高中英语续写素材-环境描写02 Rain-读后续写素材之环境描写

高考英语读后续写环境描写精选一、日月星辰、城市霓虹1.The sun kissed the vibrant green fields, casting a warm and golden glow over the surrounding landscape.太阳亲吻着生机勃勃的绿田，将温暖而金色的光芒洒在周围的景色上。

2.I caught the sun rising through the clouds, sending streaks of fire from one end of the world to the other.正赶上太阳冲破云层，把火焰般的光束洒向世界的每一个角落。

3.The sunshine slanted through the window, moistening our hearts and easing all the misunderstanding between us.阳光透过窗户，湿润了我们的心，缓解了我们之间的误会。

4.The sun was at its highest, baking the ground with its flames and making the air still and unbearable.太阳处于最高点，用火焰烤着地面，空气静止、令人难以忍受。

5.The moon shone brightly in the midnight sky, casting a silvery glow that reflected off the calm surface of the lake月亮在午夜的天空中熠熠生辉，投射出银色的光芒，在湖面上闪烁。

6.The starry night sky twinkled with countless celestial diamonds, illuminating the world below with their ethereal beauty星空闪烁着无数的天上钻石，在下方的世界上闪耀出它们空灵的美丽。

高考英语读后续写素材库之环境描写系列（2）Rain 2.1 Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold under foot. Stepping off the path and into the shaggy grass I feel the squelch of the mud beneath. The water rises up and runs between my toes. The birds busy themselves around me, not caring that I'm there, all they want is the worms that have come up for air.译文：潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。

走下小路，走进草丛，我感到脚下泥泞的吱吱声。

水涨起来，在我的脚趾间流动。

鸟儿们在我周围忙碌着，不关心我在哪儿，他们只想要抓那些爬上来呼吸新鲜空气的虫子。

E.g. The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.雨落在窗户上，多么平常的场景，但是在这个句子中我们用了drummed on,就是说雨敲打在窗户上好像敲起了小鼓，瞬间变得生动形象。

紧接着，写太阳落山、黄昏来临，我们也不直接写，而是转了个弯，说The rain bid farewell to the last beam of sunlight.（雨向最后一缕阳光告别），是不是很优美。

这套材料中，类似的拟人用法还有很多，就不再一一列举，请同学们自己留意，细细体会这种用法的妙处。

• 2-2. Softly splashing water droplets hit the car windows as we drive onwards. The skies are overhung with a blanket of grey, so much so that I can barely tell the difference between the sky and clouds.译文：当我们向前行驶时，溅起的水珠轻轻地落在车窗上。

读后续写如何描写环境自然环境云、雨、雷电、风、雪【词块积累】多雨的季节rainy season暴风雨之夜stormy night连绵不断的雨continuous/constant rain在茫茫大雨中in the blinding rain埋在雪中be buried in snow难以忍受的热unbearable heat鸟云密布be full of dark clouds放晴clear up狂风暴雨fierce/heavy/violent storms下着倾盆大雨rain cats and dogs一阵清风a fresh breeze雪融化了snow melts away【高分语料】1.l' s pouring/raining really hard.雨下得很大。

2. The dense/thick fog blanketed the field.浓雾覆盖了田野。

3. The wind is whispering in the trees.风在树林中沙沙作响。

4. Wind and rain whipped the house.风和雨击打着屋子。

5. The wind is getting up and it is becoming cloudy.风势渐大,天空开始阴云密布。

6. It was freezing cold and whats' worse was that they lost their way.天气极冷,而且更糟糕的是他们迷路了。

7. We were caught in the storm and came home drenched to the skin.我们遇上了暴雨,回到家时浑身湿透了。

8. The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like sharp knife.寒风开始咆哮,像锋利的刀子一样刺痛了我的脸。

借景抒情、寓情于景是写作中常用的手法。

恰当的背景场景描写有利于推动故事情节的发展，烘托人物的心理活动，给读者身临其境的感受。

背景场景描写要有全貌有细节，有全景有特写，要点面结合，重点突出。

可以描写事件发生的时间、地点、环境等，也可以描写人看到的景象或感受到的某种情绪。

注意：环境描写只是起画龙点睛的作用，环境描写不要写太长，且环境描写一定为你的内容服务，而不是为了看起来高大上。

所以我也提醒大家写作的时候千万不要本末倒置，写一些无关紧要的套句或者环境描写只会对情节起到反作用。

那么接下来我们先看看环境描写的常见作用以及常见的环境描写素材。

自然环境描写在读后续写中的作用衬托或突出人物性格、心理等1.暗示或推动故事情节发展增添或烘托某种气氛和意境，奠定基调2.揭示主题，深化主旨|1 .气氛氛围（1）A heavy silence blanketed the room.（描写房间的寂静）A hush fell upon the class.（描写教室寂静）The house smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghosts of long-dead cookies.（描写屋内环境）An absolute darkness ruled the forest.（描写黑暗）It didn't take too long for the forest to be enveloped in darkness.（描写森林变暗）There were a deathly stillness in the house.（描写死寂）There was a moment of sinister silence, （hen a multitudinous stirring of （he leaves.（描写暴风雨前的死寂）An air of sadness settled over the group.（描写悲伤氛围）It suddenly seemed frighteningly quiet. The air was charged with tension,（描写紧张气氛）The silence of the forest was ripped apart by a sound like a roaring wind.（描写狂风打破寂静）There was no view anywhere, nothing but the oppressive and silent scrub.（描写死寂的树林）参考答案：1 .约翰•布兰查德看到这个40多岁的女人很失望。

