2017-2018学年高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and MagazinesSection Ⅴ Writing-新闻报道教学案 外研版必修2
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高三英语复习 Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines语言知识案 外研版
2017届高三英语一轮复习Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines语言知识案外研版必修2编辑整理：尊敬的读者朋友们：这里是精品文档编辑中心，本文档内容是由我和我的同事精心编辑整理后发布的，发布之前我们对文中内容进行仔细校对，但是难免会有疏漏的地方，但是任然希望（2017届高三英语一轮复习Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines语言知识案外研版必修2）的内容能够给您的工作和学习带来便利。
同时也真诚的希望收到您的建议和反馈，这将是我们进步的源泉，前进的动力。
本文可编辑可修改，如果觉得对您有帮助请收藏以便随时查阅，最后祝您生活愉快业绩进步，以下为2017届高三英语一轮复习Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines语言知识案外研版必修2的全部内容。
Module5 Newspapers and Magazines语言知识探究案I.词性转换1._________ n. 经济 ____________ adj. 经济的2._________ n. 政治 ____________adj。
政治的 ___________ n。
政治家3。
_________ n. 祝贺 ____________ v。
祝贺4。
__________ adj。
历史性的 _____________ adj. 有历史意义的5。
______________ n. 成就，伟绩 __________ v。
取得（成就)6.____________ n。
文化 _______________ adj. 文化的7。
____________ adj。
高兴的，快乐的 ___________ vt。
使高兴 n。
高兴8.____________ n。
信念，信条 ____________ n。
不信，怀疑，疑惑9.____________ adj. 金融的 _____________ n。
金融10.___________ vt。
2017-2018学年高中英语Module5NewspapersandMagazines课件外研版必修2
( more serious )
examples The Times
the popular press ( tabloid )
concentrate on famous people, the royal family, and has large headlines and lots of big photos.
with the paragraph.
subheadings
Conversation in Space
October 16th , 2003
Congratulation from Around the World
Para.2 Para.1 Para.3
Reading & Vocabulary -6.Careful-reading (5m) read first part of the passage, and make questions to match the
Sample:We’re very proud of being a Chinese,and
the flight is a great moment in the history of China. It is a complete success.
Reading & Vocabulary -3. Exercise (5m) finish the exercise at Activity 1, Page 42.
What’s the _fr_o_n_t____ page story?
economy
B: Here’s the _h_e_a_d_l_in_e__:New UN Secretary –
General.
step
examples The Times
the popular press ( tabloid )
concentrate on famous people, the royal family, and has large headlines and lots of big photos.
with the paragraph.
subheadings
Conversation in Space
October 16th , 2003
Congratulation from Around the World
Para.2 Para.1 Para.3
Reading & Vocabulary -6.Careful-reading (5m) read first part of the passage, and make questions to match the
Sample:We’re very proud of being a Chinese,and
the flight is a great moment in the history of China. It is a complete success.
Reading & Vocabulary -3. Exercise (5m) finish the exercise at Activity 1, Page 42.
What’s the _fr_o_n_t____ page story?
economy
B: Here’s the _h_e_a_d_l_in_e__:New UN Secretary –
General.
step
高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines Section Ⅲ I
2017秋高中英语Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines Section ⅢIntegrating Skills Cultural Corner课时作业外研版必修2编辑整理：尊敬的读者朋友们：这里是精品文档编辑中心，本文档内容是由我和我的同事精心编辑整理后发布的，发布之前我们对文中内容进行仔细校对，但是难免会有疏漏的地方，但是任然希望（2017秋高中英语Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines Section ⅢIntegrating Skills Cultural Corner课时作业外研版必修2）的内容能够给您的工作和学习带来便利。
同时也真诚的希望收到您的建议和反馈，这将是我们进步的源泉，前进的动力。
本文可编辑可修改，如果觉得对您有帮助请收藏以便随时查阅，最后祝您生活愉快业绩进步，以下为2017秋高中英语Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines Section ⅢIntegrating Skills Cultural Corner课时作业外研版必修2的全部内容。
Module 5 Section ⅢIntegrating Skills ＆ Cultural Corner3．A.easy B．hardC．high D．difficult解析：目标定得太高,应选high。
答案：C4．A。
and B．butC．or D．so解析：根据前面的either推断，此处应选or。
either... or...意为“要么……要么……”。
答案:C5．A。
both B．neitherC．either D．also解析：根据后文的nor可知应选neither。
neither。
.. nor。
.。
意为“既不……也不……"。
答案:B6．A.child B．fatherC．mother D．teacher解析:“who hears the story”这一定语从句暗示,应选child。
高中英语Module5NewspapersandMagazines 作业课件外研版必修2
6 ． I think we'd better go and find out when the first flight kes off .
