短文改错、 书面表达(樊正第)

甘沟中学2017届高三年级第二次月考英语试卷本试卷分第Ⅰ卷(选择题）和第Ⅱ卷（非选择题)两部分。

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第Ⅰ卷第二部分：阅读理解（共两节，满分40分)第一节(共15小题；每小题2分,满分30分)阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中,选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

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高考英语短文改错练习Proofreading 1 (2022届山西运城测试) 话题:瞻仰凡·高难度:易July 29, 2021 marks the 131st anniversary of Van Gogh's die. As a big fan of Van Gogh, I fulfill my lifelong dream this summer by taking a trip to Europe. I first traveled to the Netherlands, where Van Gogh born and lived for most of his life. In Amsterdam I went to the Van Gogh Museum but viewed hundreds of his works, including much of his greatest paintings. Before visiting Amsterdam, I drove to Saint-Rémy. There Van Gogh, depressing and lonely as he was, he made one masterpiece after another. My last destination was The Church at Auvers, where continues to keep the subjects of Van Gogh's paintings looking just as they did when he painted them. At that moment I had never felt close to Van Gogh.答案1.第一句:die改为death2.第二句:fulfill改为fulfilled3.第三句:在born前加was4.第四句:but改为and5.第四句:much改为many6.第五句:Before改为After7.第六句:depressing改为depressed8.第六句:把made前的he删除9.第七句:where改为which10.第八句:close改为closerProofreading 2 (2022届昆明一中摸底)话题:一位公交司机的壮举难度:易The hero in my heart is an ordinary bus driver, who did what he could save the lives on the bus.In a cold morning, he was driving on the freeway while he had a sudden heart attack. He bears the great pain and braked the bus with perseverance. Finally, he was pulled up on the emergency lane, bring 54 passengers back from the death line. Therefore, he was unconscious and lost his life.He is a common individual, but he did a awesome deed. It is due to his strong sense of responsibility that he saved life in that urgent moment. He set a good example for me and what inspires myself in my life is the spirit of being devoted to others.答案1.第一句:在could后加to2.第二句:In改为On3.第二句:while改为when4.第三句:bears改为bore5.第四句:去掉was6.第四句:bring改为bringing7.第五句:Therefore改为However8.第六句:awesome前的a改为an9.第七句:life改为lives10.第八句:myself改为meProofreading 3 (2022届成都七中测试)话题:给东京奥运健儿的一封信难度:易Dear athletes,With your excellence, your joy, or your tears, we created the magic of the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games. You were competing fierce with each other for Olympic glory.You inspired us by the power of sports. This was even more remarkable given the many challenges you had to face because of pandemic. In this difficult time, you gave the world the most precious gifts—hope. For the first time since the pandemic begins, the entire world has come together. Sports returned back to the centre stage. Billions of people around the globe were united by emotion, share moments of joy and inspiration, what gives us hope and faith in the future.Yours,Li Hua 答案1.第一句:or改为and2.第一句:we改为you3.第二句:fierce改为fiercely4.第三句:by改为with5.第四句:在pandemic前加the6.第五句:gifts改为gift7.第六句:begins改为began8.第七句:删除back9.第八句:share改为sharing10.第八句:what改为whichProofreading 4 (2022届河南天一大联考阶段性测试)话题:成为环保卫士的建议难度:中Would you like to be a greener person to protect the environment? Here was some advice. You should reduce the waste you produce daily. You can use all sides of the paper and collecting the drinking bottles. Remember to sort the waste so that it can be well recycle. It would be better for you turn off the power in your housewhen you go out. Instead of driving your car everywhere, you can save energy by either walking nor riding a bike. Beside, take a bag along when shopping to avoid using too many plastic bag. Last but not least, never spit in the public. It is real easy to be an eco-friendly person.答案1.第二句:was改为is2.第四句:all改为both3.第四句:collecting改为collect4.第五句:recycle 改为recycled5.第六句:在turn off前加to6.第七句:nor改为or7.第八句:Beside改为Besides8.第八句:bag改为bags9.第九句:去掉the10.第十句:real改为reallyProofreading 5 (2022届河南许昌质检)话题:以“劳动”为主题的班级活动难度:中Last week, our class carried out an activity, which theme is about labour.At first, the important of labour was emphasised by our teacher. Keep what he said in mind, I packed the suitcase all by me before setting off. Then come thetwo-day activity. We were asked to helping the fruit farmer pick and deliver the watermelons. Exhausted though I was, I experienced great sense of achievement from hard work.When I came back to home, I couldn't wait to share with my parents the forgettable experience. I harvested very much from the activity that they were both proud of me.