2016年写作及答案
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凯程考研集训营,为学生引路,为学员服务!第 1 页 共 1 页 2016年管综考研写作真题与答案送走了2016管理类联考初试,凯程教育的电话瞬间变成了热线,同学们兴奋地汇报自己的答题情况,几乎所有内容都在凯程考研集训营系统训练过,管理类联考专业课难度与往年相当,答题的时候非常顺手,管理类联考题型写作试题,相信凯程的学员们对此非常熟悉,预祝亲爱的同学们复试顺利。
管理类联考分笔试、面试,如果没有准备,或者准备不充分,很容易被挂掉。
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下面凯程管理类老师把管理类联考的真题全面展示给大家,供大家估分使用,以及2017年考管理类的同学使用,本试题凯程首发,转载注明出处。
2016年管理类联考综合能力考试已经结束,现在凯程教育教研室老师为大家第一时间收集真题,希望能够帮助到大家,真题解析和答案请及时关注凯程考研网!四、写作:第56~57小题,共65分。
其中论证有效性分析30分,论说文35分。
56、论证有效性分析:分析下述论证中存在的缺陷和漏洞,选择若干要点,写一篇600字左右的文章,对该论证的有效性进行分析和评论。
(论证有效性分析的一般要点是:概念特别是核心概念的界定和使用是否准确并前后一致,有无各种明显的逻辑错误,论证的论据是否成立并支持结论,结论成立的条件是否充分等等。
)现在人们常在谈论大学毕业就业难的问题,其实大学生的就业并不难,据国家统计局数据,2012年我国劳动年龄人口比2011年减少了345万,这说明我国劳动力的供应从过剩变成了短缺。
据报道,近年长三角等地区频频出现“用工荒”现象,2015年第二季度我国岗位空缺与求职人数的比率均为1.06,表明劳动力市场需求大于供给。
因此,我国的大学生其实还是供不应求的。
还有,一个人受教育程度越高,他的整体素质也就越高,适应能力就越强,当然也就越容易就业,大学生显然比其他社会群体更容易就业,再说大学生就业难就没有道理了。
2016考研英语(二)真题及参考答案--写作Section IV WritingPart ASuppose you won a translation contest and your friend Jack wrote an email to congratulate you, and ask advice on translation. Write him a reply to1)thank him;2)give your advice.You should write neatly on the ANWSER SHEET. Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use Li Ming instead. Do not write the address .(10 point)参考译文Dear Jack,Im writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest.As regard to my experience, I would like to offer you some proposals in this part. First and foremost, I strongly suggest you that you need to practice with painstaking effort in this field. Whats more, you had better have more communication with foreigners, which guarantees that you have a deep understanding of foreign culture. Last but not least, you are supposed to participate in some international events to accumulate awealth of practical experience.Thanks again and I do hope you could take my suggestions into consideration. I wish you have good luck and make a great success in your future study.Yours sincerely,Li Ming如大家所见,这是2016年英语二小作文题目。
1.11【单选题】以下实用文体中,有一种不是公文,即()A、命令B、决定C、决议D、议案我的答案:D2【多选题】下面中说法正确的是()A、写作分为文学创作和实用写作两类B、应用文是一切社会组织和个人进行社会活动和处理个人事务必不可少的工具C、应用写作和文学写作是一样的D、写好应用文需要较高的理论政策水平、广博的的专业知识、较好的分析综合能力等我的答案:ABD 得分:33.3分3【多选题】应用文具有以下几个特点()A、实用性B、针对性C、美观性D、简明性E、时效性F、规范性我的答案:ABDEF2.11【单选题】向国内外宣布重要事项或者法定事项,应使用的文种是()A、通告B、指示C、公告D、批复我的答案:C 得分:20.0分2【单选题】适用于对重要问题提出见解和处理办法的行政公文是()A、意见B、建议C、报告D、决议我的答案:A 得分:20.0分3【单选题】下列哪种公文的使用频率最高()A、调查报告B、请示C、公告D、通知我的答案:D 得分:20.0分4【多选题】行政公文是()A、是行政机关在行政管理过程中形成的具有法定效力和规范体式的文书B、是《条例》所颁定的公文C、是行政机关依法行政和进行公务活动的重要工具D、是党的机关使用的法定公文E、是行政机关所使用的各种公务文书的简称我的答案:ACE 得分:20.0分5【多选题】国家行政机关公文主动行文的情形包括()A、答复上级机关的询问事项B、向上级机关请示C、向上级机关报告D、向不相隶属机关反映情况E、向不相隶属机关征询意见我的答案:BCDE2.21【单选题】公文的签批人是指()A、上级领导B、下级领导C、本机关的秘书部门D、本机关领导我的答案:D 得分:20.0分2【单选题】以下发文字号编写正确的是()A、国发〔2010〕3号B、国发[2010]3号C、国发[2010]第3号D、国发〔2010〕第3号我的答案:A 得分:20.0分3【单选题】公文的成文日期指的是()A、撰稿者完成稿件时间B、印刷厂印刷的时间C、主管领导签批的时间D、公文公布发出的时间我的答案:C 得分:20.0分4【单选题】公文中的主题词有着数量限制,一般不能超过()A、2个B、3个C、5个D、7个我的答案:C 得分:20.0分5【多选题】下列标题中正确的有()A、××县人民政府关于解决新开发区原住户搬迁经费的请示B、××分公司关于请求批准开发新产品的报告C、××县人民政府关于请求将××风景区列为省级自然保护区的请示报告D、××公司关于解决生产车间用地的请示E、××厂关于购置××设备的申请我的答案:AD3.11【单选题】转发与批转公文时用()A、通报B、通知C、公函D、批复我的答案:B 得分:20.0分2【单选题】例文《xx市国家税务局关于印发的通知》正文是:“现将《xx市国家税务局金税工程考核暂行办法》印发给你们,请遵照执行。
