高中英语专项训练《短文改错》

新短文改错练习题8篇1 When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other when fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.2 Today is the happy day in this holiday. Although I was very tired, but I found myself in these busy days. I am afraid of taken a bus usually, the awful smell of the bus drive I mad, make me feel carsick. But today I did feel carsick. I can defeat carsickness finally. At night I went out with an old friend who I ever like him, but all of us were busy in the examination at the high school that we hadn't been together. I was such surprised as I received his calling. At first, I thought we would never meet before we graduated. Thank him gave me a happy day!3 Dancing is my hobby and otherwise, when I heard there would be a get-together to celebrate the 60th National Day in the evening of October 1st, I signed up for the performance. Luckily, I become a member of the dance group. During the summer vacation, I practiced hard with others regardless of the cold weather. After the new school term began, when I carried on with the practice while I was working hard at my studies. And finally, the great day came. In the evening, thousands people gathered in the splendid Tiananmen Square. By the bright lights shining around, we were dancing to the pleasant music happily and joyful. Beautiful fireworks in the clear night sky added to my excited. It was realty an unforgettable experience.4 Most families in China hoped their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. So do teachers in school! Many children are given so much homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No wonder such many children are tired of lessons. Some even attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our government is making out a plan to solve the education problems.5 When Jack bowed to someone, he always did it much too quickly. You needn’t wait any longer after he finished nod his head. So he was blamed for no manner. But some warmhearted men taught him, "When you bow to somebody next time, you can count 'January, February, March, until December. Then you could lift your body up. Thus, the ceremony will be very perfect.”The next day, he met his uncle. He did as the men told. The bow was too long that it made his uncle escape away soon with a surprising look . When Jack looked down, he found his uncle gone . So he asked the passer, "In what month did he go away?"6 Our government is trying hard to build an energy-saving society. It is somebody’s duty to work hard and reach this goal. However, not everybody has realized the important of it. Take our school for example. Sometime we can see that lights and computers are still on after class. Some students even forget to turn on the tap after using it and have water running all the time. Our papers are printed on only one side, causing much waste. It’s time we did something to avoid this kind of waste. Firstly, make sure that all the light and other electric facilities turned off when we leave the rooms. Try to forming the habit of turning off the tap immediately after using it. What’s more, papers should not be printed on both sides and reused if possible.[来源: In a word, if everybody has the aware of reducing the waste and takes action, we can contribute toour society7 The main purpose of newspapers are to provide news. If you examine newspapers closely, you would find there are all sort of news: accidents, floods, fires, wars, sports, books, etc. The news cover everything happens to people and their surroundings. Sometimes there is some news which is very interested. A news report is usual short, except when it is very important, but has a plenty of information. It is also writing in short paragraphs. The first paragraph is in the fact a summary of the news. It gives all the necessary information, what, when, where, how, and why.8 First, I’d like to thank you for your reminding, although I don’t agree with your view which students should spend more time on their lessons instead of read novels．Indeed, reading novels takes up some of the time that should spent on lessons, but it’ll make us know what hard life is．Besides, by reading novels we can gain what we can’t learn from our textbook．Of course, reading novels has it’s shortcomings．Novels that have wrong ideas will make us to do something wrong．Maybe, in your eyes, the disadvantages of reading novels outweighs the advantages．And in my opinion, reading novels is just as another pair of eyes, which broadens my horizon答案1 1. friend改为friends【解析】考查名词数的变化。

《高考短文改错--专项训练30篇—-及答案解析》1。

短文改错1. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉.修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2。

只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起)不计分.Dear Peter，As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples。

One of the most popular words are Dianzan，which is often use when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing，you mean that they will do whatever they liked。

The phrase Miaosha first came on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it’s wide used when you achieve your purpose in very short time。