答案1.第一句:which改为whose2.第二句:important改为importance3.第三句:Keep改为Keeping4.第三句:me改为myself5.第四句:come改为came6.第五句:helping改为help7.第六句:在great前加a8.第七句:去掉back后的to9.第七句:forgettable改为unforgettable10.第八句:very改为soProofreading 6 (2022届云南师大附中测试)话题:旅游的好处难度:中Traveling had become increasingly popular over the years. Perhaps one of the big reasons is that it makes people feel refreshed. Other reason is that it allows us to escape our lives. Sometimes, what our mind really need is a break from the same atmosphere. When we travel, more often than not, we will spend great deal of time outdoors, that is the best medicine for a mind locked indoors for most of the time. But traveling allows us to adopt to new perspectives. Strange enough, it's when we take a break from our problems that they sometimes manage to find solutions to them.答案1.第一句:had改为has2.第二句:big改为biggest3.第三句:Other改为Another4.第四句:need改为needs5.第五句:在great前加a6.第五句:that改为which7.第六句:But改为And8.第六句:删除adopt后的to9.第七句:Strange改为Strangely10.第七句:they改为weProofreading 7 (2022届南宁摸底)话题:毕业之际的心情和计划难度:中As June is coming, I will leave for my high school soon. I feel real excited because that mean I'm going to start my college life. At same time, I'm a little sad because I can imagine saying goodbye to my classmates and teacher. I want to take some photos with both of them. We will not be together so we will be friends forever. We will keep in touch with each other by send e-mails on the Internet. In the past three years I had learned not only how to study, but also how to be a man.I will work even harder in the future to become the proud of my school.答案1.第一句:删除for2.第二句:real改为really3.第二句:mean改为means4.第三句:At后加the5.第三句:teacher改为teachers6.第四句:both改为all7.第五句:so改为but8.第六句:send改为sending9.第七句:had改为have10.第八句:proud改为prideProofreading 8 (2022届西南四省名校大联考)话题:回国后表示感激之情难度:中I have returned back to my country safe and sound. I really wanted to express my gratitude to my host for that he has done for me. During my stay with him, I was good looked after and he showed me around many place of interest, which left a deep impression on me. In addition, with her help, my oral English has greatly improved. Besides, I have better knowledge of American culture. With its atmosphere attracted me, I hope I can have a second chance to go there.As the winter vacation is at the corner, I hope he can spare some time to visit China. Unless he comes, I will accompany him to enjoy the beauty of Chinese culture. 答案1.第一句:去掉back2.第二句:wanted改为want3.第二句:that改为what4.第三句:good改为well5.第三句:place改为places6.第四句:her改为his7.第五句:have后加a8.第六句:attracted改为attracting9.第七句:at改为around10.第八句:Unless改为IfProofreading 9 (2022届山西长治质量监测)话题:发生在日本的一次地震难度:难March 11, 2011 was a holiday in Japan. Everything was going on like usual. Most people were at home while there came an extreme loud sound like thunder. Next, people's houses began to shake. Buildings cracked and water pipes bursting. In the town of Fukushima (福岛), the main street went up into the air ten feet, holes openedup in the ground, and buildings fell into ruins. People were shocking by the unexpected quake. Some ran up and down the street, while others were trapped in the buildings were looking out their windows for help. An earthquake that hit Japan was one of the strongest disaster in the world. Many towns were destroyed in the earthquake and a great number of people was killed. Most seriously, the Fukushima nuclear accident happened.答案1.第二句:like改为as2.第三句:while改为when3.第三句:extreme改为extremely4.第五句:bursting改为burst5.第七句:shocking改为shocked6.第八句:删除trapped前的were7.第八句:out后加of8.第九句:An改为The9.第九句:disaster改为disasters10.第十句:was改为wereProofreading 10 (2022届哈尔滨六中期中)话题:散步时发现了生活中的美难度:难People always say that we lack of the eyes to realize the beauty in life. I can't agree complete. Last Friday, I wake up very early and decided to take a walk. In the square there many senior citizens were dancing, I found several elders absorb in feeding birds. Without many cars, I realized that the city looked so clean but beautiful. Some coffee shop, which used to be old and shabby, were decorated pretty well and caught my attention. On both sides of the street were big treescovering the whole city, making a green city. At that moment, I found a city was so interesting. How I regret ignore its beauty before!