中职语文基础上册写作应用文 书信

《书信》教案（职高江苏版语文教材实用文体写作第30课）教学内容：书信（江苏版语文教材实用文体写作第30课）教学要求：1、掌握书信的要领，能按照书信的要求正确的撰写。

2、注意引导学生体会书信这一传统交流方式与现代交流方式（如电话、电子邮件、手机短信等）相比所具有的特殊意义和文化内涵，让学生爱上写信并能够在日常生活中运用书信表情达意教学重点：书信的格式教学难点：书信的格式和写作用语。

教学方法：讲授，示范授课时间：2011年3月30 日上午第三节，授课地点：中江职业中专学校计算机专业2010级4 班（科技楼楼号）授课者：周月教学过程：一、安全教育。

1、安全知识教育.2、清点人数：计10级4班：应到人，实到人。

二、导入新课：1、用问题导入书信的写作，引起学生的学习兴趣。

:（1）思考：现代人的交流方式有哪些？最方便的交流方式？最快捷的交流方式？最简洁的交流方式？最令人回味无穷的交流方式？——书信。

（2）那么你知道书信的别称（雅称）有哪些？关于书信的古典诗歌有哪些？（学生抢答，看谁说得又快又好。

）“鸿雁传书”的故事：鸿雁是书信的代称，有时亦代称邮递员。

为何以“鸿雁”代称书信和邮递员？溯其源，汉朝时，苏武出使匈奴，被单于流放北海去放羊。

10年后，汉朝与匈奴和亲，但单于仍不让苏武回汉。

与苏武一起出使匈奴的常惠，把苏武的情况密告汉使，并设计，让汉使对单于讲：汉朝皇帝打猎射得一雁，雁足上绑有书信，叙说苏武在某个沼泽地带牧羊。

单于听后，只好让苏武归汉。

后来，人们就用鸿雁比喻书信和传递书信的人。

另一种更为人所知所喜欢的是民间流传的故事：唐朝薛平贵远征塞外，妻子王宝钏苦守寒窑十数年，矢志不移。

一日，王宝钏正挑野菜，忽闻空中鸿雁连声呼唤，遂请求代为传书于平贵夫郎，然一时难寻笔墨，情急之下，撕下罗裙，咬破指尖，写下血泪书信，倾诉对爱情忠贞和盼望夫妻团圆的心情。

前者是对国家的忠诚，后者是对感情的坚贞，这两个故事的流传，让“鸿雁”成为古代通信的使者，也让这两个故事本身成为一段千古佳话。

应用文写作《书信》教学设计【教学目标】知识目标：1.让学生一般了解书信的定义、分类和用途。

2.重点掌握书信、信封的基本格式。

能力目标：学会用正确的格式写书信，培养综合能力。

情感目标：培养与人沟通、交流的能力。

【教学重点】1.书信的基本格式。

2.用正确的格式写书信。

【教学难点】1.书信的格式，特别是结尾语的格式。

2.学会写自荐信。

【学时安排】一课时【学习要点】1.一般了解书信的定义、用途和分类。

2.重点掌握书信的基本格式。

3.运用书信的基本格式，会写自荐信。

【思路设计】书信是生活中最为常见的应用文体，也是一种与人沟通、交流的手段。

本文中有关书信的定义、用途和分类部分可以简单介绍，学生可做一般掌握。

书信的基本格式和写作是本课的教学重点。

文中给出的一般书信的例文篇幅较长，典型性不强。

对于一般书信，学生掌握的重点是基本格式，因此，教师可另外给出短小精炼的例文，并通过分析例文，总结出一般书信的基本格式。

根据学生的实际情况和生活实践，建议把专用书信中的自荐信作为写作练习的重点。

（较之本单元的其他内容，本课的内容相对多一些，教师可适当调整课时。

）【学法设计】1.学生课前收集李春波的《一封家书》。

2.通过思考讨论，引导学生归纳总结出书信的组成部分及格式。

【过程设计】一、导入播放歌曲《一封家书》》同学们，在十几年前，这首歌风靡大江南北，是当时最为流行的歌曲之一，也是第一次以书信的形式创作歌曲。

在电视、电话、电脑等现代工具产生之前，书信是最重要的交际手段，即使在电子网络时代，书信仍是一种重要的通讯工具，有着特殊的作用和魅力。

书信有其固定的格式，今天我们就来学习书信的相关知识。

二、书信的种类、作用明确：1.种类：一般书信（私人交往）、专用书信（公事交往）；2.作用：通讯手段、交际工具。

三、一般书信的格式：1.一般书信组成部分：称谓、问候、正文、结尾语、具名、日期。

2.一般书信的格式要求：（1）称谓——姓名+称呼+修饰语第一行顶格写，后面加冒号。

高教版中职语文（基础模块）上册写作《应用文书信》应用文写作（1）：书信写作应用文写作是2005 年大纲修订之后出现的新题型，与以往的考试大纲相比较，修订后的新大纲在写作部分做了很大的调整，其主要变化为：写作部分在短文写作的基础上新增加了一篇100 字左右的应用文，使写作部分由一篇变成了两篇。