If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich。

Passage 1 It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street ． Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road ． The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road ． He fell with a cry ．The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed speed heading heading heading west west ． I noticed noticed the the the driver driver driver was was was young young young woman woman woman wore wore wore a a a pair pair pair of of of glasses glasses glasses and and and the the plate number was AC864． After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital ． Passage 2 I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV .Passage 3 Dear sir, Last Last year year year I I I buy buy buy a a a refrigerator refrigerator refrigerator in in in your your your store store store on on on Chang Chang Chang An An An road. road. road. W e W e all all all like like like shape shape shape of of of the the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much. Customer Li Ming Passage 4 I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place.We place.We listen listen listen to to to my my my CDs together CDs together and and soon become soon become best best frie frie friends. nds. nds. Three Three Three years years years ago, ago, ago, Li Li Li Ming’s Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other. Passage 5 I feel quite sure the chemistry test that we’re going to have tomorrow. Th e teacher has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been good ．In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two two hours hours review review pages pages pages 115-140 115-140 115-140 tonight. tonight. tonight. W e W e are are are going going going to to to devote devote devote another another another hour hour hour to to to practise practise practise with with some of the sample(实例) problem. Then I will ready for the test. Passage 6 Dear Susan, I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot pot restaurant restaurant restaurant for for for dinner dinner dinner and and and we'll we'll we'll talk talk talk with with with our our our plan plan plan for for for the the the weekend weekend weekend over over over dinner. dinner. dinner. Having Having Having a a pleasant trip and see you Friday. Y ours, Zhang Ming Passage 7 Some Some day day day I I I happened happened happened to to to find find find a a a chatting chatting chatting room room room in in in my my my QQ, QQ, QQ, there there there people people people were were were chatting chatting chatting in in English. English. I I I tried tried tried to to to chat chat chat with with with some some some of of of them. them. them. To To To my my my surprised, surprised, surprised, I I I found found found the the the oral oral oral English English English of of of some some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely. Passage 8 If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success. Passage 9 Dear Mary, I receive your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you you have lost interests. have lost interests. I’m afraid I couldn’t agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. today. It It It will will will be be be important important important tool tool tool in in in our our our future future future work. work. work. Beside, Beside, Beside, it it it is is is becoming becoming becoming more more more and and and more more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I’ m looking forward to hearing good news from you. Y ours, Li Hua Passage 10 Dear Ralph, I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the streetyellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Roadthe car hit the man while she was crossing the roadand drive off at full speed heading west wore a pair After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after  view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am . But I really can’t accept her ideas.study. She also thinks it is bad for my eyeworks. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at\ Passage 3 Dear sir, Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like∧shape of the bought the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it But ∧turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter is(或去it) becomes worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask disappointed for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will ∧at home this weekend.Please man/ person be/stay call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very Thank much. Customer Li Ming Passage 4 I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my friend’’s to friend’s place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming listened parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer me a weeks holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but beautiful and had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came e ∧∧see me every day. Then his father has to ’t see each other much. but changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we havenseen we’’ve kept writing to each other. wePassage 5 ing to have tomorrow. The teacher I feel quite sure∧the chemistry test that we’re goabout/of has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been exactly have good．In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. We have reviewing are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem. practicing problems Then I will ∧ready for the test. be I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't findto the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday. Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even  Olympic Games, I will at first improve my If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second,I will learn more about the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Dear Mary, I receive ( received)your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my my research research research work work work in in in the the the laB laB ．But But to to to my my my greatly(great)surprise greatly(great)surprise greatly(great)surprise you you you say say say you you you will will will give give give up up learn(learning) English. The reason is because (that)you have not done well in it recently and you have have lost lost lost interests( interests( interests( interest). interest). I’m I’m afraid afraid afraid I I couldn’t (can’t)agree with with you you you . . . I I I know know know it it it is is difficulty(difficult) to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be （加（加 an ）important tool in our future work. Beside( Besides), it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be (去be)succeed. Do remember that where there is a will there is a way. I’ am looking forward to hearing good news from you. Passage 10 Dear Ralph, I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, a but now I ∧changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one have to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find W e happily they are not willing to be with me now. They d on’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I colder times felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this left sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t don’t I win true friendship? I win true friendship? can can’’t。

高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇（附答案及解析）短文改错（每篇文章共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

（1）Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burs t into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.（2）Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine（3）Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.（4）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.（5）Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua（6）Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll me et you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John（7）Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class S ix, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with someeffectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance. Thank you.Yours,Wang Min（8）Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighter s will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.（9）Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may al so get others confusing.（10）Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.（11）I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.（12）We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!（13）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.（14）Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua（15）You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on, "Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time，I woke up and found me still in bed!（16）It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. Itis so a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly，I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.（17）I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner（执业者）. One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course” I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they of fered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.（18）Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.（19）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many home work. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（20）I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.（21）When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I hadstudied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.（22）I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.（23）Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told t he artist he didn’t want to any sha dows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.（24）I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..（25）I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.（26）This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for s everal month.”（27）Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market．After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital．After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death．As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures．Nor do they care about which happens to consumers．They shall be charged by law．Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua（28）Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua（29）Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping（30）Dear Lucy,I am very excited t o learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet（31）Abby，How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to stu dy in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes，Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold t owards me. Many time, Iwanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone！I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family．But when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to her．So I disliked her and could n’t get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time．I tried to find a proper time to apologize．When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outside．In the way to the playground．I bought much snacks for her．Then we began chat．When we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gently．She was silently，so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly．But after while she said：“Don’t say that．In my memory，you are always friendly．”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popu lar, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)Volunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday，the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas．Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should beresponsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好，常见类型要记牢。