答案1.第一句:去掉of2.第二句:complete改为completely3.第三句:wake改为waked或woke4.第四句:there改为where5.第四句:absorb改为absorbed6.第五句:but改为and7.第六句:shop改为shops8.第七句:making后加it9.第八句:a改为the10.第九句:ignore改为ignoringProofreading 11 (2021云南文山教学质检)话题:未来规划难度:中Does the university you attend or the major you choose determine your success in the future? According up to a recent survey done by China Youth Daily, 48.6 percent of participants believe that the university one goes to plays a important role in shaping their future. On the other hand, 33.8 percent of people held the view that it's what you do in the university which matters. For some students, they think that a prestigious university does bring many benefit. Without access to academic training in college, she wouldn't have successfully got their invaluable experience. However, others believe that choose the right major has much weight than choosing a good university. Both the university and one's major are important, and they don't necessary determine your life. It's what one has learned that matters.答案1.第二句:删除According后面的up2.第二句:plays后的a改为an3.第三句:held改为hold4.第三句:which改为that5.第四句:benefit改为benefits6.第五句:she改为they7.第六句:choose改为choosing8.第六句:much改为more/much后面加more9.第七句:逗号后的and改为but10.第七句:necessary改为necessarilyProofreading 12 (2021郑州示范性高中阶段性考试)话题:健康家庭难度:中In your e-mail, you ask me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family. Here is my advice. Generally spoken, a healthy family needs efforts of every family member. First, it is obviously that parents should treat their children equally, that is important for the family. What's more, children or parents both benefit from having some day-to-day routines. In the addition, every member should give other member right expectations. Finally, you should love my own family life. In a word, if you want to own a healthy family, it is the positive attitude that are of great importance. I would appreciate very much if you could write back and give me your own opinion.答案1.第一句:ask改为asked2.第三句:spoken改为speaking3.第四句:obviously改为obvious4.第四句:逗号后的that改为which5.第五句:or改为and6.第六句:删除In后面的the7.第六句:other后面的member改为members8.第七句:my改为your9.第八句:are改为is10.第九句:appreciate后面加itProofreading 13 (2021“皖南八校”联考)话题:校园生活难度:中As it we all know, do exercise is good for our health. I join in a school sports meeting at the beginning of this term. There were many activity that we could do, such as running, the relay race or so on. All the students and teachers took part all kinds of sports competitions. I joined in the boys' 100-meter relay race of Senior 3 with three another boys from our class. We won the first prize with your efforts. I felt very happily not only because we won but also because we enjoyed doing sports, where helped us to be stronger and healthier.答案1.第一句:删除we前面的it2.第一句:do改为doing3.第二句:join改为joined4.第三句:activity改为activities5.第三句:or改为and6.第四句:part后面加in7.第五句:another改为other8.第六句:your改为our9.第七句:happily改为happy10.第七句:where改为whichProofreading 14 (2021云南师大附中适应性月考)话题:智能手机携带细菌难度:中Tens of million of people carry their smartphones with them everywhere they go, included the bathroom. Our phones are always within their grasp, which means they are also constantly being exposed to however bacteria we may have accumulated on our hands. Unfortunately, a new survey of 1,200 Americans and their cleaning habits find that 25 percent of them have never cleaned their phones. Researchers estimate that a regularly use smartphone that has never been cleaned may hold up more bacteria than an entire household bathroom. According to survey conducted by the company Vital Vio, that is common for smartphone users to come into contact with various forms of bacteria. Suddenly, eating a sandwich in your bathroom doesn't sound so badly.答案1.第一句:million改为millions2.第一句:included改为including3.第二句:their改为our4.第二句:however改为whatever5.第三句:find改为finds6.第四句:use改为used7.第四句:删除hold后面的up8.第五句:survey前面加the9.第五句:that改为it10.第六句:badly改为badProofreading 15 (2021广西钦州一中月考)话题:人物故事难度:难My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!答案1.第一句:删除last前面的in2.第二句:anything改为something3.第三句:better改为best4.第三句:decide改为decided5.第四句:step改为steps6.