2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(全国新课标卷)英语答案解析第Ⅰ卷第一部分听力第一节1.【答案】B2.【答案】C3.【答案】A4.【答案】C5.【答案】B第二节6.【答案】A7.【答案】C8.【答案】A9.【答案】B10.【答案】C11.【答案】B12.【答案】A13.【答案】C14.【答案】A15.【答案】C16.【答案】B17.【答案】A18.【答案】C19.【答案】A20.【答案】B第二部分阅读理解第一节21.【答案】A【解析】通读第一段内容并结合该段中的“Phone:241-2742.”可知,本段主要介绍了在音乐厅举办歌剧的相关信息,因此如果想看歌剧,可拨打这里的联系电话241-2742,故选A。
22.【答案】B【解析】根据第二段第一句Chamber Orchestra:The Orchestra plays at Memorial Hall at 1406 Elm Street,which offers several concerts from March through June.译文:内管弦乐队:在榆树街1406号的纪念堂会有管弦乐队的表演,从三月到六月有好几场演出。
可知,管弦乐队的演出时间为三月到六月,而五月份正好在此期间内。
故选B。
23.【答案】C【解析】根据第四段第一句可知,许多演出通常都会在Patricia Cobbett Theater进行;结合第四段第三句Students with ID cards can attend the events for free.译文:学生可持身份证免费观看。
可知,学生可在Patricia Cobbett Theater持身份证免费观看。
故选C。
24.【答案】A【解析】根据最后一段第二句Large outdoor theater with the closest seats under cover( price different) 译文:大型户外剧场具有最前排的(包厢)座位,隐秘性极好(价位不同)。
Ⅰ. Supply the missing paragraph.(20 points)The following passage is incomplete with one paragraph missing. Study the passage carefully and write the missing paragraph in about 100 words. Make sure that your tone and diction are in unity with the passage provided.Why Movies Are PopularMany people would say that movies,whether seen in the cinema,on the Internet,or on the DVD player,are one of the most popular forms of entertainment. Judging from the amount of time people are willing to spend on watching them,I readily agee with the statement. We have dozens of reasons for our love of movies. But the most obvious ones are the story,the special effects and the stars.A“movie”is,basically,technology's answer to the traditional storybook. We all hunger for a life full of passion,excitement and love. If we don't find them in our own life,we try to experience them in fictional stories. A movie tells a story more effectively and vividly than a book. Take the movie“Saving Private Ryan”for example. In the first battle scene when the soldiers are under fierce gunfire from the Germans,you feel you are running with the soldiers and witnessing everything firsthand. You hear the echoes of bullets flying overhead. For fifteen frightening minutes,you feel as if you were in the middle of the battlefield! No storybook can create such a vivid effect.Special effects are another crowd-puller. Take the movie“Jurassic Park”for instance. The dinosaurs' images are created by a computer,yet in the movie,they look as real as the actors. You can see their shadows and the vapor from their breath. This type of movie magic amazes the audience and keeps them coming back for more. Then there is“The Matrix”. For two hours,the special effects of this movie make us believe that ordinary hurnans can walk around inside a computer program. Both movies draw a large number of viewers to their sequels(续集),mostly because of their special effects.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In summary,movies are popular because of the story,the special effects and the movie stars. It is still the quickest and easiest way to temporarily leave your ordinary life and to experience passion and excitement.Ⅱ. Write an outline.