浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要写作(11)含答案解析

定额市鞍钢阳光实验学校十年（2010~2020）高考英语真题分项详解34书面表达·概要写作1.（9月，浙江高考）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, “We’ve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.” By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they’re building their children’s confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that’s insince re, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents’ praise has put them.Still, don’t go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they’re not good enough or that you don’t care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. “We should especially recognize our children’s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal,” says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. “One thing to remember is that it’s the process not the end product that matters.”Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he’s out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it.____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________【答案】Parents tend to go to extremes when it comes to praising their kids. (要点一) Yet, both too much and too little praise can be equally damaging.(要点二) When giving praise, parents should be sincere and concentrate on the process instead of the result. (要点三) Similarly, they ought to give praise for how much effort their kids have invested in the work they’re involved in. (要点四)【解析】本次浙江高考书面表达采用了概要写作题型。

2022年（有答案）浙江省高三（下）同步英语试卷（读后续写与概要写作）（11-20）一、书面表达1. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．Playing endless games of hide﹣and﹣seek with your toddler can get tired very quickly．And sometimes parents need a break from pretending not to know the very obvious spot where their child is hiding．Well，you no longer have to feel guilty about letting your kids sit down in front of the television for an hour or two，because it's been proven that，in certain circumstances，screen time for your kids can actually be beneficial．The key thing to remember is that unsupervised and too much screen time isn't good for your kids，but some situations let you relax and will keep your kids entertained．One example is video chatting with family．The American Academy of Pediatrics reported that maintaining strong relationships with your family members that live far away is an important part of development．Being able to visually see their faces and chat with them at the same time is good for your kids，even if it's on a screen．So let your little child sit on the couch，having a video chat with Grandma and Grandpa，and you can go and catch up on other things around the house．Another way to incorporate screen time in a beneficial way is to watch TV together．Turn on an educational kid show and sit next to your toddler to answer any questions that they might have．The AAP says that a few hours of television a week is fine as long as you make it a family activity and encourage your kids to ask questions about the show．One show in particular that can be extremely beneficial to watch together is Daniel Tiger's Neighborhood on PBS．Researchers at Texas Tech University reported that kids who watched 10 episodes over a two﹣week period had higher levels of confidence，and they were able to recognize emotions better．So don't feel guilty at letting your kids sit inside for a little while；all parents need a break．2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily．Paragraph 2：Suddenly my wife walked up to me．3. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．Once，when I was a teenager my ________ and I were standing in line to buy ________ for the ________．Finally there was only one family between us and the ticket counter．This ________ made a big impression on me．There were eight ________，all probably under the age of twelve．You could tell they didn't have a lot of ________．Their clothes were not expensive，but they were clean．The children were well﹣behaved，all of them standing in line，two﹣by﹣two behind their parents，holding hands．They were excitedly talking about the clowns，elephants and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice．One could sense they had never been to the circus before．It promised to be a highlight of their young lives．The father and mother were at the head of the line，standing ________ as they could be．The ________ was holding her husband's hand，looking up at him as if to say，"Youare my knight in shining armor．"He was smiling and responding in pride，looking back at her as if to say"You got that right"．The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted．He proudly responded，"Please let me buy eight children's tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus．"The ticket lady gave the price．The man's wife let go of his hand，lowered her head and her lips began to ________．The father leaned a little closer and asked，"How much did you say？"The ticket lady told him the price again．The man obviously didn't have enough money．How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didn't have enough money to take them to the circus？Actually we were not ________ in one sense，so I understood how the kids would feel．I felt sorry for them．注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：Seeing what was going on，my dad seemed to have an idea．Paragraph 2：Then my father and I went back home．4. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：With a giant tear in her eye， the little girl looked up at him．Paragraph 2：Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop， he heard a familiar ringing．5. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．According to a study published in the journal Neuron，memory champions aren't all that different to us．People with an average memory can greatly improve their memory ability by using what's known as the "mind palace" method．In order to do this，you need to picture a place you're familiar with，such as your living room．