高中英语新高考-作文指导与解读：创新作文这样练成——传统逻辑、创新模式、情感穿插
全国英语创新大赛作文题目要求
Direction:
Laziness or lack of ambition is like dead weight on our chests. All it takes is one big push and we’re free, but that “big push”is not always easy to muster because the effort seems a lot more difficult than it actually is. The situation is similar to trying to get out of bed as soon as we awaken from a long sleep.
Write an essay with no less than 300 words, in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
拿到一篇文章，一旦确定题目，我们这样在纸上迅速写下只言片语（单词都可以），围绕：
1.内因：内在的动机、品格、知识；外因：外在的环境、条件
2.正反/好坏：分两种情况：假设主要角色为A，次要角色为B。考虑A 的好处或积极性，B的弊端；A的坏处，但是可以如何克服。
3. 物质、心理、社会。物质层面指的是金钱（也可以是说经济）、身体、空间、个人知识等；精神层面指的是情感、心理等；社会层面指的是集体、社区、道德、法律等。
4. 个人、社会(政府)、他人（集体）。这主要是围绕针对社会问题提出的建议，当然个人与他人包含了交际方向。
5. 正能量互补。正能量指的是积极方面的词汇，例如健康、幸福、目标、动力、美、乐于助人等。我们想到其中的一个，就要学会联想其它的，往往能形成逻辑链。
以上完成后，就要考虑：写出简单句，然后将它们分成三个左右的主题句。接下来就要针对主题句进行拓展了，拓展点有七个：1.因果；2.条件；
3.定义；
4.用途；
5.方法/方式；
6.比拟；
7.举例。
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传统论文思维
概述：先定义，再原因，正反观点，举例子，措施。需要积累大量句子，词块，以及依托美文句子词块表达的逻辑思维。
一、定义（What is a big push）
A big push can be a bonus materially and mentally or a warning of potential trouble one presents to himself to overcome his laziness or lack of ambition.
二、原因+结果(cause and effect)
TS: necessary
原因：
It is not easy for people to step out of comfort zone.—》used to inertia（惰性）（文章中所有生词都在我的CCtalk公益美文课里有）结果：
1. A big push can awaken us to the reality (物质层次)—》take specific measures to respond to different situations
2. goal: A big push inspires one’s enthusiasm and confidence (心理层次+正能量) --》build up one’s determination and perseverance
3. responsibility: A big push can force to take up due social responsibility and familial responsibility. (社会层次)
三、方法（How）
A big push takes effort and time definitely, but the following strategies can help you translate your push into action.
Set up small and achievable goals --》start with concrete objectives. Don’t bite off too much
Take pride in your achievements, as they are stepping stones to your goals.
Make a commitment publicly --》there is sufficient pressure to overcome laziness
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下水文章
A big push can be a bonus materially and mentally or a warning of potential trouble one presents to himself to overcome his laziness or lack of ambition.
A big push is undoubtedly necessary just because it is human’s nature to stick to one's comfort zone. Inertia can deprive our enthusiasm and our best intentions come to nothing eventually. (反向论证）However, once inertia is overcome, we will reap great rewards. （举例论证）For example, we may wake up to the reality and respond to it. Besides, if a big push is our goal, it not only arouses our lost enthusiasm, like the slumbering volcano, but also builds our determination and perseverance. Some young often are reluctant to write because they find it hard to seek inspiration. Actually, inspiration comes from purposeful daily practice, which in turn strengthens one’s perseverance and determination. Last, our sense of social responsibility serves as a big push. Often, when laziness sets in, think of the consequence others will suffer because no one is a lonely island nowadays especially in the team work.
Exactly, a big push takes effort and time, but the following strategies can help you translate your push into action.
First, set small and achievable goals with concrete objectives. Don’t bite off too much. An impractical goal might well leave one at a loss where to start. Then follows laziness accompanied by various excuses. Second, take pride in our achievements, as they are stepping stones to our goals. Our lack of confidence mostly
results from that of the sense of achievement. So see every bit of achievement as a bonus and keep going for a bigger vision of future. Third, make a commitment publicly. Honestly, a big push alone can guarantee success. Proper supervision can put sufficient pressure on one to overcome laziness.
