2023届高考英语二轮复习英语写作点拨讲义

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英语写作——英语写作点拨

一、确定主题句

主题句是对全文的概括,是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头,而后,全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释,扩展。

写主题句应注意以下几点:

1. 归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点;

2. 提炼出一句具有概括性的话;

3. 主题句应具有可读性,能够吸引读者。

二、注意篇章结构

合理布局一般为三段式:

开始部分——说出文中的要点、核心问题;

正文部分——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论;

结尾部分——对全文的总结和概括。

要做到全文中心突出,段落之间有机联系,内容完整、连贯。前后呼应,去除与主题无关的内容。

三、写作技巧

1. 如何开篇

技巧1:主旨设问更给力

例如:

I think it is very important for us to do sports. Why? Because it is good for our

health and study.

I think it is very important for us to protect environment. Why? Because it is good

for living.

I think it is very important for us to learn English. Why? Because it is the

most-widely used language in the world now.

技巧2:从我们到我

例如:

Different people have different..., but/and I have/prefer...

2. 如何写正文

句型变化:

变化原则1:表达观点要“自我”

例如:

In my opinion, we should pay much more attention to the weak subjects!

变化原则2:两句之间要过渡

例如:

I left my pen at home. What’s worse, the stationery store was closed that day.

变化原则3:问题阐述用形容词句型

普通句型 The environment is bad.

比较级句型 The environment is getting worse and worse./The environment is getting much worse than before.

最高级句型 This is the worst environment I have ever seen.

变化原则4:表达作用试试“way+to do” 例如:

Reading is a good way to relax myself.

Watching movies is a wonderful way to learn English.

变化原则5:增强情感转感叹

例如:

How beneficial it is for us to read!

How important it is for students to do sports.

变化原则6:描述事情加感情

例如:

I was very happy that I got an A in English last term.

It makes me feel happy that I got an A in English last term.

变化原则7:形容词句型升级

例如:

It was an unusual experience in my life.

→ It was one of the most unusual experience in my life.

变化原则8:活用there be结合定从

There are many reasons why I enjoy reading

词汇变化:

变化原则1:make更有feel

I made a progress in English. I feel proud.

→ It makes me feel proud to make a progress in English.

变化原则2:连词不再用and

并列 likewise; similarly; as well as…

递进 what’s more/worse; furthermore; additionally; in addition...

转折 while; however; by contrast; on the other hand; instead...

变化原则3:喜欢不再like

用be fond of; enjoy; be crazy about

变化原则4:提出措施尽量不用should

用suppose; had better do; have no choice but do; it’s our duty to do

三、如何结尾

1. 巧用过渡,归纳全文

过渡词:

to sum up; in conclusion; in brief; on account of this; thus

过渡句型:

Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that...

Thus, it can be concluded that...

Therefore, we can find that...

2. 如此建议

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to...

Accordingly, I recommend that...

Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.

四、写作锦囊:巧用连接词过渡,提升连贯性

1. 次序关系

first, first of all, to begin with, to start with, second, next, then, afterwards, finally,

eventually, lastly, at last, last but not least 2. 因果关系

because, since, as, for, due to, in view of, for this reason, for the reason that..., as a

result, so, therefore, thus, hence, so that

3. 转折关系

but, however, though, even though

4. 并列关系

and, also, too, as well as, either...or..., both...and...

5. 递进关系

moreover, not only...but also..., not...but..., in addition (to), besides, in order to,

meanwhile

6. 类比关系

like, likewise, similarly

7. 比较关系

compared with, compared to, rather than, rather, neither...nor, on the contrary,

different from this

8. 举例关系

like, such as, for example, in particular, including, as for, as to

9. 强调关系

in fact, especially, particularly, obviously, what is more important, certainly, of course,

without a doubt

10. 条件关系

if, unless, lest, provided that, if it is the case, in this sense, once, if possible, if

necessary, if so

11. 归纳总结

therefore, in short, in brief, in other words, on the whole, in sum, to sum up, in

conclusion, in summary, to conclude, the conclusion can be drawn that...