7．Mei Lanfang is one of the greatest masters in the history of Beijing Opera.
6．The satellite orbits the earth once every 365.25 days. 7. He wrote me an e-mail，offering his congratulations on my getting a good job. 8．He likes to study historical characters, such as Qin Shihuang, Cao Cao, etc. 9. Flying across the Atlantic for the first time was a great
8． Thousands of people attended the meeting held in our school yesterday.
Ⅲ.单句语法填空 1．He was the third runner to pass
(pass) the finishing line.
解析：序数词后跟不定式形式作定语。
achievement . 10．There is a story in today's newspaper with the headline “Women Gave Birth on Train”．
Ⅱ.选词填空 take off，in total，in space，take photographs of， land safely， offer one's congratulations，in the history of， thousands of 1．Till today, the show has attracted ten thousand visitors in total . 2. Seen in space, the earth is very beautiful. 3．We took photographs of the lovely animals in the zoo yesterday.
7．Mei Lanfang is one of the greatest masters in the history of Beijing Opera.
6．The satellite orbits the earth once every 365.25 days. 7. He wrote me an e-mail，offering his congratulations on my getting a good job. 8．He likes to study historical characters, such as Qin Shihuang, Cao Cao, etc. 9. Flying across the Atlantic for the first time was a great
8． Thousands of people attended the meeting held in our school yesterday.
Ⅲ.单句语法填空 1．He was the third runner to pass
(pass) the finishing line.
解析：序数词后跟不定式形式作定语。
achievement . 10．There is a story in today's newspaper with the headline “Women Gave Birth on Train”．
Ⅱ.选词填空 take off，in total，in space，take photographs of， land safely， offer one's congratulations，in the history of， thousands of 1．Till today, the show has attracted ten thousand visitors in total . 2. Seen in space, the earth is very beautiful. 3．We took photographs of the lovely animals in the zoo yesterday.
高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines Section Ⅰ I
2017秋高中英语Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines Section ⅠIntroduction Reading and Vocabulary课时作业外研版必修2编辑整理：尊敬的读者朋友们：这里是精品文档编辑中心，本文档内容是由我和我的同事精心编辑整理后发布的，发布之前我们对文中内容进行仔细校对，但是难免会有疏漏的地方，但是任然希望（2017秋高中英语Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines Section ⅠIntroduction Reading and Vocabulary课时作业外研版必修2）的内容能够给您的工作和学习带来便利。
同时也真诚的希望收到您的建议和反馈，这将是我们进步的源泉，前进的动力。
本文可编辑可修改，如果觉得对您有帮助请收藏以便随时查阅，最后祝您生活愉快业绩进步，以下为2017秋高中英语Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines Section ⅠIntroduction Reading and Vocabulary课时作业外研版必修2的全部内容。
Module 5 Section ⅠIntroduction， Reading and VocabularyⅠ。
单词拼写1．The photographer (摄影师） was trying to take a picture of the celebrity couple.2．In some countries it is unwise to talk about politics （政治) in the hearing of strangers.3．The life boat was sent out to rescue the sailors （船员) from the sinking ship。
4．There are many artificial satellites orbiting (绕轨道飞行) around the earth。
高中英语Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines二
号顿市安谧阳光实验学校Module 5 Newspapers and MagazinesTeaching Aims:1. Knowledge and SkillTo get Ss to learn some words to describe newspapers and magazines．To get Ss to know something about daily newspapers in Britain and the United States．To improve the Ss’ ability of collecting some useful information from newspapers or magazines．To encourage Ss to talk freely and actively about their personal favorite interviews．To enable Ss to use adverbial clauses of time and reason correctly．Improve the students’ kno wledge about newspapers and magazines and their ability to expand an article according to the headline and the first lines．