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高考短文改错必刷题高考短文改错必刷题Last Saturday, we organize a trip to the countryside. The countryside has taken on a new look everywhere. All around us, the hills are covering with green trees and colorful flower. Rivers are clean with bridges over them, that makes a beautiful picture. Farmers are living in nice houses which are equipped fine furniture. Nowadays the farmers there.is caring more about our life quality. With their life greatly improve, they have more time for a leisure. That may be why people look more energetic and young for their age.A man was driving on the road. Suddenly his cars stopped. He got out of the car, try to find out the trouble. “It’s the motor,” said the voice behind him. He was surprising and turned around. But he saw only an old horse. “Did you say anything?” he asked. “I said you should check yours motor,” the horse r eplied. The man rushed to the nearest house. With a very excited voice, he told the farmer had happened. The farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitement. He explained, “He didn’t know anything about cars. He can only repeat that what I often say. ”13.Henry sleeping in his room when suddenly he woke up and sensed that something unusual on last night. He looked out of the window and find a store nearby on the street was on the fire. He immediately shouted at the top of his voice “Fire! Fire! Help!” He phoned 119 at once and then went out to put out the fire. So it was so bigger a fire that he couldn't put it out by himself. Lucky enough, a lot of neighbor came out and soon firefighters arrived. The fire was finally put out and when the firefighters praised Henry for her quick action, he smiled, felt very pleased.i±There are many people who think that wealth is good than health. I used to thinking so until one day I read a story about Howard Hughes. He was American billionaire who got everything he wants.Therefore, in the last twenty years of his life, his health became worse and she was miserable. He had the best doctors and nurse. But he could still find no relief. I realized that health is worth all the money in the world. If you have millions of dollars but your health is poor, you will not be able to do that you want to do. So 1 would like to say, “Don’t hurt at yourself and try to make money. Instead, take good care of yourself and be happy at what you do. Healthy is more important. ”15-May I have you attention please? I have a little things to tell you. When you have a class here inCDthe language lab, please be here a little early. Change your shoes before enter the lab. Don’t bring anything here except your textbook. When you are in, please don’t touch these machines without permit. Always do as the teacher tell you to. In class you should only speak the English, not Chinese. Recorders can be used to make a copy of the listening materials. When class over,make sure that your machines are turning off.16_I feel it is pity that you didn’t want to take part in the speech contest. In rhy view, the speech contest can benefit from you in different ways. Firstly, it makes you look for more informations about your favorite scientists on the Internet or in the library, learns more about them. Secondly, it is a challenge to prepare for a speech contest. You not only have to write a good article and also have to perform them properly. What’s more, after the contest, you can find yourself with some newly good friends, or even a prize. I suggest you consider participating in the contest, that will really do good to you. If you change your mind, please let me know as sooner as possible.€JLAfter a final examination,I got a letter from my best friend and his parents lived on a farm. They invited me stay with them for several weeks. I was so exciting that I couldn’t sleep all night. When I got to their home, I was warm received. I lived on a big and nice room. I enjoyed the life here very much. Every morning we got up early and walk on the farm where we could enjoy the fresh air or beautiful scenery. We gathered some flowers here and there, and I found it full of funs. In the afternoon we did our homework. I did have a good time.iA.Failure is part of our life. Somebody has ever achieved great success without lots of failures. One experience left lasting impression on me. I’ve been fond of playing the piano since my childhood. Last year there was a piano competition for teenager in my city and I take part in it. I couldn’t wait to show off. The day finally came. However, when I was on the stage I was very nervous that I made several mistakes while playing. My performance was a completely failure!It was only after the competition when I realized my failure resulted in from my lack of practice. From then on,I devoted more time to play the piano because I firmly believe that practice make perfect.I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could never pass botany.This was why all botany students had to spend several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant cells, but I could never see anything through a microscope. This was used to make my professor angry. “I c an’t see everything,M I said. Then he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still couldn’t make it. At last we tried that with every adjustment of theCD高考短文改错必刷题microscope known to man. With my pleasure,I saw something and drew it quickly on paper. “What’s that?” my professor asked. “That’s what I saw,” I answered. “No, you don’t,,,he shouted, and he bent over and looked into microscope. “You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!”All Senior 2 students of Taizhou High School is going to visit Zhejiang University in two days. According to Mr Li, headmaster of this school, an activity had been held once a year since 2006.Apart from the students, some of their teachers will also join in, but they will set off at about 7 o’clock and returning at about 4 pm. In the morning, we will visit the new campus of Zhejiang University. In the afternoon,they will have a directly and sincere conversation with some freshmen of the university who graduated Taizhou High School.It is believed that this activity will help the students having a good knowledge of campus life in advance,and make them to work hard to achieve their dreams in the near future.Mr Zhang is sixty years old and has retired. He taught ours biology when we were in Grade One. He taught very good. He tried his best to make his classes lively. He usually made good preparations for the lessons and was strict in us. Each time when we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct it. I was poor at biology. He often helps me with my study patiently. Under his help I made great progresses. He was very kind to his students. As experienced teacher, he was respected or loved by all the students.'HiI’d like to tell you how I learn English. I often read English aloud and try learn something important