托福写作范文
Providing internet access is as important as other services such as building roads,so the government should offer internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. 为公民提供网络服务和政府其他的利民政策一样重要，政府应该不惜重金为所有公民提供互联网服务。
写作范文赏析
When it comes to broadband internet-that’s the world class kind of network we should have-we’re behind America, Korea, Japan and a whole host of other developed countries. So just like electricity,a road grid or a postal service,internet access with very high-capacity and high-speed should be provided by the government in every city as well as remote areas.
The logic behind enhanced public internet access is plain. We know that internet as a utility become almost more like a platform that for the next economy just as the postal service ended up being a platform for the integration of the country. But the larger vision is that it's an input into absolutely everything we do,including entertainment, social life, cultural life, economic growth and so on,particularly as economy moves more towards being an information-services based economy. Moreover,we are certainly an agricultural nation. Since future products that don't exist yet can't pay for the services they'll need to thrive, taxpayers need to build the platform in order to prepare for the next economy.
Second of all,internet access,although being highly government-centric and yet due to the lack of regulation and competition,is usually charged too much and delivered too little by cable company.Most people in most cities don't have a bunch of choices for the internet -they have one choice which is a local monopoly. What happens is that because of deregulation if one cable company occupies the market of entire sector or neighborhood,others will be unable to provide services any more.Since there is only one company has the ability to control that market,it would be a fool not to reap its rewards,discriminate price and make lots of profits,which drives prices up and provide limited access.So,if the state offers internet access,this will not be an issue at all.
However,some people might argue that a project of this size under political circumstance requires tremendous investments and changes in the way we deliver fundamental infrastructure,and thus is like any daydreams which are impossible to realize.Though such argument sounds certainly reasonable,with fiber penetration moving rapidly ahead,one must think ahead. So, the first step is to find someone who understands
this issue and understands that we're falling further and further behind and is concerned about our future as a nation. This requires long-term thinking.
As I mentioned above,if our government addressed the issue of public internet access, it will be beneficial both to the citizen as an individual and the nation as a whole. Going forward, wider availability of internet access will enable China to become one of the great powers for fields related to science and technology,economy,military,space exploration and among others in the world, and thus will lead the world in the information age.
