浙江专用高考英语二轮复习第四部分写作训练专题三概要写作

最新浙江高考英语写作概要写作1.题型介绍◆选材特点（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；（2）所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。

◆评分参考（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；【（3）上下文的连贯性；（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况。

注意：理解准确，涵盖全部要求，完全使用自己的语言，准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，得分相应比较高。

相反，如果概要写作部分出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象，得分档次将会大大降低；所写内容与所提供内容无关不得分。

2.考查能力概要写作是阅读理解和书面表达二者的有机结合体。

简言之就是简要概括所给文章中心大意。

要求读者把文章的具体信息用具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而非抄袭文章原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，对文章的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。

这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。

3.写作步骤（1）通读全文。

明确文章类型，主题，结构。

记叙文：5W+1H&议论文：观点、论点、论据说明文：说明对象，说明方式（2）要点获取(4-5点)。

寻找主题句；关键词；提问题。

（3）要点转述。

同义替换；语态转换；词性改变；句子重构（4）要点衔接。

过渡型词句，逻辑连接词。

Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Yesterday Matt was sick.I picked up Archie from the sitter and Eloise from school and decided to run to Target for a few things.I had hoped to be in and out quickly.~I found a line with just one person ahead of me and began organizing my items on the conveyor.After placing my items，I looked up to see that the person ahead of me was an elderly woman. She was paying for her items with change and wanted to purchase each separately.I was frustrated with this woman and the inconvenience she had placed on me.But then I watched the young employee with this woman.I watched him help her count her change，ever so softly taking it from her shaking hands. When she asked if she had enough to buy a reusable bag，he told her she did and went two lines over to get one for her and then repackaged her items.Never once was this employee angry.He was nothing but patient and kind.As I was watching him，I saw that Eloise was too.She was standing next to the woman，watching the employee count the change.I realized I hadn’t been inconvenienced at all.That my daughter was instead witnessing kindness and patience and being taught this valuable lesson by a complete stranger.When the woman was finished，the employee began ringing up my items and thanked me for my patience.I then thanked him for teaching us patience andkindness by his treatment of that elderly woman.When he was finished I pushed my cart through the store trying to find the manager.I wanted her to know of the employee’s kindness and patience and how much it meant to me.After tracking her down and sharing the story with her，we left Target with a cart full of consumable items，but what is more，a heart full of gratitude for such an invaluable lesson.If you are ever in the Glendale Target，give Ishmael a smile and a nod.The world could use more people like him.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________…【写作指导】要写好记叙文的概要，先要找到以下两个问题的答案：(1)谁做了什么？(2)结果如何？如果是夹叙夹议文，还要加上这个故事给人们的启示或教育意义。

第三讲概要写作概要写作(一)(建议用时：每篇25分钟)A阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Works of literature can be written in a wide variety of forms.These different types or sorts of writing are known as genre(类型)．We can classify literary works by what they have in common—their styles or what they are about，for example.On a simple level，organizing works of literature into genres helps us understand the variety of literary works.Prose writing can be divided into two main types: fiction and non­fiction.Fiction includes stories that are made up by the author.They are not true in a factual sense but they may be based on scientific，historical or geographic facts.Within the broad area of fiction，we can distinguish two main types: realistic fiction and historical fiction.Realistic fiction includes stories that are set in the contemporary world and are about people and events that could happen.Most best­sellers are of this style.Realistic fiction itself has many subdivisions(划分) such as crime fiction，adventure stories and romantic stories.Stories set in the past and based on historical facts are historical fiction.Some of the characters in the stories are imaginary，while others may be real people from the past.Much of this type of fiction centers on wars or political events.Non­fiction books are based on facts and include genres such as biography，history，popular science and reference works such as dictionaries.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version：Different types of literary works can be called genres.(要点1) For example，fiction can be divided into two main types.(要点2) Stories in realistic fiction are about events that could happen in the contemporary world，while historical fiction is about stories that are based on historical facts.(要点3)Non­fiction books arewritten according to facts.(要点4)B(2019·湖州检测)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

专题限时集训(三) 概要写作训练1A(2021·浙江省名校联考)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右内容概要。