In conclusion, a big push is just the catalyst kindling our inner fire to pursue our goals. It can only serve its purpose with due supervision and unceasing effort.
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创新模式
概括：
方法二：演讲文体。大量排比的疑问句，通过揭露问题，引出话题，吸引读者，呼吁推进。具体，先排比疑问句，再整齐划一呼吁祈使句，形式上统一的topic sentence. 内容是推进的，可以适行动的原因、行动的正反说理、行动的措施等。这样的处理，形式上做到衔接和连贯，内容上做到了递进。段内通过，first，besides， lately，等衔接词，完成了段内的闭合性。
方法三：小故事情景导入，加入自己的判断和感情，形成观点，推出文章。记叙文的写法。情节上的继续，描写句子可以短一些。情感的变化，推动了情节的发展。设计母亲的角色，因为更适合情节和人物个性。一定要注意，心理情节的变化。长短句结合。
方法四：书信体。概括问题---解决问题--注意写作语气用词的，口语化，亲切感
一、创新范文——演讲文体
How many times have we told ourselves not to procrastinate with absolute determination? How many times have we hate being so lazy as to get nowhere? What we need is give ourselves a big push!
Push ourselves now! A big push can be a bonus materially and mentally, or a warning of potential trouble. We should use it to overcome laziness or lack of ambition. It is human’s nature to stick to the comfort zone. Inertia can deprive our enthusiasm! We cannot afford the price!
Push ourselves now!The bright future is in sight. Once inertia is overcome, we will reap great rewards. We may wake up to the reality and respond to it. Besides, if a big push is our goal, it not only arouses our lost enthusiasm, the slumbering volcano, but also builds our determination and perseverance. Last, a big push is our sense of social responsibility. Often, when laziness grows in our heart, think of the consequence others will suffer because no one is a lonely island nowadays especially in the team work.
Push ourselves now! Exactly, a big push takes effort and time, but the following strategies can help translate our push into action. First, set small and achievable goals with concrete objectives. Don’
t bite off too much. An impractical goal might well leave one at a loss where to start. Then follows laziness accompanied by various excuses. Second, take pride in our achievements, as they are stepping stones to our goals. Our lack of confidence mostly results from that of the sense of achievement. So see every bit of achievement as a bonus and keep going for bigger vision of future. Third, make a commitment publicly. Proper supervision can put sufficient pressure on one to overcome laziness.
Push ourselves now! A big push is just the catalyst kindling our inner fire to pursue the goal.
想法来源：（尤利西斯）
Push off, and sitting well in order smite
The sounding furrows; for my purpose holds
To sail beyond the sunset, and the baths
Of all the western stars, until I die.
It may be that the gulfs will wash us down:
It may be we shall touch the Happy Isles,
我要乘坐大帆船，天涯海角走一遭，
看看月亮的安乐窝，晚霞升起的地方，
也许会死在风暴里，也许来到神秘岛，
二、创新范文——故事导入意识流形式
My friend Jack called me up and told that he would pay the price for his procrastination. But he didn’t really want to get started. My only response was that it was a big push that he needed. It can be a bonus materially and mentally, or a warning of potential trouble. I wished him to know that that it was human’s nature to stick to the comfort zone. Inertia can deprive our enthusiasm! We should use it to overcome laziness or lack of ambition.
Putting down the phone, I was reminded of last year when I was annoyed by my inertia too. I was reluctant to carry out any plan. My world was like a slumbering volcano. Until one day, I woke up to the reality. I have to respond to my inertia, which otherwise would have got me nowhere.
It must have been a tough road paved with thorns. I couldn’t help smiling bitterly. Exactly, a big push takes effort and time, but the following strategies did help me translate my push into action. First, I tried to set small and achievable goals with concrete objectives. My mother often told me not to bite off too much. She warned me that an impractical goal might well leave me at a loss. Then followed laziness accompanied by various excuses. Then, I take pride in my achievements, as they are stepping stones to my goals. My lack of confidence mostly results from that of the sense of achievement. It is quite wise to see every bit of
achievement as a bonus and keep going for a bigger vision of future. It may seem foolish if you know I made a commitment publicly. Only I know that proper supervision can put sufficient pressure on me to overcome laziness.