高中英语读后续写素材积累大全第二部分.景象描写（二）距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考，能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。

以下是本人从事10多年教学经验总结出的以下学习资料，希望可以帮助大家提高答题的正确率，希望对你有所帮助，有志者事竟成！养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。

做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。

总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。

在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。

英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。

越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。

另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。

景象描写7云、雾、风、雨、雪、霜、闪电、雷声1.The sky was almost entirely obscured by cloud.天空几乎完全被云所遮蔽.2.A white cloud floated in the sky.天空中飘浮着一朵白云.3.A thick grey cloud masked the sun.一片厚厚的乌云遮住了太阳.4.The moon disappeared behind a cloud.月亮消失在云后.5.The sun went behind a cloud.太阳躲到云彩后面去了.6. The sky is clear and bright without a speck of cloud.天空晴朗，一丝丝云彩也没有.7. Black clouds loomed over the distant horizon. Clouds seemed to be moving over our house and towards the distant mountains.乌云隐约出现在远处的地平线上.云似乎在我们的房子上向远处的山移动.8. The storm clouds were gathering.暴风云正在聚集.9. The weather is now clear, now cloudy.天气一会儿晴一会儿阴.10. The cloudy sky was followed by rain.天空乌云密布，接着下起雨来.11.A golden sun shone in a cloudless sky when we visited the German capital this week.我们这周对德国首都进行访问时阳光大好，晴空万里.12.The night sky was set with countless stars. The cloudless sky was jewelled with myriads of glittering stars.无数的星星点缀着夜空.无云的晴空镶嵌着无数颗闪烁的星星.13.The sun glared down from a cloudless sky.刺眼的阳光从万里无云的天上直射下来.14. The sun is out in full splendor against a nearly cloudless light blue sky.淡蓝色的天空上万里无云，阳光灿烂.15. As we approached the coast, the skies cleared and presently became cloudless.当我们飞近海岸时，天已开朗，倾刻之间万里无云.16. Another stretch of silence followed as the two men lay gasping, staring up into the cloudless sky.两个人躺在地上喘着气，默默地看着没有一丝云彩的天空.17. I was sorry to hear you'd ill, but remember every cloud has a silver lining.我很遗憾听说你病了，但记住黑暗中总有一线光明／天无绝人之路／守得云开见月明. 18. The cloud stood humbly in a corner of the sky ;the morning crowned it with splendour.白云谦卑地站在天边，晨光给它披上壮丽的光彩.19.Mist was rising, and trees and shrubs began to disappear in a milk-white haze.起雾了，树木和矮树丛开始消失在一片乳白色的雾霭之中.20.The morning mist gradually thinned.朝雾渐渐地淡薄了.21.The mi st melted rapidly in the morning sun.在早晨的阳光下，薄雾迅速消散了.22.The distant hills were enveloped in clouds and mist.远山被云雾遮掩着，23.The hills were covered in mist.群山笼罩在雾霭中.24.With a thick mist now blanketing the trees, I got thoroughly lost.此时浓雾笼罩着林木，我彻底迷路了.25.The sun melted the fog.日出雾散.26.The fog disappeared like magic.雾神奇地消失了.27.The car windows were fogged with vapor.车窗上满是雾气.28. The hills were enveloped in dense fo g.浓雾包住了群山.29. The crash happened in thick fog.浓雾中发生了撞车.30.The wind howled all night, but I slept a little.风整夜怒号着，但我还是睡了一会儿.31. Her hair was whipped around her by the fierce wind, but her eyes were closed and her face was quite empty of expression.她的头发被猛烈的狂风吹得四下飘舞，但是她的眼睛紧闭着面无表情.32.Fierce wind swings over my green hair, and lightning floats around me.狂风在我的绿发上荡秋千，闪电在我的周遭萤流.33. There is a breath of spring in the gentle wind.微风吹来一阵春天的气息.34. The storm at last sank to a gentle wind.风暴最后减弱为轻风.35.The wind whispers around us, a gentle wind that feels like a blessing. Indeed, the limited partners would have few reasons to celebrate an IPO.轻风在我们身边低语，仿佛在传达由衷的祝福.事实上，这些有限的合伙人鲜有理由庆祝上市.36. When you walk in the street, you can feel the gentle wind touching your face and breathe the fresh air.当你走在街道上，你能感受温顺的风触摸着你的脸，并且能呼吸到新鲜的空气.37.The wind whipped across my face as I flew down the hillside on the wooden sled.当我乘坐木制雪橇上从山坡上飞下时，风从我脸上掠过.38. The rose looks like an angel, swaying in the wind, dancing in the sun.这朵玫瑰就像是在风中摇摆，在阳光下跳舞的天使.39. It has rained without ceasing for many days, with great gusts of wind.狂风大作之下，雨连续下了好几天.40.The north wind was bitter and deadly dull.北风寒冷刺骨.41.A chilly wind whipped our faces, as if responding to our sadness.寒风拂面，好像在回应我们的悲伤.42.The wind murmured in the trees.风在树林中沙沙作响.43.On that particular day, a south wind had been gusting on and off all morning.