1.建设类：建设类题目共六道题，大都是问你所在社区一建设项目的利与弊。 为了合并题目，最好将自己所在社区定下来，在城市就在城市，在郊区就在郊区，那么简要介绍社区情况的时候就节省了准备时间。按此原则，以下提纲中的红色文字都是重复出现的论点或论据，可重复在不同题目的作文中使用。 5. The advantages and disadvantages of a new factory near your community. 第一段：陈述自己所在社区处于郊区，并简要介绍情况，说明建立一个新工厂这一提议对自己来说是一个两难的选择（Dillemma）：一方面它有好处，比如可以刺激经济，另一方面又对郊区的环境有潜在的威胁； 第二段：陈述好处。如新工厂可以为社区居民提供工作机会（可假设你所在的社区就业率不高），并带动周边附属产业，刺激社区的经济发展； 第三段：陈述坏处（注意转折用词）。如新工厂对郊区的土地、河流都有一定的污染，破坏了郊区的环境；同时也破坏了郊区宁静的生活（因为噪音、交通等）； 第四段：虽然有诸多坏处，然而我们去要权衡是利大于弊还是弊大于利；并相信只要通过严格管制，控制环境问题等潜在危害，新工厂可以为社区带来更多的好处（当然也可以有其它看法）。 I I live in a primarily agricultural community,and most of the population lives hand to mouth.Parents keep children home from school to work in the fields.If there is a flood or drought,people starve.A new factory would mean regular monthly salaries as well as protection against natural disasters or a sudden drop in the price of our main agricultural product,say,corn. Regular salaries would allow families the confidence to make investments in their future.The local would be able to plan their finances accurately and free themselves from debt.This in turn would encourage entrepreneurship and further develop the local economy.People coudd begin to open shops,restaurants dormitories,and entertainment facilities to serve the factory workers with their savings.Profits from these small enterprises would further enrich the local community and turn our relatively poor farmland into a truly profitable development zone.Perhaps more parents could then afford to send all of their shildren to high school and maybe even college. There would certainly be negetive effects as well.If the area becomes prosperous,immigrants from poorer regions will come here looking for work.Because of their relative poverty they will work harder fo less money than the locals and drive wages down.There might be more immigrants than
Environmental Protection 环境问题 环境类词汇： 1.Ecosystem 生态系统 2.Ecological balance/equilibrium 生态平衡 3.Biodiversity 生物多样性 4.Sustainable development 可持续发展 5.Conserve, preserve 节约使用，保护 6.Environmentally friendly, environmentalists 对环境无害的，环保主义者 7.Countries must join forces/make concerted efforts/unite to combat/tackle/solve/address environmental problems. 各个国家在应对环境问题上必须协同作战。 8.Raise/elevate public awareness of…增强公众意识 9.Renewable resources, non-renewable resources, fossil energy (petroleum, natural gas, coal) 可再生资源，不可再生资源，化石能源（石油，天然气，煤） 10.Consume, deplete, exhaust 消耗，耗光 11.Shortage/scarcity/lack of 短缺 12.Put a strain on the already stretched resources 是已经短缺的资源更加紧张 13.Deforestation, illegal logging 砍伐森林 14.Discharge/emit green house gases/carbon dioxide 排放温室气体，二氧化碳 15.Car exhaust 汽车尾气 16.Non-biodegradable/non-decomposable garbage 白色垃圾，不可降解垃圾 环境类特别关注话题： 为什么要保护濒危物种(biodiversity, balanced ecosystem) 保护化石能源，开发新能源(solar energy, nuclear power, wind, water) 保护环境和发展经济矛盾吗(sustainable development, financial and technological support) 环境类好句子： The earth’s ecosystem has been deteriorating at a staggering rate. In this day and age, the impact man exerts on the environment is massive in scale. 环境类范文： Topic: agree or disagree--the environment issues are too complicated, so individuals can do nothing about it on their own
