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高考英语完作文概要写作答题技巧（名师精讲解题技巧与方法，值得下载）概要写作要求读懂所给的阅读材料，用自己的语言高度概括文章的主要内容和观点，有三个步骤：1阅读a.把握文章体裁。
概要写作的前提是要理解原文。
首先，通读原文，把握文章体裁、中心思想和整体结构，根据文章的体裁特点来决定内容的取舍，可以从以下方面的内容(见下表)入手。
▲不同体裁文章的要点b.画出主题句或关键词，主题句一般出现在段首或段尾。
在找到主题句后，要分析主题句的意义，进一步确定衬托主题句的一些关键词（组）如动词、名词等。
c.整合概括大意。
根据阅读时获取的信息、主题句或关键词(组)等，对相关的内容进行整合，理清各层次、要点之间的关系，用自己的语言把词(组)扩展成句，归纳出各段落的大意，也就是表达的要点。
2写作概要写作不是对原文的简单复述，而是在透彻理解原文的基础上，对原文进行高度的概括。
注意以下几点：a.准确。
准确理解原文包括对原文中每个要点及与之相关的“一些重要论据，句子的理解等。
概要写作必须绝对忠实于原文，既不能遗漏任何要点，也不能随意添加内容。
概要写作的时态顺应与原文的时态，顺序一致。
由于概要写作是转述别人的事情或观点，所以，不管原文使用何种人称概要写作一般都要用第三人称。
b.客观。
在进行概要写作时，要依据原文作者的观点，客观地转述文中的要点，不要把自己个人的观点和看法掺杂进去，不要使用“ I think”和“ I believe”等主观性的词句。
由于概要写作不允许照抄原文中的句子，因此，可采用句型转换、同义词转化、语态互换等手法将原文中的句子进行改头换面，达到“雁过不留痕”的效果。
如可用单个词汇替换具有相同语法功能的单词和词组：用determine代替“ make up ones mind”;用therefore和to等表示逻辑意义的连接词代替较长的词组“ as a result”和“ in order to”等。
c.简洁。
由于概要写作的词数有限，所以，可以采取削“枝”去“叶”的方法来减少词数。
2020年高考英语写作新题型备考技巧专题（十一）概要写作+概写综合训练高考英语综合写作题型除了读后续写外, 另一种便是概要写作。
概要写作也是综合写作任务的一种常见形式, 被广泛应用于教学和评估活动中。
概要写作的目的不仅是要重述原文的主旨要义, 还要在不改变原文意思的前提下变换词汇和句子结构, 也就是要使用自己的语言写概要。
一．概要写作的考纲说明和题型介绍1.了解考纲说明根据教育部考试中心的相关说明, 概要写作中, 提供给考生一篇350以内的短文, 要求其基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。
2.明白试题选材的特点提供给考生阅读的短文词数在350以内；所选材料体裁虽然没有限制, 但是多以说明文、议论文为主, 偶尔也会有记叙文或夹叙夹议的阅读材料。
考试说明所给的样题是一篇科普知识类的文章, 句子结构复杂, 难度较大。
3.熟知概要写作的评分标准（一）概要写作考查要求：（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；（3）上下文的连贯性；（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况。
总之, 概要应具有独立性和自明性, 拥有与文章等量的主要信息, 即不阅读全文, 就能获得必要的信息；其次概要不容赘言, 故需逐字推敲；最后概要内容必须完整、一目了然。
（二）概要写作高考评分标准:注意：理解准确, 涵盖全部要求, 完全使用自己的语言, 避免抄原句, 准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇, 得分相应比较高。
相反, 如果概要写作部分出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象, 得分档次将会大大降低；所写内容与所提供内容无关不得分。
二．概要写作的能力要求和特点1.把握读后续写的能力要求和读后续写一样, 概要写作是一种读写结合任务, 也体现了读与写的融合。
但相比其它形式的读写结合任务, 概要写作更偏重对考生阅读理解和思维能力的考查, 要求考生具有分析、综合、概括和建构等高阶思维能力。
这些能力是考生进入高校继续学习的必备基础, 所以考生在平时写作训练中, 要有意识地培养这些高阶思维能力, 对概要写作有很大帮助。
高考英语书面表达读后续写和概要写作考前抢分必备（新高考专用）- 2020年高考终极冲刺抢分秘籍系列读后续写是浙江省英语高考最先使用的题型，也是山东省在 2020 年高考中选择的一个题型。
截至 2019 年 6 月的六次考试中，有四次是考查读后续写。
读后续写是新高考写作部分的重要考查项目。
读后续写考查目标综合了阅读理解和写作，是对考生语言综合能力的考查。
该题型不仅考查考生的语言表达能力，还考查考生对文章的理解能力、对文章结构的把握能力和对情节发展的判断构思能力。
考生只有在对原文准确深刻理解的基础上，对情节的发展做出判断，运用合适的构思能力，才能写出优秀的续写。
因此，读后续写具有较大的难度。
１．考生对故事类文章的理解以及根据原文的内容创作逻辑合理、语义连贯的结尾的能力。
２．续写内容的丰富性以及和原文的相符性。
３．续写内容对所给关键词语的覆盖情况。
４．续写的文章中应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。
浙江高考读后续写的主题语境基本都是“人与社会”。
有助于学生社会服务和人际沟通能力的培养。
读后续写的语篇都是故事性较强的记叙文。
1.读后续写今后在新高考中考查的概率还是很大的。
2．文章的难度会保持稳定。
故事设计将更能让学生发挥自己的想象力。
、评分原则1.本题总分为 25 分，按七个档次进行评分。
2.评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。
（1）创造内容的质量、续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。
（2）使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：（1）词数少于 120 的，酌情扣分。
（ 2）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
（3）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求第七档（ 22—25 分）——创造了新颖、丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高。
新高中英语概要写作答题技巧概要写作要求读懂所给的阅读材料，用自己的语言高度概括文章的主要内容和观点，有三个步骤：1阅读a.把握文章体裁。
概要写作的前提是要理解原文。
首先，通读原文，把握文章体裁、中心思想和整体结构，根据文章的体裁特点来决定内容的取舍，可以从以下方面的内容(见下表)入手。
▲不同体裁文章的要点b.画出主题句或关键词，主题句一般出现在段首或段尾。
在找到主题句后，要分析主题句的意义，进一步确定衬托主题句的一些关键词（组）如动词、名词等。
c.整合概括大意。
根据阅读时获取的信息、主题句或关键词(组)等，对相关的内容进行整合，理清各层次、要点之间的关系，用自己的语言把词(组)扩展成句，归纳出各段落的大意，也就是表达的要点。
2写作概要写作不是对原文的简单复述，而是在透彻理解原文的基础上，对原文进行高度的概括。
注意以下几点：a.准确。
准确理解原文包括对原文中每个要点及与之相关的“一些重要论据，句子的理解等。
概要写作必须绝对忠实于原文，既不能遗漏任何要点，也不能随意添加内容。
概要写作的时态顺应与原文的时态，顺序一致。
由于概要写作是转述别人的事情或观点，所以，不管原文使用何种人称概要写作一般都要用第三人称。
b.客观。
在进行概要写作时，要依据原文作者的观点，客观地转述文中的要点，不要把自己个人的观点和看法掺杂进去，不要使用“I think”和“I believe”等主观性的词句。
由于概要写作不允许照抄原文中的句子，因此，可采用句型转换、同义词转化、语态互换等手法将原文中的句子进行改头换面，达到“雁过不留痕”的效果。
如可用单个词汇替换具有相同语法功能的单词和词组：用determine 代替“make up ones mind”;用therefore和to等表示逻辑意义的连接词代替较长的词组“as a result”和“in order to”等。
c.简洁。
由于概要写作的词数有限，所以，可以采取削“枝”去“叶”的方法来减少词数。
怎样做，高考英语作文怎么拿高分?下面是给大家整理的高考英语作文怎么拿高分，供大家参阅!高考英语作文拿高分的方法英语作文经典必背句型1We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。
