山东省2020届新高考英语总复习第四板块写作第二部分读后续写对点集训

第二部分读后续写Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

I had to go grocery_shopping this morning for the first time in a couple of weeks.My husband had been in Greece for a few weeks and my daughters were not at_home either so I had stocked up on vegetables，salad ingredients and fruits along with the meat that I had in the freezer.I am curious.When you are in line waiting to check out，do you check out what others have in their carts？I hate to admit it，but I do.I try not to judge，but again，I suppose I do to some extent－when I see a family in which the parents and the kids are very overweight and they are buying pop(汽水)and high­calorie snack foods.My biggest issue with groceries is that all of the processed foods are easier to get and cheaper than fresh produce and probably stretch further.It amazes me to see families buying 12 packs or 24 packs of different kinds of pop.Most of the people that I am seeing are buying regular pop，not diet.But when I was young，we bought pop on_special_occasions.For birthday parties or a camping trip，we could only have one can per day.We bought Shasta back then.I am not even sure whether it is still sold or not.We could all pick a few different_flavors that we wanted for the trip.But nowadays，pop is everywhere you go. I am glad to say that the_hospital that I work for threw_away all of their pop vending machines(自动贩卖机)．They didn't think health care workers，patients or patients' families needed them.I was happy for the change，but other people might not think so.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2020届山东省新高考模拟英语作文读后续写写作指导一、续写原题阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事短文。

续写的词数为150左右。

Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray(流浪) dog, until he came to me.I was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the little one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest. "Shall we keep him with us?" I questioned my mom.Like any other parents would, my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.Paragraph 1:One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg. ____Paragraph 2:Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly ____二、下水续写总体思路第一段第一句：Spotty有一天回家，断了一条腿。

山东省高考英语模拟试题读后续写下水范文（详解版）一、续写原题阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事短文。

续写的词数为150左右。

Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray(流浪)dog, until he came to me.I was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the little one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest. “Shall we keep him with us?” I questioned my mom.Like any other parents would, my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.Paragraph 1: One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________二、下水续写总体思路第一段第一句：Spotty回家，断了一条腿。

第四部分专题二第2讲技法二(2023·山东省潍坊市高考一模)High-school sports is the biggest thing that happens in our town of Verden, population six hundred.Sports are important in our family.Both of our sons were high-school athletes.So I shouldn't have been surprised when Lauren announced she was going out for the girls' basketball team, but I was worried because she has Down syndrome(唐氏综合症)．My wife and I never told Lauren that she was different, treating her like our other children.“I'm gonna play basketball, Daddy.” Lauren flew into my arms when I came in from work.“That's nice, honey，” I replied automatically and patted her, figuring she meant outside—on the driveway.Walking into the kitchen, I met my wife Laura, whose frown indicated I'd missed ura spoke slow ly, her tone steady.“She meant she's joining the girls' high-school basketball team.”Just as her words sank in, I heard Lauren behind me.“I'm gonna be a Lady Tiger，” she yelled, skipping into the room and throwing her arms in the air.Everything that could happen flashed through my mind.I discussed Lauren's announcement with my wife that evening and finally agreed.After all, there were only 11 girls, not everyone willing to play.The next afternoon, I parked in front of the school gymnasium.Inside, Coach F orsythe greeted us, “We're glad Lauren came out for the team.She is not just a cheerleader！” Lauren stood alone at the other end of the court, shooting free throws.No other girl on the court grinned(咧嘴笑) like Lauren did, and after every shot, Lauren approvingly cried, “Woo hoo！”， seemingly not caring if she made the basket or not.Mid-November, the season's first basketball game arrived.I settled into a seat with the rest of my family.The game got off to a good start, but soon Lady Tigers was uren followed the movement on the court and reacted to every play.Even though Lauren wasn't playing, she looked as if she were having the time of her life.I felt admiration for my daughter.Plus, her team was getting beat, yet she still enjoyed the action.Just less than two minutes left, and Lady Tigers was down by seventeen points.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

第二部分读后续写[浙江卷三年考情分析]命题者说1.考纲要求提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示的关键词进行续写(150词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。

读后续写或概要写作，两种形式在不同考次不定期交换使用。

2.考查特点读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式，旨在考查学生的综合语言运用能力。

与应用文不同，故事续写除了要求学生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外，还注重学生的内容构思和情节衔接的能力。

主要聚焦在以下四个方面：3.选材特点(1)所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；(2)多以记叙文、故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类的文章为主，故事情节曲折、跌宕、起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。

4.续写特点简言之，读后续写就是阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后，根据要求和提示把这篇文章未写完的部分补充完全，使之浑然一体。

它一方面能很好地考查考生对所学语言知识的实际运用能力，另一方面，它也培养学生的发散思维能力。

根据《考试说明》该部分的规定，考生在续写文章时，要注意续写部分“与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度”，“内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况”，“应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性”以及“上下文的连贯性”。

5.命题趋势自2016年10月浙江省启用新题型以来至2018年11月高考，连续四次考查读后续写，这足以看出读后续写的重要性。

但2017年11月的高考读后续写与前两次的不一样，出现了标题，内容也不是有关遇险的。

因此，今后读后续写的文章形式及内容会更加丰富，也会给考生留下更大的发挥空间，只要掌握读后续写的命题规律和写作方法，并具备一定的阅读和写作能力，该题型就会迎刃而解。

(2018·浙江卷6月)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was summer，and my dad wanted to treat us to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque，a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle_Paul，my dad's friend，picked us up from the airport and drove us to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm_house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning， Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast，“The day starts at dawn on my farm，”he said，After breakfast， I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens，while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon， I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride，and he said yes，as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So，my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats，got on our horses，and headed slowly towards the mountain.“Don't be late for supper，”Uncle Paul cried，“and keep to the track so that you don't get_lost！”“OK！”My dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks，the deep green pine trees，and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

第二讲增加细节的5大高分技巧在应用文写作中，增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。

在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容；在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容，否则很有可能造成内容不充实、词数要求不达标或者结构不连贯等问题。

适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。

列举具体的实例进行补充说明(2019·浙江卷6月·应用文写作)我仍旧记得……1．I still remember...→I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and English writing.2．(2018·浙江卷11月·应用文写作)这是一个黑色的皮革钱包。

It is a black leather wallet.→It is a black leather wallet with my ID card,2 credit cards and around 200 dollars in it.3．(2020·宁波综合检测·应用文写作)我想大体上介绍一下中国的传统文化。

I'd like to talk briefly about Chinese traditional culture.→I'd like to talk briefly about Chinese traditional culture，especially Chinese painting.4．(2020·台州市第一次质量预测·应用文写作)现在，我想与你分享春节的一些传统风俗习惯。

Now，I'd like to share with you some traditional customs of the Spring Festival.→Now，I'd like to share with you some traditional customs of the Spring Festival，the most important festival in China.5．我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。