In many societies，there is often greater acceptance of light skin than dark skin.Light skin may be seen as a mark of beauty，intelligence and success.These beliefs can lead to social pressure even within the same racial or ethnic group，if some members are darker skinned than others.The result is that skin lightening has become a common activity across Africa，Asia and other areas of the world.More and more people with dark skin are using skin­ligh tening products，even if they may face health risks.They believe that having whiter skin will improve their lives.Many people think they will have a better chance of getting a job or marrying into a better family.Or they want to look like what their society generally considers beautiful.Some beauty care products and soaps contain chemicals that make skin lighter.This process is also called bleaching(漂白)．But some of the chemicals are extremely dangerous.One of the chemicals has been linked to kidney(肾) damage andsome kinds of cancer.It also causes low birth weight in babies when mothers use it during pregnancy.At first，bleaching products make the skin color lighter.But after long­term use they can cause problems.They can even make some skin darker.The chemicals in the products block and break down the natural process that gives color to skin.The skin loses its natural barrier to protect against sunlight.Then the skin can become thick and ually the person will use more of the product in an effort to correct the problem，but this only makes it worse.Doctor Ly，who works in a hospital，says the chemicals are now more dangerous because they are stronger.Some cases have resulted in blackened fingernails，infections and permanent skin damage.And these are not the only risks.Experts say some people who change their skin color suffer emotional damage.They feel regret and sadness.They feel that instead of risking their health，they should have learned to love and accept their skin color as it was.【写作指导】本文属于说明文，全文使用一般现在时。

专题模拟训练(概要写作)概要写作(一)A(2024·高考英语考前信息必刷卷)阅读下面短文，依据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

The production of fine art is the use of skill and imagination to create aesthetic objects or experiences which can be shared with other people.Photography is thought by some to be a form of fine art; however, others claim that photography is not.Those who believe that photography is not a form of art present several arguments.They claim a photograph is nothing but an objective record of a particular place at a particular time.Therefore, any beauty that is perceived in the picture is the beauty of the time and place where it was taken, and is not the creation of the photographer.They also argue that sophisticated and expensive equipment often plays a greater role in the success of a photograph than the photographerʼs creativity.Even some of the greatest photographers acknowledge that there is a limit to the amount of influence they can have on a final product.However, there are also many reasons why photography is appreciated on the same level as other recognized forms of visual art.The decisions involved in creating a photograph are analogous to those made by any other artist.A photograph is not just a banal record of the world, but a deliberately created image with its own artistic features.Ansel Adams, the American photographer, commented on this point when he noted: “You donʼt take a photograph, you make it.” There is a growing trend for photographers to call themselves artists and their photos are sold for millions of dollars.However, these high prices may not be enough to change peopleʼs perceptions of whether photography is art.The arguments about whether photography is art have been discussed since the earliest cameras were used.The creative process involved in taking a fine photograph, deciding what, when and how the picture should be taken, is certainly similar to the process of making fine art.However, cameras are also increasingly used to take photographs for non-artistic functions.Although we cannot say that photography itself is necessarilyart, we can certainly see that it is a medium that can be used to make art.【范文】Opinions vary from person to person on whether photography should be considered a fine art.Some are against it because they think it is just an objective record and the photographerʼs creativity isnʼt reflected.However, others are in favor of it.They think photograph is a deliberately created image.All in all, photography is a medium used to make art.B(2024·高考三轮冲刺卷)阅读下面短文，依据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