在那一天，一阵阵南风猛刮了整整一个上午.44.The breeze suddenly swung around to their backs and began to gather strength.微风突然转向，朝他们身后吹来，而且越吹越强.45.There was a cool breeze blowing and a sweet smell of mesquite fruit in the air, but I didn't appreciate it. I wanted that jacket so much.一股凉风吹来，空气中弥漫着梅斯基特水果的香味，但我无心欣赏.我非常想要那件夹克. 46. A violent storm had struck the area.一场猛烈的暴风雨席卷了该地区.47. A violent stor m broke out just as we reached the mountain.我们刚刚到达山边，一场猛烈的暴风雨就开始了.48. Towards noon, dark clouds began to bank up and soon a violent storm broke out.中午时分，天上乌云密集，不一会儿狂风大作.49. The dark clouds threaten a violent storm.乌云预示将有一场猛烈的暴风雨来临.50. The storm gave way to bright sunshine.雨过天晴.51. The storm raged for four hours, pouring more rain than we had seen in the last five years.暴风雨肆虐了四个小时，倾泻的大雨比我们过去五年看到的还要多.52.I walked home in the drizzling rain.我冒着毛毛雨走回了家.53. As the rain gradually ceased to patter, snow yet unmelted was gleaning pale.当雨声渐渐消失，那些没融化的雪闪着淡淡的光芒.54. It rained non-stop/on end for ten days, completely ruining our holiday.连续下了十天的雨，我们的假期彻底泡汤了.55. It has been raining on and off all morning.雨断断续续地下了一早上.56.Heartlessly rain beats and wind blows.Rain beats heartlessly and wind blows heartlessly.风雨无情地吹打着.57. It has been pouring in Delhi almost non stop for the past three days, disrupting normal life. 德里市在过去的三天里一直在下着倾盆大雨，几乎没有停过，扰乱了人们的正常生活. 58. It is raining cats and dogs and, look, I am wet as a drowned rat.雨下得好大呀，看呀，我变成落汤鸡了.59.They tramped through the falling snow.他们在纷飞的大雪里艰难前行.60.The snow had melted, but the lake was still frozen solid.雪已经融化了，但是湖面上仍然冻得结结实实.61.The red flowers stand out against the white snow.在白雪的映衬下，这些红花分外醒目.62.Snow-capped mountains and rainbows seem to follow the family wherever they go.似乎他们去的每一处都不乏彩虹和白雪皑皑的山峦.63.While I stood staring toward the snow-capped mountains one day, I heard a car pull up, then the impatient peal of the doorbell.一天，我正遥望着白雪皑皑的群山时，听到了停车声，接着是一阵急促的门铃声.64. How beautiful the snow-covered garden was, how pure!花园被雪装饰得那么美丽，那么纯洁！65.T he frost made bizarre figures on the window panes.霜在窗玻璃上形成奇特的花样.66.The wind had veered to north, bringing clear skies and a keen frost.风向已经转北，带来了晴朗的天空和严重的霜冻.67.After the heavy frost the road was a sheet of ice.浓霜过后，路面结了一层冰.68.Thunder crashed in the sky.天空中雷声隆隆.69. There was frequent thunder and lightning, and torrential rain.雷电交加，大雨倾盆.70. The lightning flashed in a wild dance of death, and thunder came from every part of the huge sky.一道电光闪过，跳着狂烈的死亡之舞，接着雷声从广阔天空的四面八方传来.71.Lightning flashed through the darkness over the bedroom skylight. Sibson was shaken by a clap of thunder before he knew what was happening. The storm had moved directly over his two-story wooden house.闪电在黑暗中闪过卧室天窗上方，西布森还不知道发生了什么事，就被一阵雷声震得发抖.暴风雨直接从他那栋两层楼高的木屋上刮过.72.A sudden flash of lightning lit everything up for a second.突然一个闪电瞬间照亮了一切.73. Thunder rumbled and lightning flashed.雷轰电闪.74.As the huge clouds rolled up accompanied by thunder and lightning, it seemed as though we were watching a war of the elements.乌云翻滚，雷电交加，我们似乎看到了一场大自然的搏斗.75.Lightning streaks from cloud to cloud.闪电划过朵朵乌云.76. Suddenly a bolt of lightning crackled through the sky.突然一道闪电划破长空.77.The rain was teeming down and she thought she heard a rumble of thunder.雨下得很大，她觉得她听见了一阵轰隆隆的雷声.78. The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power; it was the first time in a year and a half that I'd seen the night face to face.黑暗的雨夜，风雨交加，电闪雷鸣把我完全吸引住了.这是一年半以来我第一次直面夜晚.79. Thunder continued to shake the sky and whips of lightning illustrated the house for seconds ata time, casting frightening shadows that played tricks on my mind.雷声依旧惊天动地，闪电挥舞着，一次好几秒钟，照亮着整个房子，在我脑海中投下惊悚的影子，吓得我心惊肉跳.80. It was a day in late July, grey and depressing, with dark clouds hanging low. Suddenly, on a lonely highway, a storm struck. Pouring water shut me in, making driving impossible ... Then, as though someone had turned off a tap in the sky, it ended. A thin ray spread from the clouds. Every piece of grass was shining as the sun flashed on trembling drops. A rainbow arched across the sky. It seemed as if the view had been there for me alone. I was speechless with awe and joy.那是七月下旬的一天，灰蒙蒙的，令人沮丧，乌云低垂.突然，在一条偏僻的高速公路上，暴风雨来袭.