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七夕，古今诗人惯咏星月与悲情。

吾生虽晚，世态炎凉却已看透矣。

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乃书于纸上。

毕而卧。

凄然入梦。

乙酉年七月初七。

-----啸之记。

作文高分模版The lecture is mainly discussing that _______________________. Thus, the lecture totally disagrees with what are stated in the passage.Firstly, in contrast to the argument stated in the passage that _________________, the professor says that_______________________.Scondly, the lecture contradicts the point made in the passage that ___________________________. The professor says ________.Finally, while the passage argues that______________________, the lecture maintains a different point of view. The professor says__________________________.In sum, the contents in the reading passage are totally refuted by the lecture and the lecture advocates totally different ideas on the topics made in the reading passage.In a modern society, people always face the dilemma to choose whether AAA or BBB. This problem is the much debated one in that it affects everybody in their daily lives. People may prefer one to another although some may have no opinions about it at all. Before rendering my opinion, I think it is necessary to take a glance at the arguments of both sides.It is quite easy for average people to choose BBB because of the obvious reason that---. It can be given by a well known example that ---.But at the mean time, although BBB has some advantages, it also has many drawbacks such as ---. Therefore we have no complete evidence to suggest that BBB is always better than AAA. What is more, the innate quality of AAA, unfortunately, is often underestimated; in other words,if you notice the invisible benefits of choosing AAA, you can understand AAA more deeply. Here I would explain a few of the most important reasons. The main reason is that ---. To illustrate this, there is an appropriate example that is very persuasive: ---.--- is only part of the important aspects, and another equally significant role of choosing AAA lies in the development of ---.This demonstrates the undeniable fact that ---.Besides, the further reason why I advocate AAA is that ---. This may explain why ---.In addition, some experts maintain that ----. This significant point, however, is often not noticed by most people and accordingly, is unconsciously overlooked.Finally, as a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”.Although I admit that there are a couple of advantages of ----, I still think that the disadvantages of it are more obvious. Such as ---, ----, and ----. This demonstrates that we have no complete evidence to suggest that BBB is always better than AAA.If all the factors above are considered, we will find out that the advantages of AAA outweigh those of BBB. Therefore from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that choosing AAA is a rather wise decision. But I have not denied the opinion that choosing BBB. I must admit that people can do well without AAA, but no one can ignore the added convenience and satisfaction offered by AAA. Such experience will definitely be helpful in one’s later life.给大家的建议是一定要做些修改，然后用它套写几篇。