Then，you have to remember this place in as much detail as possible as this is your own mind palace．Suppose you want to remember a shopping list．You can start by spreading out all the items around your living room in your mind．This means each item on your list is connected with a remembered place in your living room．You travel to that remembered place as you recall the list．To explore the effects of this method on the brain，researchers gathered 51 participants with average memory levels and no previous memory training．After 40 days of daily 30﹣minute training，participants doubled the amount of words they could remember﹣they went from recalling an average of 26 words out of 72，to an impressive 62．Four months later，even without continued training，their recall performance remained high．In addition，the training also affects the way our brain cells connect．After training，the way that the participants' brain cells connect began to be like those of memory champions compared to scans taken before training．Researchers believe this could be responsible for their increased memory．But what makes this research so fascinating is that it seems to prove that the talent to store things in your mind isn't determined by genes．The research found there was no difference in brain structure between memory champions and normal people，which means memory champions are not born with different brains．It's clear that more studies are needed to find out what's going on here，but the"mind palace"method might be your best bet to never forget an important name，date or appointment ever again．6. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us．Paragraph 2：We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way．7. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．It was summer，and my ________ wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before．He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West．We took a plane to Albuquerque，a big city in the state of New Mexico．We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon．________，my dad's friend，picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos．His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle．My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the ________ listening to the frogs and water rolling down the ________ nearby．Very early in the morning，Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast．"The day starts at dawn on my farm，"he said．After breakfast，I went to help Aunt Tina ________ the chickens，while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the________ out to graze（吃草）．I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses．They looked really cool．In the afternoon，I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride，and he said yes，as long as my dad went with me．I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway．So，my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats，got on our horses，and headed slowly towards the mountains．"Don't be ________ for supper，"Uncle Paul cried，"and keep to the________so that you don't ________！""OK！"my dad cried back．After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of ________．It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks，the deep green pine trees，and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene．It looked like a beautiful woven（编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us．注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse．________Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we were and it got dark．________8. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same．Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus（校园）like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms，classrooms and athletic equipment and，of course，the students．It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses，and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to happen to be more than a car ride away．But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life，and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one．There's no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area．In fact，a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus，and obviously，if you live across the country that won't be as much of a possibility，but if you live nearby，go check it out！If campus visits aren't going to happen before you apply，at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools you'd like to attend．It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you don't like about certain campuses，things that you wouldn't know unless you actually visit．Now，if time and money are making it impossible，then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive．It's a chance to chat online with admissions officers，students，and college counselors（顾问），and it won't cost you a penny！You can register for its onlinecollege fair at collegeweeklive．com．While visiting an online college fair can't take the place of an actual campus visit，it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about which colleges or universities you'd like to attend．9. Directions： Read the following passage． Summarize the main idea and the main point （s） of the passage in no more than 60 words． Use your own words as far as possible．Becoming an attractive employeeThe 2008 financial crisis created an unstable job market． Fast﹣forward to the present，and the economy has not fully recovered． Thus， it's of vital importance for job seekers to carefully strategize their approach to job application． And it is especially important forthose new to the workforce． They should look at making themselves as attractive as possible to employers．