高考英语真题分类汇编 专题十七 短文改错

误用a和the（固定搭配，各自单独使用的地方）
多余的冠词或则少冠词。
1）We may be one family and live under a same roof.
2）As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of pan
3）It is so beautiful place that you must visit it.
4）Now people get a lot of informations from TV.
3.连词错误
连词包括关系代词、副词，并列连词and/ or/but等（一般考查从句关系who/
whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether）
1）I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei.
高考英语短文改错题技巧及练习
一、短文改错常见错误类型
1.谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点常见动词错误类型有
①一般现在时与一般过去时错用；② and前后动词时态不一致;
③主谓不一致; ④缺少动词,特别是be动词;
⑤第三人称单数形式错用;⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。
1）They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies.
单复数名词错用；注意区分名词是可数还是不可数；或根据名词前的修饰语或谓语动词的单复数来判断。
1）I’ll get good marks in all my subject.
2）Their word were a great encouragement to me.

2023高考英语湖北卷短文改错历年真题及答案短文改错是高考英语考试中的一个重要环节，通过对文章中存在的错误进行纠正，评价学生对语法、拼写、词汇等方面的掌握程度。

下面是一些历年湖北卷英语短文改错题目及答案的汇总，供同学们参考。

【2017年湖北卷短文改错题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Lisa,How are you? It's always so nice to hear of/from you. Now I'm writing to tell you enjoying my new school life in the No.1 Middle School in our city. Everything here are very different from my old school. However, I've adjusted to them quickly and I've made many new friends here. From on my first day, I was impressed by the teachers, who gave up their own time tohelp students with their study. All the teacher are very patient and friendly, which makes me feel comfortable in class. Also, I've joined many school activities, that give me a chance to develop my interest. Although I felt nervous at first, I have gradually gained confidence and my English has also improved very much.Best wishes,Tom【参考答案】Dear Lisa,How are you? It's always so nice to hear from you. Now I'm writing to tell you about/enjoying my new school life in the No.1 Middle School in our city. Everything here is very different from my old school. However, I've adjusted to it quickly and I've made many new friends here. From/on my first day, I was impressed by the teachers, who gave up their own time to help students with their study. All the teachers are very patient and friendly, which makes me feel comfortable in class. Also, I've joined many school activities, which give me a chance to develop my interest. Although I felt nervous at first, I have gradually gained confidence and my English has also improved very much.Best wishes,Tom【2018年湖北卷短文改错题目】请你仔细阅读下面短文，短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