浙江高考英语摘要作文范文Chapter 1: Introduction (200 words)The purpose of this paper is to provide a comprehensive analysisof the Zhejiang college entrance examination (高考) in English language, focusing on the writing component. The Zhejiang high school entrance examination is considered one of the most important tests in a student's academic life. In recent years, the writing section has received heightened attention due to its integral role in evaluating the students’ language proficiency. This paper aims to explore the structure of the writing section, its scoring criteria, and the challenges faced by students.Chapter 2: Structure and Format of the Writing Section (300 words) This chapter outlines the structure and format of the writing section in the Zhejiang college entrance examination. It provides detailed information about the different types of writing tasks, such as essay writing, letter writing, and argumentative writing. Additionally, it discusses the word count requirement, time limit, and the importance of adhering to the given topic.Chapter 3: Scoring Criteria (300 words)This chapter focuses on the scoring criteria used in evaluating the writing section of the Zhejiang college entrance examination. It explains the key elements that are taken into consideration, including content, organization, language use, and mechanics. Moreover, it highlights the importance of coherence, clarity, and originality in students' writing.Chapter 4: Challenges Faced by Students (300 words)The final chapter of this paper examines the challenges faced bystudents during the writing section of the Zhejiang college entrance examination. It discusses the difficulties in time management,word choice, grammar, and topic generation that students often encounter. Furthermore, it provides strategies and tips for overcoming these challenges and enhancing their performance in this section.In conclusion, this paper provides a comprehensive analysis of the Zhejiang college entrance examination writing section. It offers insights into the structure, format, scoring criteria, and challenges faced by students. By understanding these elements, students can better prepare themselves for the writing section and enhance their overall performance in the Zhejiang college entrance examination.在当今高速发展的社会中，人们对于相关内容的需求越来越迫切。

专题二读后续写Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进展续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

At the center of the mall was the perfect Santa with a gentle manner and a real white beard.My six－year－old granddaughter，Leah，jumped from foot to foot as we waited in line for her turn to sit on his lap．“I don’t know what to say，〞 Leah said，raising her neck around the kids in front of her.“Sure you do，〞her mother，Leanne，said.“It’s Santa.He’s already your friend．You’ll do just fine.〞“He’ll ask you what you want for Christmas，〞I said.“And you just tell him.〞We’d gone over and over the toys she’d ask for.Her mother didn’t want surprises! Leah repeated the list．But a minute later，she inserted new toys she’d just spotted at the mall.“I’ve got an idea，〞 said Leanne，digging into her purse as the line inched forward.“Let’s write down your requests so you won’t forget them.〞I couldn’t help but laugh.Going to see Santa was such an important appointment for a six－year－old.No child should have any worries bigger than that.But the night before，on the news，I’d see n a village in the Middle East that had come under fire.Many of the wounded were children just like our Leah.Looking around the mall full of magical decorations and happy shoppers I felt safe，as safe as anyone could be.Everyone in the world should have that kind of security，especially at Christmas.“Okay，〞Leanne said.“Now you’ve got everything you want written down here.If you get nervous you can just give the note to Santa.〞Leah nodded and took the list. She read out loud，“A Chia Pet，Moon Sand andAquadoodle．〞“Why don’t you add a fourth request，Leah，〞I heard myself say.“Ask for peaceonearth．〞 My daughter looked a little surprised by my suggestion.“What’s peace on earth，Grandma？〞 Leah asked.“Peace on earth means all the people in the world would get along.That’s the true meaning of Christmas.〞Leah nodded seriously.“Yes，〞 she agreed.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

专题限时集训(四) 概要写作训练2A阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右内容概要。

Peter loved to shop used articles.Almost a month ago，he bought a popular word game that used little pieces of wood with different letters on them.As he was purchasing it，the salesgirl said，“Oh，look，the game box hasn't even been opened yet.That might be worth some money.〞Peter examined the box and，sure enough，it was completely covered in factory­sealed plastic.And he saw a date of 1973 on the back of the box.“You should put that up for auction(拍卖) on the Internet，and see what happens，〞the salesgirl said.“Yes，you're right.People like something rare，〞Peter agreed.“I can't imagine there being very many unopened boxes of this game still around 40 years later.〞“Don't forget to tell me if you sell it，〞the salesgirl smiled.“No problem，〞Peter said.After he got home，Peter went online to several auction websites looking for his game.But he couldn't find it.Then hetyped in the name of the word game and hit search.The search result was 543 websites containing information about the changes of the game.Over the years，the game had been produced using letters in different sizes and game boards in different colors.He also found some lists of game fans looking for various versions of the game.Peter emailed some of them，telling them what he had.Two weeks later，Peter went back to the shop.“Hello.Do you still remember the unopened word game？〞The salesgirl looked at him for a second，then recognized him and said，“Oh，hi！〞“I've got something for you，〞Peter said.“I sold the game and made $1，000.Thank you for your suggestion.〞He handed her three $100 bills.“Wow！〞the salesgirl cried out.“Thank you.I never expected it.〞【写作指导】通读所给文章可知，本文属于记叙文。