新增的应用文包括书信(letter)、备忘录(memo)和报告(report)等。

命题采用为考生提供规定情景的方法，这一部分共10 分。

在英语写作中, 应用文体包含的内容比较广泛，如：私人书信、公务信函、备忘录、摘要等。

从应试角度，我们可以宏观地将其分为书信类应用文和告示类应用文。

书信写作1. 英文书信的种类和用途书信根据读者对象的不同，主要分为两大类，一类是写给亲朋好友的，称之为私人信函（Personal Letters）；另一类是写给团体、政府机关和商业机构的信函，称之为公务信函（Business Letters）；就其用途而言，书信可分为求职信、咨询信、感谢信、投诉信、建议信、邀请信、推荐信等。

2. 书信类应用文书信是人们日常写作生活中交流思想的一个重要工具。

英语书信与一般作文的写法不同，有自己的独特的语言及文体格式。

英文书信的公务信函的结构格式大致相同，但在措辞、时态、语言的正式程度方面有很大差异。

了解英语书信的书写要求，写好英语书信考生应该具有的基本写作能力之一。

3. 英文书信的写作格式1）缩进式每段的开头向右缩进2个字符，与写汉语文章类似。

这时，段与段之间可以加一个空行，也可以不加空行。

2）齐头式每段的开头不向右缩进，但段与段之间用一个空行分开。

由于每段的第一行不向右缩进，从左边看是齐头的，所以也称为齐头式。

4. 英文书信的组成部分规范的英文书信主要由以下六个部分和两个附加部分组成：1）信头（Heading）：列出寄信人的地址和写信日期2）信内地址（Inside Address）：列出收信人的姓名和地址3）称呼（Salutation）：对目标读者对象的称谓4）正文（Body）：信函的主体内容5）结束语( Complimentary Close)如：Yours truly, Yours sincerely 等6）签名（The Signature）：签名落款7）附言（Postscript）：如需补充内容，可使用此项8）附件注明（Enclosed mark）：如信内附其他文件，需在信末左下方写上“Encl”5. 常考书信类作文及写作方法1）建议信【常用句型】1. I?d like to provide some suggestions on.2. I?d like to suggest that you.3. It?s my pleasure to offer you some advice on.4. In general, my suggestions are as follows:【参考范文】Dear Mary,I am delighted to learn that you will graduate from the Zhejiang University very soon. Last time you asked me how to make a wise choice before graduation. So I am writing to provide some suggestions for you.In my opinion, it is a good choice for you to further your study after graduation because higher degree will make you more competitive in the job market in the future. Besides, it will also broaden your vision, which is beneficial to your further development in the long run.At last, I do hope that you will find my suggestions constructive and I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Ming 2）感谢信【常用句型】1. I am writing to show my heart-felt gratitude for.2. I am grateful to you for.3. I appreciate it more than I can say.4. I deeply appreciate.5. I do appreciate.6. I would like to take this opportunity to express to you my deep appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.7. Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you.【参考范文】Dear manager,I am writing to express my thanks to you and your employee Miss Li, who helped me to find my wallet while I was staying at your hotel.The other day I was really careless when I was having lunch in the restaurant. I paid the bill and somehow I left my wallet on the table. I had already walked out of the hall when Miss Li came up with my wallet. And she didn’t even accept a reward.I am sure Miss Li is just one of the Chinese workers who are honest and reliable. Her good qualities are really something and I will always keep it in mind. Please send my best wishes to Miss Li.Truly yoursLi Ming 3）申请信【常用句型】1. I am writing to apply for the position of that you advertisedin China Daily this morning.2. I've learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for a.3. I am writing to inquire whether there is a vacancy in your company.4. I graduated from Peking University with a bachelor's degree in Mathematics three years ago.5. After completing my four-year study at Peking University in 2007, I was employed by LENOVO Company as a.6. I have been working in since my graduation, and have thereforeaccumulated the sufficient knowledge and experience in this field.7. I shall be glad to provide you with any further information concerning my education and professional experience.8. I will be available for an interview at any time at your convenience.【参考范文】Dear Sir,I am Li Ming, one of the 2013 graduates of Peking University.I am keenly interested in the post of being a salesman in your company.I think that I will be the right candidate for this position. To begin with, my major particularly matches the requirements of the ads. I major in marketing and will graduate from Peking University very soon and obtain my bachelor's degree. What’s important is that, during the past four academic years, I participated in all kinds of promotion activities, which greatly enriched my experience in marketing. At last, I would be most grateful if you take my application into a favorable consideration.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerelyLi Ming 4）投诉信【常用句型】1. I am writing to complain about.2. I am sorry to trouble you, but I am afraid that I have to make complaints about.3. Frankly speaking, I am not satisfied with.4. I am completely disappointed to find that.5. I request you to replace with a new one, which must be in perfect working order.6. I would ask you to refund, otherwise I would complain to the authorities concerned.7. I am looking forward to your early reply.