第六句:well改为good7.第七句:after改为when/while8.第八句:party前面的a改为the9.第八句:just后面加to10.第九句:enjoy改为enjoyingProofreading 16 (2021银川宁大附中月考)话题:运动会经历难度:中Last week we had a school sports meeting on the playground of our school. All the students in our class took an actively part in it. John took part in the 1,500-meter race. He was the fastest runner in the race, win a gold medal. Lisa was a shortgirl,who didn't do good in the high jump, so we said “Don't blame yourself”to comfort him. I took part in the 200-meter running race. As soon as I hear the sound of the starting gun, I tried my better to run faster than others. As I was running, I could hear“Come on! Come on!”from my classmate. That gave me great strength. Finally I was first person to cross the finishing line. As a result of, my class was No.1 in the sports meeting. What proud we were! It was really an exciting day!答案1.第二句:actively改为active2.第四句:win改为winning3.第五句:good改为well4.第五句:him改为her5.第七句:hear改为heard6.第七句:better改为best7.第八句:classmate改为classmates8.第十句:first前面加the9.第十一句:删除result后面的of10.第十二句:What改为HowProofreading 17 (2021四川省南充高级中学月考)话题:运用新方法游览故宫难度:难During the holiday, I tried a new way to explore the Forbidden City, where left me with deep impression. To avoid waste time buying a ticket on the spot, I made a reservation online. I got my ticket from a machine without difficulty and start the exploration. I was deep attracted by the grand architecture. To my excited, I could scan the QR codes to get detailed informations. With the VR glasses on, I even found me back to the time when the palace was under construction. How impressive! Ifound the Forbidden City both traditional or modern because of our history was made alive here.答案1.第一句:where改为which2.第一句:deep前面加a3.第二句:waste改为wasting4.第三句:start改为started5.第四句:deep改为deeply6.第五句:excited改为excitement7.第五句:informations改为information8.第六句:me改为myself9.第八句:or改为and10.第八句:删除because后面的ofProofreading 18 (2020四省八校上学期质检)话题:旅游经历难度:中Last summer vacation I travelled to America and I met a lot of foreigner. I found a tour guide which spoke both English and Chinese because of I was not confident with my English. Interesting, some native English speakers joined me in the trip. When we are in the Grand Canyon, we lost contact with our guide but everyone was worried. All of sudden, my phone rang and it was from the guide, said that he would wait for us at the gate of the Canyon. He asked I to inform the other members. I collected my courage to tell them in English, and then I was praising by them. I felt more confident afterwards.答案1.第一句:foreigner改为foreigners2.第二句:which改为who/that3.第二句:删除because后面的of4.第三句:Interesting改为Interestingly5.第四句:are改为were6.第四句:but改为so/and7.第五句:sudden前面加a8.第五句:said改为saying9.第六句:I改为me10.第七句:praising改为praisedProofreading 19 (2020河南名校线上联考)话题:个人倡议难度:中I think teenagers in China should have a specially festival that I would call it Teenager Volunteer Day. As is known to all, most teenagers in China are brought up as a only child in the family. They usually given too many care and attention.Through volunteering, teenagers may learn to think of others and many other important life lesson. In Teenager Volunteer Day, teenagers are encouraged to volunteer wherever you are needed. They may help to raise money for people which suffer from a serious disease. They may go to a home for the aged to do what is good for old people, or collecting books for children in poor areas.答案1.第一句:specially改为special2.第一句:删除call后面的it3.第二句:a改为an4.第三句:They后面加are5.第三句:many改为much6.第四句:lesson改为lessons7.第五句:In改为On8.第五句:you改为they9.第六句:which改为who10.第七句:collecting改为collectProofreading 20 (2020安徽合肥质检)话题:个人梦想难度:中I have been decided to become a pilot since I am a little kid. Each time I see a plane flying across sky, I feel extremely excited but want to fly it. That is why I believe it can make me happily and free. To make my dream come true, I have to be physically fit by keeping a healthy diet and work out regularly. Besides, I must work hard to make great progresses with my studies. Although it is not that easy to being a pilot, I'll never give up my dream and spare no effort to realize them.答案1.第一句:删除have后面的been2.第一句:am改为was3.第二句:sky前面加the4.第二句:but改为and5.第三句:why改为because6.第三句:happily改为happy7.第四句:work改为working8.第五句:progresses改为progress9.第六句:being改为be10.第六句:them改为it。