Could I tell Jack about it?
I should promise him that the bright future is in sight once inertia is overcome. It not only arouses his lost enthusiasm, but also builds his determination and perseverance.
I then dialed his number. I cannot wait to tell him that a big push is just the catalyst kindling his inner fire to pursue the goal.
想法来源：（达洛维夫人）
Mrs. Dalloway said she would buy the flowers herself.
For Lucy had her work cut out for her. The doors would be taken off their hinges; umpelmayer's men were coming. And then, thought Clarissa Dalloway, what a morning—fresh as if issued to children on a beach.
达洛维夫人说她要亲自去买些花。
因为露西已有一份合适的工作要做。要把门从铰链上卸下来；昂伯尔梅尔公司的人就要到了。然后，克拉丽莎·达洛维思忖，多惬意的早晨啊——空气清新得仿佛是特意送给海滩上的孩子们似的。
作文一 For a better understanding between parents and children （Generation Gap） 范文一 Nowadays，there is often a lack of understanding between parents and children. Children always complain that their parents are out of date，while parents can't approve of what their children say and do. Thus，a big generation gap is formed. The gap remains wide for many reasons. Children want to be free to choose their own friends， select their own classes in school，plan their own future ，earn and spend their own money ，and generally run their own life in a more independent way than many parents allow. Also，young children wish to be understood by their parents，but most parents don't quite understand their children. They regard it as their responsibility to teach their offspring traditional beliefs. They want them to be obedient and do well in school . Therefore，misunderstanding often arise from parents' tendency to interfere in children's daily activities. In my opinion，most problems between parents and children could be solved by joint efforts of both sides to enhance mutual understanding. 范文二 Nowadays there is often a lack of understanding between parent and child. Parents often complain about their children's "unreasonable" behavior, while children usually think their parents too "old-fashioned." Then, when a child has a problem, he usually goes to his intimate friends for sympathy and advice, leaving his parents totally in the dark. There are some possible reasons for the present situation. First, the two generations, having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes for the things around them and thus have little in common to talk about. Second, parents and children, due to the misunderstanding between them, may even feel it uncomfortable to sit face to face with each other talking. Finally, with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, both parent and child are too busy to spare enough time to exchange ideas, even if they find it necessary to communicate. As a result, the gap between them is growing wider and wider. To bridge this so-called generation gap, in my opinion, both parent and child should make an effort. The children should respect their seniors. The older generation, on the other hand, should show solicitude for the young. As for their differences, both generations should make allowance for each other. If they will take the first step by actually talking to one another, it won't be long before the arrival of a better understanding between parent and child. 