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四级写作——周湘 (周湘湘oleander新浪微博，周湘oleander 人人)一. 四级写作的特点1. 语言以简洁的简单句为主，最多辅以一两个定语从句，宾语从句，状语从句。

2. 内容以大众易于表达为主，重点放在动词，动词词组，形容词的选择上。

3. 话题以常见社会，文化，教育，科技类话题为主，远离热点和争议性话题。

4. 语意以准确完整为主，不必刻意追求深刻和个性（区分及物动词和不及物动词，名词的意思和正确的形式。

）二. 英语四级写作历年题目汇总2012 on excessive packaging2011 nothing succeeds without a strong will2011 online shopping2010 how should parents help children to be independent?2010 due attention should be given to spelling2009 create a green campus2009 free admission to museums2008 restriction on disposable plastic bags2008 on green olympics2007 on selective courses2007 an announcement to welcome students to join a club2006 on cctv spring festival gala2006 an announcement for a voluntary program2005 should the university campus be open to tourists2005 teachers day2005 a campaign speech2004 a brief introduction to a tourist attraction2004 a letter in reply to a friend2003 an eye witness account of a traffic accident2003 it pays to be honest2002 student use of computers2002 a letter to a school2001 a letter to a schoolmate2001 how to succeed in a job interview?2000 is a test of spoken english necessary?2000 how i finance my college education?题目分析：1. 只考教育（13次），社会（11次，热点一次），品质类话题（2次）2. 出题形式：信件－－意图，细节，客套（套用模板）(湘湘的香水瓶）说明文－－on the importance/effect/influence/reasons of...; why ....; how...（原因，结果，方式，重要性）议论文－－Should...? Is it necessary for ....to do...?what is your opinion?图表分析-- 说明文－－图表数据，说明原因或者影响3. 下次考试？a. 教育类话题为主b. “小心”材料题c. 提纲式题目按模板写即可，不可踰越提纲d. 模板统一性三. 如何备考1. 重点准备话题词汇和句型2. 对掌握的句型和词汇结合话题进行句子练习3. 考前一个月左右进行完整文章写作练习（利用模板和准备好的话题词汇）4. 话题按照教育，社会，精神分类准备5. 练习数量在于“精”“准”，不在于“多”。