(20 points)Read the following passage carefully and compose a“sentence outline”for it.How to Deal with NervousnessEveryone has experienced being nervous •at one point in their lives. Being nervous is a normal emotional reaction to stressful,unknown,or intimidating circumstances. One may feel nervous before an upcoming job interview,the first date,and even a doctor's appointment.For some people,nervousness becomes a problem that interferes with normal life. Shaky and sweaty hands,starnmering speech and blank mind may spoil things. However,nervousness can be managed if treated properly.First of all,it is important to remember that no treatment can make a person instantly calm down and forget about his nervousness. The secret to achieving true calm,without tranquilizers (镇静药),is in practice. The more you practise,putting yourself in situations that may makeyou nervous and taking action,the more confident you become. This way you eventually feel more and more comfortable and less nervous. If you are getting ready for an important interview or a presentation at work,practise your speech so that you can do it automatically. That way,your lips and body will know what to do even if your mind gets blocked somehow. During the speech you need to concentrate on breathing slowly and deeply to avoid short quick breaths that are common for nervous people. When people talk slowly,they keep a nice steady supply of oxygen flowing through their bloodstream.In many cases,nervous people spend time visualizing as to what may go wrong in a future situation. This can,of course,create a lot of nervousness. It can also give you the results you imagined,or feared. If you convince yourself that you will fail,then most probably you do fail. Much more helpful is to have pleasant thoughts and try to imagine only good outcome of a situation. If you visualize things in an optimistic way,what actually happens can change a lot about how you behave,how you present it,how convincing you sound,and generally how you feel in the situation. It always has a great effect on how the things actually go.Sometimes fears occur for a good reason. It is quite understandable that people might be afraid of jumping with a parachute(降落伞),for instance,but what about speaking in public?It is absolutely irrational. Try to compare these two types of fear and maybe then it will be easier to understand that nervousness does not really make that much sense. So,ask yourself a few simple questions For example,“What is the worst that could happen to me?”Questions of this kind can put things into a healthier perspective and calm yourelf dpwn.With sufficient practice,positive self-image and rational thinking,you'll be able to build up self-assurance bit by bit and behave confidently whether in workplace or in social life. Apply these strategies and don't let nervousness stand in the way to your success.Sentence Outline________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ⅲ. Compose an essay.(60 points)Some people claim love is most important in a happy marriage,while others believe money plays a decisive role. What is your opinion?Write a 300-word expository essay stating your views.2016年4月高等教育自学考试全国统一命题考试英语写作试题答案及评分参考(00603)Ⅰ. Supply the missing paragraph.