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2012——2016年短文改错C o r r e c t i o n1[2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)]M y u n c l e i s t h e o w n e r o f ar e s t a u r a n t c l o s e t ot h a t I l i v e.T h o u g hn o t v e r y b i g,b u t t h e r e s t a u r a n t i s p o p u l a r i n o u r a r e a.I t i s a l w a y s c r o w d e d w i t h c u s t o me r s a t m e a l t i me s.S o m e p e o p l ee v e nh a dt ow a i t o u t s i d e.M y u n c l et e l l smet h a t t h ek e y t oh i ss u c c e s si sh o n e s t.E v e r y d a y h e ma k e s s u r e t h a t f r e s h v e g e t a b l e s o r h i g h q u a l i t y o i l a r e u s i n gf o r c o o k i n g.M y u n c l e s a y s t h a t h e n e v e r d r e a ms b e c o mi n g r i c h i n t h e s h o r t p e r i o d o f t i m e.I n s t e a d,h e h o p e s t h a t o u r b u s i n e s s w i l l g r o ws t e a d y.C o r r e c t i o n2[2016·甲卷(全国Ⅱ)]T h e s u m me r h o l i d a y i s c o mi n g.M y c l a s s ma t e s a n d I a r e t a l k i n g a b o u t h o wt o d o d u r i n g t h e h o l i d a y.We c a n c h o s e b e t w e e n s t a y i n g a t h o me a n d t a k e a t r i p.I f w e s t a y a t h o m e,i t i s c o mf o r t a b l e b u t t h e r e i s n o n e e d t o s p e n d mo n e y.B u t i n t h a t c a s e,w e w i l l l e a r n l i t t l e a b o u t w o r l d.I f w e g o o n a t r i p a b r o a d,w e c a n b r o a d e n y o u r v i e wa n d g a i n k n o w l e d g e s w e c a n n o t g e t f r o m b o o k s.S o m e c l a s s ma t e s s u g g e s t w e c a n g o t o p l a c e s o f i n t e r e s t n e a r b y.I t h o u g h t t h a t i t i s a g o o d i d e a.I t d o e s n o t c o s t ma n y,y e t w e c a n s t i l l l e a r n a l o t.C o r r e c t i o n3[2016·丙卷(全国Ⅲ)]T h e t e e n a g e y e a r f r o m13t o19w e r e t h e mo s t d i f f i c u l t t i m e f o r m e.T h e y w e r e a l s o t h e b e s t a n dw o r s ey e a r si nmy l i f e.A t t h ef i r s t,I t h o u g h t I k n e w e v e r y t h i n ga n dc o u l dm a k e d e c i s i o n s b y y o u r s e l f.H o w e v e r,my p a r e n t s d i d n't s e e m t ot h i n k s u c h.T h e y a l w a y s t e l l m e w h a t t o d o a n d h o wt o d o i t.A t o n e t i m e,I e v e n f e l t m y p a r e n t s c o u l d n't u n d e r s t a n d m e s o I h o p e dI c o u l db ef r e e l yf r o m t h e m.I s h o w e dt h e m I w a si n d e p e n d e n t b yw e a r s t r a n g e c l o t h e s.N o wI a m l e a v i n gh o me t oc o l l e g e.A t l a s t,I w i l l b e o n m y o w n,b u t I s t i l l w a n t t o h a v e my p a r e n t s t o t u r n t o w h e n e v e r n e e d h e l p.C o r r e c t i o n4[2016·四川]I t i s M o t h e r's D a y t o d a y.T h o u g h i t's a w e s t e r n f e s t i v a l,i t's p o p u l a r i n C h i n a n o w.M o m h a saf u l l-t i mej o b,s os h eh a st od omo s t o f t h eh o u s e w o r k s.S h ei sag r e a t m o t h e r.B o t hD a do r I p l a n n e dt od os o me t h i n go nM o t h e r'sD a y.Weg e t u pe a r l yi nt h e m o r n i n g.D a d c l e a n e d t h e h o u s e,a n d t h e n w e n t o n s h o p p i n g.Wh e n h e c a m e b a c k,I f o u n d a b u n c h o f f l o w e r s i n h e r h a n d.I a s k e d M o m t o s t a y i n t h e s i t t i n g r o o m a n d I c o o k e d i n k i t c h e n. T h e d i s h e s w h a t I c o o k e d w e r e M o m's f a v o r i t e s t.A t d i n n e r,w e s a i d t o h e r,"H a p p y M o t h e r's D a y!"M o m w a s g r a t e f u l a n d mo v i n g.C o r r e c t i o n5[2016·浙江]Wh e n I w a s a v e r y y o u n g c h i l d r e n,m y f a t h e r c r e a t e d a r e g u l a r p r a c t i c e I r e m e mb e r w e l l y e a r s l a t e.E v e r y t i me h e a r r i v e d h o me a t e n d o f t h e d a y,w e'd g r e e t h e r a t t h e d o o r.H e w o u l d a s k w h ow e w a s a n d p r e t e n d n o t t ok n o w i n g u s.T h e n h e a n d m y m o t h e r w o u l d h a v e h a d a d r i n k w h i l e s h e p r e p a r e d d i n n e r a n d t h e y w o u l d t a l k a b o u t h i s d a y a n d h e r s.Wh i l e t h e y c h a t, m y f a t h e r w o u l dl i f t my s i s t e r a n dme u pt os i t i nt h e t o po f t h e f r i d g e.I t w a s b o t he x c i t e d a n d f r i g h t e n i n g t o b e u p t h e r e!M y s i s t e r a n d I t h o u g h t h e w a s s o c o o l f o r p u t t i n g u s t h e r e.C o r r e c t i o n6[2015·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Wh e nI w a s ac h i l d,I h o p e dt ol i v ei nt h ec i t y.I t h i n k I w o u l db eh a p p y t h e r e.N o wI a m l i v i n g i n a c i t y,b u t I mi s s my h o me i n c o u n t r y s i d e.T h e r e t h e a i r i s c l e a n o r t h e mo u n t a i n s a r e g r e e n.U n f o r t u n a t e l y,o nt h ed e v e l o p me n t o fi n d u s t r i a l i z a t i o n,t h ee n v i r o n m e n t h a sb e e n p o l l u t e d.L o t so f s t u d i e sh a v eb e e ns h o w nt h a t g l o b a l w a r m i n gh a sa l r e a d y b e c o m eav e r y s e r i o u s l y p r o b l e m.T h e a i r s w e b r e a t h e i n i s g e t t i n gd i r t i e r a n dd i r t i e r.M u c h r a r e a n i m a l s a r e1d y i n go u t.Wemu s t f o u n dw a y s t op r o te c t y o u r e n v i r o n m e n t.If w ef a i l t od os o,w e'l l l i v et o r eg r e t i t.C o r r e c t i o n7[2015·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]O n e d a y,l i t t l e T o n y w e n t t o a s h o p p i n g c e n t e r w i t h h i s p a r e n t.I t w a s v e r y c r o w d e d.T o n y s a wa t o y o n a s h o p w i n d o w.H e l i k e d i t s o v e r y m u c h t h a t h e q u i c k l y w a l k e d i n t o t h e s h o p.A f t e r l o o k s a t t h e t o y f o r s o me t i me,h e t u r n e d a r o u n d a n d f o u n d w h e r e h i s p a r e n t s w e r e m i s s i n g.T o n y w a s s c a r e d a n db e g u n t oc r y.Aw o m a n s a wh i m c r y i n g a n d t e l l i n g h i m t ow a i t o u t s i d eas h o p.F i v emi n u t e s l a t e r,T o n y s a wp a r e n t s.M o m s a i d,"H o wn i c et os e e y o u a g a i n!D a d a n d I w e r e t e r r i b l e w o r r i e d."T o n y p r o m i s e d h e r t h a t t h i s w o u l d n e v e r h a p p e n a g a i n.C o r r e c t i o n8[2015·陕西]M y s o c c e r c o a c hr e t i r e di nl a s t w e e k.I w a n t e dt od oa n y t h i n gs p e c i a l f o r h i m a t h i s r e t i r e me n t p a r t y.M y mu m m a k e s t h e b e t t e r b i s c u i t s i n t h e w o r l d,s oI d e c i d e t oa s k h e r f o r h e l p.M u m t a u g h t mes o m eb a s i cs t e po f b a k i n g.I i n s i s t e do nd o i n gm o s t o f t h eb a k i n g m y s e l f.I t h o u g h t t h e b i s c u i t s w e r e r e a l l y w e l l.M y o n l y m i s t a k e w a s t h a t I d r o p p e d s o m e o n t h e f l o o r a f t e r I w a s p a c k i n g t h e m u p.A t a p a r t y,my c o a c h,w i t h a b i s c u i t i n h i s mo u t h,a s k e d s u r p r i s i n g l y w h o m a d e t h e m a n d j o k e d,"I m i g h t h a v e t o r e t i r e a g a i n n e x t y e a r j u s t g e t s o me m o r e o f t h e s e b i s c u i t s."M y f a v o r i t ep i c t u r ea t t h ep a r t y i so f my c o a c ha n dm ee n j o y t h eb i s c u i t sw i t hh a p p y l a u g h t e r!C