People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。
The information I've collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.从这几年我搜集的信息来看，这些知识并没有人们想象的那么有用。
Now， it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.现在，人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业的时候教给学生所有的知识。
This is a matter of life and death—a matter no country can afford to ignore.这是一个关系到生死的问题，任何国家都不能忽视。
For my part， I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons……我同意后者，有如下理由……Before giving my opinion， I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.在给出我的观点之前，我想看看双方的观点是很重要的。
纲要写作五例（附参照答案）第一章：读下边的短文，写一个大概60字的总结。
使用过电子烟的学生他们九年级开始的时候比其余人更简单开始抽传统香烟和其余烟草一项最新研究显示，将来一年内将推出新产品由国立卫生研究院资助。
电子香烟或电子烟经过呼吸把尼古丁输送到肺部加热含有尼古丁和其余物质的液体溶液产生喷雾的化学物质。
作为药物使用和心理健康检查的一部分在洛杉矶的高中生中，研究比较了222名学生开始抽烟的状况使用过电子烟，但没有其余烟草制品，2308人既没有吸过电子烟也没有吸过其余任何东西9月初初初检查时的烟草制品等级。
最先报告从未使用过的2530名学生在第6次和第12次治疗后，对烟草进行了随访评估月。
学生们被问及一世和过去六年-每个月使用电子烟或任何其余形式的烟草1产品。
在接受检查后的头六个月内，有30人死亡。
7以前吸过电子烟的人中有%开始吸电子烟烟草制品，如香烟和雪茄只有8.1%的人从未使用过电子烟。
在接下来的六个月里，直到10月初第二级，25.2%的电子烟使用者以前使用过烟草对比之下，只有9.3%的非用户。
“固然近来几年来青少年抽烟率有所降落，但这一点这项研究证明，我们应当持续亲密关注青少年抽烟模式，”NIDA主任noradvolkow医学博士说。
“父亲母亲和青少年应当认识到这一点电子烟的危害可能与电子烟不一样一般香烟的确有上瘾的危险。
”“娱乐性的电子烟使用愈来愈多在从未抽烟的青少年中很受欢迎博士，这项研究的第一作者。
“固然我们不可以判定电子烟的使用直接致使对于抽烟，这项研究惹起了人们的关注年青人电子烟使用量的增添最后可能致使抽烟有关疾病的流传。
”2【参照答案】一项新的研究表示，初期接触电子烟可能青少年抽烟的诱因（一）比较使用电子烟的学生之间的烟草使用启动经验和那些非用户已经作出，结果结果表示，中国的抽烟偏向明显增添前者。
跟着电子烟的流行，是的值得关注的是青少年的抽烟模式和行为考虑到电子香烟第二章：读下边的短文，写一个大概60字的总结。
2020年高考英语书面表达满分技巧(名师总结作文高分模板，考场上可以直接套用)书面表达开头及过渡词A.1. I'm Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Y ucai Middle School,2. I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China.3. I'm Li Hua, a student of Senior Three from Yucai Middle School.B.1. I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.2.I’m writing to invite you to the lecture on Chinese calligraphy which is...3. I am writing to inform you of something about the square dance in China, which is .../ ... I purchased on your website a fortnight ago.4. I’m writing to convey / extend my sincere gratitude to you for your hospitality.5. 1) I'm writing to apply for the position as a volunteer in the students' exchange program during the coming vacation.2) I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper.6. I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.7. I’m writing to express my apology to you for not writing you back in time.8. I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about /regarding...9. 1) I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15.2) I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.10. I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.11. I am writing this letter to report some of the problems and puzzles I encountered when learning the course of Business English.12. I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference,13. I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.14. I'd like to ask for your advice concerning...写作技法指导——创造良好开端[常用开头词汇]First and foremost, Firstly, First of all, At first, In the first place, Above all, To begin/start with,——顺势承上启下[常用顺承词汇]Additionally, Besides, In addition, What's more, Furthermore, Moreover,What's worse, Still less, To make matters worse, Worse still,——巧妙转折过渡[常用转折过渡词汇]However, On the contrary, On the other hand, Despite, In spite of, Regardless of ——完美结束全文[常用结尾词汇]Last but not least, In short, In brief, In conclusion, In a/one word, To sum up, Allin all, On the whole, In general三、写作指导多使用过渡性词语。
2020年高考英语作文满分策略技巧(名师总结高分策略，值得下载背诵)Abstract: In general, writing is a both difficult and complex process in which you have to forma new idea by using appropriate words and expressions. Meanwhile, you have to make sentences according to the grammatical rules. The former rule seems to be a burden bec ause it’s challenging to form a new idea or view,while the latter rule seems to be a small mistake in your sentences. Only by constant reading and polishing can you correct the mistakes in your writing.Howeverhard you think the writing is,seven writing strategies are available for your reference.摘要: 一般来说，写作是一个既困难又复杂的过程，在这个过程中，你必须用适当的词语和表达方式形成一个新的想法。