2019年新托福写作万能素材：朋友一生一起走 新托福写作万能素材：朋友一生一起走 How to maintain a good friendship? 表示感激： Keeping Your Friendship Rewarding Show appreciation. Sometimes when you have known people for a long time, you can start to take them for granted. This doesn't have to be the case. Always thank your friend when he or she does something for you. Return favors when your friend goes out of his or her way to help you. Do nice things like getting their favorite candy at the grocery store, buying them lunch, or getting them a card and gift for their birthday. Tell your friend how much you appreciate them. This doesn't have to be an awkward or long-winded speech that you have prepared. It can be as simple as, "Hey, thanks for always being there for me. I appreciate it." 展示兴趣： Show interest in your friend's life. A good friendship should be two-sided — and hopefully, you have a friend who shows interest in you as well.
教育 学校教育schooling 家庭教育upbringing; parenting 课程大纲curriculum 教学大纲syllabus 必修课required/compulsory courses, 选修课elective/optional courses 课外活动extra-curricular activities 社团活动club activities 志愿者服务volunteer service 社区工作community work 实习internship 学生会student union 男生/女生联谊会fraternity & sorority 校园生活school/campus life 学校是社会的缩影a school is society in miniature 文科liberal arts/ liberal studies 理科sciences 工科engineering 人文学科humanities 社会学科social science 艺术arts 学科subject/discipline 基础科学basic sciences 应用科学applied sciences 小学教育primary-level education; elementary education 中学教育secondary-level education 大学教育tertiary-level education; higher education 职业教育vocational education/training 接受教育enter/get access to schools/ education 学位degree (bachelor, master, doctor/PhD) 文凭diploma, 证书certificate 青少年teenagers/adolescents/the young generation/the youths 学生students (fresh man, sophomore, junior, senior) 上课attend classes 逃课skip class, be absent from class 老师/学生为中心的课堂teacher-centered/ student-centered/ classroom 有能力的/有资格的/有经验的/良好培训的老师 competent/qualified/experienced/well-trained teachers 无能力的/不够格的/欠经验的老师 incompetent/disqualified/inexperienced/poorly-trained teachers well-equipped/ well-appointed/ well-decorated classrooms 设施良好的/装修良好的教室先进的教学设施up-to-date teaching facilities
托福独立写作模板30句常用句式 【新东方】轻松直达90分！年托福（T O E F L）金牌课程火热开售中>> 一、提出背景的托福独立写作模板句式 1、I t’s g e n e r a l l y a g r e e d t h a t ... ...(人们普遍认为... ...) 2、T h e r e i s a g r o w i n g b o d y o f o p i n i o n t h a t ... ... (越来越多的人认为... ...) 3、A n i n c r e a s i n g n u m b e r o f p e o p l e h a v e t h e t e n d e n c y t o b e l i e v e t h a t ... ...(越来越多的人倾向于认为... ...) 4、S o m e p e o p l e,e s p e c i a l l y t h e o l d,b e l i e v e t h a t ... ...(一些人，尤其是老人，认为... ...) 5、O t h e r p e o p l e,t h e y o u n g i n p a r t i c u l a r,a r g u e t h a t ... ...(别的人，尤其是年轻人，认为... ...) 6、S o m e c u r r e n t a n a l y s e s c o n c l u d e t h a t ... ... (当下的一些分析表明... ...) 7、... ... i s a h e a t e d t o p i c i n o u r t i m e s. (... ...是我们这个时代火热的一个话题) 8、T h e t o p i c a b o u t ... ...h a s b e e n r a g i n g f o r
托福写作热点考题：对比类型
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托福写作热点考题：对比类型 摘要: 托福写作热点考题：对比类型每年的托福独立写作考题中，对比类型考题总要占据半壁江山，拥有着非常高的出镜率。本文就为大家讲解托福考试中写作热点考题之一：对比类型考题。一、对 每年的托福独立写作考题中，对比类型考题总要占据半壁江山，拥有着非常高的出镜率。本文就为大家讲解托福考试中写作热点考题之一：对比类型考题。 一、对比考题何其多 对比类型考题在历年托福独立写作考题中，会占到相当大的比重，此类例题比比皆是。例如，从2015年1月份第一场托福考试起到最近的4月12日的9场考试10道考题（3月7日的考试有两道考题）中就有5道考题就是对比型考题（2015.1.25，2015.2.1，2015.3.7(1)，2015.3.7 (2)，2015.3.28）大家先来简单回顾几个托福真题： 2015.1.10 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? University students should be required to take basic science classes even if they are not part of the field of the study. 2015.1.11 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important characteristic of a successful politician or leader is good communication skills. 2015.1.25 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates and partner can