o r r e c t i o n9[2015·四川]H i,J a n i c e,I t's b e e n a mo n t h s i n c e I c a me t o t h i s n e ws c h o o l a n d I r e a l l y w a n t s h a r e w i t h y o u s o m e o f t h e p r o b l e m s I h a v e b e e n e x p e r i e n c i n g.A s I t e l l y o u l a s t t i me,I ma d e t h r e e n e wf r i e n d h e r e.We h a n g o u t t o g e t h e r d u r i n g l u n c h a n da f t e r s c h o o l.We'v eb e e ns p e n d i n gal o t o f t i mes i n gi nk a r a o k eb a r s.I t'sb e e nt h r e e S a t u r d a y sn o w a n di t r e a l l yc o s t smema n y.A n dI s t a r t e dt os e et h i sa sat i m e-w a s t i n g a c t i v i t y!I n f a c t,I d o n't l i k e t og oa n y mo r e,s oI'm a f r a i d I'l l l o s e t h e i r f r i e n d s h i p.H o wd oy o u t h i n k I s h o u l d d o?I f y o u a r e me,w o u l d y o u t a l k t o h i m?P l e a s e h e l p w i t h me a n d g i v e me s o m e a d v i c e.G r a c eC o r r e c t i o n10[2015·浙江]M y o l d c l a s s r o o m w a s i n t e r e s t i n g b e c a u s e t h r e e s i d e o f t h e c l a s s r o o m w e r e m a d e f r o m g l a s s.I e n j o y e d s i t c l o s e t o t h e w i n d o w s a n d l o o k i n g a t t h e v i e w.O n t h e l e f t-h a n d s i d e o f t h e c l a s s,I c o u l de a s y s e e t h e f o o t b a l l f i e l d.I n t h e mo r n i n g s,i t w a s f u l l o f s t u d e n t s e x e r c i s i n g. T h e v i e wf r o m t h e b a c k o f t h e c l a s s r o o m i s a l s os p l e n d i d.C l o s e t ot h e s c h o o l t h e r e w a s a b e a u t i f u l p a r kw i t hm a n y t r e e sa r o u n dt h e m.F a r t h e r i nt h ed i s t a n c e,I c o u l dn o t e n j o y t h e v i e w o f s n o w ym o u n t a i n s.O nt h er i g h t s i d eo f t h ec l a s sw a st h er o a d.I w a sa l w a y s i n t e r e s t e dt os e e t h e d r i v e r s i n h u r r y i n t h e mo r n i n g.T h e p o s i t i o n o f t h e c l a s s r o o m w i t h i t s v i e wm a d e me f e l t l i k e I w a s d r e a m i n g.I f I w a s o n l y a c h i l d w h e n I s t u d i e d i n t h a t c l a s s r o o m, I w i l l n e v e r f o r g e t i t.C o r r e c t i o n11[2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]N e a r l y f i v e y e a r s b e f o r e,a n dw i t ht h e h e l pb y o u r f a t h e r,m y s i s t e r a n dI p l a n t e ds o m e c h e r r y t o ma t o e s(圣女果)i n o u r b a c k g a r d e n.S i n c e t h e n—f o r a l l t h e s e y e a r—w e h a d b e e n2a l l o w i n g t o m a t o e s t o s e l f-s e e d w h e r e t h e yp l e a s e.A s r e s u l t,t h e p l a n t s a r e g r o w i n g s o me w h e r e.T h e f r u i t s a r e s ma l l i n s i z e,b u t j u ic y a nd t a s t e.T he r e a r e s o m u c h t h a t w e of t e n s h a r e t h e m w i t h o u r n e igh b o r s.A l t h o u g h w e a l l o wt o ma t o p l a n t s t o g r o wi n t h e s a m e p l a c e y e a r a f t e r y e a r,b u t w eh a v en e v e r h a da n yd i s e a s eo r i n s e c t a t t a c kp r o b l e m s.Wea r e g r o w i n g w o n d e r f u l l y t o ma t o e s a t n o c o s t!C o r r e c t i o n12[2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]M y d r e a m s c h o o l s t a r t s a t8:30a.m.a n d e n d s a t3:30p.m.T h e y a r e t h r e e l e s s o n s i n t h e m o r n i n ga n dt w oi n t h e a f t e r n o o n.We d i d n't n e e dt od os om a n y h o m e w o r k.T h e r e f o r e,w e h a v emo r et i mew i t ha f t e r-s c h o o l a c t i v i t i e s.F o r e x a mp l e,w ec a nd or e a d i n gf o r o n ea n da h a l f h o u r a n d p l a y s p o r t s f o r o n e h o u r e v e r y d a y.M y d r e a m s c h o o l l o o kl i k eab i gg a r d e n.T h e r ea r ea l l k i n d so f t h ef l o w e r sa n dt r e e s a r o u n dt h ec l a s s r o o m b u i l d i n g s.Wec a nl i eo nt h eg r a s sf o r ar e s t,o r s a t b yt h el a k e l i s t e n i n g m u s i c.T h e t e a c h e r s h e r e a r e k i n d a n d h e l p f u l l y.T h e y a r e n o t o n l y o u r t e a c h e r s b u t a l s o o u r f r i e n d s.C o r r e c t i o n13[2014·浙江]I w a st a k i n gat r a i nt oL o n d o n'sV i c t o r i aS t a t i o n.I h a dn o t i c e dt h a t t h ec a r r i a g ew a s n o i s e a n d f i l l e d w i t h p e o p l e.B e f o r el o n g,at r a i ni n s p e c t o r c o m e st oc h e c ko u r t i c k e t s.A p a s s e n g e r r e a l i z e dh e c o u l d n'tf i n d h i st i c k e tb u tb e c a meq u i t eu p s e t.T h e ne v e r y o n ei nt h ec a r r i a g eb e g a n s e a r c h i n g t h e t i c k e t,w h i c h w a s e v e n t u a l l y f o u n d u n d e r a s e a t s e v e r a l r o w s f r o m h i s o w n e r. T h e p e r s o n w h o f o u n d a t i c k e t s mi l e d w i t h p l e a s u r e a t h i s s u c c e s s.N oo n e i n t h e c a r r i a g e h a d p r e v i o u s s p o k e n t oo r e v e n n o t i c e d t h e t i c k e t-o w n e r b e f o r e. Y e t t h e y h a d s o q u i c k l y o f f e r e d t h e s t r a n g e r s t h e i r h e l p.I f w e c o u l d s h o wc o n c e r n t o o t h e r s o n n e e d,t h e w o r l d w o u l d b e a b e t t e r p l a c e t o l i v e i n.C o r r e c t i o n14[2014·陕西]M y f a t h e r t o o k meo u t c a mp i n gf o r t h ef i r s t t i mew h e nI w a s s e v e n.H ew a n t e dt e a c h m ea b o u t a n i ma l s,i n s e c t sa n dt r e e s.M y u n c l e sa l l c o m ea l o n gw i t hb o w sa n da r r o w sf o r h u n t i n g.O n e e v e n i n ga t s u n s e t,w e s a t b y t h e f i r e,h a v e o u r b a r b e c u e.J u s t t h e na b i r dw a s f l y i n g o v e r u s.M y u n c l e si mm e d i a t ej u mp e du pa n ds h o t t h e i r a r r o w so nt h eb i r d.N e i t h e r o f t h e a r r o w s h i t t h e t a r g e t.S u d d e n l y t h e a r r o w s w a s f l y i n gd o w na t u s f r o m t h e s k y—t h e y w e r e l o o k e d l i k e r a i n!We r a n t o e s c a p e b u t f o r t u n a t e l y n o o n e w a s i n j u r e d.T h a t d a y I d i d n't l e a r nmu c ha b o u t a n i ma l s,i n s e c t so r t r e e s,b u t I l e a r n t ai m p r e s s i v e l e s s o n a b o u t g r a v i t y!C o r r e c t i o n15[2014·四川]H e l l o,b o y sa n dg i r l s!T o d a y,I a m g o i n gt ot a l k w i t hw h a t y o us h o u l dd ow h e naf i r e a l a r m g o o f f.I f y o u h e a r t h e a l a r m,s t a n d i n l i n e a t t h e d o o r a n d w a i t y o u r t e a c h e r t o l e a d y o u o u t s i d e.S t a y c l o s e t o y o u r t e a c h e r a n d c l a s s m a t e.D o n't p a n i c o r g e t o u t o f l i n e,a n d t r y i n g t o r e ma i nq u i e t a n dc a l m l y.S o o nt h ef i r e f i g h t e r sw i l l c o m ea n dp u t o u t af i r e.I f i t'saf a l s e a l a r m a n d t h e r e i s n o f i r e,y o u r t e a c h e r w i l l l e a d u s b a c k t o t h e c l a s s r o o m.I f y o u n o t i c e t h a t w h e n s o m e o n e i s mi s s i n g a n d h u r t,t e l l y o u r t e a c h e r i mme d i a t e l y.C o r r e c t i o n16[2014·辽宁]D e a r J e r e my a n d A l i c e,A l t h o u g h w e'v e b e e n d e l i g h t e d t o h a v e y o u a s n e i g h b o r s,w e'r e h o p i n g t o s e t t l e3s o me t h i n g t h a t b o t h e r s t o u s.I n a w o r d,y o u r d o g—C l e o.We'v e c a l l e d s e v