For young people， information technology skills will play an increasing role in the future． As the generation to have grown up in the Information Age， they are quite confident when it comes to showing off their interests and skills in this field． This makes them a natural fit for companies seeking expertise in technology， marketing， and networking． They should emphasize these skills when applying for jobs that require the ability to multitask．Another attractive quality is experience． It is important that an applicant's résumés list any activities that involved teamwork and goal﹣driven responsibilities． Membership in a sports or social club and participation as a volunteer are good examples of this． These activities involve goal management and planning， along with the ability to focus while competing ona team． When hiring committees see this， they see a candidate who is capable of workingin a variety of environments．Finally， an attractive quality when job﹣hunting is a great attitude toward a potential job． Young job seekers are known to be overconfident because they have been praised for everything they have done． But they must realize that the employment market is about how an employee will be a good fit for a company， not the other way around． In fact， in an interview， an important question to ask is "What would be expected of me as an employee？"In today's tough job market， young job seekers need to provide a potential employer with good reasons to hire them．10. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse．Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we were and it got dark．参考答案与试题解析2022年（有答案）浙江省高三（下）同步英语试卷（读后续写与概要写作）（11-20）一、书面表达1.【答案】Studies have proven that screen time may actually benefit kids under certain circumstances．（屏幕时间在某些方面对孩子有益）One of the benefits is that video chatting with grandparents helps strengthen family relationships．【高分句型一】（加强家庭的关系）Moreover， watching educational kid shows together with parents can enhance children's emotional development．【高分句型二】（有助于孩子的情感发展）In both cases， kids are entertained and parents can make themselves relax for a while．（使孩子放松）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：One of the benefits is that video chatting with grandparents helps strengthen family relationships．译文：其中一个好处是与祖父母进行视频聊天有助于加强家庭关系．分析：that引导表语从句．高分句型二：Moreover， watching educational kid shows together with parents can enhance children's emotional development．译文：此外，与家长一起观看教育性儿童节目可以促进儿童的情感发展．分析：动名词作主语．【解答】Studies have proven that screen time may actually benefit kids under certain circumstances．（屏幕时间在某些方面对孩子有益）One of the benefits is that video chatting with grandparents helps strengthen family relationships．【高分句型一】（加强家庭的关系）Moreover， watching educational kid shows together with parents can enhance children's emotional development．【高分句型二】（有助于孩子的情感发展）In both cases， kids are entertained and parents can make themselves relax for a while．（使孩子放松）2.【答案】答案：Paragraph 1 ：I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily． I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me， who was really kind enough to save my face．【高分句型一】He asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus． He said happily that he would share some of the gifts of his and allow me to choose one from them． I thanked him from the bottom of my heart，still feeling disappointed．【高分句型二】（没有收到礼物我感到很失望）Paragraph 2：Suddenly my wife walked up to me． It seemed that she had guessed how I felt． She askedme to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes． I thought shewas showing off her efforts on the decoration but she took off a small box and passed it to me smiling and saying it was for me． I opened it and saw a letter which read We will never forget you． Merry Christmas! " Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight． I was moved to tears．（家人没有忘记我让我感动）（ 162 words）【考点】读后续写【解析】分析：高分句型一：I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me，who was really kind enough to save my face．翻译：我在想我是否能得到一份礼物，这时我的小儿子跑来找我，他真的很好地救了我一命．本句使用了宾语从句whether I could get a gift，时间状语从句正在做某事这时was wondering ……when my younger son ran to me，定语从句who was really kind enough to save my face．高分句型二：I thanked him from the bottom of my heart， still feeling disappointed．翻译：我从心底感谢他，仍然感到失望．本句使用了现在分词短语做伴随状语still feeling disappointed．【解答】答案：Paragraph 1 ：I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily． I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me， who was really kind enough to save my face．【高分句型一】He asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus． He said happily that he would share some of the gifts ofhis and allow me to choose one from them． I thanked him from the bottom of my heart，still feeling disappointed．【高分句型二】（没有收到礼物我感到很失望）Paragraph 2：Suddenly my wife walked up to me． It seemed that she had guessed how I felt． She asked me to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes． I thought shewas showing off her efforts on the decoration but she took off a small box and passed it to me smiling and saying it was for me． I opened it and saw a letter which read We will never forget you． Merry Christmas! " Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight． I was moved to tears．（家人没有忘记我让我感动）（ 162 words）3.【答案】father,tickets,circus,family,children,money,proud,mother,shake,wealthy【考点】读后续写【解析】分析：高分句型一：with his lip shaking and tears streaming down his cheeks， he replied，翻译：他嘴唇颤抖，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来，回答说：本句使用了with复合结构with his lip shaking and tears streaming down his cheeks高分句型二：The $ 20 bill that my dad gave away was what we were going to buy our own tickets with．翻译：我爸爸给的20美元是我们自己买的票．本句使用了表语从句what we weregoing to buy our own tickets with．【解答】答案：Paragraph1． Seeing what was going on， Ty dad seemed to have an idea． He put his hand into his pocket， pulled out a $ 20 bill and dropped it on the ground． Then my father picked up the bill and said， Excuse me， sir， this fell out of your pocket．" The man turned around and saw the money． He knew what was going on． He looked straight into my dad's eyes， and held my dad's hand tightly， and with his lip shaking and tears streaming down his cheeks， he replied，【高分句型一】Thank you， thank you，sir． This really means a lot to me and my family．