人教版高中英语选择性必修第三册UNIT 4 Part IV Writing 写作专练含答案
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Part IV Writing
妙笔生花——读后续写
读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。
One weekend in July，Jane and her husband，Tom，had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the
forest. Unfortunately，on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they
reached the lake，Jane was so angry that she said to Tom，“I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp，” and
walked away.
With no path to follow，Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place，she
turned around，hoping to see the lake. To her surprise，she saw nothing but the forest and，far beyond，a
snow-capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!”she cried. “Help!”No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane
kept moving，but the farther she walked，the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall，Jane was
so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark，Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her
family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day，hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling （滴落） somewhere at a
distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy，she also saw some berry bushes. She drank
and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now，Jane began to walk
along the stream and hoped it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream，Jane heard a helicopter. “Is that for me?” Unfortunately，
the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later，another helicopter flew
overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse，thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them down if they
came back again.
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. ____________________________________
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It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _________________________________________
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步骤一：品读语篇——抓住要点很关键
前文概要
审语篇类型：记叙文
审时态：一般过去时
审前文大意以及要点
第一段：露营的路上夫妻吵架，简出走；
第二段：简迷路；
第三段：简自救，思念汤姆；
第四段：简寻找出路；
第五段：简听到直升机的声音。
步骤二：戴着镣铐跳舞——研读首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情节
①续写第一段所给首句：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
上文提到简迷路，在野外待了一夜，第二天听到了直升机的声音，她试图吸引直升机的注意。根据第一段的首句提示可知，再没有直升机飞过来，而且夜幕再次降临。本段续写时，要注意描写简继续自救的过程。例如如何度过寒冷的夜晚、简当时的心理感受等。
②续写第二段所给首句：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
本段应该描写简继续自救和最终获救的过程。续写时要注意前面提到的直升机以及她是如何引起直升机上人员的注意的。
步骤三：斟酌打磨——丰富续写词汇，生动描述情节
话题激活词汇
环境：forest，stream，rock，berry，valley，steep，cave，lake，waterfall
困难：hunger，starve，thirsty，injure，broken，blood，panic，shelter，survive（survival），suffer，cold，severe
活动：walk，climb，fall，crawl，taste，attempt，struggle to one’s feet，make one’s way to，pick up
情绪：tired，break down
救援：rescue team，doctor，search for
意志品质：calm，courage，will
评价：amazing，make it
句式翻译
1. 晚上的温度比白天更低了，简穿上了她的黄色上衣。
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2. 她感到身心疲惫。（both...and连接两个状语 ）
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3. 她继续向前走，因为她真的很想尽快见到汤姆。（because引导原因状语从句 ）
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4. 简沿着小溪走了大约两个小时，觉得很累，所以她找到了一个平坦的地面来度过漫长而艰难的夜晚。（so连接并列分句）
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5. 她正沿着溪边走。（主谓状）
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6. 她听到直升机从头顶上飞过。（主谓宾宾补）
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7. 直升机发现了她，把她带到了她丈夫那里。（and连接并列成分）
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8. 他给了她曾经收到过的最温暖的拥抱。（定语从句）
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步骤四：创造性表达——润色注重细节，句式再造升级
1. 将句1升级为so连接的并列句
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