e r a lt i m e a b o u tC l e o's e a r l y mo r n i n g b a r k i n g.I ti s d i f f i c u l tt o u n d e r s t a n d i n gw h y s h eb a r k se v e r y mi n u t es h e'so u t s i d e.T h ee a r l y mo r n i n gb a r k i n gh a v e b e e nd i s t u r b i n gu s a s w e a r e o f t e nu pa l l n i g h t w i t ht h e b a b y.B e s i d e,C l e ot e n d s t ob a r k a a v e r a g eo f s i x h o u r s ad a y.T h i s m o r n i n gs h es t a r t s b a r k i n ge v e nb e f o r e5o'c l o c k.T h a t i s t o o m u c h f o r u s,c o n s i d e r i n g h o wc l o s e l y t h e h o u s e s a r e.We a p p r e c i a t e o u r a p o l o g i e s a n d g o o d w i l l,b u t w e h o p e t h a t y o u c a n f i g u r e a g o o d w a y o f s e t t l i n g t h e m a t t e r.S i n c e r e l y,J a c k a n d R o s e C o r r e c t i o n17[2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]I h a r d l y r e m e m b e r m y g r a n d mo t h e r.S h e u s e d t o h o l d i n g m e o n h e r k n e e s a n d s i n g o l d s o n g s.I w a s o n l y f o u r w h e n s h e p a s s e s a w a y.S h e i s j u s t a d i s t a n t m e m o r y f o r m e n o w.I r e m e mb e r my g r a n d f a t h e r v e r y mu c h.H ew a st a l l,w i t hb r o a ds h o u l d e r a n dab e a r d t h a t t u r n e df r o m b l a c k t o w a r dg r a y o v e r t h e y e a r s.H e h a dad e e pv o i c e,w h i c hs e t h i m s e l f a p a r t f r o m o t h e r s i no u r s ma l l t o w n,h e w a s s t r o n ga n dp o w e r f u l.I na f a c t,h e e v e ns c a r e d m y c l a s s ma t e s a w a y d u r i n gt h e y c a me o v e r t op l a y o r d oh o m e w o r k w i t hme.H o w e v e r,h e w a s t h e g e n t l e s t m a n I h a v e n e v e r k n o w n.C o r r e c t i o n18[2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]T h e b o o k I'm r e a d i n g o f t a l k s a b o u t a f t e r n o o n t e a i n B r i t a i n.I t i s s a i d t o h a v e s t a r t e d i n t h e e a r l y1800's.H a v e t e a i n t h e l a t e a f t e r n o o n p r o v i d e s a b r i d g e b e t w e e n l u n c h a n d d i n n e r, t h a t m i g h t n o t b e s e r v e d u n t i l8o'c l o c k a t n i g h t.T h i s c u s t o m s o o n b e c o me s a n o t h e r m e a l o f d a y.I n t e r e s t i n g,i t h a d a c o n n e c t i o n b y t h e B r i t i s h p o r c e l a i n(瓷器)i n d u s t r y.T e a i n C h i n a w a s t r a d i t i o n a l l y d r a n k f r o m c u p s w i t h o u t h a n d l e s.Wh e nt e ag o t p o p u l a r i nB r i t a i n,t h e r e w a s a c r y i n gn e e df o r g o o dc u pw i t hh a n d l e s t os u i t B r i t i s hh a b i t s.T h i s m a d e f o r t h e g r o wi nt h e p o r c e l a i n i n d u s t r y.C o r r e c t i o n19[2013·陕西]M y g r a n d f a t h e r a n d I e n j o y f i s h i n g.O n e S u n d a y mo r n i n g w e g o f i s h i n g a t a l a k e.We t o o k o u r s f i s h i n g p o l e s a n d h e a d e d f o r t h e l a k e.A s s o o na s w e a r r i v e d,s ow e d r o p p e dt h e l i n e s i n t ot h e w a t e r.B e f o r e w a i t i n gf o r a b o u th a l fa nh o u r,I w a sb e g i n n i n g t o g e ti m p a t i e n t l y.I w a n t e d t o g i v eu p,a n d my g r a n d f a t h e r t o l dme t ow a i t al i t t l e l o n g e r.F i n a l l y,t h e r e w e r e as u d d e np u l l a t t h e p o l e a n d f i s h w a s c a u g h t.Wi t h i n t h e n e x t f e wmi n u t e,my g r a n d f a t h e r a l s o c a u g h t a f i s h.F e l t h u n g r y,w e b u i l t a f i r e b y t h e l a k e a n d b a r b e c u e d t h e f i s h.I t w a s d e l i c i o u s.C o r r e c t i o n20[2013·四川]T o d a yw eh a dac h e mi s t r yt e s t.I f o u n dt h et e s t d i f f i c u l t y,b u t I t r i e dh a r d l yt od oi t. S u d d e n l yM a r y,myb e s t f r i e n d,a s k i n gmet ol e t h e r t oc o p ym ya n s w e r s.A f t e r t h i n kf o r s o me t i m e,I l e t h e r c o p y my a n s w e r s.B u t a f t e r t h e t e s t,a l l o f u s w e r e c a l l e d t o t h e t e a c h e r's o f f i c e.T h e t e a c h e r w a s a n g r y b e c a u s e w e h a d s a me a n s w e r s i n t h e t e s t s.We w e r e w a r n e d n o t t oc h e a t a g a i ns os h e w o u l dn e e dt os e e o u r p a r e n t s.I w a s v e r y u p s e t.I d i d n't c h e a t.I w a s j u s t h e l p i n g a f r i e n d.Wh y d o e s s h e p u n i s h me?C o r r e c t i o n21[2013·辽宁]M r.J o h n s o ni sah a r d w o r k i n gt e a c h e r.E v e r y d a y,h es p e n d st o om u c ht i m ew i t hh i s w o r k.Wi t hl i t t l e s l e e pa n dh a r d l y a n y b r e a k,s oh e w o r k s f r o m m o r n i n gt i l l n i g h t.H a r dw o r k4h a v e m a d e h i m v e r y i l l."H e h a s r u i n e d h i s h e a l t h y.We a r e w o r r i e d a b o u t h i m."T h a t i s w h i c h o t h e r t e a c h e r ss a y.Y e s t e r d a ya f t e r n o o n,I p a i dv i s i t t oM r.J o h n s o n.I w a se a g e r t os e e h i m,b u t o u t s i d e h e r r o o m I s t o p p e d.I h a d t o c a l m my s e l f d o w n.Q u i e t l y I s t e p i n t o t h e r o o m.I s a wh i m l y i n g i n b e d,l o o k i n g a t s o me o f t h e p i c t u r e w e h a d t a k e n t o g e t h e r.I u n d e r s t o o d t h a t h e mi s s e d u s j u s t a s ma n y a s w e mi s s e d h i m.C o r r e c t i o n22[2013·浙江]D e a r D i a r y,H e r e I a m i n t h e mi d d l e o f a c i t y,350mi l e s f a r a w a y f r o m o u r f a r m h o u s e.D o y o u w a n t t ok n o ww h y w e mo v e l a s t w e e k?D a dl o s t h i s j o b,a n da s M o m e x p l a i n e d,"H e w a s l u c k y t o f i n d o t h e r o n e."H i s n e wj o b me a n t I h a d t o s a y g o o d b y e t o m y c l a s s m a t e,my s c h o o l o r j u s t e v e r y t h i n g e l s e I l o v e i n t h e w o r l d.T o ma k e ma t t e r s b a d,n o wI h a v e t o s h a r e a r o o m w i t h m y y o u n g e r s i s t e r,M a g g i e.T o m o r r o w i sf i r s t d a yo f s c h o o l.I a m a w f u l l yt i r i n g,b u t I k n o w I'l l n e v e r f a l l s l e e p.G o o d n i g h t a n d r e me mb e r,y o u,d e a r d i a r y,i s my o n l y s o u v e n i r f r o m m y p a s t l i f e a n d my o n l y f r i e n d.Y o u r s,R o s e m a r y C o r r e c t i o n23[2012·新课标全国]I l e a r n e d e a r l y i n l i f e t h a t I h a d t o b e mo r e p a t i e n t a n d l i t t l e a g g r e s s i v e.F r o m t h e t i m e I w a s a b o u t f o u r u n t i l I w a s a b o u t s i x,I d e s t r o y e d e a c h o f m y t o y.I w a s h a p p y w h e n t h e t o y s w o r k e d,b u t w h e n t h i n g s d i d w r o n g,I g o t a n g r y a n d b r o k e i t.F o r a w h i l e p a r e n t s b o u g h t m e n e wt o y s.B u t b e f o r e l o n g t h e y b e g a n t o s e e w h i c h w a s h a p p e n i n g.Wh e n I t e a r a p a r t m y f i f t h b i r t h d a y t o y t r a i n,my f a t h e r s a i d,"T h a t's i t.N omo r e t o y s t oy o u."M y p u n i s h me n t l a s t e da y e a r.M e a n w h i l e,I f o u n do u t t h a t w i t hmo r ep a t i e n c eI m u s t m a k em yt o y st ol a s t.M y a t t i t u d e c h a n g e d f r o m t h e n o n.C o r r e c t i o n24[2012·陕西]M y f a t h e r a n dI s t a y e da t t h eS o u t hL a k eH o t e l f o r aw e e kw h e nw ev i s i t B e