新托福独立写作必背分类话题词汇 一、Education教育 二、Technology科技 三、Media媒体 四、Success 成功 五、Work 工作 六、Government 政府七、Friends 朋友 八、Old vs. Y oung 九、Transportation 交通 十、Environment 环境 十一、Money 金钱 十二、Leisure 休闲 十三、Family 家庭 十四、Animals 动物 十五、Food 食物 十六、Safety安全 十七、Health健康 十八、Food 食物 一、Education教育 作业n. assignment（可数)与homework不同选修课n. elective course 学分n. credit 青少年n. ；青春期的adj. adolescent 适应adapt to sth. / become accustomed to sth. 应用v. apply 团队精神team spirit 独立思考think independently 在理解的基础上学习learn things through understanding 学生的反馈students’ feedback 学生评价老师的教学students appraise/ evaluate their teachers’ performance 通才n. generalist 专才n. specialist 全面发展的adj. well-rounded 多才多艺的adj. versatile 为社会健康发展做贡献contribute to societal well-being (or welfare) 工科n. engineering 学科（通称）；纪律n. 管教vt. discipline 互动vt. interact 自制力n. self-discipline 小（中、大）学教育primary-level (or secondary-level/ tertiary-level ) education 职业教育vocational education 学校给学生的教育n. schooling 学校提供的课程总称n. curriculum ( pl. curricula) 心理的adj. psychological 参与n. participation 熟练掌握……be proficient in 榜样role model 同龄人n. peer 对孩子/弱者过度保护adj. overprotective 家长给小孩的教育n. parenting 批判眼光看问题能力critical thinking abilities 有创造力的adj. creative/original 表现出色perform well 为…打好基础lay a solid foundation for 评估n. evaluation 对…非常好的掌握n. mastery 好奇心n. curiosity 精英n. elite 应试教育test-oriented education 富于想象力的imaginative 无知的adj. ignorant 误入歧途go astray 文盲（的）n.&adj. illiterate 给人动力的adj. motivating 未成年人n. minors 溺爱vt. spoil 青少年犯罪juvenile delinquency 欺负（n. “喜欢欺负人的孩子”）vt. bully 植物学n. botany 天文学n. astronomy 培养v. cultivate/ foster/ nurture 促进学生身心发展promote the student’s physical/mental (or intellectual) and emotional development 心理健康psychological soundness/ well-being/ welfare 给学生以动力give the students motivation to do sth/ motivate the students to do sth 传授知识impart/ inculcate knowledge 灌输高尚的道德观instill high moral values 给学生以灵感give the students inspiration 学生对老师所教知识的掌握students’grasp (or command) of what has been taught 就业技能employable skills 填鸭式教法教学生force-feed the students 死记硬背learn things by rote 责任感sense of obligation/ duty/ responsibility 记忆方程式、公式、定理、定律memorize equations, formulas, theorems and laws 盲从follow sth. blindly
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二. 知识与教育 (一)知识与智能 knowledge，n．知识，学问；认识；知道 knowledge acquisition 知识获取 knowledge hierarchy 知识体系 structure of knowledge 知识结构 comprehensive knowledge 全面的知识 scope of knowledge 知识面 value of knowledge 知识价值 knowledge industry 知识产业 knowledge management 知识管理 the aging of knowledge 知识老化 spread scientific knowledge 传播科学知识 thirst for knowledge 求知欲 Knowledge is infinite．／There is no limit to knowledge．学无止境(学海无涯)。 knowledgeable n．知识渊博的；有见识的 become knowledgable and professional 知识化、专业化 erudition n．博学，博识；学问；知识 erudite a．博学的，有学问的；n．博学之上，有学问的人 learned a．有学问的，博学的；精通某门学科的 a learned man 学者 learning n．知识；学问 book learning 书本知识 a man of great learning 博学之上，学问高深的人 have little learning 学识浅薄 an emergent branch of learning 一门新兴的学问 episteme n．(哲)知识 epistemic n．(哲)(关于)认识的；(关于)知识的 letters n．[用作单或复]文学；学问；文化修养 a man of letters文人 lore n．学问，知识；(有关某一学科的)全部知识 scholarship n．学术成就；学问，学识；奖学金 scholarly a．学者气质的；学者风度的