高考英语题型汇编系列之短文改错高考英语题型汇编系列之短文改错英语此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判定：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情形改正：此行多一个词：把余外的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下面一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

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短文改错2proofreading 1With winter vacation approaching, I feel very exciting. It is the best parts of the school year for me. The place I want to visit t o most is Lijiang in Yunnan Province during the winter vacatio n. The reason for which I want to go there is why it is a very b eautiful place with many old buildings. Have a history of more than 800 years, the Old Town of Lijiang is once a centre for tr ade along the Ancient Tea Horse Road. The Old Town of Lijia ng is also famous for their orderly system of waterways or brid ges. I plan to stay there for a week and visit all the uniquely to urist attractions.proofreading 2(2017·河南省普通高中毕业班高考适应性考试) Last week I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest h eld in our school. Which made me very excited. I used to be t oo shy to speak English in the public. It was Susan who aske d me practice several times in her office and correct my pronu nciation and intonation. Beside, she encouraged me to be con fident and brave whether I wanted to show my talent before ot hers. I followed her advices. That was why I won the first prize . I am deep moved by what he has done for me. I owe her a thousand thanks with her kindness.proofreading 3(2017·福建厦门高中毕业班第一次质量检查) One day, some children were playing hideandseek while they heard a boy names Tate shouting. “Help! The golden lion is c oming after me！” They go running to help Tate, only find him laughing on the ground. One child said, “You shouldn't do tha t. If you are real in trouble, nobody will come to help you.”In a rainy day, Tate shouted again, “The river is flooding and I can't swim. Help！” The children didn't believe her this time. But a girl saw everything and called the others to save him. T ate was not sorry for playing tricks on his friend. So from that day on, Tate never did that again.proofreading 4(2017·银川检测)I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. What we all know, a good learning environment is of greatly importa nce if we want to study English well. Classes teaching in Engli sh provide students for a better environment. When English is an only language in class, students will have more opportunit y to practise listening and speaking. However, there were pro blems with this method. Sometimes we may find difficult to foll ow the teacher and some slow learners may even give up lear n English. In spite of these difficulties, but I believe practice m akes perfect. With enough practice, we can overcome the difficulties and benefit from English classes in the long run. proofreading 5(2017·山东实验中学一模)Dear Nancy，I'm so glad to receive your letter invite me to your lecture in th e city library. I'd very much like to learn something about Ame rican custom and cultures, and a friend of mine is coming to p ay me a visit, and since this is for the first time that he has co me here, I would have to meet them at the railway station at 7：00 pm next Saturday. It is really pity that I can't make it to com municate with you face to face, for that I'm terribly sorry.Anyway, I'm great grateful to you for your kind invitation. If there is other chance in future, I will try every possible means to learn from you.Yours，Li Huaproofreading 6(2017·河北衡水中学一模)I believe anyone can make themselves something good to eat . Cooking is a lot of easier for us than most of us think. Last S unday my parent were away on business. I left alone, with no one to cook for me. As I had a good chance to cook myself a wonderful meal. Early in the morning I went to the market, buying some beefsteak and tomatoes and then came back. Befor e cooking, I put a few oil, salt and sugar on the steak and mix ed it together. When the pot was hotter enough I began to fry the steak. Then I cooked some tomato soup with the egg in it. The food tasted deliciously!proofreading 7(2017·潍坊模拟)Life is an mystery and we will never know that what is waiting for us. But one thing is for sure: problems are unavoidable. Fo r us, it's the process of solving problems that help us grow. Make a speech used to be a big problem for me. With a stron g accent and terribly pronunciation, I failed in speech competit ion many times, but I didn't hold back. In the contrary, I consid ered it a good chance for me to improve myself. I recorded m y speech, listening to it and corrected my pronunciation. Now I'm confident enough to give my best speech to you all.My dear friends, don't afraid of problems, but take advanta ge of it to be the best of ourselves!proofreading 8(2017·济南模拟)Dear Steven，I'm glad that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation. You asked many question in your letter, and now let me answ er them.To start with, Beijing, the capital of China, is very attractive cit y with a long history. You can found all kinds of delicious food in Beijing, of that the most famous is the roast Beijing duck. I hope we will enjoy it. Besides, there is a great number of touri st attractions worth visiting, such as the Great Wall, the Sum mer Palace or the Forbidden City. These scenic spots have at tracted millions of