unit 1 如何写劝说性建议信
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高一英语unit1建议信Dear Principal,I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to suggest some improvements that could enhance our school environment and student experience.Firstly, I believe we should consider adding more extracurricular activities. Clubs related to science, art, and sports can help students discover their passions and develop new skills. This would not only make school life more enjoyable but also encourage teamwork and creativity.Secondly, I suggest improving the school library by increasing the number of new books and providing more comfortable reading spaces. A well-equipped library can inspire students to read more and enhance their learning experience.Lastly, organizing regular workshops or seminars on topics like mental health and study skills would greatly benefit students. These sessions can provide valuable insights and support for managing academic pressure.Thank you for considering my suggestions. I believethese changes will greatly enhance our school community.Sincerely,[Your Name].中文翻译:亲爱的校长:希望您一切安好。
名师作文:Unit1 建议信的写作建议信的写作:写作典例:假如你是李华,请根据下表内容,给你校校长写一封100词左右的建议信。
现状:吃饭时人太多,排队要花很长时间;还有不少同学占位,这使很多同学吃饭时没有座位可坐。
措施:禁止占位;各年级轮流吃饭,如可以让高年级的同学晚十分钟去吃饭;有条件的话,再建一个食堂。
要求:1. 可适当增加细节,以使文章连贯、通顺;2. 开头和结尾已写好,不计人总词数。
Dear Headmaster,I’m writing to make some suggestions for improving the dining conditions of our school.Yours,Li Hua 写作指导1. 命题分析(1) 建议信是写信人为了向收信人提出建议或忠告而写的信。
(2) 建议信有可能是写给个人,写信人就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法;也可能是写给某个组织或机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。
(3) 建议信要写出写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。
理由要人情人理,语气一定要礼貌。
因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
写建议信时应注意两个问题。
第一,这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。
第二,这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图):After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that...I am very glad to hear that you want to...I know you have trouble in...after reading your letter.I am writing to you for the purpose of...I am writing to share some advice with you.过渡句:My suggestions are as follows.In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following actions.In my opinion, some effective measures must be taken to solve these problems. They can be listed as follows.This problem will be more serious unless we take some effective measures.结束语:I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into serious consideration.I’ll be very glad if you take my suggestions into consideration.2. 布局谋篇开头(beginning) ——开门见山,说明写信的理由主体(body) ——提出自己的建议结尾(ending) ——简单结束语,并希望对方采纳自己的建议必背短文模板:。
Unit 1 teenage life …建议信Name ______________一、建议信文体分析:建议信写作目的是向个人提出劝说性的建议,就对方遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法、观点、建议或忠告;也可能是写给某个组织或机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告的一种应用文体。
先提出建议,随后给出充足的理由劝说对方接受你的建议。
提出的理由要合情合理,用词要恰当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。
二、【写作指导】建议信除了遵循书信的格式之外,还要求在信中针对别人的问题,给出你的观点及解决办法。
注意行文的连贯性与逻辑性。
1、首段:陈述事由,表明写作意图。
2、主体:提出建议并阐明理由。
3、结尾:鼓励对方采纳建议。
注意要有礼貌,使对方容易接受。
三、常用句型:1.I'm sorry to learn (know) that you have trouble/difficulty doing...2.I'm writing to give you some advice/tips/suggestions on how to do...3.First of all, I think it would be better if...4.Here I,d like to give my advice on ... /I would like to suggest/recommend/advise that...5.If I were you, I would ...6.1strongly hope that you can ...7.In my opinion, it is better to...8.Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.9.1will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard (在这方面).四、建议信参考模板Dear...,I'm sony to learn that... I'm writing to give you some tips on ...To solve the problem, in my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following measures. For one thing, .... For another, .... Finally(Lastly), it would also be a good idea if you....I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.Yours sincerelyLi Hua五、实战演练:假设你是李华,最近,你得知好友peter有下列问题。
Section Ⅴ Writing—劝说信劝说信是指以信件的形式表达自己的观点或立场,并期待对方认同或接受。
一、基本结构第一部分:引入。
写信人首先需要简要说明写信的主要目的。
如果需要的话,也可以大致作一下自我介绍。
第二部分:阐述。
这是说服性信函的主体和核心部分。
写信人需要在这个部分有条理地列出自己的理由。
理由要客观、真实、有说服力,要重点突出、层次分明。
同时,要注意适当提高语言的力度,发挥语言的功力,以便更好地展现自己的立场。