（爸爸决定帮助他们）Paragraph 2：Then Ty father and I went back home． The $ 20 bill that my dad gave away was what we were going to buy our own tickets with．【高分句型二】Although we didn't get to see the circus that night， we both felt a joy inside us that was far greater than seeing the circus could ever provide． It's more blessed to give than to receive． Nothing can be truer than that．（帮助别人的幸福感）（ 164 words ）．4.【答案】答案： Paragraph 1：Wіth a gіant tеar іn hеr еyе，thе lіttlе gіrl lооkеd uр at hіm． She managed a forced smile， murmuring Thank you， any way and turned toward the doorway． Suddenly Pappy t hought of his estranged daughter． Feeling a lump in his throat，Pappy called out，． How much have you got to spend， Missy？" At this，' the little girl emptied her purse onto the counter﹣﹣two dollars． After a quick struggle in his mind，﹣Pappy said， "Today is Christmas Day a nd this is your lucky day． The bell costs exactlytwo dollars． Holding the special bell close to her chest， the child danced out．【高分句型一】（爸爸忍痛割爱把铃铛卖给了这个小女孩）Paragraph 2： Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop， he heard a familiar ringing． He couldn't believe his ears! There in the doorway stood the little girl， ringing th e bel l and smiling sweetly．【高分句型二】 Puzzled， Pappy approached her． Have you changed your mind，" little lady？" No， "． the child grinned，Momma says the presentis for you． Before Pappy had time to say another word， the child's mother steppedin． Holding back her tears， she gently said， Hello， Dad．"（父女团聚）（ 143 words）【考点】读后续写【解析】高分句型一：Holding the special bell close to her chest， the child danced out．翻译：孩子把那只特制的铃铛放在胸前，跳着舞出来了．本句使用了现在分词短语做伴随状语Holding the special bell close to her chest高分句型二：There in the doorway stood the little girl， ringing the bell and smiling sweetly．翻译：小女孩站在门口，按了门铃，甜甜地笑着．本句使用了现在分词短语做伴随状语ringing the bell and smiling sweetly．本句使用了倒装句in the doorway stood the little girl．【解答】答案： Paragraph 1：Wіth a gіant tеar іn hеr еyе，thе lіttlе gіrl lооkеd uр at hіm． She managed a forced smile， murmuring Thank you， any way and turned toward the doorway． Suddenly Pappy t hought of his estranged daughter． Feeling a lump in his throat，Pappy called out，． How much have you got to spend， Missy？" At this，' the little girlemptied her purse onto the counter﹣﹣two dollars． After a quick struggle in his mind，﹣Pappy said， "Today is Christmas Day a nd this is your lucky day． The bell costs exactlytwo dollars． Holding the special bell close to her chest， the child danced out．【高分句型一】（爸爸忍痛割爱把铃铛卖给了这个小女孩）Paragraph 2： Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop， he heard a familiar ringing． He couldn't believe his ears! There in the doorway stood the little girl， ringing th e bel l and smiling sweetly．【高分句型二】 Puzzled， Pappy approached her． Have you changed your mind，" little lady？" No， "． the child grinned，Momma says the presentis for you． Before Pappy had time to say another word， the child's mother steppedin． Holding back her tears， she gently said， Hello， Dad．"（父女团聚）（ 143 words）5.【答案】People can remember things better by using the "mind palace" method， which involves memorizing all the details in a familiar place in the mind and connecting things to be remembered with it．【高分句型一】（"心灵宫殿"的方法）A research has proved memory training has great and lasting effects on people's memory and influences the connection of brain cells．（记忆训练有好处）Interestingly， the research indicates people aren't born with different memory ability．（人们天生记忆能力不同）Anyway，the "mind palace" method is worth trying．【高分句型二】（值得尝试"心灵宫殿"）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：People can remember things better by using the "mind palace" method，which involves memorizing all the details in a familiar place in the mind and connecting things to be remembered with it．译文：人们可以通过使用"心灵宫殿"的方法更好地记住事物，这包括在头脑中熟悉的地方记住所有的细节，并将要记住的事物与之联系起来．分析：which引导定语从句．高分句型二：Anyway， the "mind palace" method is worth trying．译文：总之，"心灵宫殿"的方法值得一试．分析：be worth doing值得做．【解答】People can remember things better by using the "mind palace" method， which involves memorizing all the details in a familiar place in the mind and connecting things to be remembered with it．【高分句型一】（"心灵宫殿"的方法）A research has proved memory training has great and lasting effects on people's memory and influences the connection of brain cells．（记忆训练有好处）Interestingly， the research indicates people aren't born with different memory ability．（人们天生记忆能力不同）Anyway，the "mind palace" method is worth trying．【高分句型二】（值得尝试"心灵宫殿"）6.【答案】Paragraph 1：The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us． We decided to camp along the river． The views there were surprisingly beautiful﹣the warm sunshine，the fresh air， the clean water． We sat on the grass， enjoying the splendid nature【高分句型一，现在分词enjoying作状语】． However， when Dad was about to put up our tent，he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel． Well， Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping．【要点一，我们在帐篷露营的情景】Paragraph 2：We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way． Every time we got to a new place，Mom would cheer up like a child【高分句型二，every time作连词引导时间状语】． She would get off the car excitedly， laughing and dancingaround． Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities， the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature． When we came back to the hotel afterthe tiring but excellent visit， Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces． How sweet she was! Absent﹣minded and forgetful as she was， she never forgot to express her love to us【高分句型三，as尽管，句子用部分倒装，引导让步性状语从句】．【要点二，我们旅途欣赏美丽风景，心情愉快】【考点】读后续写【解析】【高分句型一】 We sat on the grass， enjoying the splendid nature．我们坐在草地上，欣赏大自然的壮丽．现在分词enjoying作状语．【高分句型二】 Every time we got to a new place，Mom would cheer up like a child．每次我们到了一个新地方，妈妈都会像孩子一样高兴起来．every time作连词引导时间状语．