雅思写作小作文句型总结

例： in 2011, the youth unemployment in UK: 20%; in Germany: 10%

More than/ higher than (基础)

用名词选项作主语：

In 2011, the youth unemployment rate in the UKis more than

german, with 20% and 10%, respectively.

更精确：

In 2011, the youth unemployment rate in theUKis two times

higher than thatGermany, with 20% and 10%, respectively.

用国家作主语：

TheUKshared a higher proportion of youth unemployment

thanGermany, with 20% and 10%, respectively.

更精确：

TheUKshared a two times higher proportion of youth

unemployment thanGermany, with 20% and 10%, respectively.

用数据作主语：

In 2011, 20% young people in theUKgot unemployed, which

was higher thanGermanywhere only 10% of them in the same

situation.

用特殊词汇：Overtake/exceed/outnumber（表达超过，主语常用名词选项表达的数量，请注意outnumber的用法）

The number of unemployed youngster in

theUKovertook/exceeded that inGermany, with 20% and 10%,

respectively.

Youngsters getting unemployed in theUKoutnumbered that

inGermany, with 20% and 10%, respectively.

用特殊句型（高分句型）：

The number of unemployed youngsters in theUKconstituted

20%, which smaller proportion of young adults getting in the

same situation inGermany, at 10%. 用表达倍数的词汇：

Double/triple/quadruple

Be xxx times

The proportion of youth unemployment in theUKdoubled

that inGermanyin 2011, with 20% and 10% respectively.

句型变化： In 2011, the proportion of youth unemployment

in the UK was 20%, which doubled the percentage in

Germany(10%).

The proportion of youth unemployment in theUKwas two

times that inGermanyin 2011, with 20% and 10%, respectively.

句型变化： In 2011, the proportion of youth unemployment

in the UK was 20%, which was two times the percentage in

Germany(10%).

如何表达一组差距的静态数据：

例句：The biggest difference was at the skilled vocational

diploma, where 90% of men held this qualification, compared

with only 10% of women.

转化（换动词+复杂句型）：Men with a skilled vocational

diploma largely outnumbered their female counterparts, which

formed the biggest difference in the proportion of qualifications

between men and women.

转化（换动词+复杂句型）：The number of men with a skilled

vocational diploma largely overtook that of their female

counterparts, which formed the biggest difference between the

proportions of men and women in their qualifications.

如何做组内的两个数据对比？请参考C4T1表格，数据被分为老年组，夫妇组，单身组。分好组之后先做组与组的对比，然后在对比组内的数据。如果组内的数据只有两个，那么请参考如下句型。

两种句型：

Couples tended to be better off, with higher poverty level for couple with children(12%) than that for couples without

children(7%). 注意，with引导的独立主格结构不是完整的句子，往往没有谓语，请注意！

Couples tended to be better off, while couples with

children(12%) had a higher poverty level than couples without

children(7%). 注意：while后面可以加完整的句子，所以用法不同。请注意！

动态数据表述（词汇请参考前一份讲义）

如何表达某个量的上升下降？

句型：见证结构 （量，时间，地点都可以用来做主语）

替换主语+替换动词

The GDP in China experienced a dramatic growth, rising from

20% in 2008 to 50% in 2011.

China witnessed a dramatic rise in its GDP levels, growing

from 20% in 2005 to 50% in 2011.

The period between 2008 and 2011 saw a significant increase

in Chinese GDP, rising from 20% to 50%.

请注意，不管是用哪一个主语，它的量都是说清楚的，请看横线部分，如果少了这些就不对。

此外，还可以用以下两种句式：

主动：

The GDP in China increased spectacularly from 20% in 2008

to 50% in 2011.

被动：

A dramatic increase was indicated in Chinese GDP between

2008 and 2011, rising from 20% to 50%.

对比动态幅度，注意，只有两个趋势相同才能对比幅度，否则无意义。对比的范文清参照C7T3小作文

两句话：

The consumption of beef and chicken fell dramatically to around 100 and 60 grams respectively in 2004. The amount of

fish consumed also declined, but much less significantly to only

about 50 grams in the end of the period.

一句话：

The consumption of beef and chicken fell dramatically to

around 100 and 60 grams respectively in 2004, while a less

significant downfall was indicated in the amount of fish

consumed, declining to 50 grams in the end of the period.