i j i n gl a s t m o n t h.I t i s i nt h e d o w n t o w na r e a,b u t i t i s e a s y t og ot oa n y w h e r e f r o m t h e h o t e l b y p u b l i c t r a n s p o r t.Wel i v e di nac o mf o r t a b l y d o u b l e-r o o m w i t hab i gb a t h.Wh a t I l i k e db e s t w e r et h ef r e e h i g h-s p e e dI n t e r n e t c o n n e c t i o ni nt h er o o m.I c h e c k e dm y e m a i l m e s s a g e s e v e r y d a y.I a l s o s h a r e d f o rm y f r i e n d s ma n y p h o t o s t a k i n g i n B e i j i n g.T h e f o o d w a s w o n d e r f u lw i t h r e a s o n a b l e p r i c e s,a n d w e e n j o y e d s e v e r a l l o c a l d i s h.I t i ss u c hg r e a t h o t e l t h a t I w o u l dr e c o mme n di t t oa n y f r i e n do f m ew h oi sg o i n gt oB e i j i n g.C o r r e c t i o n25[2012·辽宁]D e a r D i a n a,T h a n ky o uf o r t h el o v e l y d a y w eh a v ew i t hy o u.I t w a ss ok i n df o r y o ut ol e t u sb r i n g A n n e's f r i e n d,G i n a.U n f o r t u n a t e,t h e o n l y p r o b l e m w a s t h e j o u r n e y h o m e.T h e r e h a d b e e n a t e r r i b l e a c c i d e n t o n t h e h i g h w a y a n d,f o r a r e s u l t,t h e r e w a s a l o n g l i n e o f t r a f f i c f o r a t l e a s t s i x mi l e.I n t h e e n d,w e d r o v e t o a s e r v i c e s t a t i o n a n d w a i t e d t h e r e u n l e s s t h e r o a d w a s c l e a r.I nt h ec a r p a r kh e r eG i n an e a r l yg o t k n o c k e do v e r a sc a r d r o v eo u t f a r t o oq u i c k l yf r o m b e h i n d a l o r r y.T h e y f i n a l l y d r o p p e d G i n a o f f a t h e r p a r e n t s'a n d m a d e o u r o w n w a y t o h o me.M u c h l o v e,F i o n a52012——2016年短文改错答案C o r r e c t i o n11.t h a t→w h e r e。
2012——2016年短文改错Correction 1[2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)]My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. Correction 2[2016·甲卷(全国Ⅱ)]The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 3[2016·丙卷(全国Ⅲ)]The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 4[2016·四川]It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mom was grateful and moving. Correction 5[2016·浙江]When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well yearslate. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we'd greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction6 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.Correction7 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, "How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried." Tony promised her that this would never happen again.Correction8 [2015·陕西]My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, "I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! Correction9 [2015·四川]Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of theproblems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace Correction10 [2015·浙江]My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.Correction11 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. Since then — for all these year — we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!Correction12 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around theclassroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.Correction13 [2014·浙江]I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.Correction14 [2014·陕西]My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Correction15 [2014·四川]Hello, boys and girls! Today,I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.Correction 16 [2014·辽宁]Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog — Cleo.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose Correction17 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. Correction18 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.Correction19 [2013·陕西]My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a littlelonger. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Correction20 [2013·四川]Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me? Correction 21 [2013·辽宁]Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day,he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.Correction 22 [2013·浙江]Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained,"He was lucky to find other one." His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary Correction 23 [2012·新课标全国]I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, butwhen things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.Correction 24 [2012·陕西]My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. Correction 25 [2012·辽宁]Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona2012——2016年短文改错答案Correction 11.that→where。
2012 年全国高考英语试题分类汇编短文改错1.【2012全国新课标】第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题I分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time Iwas about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. Iwas happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they beganto see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.My attitude changed from then on.1.【答案】little---less【解析】根据文意:我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑衅性。
短文改错参考答案2016~2012年各省市高考题A卷全国卷Passage 1(2016·全国Ⅰ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big,but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead,he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that whereI live.Though not very big ,but the Restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had haveto wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest honesty.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or and high quality oil are using usedfor cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams of /about becoming rich in the ashort period of time.Instead ,he hopes that our his business will grow steady steadily. 1.that→where [考查宾语从句的连词用法。
短文改错2018年Correction 1 2018全国卷I,10分During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.Correction 2 2018全国卷II,10分When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the game for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.Correction 3 2018全国卷III,10分It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.2017年Correction 1 2017全国卷Ⅰ,10分In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, "Speed up!" "Slow down!" "Turning left!" I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.Correction 2 2017全国卷Ⅱ,10分Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!Correction 3 2017全国卷Ⅲ,10分When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered mysecond year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2012—2016年Correction 1[2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)]My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. Correction 2[2016·甲卷(全国Ⅱ)]The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 3[2016·丙卷(全国Ⅲ)]The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 4[2016·四川]It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mom was grateful and moving. Correction 5[2016·浙江]When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we'd greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction6 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.Theairs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.Correction7 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, "How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried." Tony promised her that this would never happen again.Correction8 [2015·陕西]My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, "I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! Correction9 [2015·四川]Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace Correction10 [2015·浙江]My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.Correction11 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. Since then —for all these year —we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!Correction12 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.Correction13 [2014·浙江]I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.Correction14 [2014·陕西]My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Correction15 [2014·四川]Hello, boys and girls! Today,I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.Correction 16 [2014·辽宁]Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog — Cleo.