新托福满分作文范文(30篇).p d f托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏（１）Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice?As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shinin g compared with group’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking o thers’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(2)Case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others' advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and1capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone's mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group's wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders' of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking others' advice instead of getting everything done on one's own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(3)After they complete their university studies, some students live in their hometowns. Others live in different towns and cities. Which do you think is beterr? Give reasons for your answer.After they complete their univerrsity studies, some students preferr to live in their hometowns while others choose to live in different towns or cities. Everybody has his own reasons for his preference. After my graduation, I will go back and live in my home city. I have made this decision because of the following reasons.Firstly, my home city is a big city that can offer a lot. There are plenty of opportunities for work, many big libraries for studies, several differrent musiums for visit, and numerous cinemas, theaters and centers for entertainment. When I go back there, I will have no difficulty in finding a job suitable for me and I can make use of all the facilities available there.Secondly, if I go back to my home city, I can look after my parents. I take this into consideration because I am their only child and they are now weak and getting on in age. If I live in the same city with them, I can visit them very often and help them whenever it is necessary.Thirdly, if I live in my home city, I will have a lot of friends, schoolmates and relatives to visit and to turn to for help when I need. Of course, I could get acquainted with many people and make many friends if I were to go to live in a strange place, but that takes time. If I go back to my home city, everybody will be waiting for me and I will be able to settle down comfortably without any trouble and waste of time.In short, my choise is based on a careful consideration of my home city and my family. I think it is a better or sensible choice; in a certain sense, it is a must.Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(4)If you have a good neighbor, you are a lucky person. You have someone who cares about your needs and your property, who is helpful in the little day-to-day situations that come up, and who is supportive in times of crisis.A good neighbor is someone who, for instance, understands that your children may occasionally run across his lawn,- even though you tell them not to. He'll realize that children can be careless about things like that, and he won't make a big fuss about it unless it becomes a regular thing. In the same vein, he knows that you'll understand if some of the trash from his trash cans blows across into your yard. In other words, he is sensitive to the unintentional things that can happen. He doesn't make a big deal about them.A good neighbor is also respectful of your property. For example, she asks your permission before doing anything that interferes with what's yours. This means she wouldn't plant a huge tree in between your houses without asking how you felt about it. If she wanted to put up a fence, she would let you know first. She might work with you to decide where it should be placed. Maybe the two of you would even split the cost.A good neighbor would lend you some milk if you ran out. She'd give you a ride to work if your car was broken, and let your children stay at her house in the evening if you got stuck working overtime. You would do the same for her. Both of you would help make the other's life easier.When something really awful happens to you, like a death in the family, a good neighbor will volunteer to help in any way he can. This could mean something small, like making some casseroles to put in your freezer to feed visiting relatives. Or it could mean something big, like helping you get through the sadness of the funeral.I think only someone who has experienced a bad neighbor can really appreciate a good one!A good neighbor can be a good friend. He or she can make all the difference in the world to your life.托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(5)Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and esamples to support your answer.Some people like to eat out at food stands and restaurants, while others like to prepare food at home. Often it depends on the kind of lifestyle people have. Those with very busy jobs outside the house don’t always have time to cook. They like the convenience of eating out. Overall, though, it is cheaper and healthier to eat at home.While eating in restaurants is fast, the money you spend can add up. When I have dinner at a restaurant with a friend, the bill is usually over twenty dollars. I can buy a lot of groceries with that much money. Even lunch at a fast-food stand usually costs five or six dollars for one person. That’s enough to feed the whole family at home.Eating at home is better for you, too. Meals at restaurants are often high in fat and calories, and they serve big plates of food-much more food-than you need to eat at one meal. If you cook food at home, you have more control over the ingredients. You can use margarine instead of butter on your potatoes, or not put so much cheese on top of your pizza. At home, you can control yourportion size. You can serve yourself as little as you want. In a restaurant, you may eat a full plate of food "because you paid for it."I t’s true that eating out is convenient. You don’t have to shop, or cook, or clean up. But real home cooking doesn’t have to take up a lot of time. There are lots of simple meals that don’t take long to make. In fact, they’re faster than eating out, especia lly if you think of the time you spend driving to a restaurant, parking, waiting for a table,, waiting for service, and driving home.Both eating at restaurants and cooking at home can be satisfying. Both can taste good and be enjoyed with family and friends. I prefer cooking at home because of the money and health issues, but people will make the choice that fits their lifestyle best.托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(6)题目：It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.A New Movie TheaterEntertainment is an important part of everyone’s life. We all need to take time to relax insgroupsto live healthy lives and do our work efficiently. It is easier to relax when an appropriate form of entertainment is convenient and close by. Therefore, I would support a proposal to build a new movie theater in my neighborhood.Entertainment places can bring some disadvantages to a community such as increased traffic and noise, but I believe the advantages of a new movie theater would outweigh these concerns. For one thing, the people in my neighborhood would save time. When they wanted to see a movie they could simply walk to the new theater rather than spend time traveling by bus or car. In addition, it would be safer for children to visit a nearby movie theater rather than one in some other part of the city. And finally, a new theater might attract other businesses, such as restaurants and coffee shops, where the people of my neighborhood could go to relax.In short, a new movie theater in the neighborhood would increase the number of entertainment options for the residents. They could enjoy themselves more easily without spending a lot of time traveling to another part of the city. For these reasons I would support the building of a movie theater in my neighborhood.译文：一家新电影院娱乐是每个人生活中一个重要的组成部分。

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20180324托福独立写作Do you agree or disagree: People should relax with the ways related to their hobbies and physical activities which are different with their work.Sample Answer：It is not uncommon that modern people are fully occupied with their work with little time left for relaxation. Thus, during the precious limited spare time, it is said that they should do something related to their own hobbies and physicalactivities instead of things connected with their work anymore, which, I totally agree with and this standpoint will be illustrated by the following two aspects.To begin with, never should we ignore the necessity of developing our hobbies and make them different from work. The so-called hobby means the consciousness tendency of a person striving for a specific thing or activity and consequently, gain pleasure or satisfaction from them, which results in the motivation of high work efficiency and quality. For example, a sports fan may forget about the trouble at work when immersing in the joy of his favorite team’s championship. Similarly, a young man whose favorite is singing may feel stress-free after staying for several hours in Karaoke. Thus, on the one hand, it is a wise choice not to make hobbies as work, which would eventually lead to a dull and uninteresting life with the hobby being ruined in daily work. On the other hand, balancing the hobby and work well is of crucial significance to a person’s life as the relaxation and pleasure gained from hobby provides impetus of high work efficiency.Moreover, the fact that doing physical activities do good to a person’s physical condition and mental state makes them a pivotal part of life apart from work. With increasinglysignificant pressure and heavy workload, it is, between times, reported that workers suffer from sudden death after excessively long working hours. Thus, physical activities, under this circumstance, seem irreplaceable in terms of strengthening working people’s physique. In addition, it is proven by science that exercise, beyond making a person more fit, also brings out the release of endorphins, compounds that give the person a sense of well-being and satisfaction in the brain. Thus, instead of taking up more time, doing physical activities in spare time is complementary of work by activating and refreshing workers.All in all, according to the aforementioned discussion, it is safely concluded that different from working, doing things related to hobbies and physical activities is a wiser approach for workers to relax.（382 words）。