同时，你必须根据语法规则造句子。
前一条规则似乎是一种负担，因为形成一个新的想法或观点具有挑战性，而后一条规则似乎是你句子中的一个小错误。
只有不断地阅读和润色，才能纠正写作中的错误。
无论你认为写作是多么的困难，有七种写作策略可供你参考。
一、写作策略之一：写好一个段落。
一个段一个主题，一个主题有2-3三个细节或者论据来支撑主题，就像一棵树，有主干，有树叶和花儿来点缀才显得有生机有活力。
2020年高考英语作文高分技巧（精编）英语中，同一思想用不同句式表达，其效果会大不相同。
要想写出好的文章，就要不断地变化句子的结构形式。
l、长短句交替使用句子的长短是为表达思想服务的。
英语短句结构简单，意思明白具有生动活泼而又干脆利索的表达效果，而长句结构复杂，信息丰富，能表达成熟的思想与复杂的概念。
一味地使用长句或短句会使文章显得单调，乏味，从而影响文章的总体效果。
科学地交替使用长短句使句子结构变化多样，不仅给文章带来顿挫起伏的语言美感，而且可以受到理想的修辞效果。
请看下面的这段话：She returned to her office.There was a note under the door. It was from Mr May.He said he was waiting for her in the coffee room.And he bad not found her sister.Hewas sorry to have missed her.这段话用了一连串的短句，读起来单调呆板，平淡无味。
为使文字更加生动，意思更加明确可改为：When she returned to her office，the found a note from Mr May under the door.He said he was waiting forher in the coffee room and hadnt found her sister yet.Headded that he was sorry to have missed her.修改后三个句子长短不一，读起来就给人以不同的感觉。
又如《大学英语》第一册第十课 Going Home，当汽车驶至 Brunsnick，车上的年轻人看见黄手帕时，出现了以下这两行文字：Then，suddenly，all of the young people were up out of thelr seats，screamlng andshouting and cryin, doing small dances of joy.All except Vlngo.这两句话一长(23个词)一短(3个词)，彼此衬托互为凸现。
高中英语高考作文之概要写作有答案高中英语高考作文之概要写作有答案在日常学习、工作和生活中，说到作文，大家肯定都不陌生吧，作文是经过人的思想考虑和语言组织，通过文字来表达一个主题意义的记叙方法。
一篇什么样的作文才能称之为优秀作文呢？下面是小编精心整理的高中英语高考作文之概要写作有答案，欢迎大家借鉴与参考，希望对大家有所帮助。
高中英语高考作文之概要写作有答案1My wife has watched me write, blog and make speeches for a few years now. I’ve encouraged her to do her own video blog (vlog), too, because she is always watching them, but she hasn’t been interested in the spotlight. Now that enough time has passed, she is ready to go for it! Angelika is a great cook, so she is going to do a cooking show where she doesn’t have to be on camera. I am just thrilled that she has found a passion to pursue in a way that works for her. I’m smart enough to step back and let her go at her own pace (节奏). I know that being there for emotional support or however she needs me is important. Now that my wife will have a studio worthy of her talents and personality, she will only make the kitchen look better. Part of me hopes that I will spend the rest of my life watching and tasting her creations. When you start to express your creative drive, it can be a wonderful ride, a bit of a roller coaster at times, but worth the price of admission. When the love of your life takes the ride with you, and starts to drive, it’s a pretty cool way to travel through life.I am at my best when being creative, whether in front of a keyboard or a live audience. I have always encouraged creative answers to life. There is always more than one right way to dosomething. Yes, public attention in our social media world has become a marker of success, but it means way more when you are sending a positive message. Helping people enjoy their lives a little more is a big deal. This project will not just make her happy but make us closer. I am aware that this is her project, not mine.I will answer any questions she asks but be careful about offering unwanted advice. What she doesn’t know she will learn. You never want to take that process away from anyone.Summary writing 概要写作Please write a summary of the article in about 60 words.参考答案：I encouraged my wife to do a vlog. She decided to do a cooking show, which made me happy for her because she found a passion to pursue. This will deepen our bond. Expressing one’s creative drive is so cool that I not only do it myself but also encourage other people to do so.