(20 points)In addition to the exciting story and special effects,viewers are drawn by the charm of stars. People find movie stars attractive. Many have a favorite actor or actress whom they idolize and would love to see in more movies. Jackie Chan and Lianjie Li,two popular Chinese stars,delight numerous fans with their skillful acting and comic expressions. Their movies are always a hit. Movies starring Julia Roberts,the slim American beauty with abroad smile,seldom fail to capture the hearts of millions of viewers around the world. It is safe to say that these stars draw many viewers to the cinema.【评分参考】1.本部分满分20分,按四个档次给分。
Ⅰ. Supply the missing paragraph.(20 points)The following passage is incomplete with one paragraph missing. Study the passage carefully and write the missing paragraph in about 100 words. Make sure that your tone and diction are in unity with the passage provided.The Various Skills and Responsibilities of Executive Secretaries After observing the daily activities of three different executive secretaries,I have come to realize that these secretaries must possess a wide variety of skills to do their jobs effectively. Among their most essential skills are the ability to communicate,an acute sense of organization,and an intimate knowledge of different types of office equipment.Communication skills include both oral and written communication,for executive secretaries must represent their supervisors in many different business situations. Orally,they are required to speak effectively on the telephone,which means using proper words and an effective tone. They must also be able to greet and converse intelligently with each of their supervisor's clients and transmit his or her instructions accurately and concisely. Their skills comprise a detailed knowledge of the rules of grammar and a familiarization T With sentence structure. Duties in this area would include taking notes at meetings and franslating rough notes into accurate and readable prose. It is obvious,then,that executive secretaries must master a broad range of oral and written communication skills before they can represent their supervisors properly.Another important skill that executive secretaries must have is a keen sense of organization. The day-to-day responsibilities that test this skill would be arranging transportation and accommodations for their supervisor's out-of-town visitors,keeping his or her appointment calendar up to date,and arranging staff meetings and conferences,both inside and outside the building. But perhaps their most important skill,which comes under the general heading of organization,is the ability to set priorities. Since they are given a number of various duties,some requiring immediate action,they must make judgments that provide for their supervisors' time restrictions. In this way they ensure that their supervisors do not waste time dealing with unessential information.Finally,because modern business offices use the latest audio-visual and elecfronic equipment,executive secretaries must have “hands-on” knowledge of this equipment. Making overheads,setting up projectors,and using photocopiers are some obvious examples,but they must also be familiar with video display equipment and word processors. Their skills in accessing and fransmitting information effectively will depend on their keeping up with the latest information technology which,in turn,will increase productivity and lower costs.