作文二 Energy problem 范文一 how to solve the energy problem 1.有人认为解决能源危机的方法是厉行节约。 2.有人则认为开发新能源是最好的办法。 3.我的方法。 Nowadays, the world is facing the big problem of energy shortages. The energy that we can use is running out day by day. Maybe one day we will all end up drinking dirty water if we don't do something about it. Here are some things that everyone can do to help save energy. First, we must try to use our air conditioner less during the summer months, as this consumes a great deal of electricity. Second, we should try to remember to use less water while washing our hair. Third, we must not let leaky taps run all day. We should fix them as soon as possible. We should, also, try to close the fridge as quickly as possible. This will save a lot of electricity and is good for the fridge as well. Another thing we can do is to ride our bicycles instead of driving cars or riding buses. They "drink" lots of petrol,
【篇一】高中生英语话题作文 In recent years, the forests have been getting smaller and smaller for more and more people cut down trees for money. As trees grow naturally, people don't need to invest anything on them. But cutting down trees has destroyed our nature. We have already seen the bad consequence. For example, we always suffer from the flood and drought disaster; many animals are facing the danger of dying out, because their habitats have been destroyed; deserts are expanding, and sandstorms are emerging. Our environment has been changed from bad to worse due to the reduction of forests. Thus, the government should appeal people that cutting down trees breaks the balance of our nature. Those who continue to cut down trees should be punished severely. 近年来，由于越来越多的人为了赚钱而砍伐树木，森林面积变得越来越小。由于树木是自然生长的，所以人们不需要对它们进行任何投资。但是砍伐树木破坏了我们的自然环境。我们已经看到了不好的后果了。例如，我们总是遭受水灾和旱灾；许多动物因栖息地被破坏正面临灭绝的危险；沙漠范围正在扩大；沙尘暴也在崭露头角。由于森林面积的减少，我们的环境已经变得越来越糟糕。因此，政府应该呼吁人们砍伐树木会破坏我们的自然平衡。那些继续砍伐树木的人应该受到严惩。 【篇二】高中生英语话题作文 Almost everyone wants to live a long life, but longevity is not for all people. It is reported that most long life people are in villages, far away from big cities. In village, life is closer to nature. The sky there is clear and pretty; the air is fresh; the water is clean; and the food they eat are natural, without any chemicals. Besides, those villages are abundant in green trees, beautiful flowers, fresh fruit, and wild animals, which can evoke people's passions for life. Moreover, the living pace in those villages is rather slow. People suffer less stress than cities’. Thus, they have more freedom to enjoy what they like. No wonder that most villagers are strong and healthy. If I become old someday, I would like to move to village to enjoy a more comfortable and pleasant life. 几乎每个人都想要长寿，但并不是所有人都可以长寿的。据报道，长寿的人多住在远离大城市的农村。在乡村，生活更接近自然。那里的天空晴朗而美丽；空气清新；水是干净的；他们吃的食物是天然的，没有任何化学物质。此外，这些村庄有大量的绿树、美丽的鲜花、新鲜的水果和野生动物，可以唤起人们对生活的热情。此外，这些村庄的生活节奏相当缓慢。人们承受的压力比城市小。因此，他们有更多的自由去享受他们喜欢的东西。难怪大多数乡村里的人都是身体健康的。如果有一天我老了，我也想搬到农村去享受更舒适和愉快的生活。
传统文化——必备词汇 1. Lantern Festival 元宵节 2. Embroidery 刺绣 3. Double-Ninth Festival 重阳节 4. Tomb Sweeping Day 清明节 5. paper cutting 剪纸 6. Siheyuan/Quadrangle 四合院 7. Warring States 战国 8. Kunqu Opera 昆曲 9. Flower Drum Song 花鼓戏 10. Confucian culture 儒家文化 11. Tang Poetry 唐诗 12. Tang Dynasty 唐朝 13. Mid-Autumn Festival 中秋节 14. Beijing Opera/Peking Opera 京剧 15. Beijing Roast Duck 北京烤鸭 16. Paper Cutting 剪纸 17. lunar calendar 农历 18. the Palace Museum 故宫博物院 19. traditional Chinese festivals 中国传统节日 20. protecting traditional Chinese culture 保护中国传统文化