2.Emotion and ValuesTo arouse the Ss’interest in learning about newspapers and magazines. To make them proud of the achievements their motherland made on space flight3. Cultural awareness:To make them familiar with some foreign newspapers and magazines To know the different attitude towards exploiting and utilizing space between China and some western countries4. Character-building:To help them form the right method of getting the information they need from a newspaper or magazine.To let them know the importance of cooperating with others in a group. Difficulties and Importance:To enable the students grasp the usage of adverbial clauses of time and reasonEnable the students to understand the passage clearly and get some information about space travel of China.Teaching Method:Task-based methodologyCommunicative ApproachTeaching Time:Five periods:Period 1 vocabulary and speaking+ Cultural cornerPeriod 2 Vocabulary and readingPeriod 3 Grammar 1 Adverbial clause of time+Listening and speakingPeriod 4 Reading and ListeningPeriod 5 Grammar 2 Adverbial clause of reason+ Function and Everyday English+ WritingTeaching Procedures:Period 1Step 1 Warming-upAnswer the following questions.Q1 Have you ever read some newspapers or magazines?Q2 Can you match the words with the numbered items in the illustrations of the newspaper and magazine?articlefront coverfront pageheadlinephotographStep 2 Words Studya. Match the words with the following definitions.1. business a. a person who takes photographs2.celbrity b. a person whose job is to collect and write news stories3. economy c. a person who chooses texts written by one or by several writers4. editor d. the relationship between production, trade and the supply of money5. fashion e. the activity of making, buying, selling or supplying goods or services for money6. international f. political affairs or life7. journalist g. physical activity8. politics h. connected with two or more countries9. photographer i. a famous person10. sport j. a popular style of clothes, hair and so on suggested answers: 1. e 2.i 3.d 4.c 5.j 6.h 7.b 8.f 9. a 10. gb. Divide the words above into two groups.Group A: person who work on newspapers and magazinesGroup B: types of news items you can find in newspapers and magazines Suggested answers:Group A: editor; journalist; photographerGroup B: business; celebrity; economy; fashion; international; politics; sportStep 3 Culture CornerPre-reading: (brainstorming)Answer the following questions.Q1. How many foreign newspapers do you know? What are they?Q2. Have you ever read them before? If so，what is your feeling about that?Q3. Do you think reading English newspapers help you a lot?While-readingAnswer the following questions.Q1. What is the quality press?Q2. What is the popular press?Q3. What are the main differences between the two?Q4. What is the content of The Times, The Sun, The New York Times and The New York DailyNews?c. Post-readingRead the passage again and decide whether the following statements are true(T)or false(F)．(1)The quality press is more serious．( )(2)You can know about famous pop stars in a popular newspaper．( )(3)You can find large headlines and a lot of big photographs in The Times．( ) (4)The Sun is the most successful quality newspaper in Britain．( )(5)The New York Times is produced in New York．( )Suggested Answers：(1)T(2)T(3)F(4)F(5)TStep 4 DiscussionWhat kind of newspapers do you enjoy reading most? (Divide the students into several groups and let them give the specific reasons to support their idea.)Homework:Review the new words we have learned.Preview the passage of Chinese Taikonaut Back on earth.Period 2Step 1 Pre-reading:Answer the following questions?Q1. Do you remember the news about Yang Liwei in October, 2003?Q2. How did you find out about it?Q3. What were your feelings when you heard the news?Step 2. While-readingSkimming and Scanning.Read the subheadings. Match the subheadings with the parts.Conversations in Space.October 16th, 2003.Congratulations from Around the worldSuggested answers: Para1. B Para2. A Para3. CDetailed readingAnswer the following questions.What was the name of capsule?Where did Yang take off from?How many people had traveled before Yang?How many days have astronauts spent in space in total?Step 3 Post-readingRead the article and decide if the sentences are true (T) or false (F) 1. One of the astronauts aboard the International Space Station was born in China.2. The other man aboard the Space Station is a Russian cosmonaut.3. China received messages of congratulations from all over the world.4. Sean O’Keefe works for the Unit ed Nations.5. Kofi Annan thought that the flight was very good news just for China.6. The taikonaut was in space for twenty-one hours.7. The Beijing Space Control Centre said: “ It is a great moment in the history of china.” 