中考英语作文专题复习课件课件(完美版)

Written Expression - A Big Composition
书面表达—大作文
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Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:

Language expression and polishing
A
Use accurate and vivid vocabulary and phrases to express ideas
Pay attention to the diversity of grammar and sentence structures, avoid repetition and monotony
Overview of Middle School Entrance Examination 01 English Composition
The Importance of Middle School Entrance
Examination English Composition
High proportion of
Question review and conception
01
Carefully read the question, understand its meaning and requirements
02
Determine the theme and intention of the article, ensuring that it matches the requirements of the title
中考英语作文课件 (19张)
汇报人：XX 2024-01-24
目录
• Overview of Middle School Entrance Examination English Composition
• Writing Steps and Techniques • Common errors and
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Ways to help the left-behind children
• family-- go back home to see their children as much as possible
• school-- try to improve the environment of education, which can provide a better study environment for them • government– set up a parents school for these children on holidays
Caring For the Left-behind Children
Nowadays, there are many left-behind children whose 1.Linking words parents work away from their hometowns. Most of them (连接词) are from the countryside. It is well-known that they have many problems. On one 2.Good expressions hand, they are always lonely and stressed out because they are short of their parents' love. On the other hand , they are easy to make mistakes even do some thing against the law, attributive clause because they're short of their families' care. However, instead of having pity on them, we should do adverbial clauses: something to help them. Firstly, their parents should go because原因状语从句 back home to see them as much as possible; Secondly, the if 条件状语从句 government can set up a parents school for these children on holidays; Finally, we can organize" hand-in-hand" activity to call on more people to help them. It’s + adj. + for/of As the song says:"If everyone gives their love, the sb.+ to do sth. world will be better." It's very important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want to build a harmonious society.

4. We can turn off the light when we don't use them. We can turn off the lights when we don't use them.
1. You is expected to put the rubbish into a dusbin. You are expected to put the rubbish into a dusbin .
温馨提示：发送之前，请自行按步骤检查修 正。
Thank you for listening !
谢谢欣赏
Give it a score!
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How to correct the mistakes in English compositions?
1. We aren't supposed to throw litters everywhere. We aren't supposed to throw litter everywhere.
Write a composition：
A letter to Miss Lin
今天，Miss Lin给你们上了一堂英语作文课， 她和你们一起讨论,发现错误并修改错误，教给 你们写好作文的技巧(Writing skills)，如果她的 课对你们写作能力有帮助,请你给她写一封英文 信。(461075872@)
2. On the other hand, it also pollute the environment.
On the other hand, it also pollutes the environment .
3. Planting trees are also a way to protect our environment. Planting trees is also a way to protect our environment.

examples
Conclusion
Topic sentence
I think…/ I believe…/I
agree/disagree…/In my opinion,…
Reason1
(First,../Firstly,…/First of all,…)
Supporting reason/example
computer games at the same time.
Good Sentence Patterns
Give opinions
It’s important/necessary/convenient for sb. to …
There is no need for sb. to …
...become more and more popular…
1.Teachers can’t communicate with us.Some students play
computer games at the same time.
2.Teachers can’t communicate with us.What’s worse,while
some students are having classes,they are even playing the
Self-check list
Did you show your opinion clearly?
Did you explain your opinion with at least
two reasons?
Did you give details or supports for each
reason?
it will be reasonable.

Write your story about growth according to your story line.
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.

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bookcase. The tape player is in the bookcase,too. The computer game is on the floor.
Love,
Emma
写物三
• 写一篇文章介绍你的朋友JIM所拥有的体育 器材和他喜欢的体育运动。
• Jim has many sports things. He has 10 basketballs, 4 footballs,2 ping-pong balls, 15volleyballs and 9 baseballs. He doesn’t have a ping-pong bat, but he has 8 tennis rackets. Of all the sports, He likes tennis best. He likes sports very much, because he thinks sports are good for health. He often plays tennis and basketball with his friends after school.
• 2.介绍他人的房间。假设这是TOM的房间，请你 用50词左右介绍他的房间。
• Look! This is Tom’s room. It's tidy and nice.His photos are on the wall. His jacket is on the bed. His baseball bat is under the bed. The keys are on the table. The computer is on the desk. Where is Tom’s basketball? Oh, It’s under the bed，too. What is in the bookcase? They are Tom’s books, tape player and computer games. Do you like Tom’s room?

