作文范文之英语作文举例法

英语作文举例法

【篇一：英语作文中比较和对照的写作方法】

comparison and contrast

比较和对照的写作方法

目标：掌握英语作文中比较和对照的写作方法（比较着重相似点，而对照强调不同之处）；

二．使用比较和对照写作方法的一般是说明文与论说文，常见的比较对照有两种方式:

1. 块状比较方式（block method），先a后b，即a1, a2, a3...；b1，b2，b3...。

2. 逐点比较方式（point-by-point method），ab交错，即a1，b1；a2，b2；a3，b3...。

范文一：country life and city life

it is really hard to say which is better than the other, city life or

rural life. both have their merits and shortcomings.

living in the city has a great many advantages. first, you can

enjoy various kinds of foods, both foreign and domestic.

second, there are more

cultural activities in the city – you can go to the concert, the

theatre, the movies or the disco club after a day’s hard work.

but city life has many problems, too. the overcrowded

population, traffic jam, industrial pollution, and the lack of

understanding between people may result in disease and

unhappiness. living in the country, however, you can watch the

magnificent suise and sunset and listen to the bird singing in

the tree. if you want, you can certainly have a huge garden

when a small green space seems a luxury in the city. in the

country, you don’t have so mucn worries. you can enjoy the

pleasure of work by planting seeds in the earth and watching

them grow into flowers and finally into fruits or food. but rural

life may not be that perfect. things are going so slowly that

sometimes you may feel that you are absolute left behind in

some remote

corners of the world. you may again miss the parties, friends

and movies in the city.

like anything else, country life and city life have their

advantages and disadvantages. the best solution may be that you enjoy pleasures of both lives and get rid of their

inconveniences.

范文二：middle school life and college life

there are many differences between middle school and the

college. first，in middle school，we have to listen to what the

teacher says in class, to

understand the content of the text. but in college，we must

study by ourselves before class. if not，we couldnt follow the

teacher. second，there are lots of rules in middle school. for

example，we should wear the uniform，the girls must have

their hair cut short， and we are not allowed to make boy- or

girlfriends. however，in college，we have more freedom. we

can wear the

clothes we like. and the girls could have long beautiful hair. we

are also free to make boy or girlfriends. the third，in the

middle school，we must study first. that means we could do

nothing but study. in contrast，we have to do

everything by ourselves in college. that means we must plan

our time carefully. there are also other differences between our

school life and our college life. we have to learn to adapt

ourselves to college life.

三．写作步骤

1. 写前阶段：写作提纲

1) 对两个对象或一个对象的两个方面进行比较与对照分析，找出相似点/不同之处。

2. 写作阶段：利用相关资料，组织结构与内容

1) useful words and phrases:

比较 ：like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same

manner, equally. 对照： by contrast, on the contrary, while,

whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely,

different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas,

unlike, yet, in contrast.

2）useful expressions

?just like a coin has two sides, everyting has its advantages

and disadvantages, and … is no exception.

?the advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.

?the advantages of a are much greater than those of b. ?a may be preferable to b, but a suffers from the

disadvantages that... ?for all the disadvantages, it has its

compensating advantages. ?like anything else, it has its faults.

?a and b has several points in common.

?a bears some resemblances to b.

?however, the same is not applicable to b.

?a and b differ in several ways.

?evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.

?the same is true of b.

?wondering as a is ,it has its drawbacks.

?it is true that a ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ...

【篇二：高考英语作文构思法】

高考英语作文构思法

英语写作不同于语文作文的写作，如果说语文作文是一个自由发挥的舞蹈，那么高考英语写作就是带着枷锁在跳舞。之所以这样来形容，是因为高考英语写作的内容都已经通过文字、表格、图片这三种形式给定大家了，内容方面，不需要学生进行发挥，大家所需要发挥的就是给这个不变的内容不要老去穿毫无变化的校服(简单句)，而要去穿一些不一样的衣服，让它显得不那么单调，让判卷老师能看到不同，学会如何灵活运用多变句型与词汇，进而在高考英语中冲击高分。

一、提高的练习方法

一是在高考时紧张的心理状态下以及短暂的构思时间中，很多考生针对题目中给出的话题可能在脑中浮现出一些观点，但仍然感到无从下手，不知道如何把这些观点按照一定的结构组织起来，使其不再是一个个的观点，而是一套观点。

二是很多考生的语言表达功底不够深，总是用过于简单化的句子甚至是中式的句子来表达自己的意思，这样导致在语言上没有亮点，甚至还有很多语法等方面的错误。

高考写作评分要求中，对20～25分这一档的文章有一条是：应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。由此可见，较为高级的语法结构是写作时的一个亮点，这也就意味着考生需要挖空心思地使用一些有一定难度的句型、短语等，以此来表现自己的英语实力。