高中英语高考作文之概要写作有答案2Paws walk across my keyboard, and my cat Monty nests himself on my lap, unaware of the world beyond our garden fence (栅栏). In these uncertain times of the pandemic, the company of animals is needed more than ever. To the delight of our cats, dogs and all pets in between, staying at home is an opportunity to give them our undivided (一心一意的) attention. In return, they provide us with a much-needed source of joy. Pet ownership (饲养宠物) is well known to help settle anxiety, reduce loneliness and lift moods. Even as we spend an unprecedented (空前的) amount of time in isolation, pets are still acting as gateways (渠道) to building a sense of community as people share pictures of their beloved companions (伙伴) online in an effort to raise spirits.It is in such times that we realize just how much our pets matter as part of the family. As a long-term cat lady, I have never questioned that a pet is a cherished (珍爱的) member of the household. Our pets can be as valuable as our human family members in teaching us about ourselves and how to approach the world. In short, our animals’ love and loyalty are unique. As such, the death of a pet can feel as sad as that of a close friend or family member. The grief that accompanies it remains something frequently seen as shameful, and many admit to requesting time off work without being honest about why. However, with the loss of a pet comes an emptiness where their unconditional devotion once was, and moments in the day once dedicated to their care become suddenly unoccupied. It is a very real feeling that only provides further proof to their status as family. Vet (兽医) and author James Herriot wrote, “If having a soul means being able to feel love, loyalty and gratitude, animals are better off than a lot of humans.” Pets are an additional member of the family, and now more than ever, they can serve as models for the kind of basic humanity we ought to be extending to a destabilized (不稳定的.) world. Summary writing 概要写作Please write a summary of the article in about 60 words.参考答案：Pets and their owners mutually need each other. Pets long for their owners’ attention while their owners enjoy their company. Raising a pet has many benefits, particularly during tough times. Pets lift people’s spirits and make them feel good. Their love and loyalty to their owners make them as important as family members. They show us the humanity that ought to be extended to the world.高中英语高考作文之概要写作有答案3My neighbor Stu is a car guy. He toys with (摆弄) details and drives his new Range Rover (路虎揽胜) with such pride; it’s like a member of the family. On most days, rain or shine, you can find him working on his car. It’s his thing, and I appreciate it, but it kind of makes me look bad because our SUV has seen much better days. That being said, I’m not a car guy anymore. Still, when Stu looks over his baby, I’ve often been tempted to say, “Next time you’re doing your car, let me know, and I’ll bring mine over.”Well, recently, there was Stu out front next to his Rover. He said, “Let’s do it now,” so I pulled my classic into his driveway, and we started going at it like it was the first car either of us ever owned. Stu got out the blower (鼓风机), and I followed him with a rag (抹布) and cleaning and conditioning (保养) stuff that I’ve had in the garage. It took us a couple of hours, but the result was a great gift for my wife. Plus, I was now friends with my neighbor. We’ve always had a neighborly relationship. As we talked a bout cars, music and boats, we bonded. I get him: He likes things that go fast, and I appreciate the rush because I once chased it myself. Finding things in common makes for good relationships, and from that, you can build a friendship. That couple of hours was a great connecting experience. I’ve dropped off a thank-you note because I want him to know that he has made a difference in my life. My day was better because he extended himself to me. I look forward to seeing how our friendship evolves. We have been there for each other in a couple of neighborhood emergencies, but now there is a deeper connection. You always want to know your neighbors. It’s nice when you can count on others to do the neighborly thing and be there for you when necessary. Knowing that just makes your life a little bit nicer, kind of like mycar.Summary writing 概要写作Please write a summary of the article in about 60 words.