高一英语短文改错专题练习（ 10 篇）多一个词：把多余的词用斜线 （\）划掉。

（）缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 （A ），在下写出该加的词。

错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在单词下写出改正后的词。

（大小写、拼写错误不改）AWhile travelling to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. A well-dressing man on the bus helped me greatly. He took me off the bus, found out where the doctor and took m 'est o ftfhic e r.e himself. The next day, he came to visit me. I didn ' t speak French well, so I can him ver 'y mt utaclhk.wHiothwever, even if we couldn ' t talwk,ebcuotuld communicate. I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned that communication can take place without much actual language at all.B 介绍香港Hong Kong lies in southeast of China. It covers a area of one thousand and ninety-two square kilometer. It has a population of over six millions. Hong Kong belong to China all the time in history. In the early nineteen century, China was weak, and Hong Kong was so good place that many foreign countries want to have it. In the end the British imperialists （倾略者 ） took Hong Kong with force, but ruled （统治） it for one and a half centuries.CA few months after returning the US from Germany, I took part in a college course in French. Since I havelearned to speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language. At the first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise,in which he would say one word or two in French, and each student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him why. “ I find it great funs. It ' I ' ve heard aAnmerican speak French with a German accent. ” he explained it.DI received your letter was dated April l6 the day before yesterday. All of our family greatly delighted （ 开心地） to learn how you are getting along very well with your lessons. Time passes quickly. After dozens of days, you finish 'thlle middle school. What pleases us most is that you do very well to make up your mind to enter for the college entrance examination this summer. What wonderful it is ! Dad, as well as Mom and I, is with you. We wished you to make better use of your time. The full preparations you make, s thefirsthe surer of suc cess you 'll certain be.During the weekend I traveled by air for the first time in my life. I generally travel in train and bus. It is both cheaper and safe. But this was a short journey. In the beginning I did not feel very happily, but this feeling did not last longer. The journey was very exciting. I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The views of mountains, fields and rivers were interested. I enjoyed my short and comfortably journey very much. This experience has shown that traveling in air is actually the safest way of make journeys.FDear Jim,I'd like to telling you something about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.6, which was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best.Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receiving your letter.Yours, LiPing GA group of scientists were planning to go to countryside to do a scientific research in order to find out that whether the environment of the country had polluted ．On arrival ，they started to check the air and water．To our surprise，they found how terribly the situation was ．They could see the serious pollution ．Look into the cause ，they persuade the government to pass the law to protect environment and kept the balance of nature ．Now everything has changed ．Birds are singing while tree and grass are waving．H “火灾”One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately.She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was badly burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.II went to see the film after supper. On my way to the cinema. I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place here in the past few years and she had told me something about her country. Although I missed the film, but I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practiced my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would not have been able to help him.JI live in a small town in the south. This is typical Chinese town. There were only two main streets which across in the middle of the town. Around the town stand a high wall, which was built long ago,and it is still possibly to walk along it. No motorcars allowed in the business streets, which makes shopping very easier and safer. On warm days some small restaurants put table and chairs outside the houses to let people to take a rest and have some tea or ice-cream.There are no tall buildings but some beautifully parks.KThe main purpose of newspapers are to provide news. If you examine newspapers closely, you would find there are all sort of news: accidents, floods, fires, wars, sports, books, etc. The news cover everything happens to people and their surroundings. Sometimes there is some news which is very interested. A news report is usual short, except when it is very important, but has a plenty of information. It is also writing in short paragraphs. The first paragraph is in the fact a summary of the news. It gives all the necessary information, what, when, where, how, and why.LI like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere witha bike. Ride gives me not only exercise but also pleasure. I use my bike mostly on summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can very unpleasant in winter when it is cold and rain is pouring down. It can also be very danger. Of course I will be very careful on my bike. In facts, accidents are not the only problem. One day I went to school and come back to find his front wheel was missing. It was a long walk to the repairer 's shop. Now I have two strong lock.MToday is Sunday, The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life.At about 9:00a.m, I go to the bookstore with my friends, there was a lot of new books, I didn 'ktnow which one to buy, because these books were all useful to me. At last, I choose two.At 10:00, we went to the cinema, the film calling Titanic was very popular. It took us about 3 hours to see. Having seen the film, and everyone was deeply moved. Some friends even burst out tears. From the story,I understand that love is noble and valuable. That 'as really wonderful film, It is very worth seeing again.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happy!NLast Sunday morning when I got up, to my great surprising,I found that we had a big sno wfall. I was very excited because it was a long time that I had ever seen such a heavy snowfall.So I decided to call my friends to go out to play snow together.We made up some snowmen and rolled some snowballs we enjoyed the fun of playing fighting game. Just then we noticed that the buses and cars move very slowly because the heavy snow. So we went to clean the snow so as to help the traffic go safely. After the all morning 'hsard work,we cleaned the snows on the road, and we went home happily.OWhen I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw asecond-hand bicycle that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other when fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.PMost families in China hoped their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. So do teachers in school! Many children are given so much homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No wonder such many children are tired of lessons. Some even attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldn 'wte draw lesson from the accidents? Now our government is making out a plan to solve the education problems.Keys:A) 71. traveled-traveling 72. well-dressing---well-dressed 73. office 后加 was74. 去 to75.can '--- couldn ' 76.去 but 77. myself- my 78. to — for79. healthy--- health 80. VB) 81. a T an 82.V 83. home 前加 at 84. informationsinformation85 . e-mailse-mail 86. Beside T Besides 87.去掉 the 88. help T helps 89.第一个 make ^ have 90. more T muchC) 81. returning 后加 to 82. have t had 83. good t well 84. interested t interesting 85. V86.one t a 87. their t his 88. 去掉 to 89. funs t fun90. 去掉 it D) 81. was 前加 that 或去掉 was 82. greatly 前加 are 83. 去掉 how 84. After t In85. 去掉 the 86. V 87. what t how 88. wished t wish 89. full t fuller 90. certain t certainlyE) 1.在 the first time 前力口 for 2. and T or 3. safe T safer 4. happily T happy 5. Ion ger T long 6.cloud t clouds7.interested t interesting 8. V 9. in t by 10. make t makingF) 1 、去掉 more 2、 holding 改 held 3、正确 4、 attend 改 attending 5、 finish 改 finished6、去掉 in7、success 前力口 a8、my 改 our9、winner 改 winners 10、that 改 whatG) 81 ．countryside 前加 the 82．去掉 that 83． polluted 前加 been 84． our 改 their 85．terribly 改 terrible86．look 改 looking 87 ．persuade 改 persuaded 88 ．kept 改 keep 89．正确 90．tree 改 treesJ) 61.typical 前加 a 62.去掉 not 63.across T cross 64.stand T stands 65.possibly T possible66.allowed 前加 are 67.very T much 68.table T tables 69.去掉 to 70.VH) 76.as---when 77.rings---rang 82.In---To 83. V 84.about 去掉 78.She---It 79.a---the 80.was full85.which---that 81.opening ---openedI) 81 、 film 前的 the 改为 a 82、 lost 前加 had 83、 see 前加 to 84、 go 改为 going85、去掉 been 86、去掉 had87、去掉 but 88、正确 89、 on 改为 at 90、 him 改为 her。