by heart, that helps me remember it easily and form the good habit of thinking in English.I listen a lot and talk with others in the English. In this way,I had improved both my listening and my spoken English great. I keep a diary in English every day but my written English are becoming better and better. I also try my best to master the necessary grammar knowledges. By this means,I can express me in English correctly. That’s the way I have been learning English. I hope what I said is in use to you.C13.Recently, our school has held the meaningful discussion on whether it is reasonable for middle school students to have classes on weekends. Some of our classmates believe we should have classes on weekends because we can make fully use of free time to review the lessons we had learned. Some others are against the opinion,saying we had better to have a good rest on weekends so that we can work effective during the weekdays. The rest agree with neither of the opinion. They have the view keeping the balance between work and play are important for us. They suggest one day of the weekendCDS押r§€,星火英语•is used to learn our lessons and during the other day we do something interested or have a rest.(UiMany young boys and girls had the habit of smoking, though they are middle school student. As we all know that, smoking does harm to human.beings. More and more people have realized what serious this problem is. But they are never boring with it. Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion,but others think smoking can refresh himself. In fact, smoking causes much illnesses. The most serious illness causing by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile,smoking is waste of money. What’s worse,careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.C15Last weekend, I helped my grandparents preparing their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning,together with my grandparents, I searched Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, I went to the train station. Although there were a long queue, I manage to buy two tickets for my grandparents. Before dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents needed them,such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning,I went to the station but saw them off. Waved goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them a pleasant journey.CL6We had a discussion about whether it is a only way out for senior students to go to college. Views vary from person to person. The majority of students considers it very necessary to go to college. They think it can widen our knowledge and improve their qualities. Only in this way can they find good jobs after graduation. Very few students think it is no use go to university, because the tuition is too high for their family to afford it. What’s more,it’s rather hard for college graduates seek satisf actory jobs. Thirty percent of the students,therefore, believe “All roads lead to Rome.” It doesn’t make any different whether they go to college and not.In my opinion, we can receive a better education at college so that we can serve our motherland.The student union hold a competition last week. The theme of it was to make the better of waste materials, aimed to cultivate the good habit of protecting the environment. From Feb. 3rd to Mar. 15th, more than 900 students participated active and presented through the Internet over 1,000 pieces of work. About 200 participants got first, second and third prizes respectively. Li Ming, his work—“Protecting the forests, including you and me” was made of old newspapers and magazines, he got the first place. From this activity, the students have shown their enthusiasm but raised their awareness of environmental protection as well.CD高考短文改错必刷题More and more middle school students are having tutors at the weekend. There are two different viewpoint about it.Some think it necessary. First of all,it’s too effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Besides, it can strengthen that is learned in class. Others think it unnecessary. For the one thing, students can easy form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time relax from time to time. What’s more,the purpose of some family teachers are to make money. *On my opinion,whether a tutor is needed just depends. If you are really weak at or interesting in a certain subject,maybe it’s OK for you to have one. And be sure to choose a good and suitable teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.€19广My brother Jack disliked learn maths and didn’t do well. When the day of the exam came, Jack s at next to Brian, whom was always good at maths. Jack careful copied Brian’s answers. At the end of ihc exam,the teacher collected the papers and graded it. Then she decided to give a prize to the studem who got the high grade. But making a decision was a bit of difficult, because Jack and Brian got same grade. The teacher thought about that and made up her minds to give the prize to Brian. Jack said it was unfair. “That’s true,,’ the teacher said. “Therefore,Brian’s answer to Question 18 was ‘I don’t know’. Yours was ‘So do 1’.”m..Dear Ms Li,I’m very happy that you are my English teacher. As the world is becoming global village,English is getting more and more important, so mastering English mean we can see the world through a new window.My English is not bad,and I have two main problems in my study. First I feel it difficult to learn words with heart. Besides I often feel nervously when speaking English. I real hope that you can give me some good advices on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is that what you should giveus more chances to practice speak. I believe I can make many progress in English with your help.• • ...Thank you!Yours.LiHuaC2LWe participated in a voluntary activity organizing by our school last Sunday. We gathered at the square i passing leaflets to passer-by from which they can learn what an earthquake is and how to protect ourselves in the earthquake. The leaflets drew the attention of the public to the damage that an earthquake can cause and that told them to take action in a right and efficiency way. Some made aCDS/9Wt€,霣火英语,/\_ public speech, told people about the best place where they can hide when earthquake occurs.We have learned many from the voluntary activity, what offers us an opportunity to contribute to society. We told the public about the situation because we thought everyone should be concerned of each other and take responsibility for promoting a public cause.