一、外貌：1. 描述让My你难fa忘v（or帮i助te过你te）a的ch一e件r 事i情s 、M感r.想（Wa体n会g.）、He祝福is（祝ha愿n）dsome and of medium build. 2. My best friend is Linda. She is a beautiful girl with
- instead of/ rather than junk food diet
同类话题： Survey of Pocket Money Spending
§ buy books --- （课余生活、兴趣爱好、减压）§ buy snacks ---
全国中考英语写作真题之健康类 谈“关爱健康” 话题：中学生健康其他真题案例：河南 长沙； 成
都；大连；潍坊 等健康一直是人们关注的问题，你校要举行“关爱健康” 为题的主题班会。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。保持健康的重要性； 保持健康的方法：1. 多吃水果蔬菜；2. 每天锻炼一小时；3. 早睡早起； 4. 勤洗手；自己的看法（至少一条）
第三档：(8~5分)部分内容符合题目要求，要点 不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺， 表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。第四档：(4~0分 )与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所 写内容难以理解。
10字原则：结构 要点 逻辑 语法 亮点
官方范文是个宝 --叙事汶川地震（Wenchuan Earthquake）发生后，9岁学生林浩 （Lin Hao）救了两名同学，然后步行7小时到达安全地点。
was XXX who encouraged me. With his help, I can play
basketball as well as he does now.
六、感想（体会） I feel lucky to have such a good teacher / friend. He always holds on to achieve his dream. That is his best quality I should learn from him. -----I feel lucky to have such a good teacher / friend who always holds on to achieve his dream, which is his best quality that I should learn form him.感 想 / 体会 / 感受 模板：

玉林市2016年第一次模拟题 My English Teacher
假如你叫张林，你的外国朋友想了解你的英语老师，请根据下面的内容 要点写一篇介绍她的短文。 内容要点： 1.李华，40岁左右；
2.中等身高，戴眼镜...； 3.课堂上对我们严格，课后我们相处融洽； 4.教学方法和别人不同，常鼓励我们独立思考； 5.非常受学生欢迎。 参考词汇：1. medium height 2. be strict with 3. be different from
S物动词) +宾 + 宾补
S+V +O +OC
别写中式英语哦！
中 考 英 语 作 文复习 研讨课 优 秀课 件(共 30张PP T)【完 美版】
中 考 英 语 作 文复习 研讨课 优 秀课 件(共 30张PP T)【完 美版】
3.造简单句
主语 +be+表语 . 主语 +谓语+宾语
历年玉林中考题 短文
根据所提供的内容要点， 写一篇短文，介绍你们 学校以及你本人参加课外活动的情况。
短文
根据表格的要点，以“Love Around Me”为题， 写一篇短文。（对象涉及父母、老师、同学和朋 友）
日记
你和同学们星期六一起去森林公园郊游。请根据 图中的提示以及内容要点，用英语写一篇日记。
3.课堂上对我们严格，课后我们相处融洽； ( be strict with)
4.教学方法和别人不同，常鼓励我们独立思考；（be different from；encourage )
5.非常受学生欢迎. (popular )
中 考 英 语 作 文复习 研讨课 优 秀课 件(共 30张PP T)【完 美版】