高三英语《短文改错》专项练习题（含答案）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

1．I have been playing volleyball since three years before. It started when a teacher set up volleyball club in our school, hope that students would join in the sport. The club was very popular that many students signed up for it. To be honestly, at that time I just foll owed them without thinking. We practiced together, on every Saturday morning. However, some of the students soon began to get boring and dropped out of the club. So I found I was quite enjoying it and I carry on. After training for some time, I was sel ected for the school team. What excited and proud I was!2．Dear Li Lei,I’m proud to tell you what you heard of is true.As is proved, that some UK primary schools will use 36 math textbooks, exercise books, and teachers’ guid es publishing by the Shanghai Century Publishing (SCP). The textbooks will be used in both Shanghai or the UK at a same time. It is the first time Chinese textbooks had been adopted by a devel oped country in so a systematic and large-scale way. The textbooks have listed as a sample by the National Centre for Excellence in the Teaching of Mathematics of the UK. Without SCP’s permission, British publisher Harper Collins, the UK publisher of the textbooks, will be responsibly for the promotion of the schoolbooks.Don’t we take pride in you Chinese?Yours,Li Hua 3．Dear John，Thank you very much for your recommendation. It’s great opportunity to take part in the English speech competition. Therefore, I'm afraid that I can't attend it. My mother had been ill for several days and I have to take care of her in my spare time, because I d on't have enough time to prepare for the speech competition.I strongly recommend my friend Zhang Ming, who I think he is the most suitable person to participate for this competition. He is good at English and speaks fluently English. Besides, he is a member of the wild animal protection club and devotes much time to care animals. I'm sure his rich experiences of animal protection and perfect speaking English will enable him to achieve success.Sorry again for my absence.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua4．You have offered me l ots of helps. I still remember I had difficulties learn English. It was hard for me memorize English words and understand what other were saying. However, I am luck to meet you. Firstly, you advised me to listen more but read more, which real helped me. Besides, you suggested that you shoul d watch for English movies and sing English songs. You also advised me to form the habit of reading al oud in the morning. As a result, I finally make great progress.5．Are students' grades matter of personal privacy? Shoul d test scores be made public?Opinions vary from person to person. I think it’s good to recognize for the top scorers —they will be inspired and keep try to maintain their high grades. There are some disadvantages, therefore, for the l ow performers. But competition is a life skill that need to be learned to be successful in the really world. The earlier, the best. Regardl ess of the type of competition, it will keep them motivating. It is not just about winning or losing, but it is also about when they get involved, enjoy the process and improve them.6．My grandpa used to be a teacher who is retired now. He has been living the busy and active life, going online, writing articles for newspapers, but attending academic conferences all over the country. He also has many hobby, such as growing fl owers at home, collecting stamps and coins and especial drinking tea. There are many different tea sets and almost all kinds tea in his home, most of that I can’t name.My g randpa is so very crazy about tea that he can’t live without enjoying tea several times a day. He once told nee he would be sleepy with tea. I often help making tea and drink together with me. I l ove my grandpa.7．Three years ago, I went to a boarding school. The reason for my attend ed such a school was that my parents was very busy. They often went abroad on business but had no time to take care of myself. Besides, they thought I ought to learn to independent. Honest speaking, the school life does benefit me a lot. I not only l earned some ways to solve problem in my own but also learned how to get along with others. But that I treasure most now is the friendship that I devel oped into at that time. How I miss that wonderful time!8．I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown, he came to China for the first time, to the Great Wall last weekend. Having tol d about the history of the Great Wall, he was amazing at thisworld wonder. He was fascinated by the beauty of the Great Wall, so I took photos of himself, which woul d be a good memory for him. At the top, there was an activity about environmentally protection. Mr. Brown was so interested in protect the environment that he was eager to join in them. Both the Great Wall or the warm-hearted Chinese people deeply impress him. He d ecid ed to visit more place of interest when free.9．One day, I was cooking in the kitchens when the tel ephone rang. I went to answer it immediate. It was my close friend, Lisa. When they were talking on the phone, a fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was badly burnt. I was rather worrying. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the wind ows and then went out of the house. With my surprise, two fire engines were outsid e my house. I was tol d the firemen that it was my careless cook which caused the heavy smoke.10．It is essential to take an useful summer vacation after the exam. There are many kinds of activity for us to take part. First, we can visit our relatives and friends or spend a happily time with our family. Second, seeing a film, listening to music or hang out with our friends will also be excited. Third, we shoul d take more exercise to keep healthy. What’s more, we’d better to review what we had learned at school. Finally, it is necessary of us to do some housework, that can help our parents a l ot. Above all, I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation.11．