把教授如何反驳文章中三个分论点挺清楚，例子都是阅读文章里的所以不用记，听力里主要是在讲阅读文章中的例子有哪些缺陷或不严谨的地方，从而无法成为有效的论据，甚至成为别的观点的论据。 有自己的写作模式、写作套路。 先不限时写几篇，写完一篇就立刻打印出来逐字逐句修改（电脑上改容易偷懒），把过于简单的词和句子一一替换，注意别用太难的词和没把握的词，能用到6级词汇就差不多了，心情好了再拽两个托福词汇上去也就足够了。我觉得最好用的就是形容词和副词，可以记几个托福水平的精彩形容词和副词，选择自己看着顺眼的，在平凡的名词前加好看的形容词，在平淡的句子里随处放置抢眼的副词，这样文章一下子就丰富起来了。 插入语，句式变换，每段第一句试着倒装、或用被动语态 多用具体的详细的例子，别停留在就事论事上，可以试着延伸到生活的其他方面 注意线性思维，“总分总” 托福作文写五段，第一段是中心思想段，二三四是支持段落，最后是总结段落 无论是综合写作还是独立写作，考生追求的基本目标是把想说的意思用书面英语表达清楚，让阅卷人读懂和明白。从语言角度来说，有两大标准，即准确性和多样化。能够达到词词准确，又使用到不同的词句来表达相同、相似的意思，从语言角度来说已经符合托福考试的高分要求。 仿写。只看不写，永远不能将输入语言化成输出语言。尽量仿写整句，保持原句结构，替换内容！ In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that.........+观点：In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers。用一句话说，简单地认为父母是最好的老师是相当肤浅的。 综合写作部分的评分标准： 1、内容的完整性和准确性。简单地说，就是文章是否有将讲座中的关键信息点完整、准确地提 取出来，并和阅读材料中的相关内容有效地一一对应。如果讲座中的信息点有缺失，那么会有一定程度 的扣分；如果只写了有关阅读材料的观点，得1分。 文章的组织机构，词汇和语法的正确性和准确性。高分的作文需要做到条理清晰，结构连贯，用词 恰当，能够准确地表达讲座中的观点与阅读材料中的观点是如何相互联系的，只要作文中的错误不至于 使内容表述出现误解，一些偶尔出现的语言错误，如单词拼写、单复数问题等，不会对作文成绩产生很 大影响，当然，错误肯定是越少越好的。 独立写作部分的评分标准： 1、有效回应题目，阐明文章主题。一般来说，独立写作完全跑题的情况很少，但是很多考生在 展开讨论时所采用的论据，比较容易出现跟主题关联性不大的情况，即局部答非所问的现象，从而影响 了得分。2、逻辑条理清楚，论证充分展开。这一点的关键在于文章论证的展开，是否提供了大量的细节和例子来支持观点，而非泛泛而谈地说理。3、内容连贯一致，衔接自然流畅。达到内容连贯一致的文章通常全文围绕中心论点展开，而不会论据自相矛盾，也不会重复论证，有时候通过一些表示因果、先后、递进的关系连词可以起到粘合剂的作用。4、遣词造句地道，语言驾驭娴熟。托福考试终究是语言考试，最终还是要考查考生的语言运用能力，但是要注意的是，并不是要求考生通篇都用难词偏语长句，而是要会变化着用一些美国人常用的语句把自己的想法表达清楚，所以建议考生尽量多阅读和模仿英文原版材料，这样写出来的文章才能够原汁原味。
托福独立写作八大话题 众所周知，托福独立写作是托福写作的一部分，涉及到的题材也非常多。下面是文都国际教育小编给大家整理的8个常见的写作话题，希望能给大家提供帮助。 教育类话题 教育类话题主要涉及到学生的一些基本情况，包括选课、就业、学校活动以及课下作业等很多方面。此外，学校的一些决策、设备变更、教师选择等也都有涉及。教育类话题在托福写作中的占比很高，在历年托福写作考试中大概占据25%左右的题目。 高分句型：现在，除了学习以外，还应鼓励学生们在其他很多方面培养兴趣，例如体育，绘画和音乐等。 —>Today, in addition to_____, a student is also encouraged to _____ 满分词汇：培养(某种素质) —> cultivate/foster/nurture(vts)心理健康—> psychological soundness/well-being/welfare(nouns) 社会类话题 社会类话题涉及的范围很广，主要是指一些社会话题、事件以及观点类问题。例如：Do you agree or disagree that society benefits more from works of greatartists than from political leaders.是否同意：艺术家比政治家对社会的贡献大。 高分句型：摩天大厦造的环境问题，很多人开始反思摩天大楼是否必要. —>With these problems and the effect _____ has exerted on _____,many people have begun to wonder _____. 满分词汇：生活节奏加速—> the tempo/pace of life has accelerated导致人与人的疏远—> create alienation between people 科技类话题 说到“科技”，我们可能会想到现在日益发展的手机、电脑以及各种各样新出现的科技产品等。这些科技产品使得我们的生活变得更加便利，高效。 高分句型：互联网对人们的生活方式产生了深远的影响，它变革了人们生活方式以及思考问题的方式。 —> _____ exerts such a profound effect on _____that _____. 满分词汇：尖端的技术—> cutting-edged(adj) technology信息爆炸—> information explosion/ information overload
托福写作15个写作模板，100句常用句型 出国留学，托福考试必不可少，以下是15个TOEFL的托福作文模板，100句常用句型按照托福作文结构组合而成。 托福写作作文文套一 Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.For instance,____________________ Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________For example,____________________ The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________ Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________. In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A. 托福写作作文文套二 A or B 将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity fo _________is that___________________ The second reason can be seen by every person that________. In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________. There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________.