tourists in this year. I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing.I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible. Yours，Liu Chao短文改错2proofreading 1With winter vacation approaching, I feel very exciting. It is the best parts of the school year fo r me. The place I want to visit to most is Lijiang in Yunnan Province during the winter vacatio n. The reason for which I want to go there is why it is a very beautiful place with many old bui ldings. Have a history of more than 800 years, the Old Town of Lijiang is once a centre for tra de along the Ancient Tea Horse Road. The Old Town of Lijiang is also famous for their orderl y system of waterways or bridges. I plan to stay there for a week and visit all the uniquely tou rist attractions.proofreading 2(2017·河南省普通高中毕业班高考适应性考试)Last week I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest held in our school. Which made me very excited. I used to be too shy to speak English in the public. It was Susan who asked me practice several times in her office and correct my pronunciation and intonation. Beside, s he encouraged me to be confident and brave whether I wanted to show my talent before others. I followed her advices. That was why I won the first prize. I am deep moved by what he ha s done for me. I owe her a thousand thanks with her kindness.proofreading 3(2017·福建厦门高中毕业班第一次质量检查)One day, some children were playing hideandseek while they heard a boy names Tate shouti ng. “Help! The golden lion is coming after me！” They go running to help Tate, only find him l aughing on the ground. One child said, “You shouldn't do that. If you are real in trouble, nobo dy will come to help you.”In a rainy day, Tate shouted again, “The river is flooding and I can't swim. Help！” The childr en didn't believe her this time. But a girl saw everything and called the others to save him. Ta te was not sorry for playing tricks on his friend. So from that day on, Tate never did that again .proofreading 4(2017·银川检测)I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. What we all know, a good learning e nvironment is of greatly importance if we want to study English well. Classes teaching in Engl ish provide students for a better environment. When English is an only language in class, stu dents will have more opportunity to practise listening and speaking. However, there were pro blems with this method. Sometimes we may find difficult to follow the teacher and some slow learners may even give up learn English. In spite of these difficulties, but I believe practice m akes perfect. With enough practice, we can overcome the difficulties and benefit from English classes in the long run.proofreading 5(2017·山东实验中学一模)Dear Nancy，I'm so glad to receive your letter invite me to your lecture in the city library. I'd very much like to learn something about American custom and cultures, and a friend of mine is coming to pa y me a visit, and since this is for the first time that he has come here, I would have to meet th em at the railway station at 7：00 pm next Saturday. It is really pity that I can't make it to communicate with you face to face, for that I'm terribly sorry.Anyway, I'm great grateful to you for your kind invitation. If there is other chance in future, I will try every possible means to learn from you.Yours，Li Huaproofreading 6(2017·河北衡水中学一模)I believe anyone can make themselves something good to eat. Cooking is a lot of easier for u s than most of us think. Last Sunday my parent were away on business. I left alone, with no one to cook for me. As I had a good chance to cook myself a wonderful meal. Early in the mo rning I went to the market, buying some beefsteak and tomatoes and then came back. Befor e cooking, I put a few oil, salt and sugar on the steak and mixed it together. When the pot wa s hotter enough I began to fry the steak. Then I cooked some tomato soup with the egg in it. The food tasted deliciously!proofreading 7(2017·潍坊模拟)Life is an mystery and we will never know that what is waiting for us. But one thing is for sure : problems are unavoidable. For us, it's the process of solving problems that help us grow. Make a speech used to be a big problem for me. With a strong accent and terribly pronuncia tion, I failed in speech competition many times, but I didn't hold back. In the contrary, I consid ered it a good chance for me to improve myself. I recorded my speech, listening to it and corr ected my pronunciation. Now I'm confident enough to give my best speech to you all.My dear friends, don't afraid of problems, but take advantage of it to be the best of ourselv es!proofreading 8(2017·济南模拟)Dear Steven，I'm glad that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation. You asked many question in yo ur letter, and now let me answer them.To start with, Beijing, the capital of China, is very attractive city with a long history. You can f ound all kinds of delicious food in Beijing, of that the most famous is the roast Beijing duck. I hope we will enjoy it. Besides, there is a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting, suc h as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace or the Forbidden City. These scenic spots have attr acted millions of tourists in this year. I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijin g.I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.Yours，Liu Chao。