【参考范文】Dear Editor,I have been one of the faithful readers of the newspaper and today I am writing to inform you about my unpleasant experience in our city last week.Last Monday I bought a dictionary in one of the biggest bookstores of the city. But when I came back home, I found that the book had lost several pages. So I have to go back to the bookstore and asked the shop assistants to replace for me politely. But to my disappointment, he turned down my request rudely.Here, what I want to say is that what they did not only disappoints the consumers, but also damages the good reputation of the city. I do hope that the media can appeal to the departments concerned to pay more attention to suchphenomenon.Yours sincerelyLi Ming 5）询问信【常用句型】1. I’m writing t o inquire whether.2. Would you please offer me some information concerning.3. I am writing to you in the hope that.4. I would like to inquire something about.5. I shall be grateful to you if you.6. My first question is7. Please give me a prompt reply at your earliest convenience.【参考范文】Dear Ms. Allen,I’m writing to inquire whether you accept senior visiting s cholars from outside the United States.I’m a vice-professor in the Department of Education at Peking Normal University in China, aged 37. I graduated from the university in 1983, majoring in biological engineering and I received my Bachelor’s Degree and Master’s Degree in 1983 and 1986 respectively at the same university. After graduation I have been engaged in teaching and research work at the university.I’d like you to send me an application form and other rel evant information. My documents and references are available on request. Thank you for your attention!Yours sincerely,Li Ming 6）致歉信【常用句型】1. I am extremely sorry for.2. I must apologize to you for.3. I cannot tell you how sorry I am for4. I just do not know what to say about it. But I do know it was my fault.5. I am afraid I have brought you too much trouble.6. I did not mean to.7. It is very inconsiderate of me to.8. I regret to inform you that I am unable to9. I do beg your pardon for the mess I have made.10. I will try my best not to make such kind of mistakes again.11. Again, please accept my sincere apologies for.【参考范文】Dear David,How are you recently? Now I am writing to extend my sincere apology for you because I am unable to meet you at the airport tomorrow afternoon. Originally, I planned to go to the airport and meet you in person. But unfortunately I was informed that I had to attend a business meeting which is related to the project that I am in charge of. That is why I can’t meet you in person as I promised.I do apologize for that.Being unfamiliar with the city, please wait for me at the gate of the airport and I’ll go there as quickly as possible after th e meeting. You can also drink some coffee in KFC while waiting for me.I’m sorry again for the inconvenience caused.Yours,Li Ming 7）推荐信【常用句型】1. It is my great honor to recommend.2. It's my great pleasure to recommend to you.3. Through my contact with her, I am impressed by.4. She is both enthusiastic and cooperative.5. With this good character, I am sure that.6. Your favorable consideration of her application will be most appreciated7. If further information is needed, please feel free to contact me.【参考范文】Dear Professor Smith,It is my great honor to recommend Li Jing, one of my best students three years ago, to you and he wants to apply for the position of being your assistant.Up to now, I have known her for more than three years. She took my course in the fall of 2009. She is very interested in biochemistry and does a good job in it. Through my contact with her, I am impressed by her intelligence and ability. She has a clear mind and great ability to handle the difficult questions. Besides, she is both enthusiastic and cooperative. With this good character, I am sure that she will be qualified for the positioned mentioned above.Finally, I hope that you can grant her a good opportunity to realize the great potentialities. Your favorable consideration of her application will be most appreciated. If further information is needed, please feel free to contact me.Yours sincerely,Li Ming。