8. When Yang landed, Premier Wen Jiabao telephoned the Control Centre to offer his congratulations.Suggested answers:1. F2. T3. T4. F5. F6. F7. F8. TReading Comprehension1. The passage mainly talks about______.A. the admiration for Yang Liwei after his space flightB. the success of the first manned space flight of ChinaC. the messages of congratulations from the worldD. the conversation between Yang and other astronauts2. Which is wrong according to the passage?Yang took off and landed at different places.Yang had a nice talk with other people in space.It took Yang about 90 minutes to orbit the earth.Only Yang was traveling in space at that time.3. It can be inferred from the passage that _____.Edward Lu is a Chinese-AmericanB. Yang succeeded in photographing our planet32 countries sent astronauts to travel in spaceD. Oct. 16, 2003 was an unforgettable day for Yang4.Kofi Annan called the flight "a step forward for the whole world". Itmeans______.China still has a long way to go for sureB. The whole world expect a lot from ChinaC. The flight pushes the whole world forwardD. China develops faster than the other countries5. The congratulation from United Nations Secretary-General Kofi Annan was that_____A. the flight was a complete successB. The flight was a step forward for the whole worldC. It’s great work by thousands and thousands of people from ChinaD. The flight was an important historical achievement6. After Yang landed, all the following people offered congratulations EXCEPT____.A.Premier Wen JiabaoB.Edward Lu and Yuri MalenchenkoC.Sean O’KeeD. Kofi AnnanSuggested answers: 1. B 2. D 3. A 4. C 5. B 6. BStep 4 Language points:1．The flight was a“complete success”．这次飞行是一次完全的胜利。
高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines课件 外研版必修2
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Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines
报纸在人们的生活中发挥着非常重要的作用，几乎每个人都读报纸，但是 你知道报纸的起源和发展吗？
An Introduction to Newspapers The earliest newspapers shandwritten news sheets.The first printed newspapers appeared in China during the Tang dynasty，which were printed from carved (雕刻的) wooden blocks.Modern papers first appeared in Venice，Italy in the middle of the 14th century.The newspapers of today，with advertising and a mixture of political，economic，and social news and comments, were started in Britain in the mid-18th century.
The main function of newspapers is to report news.Many newspapers also provide special information to readers，such as weather reports and television timetables.They also provide comments on politics，economics， arts and culture.Almost all newspapers depend on advertising to make money.
高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines Newspapers
Module 5 Newspapers and MagazinesI．教学内容分析本模块以“Newspapers and Magazines〞为话题，引入了与报刊杂志有关的词汇，并介绍了中国首位宇航员杨利伟遨游太空的事迹。
教师通过模块教学，使学生了解新闻体裁的文章的特点，让他们通过各种途径来了解探索太空的相关知识，培养学生采集资料的能力。
在发展学生语言能力的同时，培养他们热爱科学、立志为国家做出贡献的理想和信念。
Introduction部分首先通过两幅中外著名报刊杂志的图片切人话题，使学生了解报刊杂志的相关术语；接着通过介绍报刊杂志的各个版块来学习单词，并通过口头表达的活动来达到运用的目的，为后面的各项学习活动做好准备。
Vocabulary and Reading部分以Chinese Taikonaut Back On Earth!为话题，以新闻报道的方式，介绍了中国宇航员杨利伟遨游太空的事迹，并说明了此次航天飞行的重大意义。
根据文章的内容，编者设计了五个活动，如：词汇练习，主旨大意题，阅读理解题，判断题，讨论题，学生通过这些练习熟悉课文内容并学会使用与探索太空有关的词汇，同时对学生进行爱国主义教育。
Grammar J部分通过让学生观察例句，从中发现时间状语从句的特点，并通过相关的练习巩固此语法点，使学生掌握并正确使用when，while等连词以及由其所引导的从句中的动词时态。
Rending and Listening部分有两个主要的目的，一是阅读三篇新闻报道，了解其主旨大意，并初步了解新闻的形式。
二是听新闻广播录音，然后完成与录音内容相关的练习。
该部分给学生提供了读写结合的活动，要求学生在具体的活动过程中熟悉文章内容和有关单词，训练学生听懂新闻广播的能力。
Grammar2部分通过观察句子，了解原因状语从句的引导词及其特点，并通过相关练习，使学生掌握并正确使用原因状语从句。
Pronunciation部分主要是让学生通过听课文录音，注意体会句子根据意群停顿。
高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and MagazinesEveryday Eng
Cultural Corner, Everyday English and Writing
Cultural Corner
Read the article and answer the questions. What are the main differences between quality newspapers and popular newspapers in Britain and the United States?