A foreign student who plans to come to the United States must have some definite goals in mind. For the student who wants to improve his English quickly and learn about American customs firsthand, there is often an opportunity to live with an American family.First of all, some minor disadvantages of living with an American family include both a lack of privacy and little opportunity to be independent. For instance, the foreign student may find that the family expects him to join them in group activities such as watching television and going on picnics. At times, however, he might enjoy staying i his room to read or to write letters to his family and friends. Another drawback of living in an American home involves the possibility that the family may treat the student like a child. For example, the parents may want to decide who his friends will be and where he will go during his leisure time away from home.Even though there may be one or two disadvantages of living with an American family, the advantages far outweigh them. By taking part in a home-stay program, the student has an excellent opportunity to learn about American customs. He will find out how to behave in different social situations such as parties and ceremonies and how to dress on there occasions. Also, he will learn about many other aspects of the American way of life, such as the way schools are run in the United States. With a family close by, he can ask questions about attendance rules and school costs. The family will make certain that he becomes acquainted with this new way of life, and soon he will feel at home.Another advantage of living with an American family is that the student is in an ideal environment to improve his English. For example, each time he has a conversation withsomeone in the family, this native speaker can help the student with his homework, too. But the most important thing is that he will be surrounded by English most of the time during his stay in the United States.Although I agree that there may be a couple of disadvantages of living with an American family, I feel that the advantages are more obvious. In a home-stay program, the student can learn about American customs in the most natural way possible. In addition, he will find himself in an atmosphere in which his English will certainly improve. In my opinion, these are the two most important goals for him to consider, and living with an American family is the best way to achieve them.。

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托福高分范文大全pDF目录：第一章托福写作简介1第二章独立写作高分范文81.movies:seriousorentertaining?严肃电影还是娱乐电影?82.Isrelatingwelltoothersmoreimportantthanstudyingha rd?搞好人际关系比努力学习更重要吗?103.Dogradesencouragestudentstolearn?分数鼓励学生学习吗?124.Isdailyhomeworknecessaryforstudents?学生有必要每天都做家庭作业吗?145.Istheabilitytowritewellmoreimportantthanthatofspe aking?写作能力比口语能力更重要吗?166.whatcanhelpyoutosucceed?什么能帮助你走向成功?187.Isitmoreimportanttoworkquicklywithrisksmakingmist akesthantoworkslowlywitheverythingcorrect?冒着犯错误的风险高速地工作比确保万无一失地缓慢工作更重要吗?208.Isitessentialforyoungpeopletohavetheabilitytoplan andorganize?年轻人必须具备组织管理才能吗?229.shouldn’tpeoplepayforpublictransportation?人们应该免费搭乘公共交通工具吗?24nd:forhumanneedsorforendangeredanimals?土地用于人类需求还是濒危动物?2611.shouldthegovernmentfocusmoreonpreservingnaturale nvironmentandlessoneconomicdevelopment?政府应当更加注重环保，并减少对经济发展的重视程度吗?2812.shouldpeopleworkinthesamecompanyorforthesameempl oyer(:托福高分范文大全戴云)fortheirwholelife?人们应在同一家公司或为同一个雇主效力终生吗?3013.shouldyoungpeopletrydifferentjobsbeforetheydecid eontheirlong-termjoborcareer?年轻人应当在决定长期从事的职业之前先尝试做不同的工作吗?3214.Isitadvisableforteenagechildrentotakepart-timejo bs?十几岁的孩子做兼职工作可取吗?3415.Aresomescientistsresponsibleforthenegativeimpact smadebytheirdiscoveries?有些科学家应对其科学发现所产生的负面影响负责吗?3616.Isadvertisingthemaincauseofunhealthyeatinghabits?广告是导致不健康饮食习惯的主要原因吗?3817.Doesplayingsportsteachusaboutlife?体育运动教给人们人生的道理吗?4018.Areenvironmentalissuestoocomplextobehandledbythe individual?由于环境问题过于复杂，个人是无法应对的吗?4219.Themostimportantthingsforgovernmentstodotoimprov ehealthcare政府为改善医疗保健需做的最重要的工作4420.Theonlywaythegovernmentcanconserveenergy政府保护能源的唯一途径4621.werepeoplefriendlierinthepastthantheyaretoday?过去的人们比现在的人们更友好吗?4822.Isvisitingmuseumsthebestwaytolearnaboutacountry?了解一个国家最好的方法就是参观博物馆吗?5023.choosingasubjectthatinterestsyouoronepreparingyo uforabetterjoborcareer?选择一门你感兴趣的学科还是选择职业倾向性强的学科?5224.Istravelinginagroupledbyatourguidethebestwaytotr avel?跟团旅行是最好的旅行方式吗?5425.shouldthegovernmentfocusitsbudgetmoreonyoungchil dren’seducationratherthanonuniversities?政府应将更多预算投入到青少年教育上而非高等教育上吗?5626.Alargecompanyorasmallone,whichdoyouwanttoworkfor?就职于大公司还是小公司?5827.makingfriendswithintelligentpeopleorwithhumorous people?与聪明人交朋友还是与幽默的人交朋友?6028.Lettingafriendmakeamistakeisbetterthansayingordo ingsomethingthatmaydestroyyourfriendship?让一个朋友犯错误胜过说一些可能伤害友情的话或做一些可能伤害友情的事?6229.Advice:fromfriendsolderthanyouorfromthoseofyoura ge?建议：采纳来自年长朋友的还是同龄朋友的?6430.Dosomepeopleliketospendtimealonewhenrelaxing?放松的时候，有些人喜欢独处?6631.Arestudentsmoreinfluencedbytheirteachersthanbyth eirfriends?学生受老师的影响比受朋友的影响更多吗?6832.shouldthemostimportanteducationforstudentsbecond uctedintheclassroom,butnotoutoftheclassroom?对学生最重要的教育是在教室里进行的，而不是教室外?7033.Isknowledgegainedthroughstudymoreimportantthanth eabilitytobecreative?通过学习收获的知识比创新能力更重要?7234.Finishingaprojectcompletelythentoanotheroneordoingtwoorseveralprojectsatatime?先彻底完成一个项目再转向另一个项目，还是同时进行两个或两个以上的项目?7435.solvingquestionsusingourownknowledgeandexperienc eoraskingotherpeopleforadvice?利用自己的知识和经验还是询问他人的建议来解决问题?7636.Isitagoodmethodtogivethesamegradetoallthemembers whodothesameprojecttogether?每个组员都获得相同的分数是评价他们的好办法吗?7837.Isitbettertoselectbroadsubjectsthanspecializeina specificsubject?选择宽泛的学科比专注于一门学科更好?8038.shoulddriverspayacertainamountoffeesinordertobep ermittedtodriveoutintrafficbusytime?司机应该缴纳一定的费用以获得在交通高峰时段驾驶的许可吗?8239.Istheextendedfamilylessimportantthanitwasbefore?大家庭没有过去重要了吗?8440.willpeoplereducecarusein20years?20年后，人们会减少对汽车的使用吗?86篇二：戴云ToeFL写作讲义【完整版】智课网ToeFL备考资料戴云ToeFL写作讲义【完整版】摘要：相比备考托福写作的同学都听说过戴云ToeFL写作讲义，这是一份非常难得的资料，不过，今天小编为大家整理的资料就是戴云ToeFL写作讲义word版哦。