【高分句型三】Absent﹣minded and forgetful as she was， she never forgot to express her love to us．尽管她心不在焉，健忘，但她从未忘记向我们表达她的爱．as尽管，句子用部分倒装，引导让步性状语从句．【解答】Paragraph 1：The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us． We decided to camp along the river． The views there were surprisingly beautiful﹣the warm sunshine，the fresh air， the clean water． We sat on the grass， enjoying the splendid nature【高分句型一，现在分词enjoying作状语】． However， when Dad was about to put up our tent，he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel． Well， Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping．【要点一，我们在帐篷露营的情景】Paragraph 2：We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way． Every time we got to a new place，Mom would cheer up like a child【高分句型二，every time作连词引导时间状语】． She would get off the car excitedly， laughing and dancingaround． Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities， the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature． When we came back to the hotel afterthe tiring but excellent visit， Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces． How sweet she was! Absent﹣minded and forgetful as she was， she never forgot to express her love to us【高分句型三，as尽管，句子用部分倒装，引导让步性状语从句】．【要点二，我们旅途欣赏美丽风景，心情愉快】7.【答案】dad,Uncle Paul,farm house,river,feed,sheep,late,track ,get lost,sight【考点】说明文语法填空词汇运用题阅读理解综合【解析】书面表达属于读写任务类类作文，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．注意以下要求：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Startled by the white fluffy rabbit， the horse almost threw me off its back．（高分句型一）句中Startled by the white fluffy rabbit为过去分词短语作状语被白色的兔子吓了一跳，马几乎把我从背上摔了下来．It was then that we enjoyed a symphony of nature﹣﹣﹣the warm breeze ruffling through the trees，the insects buzzing and other animals contributing their unique sounds…（高分句型二）句中使用了It is/was+强调部分+that+其他，这是强调句型就是在那个时候我们享受了大自然的交响乐﹣﹣温暖的微风吹过树林，昆虫嗡嗡作响，其他动物发出独特的声音．【解答】Paragraph1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse． Startled by the white fluffy rabbit，the horse almost threw me off its back．（高分句型一）I hurriedly tightened my grip and couldn't help letting out screams． But after we regained our calm， I was amused both bythe thrill and the innocence of the little creature． Seeing it fleeing， cheerily， I turned tomy dad， "Dad， can we follow it？" My dad nodded with a tolerant smile． Soon without consciousness， we were miles away up into the mountain and we lost track of the rabbit and of course， the track Uncle Paul had asked us to keep to．（在追逐兔子的过程中迷路）Paragraph2：We had no idea where we were and it got dark． We had to get off the horses and tried to figure out the way back， but after many attempts， we still failed﹣﹣﹣we got lost． I grew a bit anxious， but with dad around， I felt all right． As darkness thickened， dad believed it was safer to stay on the spot and waited for help． It was then that we enjoyed a symphony of nature﹣﹣﹣the warm breeze ruffling through the trees， the insects buzzing and other animals contributing their unique sounds…（高分句型二）This serenity ended as we heard shouts and torches came into our sight． At this time， I felt extremely grateful，to Paul and Tina， to this vacation with my dad， and to nature．（和父亲感受大自然的美好并且等到了救援）8.【答案】It can help you make a right decision to visit the college that you are going to attend before you apply．【高分句型一】（在申请前参观大学）If you live near to the college， you should find a chance to visit it to reduce much trouble afterwards．（住的近的话，去看看大学）If you have no enough money or time to go， at least you should communicate online with those people who are familiar with the college．【高分句型二】（和熟悉大学的人交流）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：It can help you make a right decision to visit the college that you are going to attend before you apply．译文：它可以帮助你做出一个正确的决定，在申请前参观你将要就读的大学．分析：that引导定语从句．高分句型二：If you have no enough money or time to go， at least you should communicate online with those people who are familiar with the college．译文：如果你没有足够的钱或时间去，至少你应该在网上与那些熟悉大学的人交流．分析：if引导条件状语从句，who引导定语从句．【解答】It can help you make a right decision to visit the college that you are going to attend before you apply．【高分句型一】（在申请前参观大学）If you live near to the college， you should find a chance to visit it to reduce much trouble afterwards．（住的近的话，去看看大学）If you have no enough money or time to go， at least you should communicate online with those people who are familiar with the college．【高分句型二】（和熟悉大学的人交流）9.【答案】Due to the financial crisis in 2008， job market is not stable． As a result， job seekers should try to attracct their employers．（就业者应该尽可能吸引雇主） First of all， it is vital for young people to master information technology skills．（科技能力）Besides，young employees should have much experience， enabling them to work in a variety of environment．【高分句型一】（经验丰富）Last but not least， job seekers should take a positive attitude towards work， which will make a good impression on their employers．【高分句型二】（积极的态度）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：Besides， young employees should have much experience， enabling them to work in a variety of environment．译文：此外，年轻员工应该有很多经验，使他们能够在各种环境下工作．分析：使用现在分词作状语．高分句型二：Last but not least， job seekers should take a positive attitude towards work，which will make a good impression on their employers．译文：最后但并非最不重要，求职者应该对工作采取积极的态度，这会给他们的雇主留下好印象．分析：这句话使用主从复合句，which引导非限制性定语从句．【解答】Due to the financial crisis in 2008， job market is not stable． As a result， job seekers should try to attracct their employers．（就业者应该尽可能吸引雇主） First of all， it is vital for young people to master information technology skills．（科技能力）Besides，young employees should have much experience， enabling them to work in a variety of environment．【高分句型一】（经验丰富）Last but not least， job seekers should take a positive attitude towards work， which will make a good impression on their employers．【高分句型二】（积极的态度）10.【答案】。

浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要（12）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Workaholics live for their work, often spending many extra hours at work, and often taking work home to complete. It’s fine to live in a work-hard culture, but when work becomes the only reason f or a person’s existence above more important things (such as family and friends), the issue becomes critical. That’s the problem more and more Americans are faced with.Americans are working more hours per week than in years past, and with many companies reducing employees, more and more workers are worried about their own jobs. Some studies show that as many as 40 percent of American workers don’t even bother to take vacations, partly because of fears they may not have a job to come back to if they do. Bes ides, it is obvious that part of the matter is financial. More and more people begin to define success in terms of financial measures. The higher one’s income is, the more respect one gets. Finally, people nowadays live and work in a connected environment -- e-mails, instant messaging, fax machines, and cell phones -- making it hard for them to truly get time away from their work, even when they are on holiday.When work becomes the only reason for being -- when it becomes the only thing people think about, the only thing that truly makes people happy, many Americans find that they are no longer close to their kids. Divorce rate jumps and serious stress-related health problems come up. Undoubtedly, it is time to do something.To reduce workaholism, you must stay away from work once in a while. There are many ways to do that: Spend time with family and friends; Call home often to stay connected; Learn to say no to new assignments; Consider exercises to get your body back to a healthy shape; Fight the urge that everything you do must be perfect. It will take some effort, but for yourself and those you love, you really should make the effort. Have a try and you won’t regret it.___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________【答案】An increasing number of Americans are becoming workaholics. They work extra hours every week to maintain their jobs and become financially successful. Even on holiday, modern communication technologies always connect them to work. Consequently, workaholism breaks up their families and damages their health. Luckily, there is a lot one can do to make time away from work though it takes some effort, but anyway, it’s worthwhile to have a try.【解析】【分析】这是读写任务写作。

浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要（9）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面的短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的概要。

In 1878, when Margaret Wolfe Hungerford wrote “Beauty is in the eye of the beholder”, she was stating that there was no consistent（never changing）view on beauty. Standards of beauty change across time and cultural groups.Traditions and fashions, like society itself, change and adapt with time. So it is reasonable that our ideas of beauty change as well. In 19th-century Europe, women used to wear corsets to achieve a body shape that is no longer considered healthy. Men would wear woolen shawls across their shoulders. It is hard to imagine that they would be seen as attractive in the 21st century. Nowadays, in the western world, one in every ten people has a tattoos or a form of body art. In the past, some cultures used tattoos as an addition to costumes, to show family associations or to mark criminals so that they could easily be recognized.In contemporary society, culture remains a major part in determining our ideas of beauty. In some countries, young women follow slimming diets to lose extra kilos in preparation for their wedding day. In other cultures, looking thin for a husband-to-be is not what a woman desires at all—rather, looking a little overweight is considered more attractive.With the influence of history, society and culture, there are no precise criteria which can be used to judge what is beautiful. Life long commitment and, indeed, the survival of society itself rely on people seeing beauty in difference and depth. The human race would soon die out if we could only see beauty within a set of limited criteria.Physical beauty must also be accompanied by an attraction to something deeper within a person. This particular kind of attraction is found in a wide range of personal qualities, e.g. kindness, warmth, a healthy conscience, etc. judging the appeal of a person’s inner beauty is much more subjective. It takes more than a casual glance to appreciate and it is much more important than physical beauty.Beauty, therefore, has more than one dimension. We are influenced by our culture, our biology and our time in history to notice physical beauty quickly and easily, but it is inner beauty that requires us to truly see. Beauty is certainly in the eye of the beholder.___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________【答案】There is no fixed standard of beauty. (要点一) Our ideas of beauty change across time and cultures. (要点二) In fact, beauty in difference and depth contributes to the survival of society. (要点三) While physical beauty can be noticed quicklyand easily, inner beauty is more important but is more difficult to truly see.（要点四）As beauty has more than one dimension, it does live in the eye of the beholder.(要点五)【解析】【分析】本文是一篇读概要写作，要求考生阅读全文，用60个字写出文章的概要。

浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达续写（11）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Jenny was a pretty eight-year-old girl.One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace, by which she was totally defeated. How eagerly she wanted it! But when he saw the price, her heart sank a little. She gathered up her courage and asked her mother if she would buy it for her, her mother said, “Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an aw ful lot of money. I can buy you the necklace, but when we get home we should make up a list of housework that you can do to pay for the necklace.” Jenny agreed immediately, feeling a burst of joy. So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her. Jenny worked on her housework determinedly and earnestly every day. Soon Jenny had paid off the pearls.Jenny had a very loving daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story. One night when he finished the story, he said, “Jenny, do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you,” the little girl said delightedly, with a broad smile on her face. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” Hearing that, Jenny froze there, an anxious expression twisting her face. “Oh! Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. Okay?” “Oh no, darling, that's okay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss, gently and calmly. “Good night, little one.”A week later, her father once again asked Jenny after her story, “Do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the little girl murmured softly, trying to escape from her father’s eyes. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” “Oh, Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Ribbons, my toy horse. Do you remember her? She's my favorite.” The little girl begged. “No, that's okay,” her father said, smiling broadly and sweetly and brushed her cheek again with a kiss. “God bless you, little one. Sweet dreams.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要（3）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

All parents know exercise is important for children: It can lower heart risks, control weight，and help kids do better in school. Plus, outdoor activities at an early age can go a long way toward helping children form healthy habits for life. In other words, exercise is needed for healthy development. But don't expect kids to understand about those things. Some kids just aren't into exercise, but that shouldn't mean they have to be addicted to the TV. So parents could do something to help inactive son or daughter fall in love with physical activity.If parents sit in front of the TV every night, a bag of chips in hand, kids aren't likely to respect restrictions(限制)you set on their screen time either. So check your own viewing behavior, and serve as a role model by putting physical activity into your everyday life. When you can，walk instead of driving. Regularly participate in activities that you enjoy and let your kids see-and hear about-how much you enjoy them. In this way，they may “do as the Romans do". Make sure that children's fitness is included in the family schedule in the same way that school，work，shopping, and family gatherings find their way onto the calendar. You and your children are more likely to stick to an exercise pan if you incorporate(并入)it into your life on a routine basis. And your children will begin to expect and accept that Sunday morning usually means a hike ride, and a couple of nights after dinner the family takes a light walk through the neighborhood.Children who aren't naturally good at physical activities may be self-conscious about their lack of physical skills and even fear public failure. These kids need all the support and encouragement from parents. Negative comments don't work and will only serve to make your child feel bad. Remember, acknowledge the effort-choosing to be active or trying to improve a skill-rather than the outcome.【答案】【解析】【标题】浙江省超级全能生2020届高三选考科目9月联考（B）英语【结束】。

浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要（30）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容概要。

Children form opinions about drugs and alcohol at a very early age. Even four and five year olds have definite opinions about alcohol. Preschoolers, because of the commercials(商业广告) they see on TV, often think that alcohol helps people have more fun and be better athletes! Images of alcohol are everywhere in our society—consumption of alcohol is represented twice per hour in daytime shows, and three times in an average evening program. Also, posters about alcohol can be seen on buses, at underground stations, in streets and so on.Despite the wide spread of alcohol in our society, and the problems that can be connected with it, many parents feel uncomfortable when talking about alcohol with their children, or are not sure when and how to start. Many parents believe that teenage drinking is something that their children would never be involved in.Unfortunately, teenage drinking is very common in North Dakota. In a statewide survey of adolescents in junior and senior high school, only 24% claimed to have never consumed alcohol. When asked about their drinking in the past 30 days: •61% adolescents reported drinking•42% drank five or more drinks in a row•17% reported binge(大吃大喝) drinking•4.2% repor ted driving and drinkingOther research on rural youth in North Dakota has found that about 10% of a sample of fifth and sixth graders were engaged in frequent drinking. Teenagers who reported alcohol use (especially those who began use in late elementary school and junior high school) were more likely to be depressed, feel less positive about both their family and friends, and have poorer grades.Research has found that children and even teenagers turn to their parents in making decisions about important things in their life. Decisions about using alcohol are undoubtedly something that parents will want to provide guidance about. So it’s high time that parents should talk to children about alcohol seriously.___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___【答案】Children are widely exposed to alcohol and thus have a misunderstanding of it very early. However, without realizing theproblem, parents don’t pay enough attention to it. Unluckily, according to research, teenage drinking is very serious in North Dakota, which might result in various problems. Since children and teenagers tend to ask their parents for guidance in making decisions, it’s parents’ duty to communicate with children about alcohol in time.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于该写任务类作文。

浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要（17）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，然后用60个单词左右概括短文的要点。

Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.Though the belief in the advantage of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War Ⅱ. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea; clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter position is gaining some reason.【答案】People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点1) For a long time in history, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.(要点2) However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. (要点3) But, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt many help our immune system. (要点4)【解析】试题分析：本文主要讲了在不同的历史时期人们对于泥的态度，以及泥对于身体健康的影响，在历史上的很长时期，一些欧洲国家认为泥可以保护人们免受疾病，而在十八世纪，人们开始改变了这个观点，科学表明把身上的赃物洗干净有利于健康，但是也有科学家认为泥可以帮助我们维持免疫系统。

浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要（4）含答案解析【题文】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

A class pet can be an invaluable experience for elementary school children. The pet can teach responsibility, build a connection to the classroom, serve as a motivator, and be something for the children to love. If the teacher is willing to take on the added responsibility of caring for an animal in addition to all of the children in the classroom, a class pet can be a wonderful addition to a class.Many factors need to be taken into consideration when choosing a class pet. It cannot be too big, as classrooms generally have limited space. Cost should also be considered since the teacher will likely have to pay for the pet, its food and its habitat. It must also be somewhat hardy (耐寒的). Each particular type of animal has its advantages and disadvantages, and a teacher must weigh these and make a decision about which one is right for his or her class.Birds are physically more delicate (娇养) than many other animals. They will not survive in drafts (气流) and need a somewhat regulated temperature in their environment. Many birds are quite social and do best with other birds or when being handled routinely by people who can be appropriate with them. Young children are not likely to have the skill to handle a bird without harming it, making it a poor choice for a class pet.Some reptiles are beautiful to look at but are delicate, afraid of cold, light sensitivity or poisonous and shouldn’t be handled by children. Others are more hardy but require expensive habitats. Most snakes eat rats and mice, which may be a frightening thing for small children to witness.A hardy fish, such as a betta, is a good low-cost option for a class pet. They are obviously not huggable or able to be caught by children. Besides, they are inexpensive, have relatively long life spans, and can be kept in a simple fish bowl.___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________【答案】A class pet is a wonderful addition to the class, which can develop children’s responsibility, build a connection and act as a motivator. But many factors need considering when choosing a class pet, including its size, cost, advantages and disadvantages. Birds and reptiles are a poor choice because they are delicate and easy to be harmed by children. A hardy fish can be an ideal class pet, for it’s cheap, long-lived and easy to raise.【解析】【分析】本文属于说明文，介绍班级宠物的优点以及选择班级宠物注意事项。

浙江高考英语百日训练之书面表达概要（15）含答案解析【题文】47. Nowadays,cars have become a very common vehicle in our life.As the most important transport,cars have improved our modern life in many ways.However,cars also bring about so many problems for people,which should be given more attention than any time before.Cars give people the ability to travel to any place they like.Many people begin to travel frequently.This helps people connect with each other better than before.A more obvious influence from cars is the large number of jobs that they create.Jobs in several fields open up thanks to cars,such as jobs in car factories,gas stations and highways. This is a huge positive influence on society because they greatly reduce the unemployment rate.At the same time,the problems that cars cause seem to be more and more serious.A mass use of cars is bound to have some negative consequences.The widespread use of cars has led to serious traffic jams in cities.They have resulted in a reduction in the use of public transportation in many cities.The need to use and develop public transportation has been much discussed and confirmed.And also,car accidents create a number of injuries and deaths. There are hundreds of thousands of them worldwide every year.Gas let out from the engines of cars pollutes the air in cities around the world.Air pollution creates serious health problems and causes many people to die from it.It has become one of the most serious problems today.Efforts to develop pollution-free engines may be the final solution to this problem.In conclusion,people should not only enjoy the benefits of cars,but also aim to deal with the problems cars have created.At the same time,the government should improve city traffic systems,encourage people to use public transportation,make efforts to improve road safety and encourage the usage of fuels that are low in pollutants.Only in these ways can the benefits of cars outweigh their harmfulness.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Cars affect people’s life both positively and negatively.（要点1）Cars bring convenience to people traveling from place to place and provide many jobs for society.（要点2）However,bothering issues,like traffic jams,traffic accidents and air pollution,arise when cars are widely used.（要点3）So the government as well as each citizen should try to solve the problems cars have caused so that they can enjoy their advantages.（要点4）【解析】本文主要讲解了汽车的发展给人们带来的利与弊。