参考答案：My neighbor Stu and I have built a friendship by doing things together. Recently, we worked on our cars together and also had a pleasant talk. It was a great connecting experience, through which we got to know each other better. We have helped each other in several neighborhood emergencies. It’s nice to know that there is someone you can count on when necessary.高中英语高考作文之概要写作有答案4The older I get, the more I learn that our quality of life isn’t dependent on what we’ve been given. Rather, our quality of life is dependent on what we choose to create. Every day, we are creating our life. We are choosing how to spend our time, what words to say out loud and how to care for ourselves. And with all these choices, we are creating our life. Creating a good life requires you to choose how you spend your time well. You should be doing things that give you pleasure or satisfaction. But first, you have to figure out what it is that you enjoy doing. For instance, I enjoy reading, writing and ballroom dancing. On days when I’m able to do at least one of those activities, I feel quite good. However, if my free time gets taken up by serving other people’s interests, I feel frustrated.That is why you have to guard your free time. We all have parts of our day that are spent doing things that we have to do, such as our job or schoolwork.So, our limited free time is precious indeed. But our free time is where we have the opportunity to create our life. As a result, the questions you should be asking yourself every day are these:What kind of day am I creating today? Will I spend my time arguing with others and feeling frustrated? Or, will I do something with my time that I truly enjoy, such as reading a book or going dancing with my friends? We have so many beautiful choices when it comes to spending our free time. The bottom line is this: We choose what kind of life we will live. How we choose to spend our free time is in our hands. Whether we spend our time with kind or unkind people is in our hands. And the choices that we make determine the kind of life that we live. This week, consider whether you’re maki ng the right choices so that you can create a better life for yourself. Make sure you plan your free time carefully. A good life doesn’t just happen –it’s something that we must create.Summary writing 概要写作Please write a summary of the article in about 60 words.参考答案：The quality of our life isn’t dependent on what we’ve been given but what we choose to create. By making the right choices and spending our time well, we can create a better life for ourselves.。
3. 高考概要写作高分技巧(2019·浙江高考) 阅读下面短文, 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, “We’ve gone to the opposite extremes a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict”. By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they’re building their children’s confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that’s insincere, make kids afr aid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents’ praise has put them.Still, don’t go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they’re not good enough or that you don’t care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. “We shouldespecially recognize our children’s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal”, say s Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. “One thing to remember is that it’s the process not the end product that matters. ”Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if h e’s out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate( 相称的)to the amount of effort our child has put into it. 练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局文体议论文时态一般现在时原文分析第一段:指出父母过多表扬孩子的弊端第二段:指出表扬得太少也不好第三、四段:给出建议, 要根据孩子实际付出的努力而非最终的结果来表扬孩子Step 2:头脑风暴字字珠玉(1)美词:extreme, enthusiasm, insufficient praise, an appropriate amount of, based on, rather than(2)佳句①Experts warn about two extremes when it comes to parents’ praise for their children.②Therefore, the given advice is that an appropriate amount of praise should be given based on process rather than the result.Step 3:斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:专家警告家长们不要太多或太少表扬孩子。