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在新托福考试的学术写作部分，写作是一个重要的考察内容。

ETS官方范文ETS官网满分范文I remember every teacher that has taught me since I was in Kindergarten. If a friend wants to know who our first grade teacher was in elementary school, all they have to do is ask me. The teachers all looked very kind and understanding in my eyes as a child. They had special relationships with nearly each and every one of the students and were very nice to everyone. That’s the reason I remember all of them.A teacher’s primary goal is to teach students the best they can about the things that are in our textbooks and more important, how to show respect for one another. They teach us how to live a better life by getting along with everyone. In order to do that, the teachers themselves have to be able to relate well with students.My parents are teachers too. One teaches Plant Biology and one teaches English, but that’s not the reason I’m calling them “teachers.” They are teachers because they teach me how to act in special situations and how to cooperate with others. I have a brother, and my parents use different approacheswhen teaching us. They might scold my brother for surfing the internet too long because he doesn’t have much self-control and they need to restrain him. He almost never studies on his own and is always either drawing, playing computer games, or reading. On the other hand, they never tell me off for using the computer too long. I do my own work when I want and need to because that brings me the best results and my parents understand that. They know that I need leisure time of my own and that I’ll only play until needed. My parents’ ability to relatewell with my brother and I allows them to teach, not just the subject they teach but also their excellent knowledge on life.Knowledge of the subject being taught is something taken for granted, but at the same time, secondary. One must go through and pass a series of courses and tests in order to become a teacher. Any teacher is able to have excellent knowledge of their subject but not all teachers can have the ability to relate well with students.A teacher’s primary goal is to teach students the best they can about how to show respect for one another, so teachers use different approaches when teaching, and knowledge of the subject being taught is secondary. For these reasons, I claim with confidence that excellent knowledge of the subject being taught is secondary to the teacher’s ability to relate well with their students.TOEFL OG 第一篇满分范文There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a relationship. People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, beingthoughtful etc! Everyone would more or less wish that the person s/he is dealingwith, has some of these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to theirimportance, however can be very subjective and relative.When someone asks him/herself the questio n “What do I consider to be the most important thing in my relationship?” the answer depends on a lot of factorssuch as how his/her earlier relationships were.After stating that everyone’s opinion can be differ ent aboutthis, for me honesty,in other words, always telling the truth is the most important consideration in a relationship. Oppositeof this is inarguably lying and if someone needs to lie, eithers/he is hiding something or is afraid of telling me something.In any relationship of mine, I would wish that first of all, the person I’m dealing with is honest. Even though s/he thinks that s/he did something wrong that I would n’t like, s/he’d better tell me the truth and not lie about it. Later on if I find out about a lie or hear the truth from someone else, that’d be much more unpleasant. In thatcase how can I ever believe or trust that person again? How can I ever believe thatthis person has enough confidence in me to forgive him/her and carry on with therelationship from there. So if I cannot trust a person anymore, if the person doesn’t think I can handle the truth, there’s no point to continuing that relationship.Although I would like to see altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyalbehavior from people, an instance of the opposite of these behaviors would notupset me as much as dishonesty would. Among all the possible behaviors, dishonesty is the only one for me that terminates how I feelabout a person’s reliability.Therefore honesty would be my first concern and the most important considerationin a relationship.TOEFL OG第二篇满分范文Every young adults will grow and live apart from their parents to form their ownfamilies. The ages for those young adults to be independent depends on eachperson. Some people may have to live longer with their parents and some othersmay not. This essay will discuss the issue of independent life and living with theirfamilies for a longer time. (背景＋双方观点＋主旨) Most young adults prefer to have a separate or independent life from theirparents or families as soon as possible. This isbecause they have a strong urge for freedom in doing what they desire. But in fact many of them fail. This shouldnot be surprising since often they are actually not ready mentally although theyare physically ready. It is widely understood that to live independently requires alot of energy and is not easy at all. In this twenty first century, people may needmore and more preparation because competition is increasing rapidly.Anobservation shows that many University graduated students are unemployed.Therefore, they will not be able to support and fulfill their necessities.So living independently at an early age is not suitable for all young adults, someyoung adults may need to take more time to prepare themselves before going outto struggle. Young adults need to be ready to support themselves. Taking time toget more education and living with their families for a longer time may lead themto a better independent life because they will be well prepared for the hard-lifeoutside. Still, living with their families for *too* long will not be a good ideabecause they could get to used to it and tend to be less independent.The time to live independently depends on the person himself. He or she mustdecide whether they are ready to leave their parents to have an independent life ornot. The decision will vary from one person to another. A person should judge thathe is capable of fulfilling his needs without being dependent on his parents; thisindicates that he is ready for his independent life. Otherwise he might need to staylonger withhis parents.TOEFL OG 第三篇满分范文Independence! Who doesn’t want independece? But the bigger question is howmuch of an independence is beingdiscussed here? Generally, when teenagersgrow up, their needs and habit of living change. Some would like their parents tobe in control of the major decisions of their lives, while on the other hand, somewould not like their parents to be involved in any sort of decision making processof their lives. In my opinion, the young adults should always consult their parentsas their guides. I will try to demonstrate my point in the following paragraphs.Let’s as sume a teenager grows up into a young a dult. Now a major decision thathe/she might have had to make was to what college/university they were going toattend. If we assume that the person seek complete independence from the earlyage, then they are generally going to make the decision themselves. But even ifthey made this desicion by themself, what is the probability that this is the bestdesicion.We all would agree that the best lesson learned is from a mistake, butwhy even let that happen? This is the most important decision they would have tomake so far, and if they don’t ask around, if they don’t look at the wider picture,how are they supposed to end up at their very best opportunity? This, is what isknown as a making/breaking point because this decision of theirs can make orbreak a very powerful potential future.Now, suppose they passed the first make/break point. Then comes another onewhen they are going to marry. Normally, in the western culture, the man and thewoman choose their marriage partners themselves, so this is not much of an important issue here. But, what about the cultures that predominantly havearranged marriages? In that case, choosing a husband or a wife could be a hugedecision, because generally the marriages are not as easily broken as in thewestern culture. So, when it comes to this point, one would definately wanttoknow their parents thinking and their previous experiance. This could come in veryhandy when one has a choice to make.To sum it up, it is very good idea to ask for parents guides, and is never a bad aidea to give up a part of independence for a better future.。

2010年TOEFL冲刺班写作讲义主讲：戴云一、强化班内容回顾（PDF）二、句子写作1、句子表达假如你经常和外国人交流，你就会了解到很多国外的风俗习惯，开阔你的视野。

Y ou will know more about foreign customs as well as foreign habits and your horizon will be broadened, if you often communicate with foreigners.Y ou will know more about foreign customs and habits, and you can broaden your horizon as well, if you often\frequently communicate with foreigners.和同学们一起去旅游是个交朋友的好机会。

Traveling with classmates provides a good opportunity to make friends.有的父母根本不知道如何教育孩子，不是合格的老师。

Some parents are not qualified teachers, for they do not know how to educate their children at all.每天都有很多车在小区周围的道路上行驶，对行人的安全造成巨大的威胁。

There are many cars running on the streets around the community every day, which poses a gigantic threat to the safety of the people walking around/passers-by.大公司里面的能人很多，可以教我们学习科学技术知识，促进自己的成长，有利于自己的事业的发展。