传统文化——必备句子 1. There are lots of places of interest in Beijing. 2. There are many places of interest where you can experience the traditional Chinese culture in Beijing. 3. I'm glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. 4. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country 5. My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival which comes on the first day of the Chinese Lunar Year. 6. In a word, it is high time for us to treasure and develop our own valuable culture. 7. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. 8. In my opinion, some measures should be taken to protect traditional culture effectively. 一篇好的书面表达，不仅要有亮眼的词汇，语法正确的句子，还要条理清晰地阐述自己的观点，并做到有理有据。下面我们就结合考题来看一看有关传统文化写作的题目和范文。 传统文化——写作题目与范文 （一） 某中学生英文报就“保护中国传统文化”为主题举行英语征文活动。你准备给该报投稿，稿件内容包括： 1. 保护中国传统文化的重要性 2. 列举1-2个你所知道的国家或当地政府文化保护的事例; 3. 谈谈你对文化保护的建议。 注意： 1. 字数：120词。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
一、表示递进关系的关键词语additionally 加之；又besides 此外；除……之外equally important 同样重要的是furthermore 此外；而且in addition 另外 in other words 换句话说last but not least 最后但同样重要的是 moreover 而且；此外that is to say 即；就是；换句话说what’s more 而且；此外二、表示转折关系的关键词语although 虽然；尽管at the same time 同时；但是despite 不管；尽管；不论even if 即使 even though 即使however 然而；可是in spite of 不管instead 代替；而不是nevertheless 然而；不过on the contrary 正相反otherwise 另外；不同地 regardless of 不管；不顾 still 依然；仍然 though 虽然；可是 while 而 yet 然而；但是；仍 三、表示选择关系的关键词语 either…or………或…… instead of………，而不是…… neither…nor …和…都不… not…but…不是……而是…… rather than…宁可；胜过 whether…or not 是否 四、表示比较关系的关键词语 compare with/to 与……比较 equally 相等地；平等地 in comparison with 与……比较 in contrast 相反；大不相同 in contrast to 和……对比 in the same way 同样地 instead 代替；改为 on the contrary 正相反 while 而 五、表示因果关系的关键词语 accordingly 因此；从而 as a result of 作为结果 because （of）因为 consequently 从而；因此 due to 由于；应归于 hence 因此；从此 in that 由于；因为；既然 now that 因为；既然 on account of 由于 owing to 由于；因……的缘故 so 所以 so that 所以 thanks to 由于 therefore 因此；所以 thus 因此 六、用于表示总结的关键词语 above all 最重要的是 accordingly 于是 as a consequence 因此 as has been noted 如前所述 at last 最后 briefly 简要扼要地
1. 书面表达热点预猜（1） 假设你是李红，你的一位美国笔友Robert写E-mail问及你高考后暑假的安排，请根据以下要点，写一封100词左右的email回复他, 可以适当增加细节。 1. 学开车 2. 参加英语培训课程 3. 去北京看奥运会 4. 游览北京的名胜 注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 2.要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思； 3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。 Dear Robert, How time flies! ____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 【命题方向与写作提示】 高考英语书面表达写作素材都是与中学生的日常生活相关的话题，会避免出现考生不熟悉的话题，也不会出现农村或城市学生不熟悉的话题，注重考查考生的语言表达能力。本篇素材考查书信体裁的作文，是应用文的写作，话题涉及社会热点：北京奥运会，内容与中学生的实际生活相关：高考后暑假的安排，体裁是书信体的电子邮件。写作要点包括：1）问候；2）引入话题：高考临近，高考后的安排；3）学开车；4）参加英语培训课程；5）去北京看奥运会；6）游览北京的名胜；7）结束语。 【写作提示】 书面表达一定要注意要点齐全，写作中要注意适当增加细节以使上下文连贯，并使用一定数量的句式结构。 范文(One possible version) Dear Robert: How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory. What about you? As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However，I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China. I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English communication ability, With the 2008 Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US. I have been dreaming of Kobe’s performance long. After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon. That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK? Best wishes! 2. 书面表达热点预猜（2） 如今世界粮食短缺，价格飞涨，给部分地区造成社会动荡。假设在你校开展的研究性学习中，你们小组以“World Food Crisis”为题进行研究，现在请你代表你们小组向全体同学简要介绍你们的研究成果。主要内容如下：