倾盆大雨把我关在里面，不可能开车·..·然后，就好像有人关掉了天空中的水龙头，一切都结束了.一道薄光从云层中散开.每一片草都在闪闪发光，太阳在颤抖的雨滴上闪烁.一道彩虹拱起横跨天空.似乎只有我一个人能看到那里的景色.我怀着敬畏和喜悦的心情说不出话来.81. As they watched, a kingfisher flew out of a tree and skimmed over the pond, leaving light ripples which disturbed the sky image in the water. Darkness was quickly enveloping them. What had been a sea of golden fleece was now only a sandy gray surface blanketing the earth; and wandering clouds, tired of their day's journey, came into the valleys before them and settled for the night, leaving the higher peaks like little gray islands in the sea of night. For the finger of dawn had touched the clouds clinging to the multitudinous peaks, and as if obedient to the sun and subtly responsive to the mountain breeze, they stirred and no sooner did they stir than they started down the valley, dancing on their way like gigantic white dragons, leaving open to the view wider and wider stretches of the valleys. The earth was awake.他们看着一只鲜绿的翠鸟由一棵树里飞出来，在池塘上一掠而去，引动水面上涟漪荡漾，搅碎了水中一片碧蓝的天空.这时暮霭四合，黑暗迅速降临，刚才还是一片金黄的云海，现在已成为一片灰褐，遮盖着大地.游云片片，奔忙一日，而今倦于飘泊，归栖于山谷之间，以度黑夜，只剩下高峰如灰色小岛，于夜之大海独抱沉寂.因为黎明的手指已经点触到依恋着群峰的云，那云，仿佛遵奉太阳的指挥，又悄然接受了山间微风的感应.堆堆片片，开始动起来，刚一移动，就沿着山谷飘去，犹如庞大的玉甲银龙，舞蹈前进，山谷间的风光就越来越广阔.大地觉醒了.景象描写8水、树、草、花、烟、火1.The water glittered in the sunlight.水在阳光下闪闪发光.2. The water of the lake mirrored all the trees on the bank.湖面如镜，把岸上的树木照得清清楚楚.3.The trees on the shorelines were reflected in the clear water.沿岸的树木在清清的河水里倒映出来.4.Ducks are sporting on the lake.湖面上鸭群在嬉戏.5.A thin layer of ice formed over the lake.湖面上凝结了一层薄冰.6.The snow had melted，but the lake was still frozen solid.雪已经融化了，但是湖面上仍然冻得结结实实.7.The water was deep blue, and the sunlight glittered on its crystal clear surface.湖水澄蓝，波平如镜，阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉.8. A little way off was a little brook, rushing and sparkling along between green banks.不远处有一条小溪，在绿斜坡中间冲流着，起着泡，发出潺潺的流水声.9. A creek twines the vast green field just like the blue color satin ribbon, a distant place modelling is being a plain, color harmonious hut, a school of beautiful moving rural scenery!一条小河宛如蓝色的缎带缠绕着一望无际的绿色田野，远处有一座造型古朴，色彩和谐的小屋，一派美丽动人的田园风光！10.The window overlooked a park with a lovely lake. Ducks and swans played on the water while children sailed their model boats. Young lovers walked arm in arm among flowers of every color and a fine view of the city skyline could be seen in the distance.透过窗户可以看到一个公园，里面有一个美丽的湖.鸭子和天鹅在水里嬉戏，孩子们摆弄着他们的模型船，年轻的恋人们挽着胳膊漫步在色彩缤纷的花丛中，远方城市的美丽轮廓尽收眼底.11. The lake was a perfect mirror for peaceful towering mountains all around it. Overhead was a blue sky with fluffy white clouds.如镜的湖面上倒映着四周环绕的群山，蓝色的天空中点缀着松软的白云.12. At the entrance of the valley stood an old pine tree, which looked like a huge umbrella in the distance.在峡谷的入口处耸立着一棵古老的松柏，从远处看去像一把巨大的雨伞.13. The branches of the trees danced in the breeze.树枝在微风中起舞.14.I could see the yellow leaves floating in the cool wind.我能看见黄叶在凉风中飘浮.15.The leaves drift in the storm.树叶在暴风雨中飘动.16.The big tree casts a shadow on the water of the lake.那棵大树在湖面上投下一道阴影.17.A breeze shook the tall trees that edged the garden.微风吹动了花园周边的大树.18. All around me I saw tall trees waving in the wind.我看见四周的大树随风摇曳.19.A pleasant breeze was blowing, making the leaves of trees swinging lightly as if to be cheering and clapping for them.一阵怡人的微风吹过，树叶轻轻摆动着，好像在为它们欢呼鼓掌.20.He gave a glance to green grass with full of dew, while green grass gave him, too.他对沾满露水的青草瞥了眼，青草也对他挤了挤眼.21.In the valleys colourful butterflies flew around us and we saw many yaks and sheep eating green grass.在山谷里，五彩斑斓的蝴蝶在我们身旁翩翩飞舞，我们还看到牦牛和羊群在吃草.22.The green grass and the little colorful flowers were quite soft beneath our feet.这片草地和草地上五颜六色的小花儿在我们脚下，感觉特别酥软.23.Lie down on the green grass and look up at the clouds going by.躺在青草地上，看着头顶上的云飘过.24.Thus in the centre of the campus, in a field of green grass and colourful flowers appeared a new Chinese fountain spurting out water drops glistening in the sunlight.于是在校园里，在绿茸茸的芳草和艳丽的花朵之间又加上了一个中国色彩的喷水池，在阳光的辉照下，喷射着亮晶晶的水珠儿.25. Night, in thick patch of grass various insect cry and running water sound, has composed the wonderful music.