€22Whatever one does,one should do it with confidence. Equipping with confidence, we can deal with any challenges and difficulties until we succeed.When I entered Senior 3,I found myself faced to difficulty learning English, and even failed in my English exam. As the consequence I began to feel being frustrated, losing confidence in myself. It was at this moment when my parents encouraged me, and my teachers gave me some valuable advice on my studies, told me to be confident. With their help, I regained my confidence and began to make steady progresses.As the saying go,“Where there is a will,there is a way. ” If we are to make a difference, we should build up our confidence, that is of vital importance if we want to overcome any obstacles and final achieve our goals.Usually most divers don’t go very deep. Mainly th ey dive to a deep of about 20 meters. Then they swam around as they slowly return to the surface. Everyone who wants dive must first have diving lessons. There are the number of dangers that you have to learn about. For one thing,you might have problems with its air bottle.A diver must know however the equipment works and be able to recognize possible problem. There are also dangerous types of fish you must look out for. You must be familiar to the environment that you’ll be diving in. Before you go on a dive, make sure you know that what you are getting into. Diving may look easily, but if you don’t have the necessary training, it can be both difficult and dangerous.C?4Dear Ma Yun,CEO of Ali Baba,My name is Li Hua. I’m Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to ask you a favor. Would you please to come to our school or give us a speech? The speech is scheduling to be given on May 30th in the school playground, the theme of it will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts. We are eagerly to hear you talk about your own experience and unique views.I sincerely hope you can take time out of your busy schedule, and I would appreciate that very much if you could come. Thank you on advance and wish you all the best!I am looking forward to receive your reply at your earliest convenience.Sincerely,Li Hua CD高考短文改错必刷题Three years ago I failed a important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt, we found the teachers here patient and considerate. Beside, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere on class. I decided to make the best of it. I work hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were not helpful. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, which great increased my confidence and got me motivated.My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it which determines who you are.€26 'More and more senior three students are getting stressing in their studies. In order find out effective ways to release the stress, a survey is made last week in five schools. Altogether 500 students were interviewed, but some interesting results were as follows. About thirty-five percent of the students let out their stress by do sports. They play football, in instance. Meanwhile, another forty-five percent of them release our stress by listening to different kind of music. The rest twenty percent usual get help from their parents and teachers. When I am stressed, I usually do plenty of weightlifting to get me tired. Then I’ll have a good sleep. And then I feel being relaxed.cazI was at a party a few weeks before, which was more excited than I had expected. We were all having a good time then suddenly a fire broke in the kitchen. Someone shouted “Don’t panic!’’,and all the people started to run. There was smoke everywhere and we were all trying to find the way to out. Fortunately, my friend found a fire extinguisher(灭火器)and put a fire out. He was about to coming out of the house when the firefighters arrived. The fire chief praised my friend and tell us that we all had a luckily escape.mSome people may think that one who wan ts to achieve great success shouldn’t pay much too attention to details. And sometimes it is the details that determines our success, for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we’re doing.Since we have realized the important of details,what should we do? First, we should form a habit of being careful, because a careful person will rarely overlook details. What’s more, we should learn to keep the balance between quantity and quality. We may find that when face with lots of work, the faster we do it, the much mistakes we will make. Because when we work at high speed,the only thing we care about is quantity, in that case we are more likely to neglect the details.As far as I,m concerned, we should keep in mind that quality comes first, without which quantity is in no significance. 'CDSpar§€•垦火英语•^29Nowadays we can find more and more people sit for too long,which has many side effect on health. According to health experts,too many screen time has kept many people sitting for too long. Beside, heavy work or study stress can also contribute to the present situation.There is no doubt whether it has- led to serious health problems, such as backache, overweight, heart disease and even death. Well go the saying, “Preven tion is better than cure.M Do remember to try our best to build up our leg power to cut the diseases of potential risk. Firstly, walking and cycling to school or work will be a good choice. Secondly, please take stairs instead elevators. Thirdly,it is recommended that we walk around for the while during the breaks. Last but not least, why not to take- regular exercise and have fun every day?Come on and take action now!030In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise,our school organize an activity to climb the mountain last week. Hundred of us took part in it.It was a nice day. At 8:00 am,we gathered at the foot of the mountain and set out for the top in high spirit. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing,enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, other would come and offer help. About two hours late,we all reached the top. Bathe in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.The activity benefited to us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature or give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What wonderful time!I’m an Australian boy aging 17 and I’m crazy about music. It is one of the most important thing in my life.I listen music whenever I can. I have a minidisk player, with it I can have access to music whether walking in the street or ride on the bike. At home, there is a CD player in my room, but the music is on all the time.I like rock music better of all. My favorite band is Rolling Stones, which has produced 40 albums since 1966. It so happened that there had a live concert of Rolling Stones last Sunday. I decided to go.It was a great fun. I am also fond of classical music. I especial enjoy playing Beethoven when I’m doing my homework.132■..General we prefer to do things the way we consider to be the best. Therefore, it is important to listen to those whom love us and want to give advice when we have serious problems in our lives. Parents have gained more experiences and they know how to act in di fferent situations. That’s why we should ask them for help first when they have problems. However, there are moments when we avoid to them and don’t want