上海市2017-2019年三年中考英语考试试卷分类汇编:书面表达
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书面表达2019Ⅶ.Writing(作文)(共20分)94.Write at least 60 words according to the given information(根据以下材料,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟。
请从中选择你比较有感触的一条,可结合自己的经历,谈谈你的体会。
☀Don't judge people by their looks.Someone could be bad-looking and still be nice.—Katie❤When your friends do something stupid,you don't have to follow.—Jackie✪ Don't tell a teacher your dog ate your homework,especially if you don't have a dog.—Alex✈Life is like a“choose your own ending”book-you can take whatever adventures you want.—Sally(注意:.............................1...先将你选择的一条感悟抄写在答题纸带有引号的横线上。
2...短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
)..............................Ⅶ.94. 作文题目:结合阅读中的几个观点,人生哲理、选择朋友、以貌取人、要讲诚信,任选其中一个,结合自己的事来写一篇.今年的作文题一改往日的出题思路,让同学们在同一份试卷的阅读篇目中,选择一个主题结合自身实例来夹叙夹议写一篇文章。
出题思路新颖,角度多样化,学生有了更大选择空间和思考空间,不失为一次独特的作文命题。
在阅读中,同学们可以看到人生哲理的探究,可以选择讲讲朋友之间的故事,可以告诫大家以貌取人的错误之处,还可以自选实例说说诚信的必要性。
但话题选择越多,思考就越容易受到干扰。
快速确定一个话题,然后围绕这个话题去思考是很重要的。
确定话题后,注意审题,要结合自己的情况进行表达,可以列举自己身上的或自己遇到小事例进行说明。
参考范文:HonestyWe always hold one opinion that honesty is the most important thing in the world. We need to value and practice this quality in our daily life.In my exams, I experienced several occasions when I had to face up the correcting mistakes my teacher made on my test papers. Although my teacher gave me higher marks on the answer sheet, I honestly pointed out my actual mistakes overlooked by the teacher. I think honesty would be more precious than the unreal scores.I would like to say that only when we all, behave in an honest way in every aspect of our life together, can we have a more harmonious world.Don't Judge a Book by Its CoverAs an old saying goes, don’t judge a book by its cover. I didn't recognize the true meaning of it until last year. In my neighborhood came a man with a scary face. The first several times I came across him, I always ran way quickly, with hands covering my eyes. Later, I knew from my parents that he made a lot of effort to keep our neighborhood clean as a volunteer, which provides a better living environment for us. Realizing the mistake I made, I went to say sorry to him. And I really appreciated him for helping me learn that a person's internal beauty is always the most valuable part instead of his appearance.2018VI. Writing(作文)(共20分)94. Write at least 60 words on the topic" My progress(以“进步了”为题,写一信不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步,比如生活枝能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成。
请选取其中一个方面,结合自身经历,谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。
(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
)The following is for reference only(以下表达仅供参考)used to do/be…try my best to do…make progress in( doing)…【解答】My ProgressI've made a lot of progress in middle school.For example,my Chinese has greatly improved(高分句型一)(具体说明哪方面的进步).When I started middle school,I was weak in Chinese(高分句型二).My Chinese teacher encouraged me and gave me some advice.ThenI began to work hard on it.I not only listened more carefully in class but also read a lot ofbooks in my spare time,Besides,I often wrote articles and shared them with my teachers and classmates(说明取得进步的原因和自己的努力).Now I'm more interested in Chinese and I get higher grades.I'm pleased with my progress and thankful to my Chinese teacher and my classmates(我的感受).2017七. Writing(作文)(共20分)94.Write at least 60words on the topic"There's always hope"(以"常怀希望"为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)面临困惑的时候、经历变化的时候、感觉挫败的时候、遭遇逆境的时候…来自内心的坚持、他人的帮助、社会的关爱和科技的发展等,总能让人常怀希望.请选取一个方面谈谈你的理解(可结合自身或他人的经历).The following is for reference only (以下表达仅供参考)•get out of difficulty•give …a hand•never lose hope.There's always hope.【考点】S2:提纲作文.【分析】高分句型:句型一:I've got so many things from my class life.我从我的班级生活中得到了很多东西.get sth from从…得到…句型二:I want to try my best to help my friends and make some wonderful memories.我想尽力帮助我的朋友并制造一些美好的回忆.try one's best to do尽某人最大的努力做某事make some wonderful memories制造一些美好的回忆【解答】There's always hopeMy class life is full of happiness.During the four years'school life,I've got so many things from my class life.【高分句型一】Friendship is the most important and precious thing that I get.(友谊是最重要和最宝贵的东西)I never feel lonely because of my lovely friends.Once I failed,my friends supported me and gave me courage to move on.They helped me get out of difficulty.(失败时有朋友的支持和鼓励)When I was ill,my friends helped me and looked after me well.They give me a hand.(生病时有朋友的帮助和照顾)When I succeeded,my friends congratulated me and shared my happiness.(成功时有朋友的祝贺)Friendship is one of the greatest things that I got from my class life.As the old saying goes,"A friend in need is a friend indeed."I am so lucky that I get friendship from my class life.In the last three months,I want to try my best to help my friends and make some wonderful memories.【高分句型二】I expect to maintain the friendship between my classmates and me.Remember to never lose hope in life.(我的希望)。