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Pre-writing
短文结构分析
旅行日记应该包括以下要点:
1. What was the date? 2. Where did you go? 3. How was the trip? 4. How did you go there? 5. What did you see?/What did you do? 6. Did you like it?/Did you have a good time?/Did you enjoy yourself?
cool
Warming up
Retell Helen’s school trip, the expressions in the box may help you.
Helen’s school trip
really interesting, so fast, learned a lot, so cool taught, took a lot of great photos, gift not expensive, exciting
While-writing
素材准备
Sentences and patterns
Today I went on a school trip. We visited... We got there so fast by... I saw... It was so cool! There were too many people. I liked…/I boughune 23rd What was the date? Where did you go? How was the trip? Yesterday my school visited the zoo. It was really interesting. We went there by bus. At the zoo, I saw a lot of animals and I took some photos. My classmates and I also went to the gift shop and bought some gifts. It was a great day. How did you go there? What did you see/do? June 23rd Did you like it?/Did you have a good time?/Did you enjoy yourself? My school went to the zoo yesterday. The trip was boring. At the zoo, I saw many animals but I didn’t like them. I also went to the gift shop with my classmates, but I didn’t buy anything because they were so expensive. It was a boring day.