to follow them. With time passing on, my brother as well as I have realizedCD高考短文改错必刷题that our parents are right. Please turn to your parents when in trouble, for they are worth trust and ready to offer help ail time.13J LWhat would we do without refrigerators? We take it for granted now,but what is it like before the refrigerator was invented? Have you ever left milk out of the fridge for a day on summer? In just that time it would go badly, so you can imagine what hard life was before. For a long time, people had been using ice to make food lasting longer.The first refrigerators were sold in late 1880s and they soon became very popular. Nowadays, almost everyone have a fridge in their homes and modern refrigerators are much more safer. Some of the refrigerator are so modern that they can tell you what needs buying in advance!My neighbour Li Hai is going to graduate college soon and he hasn’t found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills, so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English, he shook his head,said it was too hard to remember new words. He enjoyed watching TV, playing cards, smoking and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give up all these habit. Not long ago,he went to look for a job. When he knew talents were great needed, he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. He told me how he wished he has worked hard in college and asked me not to copy her example.As is known to all that we students of today have to fix our attentions on our lessons, so we know little of society. A holiday was the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Take a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What we have learned in books or in class can’t have the same important effect us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice,we can surely make a progress in both knowledge and practical ability. Beside, when we take a part-time job, we may got paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say senior school students should take part-time jobs in their holidays, if possibly.C36Grandma Moses was crazy about painting soon before she picked it up and worked hard at it. She painted careful and her works were nice. She first painted only to please oneself,and then began to sell her works for a few money. In 1993,a collector, Louis Caldor happen to see several of GrandmaMoses’ works hung in a shop. He liked them,bought them at once, and set out look for more. Caldor- held the show to introduce the works of Grandma Moses to other artist. Grandma Moses,who was•,' 1 }'• V.•t , ^C,(li (ll/world-famous, was died on December 13, 1961, at the age of 101.Q1Thanks for send me the snow globe of the monster. In the fact I think it s really my favour. I veCDy\_ been collecting snow globes for seven years but now I have 226 of them. My mum says I can’t collectthem any long, because we have run out of rooms to store them. The/re all around our apartment,and I even store them in boxes under my bed. The first one I ever got was a birthday cake snow globeon my seventh birthday. I particular love globes with cute animals. I have a big one with bears in itand other one with penguins. If you know anyone else who collect them, please tell me. I’d like starta snow globe collection club. In the way, what’s your hobby?€38The British love sending text message. And most people now understood the language of text,with its numbers and missing letters. In fact, when the student wrote the whole article “in txt’’,histeacher gave him “C+ 4 6f4t”(“C+ for effort”). Although texting is a cheap way of stay in touchwith your friends, but it can also bring problems. In 2005,a British teenager became the first personreceive treatment for an addiction to text messaging. In one year, the nineteen-year-old teenagerspent about £ 4,500 on texts. For some people, text messaging have changed their lives. James textsfaster in the world and recently he has set a new world record. He texted a message what took him 67 seconds. But he doesn’t get big bills because he works as a large mobile phone compan y!C39_In some western countries, some people don’t like the number 13 because of they think 13 is very unlucky. For example, they don’t like to live in the thirteenth floor. One evening,Mr Smith askedsome friends get together. When all of his friend arrived, he asked them to sit at the table for dinner. Suddenly, he cried out, “Oh,there is thirteen people here!” Everyone’s face looks pale except MrBrown. He said with the smile, “Don’t worry, my friends. My wife Mrs Brown will have a baby in afew weeks, but we have fourteen people here.” All of the friends became happily again.“Congratulations!” he said to Mr Brown.The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important festival in China, which is celebrated on the 15th day of the eighth month of the Chinese lunar calendar.The festival dates back in the Southern Song Dynasty. In the Southern Song Dynasty, people send round mooncakes to their relatives as gifts to express their best wishes. This day was also being considered as a harvest festival since fruits, vegetables and grain had been harvested by this time and food was abundantly.The Mid-Autumn Festival is a family celebration when family members gather together eat mooncakes and enjoy the round moon. They can look back on the past but look forward to the future •-together. On that night,the moon appears to be at their roundest and brightest. A full moon is the symbol of family reunion. That is because that day is also known as the Festival of Reunion.fTol答案详解详析-I答案详解详析tC.L1 •第一句:organize改为organized。
短文改错28篇附解析答案43页2017年Correction 1 2017全国卷Ⅰ,10分In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, "Speed up!" "Slow down!" "Turning left!" I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.Correction 2 2017全国卷Ⅱ,10分Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their studentspick the fresh vegetables!Correction 3 2017全国卷Ⅲ,10分When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2012—2016年Correction 1[2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)]My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.Correction 2[2016·甲卷(全国Ⅱ)]The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 3[2016·丙卷(全国Ⅲ)]The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 4[2016·四川]。
2018高考英语短文改错真题与答案解析汇编高考英语短文改错并不难,认真读题、大量练习是关键。
为了帮助各位考生更好的备战高考英语,文章中包括全国高考英语真题的短文改错,高三模拟试题中的短文改错及名校日常考试中的高三英语考试中的短文改错。
下面是2018全国1,2,3卷短文改错真题,希望对您有所帮助!短文改错——2018全国1卷短文改错原题:第四部分写作(共两节满分35)第一节短文改错(10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.短文改错答案:1. that →where2. but去掉3. had →have4. honest→ honesty5. or→ and6. using →used7. becoming前加of8. the →a9. our→ his 10. stead→steadily短文改错解析:1.that →where 考查宾语从句的引导词。
全国卷1During my last winter holiday,I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there。
The first time I went there,they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again,they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken。
