2.2 2017年6月读后续写真题(课件)-高考英语作文新题型

一、读后续写（25分）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly（胆怯地）. “Have you killed the man” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the fa rmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

第二节读后续写(满分25分)[2017·浙江卷6月考]阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedalled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!”he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Mac's heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing (扯破)open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶)．Mac was pedalling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit (=reach 到达) the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wolf's teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn't think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed (假定，认为) was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

一、读后续写(25分）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money。

He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market。

The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street。

When his vegetables were sold out， it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.ground and was going to help the person to get up。

At that time he found it was a deadwithout taking the baskets with him。

baskets，an officer asked, “Are these yours” “Yes，sir.” the farmer answeredhurry. “When did you see the dead man" “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No，sir." The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Haveconfession(供认）， but the fa rmer didn’t admit he was the murderer。

高考真题读后续写92017年6月浙江卷:健忘妈妈趣事一、试题呈现阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother — loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh (I)thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections (反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2017年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评与2016年10月浙江省高考英语一样，2017年6月浙江省高考英语科目写作第二节仍然是读后续写，要求考生阅读一篇短文，根据所给情节续写，使短文与续写部分合成一个完整的故事。

[ 题型分析]本次读后续写题依然是将对考生的输入（input）与输出（output）能力的考查结合在一起。

关于这两者能力的考查和读后续写文体特征等，笔者曾于《作文新天地?高中》2017年第3期的《浙江省新高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评》一文中做过介绍，此处不再赘述。

但是，虽然同属记叙文，本次考试所给短文的故事线索与逻辑比2016年10月的那篇复杂（具体见本文“试题要点分析”和“答题建议”），对考生的输入考查要求较高。

可以说，本次读后续写交际任务是否能很好完成，很大程度上取决于考生对所给短文阅读理解任务完成的情况。

从这一点来看，读后续写教学要见成效，阅读教学上所花的功夫绝对不能少。

[ 题目要求]阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

On a bright，warm July afternoon，Mac Hollan，a primary school teacher，was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair，but they had encouraged Mac to carry on，and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled （骑行）along alone，he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man，that’s a big dog！” he thought. But when he looked to the side，he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all，but a wolf，quickly catching up with him.Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars，he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal，and to Mac’s relief，it fell back，shaking its head. But a minute later，it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike，tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time，and again，it fell back only to quickly restart the chase （追赶）.Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw asteep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill，he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment，Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later，they spotted what they，too，assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer，they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast，just a dozen yards away now.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关?I词语。

、读后续写（25分）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no mon ey. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The n ext morning he took two baskets of vegetables to tow n. But it was raining hard that after noon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a pers on lyin g on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without tak ing the baskets with him.The n ext after noon the farmer was sent to the police statio n. Havi ng show n the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours ”“Yes, sir. ” the farmer a timidly （胆怯地）. “ Have yQJiled the man”“ No, no, sir. ” the farmer said in a hurry. “ Whe n did you see the dead man ”“ About seve n last eve ning. ”“ Did you sekilled the mar”“ No, sir. ” The officer brought out a knife and asked,“ Hait yet ”“ No, sir. ” The officengec a mfetold the policemen to beat him upand sent him into pris on. the officer wan ted to trap the farmer into the con fession供认）,but the farmer didn ' t admit he was the murderer.1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

一、读后续写（25分)A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden。

One day his wife was ill and he had no money。

He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark。

He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up。

At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body。

He was so afraid that he ran away quickly，without taking the baskets with him。

The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station。

Having shown the baskets，an officer asked, “Are these yours" “Yes，sir。