高考英语作文中常用的替换词 1.individuals, characters, folks 替换（ people, persons） 2.positive, favorable, rosy （美好的） ,promising（有希望的） ,perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior 替换 good 3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill （有害的）替换 bad 如果 bad 做表语 ,可以有 be less impressive替换 eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation , as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.（ an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of, a host of, many, if not most）替 换 many. 注：用 many, if not most 一定要小心， many 后一定要有词。 most， if not all ，Eg. Many individuals ，if not most ，harbor the idea that同理?用. 替换 most. 5.a slice of, quiet a few, several替换 some 6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that,it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that）替 think （因为是书面语，所以要加 that） 7.affair, business, matter替换 thing 8.shared 替换 common 9.reap huge fruits 替换 get many benefits 10.for my part, from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion 11.Increasing（ly ）, growing 替换 more and more（注意没有 growingly 这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用 increasing/growing。修饰形容词，副词用 increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything, 或 little or nothing 替换 hardly 13. ?? beneficial, rewarding替换 helpful 14.shopper,client, consumer, purchaser替换 customer 15.exceedingly, extremely, intensely替换 very 16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable替换unnecessary,??avoidable
创新作文大赛范文2000字 导语：创新就是做别人没做过的事，走别人没走过的路，敢于打破思维定式，开辟新市场，新领域。下面小编收集了一些创新的作文，请大家认真阅读! 【创新的作文1】 创新是什么?创新就是做别人没做过的事，走别人没走过的路，敢于打破思维定式，开辟新市场，新领域。在这大千世界里，形形色色的人中不乏泛泛之辈，当人们惊羡他们现时的成就时，更应该看到他们成功背后的创新。那么，我们要怎样做到创新呢? 首先，创新需要有超前意识。黄汉清教授说过：“只有先声夺人，出奇制胜，不断创新新的体制，新的产品，新的市场和压倒竞争对手的新形势，企业才能立于不败之地。”其实，不仅在企业中，在生活中，在日常身边的小事中，这句话也同样有道理。在美国诺伊州的哈佛镇，有些孩子经常利用课余时间到火车上买爆米花。一个十岁的小男孩也加入了这一行列，他除了可在火车上叫卖外，还在爆米花中掺入奶油和盐，使味道更加可口。当然，他的爆米花比其他任何一个小孩都卖得好——因为他懂得如何比别人做的更好。这个男孩就是摩托罗拉公司的缔造者保罗·高尔文。他的成功秘诀不正是在别人面前抢占了先机吗?他的创新精神不正是他成功的前提吗?所以创新需要有超前意识。
其次，创新需要模仿加改良。创新需要模仿不等于完全照搬照抄，而是根据前人的经验，通过改良，通过自己的思考来改进。所以说，创新不能完全抛弃传统，要有所扬弃，有所继承。中国最年轻的全国性寿险公司的带头人，现任泰康人寿保险股份有限公司董事长兼首席执行官陈东升关于创新说过：“很多人把违背规律，按照自己的意志行事标榜为创新，结果是头破血留，这种案例太多了，所以我觉得还不如老老实实照葫芦画瓢。”他的这番话正是他的成功之路所总结出来的。当初他是一个怀揣着武汉大学经济学博士文凭的普通人，尽管嘉德拍卖三年的创业历程已经使他从一个学者成功转型为一个商人，但1996年他站在保险业的大门口，陈东升还只是一个没有任何实践经验的学生，因此他决定把国外保险巨头书包年积累的先进做法先照搬过来，几年时间里，陈东升先后走访了21个世界顶级的跨国保险金融集团。达到公司架构，营销模式，小到公司的装修风格，服务设施等，都被陈东升从国外带了回来。模仿让泰康站在了高的起点上，也让陈东升站在了中国保险业的制高点，所以有时候，创新是站在前人的肩膀上前进一小步，这一小步就是你的改良，你的创新，你的特点。 但是，创新不等于盲目尝试，其也要追寻规律。当代着名作家李开复说过：“创新并不重要，有用的创新才重要”。一个很有哲理性的寓言：一个猎物被抓住了，狮子还没有吃，狐狸如果想吃就得考虑考虑：狮子为什么不吃?是肚子不饿，不合胃口，