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ⅱ. Write an outline.(20 points)Read the following passage carefully and compose a “sentence outline” for it.What Technology Has Done to UsI am not a patient person. As I was waiting for the elevator the other day,I must have looked at my watch 25 times in one minute. Living in a world of fast-moving technology,I amused to instant reactions. I push a button,the elevator should open,right?Ah,this is what technology has done to me.So,why do we use technological devices so much?It saves time and is convenient. With the Internet,we can receive and send information,communicate with friends and buy various items all instantly by the click of a mouse. In fact,our patience level has changed drastically all because of faster connections.While this technology does make it more convenient to receive information,sometimes I wonder if all this is too convenient. We take advantage of the speed so much that if the Internet is not working or the fax machine is not sending properly,our world seems to shut down temporarily. We simply find it difficult to ftlnction without access to our e-mail or updated news. In fact,technology can often make us lazy. I cannot possibly spend the time to mail a letter in the acclaimed snail mail. “Fax it. E-mail it”,the world cries. Society seems to revolve around time as it never did before.This speed of communication has caused us to be so impatient that we have grown apart from each other. Our society can practically thrive without physical contact. Many people have all the required devices already in their homes:a computer,Internet access,a phone and a fax machine. Does anyone else think it is scary that a person does not need to even leave his or her bedroom to have full contact with anyone in the world?I think it decreases our value offace-to-face human contact as a whole. Why visit someone who lives 40 minutes away when you can e-mail them or chat online?It saves time,yet nothing can replace having face-to-face conversation with someone.What about those who have limited access to the Internet or other technology?They seem to get lost. Sometimes,when I am too busy to check my e-mail or have no access,I miss out on important information and events that have already taken place without my knowledge. The common thought seems to be that if you have an e-mail address,you must check it every hour,right?Sadly,this idea is becoming truth.While technology is an essential part of our thriving society,it should be less emphasized as the only way to communicate efficiently. Instead,accuracy should be the priority. While the Internet and fax machines are faster,efficiency can have its drawbacks. They do not always promise accurate information in sending. For example,these devices might not be the best way to submit important documents,such as college applications. Also,with the Internet,valuable information,such as credit card information,can fall into the hands without being detected.While completely abandoning these communication devices is not feasible,society needs to be more patient with the inefficiencies of human-made inventions and of course with human connections.