作文:戴云所提倡的是一种流水线式的写作的方式，平时要积累一定的写作的模块。

积累自己的模版。

作文分两部分：一：integrated writing .二：independent writing.每一部分都是0-5分。

一部分是150-225字，二部分是300字以上。

各项技能的最低得分Reading: 28 Listening: 26 Writing: 25 Speaking: 22独立写作：作文练习标准：1-5 篇：不限时，结构完整，300字左右。

6-10篇：一小时之内完成，350字以上，结构完整。

写完之后：1 拼写和语法检查。

2 有无跑题或表达不清。

11-20篇：半小时之内完成，400字以上，结构完整。

写完之后：1，2 同上，3 修饰文章。

黄金规则一The longer, the better.一篇好的文章包含以下几个方面: ﹛1 结构 2 句子 3 词语﹜句子的训练方法：1．用多种方法表达同一句意：例如：我认为：I feel \ think \ hold \ claim\ believe\ deem \maintain \ reckon \ argue \ assume that.In my opinionFrom my points of viewAs far as I am concernedI hold \ share the opinion\believe\position\standpoint\idea thatAs I see\view\perceive that the problem\question\issue\case\discussion\ argument\controversy.My viewpoint\belief\opinion is that2．补充句子——不断增加新的语法结构，如同位语，插入语，非谓语结构，各种从句，多于25字。