一. The Best Movie I like to see movie so much. When I have time, the first thing I’d like to do is to find the hot movies and then buy some snacks, enjoying my movie hours. After appreciating so many movies, The Lord of the Rings impresses me the most. This movie has three series and I like them all. Though the moive was made in about 2000, its technology is still not out of date. In the movie, the scenery is such beautiful that I can’t move my eyes away. It was shot in New Zealand and I have made up my mind that I must go there someday and have a look at the beautiful scenery. The movie shows me a scientific world with all kinds of creatures. It broadens my vision. 最好的电影 我很喜欢看电影。我有时间的时候，我想做的第一件事就是找一些热门电影，然后买些零食来享受我的电影时光。 在欣赏了那么多电影后,《魔戒》让我印象最深刻。这部电影有三个系列，每个系列我都喜欢。虽然这部电影大约在2000年拍摄，但是其技术却不过时。在电影中，景色是如此美丽，我都无法转移目光。那是在新西兰拍摄的。我已经下定决心，一定要去那里看一看那美丽的风景。
高中英语作文常用关联词及高级词汇 A、常用关联词 一、表示递进关系的关键词语additionally 加之；又 besides 此外；除……之外equally important 同样重要的是furthermore 此外；而且 in addition 另外 in other words 换句话说 last but not least 最后但同样重要的是moreover 而且；此外 that is to say 即；就是；换句话说what’s more 而且；此外 二、表示转折关系的关键词语 although 虽然；尽管 at the same time 同时；但是 despite 不管；尽管；不论even if 即使 even though 即使 however 然而；可是 in spite of 不管 instead 代替；而不是nevertheless 然而；不过 on the contrary 正相反 otherwise 另外；不同地regardless of 不管；不顾 still 依然；仍然 though 虽然；可是 while 而 yet 然而；但是；仍三、表示选择关系的关键词语either…or………或…… instead of………，而不是……neither…nor………和……都不……not…but…不是……而是……rather than…宁可；胜过whether…or not 是否 四、表示比较关系的关键词语 compare with/to 与……比较equally 相等地；平等地 in comparison with 与……比较 in contrast 相反；大不相同 in contrast to 和……对比 in the same way 同样地 instead 代替；改为 on the contrary 正相反 while 而 五、表示因果关系的关键词语accordingly 因此；从而 as a result of 作为结果 because （of）因为 consequently 从而；因此 due to 由于；应归于hence 因此；从此 in that 由于；因为；既然now that 因为；既然 on account of 由于 owing to 由于；因……的缘故so 所以 so that 所以 thanks to 由于 therefore 因此；所以 thus 因此 六、用于表示总结的关键词语 above all 最重要的是accordingly 于是 as a consequence 因此 as has been noted 如前所述 at last 最后 briefly 简要扼要地 by doing so 如此 certainly 当然地；无疑地consequently 因此 eventually 最后 hence 因此 in a word 总之 in brief 简言之 in conclusion 总之；最后 in short 简而言之 in summary 简要地说 in sum 总之；简而言之obviously 显然 on the whole 总体说来；整个看来
高三英语话题写作必备词汇 一、人品人物 【必备词句】 年龄 （1）a five-year-old boy一个五岁的男孩 （2）a boy aged five 一个五岁的男孩 （3）in my teens /twenties在我十/二十多岁时 （4）at the age of five在五岁时 （5）As a child, I liked to... 我小时候喜欢…… 出生 （1）was born in ... 出生在…… （2）be/come from a wealthy family出生于富裕人家 （3）was born into a peasant family出生于一个农民家庭 外表 （1）a 1.80-meter-tall boy 一个高1.8米的男孩 （2）overweight胖的；thin瘦的；slim苗条的；strong强壮的（3）look young for one’s age 显得比实际年龄年轻 （4）good-looking 长得好看； plain-looking 长得一般 （5）well dressed 穿得漂亮； neatly dressed 衣着干净整洁 能力 （1）efficient办事高效率的 （2）intelligent有智力的；creative 富创造力的 （3）a boy with great ability 能干的男孩 （4）a qualified teacher 一名合格的教师 （5）speak fluent English 讲流利的英语 （6）have a gift for = have a talent for 有……的天赋 （7）be skilled in 在……方面熟练 （8）be experienced in 在……方面有经验 健康 （1）be in good health/shape/condition 身体健康 （2）energetic精力充沛的；well-built身材健美的
创新作文_议论文1000字 本文从网络收集而来，上传到平台为了帮到更多的人，如果您需要使用本文档，请点击下载按钮下载本文档（有偿下载），另外祝您生活愉快，工作顺利，万事如意！ 创新作文，创新的作文又是什么呢？在CW上的作文写得好的都是创新作文，而在平常试卷当中能出现这种作文的又有多少呢？我喜欢写创新作文，因为它真实，写得不虚假；因为它真实，所以不虚假；因为它真实，所以不只限于格式化。 创新作文，我们要在创新作文中学到的又是什么呢？我们要学到它的创新精神，我们要不限于一格，要冲破原来老师说的好作文的模式。对，我们是能在CW写出很多创新的，有思想的，确切表达我们真情实感的好文章。但是，为什么我们不能在试卷上这样写呢？为什么只能照这原来的老模式来写文章的，我们要写出自己的真实想法，而不是在作文上造假！我们写的作文是我们要写的作文，而不是为了分而写作文。 创新作文，作文，是我们心底最真实的想法，最朴素的语言而构成的。作文，它不是我们获取高分的工具，它是我们在感动，失落，高兴，悲伤……时用自己的双手写出来的真实语言。作文，不正是我们生
