2019高考英语二轮复习 600分策略 专题5 书面表达 第2讲 书信邮件最常考,目的明确会套语素能强化
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第二节 方法运用于命题一、提纲类作文 (2017·天津)假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师MrsGreen一直保持联系。
近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);(3)希望她有机会重访天津。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:第十三届全运会the13thNationalGames法宝1 “五审”定调子(1)体裁:告知类应用文,注意告知类邮件的格式;(2)人称:以第一人称为主;(3)时态:以一般现在时和一般将来时为主;(4)要点:介绍学习和生活;成为志愿者;邀请重访天津;(5)层次:分为四段:第一、二段问候并介绍自己的学习和生活以及成为在津举办的全运会的志愿者;第三段邀请外籍教师重访天津;第四段为结束语。
法宝2 “韵色”得高分该文除简单句外,还可使用并列句、省略句及复合句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句),做到句式多样。
法宝3 黄金“三步曲”1.遣词hear from sb./tell sb.sth.about.../in detail/to begin with/be around the corner/be busy doing sth./prepare for/volunteer/be held at.../in order to/spend/in the library/no doubt/enhance/invite/appreciate2.造句(1)I’msogladtohearfromyou.(2)Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyselfindetail.(3)ThefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecornersoIambusypreparingforit.(4)Ihavealreadybeenavolunteerforthe13thNationalGames.(5)ItwillbeheldattheendofAugustinTianjin.(6)InordertoexpandmyknowledgeofTianjin,IspendeverysparemomentIhaveinthelibrary.(7)ThereisnodoubtthatIwillenhanceitsreputationthroughmyefforts.(8)I’llappreciateitifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.3.成篇DearMrsGreen,I’msogladtohearfromyou.Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyselfindetail.Tobeginwith,thefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecornersoIambusypreparingforit.W hatIwanttostressisthatIhavealreadybeenavolunteerforthe13thNationalGameswhichwil lbeheldattheendofAugustinTianjin.InordertoexpandmyknowledgeofTianjin,suchasits history,traditionandfood,IspendeverysparemomentIhaveinthelibrary.ThereisnodoubtthatIwillenhanceitsreputationthroughmyefforts.Isincerelyinvit eyoutocomehereagain.I’llappreciateitifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Yours,LiJin (2016·天津)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。
2019届二轮复习书面表达普通书信/电子邮件(二)写作指导例析假如你是李华。
上周你们学校举行了秋季运动会,请给你的美国笔友Jack 写一封回信,介绍你和你们班同学参加运动会的情况和感受。
写作要点如下:1.运动会项目多,组织好;2.你参加比赛的情况;3.同学们运动会期间的表现;4.你对这次运动会的感受。
注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.词数100左右,开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Jack,How nice to hear from you again!Yours truly,Li Hua [题目要求][四步写作]一、定人称、定时态,审题快而不偏人称以第一人称为主,主要时态用一般过去时二、列提纲、准写词,要点全而不漏1.运动会项目多,组织好①组织好的well-organized②项目event2.你参加比赛的情况①参加take_part_in②冲过终点线pass_the_finishing_line3.同学们运动会期间的表现①加油cheer_on②为……赢得荣誉win_honor_for4.你对这次运动会的感受①成功success②组织更多这样的活动organize_more_activities_like_this三、由词汇、组成句,表达亮而不俗1.让我来告诉你一些上周在我们学校举行的运动会的情况。
Let me tell you something about the sports meeting held in our school last week.2.我参加了400米比赛,最终我第三个通过了终点线。
I took part in the 400 metres and finally I was the third one who passed the finishing line.3.每个运动员都尽自己的最大努力为班级赢得荣誉。
Each player tried his best to win honor for his class.4.由于我们的努力,我们班获得了第一名。
专题六书面表达应用文写作常见8大文体(一)——普通书信/电子邮件一、写作架构要规范可根据作文要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。
具体写作结构为:二、靓点句式背一番(一)1.I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two days ago.我很高兴收到你两天前寄给我的信。
2.There is nothing happier to me than to receive your letter.再也没有比收到你的来信更让我开心的了。
3.Sorry to reply to your letter so late.抱歉这么晚才给你回信。
(二)主体部分常用语1.I’ve been thinking about the question you wrote in the letter. In my opinion, you should ...我一直在思考你信中提到的问题。
在我看来,你应该……2.If necessary, we can arrange a face-to-face discussion sometime this week.如果有必要,本周我们可以找个时间安排一次面谈。
(三)结尾常用语1.I’d appreciate it if you could make a response at your earliest convenience.如果您能在方便时尽早回信,我将非常感激。
2.Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.盼望能尽快收到你的回信。
三、润色完善很关键(2018·度过高三毕业后的暑假。
请你给Peter回复邮件,内容包括:1.对暑假的期盼;2.你的假期计划及理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(一)准审题、准表达保基本分定体裁电子邮件定人称第一人称为主定时态一般现在时为主定要点定结构开头:引入话题,写邮件的背景(期盼暑假) 主体:假期计划及理由(去北京旅游、兼职等) 结尾:表达心情,并期待对方尽早回复[中档作文]Dear Peter,I’m more than delighted to hear from you.As is expected, I have been looking forward to the upcoming summer holiday after the College Entrance Examination❶.Then I can do a lot of amazing things❷.First❸,I plan to take a trip to Beijing❹.It is the center of politics and culture❺.It can not only broaden my view but also help me learn more about the Chinese culture❻.❼I have applied for a part-time job in the city library.Summer holiday is a good chance❽for me to promote myself.I belie v e❾the job can help me make full preparations for the college stly, I’d like to read books as many as possible.I hope I will have a full and colourful summer holiday.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua(二)巧润色、大升级创高分(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文)Dear Peter,I’m more than delighted to hear from you.As is expected, I have been looking forward to the upcoming summer holiday after the College Entrance Examination, (1)during which I can do a lot of amazing things (❶❷句合并升级为定语从句).