高三英语一轮复习渐进写作训练—— 读后续写

读后续写作基本技法(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意:续写词数应为150个左右。

读后续写续写题目阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

"Marilyn, you have so much determination and so much heart. If you work at it you'll be a fine swimmer," Gus Ryder said to me after I finished a one-mile race in the freezing cold Lake Ontario.I believed him and started swimming for Gus. Every day , we trained for hours in openwater. But no matter how hard I worked, I still came in third or fourth. Four years later, it was clear that I was never going to the Olympics. That's when Gus suggested I challenge the famous American long-distance swimmer Florenice Chadwick to swim the thirty-two miles across Lake Ontario from New York to Toronto.The idea had never occurred to me, but Gus had made up his mind. “I wasn't sure Florence could make it. If we could swim one stroke further than her, it would be worth it, Gus encouraged me.Eventually, I decided to do it for Gus, and for myself.The race started at 10 pm on September 6. It was cloudy, windy, and very dark' When I looked around, I couldn't see where the lake ended and the sky began.“Marilyn, just follow my light and I will guide you across this lake,” said Gus, who had a big flashlight and shone it just ahead of me from the lifeboat. Florence swam for about four hours before she quit. But it wasn't until several hours later, when I was having difficulty, that Gus told me that Florence was out and that I was theonly one left!I felt very encouraged, But it was such a long night that Gus had to do his best to keep me going. At the dawn, he even began writing messages on a chalkboard to keepmy thoughtspositive. Once he wrote, “You know you can do it, You can do it for me!" Another time he even wrote,“If you give up, I give up.”By midday'I felt so tired that I started falling asleep. So Gus started swimming with meto get my attention back, “I'm here to swim with you, Marilyn, Come on!” he said.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

【读后续写原题目（含解析）】Nature, while beautiful,（短句的魅力）could also be unpredictable and merciless.（暗示下文我们迷路）But most importantly, we bear in mind that in the darkest times, there's always a light at the end of the tunnel（主题句，要心怀希望，方能砥砺前行）, just like Mrs.Evans' cabin light.（下文一定要出现的帮助我们解决问题的人物）大自然虽然美丽，但也可能是不可预测和无情的。

但最重要的是，我们要记住，在最黑暗的时刻，隧道尽头总有一线光明，就像埃文斯夫人的小屋灯一样。

词汇拓展：at the mercy of任由…摆布（注意完形填空考察）bear in mind牢记于心One bright summer day, my friend Peter and I decided to venture intothe unexplored trails of the Great Smoky Mountains. Blessed with（与应用文equipped with拥有，结构类同）rich biodiversity and fascinating landscapes, the national park seemed a perfect getaway（度假胜地。

takeaway外卖）. Little did we know that（小小的部分倒装）our casual hike would soon turn into an unexpected personal incident, forever engraved in our memories（铭刻在我们的记忆中，可应用在续写最后一句）.在一个阳光明媚的夏日，我和朋友彼得决定去大烟山的未开发小径探险。

班级考号姓名总分一、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

My teenage son, Jordan, always complained about having to be home earlier than all his friends.He would tell me that he was already seventeen， but still had a curfew （宵禁），He believed he was practically an adult.I pointed out that he was not an adult as he was still in high school.“You don't trust me!” he yelled.Before I continued, he rolled his eyes, slammed the door and walked away.I sighed.How could I make Jordan see that I only wanted to keep him safe?I decided to go for a walk, hoping the December air would clear my head.I opened the front door and nearly stepped on her: a small black cat, just like a meatball.“Hi, Meatball," I said, bringing her into my arms.I walked back in, touching her neck gently.Meatball seemed happy enough to come in the house, but after an hour or two, she sat by the door, meowing to go back outside.“Why won't she just stay in with us all the time?” Nathan, my youngest son asked.I explained to him that she was happy here but she liked being able to come and go as she pleased.“That must be nice,” Jordan muttered from the other room, complaining why the cat, not him, could come and go.He even asked me to give Meatball a curfew.Meatball became a regular.One night, temperatures were unusually low.Meatball stood at the door, meowing to go outside.I shook my head at her, afraid that she might freeze to death.She stared at me and meowed again.I patted her head, “I know you're not happy, but it's for your own good.”“Mom's not being mean to you,” Nathan told the cat.“She's just trying to keep you from turning into a frozen meatball.”We both laughed at his joke.The next morning, I couldn't find Meatball.I asked the kids if anyone had seen her.【注意】1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。

