专业四级英语 写作 专四写作 TEM4 Revision of Writing

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TEM4 Revision of WritingGeneral Strategies: Students should be familiar with the features of different types of writing: description, exposition and argumentation.Description is painting a picture in words of a person, a place, an object or a scene.A description is developed through details. The writer should choose details that can help bring out the dominant characteristics or outstanding quality of a person or a thing to be described. The irrelevant details should be left out.Model Writingsa.DescriptionMy Aunt Emily / My Favorite RelativeOf all my relatives, I like my aunt Emily the best. She is my mother’s youngest sister. She has never married, and she lives alone in a small village near Bath. Now she is inher late fifties, but she is still quite young in spirit. She has a fair complexion, thick brown hair and dark brown eyes. She has a kind face, and when you meet her, the first thing you notice is her lovely, warm smile. Her face is a little wrinkled now, but I think she is still rather attractive. She is the sort of person you can always go to if you have a problem.She likes reading and gardening, and she goes for long walks over the hills with her dog. Obviously, she is a very active person. Either she is making something, or mending something, or doing something to help others. She is extremely generous, but not very tolerant with people who do not agree with her. I hope that I am as happy and contented as she is when I am her age. Questions:1. What is the title of this passage?(My Aunt Emily / My Favorite Relative) 2. What does the speaker’s aunt look like?(This question asks for a physical description/appearances.)Which of the following choices are mentioned? The color of her skin/white skin, her hair, her eyes, her height?3. What is the speaker’s aunt like? (This question asks about a person’s character or appearance or both.) kind, nice, warm-hearted, obliging, generous, sometimes not tolerant, happy and contented.b.ExpositionExposition means expounding or explaining. The purpose of exposition is to inform or explore so that people can understand something such as the process of a certain thing, the advantages and disadvantages of a certain thing, the causes of a natural or social phenomenon, the planning of a project, a solution to a problem.Methods used in exposition: definition, illustration, process, classification anddivision, comparison and contrast, an analysis of the causes and effects. The most important thing is to make a point clear. How to write a good exposition?1.Prepare enough material so that abstractdiscussion can be illustrated by examples.2.Present facts and views in proper order–in the order of time (chronological order), space (spatial order) or a logical sequence.3.Try to make exposition intelligible andreadable. If it is possible, the exposition should be interesting and moving.Model WritingThe division of labor is made according to sexes in this small village. Men are expected to support their families by doing all the work in the fields, by caring for the cattle, by cutting wood and by carrying on all the large transactions in buying and selling. When a male villager is at home, hisactivities consist of providing the household with wood and water, making or repairing furniture or work tools, making repairs on the house and picking fruit. Local government is also in the hands of the men. Women’s work centers on the care of the family and the house. They cook, clean, wash, iron clothes, do the daily marketing, and care for the children. Many women raise chickens, turkeys and pigs, and some of them grow fruit, vegetables and flowers to supplement the family income. Women do a great deal of buying and selling on a small scale, and they control the family purse. In this village, women are not expected to work in the fields, and both sexes look down upon the women of the neighboring villages who do agricultural work, carry heavy loads of corn or wear men’s hats.Questions:1. What is the central topic of this passage?2. What should the men do in this village?(Take some simple notes.)3. What should the women do in this village? (Take some simple notes.)4. What do the villagers show contempt for?c.ArgumentationThe purpose of argumentation is to convince. Argumentation tries to make the reader agree with its point of view and support it. Argumentation often makes use of the other types of writing. Exposition is very closely related to argumentation: argumentation is actually exposition with an additional purpose of persuading and convincing. (We are going to make a further study into argumentation in the coming weeks)Word Limit: about 200 wordsIncrease the language input: more facts,more examples, more figures, moreinformation, more ideas and variousstructures。