第三部分:总结。
可以用生动的语言重申自己的核心观点,或以情动人、引起共鸣,或升华延伸、画龙点睛。
这部分应该注意语言的简练和冲击力,切忌冗杂拖拉的表达。
二、增分佳句(一)劝说信开头常用句式——引入观点1.Now it is commonly held that ... They think ... But I doubt whether ...2.These days we are often told that ... But is this really the case ...3.Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ..., but I conceive it differently.4.Currently there is a widespread concern that ...5.Now people in growing numbers are coming to realise that ...(二)劝说信主体常用句式——阐述理由1.The reason for ... is that ...2.The reasons for ... are as follows. First, ... Second, ... Last but not least, ...3.On the one hand, ...; on the other hand, ...4.We may take a common example to show ...5.A recent study suggests/shows that ...6.According to the statistics provided by ..., it can be seen that ...7.There is good evidence to show that ...8.No one can ignore the fact that ...(三)劝说信结尾常用句式——总结1.In short, ...2.In conclusion, ...3.As far as I’m concerned, ...4.From what has been discussed above/Taking all these factors into consideration,we may safely arrive at/come to/reach the conclusion that ...[题目要求]假设你叫李华,请给Nicolaus Copernicus(尼古拉·哥白尼)写一封信劝说他出版自己的理论著作,这样可以让每个人都了解他的理论,从而推动科学的发展。
劝说信分析早恋的危害英语作文【篇一:浙江省诸暨市草塔中学高中英语 unit 1 great scientists劝说性的书信写作试题】浙江省诸暨市草塔中学高中英语 unit 1 great scientists劝说性的书信写作试题文体分析劝说性的书信写作目的是向某个组织或个人提出劝说性的建议的一种应用文体。
先提出建议,随后给出充足的理由劝说对方接受你的建议,提出的理由要合情合理,用词要恰当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。
基本结构和内容首先点明写信的目的是提劝说性的建议,然后讲清楚建议的事项、理由、具体建议和措施,最后再一次提出希望,礼貌结束全文。
常用句型1. i’m writing to persuade you to...2. first of all, i think it would be better if...3. here i’d like to give my advice on ... / i would like to suggest that...4. if i were you, i would...5. please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision. 黄金模板dear _____,i’m writing to persuade you to ______.first of all, i think it would be better if ______. secondly,______. last but not least, ______. i do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.looking forward to your reply.实战演练假如你是李明,学校领导和教师因为担心同学们浏览不健康的网站,关闭了教室内电脑的网络浏览功能,你们感到很难过。
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student from Huzhou Senior High School. I have a problem. I’m not very good at communicating with people. Although I try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely sometimes.
I do want to change the situation, but I don’t know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
Yours,
Xiao Dong
写作时应注意下面几点:
1. 确定文体:这是一篇应用文,是学生熟悉的书信,写作中应注意书信的常规格式。
2. 主体时态:文章应以一般现在时为主。
3. 主体人称:由于是给别人提出建议,所以人称应该以第二人称为主。
4. 写作步骤:首先,回应来信中提出的问题。
其次,针对该问题,提出2-3条合理的建议并说明理由。
最后,写一两句结束语,如:希望我的建议对你有帮助等等。
5. 注意恰当使用连接词,使各个要点之间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。
1. Introduction:
I’m sorry (that) you are having trouble / difficulty / problems in making friends.
I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on... However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. / Here are a few suggestions.
I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.
2. Ideas & Reasons:
First(ly), why not ...? If you do this, ...
Secondly, you should / can ... Then / That way, ...
Thirdly, it would be a good idea if ... By doing this, ...
Last but not least (最后但并不是最不重要的) ...
3. Conclusion:
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above.
I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful ...
I believe that if you follow my advice, you’ll get along well with your classmates.
I believe, with your determination, you can manage to overcome
these difficulties.
【参考范文】
Dear Xiao Dong,
I’m so rry you are having trouble in making friends.However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. (Introduction)
Firstly, why not take an active part in discussions? If you do this, you can express your own opinions, and at the same time, learn to listen to other people’s views.
Secondly, you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Then you can find common interests with them. In this way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are friendly.
Last but not least, I’m always here ready to help. We can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others. (Ideas & Reasons)
I hope you will find these ideas useful. (Conclusion)
Yours sincerely,
Miss Wang。