陕西延长县2016高考英语作文品析附参考范文.doc

2016年陕西高考真题英语作文范文In recent years, the college entrance examination has always been a hot topic of discussion in China. As one of the most important exams in a student's life, the Gaokao (the national college entrance examination) not only determines a student's future but also reflects the education system and social values of a country. In this article, we will analyze and discuss the 2016 Shaanxi Gaokao English exam and its implications.The 2016 Shaanxi Gaokao English exam consisted of two parts: listening comprehension and writing. The listening comprehension section aimed to test students' ability to understand spoken English in various contexts. It included multiple-choice questions, fill-in-the-blank questions, and short answer questions. This section was challenging as it required students to have a good grasp of vocabulary, grammar, and listening skills. However, it also provided an opportunity for students to showcase their English proficiency.The writing section of the exam required students to write an essay on a given topic within a limited time. The topic for the 2016 Shaanxi Gaokao English exam was "The Importance of Cultural Exchange." This topic was thought-provoking and encouraged students to think critically about the significance of cultural exchange in today's globalized world. It required students to provide examples and arguments to support their views.Cultural exchange plays a vital role in promoting understanding and cooperation among different countries and cultures. Through cultural exchange, people can learn about different customs, traditions, and ways of life. This not only broadens their horizons but also helps to break down stereotypes and prejudices. In today's interconnected world, cultural exchange has become more important than ever before.In the essay, students were expected to discuss the benefits of cultural exchange from various perspectives. They could talk about the impact of cultural exchange on individuals, societies, and the world as a whole. They could also provide examples of successful cultural exchange programs and initiatives. Additionally, students wereencouraged to propose their own ideas on how to promote cultural exchange in their daily lives.To write a successful essay, students needed to have a clear structure and logical flow of ideas. They should have started with an introduction that provided background information on the topic and stated their thesis statement. The body paragraphs should have presented arguments and supporting evidence in a coherent and organized manner. Finally, the conclusion should have summarized the main points and provided a closing statement.Overall, the 2016 Shaanxi Gaokao English exam provided students with an opportunity to demonstrate their English proficiency and critical thinking skills. The topic of the essay encouraged students to think about the importance of cultural exchange in today's globalized world. By analyzing and discussing the exam, we can gain insights into the education system and social values of China. The Gaokao is not just an exam; it is a reflection of a nation's aspirations and priorities in education.In conclusion, the 2016 Shaanxi Gaokao English exam was a challenging yet thought-provoking exam that tested students' English proficiency and critical thinking skills. The topic of the essay highlighted the importance of cultural exchange in today's globalized world. By analyzing and discussing the exam, we can gain a deeper understanding of the education system and social values of China. The Gaokao is not just a test; it is a reflection of a nation's commitment to education and the future of its youth.。

16年陕西高考英语作文English:In recent years, there has been a growing trend towards the use of technology in education. Some people believe that technology can significantly enhance the learning experience for students, while others argue that it may have negative effects on their development. From my perspective, I believe that technology should be integrated into education in a thoughtful and balanced way. On one hand, technology can provide students with access to a wealth of information and resources that can enrich their learning experiences. With the use of computers, tablets, and the internet, students can easily access educational materials, collaborate with peers, and engage in interactive learning activities. Additionally, technology can also enhance students' critical thinking and problem-solving skills through the use of educational software and simulations. On the other hand, it's important to recognize the potential drawbacks of excessive technology use in education. Over-reliance on technology may lead to decreased face-to-face interaction and social skills, as well as potential health issues such as eye strain and poor posture. Therefore, it's crucial for educators to strike a balance betweentraditional teaching methods and the integration of technology to ensure that students are reaping the benefits without sacrificing important aspects of their overall development.中文翻译:近年来，教育中对科技的运用呈现出增长的趋势。

2016陕西高考英语作文It was the summer of 2016, and I was sitting in the stuffy classroom, waiting for the English exam to begin. My heart was pounding, and my palms were sweaty. I had studied for this moment for years, and now it was finally here.The exam started, and I dove into the reading comprehension section. The passages were challenging, but I did my best to understand and answer the questions. Then came the writing section, and I had to choose a topic and write an essay. I chose to write about the importance of learning a second language, and I poured my heart and soul into it.As I finished the last sentence of my essay, I felt a sense of relief and accomplishment. I had given it my all, and now all I could do was hope for the best. The rest of the exam went by in a blur, and before I knew it, it was over.Walking out of the exam room, I felt a mix of emotions.I was relieved that it was finally over, but I couldn't help but worry about how I had done. I knew that I had done my best, but the uncertainty of the outcome was nerve-wracking.In the end, the results came out, and I was over the moon to find out that I had done well. All the hard work and preparation had paid off, and I was proud of myself for pushing through the challenges and coming out on top. It was a moment of triumph that I would never forget.。

陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）阅读理解联训（3）及答案2016高考英语阅读理解-—人物传记/故事类Owning a smartphone may not be as smart as you think．They may let you surf the Internet,listen to music and snap photos wherever you are．．．but they also turn you into a workaholic,it seems．A study suggests that，by giving you access to emails at all times．the all-singing．all-dancing mobile phone adds as much as two hours to your working day．Researchers found that Britons work an additional 460 hours a year on average as they are able to respond to emails on their mobiles．The study by technology retailer Pixmania，reveals the average UK working day is between nine and ten hours，but a further two hours is spent responding to or sending work emails,or making work calls．Almost one in ten admits spending up to three hours outside their normal working day checking work emails．Some workers confess they are on call almost 24 hours a day,with nine out of ten saying they take work emails and calls outside their normal working hours．Nearly two—thirds say they often check work emails just before they go to bed and as soon as they wake up，while over a third have replied to one in the middle of the night．Ghadi Hobeika，marketing director of Pixmania，said：“The ability to access literally millions of apps,keep in contact via social networks and take photos and video as well as text and call has made smartphones valuable for many people．However，there are drawbacks．Many companies expect their employees to be on call 24 hoursa day，seven days a week，and smartphones mean that people literally cannot get away from work．The more constantly in contact we become。

2016高考全国卷英语作文（含范文）2016年高考的脚步渐行渐远，2017年的高考正徐徐向我们走来。

学长学姐们的高考之路已经完成，现在轮到你们了。

每一年，新高三生们都从往届高考中汲取考试经验和教训，对历年尤其是当年的高考试卷分析和解读是其中非常重要的一项内容。

今天，小简老师带大家看看今年全国I卷英语作文命题及其范文！2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试新课标I卷书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。

给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。

注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

【优秀满分范文】Dear MS Jenkins,I’m Li Hua from English writing class last lesson. I’m writing to ask for your help.I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed myapplication letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used. I know you hav e a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.Thank you for your kindness!Yours,Li Hua范文看完了，有啥感想，是不是觉得太简单？没错，今年的英语作文并不难，不，应该说历年的英语作文都不难。

陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）阅读理解联训（5）及答案2016高考英语阅读理解一一人物传记/故事类In Eastern Europe, blue jeans symbolize （象征）American culture and "the good life". In Spain they are known as "cowboys" .In China, jea ns are known as "n iuzaiku", also, "cowboy trousers77, which means they are connected with the American West cowboy culture and outdoor work・Jeans are usually made from denim （粗布）,but may also be made from other materials・ The earliest known cloth for jeans was a thick cotton cloth from the Indians. At first they were working clothes. They became popular among teenagers in the 1950s. Today jeans are a very popular form of casual wear around the world and come in many styles and colors・Jeans were first made in Genoa in Italy. The trousers were made for the Genoese navy （海军）because they needed trousers which could be worn wet or dry, and whose legs could be easily rolled up while the men were cleaning the ships・ These jeans would be washed by pulling them in large fishing nets behind the ship, and the sea water would make them white・In the 1850s Levi Strauss, a business man living in San Francisco, was selling blue jeans under the "Levi's" name to the coal workers of California.During World War II, the coal workers liked jeans very much because they were strong and did not tear easily. In the 1950s, jeans became popular with young people in the United States・ Wearing of blue jeans by teenagers was the symbol of rebels （反叛者）in TV programmes and movies. Some cinemas and restaurants refused to let people in if they wore blue jeans. In the 1980s, jeans fin ally became high fashi on clothi ng, when famous desig ners started making their own styles of jea ns, with their own labels on them. Sales of jea ns we nt up and up.【小题1 ] From the first paragraph we know that _________ .A.cowboys wear jeans onlyB・ cowboys live a good I讦eC.American culture is cowboy cultureD.cowboy culture is usually related to the West of America【小题2 ] Jeans were first made in ______ •A. Italy B・ America C. Spain D. China【小题3 ] From Paragraph 4 we know that "Levi's" was _____ •A.the name of a workerB.the brand （名牌）of a kind of jeansC.the name of a kind of clothD.the nickname of a businessman【小题4] Why the people who wore blue jeans were refused to go into the cinema in the 1950s?A.Because jeans were made for workers・B.Because jeans were made of denim.C.Because it was during the time of war.D.Because wearing jeans was the symbol of rebels.【答案］【小题1】D【小题2】A【小题3】B【小题4】D2016高考英语阅读理解一一人物传记/故事类The China Daily newspaper group is looking for English-language senior business editors, senior copy editors, copy editors and graphic desig ners to st re ngthen its in ter national team ・ We offer a competitive salary package, free accommodation with utilities paid for, 90 per cent medical reimbursement, a seven・day paid leave, eleven-day public holidays and a return ticket to the coun try of reside nee.Senior Business EditorYou must： assist the business editor in setting goals and working on achieving them； be an excelle nt team person who can gen erate ideas and think creatively and be able to rewrite totally if n eeded and men tor junior staff； ideally have bee n working or have worked in a positi on of responsibility and understand what leadership entails； have had at least five years' editing experieneeworking on editing the Business Desk and be familiar with industry software.Senior Copy EditorYou must：work on shifts in the Business Desk and usually have the last word before the page is sent to print；edit or rewrite copy and give snappy headlines and captions； have had at least two years' editing experience working on editing desks and be familiar with industry software・Copy EditorYou must： be good at editing or rewriting copy and writing snappy headlines and captions； be able to work on shifts for different pages, and usually have the last word before the page is sent to print； have two years of editing experience working on copy desks, and be familiar with industry software ・Graphic DesignerYou must：have excellent skills in information graphics； be good at illustrations and freehand drawings； be experieneed in newspaper or magazine layouts； have a good sense of typography； have good news judgme nt； be well-versed with Macin tosh software, in eluding InDesign, Illustrator and Photoshop：be flue nt in En glish ・For enquiries or to apply, write to job @ .【小题1 】What is the purpose of this passage?A.To describe the positions of the China Daily newspaper group・B.To describe the working conditions of the China Daily newspaper group.C.To tell you how to become part of this group・D.To advertise for recruiting some good employees・【小题2] What is NOT required about Graphic Designer?A.Be well-versed with Photoshop.B.Writing snappy headlines and captions.C.Having a good sense of typography.D.Have excellent skills in information graphics.【小题3 】Which of the following is TRUE according to the passage?A.Free accommodations are available to the workers・B.The workers there can enjoy a seven-day leave without pay.C.The employees have the right to enjoy eleven-day public holidays.D.The senior business editor's only job is to help the business editor to set goals.【答案］【小题1】D【小题2】B【小题3】C阅读理解。

陕西高考英语作文2016It was the day of the college entrance examination, and I was feeling a mix of nervousness and excitement. I had been preparing for this moment for years, and now it was finally here. The pressure was on, but I was determined to do my best and show what I was capable of.As I sat down at my desk and opened the test paper, my mind was racing. I knew that this was my chance to prove myself, and I wasn't going to let it slip away. The questions were challenging, but I tackled them with confidence, drawing on all the knowledge and skills I had acquired throughout my years of study.Time seemed to fly by, and before I knew it, the exam was over. I felt a sense of relief wash over me, knowing that I had given it my all. Now all that was left to do was wait for the results.In the days that followed, I couldn't help but worryabout how I had performed. Had I answered all the questions correctly? Did I meet the expectations of the examiners? The uncertainty was almost unbearable, but I tried to stay positive and focus on the fact that I had done my best.Finally, the day arrived when the results were announced. I held my breath as I scanned the list of names, searching for my own. And then, there it was my name, with a score that exceeded my wildest expectations. I couldn't believe it I had aced the exam!The sense of accomplishment and pride that washed over me in that moment was indescribable. All the hard work and dedication had paid off, and I was now one step closer to achieving my dreams. It was a reminder that with determination and perseverance, anything is possible.Looking back on that day, I am grateful for the experience and the lessons it taught me. It showed me the power of belief in oneself and the importance of never giving up, no matter how daunting the challenge may seem.It was a day that changed my life, and one that I will never forget.。

