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Who : when: where: what: how:
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一些错误 不影响理解
一些错误影响理解
错误较多 严重影响 理解
语篇的连贯性
语言通顺,语意连贯,表达清楚,具有逻辑性
语言基本通顺,语意基本连贯,表达基本清楚
先根据内容要点整体定档,然后根据其他三个方面的要求适当进行微调。
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March 1, Saturday Sunny I took a tour to the Great Wall with my parents Last Saturday. We went there by coach. Though the coach was full of people, the trip was interesting because I could look out of the window and enjoy the beautiful nature. It took us two hours to get there. As soon as we got to the top of the Great Wall, we began to take photos of the Great Wall and people from different countries. We stayed on the wall for half an hour and we had a great time there. While I was watching the Great Wall, I felt proud of our country. After we came back home, I was very tired but very happy. I hope I can go there again next time.