I live in a city and frequently notice the trash throwing rand omly on the sides of the roads. Every time I take my d og for a walk and go outside for something else, I am happy that to pick up at l east one piece of trash. Although it seems that this small act won t make a differ, it trulymakes me feel good about me for helping out.If we all do this small thing just one a day,we'll be taking part helping the planet. Gradually，our worl d may become the cl eaner and better place. I hope this inspired even one person to pick up the rubbishes.12．Dear Sir, I am a stud ent from the near school. Here I want to report the environmental situation for you. There used to many green trees and all kind of fl owers in our school all the year round. The school looks like a beautiful garden and we had a clean studying environment. And everything has changed since your chemical factory was built a year before. Every day it produces lots of waste water and harm gases. The terrible pollution has been d one great harm to our health. We all expect you factory can take measures to stop the pollution soon.13．I watch TV until 12 o’clock, so I couldn’t go over my lessons. This morning I got up very late that I had to go to school without breakfast in hurry, but I was still late for the first class. When I entered the classroom, the maths teacher had to stop explain an important problem, and all the eyes were fixed upon me. My face turned red. Something even worse was happened to me in English class. The teacher asked me recite the text. However, I could say nothing and sorry, for I did not spend some time preparing my lessons. The teacher looked at me with his coldly eyes. I stood at my bench without daring to raise my head. How a terrible day I had! I will never d o anything like this.14．After read your advertisement, I want to offer yourself for the position. I’m twenty years old, male, 1.78 meters tall, strong and health. And I am going to graduate from Nanjing University this year. I had learned English for ten years. My speaking English is very good and I can write good article. I have won several prizes in English contests. I have been made agreat number of inventions, most of them have been put into practice. But I can use the computer skillfully. If I can get the job, I’ll do all I can do it well．Thank you for your kindness.15．My parents and I spent half a month in New York last year. We went to there in autumn. We think it is best season to visit America. The weather is usually cool or there aren’t too many tourist in October. We stayed in a hotel in the center of the city. It was conveniently as we travelled most on foot. We couldn’t understand the bus routes, and my parents didn’t like travell ed by und erground. I went to look at the places that all tourists went to see. We went shopping in Times Square and spend too much money. What we like most were going to the theater. We d on’t have the chance to see so wond erful plays at home.16．I have worked from ages 17 to now（I am 60 this year）, and I’ve really enjoy my career in IT. One week after l eave school, I started to work. Now I do feel that my work has shaped myself in many ways.At some point soon, I will retire— and I am terrifying! I have no idea that I will d o with all that time or why I will d o it. I am happy married and have a 21-year-old son. My wife and I can travel and I can read book. There are operas to enjoy it and restaurants to try, but this isn’t going to get me out bed at a reasonable time!17．This summer holiday, I go to a seasid e city with my family. We got there by air. It is a very beautiful and modern city, where impressed us a lot. On the first day, we took a bus to a place calling the Sea Park. There were such many different kinds of fishes that I couldn’t believe in my eyes. On the second day, we went swimming, and we all enjoyed ourselves. During the next two days, we went to some tourist spot, shopping and taking photos. Several days late,we left the city. Although we were tiring on our way home, we felt happily about the holiday. What unforgettable experience!参考答案1．1. before→ago2.up后添加a3.hope→hoping4.very→so5.honestly→honest6.去掉on7.boring→bored8.So→But9.carry→carried10.What→How2．3．1. great前加a 2. Therefore→ However 3. had→ has 4. because →so 5. 去掉he 6. participate 后的for改为in 7 . fluently→ fluent 8. care→ caring 9. experiences→ experience 10. speaking →spoken4．第一句：helps→help第二句：learn→learning第三句：在me后加to；第四句：other→others第五句：luck→lucky第六句：but→and；第七句：real→really第八句：you→I；第九句：去掉for第十句：make→made5．1. matter前加a 2. 去掉recognize后的for 3. try→trying 4. therefore→ however 5. need→ needs 6. really→ real 7. best → better 8. motivating → motivated 9. when→ how 10. them→ themselves6．7．1. attended →attending2. parents后的was →were3. b usiness后的but →and4. myself →me5. independent前加be6. Honest →Honestly7. does →did8. in my own的in →on9. I treasure 前的that →what10. 去掉developed后的into8．hewho;Having后加been;amazing →amazed;himself →him;environmentally →environmental;protect →protecting;join后去掉in；or → and;impress →impressed;place →places9．10．1. an 改为a 2. activity 改为activities 3. take part 后加in 4. happily 改为happy5. hang 改为hanging6. excited 改为exciting7.删掉we’d better 后的to8. had 改为have9. of 改为for 10. that 改为which11．th rowing→thrown and→or去掉that differ→differenceme→myself one→once part后面加上in the→ainspired→inspires rubbishes→rubbish12．1. near→nearby；2. for→to；3. 在used to ∧many 之间加be；4. kind→kinds；5. looks→looked；6. And→B ut；7. before→ago；8. harm→harmful；9. 把has been done 中的been去掉；10. you→your13．14．1. read→reading 2. Yourself----myself 3. health→healthy 4. had---have5. Speaking---spoken6. article→articles7. been→去掉been8. them→which 9. But→And 10. 第二个do前加^to15．16．1.ages→age2.enjoy→enjoyed3.leave→leaving4.myself→me5.terrifying→terrified 6.that→what7.happy→happily8.book→books9.将it去掉10.在out后面加of17．1. 第一句：go→went2. 第三句：where→which3. 第四句：calling→called4. 第五句：such→so5. 第五句：去掉in6. 第七句：spot→spots7. 第八句：late→lat er8. 第九句：tiring→tired9. 第九句：happily→happy10. 第十句：unforgettable前加an。