2023年6月高考新全国I卷续写解析When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply : "Because I love your stories. If you're willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this." Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were ing. My story would e straight from the horse's mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone else's choice. What did the horse think, as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere's horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a halfdozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said,"Great. Now, write it again." I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn't win, I wouldn't care.Paragraph 1: A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. Paragraph 2: I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.辅助阅读1.apply oneself：努力，使专注2.shot：尝试，I think you have a good shot at this: 我认为你在这方面很有机会。

读后续写素材(结尾方法)【素材1】We exchanged smiles, bathed in the soft room light.After dinner, I pressed the dandelion between two sheets of paper in a dictionary and kept it as a reminder—every flower gives pleasure in its own way.For this, I am forever grateful, because smiles on mother’s face and her kind act foster a man like me now!我们互相微笑,沐浴在柔和的室内灯光下。

晚饭后,我把蒲公英夹在字典里的两张纸之间,保存起来,提醒自己——每一朵花都以自己的方式给人以快乐。

为此,我永远感激,因为母亲脸上的微笑和她的善良养育了现在的我!【素材2】Love and care for the one you love every single day of your life.You may think what you did is just a small deed,but it may mean a lot.Some relations are made to last longer but they still need to be nurtured with love and care.在你生命中的每一天,都要爱护和关心你所爱的人。

你可能认为你所做的只是一件小事,但它可能意味着很多。

有些关系可以维持得更久,但它们仍然需要用爱和关怀来滋养。

【素材3】Sometimes we feel that we could progress quickly and reach the newer heights in our life if we were not tied up with our family.However,we fail to realize that our family and our loved ones help us survive the tough time in our lives and encourage us to reach higher heights in our life.They are not holding us,but are supporting us.Never let go of our loved ones.有时我们觉得,如果没有家庭的羁绊,我们可以进步得很快,达到生活中新的高度。

读后续写专题训练：新来的学生读后续写：阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was the first day of our new grade. Everyone in the classroom was chatting happily, excited to see each other again after the long holidays. When the door slid open, all of us stopped talking and turned to look. In came our teacher Ms. Sullivan, followed by an ordinary-looking boy,“This boy’s name is Rafael.” Ms, Sullivan announced.“He’s a transfer student（转校生), and he’s going to be in our class starting from today. Make sure all of you welcome him warmly.”The class clapped. But I didn't want to have a second look at the newcomer, for he had no outstanding qualities considering his small figure and casual T-shirt.“Oh, I forgot to mention one thing.” Ms Sullivan spoke up. “Rafael actually has hearing problems. Normally he would have hearing aids on, but his old ones have just been broken. His doctor suggested that he stay at home until he got his new ones. However, Rafael insisted on attending his first day of school. So if you want to communicate with him, you have to write it on a piece of paper.”This single speech sent the whole class up into an uproar (嘈杂). Some students looked at each other with expressions of surprise. Others voiced cries of concern out of pity.Ms Sullivan calmed everyone down. “I’d like someone to personally help him out throughout the day. Do I have any volunteers?”“How can a disabled person be intelligent?”I thought to myself. I refused to raise my hand, expecting someone else would. But nobody did or said anything. Dead silence spread across the classroom.It was by total bad luck that my eyes happened to meet Ms. Sullivan's.“How about you, James?”She asked me. “Is it okay for you to take care of Rafael just for today?”It is difficult to refuse a request by someone, especially if that person is a teacher.I sighed and nodded slightly. Ms. Sullivan gestured for Rafael to sit beside me and then asked us to share our holiday stories with the class.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Freddie woke up to see it was snowing-again. The world outside was white. Snow covered the roads, the cars, the houses, and even the driveway Freddie had just shoveled(铲) the day before. “Ugh,” said Freddie. “No more snow!” He got out of bed and headed to the bathroom for his regular morning shower. As he reached for the taps, his mother appeared in the doorway. “I’ve got news,” she said. “There’s been so much snow overnight that the roads are slippery and dangerous. I just heard on the radio that they canceled the school buses for the day.” Freddie groaned. “Then how am I supposed to get to school?”His mom grinned. “I guess you don’t. It’s a snow day! ”Freddie’s eyes lit up. He’d never had a snow day off from school before. What would he do first? “I’m going back to bed!” Freddie headed back to his room and climbed under the covers. After a few minutes, he realized that it was too late. He was already wide awake. He headed down to the kitchen and then sat at the table, watching his father fry the eggs over in the pan and his mother pour juice and coffee. It was relaxing, thought Freddie. After breakfast his mother suggested he go out and build a snowman. Freddie wasn’t too sure. He didn’t really like the cold and the snow. He’d rather stay inside and play video games.“You can play afterward, but how about going outside for a little bit? It’s good to get some fresh air, and who knows, you might even enjoy yourself.” Freddie unwillingly put on the warm clothes and headed outside. Standing alone in the front yard, with the cold wind blowing, was not Freddie’s idea of a good time. Knowing his mom meant what she said, the boy sighed, thinking the quicker he completed his snowman, the faster he could go back inside to his video games. He set to work packing up some snow into a large ball. Moments later, he saw one of his friends appearing from his house up the street. Dion waddled(蹒跚) out in his big snow trousers and heavy overcoat. He waved to Freddie. “Hey there! I saw you out here and thought you might want company. Snow days are awesome!” Dion laughed.Paragraph1:Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate .Paraprgph2:Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house.【详解】前文主要讲的是主人公Freddie很懊恼下雪天，因为他可能又要为了保持道路畅通继续出去铲雪。