陕西延长县高考英语（二轮）阅读理解联训（4）2016高考英语阅读理解——人物传记/故事类People are being lured（引诱）onto Facebook with the promise of a fun, free service, and don’t realize that they’re paying for it by giving up loads of personal information．Facebook then attempts to make money by selling their data to advertisers that want to send targeted messages．Most Facebook users don’t realize this is happening．Even if they know what the company is up to, they still have no idea what they’re paying for Facebook, because people don’t rea lly know what their personal details are worth．The biggest problem, however, is that the company keeps changing the rules．Early on, you could keep everything private．That was the great thing about Facebook—you could create your own little private network．Last year, the company changed its privacy rules so that many things—your city, your photo, your friends’ names—were set, by default（默认）, to be shared with everyone on the Internet．According to Facebook’s vice president Elliot Schrage, the company is simply making changes to improve its service, and if people don’t share information, they have a “less satisfying experience．”Some critics think this is more about Facebook looking to make more money．Its original business model, which involved selling ads and putting them at the side of the page, totally failed．Who wants to look at ads when they’re online connecting with their friends？The privacy issue has already landed Facebook in hot water in Washington．In April, Senator Charles Schumer called on Facebook to change its privacy policy．He also urged the Commission to set guidelines for social-networking sites．“I think the senators rightly communicated that we had not been clear about what the new products were and how people could choose to use them or not to use them,” Schrage admits．I suspect that whatever Facebook has done so far to invade（侵犯）our privacy, it’s only the beginning，which is why I’m considering deactivating（撤销）my account．Facebook is a handy site, but I’m upset by the idea that my information is in the hands of people I don’t trust．That is too high a price to pay．【小题1】What do we learn about Facebook from the first paragraph？A．It is a website that sends messages to targeted usersB．It makes money by putting on advertisementsC．It earns money by selling its user’s personal dataD．It provides a lot of information to its users【小题2】What does the author say about most Facebook users？A．They don’t know their personal data enriches FacebookB．They are unwilling to give up their personal informationC．They don’t identify themselves when using websiteD．They care very little about their personal information【小题3】Why does Facebook make changes to its rules according to Elliot Schrage？A．To help its users make more friendsB．To obey the Federal guidelinesC．To make money by attracting more usersD．To offer better service to its users【小题4】What does Senator Charles Schumer argue for？A．Setting guidelines for advertising on websitesB．Setting rules for social-networking sitesC．Stoppi ng sharing user’s personal informationD．Removing ads from all social-networking sites【小题5】Why does the author plan to stop using his Facebook account？A．He is dissatisfied with its serviceB．He finds many of its users untrustworthyC．He doesn’t want his personal data abusedD．He is upset by its frequent rule changes2016高考英语阅读理解——人物传记/故事类阅读A、B、C三篇材料，然后从各小题所给的四个选项中选出最佳选项。

陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）作文品析（6）2016高考训练题。

书面表达（满分25分）假如你是李华，新当选的学校英语学习社团（English Club）团长。

现在，请你写一篇介绍这个社团的广播稿，欢迎同学们参加。

1．成立时间：2015年5月1日；2．社团目的：开阔学生视野，激发英语学习兴趣；3．具体内容：话题讨论（同学们感兴趣的或热点话题）；常识积累（中西方文化等）；比赛类（英语演讲、辩论等）注意：1．词数不少于100；2．请勿提及学校真实名称；3．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；4．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Boys and girls, attention, please]Good news for you!________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you.参考范文：Boys and girls, attention, please!Good news for you! An English club will be opened on May 1, 2015. It aims to broaden the students’ horizons and arouse your interes t in English.The Club is a platform where we can do many things. Firstly, we can discuss lots of things on our interest or the hot topic around us. What’s more, we can develop our understanding of the differences between the eastern and western cultures. In addition, kinds of English activities will be held regularly, such as English Speech Competition, English Debate Contest and so on.I’m sure the club will be of great benefit to our English study. And every one of us is welcomed to join in it.That’ s a ll. Thank you.假如你是某家英文报社的编辑，昨日收到一位中学生读者王丽的来信。