四. 语言准备词汇的记忆的六步：1念 2拼3变化 4拆 5分6展开（Merriam Webster)1. 动词类保护：protect, shield, defend, guard抱怨：complain,make complaints about避免：avoid, keep away from澄清：clarify, clear up, explain, define持续：last, endure, keep on打破：break, fall apart, smash, crack耽搁：delay, postpone, put off导致：result in, lead to, bring about, generate调查：examine, probe into, investigate丢弃：abandon, discard, quit发生：happen, take place, occur， break out, come about发现：discover, turn up, dig out察觉：notice perceive, detect反对：object to, disapprove of, protest against, oppose to反抗：resist, repel against废止：abolish分配：share, distribute, allot服从：obey, comply with, abide by复制：copy, reproduce, duplicate改变：change, vary, reform隔离：isolate, separate, set apart攻击：attack, invade忽视：neglect, ignore, overlook花费：spend, expend, consume唤起：evoke, awaken, call forth混合：mix, blend获得：acquire, gain, obtain激发：arouse, stir, provoke加强：strengthen, beef up, reinforce假装：pretend,simulate减少：decrease, fall off, dwindle讲述：report, portray教育：educate, train, enlighten揭露：reveal, uncover, unmask, expose 节约：conserve, cut back, economize解雇：fire, dismiss lay off解释：translate, reword, restate集中：focus on, center on, concentrate on 居住：inhabit, occupy, reside, dwell拒绝：refuse,turn down赠送：donate, contribute, grant决定：decide, choose, opt激励：activate, motivate, spur开始：start, set about夸奖：flatter, praise, compliment描述：describe, picture, depict例证：typify, stand for, represent迷惑：puzzle, confuse, bewilder明白：understand, make out评价：evaluate, assess, estimate评论：comment, remark,criticize破坏：destroy, wipe out, wreck欺骗：mislead, deceive, trick强调：stress, emphasize强迫：force, oblige, compel欣赏：admire, respect, worship限制：restrict, ban取消：cancel, call off忍受：bear, tolerate, weather, put up with认出：recognize, spot, discern, identify散播：broadcast, spread2. 衔接类的逻辑词类顺序类首先,其次, 然后, 最后: firstly, secondly, thirdly; in the first place, in the second place, in the final place;first and foremost, moreover, additionally, furthermore, eventually, last but by no means least;to start with, to end with, on top of that, in addition to that, added to that, besides, finally, lastly.Initially, plus/also, ultimately.转折类However, otherwise, nevertheless, instead, notwithstandingIn contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, despite the fact that, in spite ofBut, yet, although, even though, thoughAdmittedly, concededly.Albeit+形容词／介词词组／分词，常位于句中Your courage, albeit frail and faint, can still push me forward, continuously.强调类Of course, indeed, most important, certainly, in fact, obviously, clearly, surely, in particular, in this case, actually.对比类In comparison, likewise, similarly, equally, in the same way, identically递进类Furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition, additionally, also.因果类原因because of, owing to, due to, thanks toBecause of you, I failed.Because of you loved me, I remain single till today.Because of the fact that you loved me, I remain single till today.Because you loved me, I remain single till today.because, since, for, as, in thatmainly/merely/simply becauseMany Chinese students go to USA to further their studies in that they believe they can have more opportunities to live happily and freely.结果 therefore, thus, hence, consequently, accordinglyas a result, as a consequenceso3 名词的修饰方法a. 名词的正确形式和准确语意，单数可数名词不可以单独出现，必须加上冠词；复数名词和不可数名词可以单独出现，如果表示特指含义，则需加上the.eg: The study of literature works is very important to student.Practice makes permanence.b. 冠词＋形容词＋名词great pressureintense pressure修饰人的形容词：褒贬(generous, miserly; selfish, selfless/altruistic; introverted, extroverted; sensitive, insensitive; ) 外表，性格，情感；修饰事件：重要的，必要的，普遍的，流行的，复杂的c. 冠词＋（形容词）＋名词＋定语从句定语从句就是一个带有动作含义的后置定语which, that, who的引导词which:指物，表示“具体的，可触的”物体，比如“桌子，电脑等”that: 指物，表示“抽象的，不可触的”没有生命的对象，比如“期待，假设，灵感，梦想，文化”等。

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2023年6月18日大学英语四级作文范文

2023年6月18日大学英语四级作文范文

2023年6月18日大学英语四级作文范文2023年6月18日大学英语四级作文范文For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay [IN honour of teachers on the occasionof Teacher's Day]. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1,向教师表达节日祝贺2,从一件小事来回忆教师的教导和无私的`奉献3,我如何回报教师的关爱Teacher's Day____________________范文：In Honour of Teachers on the Occasion of Teacher's DaySeptember 10th is a special occasion, on which we students can express our sincere gratitude to our respectable teachers.In my memory, Mr. Jiang, my Chemistry teacher in high school, impressed me most in my past school years.At that time, I did rather poorly in Chemistry, which made me very upset. Mr. Jiang, a considerate and patient teacher, did not have any bias against me, who lagged far behind the others. Instead, he encouraged me and worked out an individualized plan for me. Highly motivated by this, I got interested in this subject, found the correct methods and managed to catch up with others.I will never forget those who have dedicated all their efforts to help me grow intellectually. Working even harder and making my due。

邹老师四六级 作文模板

邹老师四六级 作文模板

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一、开头段。

1. 话题引入。

2. 观点引出。

3. 提出论点。

例文：Nowadays, with the rapid development of society, the issue of environmental protection has become increasingly prominent. It is widely acknowledged that environmental problems have posed a great threat to our living environment. In my opinion, it is high time that we took effective measures to protect the environment.二、中间段。

1. 论点一。

2. 论据一。

3. 论点二。

4. 论据二。

5. 论点三。

6. 论据三。

例文：First and foremost, the excessive exploitation of natural resources has led to the depletion of our natural environment. For example, the overuse of fossil fuels has causedair pollution and global warming, which have seriously affected our health and daily life. What's more, the disposal of industrial waste has contaminated our water and soil, posing a great threat to our food safety. In addition, the destruction of forests and wetlands has resulted in the loss of biodiversity, which is essential for the balance of our ecosystem. Therefore, it is imperative that we take immediate action to protect our environment.三、结尾段。

英语四级作文范文解析(必备4篇)