Ⅲ. Compose an essay.(60 points)A role model is someone who inspires us in our life and makes us want to be better. Write a 300-word expository essay about the qualities of your role model.2016年10月00603英语写作试题Ⅰ. Supply the mising paragraph.(20 polnts)Therefore it is obvious that executive secretaries do much more than simply type and take dictation as some people think. In fact,they take more active roles in keeping the officerunning. To some extent,they should be thought of as executive assistants who keep the office running smoothly by controlling the working environment. And this control is directly related to their ability to communicate,to organize,and to use modern office equipment. Of course,the ability in those three aspects is not adequate,and executive secretaries must have a wider range of skills to perform their duties effectively. That ability,along with other similarly important skills,will snrely contibute to the success of an executive secretary.【评分参考】1.本部分满分20分,按四个档次给分。
专四作文样题(2016 年发布)第一部分:原题PART VI WRITING[45 MIN]Should we review traditional Chinese characters or continue usingsimplified characters? This has been an intensely discussed question foryears. The following are the supporters' and opponents' opinions. Readcarefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from bothsides and give your view on the issue.Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency,organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructionsmay result in a loss of marks.Yes NoTraditional characters, which In today ’s world, efficiency date back to more than 2000 years matters most. Traditionalago, have a more beautiful appearance and a more reasonable c haracters, which usually have more strokes than simplified ones,structure. As indicated by the 親are more difficult to learn. Byand 愛examples, traditional characters make more sense, convey traditional values and can therefore represent traditional culture. For two millennia, Chinese historical records and classic works were written in traditional characters. To be able to read themand inherit traditional cultures, we need to bring traditional characters back. Politically, it is also necessaryto restore traditional Chinese characters. Currently, traditional characters are still in use in Hong Kong, Taiwan and many Chinese communities around the world. Restoring them can contribute to cross-Strait exchanges and national reunifications and unite Chinese people around the world. c ontrast, simplified characters are much easier to learn and use. Overthe past 50 years, lots of classic texts have been turned into simplified-character versions, which means simplified characters can also promote and preserve traditional culture. Constant simplification has been a trend in the evolution of Chinese characters. From the oracle bones script of 3000 years ago to traditional characters, the Chinese writing system has always been slimming down for better communication.第二部分:参考答案(1)写作指南考生在下笔之前应先审题,明确写作要求:针对“我们究竟是该恢复中文繁体字还是继续使用简体汉字”这一热议话题,首先总结正反方的意见,然后给出个人观点。