英文作文：The Allure of Adventure: A Dialogue with Robinson CrusoeIn the vast expanse of literature, few characters have captured the imagination of readers more than Robinson Crusoe. His story, a testament to human resilience and the allure of adventure, has resonated with individuals across time and cultures. As I delve into the depths of his narrative, I find myself drawn into a dialogue with this remarkable figure."Hello, Robinson Crusoe," I murmur, as I turn the pages of the timeless tale. "What secrets do your adventures hold that continue to captivate hearts even today?"Robinson's story begins with a shipwreck that leaves him stranded on a deserted island. Instead of succumbing to despair, he chooses to embrace the unknown and turn his fate into a series of exciting adventures. His resourcefulness and ingenuity in survival situations are nothing short of astonishing. He hunts, builds shelters, and even cultivates a garden, all while maintaining a resolute spirit in the face of adversity."Robinson," I ask, "what was it that kept you going when all seemed lost?"His reply is simple yet profound: "It was the will to survive, the desire to make sense of my situation, and the belief that one day I would be rescued."His story teaches us that adventure is not merely about seeking thrills and excitement; it's about finding meaning in life, about growing and learning from our experiences. Robinson's孤岛生活, though isolated and lonely, became a laboratory for self-discovery and personal growth."And what of the lessons you learned from your encounter with nature?" I inquire."I learned to respect its power and cycles," he replies. "I learned that survival is not just about me, but about harmonizing with my environment. It's about finding a balance between what I take and what I give."As I reflect on Robinson's adventures, I realize that they are not just tales of survival; they are also tales of hope, perseverance, and the human spirit's infinite capacity for growth and transformation. Robinson Crusoe's story is not just a story; it's a mirror reflecting our own potential and the boundless possibilities that await us when we choose to embrace the unknown and step into the realm of adventure.中文作文：与鲁滨逊的对话：冒险的魅力在文学的广阔天地中，很少有角色能像鲁滨逊·克鲁索一样深深吸引读者的想象力。

适宜英语朗读的文章品析篇一：高考英语二轮作文品析2 附参考范文陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）作文品析（2）附参考范文【2016高考训练题】书面表达(总分值25分)假设你是王林，寒假期间你要到伦敦旅游，请你按照以下提示给你的英国好友Alex写一封信，请他推荐一个旅馆，要点如下：1 介绍你伦敦之行的目的；2 停留时间：5个晚上，从2月8日到12日；3 房间要求：预定一个房间，房间不一定特别大，但要有浴室；可以上网；留意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连接。

Dear Alex,_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________【参考范文】Dear Alex,How is everything going recently? I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me.To experience different cultures and broaden my horizons, I will visit London during the winter holiday. When I am staying there, I want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights, fromFeb 8 to Feb 12. I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station sothat I can take a bus conveniently. In addition, to keep in touch with my family and friends, I hope Ican gain access to the internet in the room.I would appreciate it if you could help me. I am looking forward to your early reply.接连发生的酒后驾驶致死案，引发了社会的高度关注。

陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）作文品析（4）【2016高考训练题】书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华。

为了加强大家的消防安全童识，你校邀请消防员在学校大厅举行了安全知识讲座。

请给美国朋友彼得写一封信，简述活动情况以及你的感受。

要点如下：1.活动时间：上周三下午3点；2.讲座内容（典型火灾案例，如何火灾自救，提问互动等）；3.你的感受。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,I’m wri ting to tell you something about the lecture held in our school.________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ _作文参考范文Dear Peter,I’m writing to tell you something about the lecture held in our school.In order to arouse our safety awareness, our school invited a fireman to give us a lecture on fire safety. It was held at our lecture hall at 3 p.m. last Wednesday. First of all, some videos about fire accidents were shown to tell the necessity and importance of fire prevention. Then, the fireman told us how to react in case a fire should occur. Finally, a Q&A session was arranged to answer the related questions and help us get a better understanding of fire safety.Thanks to the lecture, I’ve learned how fast a fire can grow and what little time we may have to react. So destructive is a fire that each of us should be cautious in our daily life to prevent it from happening. （127 words）yours,友谊是人们能享受的最大的快乐之一。

2016 高考英语书面表达评析假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photograph club）将举办国际中学摄影展。

请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。

请他提供作品。

信的内容包括：1.主题：环境保护;2. 展览时间；3. 投稿邮箱：**************************注意：1.词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

一、试题分析本文属于半开放作文。

要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）举办的国际中学摄影展。

文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。

要点如下：1.校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；2.展览时间6月15日，持续三周；3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。