在一篇文章中至少三句。

3．句式变换(1).开头的变换。

托福高分范文大全(精选十五篇)托福高分范文大全(篇一)Talk about a book you have read that was important to you for some reason. Explain why the book was important to you. Give specific details and examples to explain your answerTPO1托福独立口语Task1满分范文：Recently, I read a book named Keep the aspidistra flying written by George Orwell. The book influences me a lot because the story has something that touches my heart. The story talks about a man who wants to be a poet and who abandons many well-paying jobs to pursue his dream of being a poet. I have a similar experience of quitting a very good job in order to be a writer. Also, the man in the story is lack of money because he works as a bookstore assistant and thus has a very low salary. He lives in a shabby apartment and sometimes have no money to bu y food. Again, I’ve got similar experience. I once lived in a cramped apartment alone and had no money. The book is important to me because it touches me and gives me encouragement to persist.托福高分范文大全(篇二)For teenagers aged between 15 to 18, what is the most important to the teacher?1)the ability to help students plan for future2)the ability to recognize which student needs help and offerthat help3)the ability to encourage students to learn on their own outside of the classroom托福写作三选一类范文Secondary education can be one of the most formative experiencesin a person’s life. What qualities make a good high school teacher? People might go for abilities like helping with future planning or encouraging academic autonomy. I, however, believe that the most important factor is the ability to recognize students in need and the willingness to lend a hand.The first beneficiary is underachievers. More often than not, students who fall behind suffer from a low self-esteem. It is especially true for teenagers who find it a disgrace to lose face in front of their peers. In this case, they would stay under the radar and try to bury their problems in the dark. Nobody would even notice, not to mention offering any help. However, a teacher with a perceptive mind can discover the problem before it gets worse, sothat the troubled kid could get proper help. Let’s say a boy whose parents are going through a nasty divorce may show up late at school or miss the deadline for science projects. If the teacher can spot his recent anomaly and reaches out to him, the boy might open up and confide to the teacher. This is the first step on the road to recovery and an attentive teacher makes all the difference.Moreover, this valuable quality would rub off on students as well. Instead of lecturing them about helping others, teachers set a better example by practicing what they preach. Seeing the teacher shows compassion and kindness to a kid from disadvantaged background, children are more likely to follow suit and learn to empathize. In contrast, if the teacher is always aloof, school bullies will then pick on the troubled kid. It is because when teachers don’t even bother to care, kids would pick up a wrong message that being indifferent is the best policy. What would them turn into when reaching adulthood? Self-centered. Or even worse, mean and bitter. Soit takes a sharp mind to spot trouble and a warm heart to getchildren out of.Sure, it is not to say other qualities are trivial. Future career planning offers students some insight into job prospects and college majors. And students would better adjust to college life if they are trained to learn on their own outside of the classroom. But I wouldn’t say such qualities assume more power th an an empathetic heart. Why? High schoolers aged 15 to 18 have very vague ideas about their interests and aspiration. That’s why people even take a gap year to figure it out. So why bother planning in such early stage of life while so much remains uncovered and unexplored? As for theability to encourage learning autonomy, let’s face it, children have been doing this all the time! Since the advent of Internet, children have been drawn to a variety of search engines and websites, which stimulate self-governed learning in a way no teacher can possibly compare to. But the ability to relate to troubled students and lead them out of the woods is in high demand and cannot be replaced.To sum up, to benefit high school students to a greater extent, the teacher s have to be able to recognize what’s going wrong and what can be done to make it right. Other characters can be good to have, but also fine to live without.托福高分范文大全(篇三)If a large factory is going to be built near your community, isit good or bad? It’s a quite difficult question to answer. Because there are many aspects to take into your consideration, the advantages and the disadvantages. Let’s talk about that.First, a large factory, especially a large chemical factory is quite harmful to our environment when it is built near our community.It will affect our daily life a lot. All the chemical factories will produce a lot of waste and most of the wastes are harmful to the environment, including poisonous gas and liquid. Some of them can not be entirely broken down. If they are released into the air or the river, it will affect our health. And also the factory may produce a lot of noise. The environment we want to live in is a quiet and peaceful one, so the noise will be quite boring. And yes, noise also affects our health.Still one thing, a factory can be very dangerous. Because a fire or a explosion may break out in the factory. If it’s very near our home, it’s quite dangerous.But in other hand , a factory may be a good news to us. It can provide more jobs for us, especially for the young people in our community. Since the factory is near, it’s so convenient to go to work.. and the factory will get more chances to our area. It will help to develop our area. So if the factory can bring us a lot of chances, we will agree to build one. But the most important things are:1. Build the factory in a safe distance from our community, not too near.2. Make sure that the factory can deal with the waste properly. Do not release the poisonous gasinto the air, and not release the waste water into the river nearby.3. Make sure the security guard in the factory works very well.