2017-2018学年高中英语北师大版版必修3教学案:Unit 9 Section 8 Word版含答案

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Section_Ⅷ(自修课)Writing—_报告_
一、基本结构
报告的写作可分为以下几个步骤:
1.按照报告的题头格式,写出报告的呈交人和接收人,报告日期和报告主题。

2.正文一般由以下四部分组成:
(1)简要介绍所报告的对象的基本情况及写作目的。

(2)介绍所报告的对象的好的方面。

(3)介绍所报告的对象的不好的方面或欠缺之处。

(4)最后总结并提出改进的建议或自己的观点。

二、增分佳句
1.The aim of this report is to ...
2.On the one hand, there are some advantages about ...
3.On the other hand, there exist several problems/disadvantages about ...
4.On the other hand, some things exist not so good.
5.On the other hand, I find these things disappointing.
6.However, there are many things which could be improved.
7.In conclusion ... need to do something to ...
[题目要求]
现在有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包,这一现象引起了很大关注。

现在请你根据如下内容写一篇英文报告:
1.父母经常翻看孩子的日记或书包;
2.不同人对这种现象的不同看法;
3.你自己的见解。

注意:1.词数100左右。

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

第一步:审题构思很关键
一、审题
1.确定体裁:本文是一篇报告;
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第三人称;
3.确定时态:主要以一般现在时为主。

二、构思
第一部分:提出问题。

第二部分:孩子和家长的想法。

第三部分:表达自己的想法。

第二步:核心词汇想周全
1.frequently频繁地
2.be_fed_up 厌烦,讨厌
3.argue_about 争论
4.be_sensitive_to 对……敏感
5._responsibility 责任
6.benefit 有益于
7._impression 印象
8.a_heart-to-heart_talk 心贴心的交谈
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1.现在一些家长经常查看孩子的书包或日记,这使得他们很厌烦。

Now, some parents look_into_their_children's_school_bags or read their diaries frequently, and it_makes_their_children_fed_up.
2.他们认为父母没有责任这么做,因为人人都有权利为自己的隐私保密。

They think their parents have_no_responsibility_to_do_so,_for_everyone_has_his_right_
to_have_his_own_secret.
3.另一些人认为:他们想了解自己的孩子是因为他们关心自己的孩子。

Others think they want to know their children because_their_parents_care_about_them.
4.我认为:与父母心贴心的交谈是解决这个问题的好办法。

As far as I'm concerned,we should have a heart-to-heart talk with parents, which_is_a_good_measure_to_deal_with_this_problem.
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.用非限制性定语从句改写句1
Nowadays,_some_parents_look_into_their_children's_school_bags_or_read_their_diaries_fr equently,_which_makes_their_children_fed_up.
2.用强调句型改写句3
Others_think_it_is_because_their_parents_care_about_them_that_they_want_to_know_their _children.
3.用不定式作主语改写句4
As_far_as_I'm_concerned,_to_have_a_heart-to-heart_talk_with_parents_should_be_a_good_ measure_to_deal_with_this_problem.
第五步:过渡衔接联成篇
Nowadays,_some_parents_look_into_their_children's_school_bags_or_read_their_diaries_fr equently,_which_makes_their_children_fed_up.People_have_been_arguing_about_this_topic_for _a_long_time.
On_the_one_hand,_some_students_are_sensitive_to_this_phenomenon_and_they_think_it_h as_annoyed_them_and_affected_the_relation_between_them_and_their_parents._They_think_thei r_parents_has_no_responsibility_to_do_so,_for_everyone_has_his_right_to_have_his_own_secret .
On_the_other_hand,_others_think_it_is_because_their_parents_care_about_them_that_they_ want_to_know_their_children_and_this_may_benefit_their_better_development,_although_it_ma y_make_a_bad_impression_on_them.
As_far_as_I'm_concerned,_to_have_a_heart-to-heart_talk_with_parents_should_be_a_good_ measure_to_deal_with_this_problem.。