高中英语改错题及答案【篇一：高中英语短文改错(含答案)】ike riding my bike. though it is not very new, but it ismy best friend. i find very convenient to go anywhere with abike. ride gives me not only exercise but also pleasure. iuse my bike mostly on summer when the weather is warmand dry. it can very unpleasant in winter when it is cold andrain is pouring down. it can also be very danger. of coursei will be very careful on my bike. in facts, accidents are notthe only problem. one day i went to school and come backto find his front wheel was missing. it was a long walk tothe repairer’s shop. now i have two strong locks.【答案与解析】1. 去掉 but。

汉语可说“虽然……但是……”，但英语习惯上不能相应地说though…but…。

(注：不能去掉 though，因为这样还会涉及大小写的改动，而高考短文改错每行只允许改动一处。

)2. find 后加 it。

此 it 为形式宾语，真正的宾语是其后的不定式。

3. ride 改为 riding。

动词原形不能用作主语，要改为动名词。

4. on 改为 in。

表示在某个季节，用介词in。

5. can 后加 be。

短文改错专练（一）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

AMy mom and I were out driving when we saw a car ahead of us slow down sudden and then came to stop as it reached the side of the road. We pulled over and asking the woman inside the car if she needed any helps. She said “Yes, please!” Since we were right next by a parking lot, we tried to push h er car into it. We weren’t very successful, as it is a heavy car. Then a man and his kids came over and offered his help as well as! Together we got the woman’s car into the parking lot, which she was safe and could get the help she needed. We both smiled at each other and then went on our way.BOne morning when I took the bus to meet a friend in town. When I boarded, a young foreigner rushed catch the bus and just made it right behind me. I pay my fare, and started looking for the seat, when I heard the young man ask the bus driver whether he could change a 50-yuan bill for his ticket. I already knew it was possible, as it was writing on the fare box. Being told the driver didn’t have enough changes, the young man seemed very disappointing. I told him I was going to pay his fare. He was relieved and thanked me. Dig in his pocket, he found one euro and insisted on giving it to myself. We both made it into town.CI was in the supermarket queue yesterday when the member of staff came to me and directed me to a checkout where had just opened. When I arrived, the cashier was allowing a little girl to scan through the shopping. My first thoughts were that I’d have got served much quick if I’d just stayed where I was. Eventual it was of my turn. The cashier was sweet and apologized for the delay. We chatted as she packed up my items. Then she explained me that the little girl, a customer from a few days ago, had lost her purse. She, like a cashier, paid for his shopping. And the girl just came to return the money but volunteered to help.DThere was one class that I think I will never forget. It was the piano class. In the last class of that term, each student was required play two tunes on the piano, according to that the teacher, a pretty lady, was going to give us marks. Soon it was my turn. In spite of all the prepareI had done, I was still very nervous. I say at the beginning, “Although as a new learner I don’t play well, but I want to express my love to my parents through the two tunes.” Lucky, everythin g went all right. But the teacher commented, “Actually, Julie, you did great! Therefore, I will just give you 9.5, hopes that you will always remember to believe in yourself.” His words are still reminding me to be self-confident.ETime and tide wait no man. This is everything I learned last year. I have spent so much time fool around that my grades began to suffer. I finally realized that something had to be done. It was time to changing. Now I have a new plan for using my time wise. I have set my alarm clock half a hour ahead. This will give me a head start every day. I have also been decided to keep a record of what I do and when I do it. Look back on which I’ve done will give me some ideas on how to manage my time.FI love English and I do hope that someday I can watch English movies without any difficult. However, it’s never easier to learn about a foreign language. And English is exception. Recently I find it very difficult to remember new words. Therefore, I turned to my teacher for help yesterday. She said the best way to learn new words are to read and use it as often as possible. I think she was right, because we can surely remember a person if seeing every day. Therefore, I had decided to read at least one English article and write a diary with English every day from now on. Hopefully, I will make great progress by the end of a year.GLast Sunday, I went shopping with Mom in the town. I was kind of excited because it have been years the last time I went shopping with her. I followed Mom into a small store sells farm chemicals and seeds. As soon as I stepped into the store, I was surprising by so much singing birds flying freely. Then I noticed there had at least 30 nests in total on the walls and under the ceiling! I turned to the owner, an old man, and told him what amazing it was. He said delighted that the birds were like his babies and he always left the doors open for it. And at night, when he was away, the birds could come in or out through the broken windows at anytime they wanted.HI have a little cousin which name is Angela. In two months she is going to be two year old. Her name is given by her mother who loves her very much and thinks she is his angel. Angela has beautiful eyes and has learned to count to 20 recently! Read children’s b ooks regularly, she knows many animals and plants. She is also a typical little girl, who loves dolls and every night puts them to sleeping before going to the bed! She is also very impatient and can play a fishing game for over half an hour at a time! Now she can walk well and even run, and she is fond playing with me. I feel lucky to have so a lovely cousin.答案：A1. ... slow down sudden ... sudden → suddenly2. ... came to stop ... stop前加a3. ... asking the woman ... asking → asked4. ... needed any helps. helps → help5. ... right next by ... by → to6. ... it is a heavy ... is → was7. ... offered his help ... his → their8. ... as well as! 去掉第二个as9. ... which she was ... which → where或which前加in10. We both smiled ... both → allB1. One morning when ... 去掉when2. ... rushed catch the ... catch前加to3. I pay my fare ... pay → paid4. ... looking for the ... the → a5. ... it was possible ... possible → impossible6. ... as it was writing ... writing → written7. ... enough changes ... changes → change8. ... very disappointing. disappointing → disappointed9. Dig in his ... Dig → Digging10. ... giving it to myself. myself → meC1. ... the member of staff ... the → a2. ... where had just ... where → which / that3. ... served much quick ... quick → quicker4. Eventual it was ... Eventual → Eventually5. ... of my turn. 去掉of6. ... she explained me ... me前加to或去掉me7. ... a few days ago ... ago → before8. ... like a cashier ... like → as9. ... paid for his ... his → her10. ... but volunteered to ... but → andD1. ... the piano class. the → a2. ... required play ... play前加to3. ... according to that ... that → which4. ... all the prepare ... prepare → preparation5. I say at ... say → said6. ... but I want to ... 去掉but7. Lucky, everything ... Lucky → Luckily8. Therefore, I will ... Therefore → However9. ... hopes that you ... hopes → hoping10. His words are ... His → HerE1. ... wait no man. wait后加for2. This is everything ... everything → so mething3. I have spent ... have → had4. ... fool around that ... fool → fooling5. ... time to changing. changing → change6. ... my time wise. wise → wisely7. ... a hour ahead. a → an8. ... been decided to ... 去掉been9. Look back on ... Look → Looking10. ... which I've done ... which → whatF1. ... any difficult. difficult → difficulty2. ... it's never easier ... easier → easy3. ... learn about a ... 去掉about4. ... English is exception. is后加no5. ... new words are ... are → is6. ... use it as ... it → them7. ... seeing every day. seeing → seen8. ... I had decided ... had → have9. ... with English ... with → in10. ... end of a year. a → theG1. ... it have been ... have → had2. ... the last time I ... the前加since3. ... store sells ... sells → selling4. ... I was surprising ... surprising → surprised5. ... so much singing ... much → many6. ... noticed there had ... had → were7. ... what amazing ... what → how8. ... said delighted ... delighted → delightedly9. ... open for it. it → them10. ... at anytime they ... 去掉atH1. ... which name ... which → whose2. ... two year old. year → years3. Her name is ... is → was4. ... is his angel. his → her5. Read children's books ... Read → Reading6. ... them to sleeping ... sleeping → sleep7. ... to the bed! 去掉the8. ... very impatient ... impatient → patient9. ... fond playing ... fond后加of10. ... so a lovely ... so → such短文改错专练（二）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