托福作文满分范文：I support the idea that a factory to be built near our community.I list my reasons as follows. Firstly, a new factory near ourcommunity helps to improve living standard of people in our community. The factory will employ a lot of workers. As a consequence, the unemployment rate will drop significantly. Many people in our community will find a job in the factory. As people's income increases, they will be able to spend more money on their food, clothing and leisure time, and the quality of life will be increased.Secondly, a new factory will bring prosperity to our community. The tax collected from a factory is an important source of revenuefor our town. As people have higher income, income tax collected will also be increased. The town will be able to spend more money on infrastructures and other development. Moreover, in order to accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. This will boost real estate development in our community.Some people say that a factory would bring smog and pollution, and destroy the quality of the air and water in town. This is not the truth. Modern technologies have made today's factories technology intensive and brought pollutions to the minimum. There are also worries that the social structure of this community will be changed and the traditional life will be affected. We should understand that society needs to evolve and we cannot always stay in the old time. Of course, there will be some drawbacks of building a new factory here. But in my opinion, the benefits outweigh the dangers. Istrongly support to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.托福高分范文大全(篇四)It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree ordisagree? Use specific reasons and examplesto develop your essay.托福作文满分范文：With the development of the transportation system and some residence institution, the world isgetting smaller and smaller, and people are not restricted in only one area. In addition to theconvenient condition, because there are different places with different cultures, living standards,education environment and other disparity, they are inclined to transfer from one place to theother. Is it better to move around than stay in one place? I believe there are no uniform answers,but in my opinion, I do agree with the claim that to move around is better than to stay in oneplace.Most people’s growth comes with the transfers in their life. As for me, when I was young I lived ina small county. Because the school in there was not suitable to me, I transferred from my littlecounty to a city to get a better education. As soon as I got to the city, I was amazed that the worldhere was so different here as myhometown .If I still lived in my hometown, it was impossible forme to make the wildest guess at what the real world looked like. The first transfer has made me toimagine my own life and spur on me to go further. With the confidence, I went into a universitywhich I would never think of it before. The university is located in a different city so that I haveto come into another world. Compared with myliving city, the one is more complicated in whichthere are different people, more convenient transportation, more competitive environment.I loveall of this very much. Communicating with different students and teachers, I have learned muchfrom them which will benefit me throughout my life and my lifestyle. Now I am in a graduateschool also so beautiful that I will never regret my selection of leaving myhometown because thetransfer has given me a splendid life.Also, like we students, there are many adults transferring their work place in order to grasp betteropportunities. No matter in industry, in agriculture or in service, workers have rights to choosetheir work companies which leads them to work from place to place and then they accumulateprecious experience and skills to get priorities to others.People not only transfer in their own country, but also go abroad to get education, work or livethrough the rest of their life in appropriate countries. We can see that many students including mewant to go to the foreign countries to study further and forge ourselves, and that many parentssend their little sons or daughters to foreign countries to study. After all, diverse circumstancesgive persons new experience and broaden their narrow sight, even help them get morecomprehensive understanding of the world, the society and ourlife itself.However, some people may say that if people move around, theywill pay for much such asmoney, time and energy. It is right to say that it takes one person some time to get used to his orher new environment, new personal relationship which indeed influences the growth of children,the efficiency of our work and the stability of our society and family. And I have to admit thatpeople should make considerate plans before changing their places and may not transfer aimlesslyand frequently. But I think sometimes it is just all the friction that has made the world wealthierand more beautiful. Therefore, I still think it is better to travel around than to live in one place.托福高分范文大全(篇五)第1步，通读30篇高分范文，注意寻找文章的写作思路和主要论点，把握整体框架。