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way ofsettling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose Correction17 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. Correction18 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.Correction19 [2013·陕西]My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Correction20 [2013·四川]Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me? Correction 21 [2013·辽宁]Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day,he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.Correction 22 [2013·浙江]Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained,"He was lucky to find other one." His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary Correction 23 [2012·新课标全国]I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.Correction 24 [2012·陕西]My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. Correction 25 [2012·辽宁]Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona短文改错答案2018年Correction 1①考查冠词。
短文改错参考答案2016~2012年各省市高考题A卷全国卷Passage 1(2016·全国Ⅰ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big,but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead,he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that whereI live.Though not very big ,but the Restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had haveto wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest honesty.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or and high quality oil are using usedfor cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams of /about becoming rich in the ashort period of time.Instead ,he hopes that our his business will grow steady steadily. 1.that→where [考查宾语从句的连词用法。
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【最新整理,下载后即可编辑】高考英语短文改错专项训练(含答案)1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错(10 分)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2.【2016·全国新课标II】短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 3.【2016·全国新课标III】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.4.【2016·四川】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!”Mom was grateful and moving.5.【2016·浙江】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,we’d greet het at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.2015年高考试题分项解析之专题----短文改错1.【2015·陕西】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!2.【2015·四川】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,共15分)Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of theproblems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch andafter school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdaysnow and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace3.【2015·浙江】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.4.【2015·新课标全国II 】One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was verycrowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.5.【2015·新课标全国I 】When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we ’ll live to regret it . 2014年高考试题分项解析之专题----短文改错1. Correction 1(2014课标全国Ⅰ)Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I plantedsome cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!2. Correction 2(2014课标全国Ⅱ)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.3. Correction 3(2014浙江)I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.4. Correction 4(2014辽宁)Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose5. Correction 5(2014四川)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.高考英语短文改错专项训练(答案解析)1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错(10 分)【答案】1. that →where 2. but去掉 3. had →have 4. honest→honesty 5.or→and6. using →used7. becoming前加of8. the →a9. our→his 10. stead→steadily【归纳总结】在英语中though、although、while或者as等引导的让步状语从句不和but连用;连词because不和so连用;此外,return不和back连用。
高考英语短文改错专项训练(含答案)1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错(10 分)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2.【2016·全国新课标II】短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 3.【2016·全国新课标III】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.4.【2016·四川】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!”Mom was grateful and moving.5.【2016·浙江】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,we’d greet het at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.2015年高考试题分项解析之专题----短文改错1.【2015·陕西】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly whomade them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some moreof these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits withhappy laughter!2.【2015·四川】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,共15分)Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share withyou some of theproblems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out togetherduring lunch andafter school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's beenthree Saturdaysnow and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace3.【2015·浙江】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.4.【2015·新课标全国II】One day , little T ony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. T ony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. T ony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, T ony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ”T ony promised her that this would never happen again.5.【2015·新课标全国I】When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .2014年高考试题分项解析之专题----短文改错1. Correction 1(2014课标全国Ⅰ)Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and Iplanted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then—for allthese year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!2. Correction 2(2014课标全国Ⅱ)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.3. Correction 3(2014浙江)I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed theticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.4. Correction 4(2014辽宁)Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside,Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose5. Correction 5(2014四川)Hello, boys and girls! T oday, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.高考英语短文改错专项训练(答案解析)1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错(10 分)【答案】1. that →where 2. but去掉 3. had →have 4. honest→honesty5. or→and6. using →used7. becoming前加of8. the →a9. our→his 10. stead →steadily【归纳总结】在英语中though、although、while或者as等引导的让步状语从句不和but连用;连词because不和so连用;此外,return不和back连用。