They also had a small pond which they raised fish。
My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved。
At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years,but he agreed.2018年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(全国II卷)When I was little,Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room。
As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons,but no matter how many times I asked to watching them,my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain。
2018年高考全国卷(I,II,III) 英语短文改错原卷及详解2018年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标I卷)第四部分写作第一节短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
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71. During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went hereagain, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond, which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.【答案】During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and animals. Last winter when I went again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of . They also had a small pond they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by the fish. I felt that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return every two years, he agreed.【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。
高考短文改错必刷题高考短文改错必刷题Last Saturday, we organize a trip to the countryside. The countryside has taken on a new look everywhere. All around us, the hills are covering with green trees and colorful flower. Rivers are clean with bridges over them, that makes a beautiful picture. Farmers are living in nice houses which are equipped fine furniture. Nowadays the farmers there.is caring more about our life quality. With their life greatly improve, they have more time for a leisure. That may be why people look more energetic and young for their age.A man was driving on the road. Suddenly his cars stopped. He got out of the car, try to find out the trouble. “It’s the motor,” said the voice behind him. He was surprising and turned around. But he saw only an old horse. “Did you say anything?” he asked. “I said you should check yours motor,” the horse replied. The man rushed to the nearest house. With a very excited voice, he told the farmer had happened. The farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitement. He explained, “He didn’t know anything about cars. He can only repeat that what I often say. ”13.Henry sleeping in his room when suddenly he woke up and sensed that something unusual on last night. He looked out of the window and find a store nearby on the street was on the fire. He immediately shouted at the top of his voice “Fire! Fire! Help!” He phoned 119 at once and then went out to put out the fire. So it was so bigger a fire that he couldn't put it out by himself. Lucky enough, a lot of neighbor came out and soon firefighters arrived. The fire was finally put out and when the firefighters praised Henry for her quick action, he smiled, felt very pleased.i±There are many people who think that wealth is good than health. I used to thinking so until one day I read a story about Howard Hughes. He was American billionaire who got everything he wants.Therefore, in the last twenty years of his life, his health became worse and she was miserable. He had the best doctors and nurse. But he could still find no relief. I realized that health is worth all the money in the world. If you have millions of dollars but your health is poor, you will not be able to do that you want to do. So 1 would like to say, “Don’t hurt at yourself and try to make money. Instead, take good care of yourself and be happy at what you do. Healthy is more important. ”15-May I have you attention please? I have a little things to tell you. When you have a class here inCDthe language lab, please be here a little early. Change your shoes before enter the lab. Don’t bring anything here except your textbook. When you are in, please don’t touch these machines without permit. Always do as the teacher tell you to. In class you should only speak the English, not Chinese. Recorders can be used to make a copy of the listening materials. When class over,make sure that your machines are turning off.16_I feel it is pity that you didn’t want to take part in the speech contest. In rhy view, the speech contest can benefit from you in different ways. Firstly, it makes you look for more informations about your favorite scientists on the Internet or in the library, learns more about them. Secondly, it is a challenge to prepare for a speech contest. You not only have to write a good article and also have to perform them properly. What’s more, after the contest, you can find yourself with some newly good friends, or even a prize. I suggest you consider participating in the contest, that will really do good to you. If you change your mind, please let me know as sooner as possible.€JLAfter a final examination,I got a letter from my best friend and his parents lived on a farm. They invited me stay with them for several weeks. I was so exciting that I couldn’t sleep all night. When I got to their home, I was warm received. I lived on a big and nice room. I enjoyed the life here very much. Every morning we got up early and walk on the farm where we could enjoy the fresh air or beautiful scenery. We gathered some flowers here and there, and I found it full of funs. In the afternoon we did our homework. I did have a good time.iA.Failure is part of our life. Somebody has ever achieved great success without lots of failures. One experience left lasting impression on me. I’ve been fond of playing the piano since my childhood. Last year there was a piano competition for teenager in my city and I take part in it. I couldn’t wait to show off. The day finally came. However, when I was on the stage I was very nervous that I made several mistakes while playing. My performance was a completely failure!It was only after the competition when I realized my failure resulted in from my lack of practice. From then on,I devoted more time to play the piano because I firmly believe that practice make perfect.I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could never pass botany.This was why all botany students had to spend several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant cells, but I could never see anything through a microscope. This was used to make my professor angry. “I can’t see everything,M I said. Then he began patient en ough to explain how to see through it, but I still couldn’t make it. At last we tried that with every adjustment of theCD高考短文改错必刷题microscope known to man. With my pleasure,I saw something and drew it quickly on paper. “What’s that?” my professor asked. “That’s what I saw,” I answered. “No, you don’t,,,he shouted, and he bent over and looked into microscope. “You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!”All Senior 2 