4.投稿邮箱：***********************.com在写作时，注意书信的格式以及串联过渡用语；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，并在力所能及的范围之内使用复合句或者谚语，增加获得高分的可能性。

二、写作指导(如何烹饪一道大菜)秘笈一：精选准确的词汇（根据评审老师的口味精心挑选上等的优质食材）国际__________ 展览_________ __________作品__________ 环境保护__________ __________主题__________秘笈二：打造精美的句式(好的菜肴讲究色香味型，好的大厨须掌握好火候，油温以及营养搭配…)开头第一段：1.I’m delighted to tell you that the International Photo Show held y my school’sphotography club is around the corner.2.Our school photography club will hold an International High School PhotographyShow, which makes me very happy.3.I’ll tell you something interesting that our school photography club will hold anInternational High School Photography Show.4.Not until the next Friday will we hold this exhibition.第二段：1.Having been exposed to photography for many years, I believe you’ll beinterested in this photography show.2.On the one hand, the show can make people reflect on their own actions. On theother hand, we can learn more about the skills of photography.3.With the development of society, more and more people become aware of theimportance of environment. So there is no doubt that the exhibition is very important. I’m fully convinced that it will raise public awareness of environmental protection.4.Knowing that you are aimed at being a professional photographer, I bring a goodnews to you.5.As we know, with the development of industry, the environment is becomingworse and worse. We want to hold this activity to make people aware of environmental problems.6.As we all know, the problem of environment is the inevitable(不可避免的) resultof social development.7.It is such a serious social problem that we should pay more attention to it.8.It goes without saying that you are interested in taking photos.9.First，the key idea is protecting the environment, which means that there is awide range of choices open to you about it.10.What I really hope is that you can offer your photos to this show.9. My gratitude will be beyond description if you offer some photos about this show.10. What you should do can be listed as follows.秘笈三：架设错落有致的结构(菜品视觉美可使食者舌底生津，增加味觉感受；味觉感受好，反过来更深化食者的审美感受，所以摆盘是大厨的必杀技)第一层次（首先）First，Firstly，In the first place, Fist of all, To begin with, For one thing第二层次(其次) Second, Secondly, In the second place, Next, Then, For another第三层次(第三点) Third, Thirdly, Besides, In addition, Furthermore, What’s more important, Moreover最后一点At last, Finally, In the last place, Last but not the least三、范文1Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any student who is interested in is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme last time you visited our school. Opportunities are given to those who are prepared. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.If you want to join, you can send your photos to ***********************.com Hope to hear from you soon.范文2Dear Peter,There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. So our photography club prepare to hold an international photography exhibition next month which is aimed to raise people's awareness of protecting environment.As there is lack of pictures, I hope you can provide some high quality photos. ******************************************.Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerelyLi Hua范文3Dear Peter,The International Photography Exhibition about protecting environment will be held in our school.Recently, some people ignore the fact that our earth is getting worse and worse. Not only did they cut down plenty of trees, but also they threw litters here and there. We attached great importance to environmental problems. And this is why we held the exhibition.I would appreciate it if you can provide some photos for me. We will hold the exhibition next Monday, so please send the photos to intlphotoshow @ as soon as possible.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours,LiHua。

2016高考英语作文陕西It was the year of 2016, and I was sitting in the examination room, sweating profusely as I stared at the English test paper in front of me. The questions seemed to be getting harder and harder, and I could feel the pressure mounting with each passing minute.As I looked around the room, I saw my classmates furrowing their brows in concentration, their pens scratching against the paper. Some of them looked confident, while others appeared to be struggling just like me. I couldn't help but wonder if anyone was actually enjoyingthis experience.The clock on the wall seemed to be ticking away at an agonizingly slow pace, and I couldn't shake off the feeling of unease that had settled in the pit of my stomach. I knew that this test was important, that it could potentially determine my future, but I couldn't help but wish that it was all over already.Finally, after what felt like an eternity, the invigilator announced that the time was up. I heaved a sigh of relief and handed in my paper, hoping for the best but preparing for the worst. As I walked out of the examination room, I couldn't help but feel a sense of accomplishment, knowing that I had given it my all.Looking back on that day now, I realize that the 2016 English test was just a small part of my high school experience. It was a challenge that I had to face, but it was also an opportunity for me to learn and grow. And no matter what the results may have been, I am proud of myself for having the courage to take it on.。

陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）作文品析（3）附参考范文【2016高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）假设你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Bob 给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解一下中国高中生对于大学的选择意向，于是你在班里进行了一次调查。

请根据下表的信息，给Bob 回复一封电子邮件，告诉他调查结果，并说明原因。

2.电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Bob,Last week I did a survey among the students in my class on what university they want to choose.Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】书面表达Dear Bob,Last week I did a survey among the students in my class on what university they want to choose. Now I’m writing to tell you the results.Twenty-five percent of my classmates want to choose universities in our province. They say they are more likely to be admitted if they apply to these universities. And they needn’t change their lifestyle too much. Seventy percent of them would like to choose universities in other provinces. Being away from home, they can become more independent and there are more universities for them to choose from. The rest five percent of my classmates plan to choose foreign universities. One reason why they want to go abroad is that they can learn more about different cultures. Besides, itwill be a great help to their foreign language study.Yours, Li Hua假设你校在举办征文活动，题目为“How to Overcome Test Anxiety ”，请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你自己的具体做法，以供同学们借鉴。

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陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）作文品析（5）【2016高考训练题】写作 (满分25分)距离高考剩下不到一年的时间了，紧张的高考备考已经拉开序幕，但是很多同学还不知如何处理学习、健身和休息与高考备考之间的关系。

请根据图中的内容写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对这一问题的建议。

注意：1．词数100字左右，开头语已为你写好，2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance ExamsWe are going to attend the College Entrance Exams in lessthan one year. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ __【参考范文】One Possible Version:How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance ExamsWe are going to attend the College Entrance Exams in less than one year. However, many students still don’t know how to coordinate their study, rest and physical exercise when preparing for the Exams. They usually devote too much time to their study, which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning.As the proverb goes, early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. We’d better leave ourselves enough time to sleep since it enables us to learn our lessons more efficiently. Wh at’s more, a strong and healthy body is the base for our further study and our future work and creative activities.Therefore, as we are preparing for the Exams, don’t forget.假设你是某中学学生李明，请你给在美国的网友Mike写一封信，告诉他你的一次难忘的聚会，主要内容如下：1．简述与朋友或同学的难忘的聚会；2．描述当时聚会的情况；3．谈谈自己的体会和感受。

In2016,the English composition topic for the Shaanxi region might have been designed to test students language proficiency,creativity,and critical thinking skills. Although the exact topic is not specified,lets imagine a potential essay prompt and provide a detailed response.Title:The Impact of Technology on Modern LifeIntroduction:In the21st century,technology has become an integral part of our daily lives.From smartphones to the internet,technology has transformed the way we communicate,work, and learn.This essay will explore the positive and negative impacts of technology on modern life and discuss the balance that must be struck to harness its benefits while mitigating its drawbacks.Body Paragraph1:The Advantages of TechnologyFirstly,technology has made communication easier and more efficient.With social media platforms and instant messaging apps,people can stay connected with friends and family across the globe.This has fostered a sense of global community and has made it easier for individuals to share ideas and collaborate on projects.Secondly,technology has revolutionized the field of education.Online courses and educational apps provide access to a wealth of knowledge and resources that were previously unavailable.This has democratized education and allowed individuals to learn at their own pace and according to their own interests.Body Paragraph2:The Disadvantages of TechnologyOn the flip side,technology has also led to several issues.One of the most pressing concerns is the impact on privacy.With the rise of surveillance technologies and data mining,individuals personal information is more vulnerable than ever before.This has raised ethical questions about the balance between security and privacy.Another disadvantage is the potential for social isolation.While technology connects us in one sense,it can also lead to a decrease in facetoface interactions.This can result in feelings of loneliness and a lack of social skills,particularly among younger generations who have grown up with technology as a constant presence.Body Paragraph3:Balancing the Impact of TechnologyTo maximize the benefits of technology while minimizing its negative effects,a balanced approach is necessary.This involves setting boundaries on technology use,promoting digital literacy,and encouraging a healthy balance between online and offline activities.Schools and parents play a crucial role in teaching children how to use technology responsibly and safely.Conclusion:In conclusion,technology has undeniably changed the landscape of modern life.While it offers numerous advantages,it is essential to be aware of its potential pitfalls.By taking a thoughtful and balanced approach to technology,we can ensure that it serves as a tool for progress rather than a source of division and concern.The future of technology is bright, but it is up to us to shape its trajectory and ensure it aligns with our values and needs.。