻辑错 误主要设置连词、代词和否定词。
英语写作常见错误
He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.
He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting. He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.
Students should learn to analyze and solve problems independently. Don’t rely on your teachers’ help. Students should learn to analyze and solve problems independently. They should not rely on your teachers’ help. She reviewed the lesson taught last week and all the exercises assigned by the teacher were done. She reviewed the lesson taught last week and did all the exercises assigned by the teacher. He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious.
This mountain is six thousand feet high, and it is only four miles from the small airport, and the field is not a very large one, but no plane has ever crashed on it.
科技英语写作常见语法错误
Redundant presence components
Adding unnecessary information or repeating the same idea in different ways Example: "The cat, a domestic animal, is a popular pet." (redundant "a
Detailed description
In English, the singular and plural forms of the subject and predicate must be consistent, which is a basic requirement of grammar rules. If this point is ignored, it will lead to sentence structure confusion and affect the accurate transmission of information.
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Sentence structure error
Incomplete or redundant presence components
Incomplete presence components
A presence may be missing a subject, verb, or object, making it graphically incomplete Example: "The experience was conducted to study the effects of..." (missing object)
英语写作常见语法错误分析
改为：The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street.
例8．The children are supposed to spare some time to company their parents.
改为： The children are supposed to spare some time to accompany their parents.
例6．Some seniors were died because of without their children’s support.
改为：Some seniors died for lack of
their children’s support.
例7．The old man was hit by a car when he across the street.
例9．With the rapid development of economic, the conditions of our life is improving.
改为： With the rapid development of
economy, the conditions of our
life are improving.
改为： With the development of the modern society, an increasing number of families prefer to have one child or even none, which cause the rapid increase of the sum of the seniors.
例8．The children are supposed to spare some time to company their parents.
改为： The children are supposed to spare some time to accompany their parents.
例6．Some seniors were died because of without their children’s support.
改为：Some seniors died for lack of
their children’s support.
例7．The old man was hit by a car when he across the street.
例9．With the rapid development of economic, the conditions of our life is improving.
改为： With the rapid development of
economy, the conditions of our
life are improving.
改为： With the development of the modern society, an increasing number of families prefer to have one child or even none, which cause the rapid increase of the sum of the seniors.
英语写作常见错误分析
2. 不符合英语习惯导致的用词错误 （1） We all hope him to get the first prize. （2） Mr. Smith denied my invitation to a dinner party. （3）Who is responsible for this department？ （4） She will probably be elected woman chairman.
（3）细节补充独立句 句子的细节补充部分，例如举例、罗列、补充说明 等一般是既不含主语也不含谓语的一组词语的罗列， 如果以句子的形式出现肯定是错句。 It is hard to keep with monthly payments． Such as telephone， electric， and gas bill． It is hard to keep with monthly payments， such as telephone， electric， and gas bill． 与汉语这种讲究“意合”的语言不同，英语严格要 求“形合”，即每一个句子都要有自己的主、谓语， 否则就被视为错句，非完格句。
1）The young man always wears leather shoes．（put on表示穿的动作，不表示穿着的状态， 而此句表达的意思是“穿着”，而不是“穿上”。） （2）Both salt and Sugar are easy to dissolve In hot water．（melt常指物体经加热后熔化或者易溶 物质受热溶化，不指溶质在溶剂中溶解。） （3） It is difficult for the children to do such a thing。（uneasy是由前缀un+词根easy构成，在古 英语中有“不容易”的意思。但在现代英语中， uneasy已不表示easy的反义“不容易”了。而是 “心神不安”的意思 ）
科技英语写作语法错误
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Subject verb agreement
Neglecting the principle of subject verb consistency
Neglecting the principle of subject verb agreement
In scientific English writing, authors often overlook the grammatical rules of subject verb agreement, resulting in inconsistencies between the subject and
Example
The correct sentence should be "The experience was conducted..." instead of "The experience was conducted...".
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Noun singular and plural errors
predicate verbs.
Example
The correct sentence should be "The data shows that..." instead of "The data is showing that...".
Mixture of the principle of subject verb
The correct sentence should be "The results observed were..." instead of "The results observed was...".
