篇幅简短,内容单薄,无法体现语言表达能力。
对策:
对要点进行合理拓展,使内容丰满,详略得当!遇到翻译难点,则转换表达方式!
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Para. 2:如何描述词典的特色?(如词汇量,用法,例句等方面);
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than 1000 new words in details. (魏琪敏)
added,
l(usage) Secondly, the dictionary shows us different ways to use the words so that we can use the words correctly when writing English articles. (马泽华)
l(example sentence) The example sentences are easy to understand, which helps us have a better understanding of a certain word. (陈晓杉)
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How to improve it? Para 2:如何描述词典的特色? •First of all, the dictionary has a large vocabulary, which contain 3500 words we should learn in senior high school. If we meet some unknown words, you can refer to it. Besides, the use of every word is listed with detailed phrases and examples in this dictionary. After all, there is no worse thing than explain a lot without examples. Moreover, the example sentences can not only help us to understand the word, but also practical in life.