2017-2018浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析

2017-2018浙江省各重点中学优秀模拟试卷题目汇编--读后续写1.【2017学年浙江省高三“五校联考”第二次考试】Ali and his younger sister, Zahra, lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood. Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find ajob, and they had only a little money with which to buy food. As they had not paidthe rent for several months, the landlord was breathing down their necks.One day, Ali took Zahra’s shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed, but he lostalized he had lost thethem on the way home. It wasn’t until he got home that he reshoes. He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he beggedhis sister to keep it secret. Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Aliear them first. After shoes. Zahra’s school hours were in the morning, so she would wschool, she would rush back and give them to Ali. He could then run to his school,which began in the afternoon. Although he ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrivedlate and was warned by the school.Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the city. When he learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part.He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.The day of race arrived. Ali had a strong start, but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache. Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra and his promise to her. Dreaming of the new shoes he wouldwin for his sister gave him strength, and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners, determined to finish third. Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided (碰撞) with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2019.9 浙江高考：One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

浙江省新高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评作者：李小瓯来源：《速读·中旬》2018年第03期摘要：随着我国新课程改革的不断深化，为更好落实素质教育理念，各省份在高考题型上也有了相应的调整。

其中浙江省的高考英语从2016年10月以来启用了新的考试题型，变化较大，最引人注目的是将传统的写作题型分为两个部分，即应用文和读后续写或概要写作。

本文关注的是读后续写题，并将结合2017年6月的浙江省高考真题进行分析和范例点评。

关键词：高考；英语；读后续写；试题分析；范例点评英语读后续写题是向考生提供一篇350词左右的短文，考生根据短文的内容和给出的两个段首句续写后续部分，使之构成一个完整的故事。

该题型要求考生在阅读时不仅要读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络关系。

在续写时，合理联想并构思故事的发展进程、前因后果、场景变化、人物特征和情感等，并用英语表达出来。

同时，在组织语言时，必须使用5个以上的关键词。

该题型对学生英语综合素质的要求很高，所以教师应认真做好高考真题的分析及范例点评。

一、英语读后续写试题分析2017年6月浙江省高考真题中读后续写部分讲述的是这样一个故事：Mac Hollan与两个朋友外出骑行，但在途中朋友的自行车坏了，要留下来修理，他们鼓励Mac自己先骑。

不幸的是，Mac在前往目的地的路上遭遇了狼并受到了攻击。

他用喷雾一次次地赶走了狼，但狼仍穷追不舍。

这时一辆目睹了一切的轿车正好经过，Mac赶忙停下来想寻求帮助。

文章是以“He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast，just a dozen yards away now”为结束语的。

通过短文内容分析可以发现，文中共提到五个人物，主人公是Mac Hollan，两个朋友和两个路人Paul and Becky；涉及的场景有home，car；主要发生的行为有climb，jumped；提及的物件有wolf，bicycle。

2019.9 浙江高考：One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2017年浙江高考读后续写参考范文On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Th en Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it was not a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase.Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew thatonce he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They did not think much of it when they saw two cyclist repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Seeing the car stop, Mac jumped off his bicycle immediately and rushed to the door of the car. So frightened was he that he hardly said a whole sentence, but stammered, “the wolf ……, please let me in.”Seeing the wolf running towards the car, Paul opened the door without any hesitation, pulling Mac into the car. Three men in the car were staring out of the window and saw the wolf standing there, thinking how to fight back the wolf.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. About a hundred meters away, the two men stopped and realized what had happened to their friend. Being aware of the wolf’s cruelty and not to startle the wolf, they were determined to stay where they were and attempted to think out an idea. Suddenly, one of the cyclists touched the food bad which they brought. A good idea occurred to him that they could lead the wolf to the forest by throwing their beef and pock away. Smelling the flavor of the meat, the wolf turned around and ran alongside the meat. The two cyclists u-turned in a crossroads. What comforted the two cyclists was that Mac did not get injured. “Thank you for stopping to save me, said Mac to Paul and Becky. Mac and his two friends decided to go back home in case they would run into the wolf again.XX学校支部“示范岗”考核评分表被评党员姓名：评议时间：年月日满分：100分被评得分：。

浙江3套新高考英语试题读后续写部分及参考答案2016年10月：读后续写（满分25分）阅读短文，根据所给情节续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to T om, "I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. T o her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost."Tom!" she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. T o her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；3. 续写部分分为两段,段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2018年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析（上）(function() {var s = "_" + Math.random().toString(36).slice(2);document.write('');(window.slotbydup = window.slotbydup || []).push({id: "u3686515",container: s});})();2018年6月读后续写题型再次出现在浙江省高考英语科目写作第二节，该题型提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生根据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词语进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。

下面让我们一起来分析一下本次高考读后续写试题。

一给定材料和题目要求It was summer，and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque，a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul，my dad’s friend，picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning，Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn onmy farm，” he said. After breakfast，I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens，while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze （吃草）. I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon，I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride，and he said yes，as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So，my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats，got on our horses，and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cried，“and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost！” “OK！” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks，the deep green pine trees，and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven （编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2017年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评2017年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写作文分析及范例点评2017年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题是英语高考的重要组成部分之一，它考查学生综合运用语言的能力，检验学生的语言功底。

此类题型的特点在于带有主观性，要求学生在读完原文后按照提示用自己的语言针对原文进行进一步发挥。

有一篇汉语阅读材料：奥运会最值得珍视的杰出体育运动员在奥运会上作出了让人激动的成绩。

他们不仅获得赛场上的成功，也带给人们精神上的鼓舞。

那么，在这样一个气氛鼓舞人心的时刻，我们对于这些杰出运动员应该如何表达赞美之情？根据上述提示，可以点击这样的范文：Olympic Games are well known for their outstanding sportsmen who show us their amazing performances and achievements. Indeed, their success has enhancedtheir own spirit and brought us tremendous enthusiasm and excitement. To show our admiration and appreciation to them, we can do the following things. Firstly, we can watch the Games and cheer for them, which will encourage the athletes a lot. In addition, we can learn from their perseverance and positive attitudes towards challenges, because they’ve never give up even in difficult times. Finally, we can send our blessings and good wishes on social media. May their dreams come true and may they reach greater heights in their sports career.以上就是2017年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写题的范文分析及范例点评，从表达上看，本篇文章内容完整、拓展充分，句式多变且语言准确，结构清晰，层次分明，思路清晰，使用的词汇也都很地道，完全体现出了作者的高考英语读后续写能力。

一、读后续写（25分）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly（胆怯地）. “Have you killed the man” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the fa rmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2018年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析（上）特约主持：赵伐英语写作in the morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm,”he said.After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens,while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze （吃草）.I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me.I wasn ’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Don ’t be late for supper,”英语写作When（旅行时间）：in summer某年夏天Where（旅行地点）：the Wild West,Uncle Paul’s farm in Pecos西部荒野、位于佩科斯的保罗叔叔的农场Who（主要人物）：I,my dad,Uncle Paul我（作者）、父亲、保罗叔叔Why（旅行目的）：my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before 父亲希望“我”度过一个前所未有的假期第三段讲述了作者来到农场后当天晚上和第二天早上发生的故事，如：享受美味的晚餐、听着蛙声入睡、清晨起床、喂鸡牧羊。