英语写作常见错误common errors
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Ⅲ Faulty Parallelism (Faulty Coordination 错误平行结构）
– 平行结构是把两个或两个以上意思并列的成分用同等的语法形式 来表达。 – 反之则为错误平行结构。 – A student needs books, notebooks, and he needs pens. – A student needs books, notebooks and pens.
Clear
Obscure
Clear
I am going to the lecture on modern Chinese drama, because he is a dramatist I like.
I’m going to the lecture on modern Chinese drama, because the speaker is a dramatist I like. As she was greatly influenced by her history teacher, she chose it as her major. As she was greatly influenced by her history teacher, she chose history as her major.
Obscure
Clear
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ⅤDangling modifiers( 垂悬修饰语）
修饰语在句中找不到逻辑上被修饰的对象。
Faulty
Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can see.
《写作常见错误》课件
表达不准确：由于句子成分过多 或冗余，导致句子的意思不够准 确，容易产生歧义
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冗余成分：句子中存在重复或不 必要的词语，使句子显得啰嗦
影响阅读和理解：复杂的句子结 构会影响读者的阅读和理解，降 低文章的可读性
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段落组织错误
段落主题不突出
段落主题与全文 主题不一致
常见错误：使 用不恰当的词
汇或短语
原因：对词汇 含义理解不准 确或文化差异
解决方法：查 阅字典获取更 多词汇含义及
用途
举例说明：给 出具体例子， 如“他们”和 “它”的区别
词汇搭配不当
常见错误类型：名词与动词搭配不当、形容词与名词搭配不当、副词与动词搭配不 当等。 单击此处输入你的智能图形项正文，文字是您思想的提炼，请尽量言简意赅的阐述观点
案例分析：例如，在一份关于计算机科学的PPT中，如果使用了过多的专业术语和缩写，就可 能导致非专业人士难以理解。此时，可以通过添加注释或解释来帮助读者更好地理解。
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总结与建议
总结常见错误类型及原因
语法错误：包括主谓不一致、时态错误、 语态错误等
拼写错误：包括错别字、拼写错误等
标点符号错误：包括逗号、句号、分号等 使用不当
错误原因：对词汇的含义和用法理解不准确、语言习惯不当、语境理解不准确 等。 单击此处输入你的智能图形项正文，文字是您思想的提炼，请尽量言简意赅的阐述观点
纠正方法：加强词汇学习、理解词汇的含义和用法、结合语境使用词汇、注意区分 易混淆的词汇等。 示例： 示例：
“他很阳光地笑了。”（“阳光”不能修饰“笑”，应改为“开心地笑了”。） 单击此处输入你的智能图形项正文，文字是您思想的提炼，请尽量言简意赅的阐述观点
科技英语写作中的典型错误市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件
(3) “作分析”表示为“make an analysis of”， “作研
究”表示为“make a study of” ， “作比较”表示为
“make a comparison of” ；(4)能力ability之后加of加不定
式复合结构做定语，如: 能量被定义为物体做功能力，译为
Energy is defined as the ability of a body to do work，如: 电
performance of the system, can one（或we）
understand（或appreciate）its advantages.
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例6
汉语原句 本文对提升打印速度和印字质量提供了一个计
算机辅助设计手段。
英语错句 This paper provided a kind of means of
quality.
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例7
汉语原句 对构件承载能力做了详细分析。
英语错句 The detailed analysis of the ability of bearing
loads of the components is given.
【错误分析】四处错误:(1)“分析”之前应当用不定冠词
a；(2)“承载”是“carry loads”而不用 “bear loads”；
noted in implementing this method and their solution are
presented.
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例 12 汉语原句 由于缺点存在, 构件疲劳寿命将大大减 少。 英语错句 Because of the existing of the defect, the
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
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在上一段落中，划线部分属于句子结构方面的错误。
（1）两句话之间不能用逗号隔开，应加上并列连词 and。
（2）sentence fragment。这种断句只能使用在英语 口语、某些文学作品或非正式的写作中。
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• (3) First, fast. You can type 90 to 100 words in one
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5. If you try your best to get more aerobic exercise and practice it whenever and wherever possible, we can maintain good physical condition.