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Discuss in pairs and tell me the meanings.
1>从它的果实就知道它是 tree is known by its fruit.
West Lake is known for its beautiful scenery.
Oh, come on
That’s impossible
you never know
It’s a crazy idea
Fill in the blanks using the above expressions.
on the moon? A: I think it would be very interesting. B: ____________________! It would be terrible! A: ________________________________. I may want to do it myself. B: In 2050?_________________! You’ll be nearly sixty years old!
You can’t be serious
Well, stranger things have happened
Cultural Corner
Read the article and answer the questions. What are the main differences between quality newspapers and popular newspapers in Britain and the United States?
感谢您的下载观看
Discuss in pairs and tell me the meanings.
1>从它的果实就知道它是 tree is known by its fruit.
West Lake is known for its beautiful scenery.
Oh, come on
That’s impossible
you never know
It’s a crazy idea
Fill in the blanks using the above expressions.
on the moon? A: I think it would be very interesting. B: ____________________! It would be terrible! A: ________________________________. I may want to do it myself. B: In 2050?_________________! You’ll be nearly sixty years old!
You can’t be serious
Well, stranger things have happened
高中英语 Module 5 Newspapers and Magazines Listening课件 外研版必修
4. Which TV station did Bobbie
Sharon go to?
Channel 16.
5. Which song did she sing at the
io?
Sometimes.
6. How old is Sam Parrish?
16 years old.
7. How old is David Bates?
Listening and vocabulary
1. What time did the British Prime Minister’s plane arrive in Beijing? 9 o’clock in the morning. 2. Who travelled to China with him? His wife and son. 3.Which other Chinese cities is he planning to visit? Shanghai and Guilin.
come many more times.” The Prime Minister is also planning to visit Shanghai and Guilin. B American singer Bobbie Sharon was in London yesterday. She went to the Channel 16 TV studio, where she sang Sometimes, a song from her new album. While she was waiting for a taxi
Listen to an interview with an actor and make a note of the answers to the following questions.
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Module 5 Newspapers and MagazinesSection Ⅴ Writing-新闻报道一、基本结构新闻报道是对最近发生的事情的报道，其目的是为人们提供最新的信息。
新闻报道的结构一般分为四个部分：标题、导语、主体、结语。
1．标题：标题是新闻的题目，是编辑对最有新闻价值的内容的浓缩、概括。
为了撷取新闻要点、诠释新闻意义、吸引读者阅读，好的标题应该简洁明了。
2．导语：导语是消息开头的第一句话或第一段，它扼要地揭示出新闻的核心内容。
3．主体：主体是新闻的主要部分，它用充足的事实表现主题，是对导语内容的进一步展开和阐述。
4．结语：一般是最后一句话或者一段话，通常对全文内容作概括性的总结，有时作者根据报道在结语中提出令人深思的问题。
二、增分佳句A．导语常用句式1．On Sunday, September 28, 2008, three Chinese astronauts landed safely back on the earth.2008年9月28日，星期天，三名中国宇航员安全地返回地球。
2．A big fire broke out in the forest in the southwest of the United States late in November, 1992.1992年11月末，美国西南部的森林发生了一场大火。
3．“Saving the Earth” Conference, held in Dalian, came to a close last Saturday.在大连举行的“拯救地球”大会上周六落下了帷幕。
B．主体常用句式1．The government sent 3,000 firefighters and policemen there to help them move to a safe place.政府派了3 000名消防人员和警察到那儿去帮助他们搬到安全的地方。
2．The fire lasted over three weeks, causing a damage of at least twenty million dollars.大火持续了三个多星期，造成至少两千万美元的损失。
C．结语常用句式1．In a word, it is necessary for us to learn to protect ourselves.总之，我们学会保护自己是有必要的。
2．I feel sad. If we all do something for them, things will be sure to get better.我感到伤心。
如果我们都为他们做些什么，事情一定会变得更好。
3．I believe we can certainly overcome the disaster with the public and the government working together.我相信，由于公众和政府的共同努力，我们一定能够战胜灾难。