外研版高中英语必修一《短文改错》专项练习题（含答案）1.（1-10 小题）Mr. Smith, our English teacher, works hard. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Smith. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.11.短文改错When I was young, I lived in the countryside. At that time, the trees there were very green, that left a deep impression on me. The waters there was so clear that I even could see the fish swam. When it got dark, the air was cooler than it in the daytime. People liked to walk out of their houses to chat together. I liked to play games with my friends but run along the village happily. As the moon rose highly in the sky , the village was lighting. When I looked up, I could see moon and a few stars. They were so close to me. It seemed that I could touch on them. The life in the countryside were so wonderful.12.Last summer vacation, I worked as a volunteer in the Wolong China Giant Panda Garden in Sichuan, where I stay for two weeks. That I needed to do was to clean the pandas, houses, feed the pandas or make food for them. One male panda I took care was named Jingjing. She was one of the most interested pandas in the Garden. Normally, the panda is a shy creature, not used to be in contact with other animals, particularly humans, but Jingjing seemed very differently. He often reached out one of his foot to greet me and smiled at me. Sometimes he tried to make me to laugh.13.Dear Jack,I,m sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make friends. Now, I,d like to offer you any advice.Firstly, it,s normal for you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment. Secondly,you should greet your classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly, it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities, what can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you,re friendly to th e others.I hope the suggestion above will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you for the future.Yours,Li Hua14.This term I joined in the Chinese painting club in our school. The members of our club met once a week. We have difference activities and I enjoy all of it. We,ve invited some wel-l known painters to a club to talk about the history of Chinese painting but teach us the basic techniques of drawing. At the weekend, we usually go to visit art galleries, where we study the masterpieces of famous artist and discuss what we understand the works. I am very glad that our club getting more and more attractive. An d I'm sure that our schoolmates will get to love our great traditionally culture and art.15.When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we,d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.16.I took part in a international English speech contest and win a prize. As a result, I offered a chance to visit Paris. Paris is one of my most favorite cities and I had dreamed of go there for a long time.Firstly, I visited the magnificent Eiffel Tower. Then I went to the Louvre, that I enjoyed a lot of world-famous work, such as Leonardo da Vinci,s masterpiece Mona Lisa. I also enjoyed the sights of the Arch of Triumph, which is regarded for the symbol of France.I also spent some time look around and experiencing the unique culture in Paris, which great enriched my life.17.Hi, Sharon,This is Li Xia. I,m writing to tell you that I am willing to do how I can to help you learn Mandarin （普通话）.I win the first prize in a nationwide Chinese Speech Contest last term. However, you can depend on it that I will be up to this job.Besides, it is necessary for you to practice it as much as possibly. Here are two tips for you. Firstly, you, d better to buy or download some listening materials. Secondly, we can make friends with classmates from China and frequent communication is of great important. Though having learned English for many years, I have difficulty in American cultures.I would appreciate if you could give me some advice on how to understand them better. I expect there to being a chance to learn from you.It was raining hardly outside, which made it difficult for me to go home for lunch. Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom. I rushed out and found it was my mother, already in fifties, which brought me lunch in spite of the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for our children. But what had the children done in return? All too often, most children just take it for granted that their parent should serve for them unconditionally. My dear mum or dad, thank you very much for bringing me up. How shall I do for you?18. ___________19. ___________20. _________21._________22._________23._________24._________25._________26._________27.High school is considered the most important stage. As senior three student, it will not be long before I graduated. Now I have many things to share in my fellows. First of all, I,d like to express my thank to those who lent me a hand when I was disappoint. It was their kindness which helped me regain my self-confidence when I lost my heart. Besides, I anxious want to clear up some misunderstanding with my friends in order to keep our friendships forever. With the National College Entrance Examination approached, I strongly recommend that we could value time and redouble efforts to study so that we can get into a key university.28.Last week,I attended a lecture by a teacher in his thirty. He was energetic and confidence. He spoke very fast and I could understand that he said. He mainly focused at how to learn the English well. In addition,he showed us how to write neatly, letter by letter. He kept telling us, “Slow down!” “Trusting yourself!” “Write carefully!”. To be honest, I never thoug ht much of writing until today, when my heart touched. At the end of the lecture, all the people present break into cheers. The lecture was so interesting that I benefited a lot from them.29.Dear Mr. Zhang,Known that our school is going to set up elective （选修的）English courses, I'd like to give some advices. English Visual-Audio-Oral Course is a good choice. Most of us are interested at English videos and songs, that provide us with great images and beautiful music to listen to. As result, we can enjoy some local customs and singing English songs with joy. In addition, we need to improve our oral English. When we are always learning English, we may not be able to make a fluent speech. We can't easy communicate with others like native speakers. That is why I suggested taking a Speech Course. I'll be glad that if you can consider my suggestions.YoursLi Hua 30.Last Friday, we went to Beijing Survival Island to go on an outing, that left us with a deep impression.Early in the morning, we gathered the school gate and the school bus takes us there. In the way, we talked and laughed, full of excitement. Upon arrive, we were attracted by various activities and got involved immediate. The monkeybars were really challenging. One of the boys managed to make it with the encouragement of her classmates. I was interested in making cakes. I was being taught to make my first cake on my own! At lunchtime, we sat around, enjoying the delicious food. Everyone had the good time.We really enjoyed our stay there. Before we left, we had a photo taken to record the unforgettable days.