2016年10月高等教育自学考试全国统一命题考试公共关系写作试卷(课程代码00646)本试卷共4页,满分100分,考试时间150分钟。
考生答题注意事项:1.本卷所有试题必须在答题卡上作答。
答在试卷上无效,试卷空白处和背面均可作草稿纸。
2.第一部分为选择题。
必须对应试卷上的题号使用2B铅笔将“答题卡”的相应代码涂黑。
3.第二部分为非选择题。
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4.合理安排答题空间,超出答题区域无效。
第一部分选择题(共40分)一、单项选择题(本大题共20小题,每小题1分,共20分)在每小题列出的四个备选项中只有一个是符合题目要求的,请将其选出并将“答题卡”的相应代码涂黑。
错涂、多涂或未涂均无分。
1.公关写作的主导思想是A.公关意识B.公关心理C.公关理念D.公关感情2.人们把经过加工使用的材料称为A.文件素材B.写作素材C.文章材料D.文件材料3.公共关系最根本的职责是A.信息传播B.沟通协调C.决策咨询D.弥合补救4.公关写作的首要环节是A.立意B.确定标题C.选材D.确定结构5.“东方航空公司的服务极富人情味”这一标题的表现手法属于A.夸耀式B.祈使式C.悬念式D.记事式6.对未来工作的预测打算,内容比较粗略的非正式计划称作A.规划B.安排C.工作要点D.设想7.公关写作中公关人员必须遵循的原则是A.以公关主体为本B.以观点为本C.以事实为本D.以公关客体为本8.“时闻就是金钱”属于A.观念广告B.实力广告C. 信誉广告D.声势广告9.感知的目的是为了获取写作的A.灵感B.主题C. 体裁D.材料10.长期公关计划也称为A.专题计划B.个案计划C.战术计划D.战略计划11.公关消息写作的结构大都采用A.金字塔式B.倒金字塔式C.并列式D.时间顺序式12.国内外宣布国家主席任职时使用的文种是A.布告B.公告C.通告D.通报13.答辩状一般可以分为民事答辩状和A.刑事答辩状B.行政答辩状C.经济答辩状D.婚姻答辩状14.在公关活动中,采用特殊、郑重表达方式的信函是A.致词B.名片C.柬帖D.公告15.合同是否有效、能否顺利履行的关键是A.标的的合法性B.合同的价金要合理C.数量和质量规定具体、准确D.要明确规定违约责任16.公关消息必须具备新闻报道的五个要素,即所谓A.“五U”B.“五V”C.“五W”D.“五X”17.标题是“著名数学家×××逝世”的讣告属于A.一般式讣告B.新闻报道式讣告C.通知式讣告D.公告式讣告18.下级答复上级询问时使用的文种是A.报告B.请示C.公告D.简报19.以叙述为主要表现手法的简短性公关新闻报道是A.公关消息B.公关报道C.公关通讯D.公关新闻20.书面写定的组织规程或办事条例是A.规章B.规定C.章程D.办法二、多项选择题(本大题共10小题,每小题2分,共20分)在每小题列出的五个备选项中至少有两个是符合题目要求的,请将其选出并将“答题卡”的相应代码涂黑。
2016年12月大学英语六级考试真题答案与详解(第2套)Part I Writing审题思路这是一篇六级考试中常见的议论文。
本篇写作话题innovation(创新)一直以来都是个热点话题。
根据写作要求,范文应分三段展开论述,且写作重点应该放在阐述创新的重要性和培养创新的方法上。
联系实际可知,创新对于国家和个人都有重要意义,如何培养创新精神也应该是两方面共同努力的结果。
写作提纲一、引出话题并阐述创新的重要性1. 对社会的重要性(Innovation, significance, promote, advancement, society)2. 对个人的重要意义(essential quality, success, progress, possible, indulged in conservatism, stagnant)二、培养创新精神的措施1. 国家鼓励创新(government, encourage innovation, foster, continuous learning, breakthroughs)2. 个人增加知识储备(individuals, on rich, knowledge reserves, different methods, solving a problem)三、得出结论1. 牢记创新的重要性(commit it to our memory, significance)2. 在日常生活中培养创新精神(cultivate, habit, applying new thoughts, practice)高分范文My View on Innovation①I’m not sure if you have heard one of Steve Jobs’famous remarks, “Innovation distinguishes between a leader and a follower”, which stresses the significance of innovation. ②It goes without saying that innovation can promote the advancement of society and is the most essential quality for anyone who wants to achieve success. ③With innovation, any progress will be possible; however, once indulged in conservatism, everything will remain stagnant.④Therefore, by some means or other we must come to know how to be innovative. ⑤On the one hand, from the standpoint of a nation, the government should encourage innovation and foster the mindset of continuous learning. ⑥Only by doing this can our nation achieve new breakthroughs in all walks of life. ⑦On the other hand, from the perspective of individuals, we should enrich our knowledge reserves and arm ourselves with up-to-date knowledge. ⑧Only when we are equipped with vast stores of knowledge can we think out different methods when solving a problem.⑨We should always commit it to our memory that innovation is of great significance to us all. ⑩In our daily life, we need to cultivate the habit of applying new thoughts and methods into practice.精彩点评①引用乔布斯的名言引出本文主题——创新,并概述创新的重要意义。