[题目要求]5月1日，高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院 (Sunshine Nursing Home) 开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫卫生、与老人聊天等)。
假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则 100词左右的新闻报道。
1．时间、地点、人物、活动；2．老人们的反应；3．简短评论。
注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不计入总词数)。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ByChenJie, SchoolNewspaper第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1．确定体裁：本文为新闻报道，属于应用文；2．确定人称：本文的主要人称为第三人称；3．确定时态：新闻报道主要用一般过去时。
二、构思第一部分，报道事实。
第二部分，老人的反应。
第三部分，简短评论。
第二步：核心词汇想周全1．respectfully 恭敬地2．do_voluntary_work/volunteer_to_help_others做志愿者工作3．welcome_sb._warmly/give_a_warm_welcome_to_sb./give_sb.a_warm_welcome 热烈欢迎某人4．present_sb._with_sth./present_sth._to_sb./present_sb.sth. 给某人献某物5．clean_the_windows 清洗窗户6．sweep/clean_the_floor 扫地7．chat_with_sb./have_a_chat_with_sb. 与某人聊天8．thank_sb._for_one’s_kindness/be_grateful_to_sb._for_one’s_kindness 感谢某人的好意9．bring_joy/happiness_to_sb./make_sb._happy给某人带来快乐10．enrich_one’s_life 充实某人的生活第三步：由词扩句雏形现1．Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 是高二(3)班的学生。
(主系表结构)Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua_are_students_from_Class_Three,_Grade_Two.2．5月1 日，他们去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动。
(and连接两个并列谓语)On_May_Day,_they_went_to_Sunshine_Nursing_Home_and_did_some_voluntary_work.3．他们一到达就受到了热烈的欢迎，而且他们恭敬地给老人献了鲜花和水果。
(and连接两个并列分句)Upon_their_arrival,_Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua_were_warmly_welcomed,_and_respectf ully,_they_presented_the_elderly_with_flowers_and_fruits.4．然后，他们立即开始工作，清洗窗户并扫地。
(现在分词作伴随状语)Then,_they_started_working_at_once,_cleaning_the_windows_and_sweeping_the_f loor.5．一切都做完了，他们坐在院子里和老人聊天。
(after引导时间状语从句)After_everything_had_been_done,_they_sat_in_the_yard_chatting_with_the_elde rly_people.6．当他们该离开了的时候，老人们感谢他们的好意。
(when引导时间状语从句)When_it_was_time_for_the_volunteers_to_leave,_the_elderly_people_thanked_th em_for_their_kindness.7．这是如此美好的一天，他们将会永远记得。
(and连接两个并列分句)It_was_a_very_beautiful_day_and_they_would_remember_it_forever.8．他们所做的给别人带来了快乐并且也充实了自己的生活。
(what引导主语从句) What_they_did_has_brought_joy_to_others_and_enriched_their_own_lives.第四步：句式升级造亮点1．用名词短语作同位语合并句1和句2On_May_Day,_Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua,_students_from_Class_Three,_Grade_Two,_wen t_to_Sunshine_Nursing_Home_and_did_some_voluntary_work.2．用独立主格结构改写句5Everything_done,_they_sat_in_the_yard_chatting_with_the_elderly_people.3．用such ...that ...结构改写句7It_was_such_a_beautiful_day_that_they_would_remember_it_forever.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On_May_Day,_Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua,_students_from_Class_Three,_Grade_Two,_wen t_to_Sunshine_Nursing_Home_and_did_some_voluntary_work._Upon_their_arrival,_Li_ Yue_and_Zhang_Hua_were_warmly_welcomed,_and_respectfully,_they_presented_the_el derly_with_flowers_and_fruits._Then,_they_started_working_at_once,_cleaning_the _windows_and_sweeping_the_floor._Everything_done,_they_sat_in_the_yard_chatting _with_the_elderly_people.When_it_was_time_for_the_volunteers_to_leave,_the_elderly_people_thanked_th em_for_their_kindness._It_was_such_a_beautiful_day_that_they_would_remember_it_ forever.Li_Yue_and_Zhang_Hua_were_very_happy._What_they_did_has_brought_joy_to_othe rs_and_enriched_their_own_lives.ByChenJie, SchoolNewspaper本文档仅供文库使用。