students of Taizhou High School is going to visit Zhejiang University in two days. According to Mr Li, headmaster of this school, an activity had been held once a year since 2006.Apart from the students, some of their teachers will also join i n, but they will set off at about 7 o’clock and returning at about 4 pm. In the morning, we will visit the new campus of Zhejiang University. In the afternoon,they will have a directly and sincere conversation with some freshmen of the university who graduated Taizhou High School.It is believed that this activity will help the students having a good knowledge of campus life in advance,and make them to work hard to achieve their dreams in the near future.Mr Zhang is sixty years old and has retired. He taught ours biology when we were in Grade One. He taught very good. He tried his best to make his classes lively. He usually made good preparations for the lessons and was strict in us. Each time when we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct it. I was poor at biology. He often helps me with my study patiently. Under his help I made great progresses. He was very kind to his students. As experienced teacher, he was respected or loved by all the students.'HiI’d like to tell you how I learn English. I often read English aloud and try learn something important by heart, that helps me remember it easily and form the good habit of thinking in English.I listen a lot and talk with others in the English. In this way,I had improved both my listening and my spoken English great. I keep a diary in English every day but my written English are becoming better and better. I also try my best to master the necessary grammar knowledges. By this means,I can express me in English correctly. That’s the way I have been learning English. I hope what I said is in use to you.C13.Recently, our school has held the meaningful discussion on whether it is reasonable for middle school students to have classes on weekends. Some of our classmates believe we should have classes on weekends because we can make fully use of free time to review the lessons we had learned. Some others are against the opinion,saying we had better to have a good rest on weekends so that we can work effective during the weekdays. The rest agree with neither of the opinion. They have the view keeping the balance between work and play are important for us. They suggest one day of the weekendCDS押r§€,星火英语•is used to learn our lessons and during the other day we do something interested or have a rest.(UiMany young boys and girls had the habit of smoking, though they are middle school student. As we all know that, smoking does harm to human.beings. More and more people have realized what serious this problem is. But they are never boring with it. Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion,but others think smoking can refresh himself. In fact, smoking causes much illnesses. The most serious illness causing by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile,smoking is waste of money. What’s worse,careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.C15Last weekend, I helped my grandparents preparing their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning,together with my grandparents, I searched Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, I went to the train station. Although there were a long queue, I manage to buy two tickets for my grandparents. Before dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents needed them,such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning,I went to the station but saw them off. Waved goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them a pleasant journey.CL6We had a discussion about whether it is a only way out for senior students to go to college. Views vary from person to person. The majority of students considers it very necessary to go to college. They think it can widen our knowledge and improve their qualities. Only in this way can they find good jobs after graduation. Very few students think it is no use go to university, because the tuition is too high for their family to afford it. What’s more,it’s rather hard for college graduates seek satisfactory j obs. Thirty percent of the students,therefore, believe “All roads lead to Rome.” It doesn’t make any different whether they go to college and not.In my opinion, we can receive a better education at college so that we can serve our motherland.The student union hold a competition last week. The theme of it was to make the better of waste materials, aimed to cultivate the good habit of protecting the environment. From Feb. 3rd to Mar. 15th, more than 900 students participated active and presented through the Internet over 1,000 pieces of work. About 200 participants got first, second and third prizes respectively. Li Ming, his work—“Protecting the forests, including you and me” was made of old newspapers and magazines, he got the first place. From this activity, the students have shown their enthusiasm but raised their awareness of environmental protection as well.CD高考短文改错必刷题More and more middle school students are having tutors at the weekend. There are two different viewpoint about it.Some think it necessary. First of all,it’s too effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Besides, it can strengthen that is learned in class. Others think it unnecessary. For the one thing, students can easy form t he habit of dependence. For another, students need time relax from time to time. What’s more,the purpose of some family teachers are to make money. *On my opinion,whether a tutor is needed just depends. If you are really weak at or interesting in a certain subject,maybe it’s OK for you to have one. And be sure to choose a good and suitable teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.€19广My brother Jack disliked learn maths and didn’t do well. When the day of the exam came, Jack sat ne xt to Brian, whom was always good at maths. Jack careful copied Brian’s answers. At the end of ihc exam,the teacher collected the papers and graded it. Then she decided to give a prize to the studem who got the high grade. But making a decision was a bit of difficult, because Jack and Brian got same grade. The teacher thought about that and made up her minds to give the prize to Brian. Jack said it was unfair. “That’s true,,’ the teacher said. “Therefore,Brian’s answer to Question 18 was ‘I don’t know’. Yours was ‘So do 1’.”m..Dear Ms Li,I’m very happy that you are my English teacher. As the world is becoming global village,English is getting more and more important, so mastering English mean we can see the world through a new window.My English is not bad,and I have two main problems in my study. First I feel it difficult to learn words with heart. Besides I often feel nervously when speaking English. I real hope that you can give me some good advices on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is that what you should giveus more chances to practice speak. I believe I can make many progress in English with your help.