参考答案withM L Smith：our Englisii tea?her n works hard. 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〔一〕How time flies! A week have passed before I noticed it. Looking back on the things that happening last week,I found the life here full with happiness and interests. I can still remember the first day of the summer camp. Icame to my bedroom by myself. When I opened a door, I saw a girl with short hair seating in a chair with a bookin her hand. She must be a quiet girl who liked reading, I thought myself at the time. After we said hello to each other, other girl came in with a big noise. Her name was Rose. She was so outgoing and humor that both Cherryand I couldn’ t help laughing at her words. Then we had studied and had meals together, and became good friends.I can’ t forget the day when we spent together no matter where we are in the turefu.〔二〕Dear Li Hua,I am glad to receive your letter. I can understand how sad you are as they have to transfer to other school. But everything will be fine when you adapt to your new surrounding. In your letter, you asked me about my first school.In my memory, my first school was very large with each classroom beautiful decorated. There was a bigsquare lies in the center of the schoolyard. And I could have good view of the square from my classroom windows. My favorite teacher was my English teacher which was patient with me. Besides, I had met my best friend Peter inthe school, to whom I still keep in touch even though we are in different schools now. I hope you will make new friends but enjoy your time in the new school.〔三〕In a couple of week,we will say goodbye to our school.How the time flies!I will never forget the past threeyears that I have enjoyed a wonderfully journey with all of my teachers and classmates.To make the journey fruitful,our teachers devoted his time and energy to us.Thanks so much to your help and guidance,my dear teachers!I really appreciated it.Before long,we'll start a new journey,and there may be a lot of difficulties in do everything in the future.Iknow there are no end to the things that we can accomplish,and tomorrow is the beginning of the hardest part ofour life.May you happy and successful all the time in your new life!〔四〕My grandparents live in the countryside.They keep a dog calling Ah Bao.One day my grandparents go towork in the fields,taking along my little brother and Ah Bao.My brother and Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself. My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river.Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the water.Hearing about him barking,my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother .Ah Bao did all he could save my little brother,that moved allthe people present.Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness.〔五〕Last Friday,1 was standing near a subway exit, tried to call a taxi. But no luck.Then I thought of the taxi-booking app my friend has recommended and I booked a taxi through my cell-phone. Soon it came, and l stepped in, feeling pretty proudly of my high-tech way and satisfied with the convenience brought by the app. Solater,1 was upset to find that the driver was busy looking his cell-phone to get the next order. It was just then whenI began to worry about my safety. What’ sbad, the driver’informations might be unreliable. How can we passengers' legal rights be protecting if something bad happens? So be careful when you use the taxi-booking app the next time.〔六〕Dear Mr.Green,I ’ m very exciting to learn that you will start a magazine together.That sounds great and I definitely agree you on that.(完满版)高中英语短文改错专题练习及剖析Some of the columns you mention in the letter are really my cup of tea.“ Cultural Express〞give us a better understanding of the world.Since people from different part of the world have different values,it ’ s necessary tolearn from each another.Besides,it is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improving oralEnglish.“ Entertainment 〞 is also cool! The popular singers,actors or celebrities are so attractively that youabsolutely can ’ t miss this part.Teenagers are to fond of popular things,too.Well,I really can’ t wait to read this magazine.Yours,Li Ming〔七〕One of the most important rule of finding happiness in life is to do what you love. I remember when my momtakes me to an English class in primary school, I suddenly found that learn English was fun and I really enjoyed it.The voice at the bottom of my heart said,“ Maybe I can learn English well and become English teacher.It was not easy at first. For almost one and a half year, I didn ’dot very well in all my English exams.Disappointing and frustrated, I doubted that whether I could follow my dream. But I told me not to acceptthis reality. Gradual, my grades started to improve and I had much confidence than before.〔八〕Last weekend I visited my best friend in London , which was supposed to be excited . Melina , whom Ihave not seen for three years , offered to take me on a sighting tour by car .Unfortunate , she ended up doing everything but that ! First , she showed me around the building where shehad gotten her first job . Then she drove me to the caf where she had meté first boyfriend . Before I could sayeverything , she smiled at me and said she wanted to take me to another place where was special to her . I wasvery disappointed when we got on the place where she had bought her car ! Besides , she kept talk about herselfall day long ! I was fed up with it , but I couldn’ t make her to stop . When she finally decides to call it a day turned around and found me asleep !〔九〕A discussion about hiking had been held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations canmake people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature. They find themselves deep attracted bythe beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers evenbegin to explore the places people have ever been to, and accidents have happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think not safe to organize such dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.〔十〕Keeping a diary in English is the effective way to improve our English writing ability.First, it takes little time to finish a diary than other writings.By keeping English diaries, we can easy formthe habit of thinking about in English.Second, we can practice use English idioms and useful structures in our diary-writing.If we have difficulty finding suitable words or phrases to express our opinion, we can turn in English dictionaries or teacher for help.This is also a kind of learning.If we can keep on doing this, we would gradually learn how express ourselvesin English freely.In a word, it was of great benefit to keep diaries in English.短文改错专题参照答案及剖析〔一〕1.have 改 has，主是 a week 故用 has.2.happening 改 happened，状是last week，用一般去。