英语四级作文范文解析(必备4篇)

英语四级作文范文解析(必备4篇)英语四级作文范文解析第1篇英语四级作文范文解析第2篇英语四级作文范文解析第3篇英语四级作文范文解析第4篇【四级翻译真题】生活在*不同地区的人们饮食多种多样。

北方人主要吃面食，南方**多吃米饭。

在沿海地区，海鲜和淡水水产品在人们饮食中占有相当大的比例，而在其他地区人们的饮食中，肉类和奶制品更为常见。

四川、湖南等省份的居民普遍爱吃辛辣食物，而江苏和浙江人更喜欢甜食。

然而，因为烹饪方式各异，同类食物的.味道可能会有所不同。

【四级翻译参考译文】People in different parts of China have a variety of diets. In the north the staple food is pasta, while in the south rice. In coastal areas, seafood and freshwater products make up a large part of the local diet, while in other areas, meat and dairy products are more common on the table. People in Sichuan, Hunan and other provinces generally prefer spicy food, while people in Jiangsu and Zhejiang prefer sweet food. However, due to different cooking methods, similar foods may taste different from one another.第1页共1页。

2012年6月英语四级考试作文万能模版

2012年6月英语四级考试作文万能模版

2012年6月英语四级考试作文万能模版1）第一句的第一种写法：就某事，人们又热烈讨论There is a heated discussion whether（通常用在选择性话题：是否年级小出国，是否有必要参加…）they should live off campus or live together with other roommates.(住在校外，还是和同学共住) students should be asked to grade their teacher （是否学生应该要求给老师打分）students should take a part-time job in school （是否学生在校期间应该找兼职）2）第一句的第二种写法：某事引发人们关注（不用写事情的经过，用一个词儿代替事情过程）Recently，the problem of “”has aroused wide concern among the publicCurrently，he phenomenon of drunken driving has arouse wide concern among the public（酒后驾驶）Currently，the frequent job-hopping of graduates has aroused wide concern among the public.（跳槽）Currently，the problem of “food safety” has aroused wide concern among the public. （食品安全）3）第一句的第三种写法：社会现象变成某个“词”（这种写法最大的魅力也是，将事件过程压缩成一个词！）The newly-coined word/phrase“”may by no means sound strange to most people in this day and age.（“”中填进的词有：nude picture scandal艳照门丑闻；water shortage缺水；online education网络教育；fake diplomas假证书；craze for talent shows 选秀狂热）4）第一句的第四种写法：社会趋势（一般都写在“有越来越多的人干什么去了”这样的社会现状）There is a growing tendency nowadays that…graduates in mounting numbers can hardly find an ideal job （就业难）people in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for volunteer works/ various talent shows（选秀热）students in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for students leaders selection （竞选班干部热）people in mounting numbers participate in the test for national civil servants. （公务员热）undergraduates in growing numbers take the postgraduate entrance examination （考研热）people in mounting numbers try their luck to buy lottery tickets （买彩票热）people in mounting numbers use credit card. （信用卡热）注：people in mounting numbers 都表示“越来越多的人”，切忌写：more and more people，找死！5）第一句的第五种写法：某个现象人尽皆知（一般写比较大的，比较严重的社会问题）No one in China has failed to notice the phenomenon that…that goods in mounting numbers are wrapped in flaring boxes or bags （过度包装问题）that there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers who swarm into big cities.（农工进城）The economy has been developing at a considerably high speed at the expense of living environment.（经济发展以牺牲环境为代价）文章第二句话：（小虹有话：陈述正反观点；你只要说，针对某个事情，人们看法存在不一样就行，不要再第一段就开始具体论述双方的观点各是什么！）Does anyone hold the same attitude towards this issue ？Definitely not，actually，opinions vary from person to person.第二段：对立观点论述段（小虹有话：文章的第3,4,5,6四句话，都写在第二段；这是字数最多，内容最丰满的一段，称为“猪肚”）文章第三句话：（提出正方观点，比如说他支持什么；总体来说，有两种表示支持的说法）Some maintain that ( 表示“认为”的单词，打死都不写“think”；maintain/argue/hold/claim都可以写)1）某物是有好处的：something is beneficial to sth. （练习：跳槽对学生有利）2) 某物优点>缺点：The merits of sth. far outweigh its demerits.