应用文写作·书信1．“应用文写作·书信”安排两课时，第一课时学习一般书信的写作，弄清一般书信的格式、信封的正确写法。

除此之外，在这一部分内容的学习中，教师还要注意引导学生体会书信这一传统交流方式与现代交流方式（如电话、电子邮件、手机短信等）相比所具有的特殊意义和文化内涵，让学生爱上写信并能够在日常生活中运用书信表情达意；第二课时学习专用书信的写作，弄清专用书信和一般书信的异同，掌握常见专用书信的写法并能在日常生活和工作中熟练运用。

2．为激发学生的学习兴趣，教师在导入环节可做精心的设计。

如：①故事导入用“鸿雁传书”（或飞鸽传书、青鸟传书）的故事导入书信的写作，引起学生的学习兴趣。

鸿雁是书信的代称，有时亦代称邮递员。

为何以“鸿雁”代称书信和邮递员？溯其源，汉朝时，苏武出使匈奴，被单于流放北海去放羊。

10年后，汉朝与匈奴和亲，但单于仍不让苏武回汉。

与苏武一起出使匈奴的常惠，把苏武的情况密告汉使，并设计，让汉使对单于讲：汉朝皇帝打猎射得一雁，雁足上绑有书信，叙说苏武在某个沼泽地带牧羊。

单于听后，只好让苏武归汉。

后来，人们就用鸿雁比喻书信和传递书信的人。

另一种更为人所知所喜欢的是民间流传的故事：唐朝薛平贵远征塞外，妻子王宝钏苦守寒窑十数年，矢志不移。

一日，王宝钏正挑野菜，忽闻空中鸿雁连声呼唤，遂请求代为传书于平贵夫郎，然一时难寻笔墨，情急之下，撕下罗裙，咬破指尖，写下血泪书信，倾诉对爱情忠贞和盼望夫妻团圆的心情。

前者是对国家的忠诚，后者是对感情的坚贞，这两个故事的流传，让“鸿雁”成为古代通信的使者，也让这两个故事本身成为一段千古佳话。

②问题导入现代人的交流方式有哪些？最方便的交流方式？最快捷的交流方式？最简洁的交流方式？最令人回味无穷的交流方式？——书信。

③竞赛导入学生抢答：书信的别称（雅称）有哪些？关于书信的古典诗歌有哪些？看谁说得又快又好。

书信的别称（雅称）：鸿雁、玉札、玉函、华翰、华简、华札、手札、尺牍、尺素等。

中职语文基础上册《写作：应用文书信》教学设计 (一)一、教学目标1.知识目标：a.掌握应用文的概念b.掌握信函的结构、格式和写作方法c.能正确运用应用文的写作技巧，写出合乎要求的信函2.能力目标：a.培养学生的观察、思维和表达能力b.提高学生的文字语言能力和信息处理能力c.锻炼学生的写作技能，特别是表达观点的能力。

二、教学内容1.应用文的概念和种类2.信函的结构、格式和写作方法3.体现七封公函写作技巧的情景模拟教学三、教学过程1.导入教师用图示“邮政信封”毛伊岛给学生激发兴趣，引出学生对“应用文”这个概念的认识。

2.掌握应用文的概念和种类教师给学生简单介绍了应用文的概念和种类，然后由教师和学生共同分析几种应用文类型的特点和使用场合，让学生分析应用文的特点及其在实际生活中、工作中如何灵活运用。

3.信函的结构、格式和写作方法教师通过图示和实物，给学生讲解信函的结构和格式，重点介绍了信函的写作方法，从开头、结尾、中间的内容分别进行讲解，让学生清楚地了解各部分应该怎样安排。

4.体现七封公函写作技巧的情景模拟教学教师找出几封英文公函，在课堂上进行模拟教学，用实际的案例，让学生思考结构和语言的合理运用，在老师的指导下进行交流和讨论，通过集体讨论，让学生掌握写作的技巧。

集体讨论之后，学生根据所学知识，自己动手写封信，然后进行审核、修改，再次把信件发给同学讨论和评价。

最后，全班进行评选最佳作文，让学生尝试写好一封信函。

4.作业和反思作业是让学生通过阅读一本专业书籍，找出几篇材料，包含几种应用文类型。

完成作业后，让学生写出几封符合要求的参考信，并实现对之前所学知识的复习总结。

在课堂完成后，让学生自主反思自己的知识掌握情况和学习收获，帮助教师更好地调整教学策略，并及时发现和帮助学生解决他们的困难。

四、教学评估1.学生的作品2.教师记录的课堂讨论和写作的过程。

3.课堂表达和问题回答。

4.教师的课后实际活动评估。