2012届高考英语短文改错练习题及答案Dear editor,In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place. 1.______Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere. In 2.______order to build house and grow more crops, people cut down 3.______more and more trees. With time went on, the whole forest was 4.______almost destroyed. Gradually the green hills have changed into 5.______wasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, from 6.______which we suffer a lot. However, I do hope all the people should 7.______realize the terribly result of not caring about our environment. 8.______What's more, they should take good care of the forests and plant 9.______trees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions. 10._____短文改错答案1.去掉was2.去掉in3.house→houses4.With→As或went →going5.√6.struck→strike7.However→So8.terribly→terrible9.they→we 10.instead后加of高考英语短文改错练习题及答案短文改错(1)Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It camesudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I 1. _____went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and 2. _____all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my 3. _____room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air 4. _____and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch 5. _____them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back 6. _____into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried 7. _____very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly 8. _____crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran 9. _____out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the 10. _____top of the back room.短文改错(2)I have been planning to join in our college basketball team 1. ______next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can 2. ______with other people who likes to play. They are teaching 3. ______me the most important rules and technologies of the game, 4. ______and I am getting the better all the time. We have a 5. ______neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area. 6. ______One of my neighbors is helping rest of us 7. ______improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against 8. ______one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can 9. ______beat them if we won't make any mistakes. 10. _____参考答案:(1) 1. sudden-suddenly 2. hotter-hot 3. is-was 4. √ 5. out-out of 6. drop-drops 7. house前加the 8. loudly-loud 9. 去掉when 10. broke-broken(2) 1. 去掉in 2. more →much 3. likes →like 4. technologies →techniques 5. 去掉the 6. play →plays 7. rest前加the 8. improved →improve 9. √ 10. won't →don't短文改错(3)Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher ofBeijing Opera Theatre. Most of his students are from other part of 1. ______ China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen 2. ______or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students 3. ______that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to 4. ______study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when 5. ______ performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he 6. ______never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. 7. ______For his opinion, actors should go on even when they 8. ______feel they have made a mistake in their performances 9. ______because the moment is already gone but people can never 10. ______be back to it.So art is always changing and developing.短文改错(4)Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the 1. _____morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because 2. _____the water supply had cut off. The water had come back in 3._____the evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 o'clock. After a 4. _____short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English Class. 5.______ After a long and tired class for more than two hours, I got 6. _____to home. Some work had been done but some hadn't. I must 7. _____review all my subject such as the Sciences, the Humanities, 8. _____which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as 9. _____well. That's terribly! Especially when there was no water. 10. _____参考答案:(3) 1. part- parts 2. a-the 3. hope∧to 4. 去掉it 5. thought-thinks 6. deep-deeply 7. hearing-heard 8. For-In 9. √ 10. but-and(4) 1. On→In 2. have→had 3. 在cut前加上been 4. after→until 5. the→a 6. tired→tiring 7. 去掉to 8. subject→subjects 9. 正确10. terribly→terrible短文改错(5)I was recent told that listening to loud music is gradually 1. ______making people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already been 2. ______ happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deaf 3. ______ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a 4. ______party she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone 5. ______can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has 6. ______ discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on 7. ______rats. He declares they break down, almost paralyze(瘫) with 8. ______egs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them 9. ______out by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen to 10. _____my neighbor someday.短文改错(6)Dear Ralph,I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three 1. ______years. But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly 2. ______to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter 3. ______he said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait 4. ______to see until we have any chance after graduation." So 5. ______after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about 6. ______go out . But he said he didn't want to. He just 7. ______wanted to sleep and watched TV. 8. ______What do you think I should do? Do you think 9. ______I should continue to love him and give up Sheila? 10. ______参考答案:(5) 1.recently 2. 去掉been 3. 正确4. gave---gives 5. isn't---doesn't 6. in---to 7. 去掉a 8. with后加their 9. trembled---trembling 10. tail---tails(6) 1. be--been 2. firstly--first 3. feeling—feelings 4. study前加to 5. until-- if / whether 6. 去掉to 7. go--going 8. watched--watch 9. 对10. and—or短文改错(7)Before leaving the class, the teacher, Miss White,said to her class, "Don't leave yourseats. Read your books on yourselves. You 1. _____would study hard and be good students. " As soon 2._____as the teacher went away, the classroom becoming 3._____noisy. One boy drew a picture of the teacher 4._____on the blackboard. Another boy began to make face 5._____just to make the other students to laugh. The boy 6._____put his finger close to his mouth and tell the 7._____class that Miss White is coming back. All the 8._____students sat down their seats and the classroom 9._____became quiet again. The door open and in came Miss White. 10.____Once there lived a boy was very fond of 1.______reading. But he was so poor to buy any 2.______books. So he had to borrow them from a rich man 3.______lived far away. The boy always tried 4.______hard to finish read the books and returned 5.______them to the owner within the giving time. So 6.