夜晚，草丛中各种各样的虫叫声和流水声，组成了美妙的乐曲.26. The winds came down with the scents of the grass and wild flowers.风吹来了青草和野花的清香.27. He fell asleep with his body extended on the grass.他伸展着身子躺在草地上睡着了.28. On the campus, Gothic classrooms, dormitories and dining halls stand out against the grassland, where you can imagine Percy Bysshe Shelly, Oscar Wilde and W. H. Auden lying lazily between classes.在校园里，哥特式的教室、宿舍和餐厅在草地的反衬下显得格外醒目，在这片草地上你不难想象珀西·比西·雪莱、奥斯卡·王尔德和威斯坦·休·奥登在课间懒散地躺着.29. The grounds were covered with dark green grass through which stretched a straight white stone path.地面覆盖着深绿色的草，草丛间伸展出一条笔直的白石路.30.And then there's Stendhal's “The Red and the Black”，which happens to be the name of my favorite cocktail(鸡尾酒) of the summer, created by Michael Cecconi at Savoy and Back Forty. It is easy to drink, and knocking back three or four seems like such a delightful idea. Cecconi's theory,“I take whatever's fresh at the green market and turn it into liquid. ”The result is a pure shot of afternoon in the park, making one feel cheerful and peaceful all at once, lying on uncut grass with eyes shut, sun beating through the lids ...然后再读读司汤达的《红与黑》，这名字恰巧是我最喜欢的夏天的鸡尾酒的名字，这种鸡尾酒是Savoy and Back Forty的迈克尔·切科尼调制的.喝起来很上口，豪饮三四杯似乎是一个令人愉快的想法.切科尼的观点是：“我买光农贸市场所有的新鲜东西，然后把它们都变成液体.”结果，我在公园里喝了整整一个下午的酒，人瞬间就感到愉悦平和了，躺在未修剪的草地上，闭着双眼，阳光透过眼帘·....31.They were bumping over a sandy track to the weed-choked 120-acre field.他们颠簸在一条沙路上，朝一块面积120公顷，杂草丛生的田地开去.32. The murmuring brook in the green forest flowed past glorious wild flowers which decorated the little house there.翠绿的树林里，一条小溪潺潺流过，灿烂的野花装点着林间的小屋.33,Beautiful butterflies hovered above the wild flowers.美丽的蝴蝶在野花上方飞舞.34.All the way up to the top of the mountain, beautiful pink azaleas are seen in full bloom.沿路直至山顶，都可以看到美丽的粉红色的杜鹃花在盛开.35.As soon as I stepped into my friend's garden, my eyes were instantly attracted by the geraniums and the chrysanthemums which were in full bloom.在我踏进朋友花园的那一瞬间，顿时被盛开的天竺葵和秋菊吸引了.36.They found the farm green with vegetables, the little house livable and homey.他们发现农场上长着绿油油的蔬菜，小屋布置得舒适温馨.37. The small sunless dorm smelled unpleasantly of stale vegetables and unattended dirty socks. 狭小又不见阳光的寝室里发出一股腐烂的蔬菜和没有洗的脏袜子的臭味.38. The smoke curled steadily upwards. 烟气袅袅上升.39. Wisps of smoke still rose into the grey sky, but no more than might have risen from Winter fell's chimneys on a cold autumn afternoon.缕缕青烟继续爬上灰色长空，和清冷的秋日午后临冬城炊烟缭绕的情景并无二致.40. Wisps of smoke rose continuously from the village chimneys.村中炊烟缕缕上升.41.There was a drift of smoke above the trees.树林上空飘浮着一股烟.42.She managed to scramble out of the vehicle as it burst into flame(s).车子一下子起火了，她设法从里面爬了出来.43. Fires broke out everywhere, the entire city went up in flames.到处都燃起了火，整个城市陷入一片火海.44. The whole building was sent up in flames when the petrol exploded.当汽油瀑炸时，整栋楼房烈焰熊熊.45. A fire broke out in the lower story during the midnight and soon the whole building was in flames.午夜时分楼下着了火，不一会儿整栋大楼都烧起来了.46.The house was in flames when the fire engine arrived.救火车到达的时候，房子已经着火了.47.The opera theatre was soon enveloped in flames.歌剧院很快就被一片火海所覆没.48. Seconds later, the car was totally engulfed in flames, but Anderson was miraculously able to pull the baby to safety.几秒钟后，出事的小车完全被火焰包围.但安得森却奇迹般地把孩子抱到了安全的地方. 49.The first sight that met my eyes on reaching the front door was the church enveloped in flames.赶到前门时，我第一眼看到的就是被大火吞没的教堂.50.A yellow tongue of flame shot upwards.一条黄色的火舌直冲上天.51.The flames were growing higher and higher.熊熊火焰越来越高.52.They saw a big flash and a huge ball of fire reaching hundreds of feet into the sky.他们看见一道强光和一个巨大的火球冲向数百英尺的高空.53.We sat in front of a roaring fire.我们坐在熊熊的炉火面前.54.A stunning display of fireworks lit up the sky.美轮美奂的焰火表演照亮了夜空.55,Colourful fireworks shot into the sky.五彩缤纷的礼花腾空而起.56.Fireworks added to the beauty of the festival night.焰火给节日的夜晚增加了美丽.57.leaf-clothed trees枝叶茂密的树58.fog-cloaked meadows烟雾弥漫的草地59. cloud-wrapped peaks云雾缭绕的山顶景象描写9旧貌；新颜*be in a mess/be in chaos/be in complete disorder处于混乱之中；凌乱不堪*be at sixes and sevens混乱的；杂乱无章的；乱七八糟的*flood/drought/storm-stricken areas遭受洪灾／旱灾／暴风雪侵袭的地区*disaster/storm/flood/quake-hit areas遭受灾难／暴风雪／洪灾／地震侵袭的地区*a run-down house破旧不堪的／失修的房子*be in ruins一片废墟；满目疮痍*be in a poor state(of...)