Dlfgvy托福写作总结(tony老师)生活需要游戏，但不能游戏人生；生活需要歌舞，但不需醉生梦死；生活需要艺术，但不能投机取巧；生活需要勇气，但不能鲁莽蛮干；生活需要重复，但不能重蹈覆辙。

-----无名托福写作总结托福考试的介绍：综合写作（integrated）20分钟主要靠听力Write 理想字数150字/20分钟理想分数3~4分独立写作（independent）30分钟理想字数350字/25分钟理想分数4~5分算分方法：(integrated + independent)/2*6POOL:熟练掌握题库185道题目，最少读三遍，对题目进行分类（合并题目，掌握热点）EducationLearning托福考试热点 EnvironmentLessons in lifeModern technologyMass media独立写作的框架：（开头50字，结尾50字，中间分三段，每段80个字。

）Definition1.1HookHistoryImportance1. IntroductionControversyQuotation1.2 Bridge1.3 Main point1.1 Hook常用表达：1. Contrary towhat most peoplebelieve, ( ) arenot a modernconcept.1.11 History2. ( ) have avenerable history,dating back tothousands ofyears ago.3. ( ) have ahistory nearly aslong as humancivilizationitself.4. AncientChinese/ ancientEgyptians/ancient Indians/cavemen( ).Theseactivities can beseen as theearliest forms of( ).1. ( ) beplaying anincreasinglyimportant role in( ).2. ( ) be an indispensable part in ( ).1.12Importance 3. ( ) has/vehadenormous(tremendous) impacts(influences/effects) oneveryaspect(fact) of( ).4. ( ) has/ve evolved into a multi-billion dollar industry.1. Opinionsabout ( )’s effects on ( )have varied.1.13Controversy2. Has created considerable controversy in/among ( ).Native (本土化）1.14Quotation Explanation( sb ),oneofgreat er and most influe ntial (most brilli ant, fore most) Chine se (philo sophe rs, schol ars, educ ators, thinkwrite rs, artis ts, state smen, milita ry, leade rs, scien tists …)(of the 20th centu ry) rema rked (com menthasputit),“…”. Imagination(Mencius)historyisacle a r m ir r o r, hi s t o r y is a b ri g h t lamp,historyisawiseteacher. （Confucius 子曰）具体内容见讲义附录Introduction 除了用hook 之外，还可以用 question (bridge) 的格式来写。

智课网TOEFL备考资料戴云TOEFL写作讲义【完整版】摘要：相比备考托福写作的同学都听说过戴云TOEFL写作讲义，这是一份非常难得的资料，不过，今天小编为大家整理的资料就是戴云TOEFL写作讲义word版哦。

今天小编为大家整理的资料是戴云 TOEFL 写作讲义，相信这是很多考生梦寐以求的资料，想要么?想要就赶紧看看下文吧。

二、托福写作圣经要多记笔记： 1、可以保证focus on my lecture，不会absent-minded 2、保证将来会有复习的clues写作的第一要务是把观点表达清楚。

1、写作必须有观点 2、要给出一个清楚的观点写作考试不基于考生的真实身份。

托福作文中所有的例子和细节可以是真的，也可以是假的。

写作考试只考察语言水平，不考察思想水平。

举例：建工厂不同意的理由有三：1、造成污染;2、交通堵塞;3、物价上涨写作考试不测试考生的真实想法。

作文不是写想写的，而是写好写的、能写的。

举例：父母是最好的老师，你同意吗? 同意的理由：1、how to behave myself; 2、value system;3、experience 上述理由都不能证明该题目“后天的知识是老师教的，而不是父母教的”存在逻辑错误，将老师与父母并列起来，应该在老师前面加上修饰语“学校的”。

写作是基于表达，而不是基于翻译。

举例：婀娜多姿：beautiful;妩媚动人：lovely You are extremely smart. extremely means very 托福考试 30分钟最低要写300字，一般要求写400到500字写作内容和语言同等重要。

把内容表达清楚可以拿到高分 clarity高于variety，variety高于complexity clarity is the priority观点的层次比观点的数目更重要。

逻辑错误比语法错误更严重。

跑题你就完蛋了。

三、新托福写作介绍General Introduction to IBT TOEFL：Reading: 60---100minsListening: 60---90minsBreak: 10minsSpeaking: 20minsWriting: 50mins口语考试的两个标准：accuracy，fluency托福考试加一条：efficiencyWriting: 50minsTotal time:4 hoursTotal score: 120我们的口号：我们的目标是: 没有蛀牙 !General Introduction to iBT TOEFL WritingContent: integrated writing and independent writing(综合写作和独立写作) 考试中两个作文equally important，各占50%考试顺序：阅读，听力，休息，口语，写作Score: raw score:0——5 scaled score:0——30以上就是小编为大家整理的戴云TOEFL写作讲义的部分内容，各位考生怎么样?大家可以点击下方下载按钮进行明妃索取哦。