______the rich man was ready lending him any of the 7.______books he wanted them. In this way he read a lot 8.______and late became a well-known writer of his time. 9.______However, the rich man's son who didn't like to studyremained a man with a little knowledge. 10._____参考答案:(7) 1. on-by 2. would-should 3. becoming-became 4. √ 5. face-faces 6. 去掉第二个to 7. tell-told 8. is-was 9.down-down on 10. open-opened(8) 1. boy后加who 2. so-too 3. √ 4. lived-who lived 5. read-reading 6. giving-given 7. lending-to lend 8.去掉them 9. late-later 10. 去掉第二个a短文改错(9)Our four-years-old son came into the house 1.______proudly to showed me a caterpillar(毛毛虫)that was 2.______crawling up his arm. Trying hard to hiding my 3.______nauseating feeling(掩饰我的恶心), I said, "Mark, 4.______why don't you take them back outside Its mother 5.______will be looking for it, but it will miss its mother. " 6.______I was feeling rather pleasing at the way I had 7.______handled the situation. And a few minutes 8.______later Mark returned back to the house with two caterpillars 9.______and said excitedly , "Look, I founded the mother!" 10._____Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor 1._____sisters---in any other words, I am an only child. My parents 2._____love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure 3._____that I get a good education. They did not want me to do 4._____any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to 5._____my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. We 6._____may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do 7._____not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks 8._____as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they 9._____really understand their own daughter What things are inother homes, I wonder. 10._____参考答案:(9) 1.years-year 2. showed-show 3. hiding-hide 4. √ 5.them-it 6. but-and 7. pleasing-pleased 8.And-But 9.去掉"back" 10. founded-found(10) 1. √ 2. any 3. can后加to 4. did-do 5. family-home 6. subject-subjects 7. a –the 8. 去掉about 9. and-or 10. homes-families短文改错(11)March 22nd, Tuesday, cloudyI watch TV until nearly 12 o' clock, so I could not 1.______go over my lessons. This morning I got up very late 2.______that I had to hurry school without breakfast yet I 3.______was late of the first class. When I entered the 4.______classroom, the maths teacher had to stop explaining 5.______an important problem, and all the eyes fixed upon 6.______me. My face turned to red. Something even worse 7.______happened to me in the English class. The teacher askedme to recite the text, but I could speak nothing but 8.______sorry, as I did not spend any time preparing my lessons. 9.______The teacher looked at me with his coldly eyes, I stood 10.______at my bench without daring to raise my head. Whata terrible day I had! I will never do anything like this.短文改错(12)A king liked to write stories. One day,the king showed some his stories 1.______with a famous writer. The writer said that 2.______these stories were bad. The king get angry 3.______with him and sent him to the prison. After 4.______some time the king felt pity for the writer 5.______and set him freely. When the writer was 6.______out prison, again the king showed him 7.______some stories and asked how he thought them. 8.______The writer turned into the soldiers and said, 9.______"Take me back prison. " 10.______参考答案:(11) 1. watch--watched 2.very---so 3.hurry后加to 4.of--for 5. √ 6.eyes后加were 7.to 去掉8.speak—say 9.as--for 10.coldly--cold.(12) 1.some→some of 2. with →to 3. get →got 4. the 5. √ 6. freely →free 7. out →out of 8. thought→thought of 9. into→to 10. back→back to短文改错(13)At beginning of term I introduced 1.______my teacher for my parents. Our teacher 2.______Mr. Wang asked my parents of my 3.______summer holiday. To my parents' opinion 4.______I have a good time with my classmates. 5.______I told my teacher that I had finished 6.______homeworks at home. Then I helped 7.______my father in the farm. We went on 8.______work by the lights of the tractors. 9.______Father had only two and three young men 10.______working for him at harvest time.短文改错(14)Time flies as an arrow. I'm already in the second half 1.______of senior grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more 2.______than three months before I graduate middle school. At 3.______the present, I'm busy reviewing my lessons in order to 4.______take the college entrance examination. I hope to go to 5.______Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not 6.______only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best to turn 7.______my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also 8.______studying very hard to realize our wishes. I do believe everyone 9.______will be able to enter a very good university and college. 10.______参考答案:(13) 1. At→At the 2. for→to 3. of→about 4. To→In 5. have→had 6. √ 7. homeworks→homework 8. in→on 9. work→working 10.and→or(14) 1.As—like 2.realized-realize 3.graduate∧from 4.去掉the 5. examination---examinations 6.that—which 7. √ 8. to—into 9. our—their 10. and—or短文改错(15)One afternoon on April, 1912, a new ship set off from 1.______England to America on it first trip. It was one of the 2.______largest and first ship at that time. It was cold, 3.______but the ship was pleasant and people are 4.______enjoying themselves. The next day was even cold. People 5.______could see icebergs here or there. It was night, suddenly, 6.______the man on watch shouting "Look out! Iceberg!" 7.______It was too late, a ship hit the iceberg and came to a 8.______stop, there that was a very big hole in the ship and water 9.______began to come. Slowly the ship started to go down. 10._____短文改错(16)I've a friend who has a big police dog is named Jack. 1.______Every Sunday afternoon my friend takes Jack a long walk in 2.______the park. Jack likes these walks in the park very well. 3.______One Sunday a young man dropped in my friend. He stayed 4.______a long time. He talked and talked. Soon it was the time for my 5._____friend to take Jack for his walk, but the visitor still sat talking. 6.______Jack became worried his walk in the park. He walked 7.______around the room several times but then he sat right in 8.______front of the visitor and looked him. But the visitor paid 9.______none attention. He continued talking. Finally Jack could 10._____stand it no longer. He hold the visitor's hat in his mouth.参考答案:(15) 1. on→in 2. it→its 3. ship→ships 4. are→were 5.cold→colder 6. or→and 7. shouting→shouted 8. a→the 9.去掉that 10. come→come in(16) 1. 去掉is 2.Jack→Jack for 3. well→much 4. in→in on 5. He→They 6. right 7. worried→worried about 8.but→and 9. looked→looked at 10.none→no短文改错(17)June 12, Sunday FineToday is Sunday, I didn't get up early as usually. In the 1.______morning after I finished my homework, I do some washing. 2.______Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited him 3.______to see a film. And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema 4.______at 3:00 p.m. we found all the tickets had sold out. 5.______Then we went back to school and played the football. 