河南省信阳市第四高级中学高考英语专题训练：短文改错、书面表达（11）【西南师大附中】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行做出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：请在答题卡上作答。

I have been planning to join in our college basketball team 76. ________________next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can 77. ________________with other people who likes to play. They are teaching 78. ________________me the most important rules and technique of the game, 79. ________________and I was getting better all the time. We have a 80. ________________ neighborhood team where plays against other teams in the area. 81. ________________One of my neighbors is helping rest of us 82. ________________improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against 83. ________________one of the best teams in the city, I think we can 84. ________________beat them if we won't make any mistakes. 85. ________________********************************************************结束书面表达的要求是切中题意,语言准确,条理清楚。

2009年高考英语新题型样题第二卷第四部分：书面表达（共两节，满分35分）第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分１0分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同旧式写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ms Smith,I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizingare an art exhibition for high school students in ∧city.theThis will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai.ItMore than 1000 painting will be on show, but high school students andpaintings andteachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. As you arevery popularly with us Chinese high school students, we’d like topopularinvite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you couldif join them that day. Looking forward to hear from you soon.us hearingYours,Li Ming。

2020年高考英语短文改错原文、译文、长难句解析及答案详解第一部分：短文改错原文和译文Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove.I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. ＂Not that way，＂my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had wished.今天我亲自尝试做一道简单的菜。

我喜欢吃西红柿炒鸡蛋，并且我认为做这道菜一定很容易。

妈妈告诉了我如何做这道菜。

首先，我把西红柿切成块，然后放到一边。

接着，我把鸡蛋打到碗里，然后用筷子快速把鸡蛋打散。

之后，我把食用油倒入平底锅里，打开火。

我耐心等待，直到油被烧热。

接着我把西红柿和打散的蛋液一块儿倒入了平底锅里。

“不要那样，”我妈妈全力来阻止我，但没有成功。

她是对的，（这道菜）结果并没有像我希望的那样（做好）。

第二部分：短文改错长难句解析难句解析一：Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself.解析：本句中“try cooking”意思是“试着做某事”；“myself”意为“我本人、亲自”（注意区分by myself是独自的意思）。

河南省信阳市第四高级中学2022届高考英语专题训练：短文改错、书面表达（2）短文改错专项训练此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

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高考英语题型拆分组合练习及答案：短文改错及书面表达Ⅰ.短文改错(2018·唐山市模拟)Lei Haiwei，a fast food delivery man，win the championship in the Chinese poetry contest held in April 4.Lei has shown great interest in Chinese culture since he was a child.In his small house，there is bookshelf，the top of that is filled with poetry books.Though he is busy with his work，but Lei seizes any available moment to read books relating to ancient poems.He is total addicted to poems and he recites it while waiting for food at restaurants.“Recite poems not only enriches my knowledges，but also makes my job less boring，” the delivery man said.Ⅱ.书面表达(2018·成都航天中学模拟)假如你是一名中学生李华。

你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑假到世界外国语小学(World Foreign Language Primary School)给外国小朋友辅导汉语。

你希望参加此活动。

请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：1．对此活动的理解；2．个人优点；3．你的打算。

注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。

【答案】Lei Haiwei ，a fast food delivery man ，win wonthe championship in the Chinese poetry contest held in onApril 4.Lei has shown great interest in Chinese culture since he was a child.In his small house ，there is ∧a bookshelf ，the top of that whichis filled with poetry books.Though he is busy with his work ，but ﹨ Lei seizes any available moment to read booksrelating related to ancient poems.He is total totally addicted to poems and he recites it them while waiting for food at restaurants.“Recite Recitingpoems not only enriches my knowledges knowledge，but also makes my job less boring ，” the delivery man said.【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam ，I am Li Hua ，a senior high school student.As far as I am concerned ，helping the pupils of World Foreign Language Primary School to learn Chinese will be beneficial to both the primary school students and the high school student tutors ，which will result in great social effects.I'm convinced that I am qualified for this job ，because I am out-going ，independent in life and proficient in Chinese.I earnestly hope I can join in the instructive activity.I plan to communicate with the pupils first and find out what they really expect.Besides ，I will try to arouse their interest in learning Chinese by telling stories ，singing songs ，playing games and so on.I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity.Looking forward to your early reply!Yours sincerely ，Li Hua。