高中高考短文改错真题集及详解.docx

短文改错参考答案2016～2012年各省市高考题A卷全国卷Passage 1(2016·全国Ⅰ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big，but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that whereI live.Though not very big ，but the Restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had haveto wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest honesty.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or and high quality oil are using usedfor cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams of /about becoming rich in the ashort period of time.Instead ，he hopes that our his business will grow steady steadily. 1．that→where [考查宾语从句的连词用法。

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IthinkIwould behappy there.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Un fortunately, onthe developmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsof studieshavebeenshownthat globalwarming hasalready become averyseriouslyproblem. Theairswebreathe inisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaysto protectyourenvironmenfailtodoso,we’ll live to regretit.Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedSomecherry tomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen-foralltheseyears-wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere. Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Thereareso muchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors. Althoughweallowtomato plantstogrowinthesame place yearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydisea搜索引擎优化rinsectattackproblems. Wearegrowingwonderfully tomatoesatnocost!2018全国2WhenI was little,Friday’snightwas ourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplaycardgamesof all sort inthesittingroom.Asthekid,I lovedtowatchcartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesI askedtowatchingthem,myparentswouldnottolet me.Theywouldsayto usthatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.StillI unwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.I di dn’trealizehowrightmyparentsareuntilIenteredhighschool.ThegamesmyparentstaughtmewhereI was achildturnedouttobe veryusefullaterinmylife.2017全国2Mr. andMrs. Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakes themaboutahourand ahalftogotowork everyday.Intheirspare time,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden, that isontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealso boughtforsomegardeningtools.beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheinternet.When summercame,theywill invitetheirstudentspickthevegetables！2016全国2Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday. Wecan chosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyou viewandgainknowledges wecannotgetfrombooks. Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterest nearby.I thoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnot costmany,yetwecanstilllearn alot.Oneday,littleTony wenttoashopping centerwithhisparenasverycrowded. Tony sawatoyona shopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsome time, heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansaw himdryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tony sawparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetosee youagain!DadandIwereterribleworried. ”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.2014全国2Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwo intheafternoon.Wedi dn’tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-school activitie example, wecando readingforoneanda halfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden .Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaround theclassroom buildings.We canlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachers herearekindand helpfully.Theyarenot onlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.2018全国3ItwasMonday morning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.Everyonewassilent,waittoseewhowould be calledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.Someofuswereconfidentandeagertakepartintheclassactivity,otherswerenervousandanxiouhaddonemyselfhomework,butIwasshy.Iwasafraidthattospeak infrontofalargergroupofpeople.Atthat moment,Irememberedthat myfatheroncesaid,"Theclassroomisa placeforlearningandthatincludeleaningfromtextbooks,andmistakeaswell."Immediate,I raisedmyhand.2017全国3WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself.Irealizeofhowfast timefliehadgrownnotonlyphysically,andalso mentally inthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonth afterthisphoto wastook,Ienteredmysecond yearofhigh schoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub. Around meinpicture arethethingstheywerevery importantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments. Ienjoyedstudyingdifference kindsof carsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispicture oftenbringsbacktome manyhappymemoriesof yourhighschooldays.2016 全国 3Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,my parents didn’tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhat todoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmy parentscouldn’tunderstand mesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependent by wearstrange clotheamleavinghometocollege. Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemy parentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.2018全国1During mylast winterholiday,Iwentto∧ the countrysidewithmy father tovisitmygrandparen find foundabigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,they werelivinginasmall house withdogs, ducks, andhereanother otherchickenstwinterwhenIwent∧ there whichagain,th eyhada bigseparatehousetoraisedozensof .chickensTheyalsohadasmallpondsell或 theyraisedfish .Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquiteain wherehappily lotby selling thefish.Ifelt happy thattheirlifehadimproved.Attheend ofourtrip,Itoldmyfather thatI plannedtoreturn for everytwoyears, butheagreed.and2017全国1 Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteen eighteenthbirthday,Itookdrivinglessonstillrememberhowhard ∧ the/my firstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,I thoughtI hadlearnedthe instructor ’sorders,sobut/yet onceIstartedthecar,mymind wordgoes went blank .Iforg otwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.TheTurninginstructorkeptrepeating thewords,“Spee dup!”“Slowdown!”“ late Turn left!”Iwasso much nervous thatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleffewminutes suddenly later on,theinstructor asked metostopthecar.It wasa reliefandI cametoa sudden stopjustinthemiddle oftheroad.2016全国1 71. that →where72. but 去掉 73.had →have 74.honest →honesty 75. or →and76. using →used 77.becoming 前加of 78. the →a79. our →htead →steadily2015全国176. think –thought 77.countryside 前加thr —and 79. on —with 80.been 去掉 81. seriously —serious 82.airs —air 83.much —many 84. found —find 85. your —our 2014全国12018全国2WhenIwas little, Friday ’s Fridaynightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplay card gamesof all so rtsorts inthesittingroom.Asthe a kid,Ilovedtowatchcartoons,butnomatterhow manytimes Iaskedtowatching watchthem,myp a r e n tswo uldn otto letme.The ywo uldsayto that playingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.StillIwas unwi llingtoplaythegames forwith themsometimedi dn’trealizehowrightmyparents are were untilI enteredhighschool.Thegamesmy parentstaughtme where when Iwasac hildturnedout tobeveryusefullaterin mylife.2017全国2Mr.andMrs.Zhangallbothworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemabout a hourandahalftogotowork everyday.Intheirsparetime,they areint erestinginplantingvegetablesinan /one int ereste dtheirgarden, thatwhichisontherooftopoftheirhouse.T heyof tenget up earlie r earlyandwaterthevegetablestogether. 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《高考短文改错——专项训练30篇——及答案解析》1. 短文改错1. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Peter,As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples.One of the most popular words are Dianzan, which is often use when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they liked. The phrase Miaosha first came on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it's wide used when you achieve your purpose in very short time. If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning, you'll know more about our language and culture.All the best!Yours,Li Hua1.______2.______3.______4.______5.______6.______7.______8.______9.______ 10.______2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线（________），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．In my village a lot of children have left school for many different reasorn．Some families are so poor to send their children to school，so their kids have to earn money to support their families．There are also many parents do not think it useless to send their children to school．They prefer to have their children do something else rather than to let them go to school．I feel worried this．I think every children should havethe opportunity to receive education．And it is necessary of Us to care about the children，because one day they will play important part in the construction of our country．So ways must be found to prevent children from leave off their sttldies．3.51.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

2020-2022高考短文改错1．（2022·全国乙）We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise. Whether you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution. Just see how cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger. And there were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle. 2．（2022·全国甲）My father often took me to his hospital when I was off my school. He showed me how his medical instruments was used. I felt so closely to him. However, after I went to high school, somehow I become distant from him. I was unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not stay out with my friends too late. The disagreement was too sharp that neither he nor I knew what to settle it. One day, he talked with me or hoped to mend our relations. With the efforts made by all sides, we began to understand each other better. 3．（2021·全国乙）I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What’s most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That’s our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!4．（2021·全国甲）Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are：Who will you go in times of trouble? Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because they’re of the same age and can understand each other. Somewill turn out to their parents or teachers for help. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others. They kept very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those wetrust mostly.5．（2020·全国Ⅰ）Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove，I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together.＂Not that way，＂my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.6．（2020·全国Ⅱ）Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.7．（2020·全国Ⅲ）My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill.But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.参考答案：1．1. greatly → great2. lives → live3. 在because后加of4. Whether → If 或Whether → When5. they → you6. cause → causing7. 去掉have后的been8. what → which9. were → are10. bicycle → bicycles【导语】这是一篇议论文。