全国高考英语短文改错真题汇编(1997-2017年)(20年真题汇编，建议下载保存)(绝对精品文档，价值很高，值得下载收藏)NMET 1997Dear Bob,Hello.I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.I go Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.Yours,Li HuaNMET 1998My Favorite SportMy favorite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep mind that we play for the team instead ourselves.Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience (服从). Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.NMET 1999The Problem with TelevisionNow I can’t watch much television but a few years ago I was used to watch it every night. I was often a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are too many people among my family. Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred another. I am happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing and there was no way of settle the matter except by selling the TV set. Now someone at home reads instead.2000 春季Dear Peter,Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday party on Sunday. I’d like very much come but had an examination on Monday morning. It is a very important exam but I can’t affor d to fail it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that I won’t be able to come in this time. Hope you can understand. I’ll take this chance wish you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day!Yours,Li MingNMET 2000The day before the speech contest (比赛) English teacher talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success, but it didn’t matter that I would win or not. When I was in the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my Englishteacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered her words and calm down. I did a good job and won the first prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher.2001年（全国卷II）Like most of my schoolmates, I have either brothers nor sisters, in any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? What things are in other homes, I wonder.2002年（全国卷II）Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animal. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.2003年（全国卷II）When I first learned write in English, I ran into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her and should putdown 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. she liked it very much and reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one . Their word were a great encouragement to me.2004年（全国卷II）Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as fool. So I feel unhappy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?Yours,Xiao Wei2005 年（全国卷III）Dear Mr. Brown,I am writing to thank you with your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in English. My pronunciation was terribly. I could only speak a few words. But one and a half year later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot of from your encouraging words. I will always remember what you said, “If you try to, you can be No. 1!” I hope you’ve had pleasant journey home and will come toChina again sometimes in the future. I will write again and send you the photos we take together.Yours sincerely,Li Min2006年（全国卷III）An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea between France and England in the balloon in 1784. High over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quick and the balloon was coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise higher again. So it was still too close to the water. Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in England was very surprised see this when the balloon landed in front of them.2006年（全国卷II）We had guests last night who have not stayed in a B&B hotel ago. They did not want breakfast because that they were going out early in the morning. They came back lately and had some tea. I came in the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light. He was looking for a glass the cupboard. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests. I just smiled to me and thought, “What can I do? We are guests after all.”2007年（全国卷II）Dear Grandpa,Thank you for your letter. My school is organizing a basketball team and there’s just a chance which I can join it. I'm little of course, but terribly quick and bravely. While the others are jumping about in the air, I can run under my legs and get the ball. It will be lots of fun for practicing out in the playground in the afternoon with the tree around us all red and yellow and everybody laughing and shout. These are the happier girls I've ever seen and I' m the happiest in all! I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things I' m doing at school, but the bell was ringing, so I just have to stop here.Love,Judy2008年（全国卷I）Dear Alice,I have just got some good mews to tell to you. I win a national prize for painting last week. My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying there for half a month, visiting place of interest or practicing my English as well. We’ve been writing to each for nearly a year now. I have often dreamed of talk face to face with you. I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that time. Perhaps we could go out do some sightseeing together.Best,Lily2008年（全国卷II）If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as good as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture or show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success.2009年（全国卷II）Hi Susan,I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to return to your bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon, and I was hold up on my way back. Just before I turned corner of Park Street, I happened to see an accident. The little girl was hurt and her mother needed help. So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. Istayed here for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all right. When I got back, it were already 6 pm. I hope you understand.Thank you!Li Ling2010年（全国卷I）It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do was to write a story or present it. My teachers have been telling me how great my writing was. So if they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living near my house, who was a very much famous writer. He agreed to reading my story and give me some advices on how to write like a real writer.2010年（全国卷II）Christie was one of my best friend at high school. At that time, we often spend time together.Thank to her help, I made great progress in my study. Last year, she decided to study to abroad. In other words, we would be separated long time. Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. She said it was the best gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see her again in the near future.2011年（全国卷I）One of my unforgettable memory of my school in Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was goingto school. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunch bell finally rang, my friends and me met under a tall tree and had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was used to share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind of cake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. Now Aigulie and I study at different colleges or we can only see each other during the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I miss the food andthe good time we had together.2011年（全国卷II）Dear George,It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C. , that we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.Yours,Mike2012年（全国卷I）Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need. That won't easy, I know，but we have to start anywhere. What's more, we can go to work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, how many times have you walked out of a room and left the lights or television when no one else is there?2012年（全国卷II）Dear Editor,I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live without water and neither agriculture or industry can gowithout it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no drinking water should left running. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. Sincerely,Li Hua2013年新课标1I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he is the gentlest man I have never known.2013年新课标2The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain．It is said to have started in the early 1800’s．Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night．This custom soon becomes another meal of day．Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain （瓷器）industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles．When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits．This made for the grow in the porcelain industry．2013年(全国I卷）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere fromthe hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.2013年(全国II卷）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.2014年(全国I卷）Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!2014年(全国II卷）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lesson in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can doreading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（2015全国I卷）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.（2015全国II卷）One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a sho p. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.（2016新课标I）My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncles tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the shortperiod of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.（2016新课标II）The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.（2016新课标III）The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.（2017新课标I）In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.（2017新课标II）Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden , that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！（2017新课标III）When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.1997-2017年全国卷短文改错汇编答案NMET 19971. learn 改为learnt或learned。