(2)To start/begin with (词汇升级❸), I plan to take a trip to Beijing, (3)the center of politics and culture (❹❺句合并升级为名词短语作同位语).(4)Not only can it broaden my view but also help me learn more about the Chinese culture (升级句❻为倒装句).(5)What’s more(❼前加过渡词汇), I have applied for a part-time job in the city library.Summer holiday is a good (6)opportunity (词汇升级❽) for me to promote myself.I (7)hold the firm belief that (词汇升级❾) the job can help me make full preparations for the college stly, I’d like to read books as many as possible.I (8) do hope (升级句为强调句) I will have a full and colourful summer holiday.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua四、“一题两用”错不犯Dear Peter,You can’t imagine what glad I was when I received your letter asking me for the plans in summer holiday.Actually, I have been longing for a relaxed and meaningful summer holiday.The first thing coming to my mind is to get a driving license, what I think is a must for most college student in China.Apart from a completely relaxation, I also plan to take an English course to improve my speaking English.In addition to, I want to take active part in different social activities to better myself.I believe the holiday must be fascinating before I finish the College Entrance Examination.I can’t wait to enjoy them!Yours,Li Hua 答案:第一句:what→how第二句:relaxed→relaxing第三句:what→which; student→students第四句:completely→complete; speaking→spoken第五句:去掉第一个to; take后加an第六句:before→after第七句:them→it应用文写作常见8大文体(二)——邀请信一、写作架构要规范难。
2019届二轮复习书面表达专题求助信写作解题指导一.妙句收集开头:1. I’m writing to seek your assistance in the troubles Vm faced with.我请求你帮助我解决面临的麻烦。
2. I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I'm writing to ask for help.我是李华,一名在您的大学参加暑期课程的中国学生。
我写信前来寻求帮助。
3. I’m Lihua, a student of summer course here. Vm writing to request you to help mewith my puzzles.我是李华,一名暑期课程学员。
我写信前来请求您帮助我解决我的一些疑惑。
4. I'm Li Hua, a student of summer course here. Vm sorry to trouble you but I do have some problems and I need your guidance.我是李华,一名暑期课程学员。
非常抱歉麻烦你但是我确实有些问题,需要一些指导。
5. I’m Li Hua, a student of summer course here. I sincerely request you to help me with the troubles Vm faced with.我是李华,一名暑期课程学员。
我非常真诚地请求您帮助我解决的所面对的一些麻烦。
6. My full name is Li Hua, a student of summer courses here. Vm writing this letter to report some of the problems and puzzles I encountered when learning the course of Business English.我的全名是李华,一名暑期课程学员。
2019届二轮复习书面表达专题询问信写作解题指导一.妙句收集开头:1. I am writing this letter to express my keen interest in your ad about your six-week English course.写信表达我对您广告中的六周英语课程的兴趣。
2. I am writing for more / further information about the six-week English course. 写信想要咨洵关于六周英语课程的更多的信息。
3. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with more information regarding the six-week English course in your advertisement. 写信叨扰,咨询六周英语课程,望您能够提供更多信息。
4. Mve seen your ad and I am greatly interested in your six-week English course. Could be kind enough to tell me some details about it?看了您的广告,非常感兴趣你们为期六周的英语课程。
您是否能再告知我一些细节?5. I am glad to learn in your ad that you provide a six-week English course. Would you please inform me of more details about it?在广告中获知您开设为期六周的英语课程,我欣喜若狂!您是否能告知我一些细节呢?6. Vm greatly interested in your ad. I would be grateful if you could provide me with certain details about the six-week English course.我对您的广告非常感兴趣。
专题限时集训书面表达之书信/邮件+记叙文(Ⅱ)A(2018·河南省普通高中毕业班模拟)假定你是李华,准备参加在你市举办的“一带一路”国际青少年志愿者招聘活动。
活动主办方要求志愿者能够熟练运用英语。
请你用英文写一封信,推荐自己。
内容包括:1.你的自荐理由;2.你对活动的理解。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:一带一路 the Belt and RoadB(2018·绵阳市诊断性考试)假如你是李华,高考前夕,你校组织高一、高二为高三学生加油助威活动,请你根据以下提示写一份关于此次活动的英文报道。
1.活动时间和地点;2.活动过程;3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】Dear Sir,Thank you for reading my letter. I'm writing to apply to be one of the volunteers of the Belt and Road International Youth Culture Festival.First of all,I'm good at English and Chinese,which will play an important role in communicationwith foreigners.Besides,I am fond of Chinese culture and have a rich knowledge of Chinese history,enabling me to make a detailed introduction to our splendid culture.What's more,this activity provides teenagers from across the world an opportunity to have a better understanding of one another.I hope I can broaden my horizons and improve my ability by participating in it.To sum up,I am convinced that I can be a qualified volunteer.Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】As the National College Entrance Examination was approaching,a yea rly activity named “Come on,Senior Three” was held on our school playground on the afternoon of May 30th.All teachers and students from Senior One and Senior Two participated in the event,where the principle,a teacher and a student delivered wonderful and inspiring speeches respectively.After that all the teachers and students sang songs together and they all had a great time.This activity is aimed to help Senior Three students relieve academic pressure,for they can get away from their studies for a moment and get relaxed and refreshed.With the pressure gone,they will perform well in the coming examination.。