6. ______After this, when we were about to go home ,we saw our 7. ______English teacher, Mr. Wang, coming into the school gate.He told us we have made great progress in English. this term 8.______He also suggested that we should read more and wrote more. 9.______We promised him that we would listen his advice. 10._____短文改错(18)In autumn of 1935, when I was a young man, I was 1._____traveling in the north of Indian. One evening, 2._____after hunting in the forest all day, I was returning 3._____to the place which I had put up my tent. It was getting 4._____dark, but I was walking along a road. Suddenly I saw 5._____two eye glaring at me from among the trees. 6._____What can I do? Should I jump into the river 7._____to save my life? Then I looked at the right. 8._____In the river there had a big crocodile waiting to 9._____welcome me with its mouth was wide open. 10.____参考答案:(17) 1. usually---usual 2. do→did 3. classmate ---classmates 4. And ---But 5.had ∧been 6. the 去掉7. correct 8. have---had 9. wrote---write 10. listen---take/follow(18) 1. In-In the 2. Indian-India 3. right 4. in ∧which 或which改为where 5.but-and 6.eye –eyes 7. can –could 8. at –to 9. had-was 10.去掉was短文改错(19)Cats are animals of habit. They like to go to sleep 1._____about same time every day and for a certain length of time. They 2._____seem to have natural clock inside them that tells them 3._____when sleeping. Besides their regular sleep, cats take naps(打盹). 4._____Some scientists think that people should also take cat nap. The 5._____habit would do good for people's health. 6._____Cat naps helped build up energy in the body. 7._____Since cats have moods(情绪) like these of people, 8._____scientists believe that people can improve their moods with 9._____cat-napping. People might become more happier and more active. 10.____短文改错(20)A man shot two students died and wounded 1.______five other at an Australian university on Monday, 2. ______after he was overpowered by classmates of the victims 3. ______(受害者). The two dead were both male of 4. ______Asian appearance in his early 20s. The others 5. ______have being treated for minor(未成年的)injuries. 6. ______The man, in his mid-30s and of Asian appearance, 7. ______was seized several students in 8. ______classroom at Monash University, Melbourne 9. ______and was late arrested. 10. ______参考答案:(19) 1. right 2. same-the same 3.have-have a 4. sleeping-to sleep 5. nap-naps 6. for –to 7. helped-help 8. these-those 9. with-by 10. 去掉more(20) 1. died-dead 2. other--others 3. after--before 4. male--males 5. his--their 6.have—are 7. √ 8. seized后加by 9. ∧a 10. later短文改错(21)When I first learned to write in English , I ran into 1.______much difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought 2.______in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 3.______My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her 4.______advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. 5.______Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself as I was 6.______learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote 7.______a story and showed to my teacher. He liked it very much 8.______and reads it to the class. All said that the story was 9.______a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me . 10.______短文改错(22)Dear Xiaohua,It is four days since Mother accepted the operation. 1. ______She is feeling much more better. The doctors told me 2. ______the operation was successful, but because her old age 3. ______she had to stay in hospital for other two weeks. The 4. ______doctors also say it was quite necessary for her to 5. ______do so. We expect to get a full report in two and three 6. ______days. Please tell the good news to the rest of family 7. ______as soon as possible. You needn't to come here. I'm 8. ______able to look after Mother by myself. You'd better 9. ______send flowers to Mother. She will feel happily. 10. ______Yours, Xiaohui参考答案:(21) 1.√ 2.many—much 3.anything--everything 4.my—a 5.去掉should 6.talk--talking 7.me--myself 8.to前加it 9.reads--read 10.word—words(22) 1. accepted ---received 2. 去掉more 3. of 4.other---another 5. said 6. or 7. family前加the 8. 去掉to 9. √ 10. happy短文改错(23)Tom had retired and lived lonely a long 1.______way from town. He hardly never left his home. But 2._______one day he went to town buy some things in the 3._______market, and after he had bought it , he went 4._______into a restaurant and sit down at a table by himself. 5._______When he looked around, he saw several old peoples 6._______put on glasses before reading their newspapers. So 7._______after the lunch he decided to go to a store to buy 8_______himself a pair of glasses, either, He walked 9._______along a wide street and fast found a store. 10.______短文改错(24)My parents were all standing there, shouting at each other. 1.______The word "divorce(离婚)" was repeated and broke my heart each time.I had trapped between them and didn't know what to do. 2.______A million thoughts rushed into my mind, but nothing of them could 3.______ ease my feelings. I rushed back to my room, seated down in 4.______silence and stared out of the window. The leaves were floating in air. 5.______ They struggled trying to catch the wind and finally they had to fall 6.______on the ground.I knew I was not the only one had gone through this. But 7.______ I must learn to fight against this. Later in the day I took up with a pen 8.______ and wrote down "It is until I take a step back and look at my family 9.______ that I can really appreciate this thing has helped me grow strong and 10._____ mature(成熟)."参考答案:(23) 1. Lonely→alone 2. never→ever 3.buy前加to 4. it→them 5. sit→sat 6.peoples →people 7. √ 8.去掉the 9. either→too 10. fast→quickly(24) 1.all→both 2.had→was 3.nothing→none 4.seated→sat或后加myself 5.air前加the 6.and→but 7.had前加who 8.去掉with 9.until前加not 10.√2010年四川卷高考英语短文改错题及解析An English lady was finally decided that she really should 66_______learn to drive, And after many attempts, she past her 67_______driving test and told her husband that,to release,he 68_______was going to drive him over to France for a holiday,But 69_______then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that 70_______they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your 71_______mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well,it is all because 72_______of the business of driving on right.” She said, “I have 73______been practicing for three weeks now,but I still couldn’t 74______get used to it-in fact, I’ve nearly killed three peoples。
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Correction 1[2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant
is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to
wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. Correction 2[2016·甲卷(全国Ⅱ)]
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable
but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a
trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
Correction 3[2016·丙卷(全国Ⅲ)]
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At
one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
Correction 4[2016·四川]
It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mom was grateful and moving.
Correction 5[2016·浙江]
When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years。