处于(···..·)状态不佳*be in poor condition处于坏的状况*be in poor shape状况不佳；情况糟糕*be at a low ebb处于低潮；处于衰退状态*be out of order出故障*be out of repair失修的；处于不正常状态的break down(机器或车辆)出毛病*be out of place格格不入*be under repair在修理中；正在维修中；在修缮中*be under construction正在修建中*be under protection正在受到保护*go downhill走下坡路；每况愈下*go from bad to worse每况愈下；越来越糟*turn...upside down使倒置；使·····颠倒；把···翻个底朝天；使··...彻底改变*return to normal恢复正常*get(...)back on track(使回到正轨；(使··.·.)恢复正常*come back to life恢复生机*burst into life生机盎然*be/get back on one's feet/get...back one's feet(困境后)恢复；(使··..·)东山再起*pick up the pieces收拾残局；努力恢复正常*restore...to one's former glory恢复其昔日的壮丽／光辉／荣耀*take on a new look呈现新面貌*be in good order井然有序；井井有条；完好*be in place在正确的／通常的位置；(法律行政等)正在运作；就位*be in a good state(of...)处于…良好状态*be in perfect condition状况良好；完好无损*be in good shape(事物)情况良好*be as sound as a bell状况良好；完好无损be on the mend(关系)正在改善；(形势)正在好转1. This country was once proud of its education system. Now it seems to be in ruins. 这个国家曾一度为其教育体系感到自豪.但现在它似乎已经千疮百孔了.2. After the earthquake, the beautiful city was in ruins.地震之后，这个美丽的城市沦为了一片废墟.3. The garden was left in ruins to remind students of what happened and give them a sense of history.花园成了废墟，提醒学生们发生了什么事，给他们一种历史感.4.Nabire was hit by a powerful earthquake in February that killed 28 people and left much of the city in ruins.纳比尔在2月份被一场强烈地震袭击，造成28人死亡，把城市的大部分变成了废墟.5.The house was in a mess after the party was over.这个房子在宴会结束后乱七八糟.6. I was in a mess and there was no one to help me, so I just had to make the best of it.我陷入一团糟的局面，而且没有人帮我，所以我只好尽力而为.7. After the failure of electricity supply the city was in chaos.停电后，城市一片混乱.8. After the earthquake, the area was in chaos: no electricity, roads blocked, injured people everywhere.地震过后，那个地区一片混乱：没有电，交通堵塞，到处是受伤的人.9.The classroom was in chaos without the teacher.老师不在，教室里一片混乱.10.Everything was scattered over the floor in disorder.满地散落着东西，凌乱不堪.11.After the party our house was in complete disorder.舞会结束后，我们房子里凌乱不堪.12.The party last night and everything was at sixes and sevens when the guests left.昨晚他们开了一个家庭聚会.当客人散尽之后，一切物品都挪了位置.13. The boy made the room at sixes and sevens.这男孩把房间弄得乱七八糟.14. The dog left the flowerbed at sixes and sevens.这条狗把花坛践踏得花叶凋零.15.Things happened so fast that Mary was at sixes and sevens.事情发生得如此之快，以致玛丽心绪烦乱.16.The two were at sixes and sevens over how to handle the problem.这两人在处理这个问题上乱无章法.17.The elevator is out of order. We've got to go up the stairs.电梯故障了.我们必须爬楼梯了.18. The large table is out of place in such a small room.这张大桌子放在这么小的房间里有点格格不入.19.I felt out of place in my suit and tie.我穿着西服打着领带，感觉十分别扭.20.Their car broke down.他们的车子出故障了.21. Moreover, today's phone booth has been decorated with various kinds of ads, and is in a poor state.还有就是，现在街上的电话亭都贴满了广告，破败不堪.22. The flat was in a poor state of repair.公寓严重失修.23. A house isn't in poor condition because of a few rotten boards.房子不会因为几块烂木板就变差.24.After years of neglect, the road was in poor condition.由于几年无人维护，这条路的路况很糟糕.25. With the world economy in poor shape, it is all but impossible.在世界经济形势糟糕的情况下，这几乎是不可能的.26. But just ahead, hidden among the trees stood a run-down house that seemed to be out of repair for years.但是就在前面，在树丛中矗立着一座年久失修的破旧房子.27.The house was considerably out of repair and badly in need of painting.这房子严重失修，急需上油漆.28. The economy of the country was at a low ebb.该国的经济处于衰退阶段.29. In recent years, both father and I have been living an unsettled life, and the circumstancesof our family going from bad to worse.近几年来，父亲和我都是东奔西走，家中的光景是一日不如一日.30. In recent times, pollution has gone from bad to worse all over the world.近来污染在全世界日益严重.31. There is no denying that the practicality of our higher education has gone from bad to worse. 不可否认，我们的高等教育的实用性已经每况愈下.32. Everything in the house was turned upside down for the cleaning.由于大扫除，屋里的一切弄得乱七八糟.33. The house was turned upside down by the burglars.房子被盗贼们翻得乱七八糟.34.I went to Mariano's condo and turned it upside down.我去马里亚诺的公寓翻了个底朝天.35.The summer before the fifth grade ,my world/life was turned upside down when my family moved from the country town where I was born to a small town near the beach.。

