雅思小作文全题型解析+例文

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1. Line graph ------------------------Exp1-3-----------------------P2-4

2. Bar chart---------------------------Exp4-5-----------------------P5-6

3. Table-------------------------------Exp6-8-----------------------P6-8

4. Pie chart---------------------------Exp9-11----------------------P9-10

5. Flow chart-------------------------Exp12------------------------P11-12

6. Map---------------------------------Exp13-----------------------P12-13

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the requirement of getting 6 score : correct + native

Example 1

The version of teacher Answer 1

The graph shows the increase in the percentage of people aged 65 or more in Japan, Sweden and the USA.

In 1940 the proportion of people over 65 years stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in the

US. However, while the figures for the Western countries grew to about 15% in around 1990, the figure for Japan dipped to

only 2.5% for much of his period, before rising to almost 5% again at the present time.

In spite of some fluctuation in the expected percentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increase

in the next two decades in the three countries.A more dramatic rise is predicted between 2030 and 2040 in Japan, by which

time it is thought that the proportion of elderly people will be similar in the three countries.

Overall, it indicates that the percentage of elderly people in all three countries is expected to increase to almost 25% of

the respective populations by the year 2040.

Example 2

NOTE

①表将来：

...%... Be (is/was) predicted to increase/decrease

Be expected to ,,,

Be planned to ..

Be projected to ... The graph below shows the proportion of

the population aged 65 and over between 1940

and 2040 in three different countries .

Summarize the information by selecting

and reporting the main features and make

comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number (thousands)

of people taking part in four kinds of sports in a

particular region between 1985 and 2005 .

Summarize the information by selecting and

reporting the main features and make comparisons

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②Introduction 改写题目

Origin：The graph below shows the number (thousands) of people taking part in four kinds of sports in a particular region

between 1985 and 2005 .

Revise：①The line graph reflects how many people participated/joined in four types of sports in a specific area from 1985

to 2005.

②The line graph illustrates how the number of people who joined in four types ......changed in a....during 1985, to

2005.

③line graph步骤

第一段改写

分两段主体段，主体段抓细节描写，不能主观臆断添油加醋，看到什么说什么

按照从左到右，从上到下的顺序描写

不要一条一条描写，必须先分类。尽量分两类或三类，一类一主体段

分类的依据很多，如同是上升或下降趋势

最后一段得结论。结论尽量不要像开头那样笼统，也不要像具体内容那样详细。

注意时态，单位

The version of teacher Answer 2

The curve of tennis overtook that of rugby after 1995 at 190thousand ..

Main body 写作顺序 分段特征

Rugby + tennis :

The curves of rugby and tennis illustrate totally opposite trends. The former/latter curve began at 240 thousand, the

largest figure in 1985, and from then on, it experienced a dramatic decrease/decline/downtrend throughout the whole period

and ended at 50 thousand as the same as badminton. Conversely/in contrast, around 150 thousand people played tennis at the

beginning of this period, besides, the latter curve rose slightly,overtaking that of rugby after 1995 at rough 190 thousand and

reaching the peak at 230 thousand by the end of the period.

As for the number of basketball and badminton, they display a similar tendency. Both of them remained the same at 75

thousand and 50 thousand respectively/, with the former figure surpassing that of rugby after 2004/.

Conclusion

Overall/in summary, the number of tennis took the lead in 2005 , while a minority of people would like to choose other

three kinds of sports.

NOTE

Native expression

①有一个平缓的上升 The curve had/experienced a steady increase/growth : adj. + n.

平缓地上升 The curve increased steadily ....

多数的---少数的 Major---minor

②起点 stand at , begin at

③上升 go up , increase , rise to , jump , climb up , grow

④下降 go down , decrease , dilp to , decline , plummet

⑤波动程度：波动： dramatic , sharp , remarkable , significant , shark

平稳： slight , moderate , gradual , steady , stable

⑥交点： overtake , surpass , exceed 4 / 13

⑦终点： end at

Example 3

My version Answer 3

The line graph illustrates that the change of proportion of using different devices to chat from 1998 to 2008 .

There are the similar trend between the curve of computer, cellphone and pad . All of them keep rising stand at 1998

except the pad one which was stand at 2002 , with around 15% , 5% and 0% , and end at 2008 , with around 90% , 95% and

60% , in respectively. The curve of cellphone overtook that of computer after 2006 at 75%

The last two which are curve of landline and fax have something special . They had the opposite trend before the time