一般表达:Experts warn parents not to praise their children too much or too little.句式升级(时间状语从句)专家警告说, 父母对孩子的表扬存有两个极端。
Experts warn about two extremes when it comes to parents’ praise for their children.要点2:因此, 家长们应该基于过程而不是结果表扬孩子。
一般表达:Therefore, parents should praise children based on the process rather than the result.句式升级(表语从句, 被动语态)因此, 给出的建议是, 适当的表扬应该基于过程而不是结果。
Therefore, the given advice is that an appropriate amount of praise should be given based on process rather than the resultStep 4:衔接过渡斐然成篇Experts warn about two extremes when it comes to parents’ praise for their children. On the one hand, too much praise might lead to children’s lack of enthusiasm to explore new things, for they’re afraid they won’t meet parents’ expectations. On the other hand, insufficient praise might let children consider efforts pointless. Therefore, parents should praise children based on the process rather than the result.1读下面短文, 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
If you’ve heard people say they are having “high tea” in some exclusive, smart hotel lobby, you can smile to yourself, knowing that “high tea” is seldom served to tourists with fancy lodging.“High tea” doesn’t refer to the “fancy” fixings, the elegant silver, the pure-white table linens, or the luxury surroundings of a high-class salon. It is actually the main meal of the day, served between 6:00 and 7:00 p. m. The “high” in the phrase comes from the time of the day, meaning “late” or “high” in the afternoon.For a long time, the lower and middle classes could afford only one meal per day. In order to make it through to the next day, the main meal would be taken after work and would consist of anything from the remnants of lunch to the very basic food staples of the time:a slice of bread, a hunk of cheese, a piece of sausage, all of which were eaten while drinking their evening tea. However, as the country advanced, the common people got wealthier, and evening meals began to be supplemented with heavier foods like roast beef, fish, eggs, vegetables, and potatoes.Sometimes referred to as a “meat tea” , or a “ham tea”, the term “high tea” has been replaced with the modern equivalent of dinner.In contrast, “low tea”, or “afternoon tea” is served earlier in the afternoon, usually between 4:00 and 5:00. Originally started by Anna, the Duchess of Bedford, the tradition began when Anna needed a little sustenance to tide her over.Tidbits were served with tea, and Anna invited friends to share conversation over these small snacks before the affair of the evening meal.In reality, people who have beautiful “teas” with fancy pastries and cakes nowadays, are partaking of the “low tea” or “light tea” that began so many years ago in Anna’s time.While the refreshments are pretty, they are “light” and the emphasis of the “afternoon tea” is on the presentation of the tea, and the conversation of the guests.【参考范文】As the filling between two days by the poor historically, high tea is now the main meal, served between 6:00 and 7:00 p. m. (要点1) In contrast, afternoon tea was once served by Anna, the Duchess of Bedford, before the big meal to her guests with snacks. (要点2 ) Gradually, with t he improvement of people’s living standards, dinner grew out of high tea, and people are focusing on conversation over afternoon tea. (要点3)2阅读下面短文, 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