四、写作:第56-57小题,共65分,其中论证有效性分析30分,论说文35分。
56、论证有效性分析:分析下述论证中存在的缺陷和漏洞,选择若干要点,写一篇600字左右的文章,对论证的有效性进行分析和评论。
(论证有效性分析的一般要点是:概念特别是核心概念的界定和使用是否准确并前后一致,有无各种明显的逻辑错误,论证的论据是否成立并支持结论,结论成立的条件是否充分等等)
现在人们常在谈论大学毕业生就业难的问题,其实大学生的就业并不难,据国家统计局数据,2012年我国劳动年龄人口比2011年减少了345万,这说明我国劳动力的供应从过剩变成了短缺。
据报道,近年长三角等地区频频出现“用工荒”现象,2015年第二季度我国岗位空缺与求职人数的比率均为1.06,表明劳动力市场需求大于供给。
因此,我国的大学生其实是供不应求的。
还有,一个人受教育程度越高,他的整体素质也就越高,适应能力就越强,当然也就越容易就业,大学生显然比其他社会群体更容易就业,再说大学生就业难就没有道理了。
实际上,一部分大学生就业难,是因为其所学专业与市场需求不相适应或对就业岗位的要求过高。
因此,只要根据市场需求调整高校专业设置,对大学生进行就业教育以改变他们的就业观念,鼓励大学生自主创业,那么大学生就业难问题将不复存在。
总之,大学生的就业并不是什么问题,我们大可不必为此顾虑重重。
【参考答案1】
大学生就业究竟难不难?
上述文章就我国大学生就业这一热点进行了分析,并从劳动力的供给与需求、教育的作用、高校专业设置、就业观念等方面进行论证,得出了“我国大学生的就业并不难”的观点。
文章在论证过程中存在多处明显的推理错误,其观点很难令人信服。
首先,“2012年劳动年龄人口比2011年减少了345万”,从概念上,供给的“减少”并非“短缺”,是否短缺还应考虑需求变量。
就算是劳动力供给短缺了,也可能是技工、农民工等群体的结构性短缺,未必就是对大学生群体的需求短缺。
其次,长三角等地区的“用工荒”、“2015年第二季度”的数据,也明显是以偏概全,长三角地区并不能代表全国的整体,第二季度也未必能准确反映全年的数据。
另外,“一个人受教育程度越高,整体素质也就越高,适应能力就越强”,这段论证过于想当然了。
受教育程度并非整体素质提高的充分条件,近几年屡现名校大学生杀害同学案件,他们的素质不是越高而是极低;高校大量书呆子、游戏族的存在,他们的适应能力也很难得到用人单位的认可,作者想得出“其越容易就业”的结论,是极不严谨的。
最后,文章认为“只要高校调整专业设置、改变就业观念、鼓励创业,大学生就业难将不复存在”,这一论证太过绝对。
即使当前有所缓解,大学生就业难也可能会在某段时间、某些区域、某些领域继续或重新出现。
很多西方发达国家由于产业空心化,就业机会短缺而重新导致大学生就业难。
总之,由于该文章的论证存在多处硬伤,“大学生就业并不难”的结论可能过于乐观了。
【参考答案2】
“论证有效性分析”存在的主要错误:
1.材料提供的数据时效性不足,用的是2012年的数据;证明不了2015年的事情。
2.劳动力人口减少不等于劳动力人口就短缺了,如果原先劳动力人口远过于求呢。
3.用工荒的成因,材料提到的是长三角地区,但是成因也可能是由于劳动力配置不均衡导致的,所以长三角不能证明全国范围出现用工荒。
4.材料说到2015年第二季度的空缺和求职比,但是要证明劳动力人口真的短缺了,恐怕需要更长时间段的数据。
5.大学生的就业难也可能是因为岗位与大学生实际需求不匹配造成的。
6.教育程度高就证明素质更高吗?素质更高就说明适应性更好吗?这些推理也都是不一定成立的。
7.大学生在全社会中不一定是受教育程度最高的,也不见得适应性更强。
8.材料说的是一个人的教育程度越高素质就越高,是个体的整体素质高,而后面推理推出来的是整体素质高,所指代范围不一样。
9.材料承认一部分大学生就业难,与主张的大学生就业都不难形成了矛盾。
10.即使高校调整的专业配置,但是大学生毕业后,可能社会需求又改变了;而且大学生就算改变观念,也可能会出现高能低配的情况,也不一定能稳定就业;况且材料也没有考虑到创业的风险,所以采取这些措施改变就业难的问题未必有效。
57.论说文:根据下述材料,写一篇700字左右的论说文,题目自拟。
亚里士多德说:“城邦的本质在于多样性,而不在于一致性……无论是家庭还是城邦,他们的内部都有着一定的一致性。
不然的话,它们是不可能组建起来的。
但这种一致性是有一定限度的……同一种声音无法实现和谐,同一个音阶也无法组成旋律。
城邦也是如此,它是一个多面体。
人们只能通过教育便存在着各种差异的公民,统一起来组成一个共同体。
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【论说文范文】
多样统一,构建公民社会
材料引用了亚里士多德所谈论的关于城邦的一些观点,亚里士多德的观点主要是:城邦要保持和谐稳定,多样性是城邦的本质,一致性是构建和谐稳定的必要条件,要实现这一点,需要以教育为手段。
所以,我们认为,要构建和谐稳定的公民社会,需要多样性和一致性的统一,也需要发展教育。
材料所说的“城邦”就对应了现在的“公民社会”。
公民社会是一个契约比较完备的社会,他能够促进人的多样发展,使人获得更多的自由,实现更大价值。
这样也就凸显了多样性和一致性的重要作用。
公民社会的构建需要多样性。
正如材料所说,“同一种声音无法实现和谐”,人们的需求是多样的,条件资源也是不同的,比如,对于贫困人口,“一箪食一瓢饮”可能比高档的手机电脑有价值得多。
由于同一种产品满足不同人群时的边际效用不同,所以我们需要承认多样性的存在;而如果不承认多样性,也就是不承认差异性的存在,人与人合作就缺少了必要的基础,自然也就谈不上一致性了。
一致性的缺少将会导致“不可能组建城邦”。
如果人们是各自为政的,那么就会出现“弱肉强食”的丛林法则;反之,如果人们由于有一些事务通过集中统一管理,可以提高效率、节约资源,就会使得社会效率提高,例如美国建国之初,把外交和宣战的权利交付给了联邦政府,正是这个原则的体现。
我们必须意识到,亚里士多德其实强调了多样性,而并没有把一致性凌驾于多样性之上,所以他在讲到教育的手段作用时,其实蕴含了一个含义,即允许思想自由。
那么我们到底如何将多样性和一致性统一起来,又统一什么呢?首先,需要建立共同的思考规则,也就是说,教育需要培养人们的批判性思维素养。
第二,需要共同的言行准则,例如“罗伯特意识规则”的存在,使得人们沟通交流的成本大大降低。
第三,教育需要凝聚人们的价值观,形成共同的道德准则。
只有一致性的约束才会有多样性的自由,才会有人的价值的实现。
在当今构建和谐社会的时代,为了凸显人的更高的价值,亚里士多德提倡的这些观点都是值得我们深思的。