6. (指代不清。you 与 we 指代不一致。可改 为：If you try … wherever possible, you can maintain …)
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6. In my opinion, I think the owner is justified to do so. (in my opinion与I think重复累赘。可改为：I think the owner is … 或：In my opinion, the owner is …)
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In modern society, computers are becoming more and more popular. They are widely used for different uses. (1) Many people use them to type letters, some people still write letters with a pen. I prefer to type letter on the computer. (2) Because it is fast, correct, and clean.
以上错误如果稍加小心，尚可避免。但下文中 的错误则需要考生格外注意。
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In modern society, computers are becoming more and more popular. They are widely used for different uses. Many people use them to type letters, some people still write letters with a pen. I prefer to type letter on the computer. Because it is fast, correct, and clean.
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First, fast. You can type 90 to 100 words in one minute. The person who is good at it can even more. And nowadays, a lot of people are working hard to obtain the certificate of computer typing. Many of them get certificates, however, some do not.
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4. The above-mentioned disadvantages which are brought about by environmental pollution is very detrimental but often miss people’s attention. (句子的主语是advantages，要用复数动词。 可改为：The above-mentioned advantages which are … pollution are very detrimental …)
3. A typical family nowadays is consisted of
three to four members.
4. (语态错误。consist of 一定要使用主动语 态。可改为：A typical family nowadays
consists of three to four members. )
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常见语法错误举例：
1. Now is golden time for us to attain a fair command of English.
2. (词性使用不当。now是副词，不能作主语。 可改为：Now it is the golden time for us …)
3. 2. My roommate is so troublesome, I can hardly put with him any more.
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(标点符号错误。两个句子之间缺少连词。可改 为：My roommate is so troublesome that I can hardly …)
7. If adopted, we hope the law will resolve the problem.
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(if adopted的逻辑主语是the law，与句子的主语we不 一致，为悬垂分词。可改为：If the law is adopted, we hope … 或：If adopted, the law will resolve the problem.)
（1）两句话之间不能用逗号隔开，应加上并列连词 and。
（2）sentence fragment。这种断句只能使用在英语 口语、某些文学作品或非正式的写作中。
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• (3) First, fast. You can type 90 to 100 words in one
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5. If you try your best to get more aerobic exercise and practice it whenever and wherever possible, we can maintain good physical condition.
6. (指代不清。you 与 we 指代不一致。可改 为：If you try … wherever possible, you can maintain …)
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6. In my opinion, I think the owner is justified to do so. (in my opinion与I think重复累赘。可改为：I think the owner is … 或：In my opinion, the owner is …)
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In modern society, computers are becoming more and more popular. They are widely used for different uses. (1) Many people use them to type letters, some people still write letters with a pen. I prefer to type letter on the computer. (2) Because it is fast, correct, and clean.
以上错误如果稍加小心，尚可避免。但下文中 的错误则需要考生格外注意。
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In modern society, computers are becoming more and more popular. They are widely used for different uses. Many people use them to type letters, some people still write letters with a pen. I prefer to type letter on the computer. Because it is fast, correct, and clean.
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First, fast. You can type 90 to 100 words in one minute. The person who is good at it can even more. And nowadays, a lot of people are working hard to obtain the certificate of computer typing. Many of them get certificates, however, some do not.
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4. The above-mentioned disadvantages which are brought about by environmental pollution is very detrimental but often miss people’s attention. (句子的主语是advantages，要用复数动词。 可改为：The above-mentioned advantages which are … pollution are very detrimental …)
3. A typical family nowadays is consisted of
three to four members.
4. (语态错误。consist of 一定要使用主动语 态。可改为：A typical family nowadays
consists of three to four members. )
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常见语法错误举例：
1. Now is golden time for us to attain a fair command of English.
2. (词性使用不当。now是副词，不能作主语。 可改为：Now it is the golden time for us …)
3. 2. My roommate is so troublesome, I can hardly put with him any more.
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(标点符号错误。两个句子之间缺少连词。可改 为：My roommate is so troublesome that I can hardly …)
7. If adopted, we hope the law will resolve the problem.
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(if adopted的逻辑主语是the law，与句子的主语we不 一致，为悬垂分词。可改为：If the law is adopted, we hope … 或：If adopted, the law will resolve the problem.)