A假定你是班长李华,打算为本班的加拿大交换生Wendy举办18岁生日聚会,请用英语给她写一封电子邮件,告知她聚会的时间、地点、参加人员以及活动安排,并征求她的意见。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Wendy,Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua 【答案】Dear Wendy,We're so happy to know your 18th birthday is approaching. Considering you're alone here in China,we're going to hold a party for you to celebrate it.The party will be held in the restaurant just next to our school at 6:00 this Saturday afternoon. Twenty of our classmates, together with five teachers,will join. At the party,there'll be a special ceremony,followed by dinner,drinking,singing,dancing and so on. We've ordered delicious food and a birthday cake and prepared gifts for you.Is there any special activity you'd like to have at the party? If any idea strikes you,please let us know. We sincerely hope you'll turn up and have a nice birthday.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua 【解析】1.首先要看明白文章的要求,指的交换生的生日晚会。
书信邮件最常考,目的明确会套语真题题组第一组书面表达(邀请信)+书面表达(推荐信)1(2017·全国Ⅱ)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。
请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.展览内容。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文赏读】Dear Henry,I am writing to invite you to attend the Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition to be held in the art gallery from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm next Sunday in our city center.Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China,which has a history of more than 1,500 years. People often beautify their home with paper-cutting during festivals and weddings. In this exhibition,you can see paper-cutting with all kinds of patterns. In addition,there are famous artists who will perform how to cut paper on the spot. I wish that you could grasp this opportunity to learn traditional Chinese culture further.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua2(2015·陕西) 假定你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。
请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival,which will be held on June 15-17,2015,is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show,Speech Contest,and English Debate. If you are interested,please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi@aef. com.写作要点:1.表达写信意图;2.陈述应征目的;3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
写作要求:1.邮件词数不少于100;2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms Chen,I’m Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3. ___________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua 【范文赏读】Dear_Ms_Chen,I’m_Li_Hua,a_student_from_Class_2,Grade_3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering my service,I will be able to improve my organizational ability,communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.As an outgoing girl,I get along well with my classmates. Besides,I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully,I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.Looking_forward_to_your_reply.Yours_truly,Li_Hua__模拟题组第一组邀请信+推荐信1(2018·石家庄一模) 假定你是李华,你所在的校运动俱乐部将面向外国朋友开设太极(Tai Chi)课。
请写一封邮件,邀请你校的英国交换生Peter参加。
要点如下:1.上课时间与地点;2.报名的截止日期。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua 【范文赏读】Dear_Peter,How’s everything going?①I’m Li Hua,writing to invite you to attend a Tai Chi class held by our sports club.②Tai Chi,originated in China,enjoys great popularity. Anyone,regardless ofage or levels of fitness,can practice and benefit from Tai Chi. ③Practicing Tai Chi,you will feel mentally and physically relaxed with the harmonious movements.④I’m sure you will develop a great interest in this gentle exercise. The class will start between 5:00 p. m. and 6:00 p. m. every Monday in our school gym next month. The closing date for entry is next Tuesday. ⑤Please let me know if you want to sign your name.⑥Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li_Hua 【一句多译】①表达方式一:I’m Li Hua and I’d like to invite you to attend a Tai Chi classwhich is held by our sports club.表达方式二:I’m Li Hua ,and would you like to join the Tai Chi class which is held by our sports club?②Tai Chi,which is originated in China,enjoys great popularity.③表达方式一:When you practice Tai Chi,you will feel mentally and physically relaxed with the harmonious movements.表达方式二:Practice Tai Chi,and you will feel mentally and physically relaxed with the harmonious movements.④It is certai n that you will develop a great interest in this gentle exercise.⑤I’ll appreciate it if you let me know whether you want to sign your name.⑥表达方式一:Your early reply will be appreciated!表达方式二:I am looking forward to receiving your early reply.2(2018·福州市高中毕业班质检) 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter很想了解中国文物的故事,请你根据以下要点,写一封邮件向他推荐CCTV-3的《国家宝藏》(National Treasure)节目。