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托福写作之对比类型考题 摘要：托福写作之对比类型考题！下面为大家介绍托福写作之对比类型考题。大家是否对对比类型的考题熟悉呢?这种类型的考题在写作中也是经常会遇到的，希望同学们能够重视起来，把能掌握到的考点不要放过。下面就一起来看看。 下面为大家介绍托福写作之对比类型考题。大家是否对对比类型的考题熟悉呢?这种类型的考题在写作中也是经常会遇到的，希望同学们能够重视起来，把能掌握到的考点不要放过。下面就一起来看看。 一、对比考题何其多 对比类型考题在历年托福独立写作考题中，会占到相当大的比重，此类例题比比皆是。例如，从 2015年1月份第一场托福考试起到最近的4月12日的9场考试10道考题(3月7日的考试有两道考题)中就有5道考题就是对比型考题(2015.1.25，2015.2.1，2015.3.7(1)，2015.3.7 (2)，2015.3.28)大家先来简单回顾几个托福真题： 2015.1.10 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? University students should be required to take basic science classes even if they are not part of the field of the study. 2015.1.11 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important characteristic of a successful politician or leader is good communication skills. 2015.1.25 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates and partner can communicate with each other face to face to finish the project better than by sending e-mail. 2015.1.31 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that the whole societies today expect to young people to follow and obey are too strict. 2015.2.1 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. 二、对比类考题的分类 按比较对象分类可以分为以下三类： 1)A or B 这类对比在题目中会有非常明显对两个对比对象，在选择观点时，只选其一(骑墙式写法在托福写作中不受欢
托福写作的分段技巧解析 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家一些托福写作小技巧，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 1.变换句子的开头结构 名词做主语 介词短语作状语 副词作状语 状语从句 分词短语作状语 形容词短语作状语 主语从句 不定式短语做主语或状语
动名词做主语 To begin with, even in such areas as puter science, where it is estimated that much of what a student earns today wi be obsoete in just five years, an advanced degree and the education it represents wi continue to be of benefit. Unike undergraduate education, which is divided into a number of sma educationa units every term, post-baaaureate education is concentrated on deeper earning in fewer areas. Moreover, most graduate education requires extended, critica focus on pex issues or research projects. And even if the technica information reevant to peting a graduate-eve project bees outmoded, the earned critica methods and probem-soving approaches wi not. 2. 使用不同的句型结构 Today’s education system paces too much emphasis on students’ desires rather than their needs. Aordingy, students are searching for the easy way out, and educators are wiingy conspiring with them. As opposed to this trend, I woud argue that students shoud study what is presented to
十三个万能理由 一.成就感(achievement) 关键词句: a sense of achievement virtuous cycle 良性循环grand feat/exploit 辉煌的业绩attainment of goals elevate our self-esteem be conductive to self-actualization 有助于自我实现 万能段落：By doing (something), we can enjoy a sense of achievement. The feat of accomplishing is conductive to self-actualization, which will inevitably elevate our self-esteem. Inflated esteem will proportionally contribute to even more solid achievement. This is virtuous cycle toward a better career. For example, I have a relative who works in a big company. He was once awarded the opportunity to travel abroad that excited him for quite a long time. After that he worked even harder and gained the elevated esteem. 二.被认可感(acknowledgement) 关键词句: A willing ox 任劳任怨的人selfless contribution the stat of being recognized a sense of belonging provide satisfaction motivation for further improvement 万能段落: By acknowledgement, I mean the state of being recognized. When we are recognized by our company (school/college/group/community or society), we can experience a sense of belonging. The feeling of being recognized provides satisfaction and motivation for further improvement. Hence, when a person can be identified by others, the subsequent outcome can be beyond imagination. Bill Gates, through luck, diligence, and team spirit leads Microsoft to splendor. And he distributes his wealth generously, which won him a name: the greatest philanthropist around the world. His success is acknowledged by our society. And his satisfaction index can be higher than that of any other peers. 三.健康(health) 关键词句: ingredients to sound health 健康的要素physical health psychological health well-adjusted to the society sound health as fit as a fiddle 身体好discard health hazard robust strength 体力充沛Health is above wealth. 万能段落：Fresh air, clean water and nutritious food are indispensable ingredients to sound health. So if we live in good environment and enjoy healthful diet, our physical health can be guaranteed. Also if we have positive hobbies like reading and other mental pursuits, our psychological health can be elevated. Anyway, health is above wealth, we should exert our efforts to discard health hazard in order to attain a better life. 四.安全(safety) 关键词句: be protected against failure, damage a sense of security facilitate the harmony of society Safety is the top priority. 万能段落：Safety refers to the condition of being protected against failure, damage, error, accidents, harm, et cetera. Safety is usually our main concern. 五.方便(convenience) 关键词句: perform daily errands 从事日常业务get easy access to 容易接近do not have to exert ourselves too much 不用太费力气Convenience matters.便利至关重要 万能段落：Convenience means being suitable and useful for us to carry out daily tasks. If something is convenient and easy to be made use of, we get easy access it, then the potential can be fully exploited. We do not have to exert ourselves too much to obtain the benefit. As a result, we can devote more time and efforts to accomplishing other business that is urgent and pivotal.