活当中的点点滴滴的平凡事而组成的吗？ 创新作文，作文，它不是那种虚假的东西，它是我们心中最真诚的那份感动。正如我《打假》文中写道“盼到了，盼到了，美丽的春姑娘终于来到了我们的身边。她披着绿色的春纱，带着七彩的花环，沐浴着和煦的阳光，走过田野，飞过河流，越过高山……来到了我们的面前。估计很多同学们都认为这一个好的段落，可我不这么认为。”对，它写的不是我们真实的家乡，我不喜欢虚假，我不想把我的作文写得那么的……“恶心”。但在应试教育面前，似乎我的同学们他们都只能写他们不想写的作文，都想尽形容词来描写，编造，用那虚伪的美丽来掩饰那深处的虚假。 是的，我们不想再写那虚假的作文了；是的，我们要写我们真诚的作文；是的，我们要让我们的作文来一次彻底的革命！可为什么，我们的老师却不肯认同呢？在班上大力夸奖那些“格式”作文，而那些我认为真正的不错的创新作文却撂在背后。 曾经的曾经，我也是“格式”作文的追求者，总认为作文书上写的好，拼命地翻啊翻，看啊看，总想学到里面的精华，可我越来越发现，似乎我写出来的并不是我的本意，但我仍写“模式”作文。四年级时，班上还说要的订阅报纸，老妈买了一本《创新作文》给
20XX高考复习：20篇高考英语话题作文大汇总 一. The Best Movie I like to see movie so much. When I have time, the first thing I’d like to do is to find the hot movies and then buy some snacks, enjoying my movie hours. After appreciating so many movies, The Lord of the Rings impresses me the most. This movie has three series and I like them all. Though the moive was made in about 2000, its technology is still not out of date. In the movie, the scenery is so beautiful that I can’t move my eyes away. It was shot in New Zealand and I have made up my mind that I must go there someday and have a look at the beautiful scenery. The movie shows me a scientific world with all kinds of creatures. It broadens my vision. 最好的电影 我很喜欢看电影。我有时间的时候，我想做的第一件事就是找一些热门电影，
常用词： 重要的： key, crucial, imperative critical, important, significant, vital, substantial, indispensable 急剧地： dramatically，drastically，sharply，hugely，enormously，steeply，substantially，considerably，significantly，surprisingly，strikingly，radically，remarkably，vastly，noticeably 认为： think, believe, insist, maintain, assert, conclude, deem, hold, argue,, harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that, be firmly convinced, be fully co nvinced … 优势： advantage, merit, virtue, benefit, upside, strength 句子： 倒装： So expensive is food because of inflation that I could only afford food in students’ canteen. Not only must we be confident of our own future, we mus t also be ready to cope with any sort of setbacks. Only in this way/under successful control of/under special circumstances/after careful considerations can we……. （常用于解决问题型的作文） Only under successful control can we minimize the negative impacts and maximize positive impacts. 段落： 1. 引言段常采用的典型句式: It is commonly accepted/ thought that … There is a general debate/ discussion/ tendency (these days) that… There is no consensus of opinions among people as to .... Recently, there has aroused a controversial/heated debate/contention as to/ove r… It is well known to us that modern science plays an increasingly important role in our life. As is known to us, the problem of human population has long been a subject of discussion among the peoples of various countries of the world. We shouldn't ignore the fact that many cities are confronted with the problem of heavy traffic. No one can have failed to notice the fact that… 2．常见主体句子 1）观点类 1. Some people prefer living in the countryside, while others feel inclined to a life in big cities. 2.Some people believe the reason lies in industry，while others maintain it is good luck that gives rise to the success. Still others claim both the industry and good luck play an essential part. 3. When asked about/When it comes to/Faced with …most people claim that…, but others regard/consider differently. They argue that…. I am inclined to take the … side. 2).表示原因 1. Many factors lead/contribute to the trend of increasing in examination.