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(2016·浙江省名校联考)
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
In many societies，there is often greater acceptance of light skin than dark skin.Light skin may be seen as a mark of beauty，intelligence and success.These beliefs can lead to social pressure even within the same racial or ethnic group，if some members are darker skinned than others.
The result is that skin lightening has become a common activity across Africa，Asia and other areas of the world.More and more people with dark skin are using skinlig htening products，even if they may face health risks.
They believe that having whiter skin will improve their lives.Many people think they will have a better chance of getting a job or marrying into a better family.Or they want to look like what their society generally considers beautiful.
Some beauty care products and soaps contain chemicals that make skin lighter.This process is also called bleaching(漂白)．But some of the chemicals are extremely dangerous.One of the chemicals has been linked to kidney(肾) damage and some kinds of cancer.It also causes low birth weight in babies when mothers use it during pregnancy.
At first，bleaching products make the skin color lighter.But after longterm use they can cause problems.They can even make some skin darker.The chemicals in the products block and break down the natural process that gives color to skin.The skin loses its natural barrier to protect against sunlight.Then the skin can become thick and ually the person will use more of the product in an effort to correct the problem，but this only makes it worse.
Doctor Ly，who works in a hospital，says the chemicals are now more dangerous because they are stronger.Some cases have resulted in blackened fingernails，infections and permanent skin damage.And these are not the only risks.Experts say some people who change their skin color suffer emotional damage.They feel regret and sadness.They feel that instead of risking their health，they should have learned to love and accept their skin color as it was.
【写作指导】
本文属于说明文，全文使用一般现在时。首先，阅读材料，了解文章的基本内容。本篇阅读材料由六段组成，主要内容是：许多人认为皮肤白晳就是美——美白化妆品流行——分析这些美白化妆品的危害——医生的建议。然后，确定概要内容。按照“提出问题——分析问题——解决问题”的模式概括文章大意。最后，根据行文需要添加过渡词，如therefore，however，what's worse，thus等，使文章过渡自然，条理清晰。
【参考范文】
Many people prefer light skin to dark skin，believing that it helps improve their life and caters to the social standard of beauty.(要点1)Therefore，it is common to try skinlightening products.(要点2)However，bleaching containing chemicals has longlasting harmful effects on physical condition and emotions.What's worse，it may fail to achieve expected results.(要点3)Thus，doctors recommend people not to put their health at risk but love and accept their natural colors.(要点4)
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阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Every year，especially during the spring and early summer，the lives of many young animals are disrupted.People may attempt to “save” these animals，and more often than not，the mother is nearby.
Young rabbits found at a nest site do not need to be rescued.The mother rabbit will not return as long as a person is standing near the nest site.If you've kicked open a nest，just replace the top of the nest，and leave.The mother will return and care for the young.Cottontail rabbits leave their young for hours while eating，but they do return to nurse the young，until the young are old enough to survive on their own.Young rabbits are ready to leave the nest at three to four weeks of age when their eyes are open and their bodies are furry.
Young birds are sometimes found on the ground near a nest.When this happens，the best thing to do is to put the bird carefully back into the nest.Don't worry about getting your scent on the bird；it will not affect the mother's care.If you can't reach the nest，leave the bird on the ground.Every bird alive today has spent