读后续写：风中救鸟--“风鸟”读后续写原文中文"Hurry up, Kyle! Mom's car!" I yelled, pushing open the door of our school. I stepped into the strong wind, flying sand hitting my cheeks. "Kyle?" I yelled again. "Right behind you, Nikki!" Kyle yelled back, pulling my coat. Whew! My little brother was with me. We made it to Mom's car at last. "快点，Kyle！去妈妈的车里！"我大喊着，推开我们学校的门。

我走进强风中，飞砂击打我的脸颊。

"Kyle?"我再次大喊。

"我就在你后面，Nikki!" Kyle拉着我的外套，大声回应道。

天哪！我小弟弟没跟丢。

我们终于到达了妈妈的车里。

"Nikki, turn up the radio." The announcer reported, "High wind warning. Winds up to seventy-five miles per hour. Seek shelter inside." I looked into the dark sky but saw nothing dangerous. Then...BLAM! Something knocked into the wind-shield, hard. "Nikki，收音机的音量调大一些。

"播音员报道说，"强风警告。

读后续写-I Survived a Mudslide试题呈现：It was May 2018, and my partner, Gabe Rosescu, and I were taking a road trip in his little car from my home in Weyburn, Saskatchewan, to visit friends in Nelson, British Columbia. It was our first trip together after six months of dating, meaning it would be an adventure on so many levels.At around 5:30pm, we were driving along the Crowsnest Highway, a steep winding road that splits through the southern Canadian Rockies. I was texting my mother when I happened to look up in time to see an enormous tree in front of us on the highway - standing straight up! It was being pushed along by mud that was swallowing everything in its path. Within seconds, our car was rolling 900 feet down the cliff side.I don't know how long we were unconscious, but I woke up to the sound of Gabe moaning. He was slumped over the steering wheel and his blood was everywhere.The car had landed on a small rock amid trees that had come down with the slide. On one side of us was the mountain. On the other, a steep drop of about 3,000 feet into a river.I tried opening my door and was overcome by sharp chest pain. I’d later learn that I’d suffered a broken breastbone. In addition, my left ankle had been crushed andmy foot was practically turned sideways. Gabe had broken his cheek bones, as well as his orbital (眼眶) bones, leaving him blind in his left eye.With the passenger and driver’s side doors crushed shut, and my window impassable, the only way out was through the driver's side window. Neither of us remember doing it, but somehow we both managed to crawl out of that wreckage. We sat on a log and considered our options.注意:1. 续写词数应为 150 左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。