高考英语读后续写环境描写好句一、河流、湖、海洋The expanse of blue water stretched in every direction to the horizon,frothy waves lapping at a sand beach.蓝色的海水向四面八方伸展到地平线，波涛拍打着沙滩。

The turbid water,swollen by the heavy rain,was rushing on rapidly below; and all the other sounds were lost in the noise of it's splashing and eddying（漩涡，起旋涡）against the green and slimy piles.浑浊的水，被大雨冲地鼓起来，在下面急速前进；所有其他的声音都消失在水花飞溅的声音中，在绿色和黏糊糊的堆上漩涡。

From the base of the steep wall of rock on which I stood, a moss（苔藓，地衣） covered ledge jutted（jut 突出，伸出，高出） seaward（向海的，朝海的） into deep water.从我立脚的峭岩底部，一块被青苔覆盖的礁石伸向大海的最深处。

In the surge at the rim（边缘） of the ledge the dark fronds of oarweeds swayed smooth and gleaming （闪闪发光的）as leather.海水拍击着礁石周围，水藻上下左右地飘动，像皮面般滑溜发亮。

二、夜色Clusters（簇的） of stars decorated the vast sky, weakly shining in the darkness.辽阔的天空点缀着一簇簇的星星，它们在黑暗中微弱地闪烁着。

第二部分读后续写01 素材篇主题一环境描写类型1 自然环境日月星辰【高分词块】set in the west 在西方落下be lit by a full moon 被满月照亮hide behind the clouds 躲到云后面burst through the clouds 破云而出the rising/setting sun 朝阳/落日keep out of the sun 避开阳光rise in the east 从东方升起a rainbow hanging in the sky 挂在空中的彩虹millions of stars in the sky 天空中的无数星星be bathed in silver moonlight 沐浴在银色的月光下【精彩好句】1. The sun glinted on the windows. 太阳照在窗户上闪闪发光。