• • ...Thank you!Yours.LiHuaC2LWe participated in a voluntary activity organizing by our school last Sunday. We gathered at the square i passing leaflets to passer-by from which they can learn what an earthquake is and how to protect ourselves in the earthquake. The leaflets drew the attention of the public to the damage that an earthquake can cause and that told them to take action in a right and efficiency way. Some made aCDS/9Wt€,霣火英语,/\_ public speech, told people about the best place where they can hide when earthquake occurs.We have learned many from the voluntary activity, what offers us an opportunity to contribute to society. We told the public about the situation because we thought everyone should be concerned of each other and take responsibility for promoting a public cause.€22Whatever one does,one should do it with confidence. Equipping with confidence, we can deal with any challenges and difficulties until we succeed.When I entered Senior 3,I found myself faced to difficulty learning English, and even failed in my English exam. As the consequence I began to feel being frustrated, losing confidence in myself. It was at this moment when my parents encouraged me, and my teachers gave me some valuable advice on my studies, told me to be confident. With their help, I regained my confidence and began to make steady progresses.As the saying go,“Where there is a will,there is a way. ” If we are to make a difference, we should build up our confidence, that is of vital importance if we want to overcome any obstacles and final achieve our goals.Usually most divers don’t go very deep. Mainly th ey dive to a deep of about 20 meters. Then they swam around as they slowly return to the surface. Everyone who wants dive must first have diving lessons. There are the number of dangers that you have to learn about. For one thing,you might have problems with its air bottle.A diver must know however the equipment works and be able to recognize possible problem. There are also dangerous types of fish you must look out for. You must be familiar to the environment that you’ll be diving in. Before you go on a dive, make sure you know that what you are getting into. Diving may look easily, but if you don’t have the necessary training, it can be both difficult and dangerous.C?4Dear Ma Yun,CEO of Ali Baba,My name is Li Hua. I’m Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to ask you a favor. Would you please to come to our school or give us a speech? The speech is scheduling to be given on May 30th in the school playground, the theme of it will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts. We are eagerly to hear you talk about your own experience and unique views.I sincerely hope you can take time out of your busy schedule, and I would appreciate that very much if you could come. Thank you on advance and wish you all the best!I am looking forward to receive your reply at your earliest convenience.Sincerely,Li Hua CD高考短文改错必刷题Three years ago I failed a important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt, we found the teachers here patient and considerate. Beside, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere on class. I decided to make the best of it. I work hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were not helpful. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, which great increased my confidence and got me motivated.My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it which determines who you are.€26 'More and more senior three students are getting stressing in their studies. In order find out effective ways to release the stress, a survey is made last week in five schools. Altogether 500 students were interviewed, but some interesting results were as follows. About thirty-five percent of the students let out their stress by do sports. They play football, in instance. Meanwhile, another forty-five percent of them release our stress by listening to different kind of music. The rest twenty percent usual get help from their parents and teachers. When I am stressed, I usually do plenty of weightlifting to get me tired. Then I’ll have a good sleep. And then I feel being relaxed.cazI was at a party a few weeks before, which was more excited than I had expected. We were all having a good time then suddenly a fire broke in the kitchen. Someone shouted “Don’t panic!’’,and all the people started to run. There was smoke everywhere and we were all trying to find the way to out. Fortunately, my friend found a fire extinguisher(灭火器)and put a fire out. He was about to coming out of the house when the firefighters arrived. The fire chief praised my friend and tell us that we all had a luckily escape.mSome people may think that one who wan ts to achieve great success shouldn’t pay much too attention to details. And sometimes it is the details that determines our success, for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we’re doing.Since we have realized the important of details,what should we do? First, we should form a habit of being careful, because a careful person will rarely overlook details. What’s more, we should learn to keep the balance between quantity and quality. We may find that when face with lots of work, the faster we do it, the much mistakes we will make. Because when we work at high speed,the only thing we care about is quantity, in that case we are more likely to neglect the details.As far as I,m concerned, we should keep in mind that quality comes first, without which quantity is in no significance. 'CDSpar§€•垦火英语•^29Nowadays we can find more and more people sit for too long,which has many side effect on health. According to health experts,too many screen time has kept many people sitting for too long. Beside, heavy work or study stress can also contribute to the present situation.There is no doubt whether it has- led to serious health problems, such as backache, overweight, heart disease and even death. Well go the saying, “Preven tion is better than cure.M Do remember to try our best to build up our leg power to cut the diseases of potential risk. Firstly, walking and cycling to school or work will be a good choice. Secondly, please take stairs instead elevators. Thirdly,it is recommended that we walk around for the while during the breaks. Last but not least, why not to take- regular exercise and have fun every day?Come on and take action now!030In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise,our school organize an activity to climb the mountain last week. Hundred of us took part in it.It was a nice day. At 8:00 am,we gathered at the foot of the mountain and set out for the top in high spirit. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing,enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, other would come and offer help. About two hours late,we all reached the top. Bathe in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.The activity benefited to us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature or give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What wonderful time!I’m an Australian boy aging 17 and I’m crazy about music. It is one of the most important thing in my life.I listen music whenever I can. I have a minidisk player, with it I can have access to music whether walking in the street or ride on the bike. At home, there is a CD player in my room, but the music is on all the time.I like rock music better of all. My favorite band is Rolling Stones, which has produced 40 albums since 1966. It so happened that there had a live concert of Rolling Stones last Sunday. I decided to go.It was a great fun. I am also fond of classical music. I especial enjoy playing Beethoven when I’m doing my homework.132■..General we prefer to do things the way we consider to be the best. Therefore, it is important to listen to those whom love us and want to give advice when we have serious problems in our lives. Parents have gained more experiences and they know how to act in di fferent situations. That’s why we should ask them for help first when they have problems. However, there are moments when we avoid to them and don’t want to follow them. With time passing on, my brother as well as I have realizedCD高考短文改错必刷题that our parents are right. Please turn to your parents when in trouble, for they are worth trust and ready to offer help ail time.13J LWhat would we do without refrigerators? We take it for granted now,but what is it like before the refrigerator was invented? Have you ever left milk out of the fridge for a day on summer? In just that time it would go badly, so you can imagine what hard life was before. For a long time, people had been using ice to make food lasting longer.The first refrigerators were sold in late 1880s and they soon became very popular. Nowadays, almost everyone have a fridge in their homes and modern refrigerators are much more safer. Some of the refrigerator are so modern that they can tell you what needs buying in advance!My neighbour Li Hai is going to graduate college soon and he hasn’t found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills, so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English, he shook his head,said it was too hard to remember new words. He enjoyed watching TV, playing cards, smoking and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give up all these habit. Not long ago,he went to look for a job. When he knew talents were great needed, he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. He told me how he wished he has worked hard in college and asked me not to copy her example.As is known to all that we students of today have to fix our attentions on our lessons, so we know little of society. A holiday was the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Take a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What we have learned in books or in class can’t have the same important effect us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice,we can surely make a progress in both knowledge and practical ability. Beside, when we take a part-time job, we may got paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say senior school students should take part-time jobs in their holidays, if possibly.C36Grandma Moses was crazy about painting soon before she picked it up and worked hard at it. She painted careful and her works were nice. She first painted only to please oneself,and then began to sell her works for a few money. In 1993,a collector, Louis Caldor happen to see several of GrandmaMoses’ works hung in a shop. He liked them,bought them at once, and set out look for more. Caldor- held the show to introduce the works of Grandma Moses to other artist. Grandma Moses,who was•,' }'• V.•t , ^C,(li (ll/world-famous, was died on December 13, 1961, at the age of 101.Q1Thanks for send me the snow globe of the monster. In the fact I think it s really my favour. I veCDy\_ been collecting snow globes for seven years but now I have 226 of them. My mum says I can’t collectthem any long, because we have run out of rooms to store them. The/re all around our apartment,and I even store them in boxes under my bed. The first one I ever got was a birthday cake snow globeon my seventh birthday. I particular love globes with cute animals. I have a big one with bears in itand other one with penguins. If you know anyone else who collect them, please tell me. I’d like starta snow globe co llection club. In the way, what’s your hobby?€38The British love sending text message. And most people now understood the language of text,with its numbers and missing letters. In fact, when the student wrote the whole article “in txt’’,histeacher gave him “C+ 4 6f4t”(“C+ for effort”). Although texting is a cheap way of stay in touchwith your friends, but it can also bring problems. In 2005,a British teenager became the first personreceive treatment for an addiction to text messaging. In one year, the nineteen-year-old teenagerspent about £ 4,500 on texts. For some people, text messaging have changed their lives. James textsfaster in the world and recently he has set a new world record. He texted a message what took him 67 seconds. But he doesn’t get big bills because he works as a large mobile phone company!C39_In some western countries, some people don’t like the number 13 because of they think 13 is very unlucky. For example, they don’t like to live in the thirteenth floor. One evening,Mr Smith askedsome friends get together. When all of his friend arrived, he asked them to sit at the table for dinner. Suddenly, he cried out, “Oh,there is thirteen people here!” Everyone’s face looks pale except MrBrown. He said with the smile, “Don’t worry, my friends. My wife Mrs Brown will have a baby in afew weeks, but we have fourteen people here.” All of the friends became happily again.“Congratulations!” he said to Mr Brown.The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important festival in China, which is celebrated on the 15th day of the eighth month of the Chinese lunar calendar.The festival dates back in the Southern Song Dynasty. In the Southern Song Dynasty, people send round mooncakes to their relatives as gifts to express their best wishes. This day was also being considered as a harvest festival since fruits, vegetables and grain had been harvested by this time and food was abundantly.The Mid-Autumn Festival is a family celebration when family members gather together eat mooncakes and enjoy the round moon. They can look back on the past but look forward to the future •-together. On that night,the moon appears to be at their roundest and brightest. A full moon is the symbol of family reunion. That is because that day is also known as the Festival of Reunion.fTol答案详解详析-I答案详解详析tC.L1 •第一句:organize改为organized。