Conclusion
He wishes his parents could give him their support for his hobbies .
Discussion
Writing skills—six steps
抄写规范
抄
组段成篇
组
集句成段
审
作文
集
审清题意
抓 抓住要点
连 连词成句
自从实施教育新政策，中学生有了更多自主支配的时 间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这 种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如 何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给 该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括： 不良现象和行 1. 花太多时间在兴趣爱好上 为（至少3点） 2. 迷恋网吧，上网打游 3. ……
中考英语作文课件(共37张PPT)【优秀 课件】
中考英语作文课件(共37张PPT)【优秀 课件】
第一步:审清题意
认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、 人称、字数、结构、时态、提示 要点和补充信息
具体做法：用笔勾画
中考英语作文课件(共37张PPT)【优秀 课件】
中考英语作文课件(共37张PPT)【优秀 课件】
点）
3. ……
已知信息
以一般
现在时 看法
我认为……
未知信息
为主
1. 合理安排时间
时态 字数
建议（至少3 2. 参加兴趣小组
条）
3. ……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入
总词数
中考英语作文课件(共37张PPT)【优秀 课件】
中考英语作文课件(共37张PPT)【优秀 课件】
第二步：
列出写作提纲不（要Ou遗tli漏ne）。 要点！

要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等； 3. 表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟； 4. 词数：80-100字左右。
第一步：审 要认真审题，明确写
作体裁、人称、时态、提示和要求
具体做法：用笔勾画或写下
—— 1:体裁 2:人称 3:时态 4:提示 5: 要求
小组合作互批评分标准 满分20分： (1) 找“亮点”。找出好词好句，适当加1--3分； （2）正确使用过渡词和过渡语，加1分； （3）词数不够扣1分； （4）单词拼写错3个扣1分； （5）名词单复数不一致扣0.5--1分； （6）时态用错扣1分； （7）主谓不一致整洁扣2分； （10）文章结构不合理或体裁用错扣3-5分；
书面表达写作技巧 审
列 连
加
美
假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。 你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封申请信。
姓名 本人特点 “爱心”表现 加入目的 王林
性别
男
身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；与同学友好相处 （见图片） 1.… 2. …
正 The apples are cheap. I'll take some.
语法问题之 代词的误用 英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、 反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主 代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用 物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误 用是考生最容易发生的错误 误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father. 正 Ｍy mother and Iwent to the shop to buy a present for my father.

开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。 开门见山式
回忆式开头
疑问式开头
倒叙式开头

中考英语作文指导教学优秀课件(共46 张PPT) 【完美 版】
三、 加.
加首尾，使结构完整。 • 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，
开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。 自然结尾，点明主题 首尾呼应，升华主题 反问结尾，引起深思
一、掌握正确的写作技巧非常重要
Exa据mp报le 1道韩国将用电子课本取代学校的纸质课本。某英文报 “学生习作”专栏正就“Paper Books or E-books?”这一话 题征文。请你根据下面提供的信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投 稿，并谈谈你的看法。
E-books 1. Easy to take 2. Protect environment 3. Look up easily
河北省中考作文评分标准
第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响
意思表达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子
基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量
Paper books
1.Take notes 2.Practice handwriting 3.Bad for eyes
注意：1.短文应包括以上所有提示的信息，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使行 文连贯；2.词数不少于80。题目和开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 It’s reported that all schools in Korea will use e-books instead of paper books at school.

Introduce with：
more aspects （more sentence patterns， linking words ）
Peer check
Checklist (中考采分点)
1.内容充实，覆盖要点 （内容、要点）
(content)
2.用词适切，语法正确，句型多样 （词汇、语法、句型）
Tip : Introduce with m__o_r_e__s_e_n_t_e_n_c_e__p_a_t_te_r_n_s_. (用词适切，句型多样)
Try something different.
I saw a chair. I can sit on it comfortably.
Try something different.
I think it is meaningful to make the chair.
It reminds me of the importance of environmental protection.
more sentence patterns
I think it is meaningful to make the chair that reminds me of the importance of environmental protection.
Attributive clause
Circle the key words
（湖州 2022年中考英语书面表达）
假如你是李雷，上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环
保作品展。请你根据以下信息，写一篇短文，在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己
的想. 法. 与. 感. 受. 。