高考英语短文改错练习题及答案(总4页)--本页仅作为文档封面，使用时请直接删除即可----内页可以根据需求调整合适字体及大小--(一)Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As every one knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the footof the mountain.The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busytaking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired thatI fell asleepat the moment my head touched the pillow.（二）Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people. According to studies, many children spend more time watchingtelevisionthan they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worriesmuch about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can bevery noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, allplanned and written by grown-ups to make children to want thingsthat they don't real need.（三）I’m the captain o f our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won sever al games. There will an important game next month. But one of the best player in our team told me just then thathe wouldn’tplay basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more timepreparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him.But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sportsand college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend hadno choice. He wanted to make their parents happy.(四)When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties . The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese andtried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised meto keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English .One day Iwrotea little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much and reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.（五）Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself asshy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for meto do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me asa fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends.I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talkedto each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger atonce. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’tseem to work. Can you tell me about what I should doYours,Xiao Wei（六）On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museumand some parks. But I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes, a concert can be very excited.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a concertcost so much. I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to meas birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records, there are no needto spend money.All right. That’s how I' m going to do.（七）Dear Susan,I’m very glad to hear about you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately,I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classesin the afternoon.You won’t find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class willbe over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together toa hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekendover dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours,Zhang Ming(八)You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books.Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.They have been reports in America about people trying to steal personInformations for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easily. But not allinformation are good to society. For example, you can find such informationlike how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future.（九）Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby whichis both interested and fun. And every year more and more peoplestarta stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which can even last lifetime . Starting your collection of stamps are easy becausethey are nowhere. Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and lettersfrom friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world. So onceyou’ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in theStamp Collectors’Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.（十）Though a great progress has been made in science these years,thereare still many people live in poor conditions. They make theirlivesby collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to schoolbecause they have not enough money to send their children tothere.Why you think so many people still suffer from povertynow?The answer lies on the population explosion. Apresidentof a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blameforthe poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child withoutlimit.”Although this few words sound simple enough, theyhaveclear pointed out one of the causes of the populationexplosion.（1）第一行：two-days 改为two-day 第二行：mountain 前加a第三行：noon后加when 第四行：them改为us第五行：visiting 改为visited 第六行：pictures；passed第七行：去down 第八行：and改为but 第九行：去at（2）第一行：with改为on 第二行：many改为some 第三行：becauseof第四行：删去 be；read改为reading 第五行：programs第六行：noisy第七行：On改为In 第八行：去掉want前的to；real改为really(3)第一行：so改为and 第二行：will后加be第三行：player 改为players；then改为now 第四行：once改为any；删去in第五行：to改为for 第六行：go改为going；第七行：was改为is第八行：their改为his(4)第一行：write后加in 第二行：去掉第一个in 第三行：anything改为everything第四行：my改为a；去掉should 第五行：talk改为talking 第六行：me改为myself第七行：showed 后加it 第八行：reads改为read；word改为words(5)第一行：of改为from 第二行：quietly改为quiet 第三行：well后加as；to改为at第四行：happy改为unhappy/sad 第五行：that改为why；talked 改为talk第六行：stranger改为strangers 第七行：since改为but 第八行：去掉about(6)第一行：划掉myself ；a 改为the 第二行：visit 改为visiting 第三行：my前加of第四行：excited 改为exciting 第五行：So改为But第六行：cost改为costs；giving改为given 第七行：are改为is第八行：how改为what（7）第一行：去掉about；去掉the 第二行：although改为because / as第三行：find 后加it 第四行：minute 改为minutes；rightly 改为right第五行：or 改为and ；去掉together；第六行：with 改为about第七行：Having 改为Have（8）第一行：kinds 改为kinds of ；minute改为minutes 第二行：have改为having第三行：去掉even 第四行：They改为There ；person改为personal第五行：informations改为information；easily改为easy第六行：are改为is 第七行：what改为how（9）第一行：age改为ages 第二行：interested改为interesting第三行：your改为their；what改为which/that第四行：lifetime前加a；are改为 is 第五行：nowhere改为everywhere第六行：for改为with；So改为But 第七行：去掉in第八行：exist改为exists（10）第一行：去掉a 第二行：live改为living 第三行：thing改为things第四行：去掉第二个to 第五行：在you前加do 第六行：on改为in第七行：us改为we 第八行：child改为children 第九行：tthis----these第十行：clear改为clearly。