地道科技英语单句写作
（1）【中文原句】这种新方法具有效率高、容易调整的优点。
【典型英语病句】This kind of new method have the advantage of high efficiency, easy adjustment.
【英语正句】 This new method has the advantages of high efficiency and easy adjustment.
（2）【中文原句】本文首先讨论了这种工艺的特点，然后讨论了它的产生。
【典型英语病句】This paper first discusses the features of this process, and then its generation is described.
【英语正句1】 This paper first discusses the features of this process, and then describes its generation.
【英语正句2】 This paper begins with the discussion on the features of this process, followed by the description of its generation.
（3）【中文原句】这台设备的特点是操作简便、价格低廉。
【典型英语病句】The features of this device are easy in operation and low in price.
【英语正句1】 The features of this device are easy operation and low price.
【英语正句2】 This device features easy operation and low price.
【英语正句3】 This device is characterized by (its) easy operation and low price.
（4）【中文原句】强调指出了去除率随处理时间变化的非线性规律。
【典型英语病句】 The non-linear law of the variance of the removal efficiency brought due to the variance of the treatment time has been pointed out emphatically.
【英语正句】 The non-linear law of the variation of the removal efficiency with the treatment time has been emphasized.
（5）【中文原句】我们的方法与以前讨论同一问题的文章中所述的不同。
【典型英语病句】Our method is different from previous articles discussed the same problem.
【英语正句】 Our method is different from those presented (或described) in the papers available (或published before) on (或discussing ) the same problem.
（6）【中文原句】只有通过对该系统性能的研究，我们才能了解它的优点。
【典型英语病句】Only through studied the performance of the system, its advantages can be understood.
【英语正句】 Only through the study of the performance of the system, can one (或we) understand (或appreciate) its advantages.
（7）【中文原句】本文对提高打印速度和印字质量提供了一种机辅设计手段。
【典型英语病句】This paper provided a kind of means of computer aid design for progressing the printing speed and the printing quality.
【英语正句】 This paper presents a CAD method for increasing the printing speed and improving the printing quality.
（8）【中文原句】同时给出了三轴稳定跟踪的数学描述及全补偿条件。
【典型英语病句】The mathematical description and the full compensation conditions of the 3-axes steady-tracking principle are also given.
【英语正句】The mathematical description of and the full-compensation conditions for the 3-axis steady-tracking principle are also given.
（9）【中文原句】文中比较了B 和 C，表明B将是C的基础。
【典型英语病句】B and C are compared. It shows that B should be the ground of C。
【英语正句】 A comparison of A with B is made, which shows that B will be the basis of C.
（10）【中文原句】对构件的承载能力作了具体的分析。
【典型英语病句】The detailed analysis of the ability of bearing loads of the components is given.
【英语正句】 A detailed (或concrete) analysis of the ability of the components to carry loads is made.