（练习：用手机的优点>缺点）文章第四句话：( 上句提出了论点，这句就必须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个；个数的标准是字数达标)Firstly,…secondly,…last but not least,…. （万能理由：这个只能在新东方小虹的六级写作课堂听啦！）文章第五句话：( 既是正反对立观点作文，第三句提出正方观点，那么这句当然要提出对立观点啦！)However，quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that （反方观点），1) 某物是有坏处：something is detrimental to sth.2) 某物缺点>优点：The demerits of sth. far outweigh itsmerits. （merits 代替advantages）文章第六句话：( 上句提出了论点，这句就必须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个；个数的标准是字数达标)For one thing，… for another,…（万能理由：这个只能在新东方小虹的六级写作课堂听啦！）第三段：个人观点段（文章的第7,8,9句；四六级作文，包括考研作文，都要求写essay-议论文，短评，所以，写了上述对立观点的目的，其实就是为了最后提出自己的观点！）文章第七句话：To my way of thinking，… From my perspective, + 个人观点句（参见第三、五）.文章第八句话：( 上句提出了论点，这句就必须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个；个数的标准是字数达标) In the first place，… in the second place,…（万能理由）文章第九句话：( 再次重申自己的观点，和第七句话正好构成“总分总结构”)Given all the factors I have outlined，I strongly commit to the notion that（观点句）或者是：Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the idea that…模板二：问题解决作文{3段9句话，2011年12月六级可能考}（小虹有话：全文写3段共9句话；第一段提出问题，第二段分析问题，第三段解决问题——亚里士多德三段论！）第一段：陈述现状段（小虹有话：文章的第1、2句；主要用来写当前的某个社会现状、趋势；共有5种开篇写法，没有固定的标准选哪种，选择一种容易下手的去写，我已经将相关话题都举出来了）文章第一句话：（小虹有话：第一句话的功能，就是介绍文章写作背景，社会现状；所以呢，写法和“对立观点作文”的文章第一段，第一句的写法是完全一样的！）The past several years have witnessed a not uncommon phenomenon that… ( 社会现象).文章第二句话：具体描述（将文章第一句话所讲的抽象的、大体的社会现象，用具体的文字描述一下，增加字数，只能这么做了！）举例：（第一句）Nowadays, the phenomenon of drunken driving has arouse wide concern among the public.（第二句）Especially the young generation living in metropolis, tend to drive after drinking, ignoring the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat totheir precious life and may even endanger others.第二段：原因或危害陈述段（分析问题）文章第三句话：（过渡句，引发讨论某个社会问题、现象产生的原因）Ample reasons can account for this phenomenon，and the followings might be the most critical ones:文章第四句话：（提出某个社会问题、现象产生的原因；具体写几个原因，根据字数情况斟酌）Firstly，… secondly,….（万能理由）文章第五句话：（提出如果我们不关注这个问题，后果很严重！）The problem mentioned above will bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. （翻译：如果我们对这个问题视而不见，听而不闻，将产生严重后果）文章第六句话：（危害和后果分别是什么呢？）On the one hand, … on the other hand,…第三段：原因或危害陈述段（解决问题）文章第七句话：（号召句，“放空话”！号召大家赶紧采取措施，投入关注等等）Effective measures should be adopted before things get worse.文章第八句话：（采取什么措施呢？这个在考前你都可以背下来，考试的时候用上去就好！）First and foremost，（措施）.1）扬善去恶：（两面性问题，比如手机，彩票等等）What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent2) 大家联合起来：（一般用在解决学生的问题，心理健康啊，网瘾啊等等）It is high time that parents，educators，and the authorities make combined efforts to put an end to this situation.3) 个人意识：（提高环境保护的意识等等）The public should enhance their consciousness of the significance of …4) 采取行动：（这句话纯粹就是凑字数的）We must press forward on deeper research，but research alone is inadequate, actually，any one of us has good reason to take actions to…5) 加强教育：（一般用在涉及面比较广的社会问题）A public education campaign should be launched to inform the public of the importance of6) 政府出台：（一般用在比较大的，比较严重的社会问题，如节约问题，浪费问题等等）It is essential that the authorities should make and implement relevant laws and regulations to impose a heavy penalty on those who (contaminate the environment deliberately)7) 呼吁相关部门加强监管：（一般用在比较大的，比较严重的社会问题。