2. Thunder boomed in the sky. 雷声在天空中隆隆作响。

3. The moon was rising in the inky sky. 月亮在墨似的夜空中升起。

4. The moonlight gleamed on the water. 月光照在水面上泛起粼粼波光。

5. The moon cast a bright light over the garden. 月亮在花园里撒下清辉。

6. The clouds thinned and the moon shone through. 云层渐稀，透出了月光。

7. We could see the moon through a break in the clouds. 我们能从云缝里看到月亮。

8. A bright moon adorns spring night skies and the earth. 明月装点了春天的夜空，也装点了大地。

9. There was a big moon and hundreds of stars shining overhead.头顶是一轮明月和成百上千颗闪烁的星星。

高考英语读后续写环境场面描写一、短语a rainy season多雨的季节a stormy night暴风雨之夜continuous/constant rains连绵不断的雨in the blinding rain在茫茫大雨中in the warm spring sunshine 在春天温暖的阳光里clear up放晴了be buried in snow深埋在雪中the blue sky蓝天the gentle breeze轻柔的微风the songs of birds鸟鸣the thundering clouds雷霆万钧的云the fragile flowers娇嫩的花the green grass青草the fragrant roses芬芳的玫瑰the setting / rising sun落日 / 冉冉升起的太阳the warm amber-like sunshine温暖的琥珀色的阳光the sparkling stars闪闪发光的星星the dark night漆黑的夜晚the feathery snowflakes鹅毛般的雪花the deafening applause震耳欲聋的掌声the gurgling stream潺潺流淌的小溪the melodious voice悦耳的嗓音the howling wind怒吼的大风the fragrant flowers芳香的花朵the fresh air清新的空气二、句子1.The night was as quiet as a pool of water, as if all the living creatures had slept, and everything seemed so peaceful.夜静得像一潭水，似乎所有的生灵都已经睡了，一切显得那么安谧。

2.The moon night by the sea is beautiful and quiet, and only the sound of the waves can be heard in the ear; the breeze blows the face, making people feel simple and happy.海边的月夜是美丽幽静的，耳畔只能听到哗哗的海浪声；微风轻拂脸面，使人感到简单愉快。

环境描写材料1. 生动的形容词关于风的形容词积极形容词：gentle/soft（轻柔的）; warm (温暖的)；pleasant (令人愉悦的)消极形容词：icy/freezing（冰冷的）; strong/violent（猛烈的）；dreadful可怕的;让人讨厌的；howling (呼啸的)；biting（刺骨的）；bone-chilling（刺骨的）例如：a gentle warm breeze 温和的暖风an icy howling wind 刺骨的狂风1. The sea breeze was rustling in the wood.海风在树林里沙沙作响.2. The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against the house. (暴风骤雨)3. The sound of my footsteps was accompanied only by the gracefully waving reeds.(优雅地随风飘扬的芦苇)关于雨的形容词积极的形容词：gentle/light 小的;pleasant令人心情愉悦的消极的形容词：icy/freezing（冰冷的）；heavy；dreadful可怕的;让人讨厌的例：The heavy rains have carved a miniature canyon in the path. Doubtless the soil was made soft by the gentle rainfall the previous week and so was no match for the sudden deluge . Hayley skips from side to side , thrilled with the new addition to the woodland walk.暴雨在道路上冲击出了一个微型峡谷。

Rain is liquid water in the form of droplets that have condensed from atmospheric wat er vapor and then become heavy enough to fall under gravity. Rain is a major compon ent of the water cycle and is responsible for depositing most of the fresh water on the Earth.from wikipedia雨是液态水，是由大气中的水蒸气凝结而成的水滴，然后在重力作用下变得足够重而下降。

雨水是水循环的主要组成部分，是地球上大部分淡水沉积的原因。

“雨”一词在文学作品中广泛使用，如“好雨知时节，当春乃发生。

随风潜入夜，润物细无声（杜甫）”，如“回首向来萧瑟处，归去，也无风雨也无晴（苏轼）”。

英语文学中，“rain”一词使用频率较高，在短篇小说语料中，其使用频次为万分之69.4。

作为读后续写自然环境描写的学习素材，具有一定的价值，而在英语文学中，其是如何被使用的呢？今天的工作坊，我们检索“rain”词符相关的搭配词及共文语境，在收集到的英语文学名著中，统计并抓取前后5个词汇范围的cotext共文中出现频率较高的搭配词。

一起来观察英语文学中对于“rain”一词的搭配描写。

“rain”搭配词及共文微型语料库1.[collocation]rain clouds [source]Adventure of Huckberry Finn [cotext]After a long t ime the rain let up, but the clouds stayed, and the lightning kept whimpering, and by a nd by a flash showed us a black thing ahead, floating, and we made for it. [百度翻译]过了很长时间，雨停了，但是云层停了下来，闪电不停地呜咽着，一瞬间，我们看到前面有一个黑色的东西，漂浮着，我们朝它走去。