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《步步高》竞赛优秀作文9 篇：在阳光下行走2018-04-18 文题在线：材料作文两则：1、阅读下面的文字，根据要求写一篇不少于800 字的文章。
材料一：仅仅活着是不够的，还需要有阳光、自由、和一点花的芬芳。
——安徒生材料二：三毛说，每个人的心里一亩田，用它来种什么？种桃种李种春风。
其实每个人内心，都有一块隐形的田，每个人都在忙着种植和收获，有人在心田种下温情的种子，收获安定与幸福；有人种下善良的种子，收获喜悦与感动；有人种下欲望的种子，收获苦闷与折磨；有人种下罪恶的种子，收获痛苦与惩罚。
心田里，唯有种满阳光，才会收获春光明媚。
请根据所给材料，请自选角度，自拟题目，文章不少于800 字。
2、阅读下面的文字，根据要求写一篇不少于800 字的文章。
《翻滚吧，阿信》主题曲《完美落地》中唱到：我会用尽所有力，奋力地跃起在天际。
我会更用力呼吸，飞到另一个灿烂天空，完美落地。
我相信，有努力，会开启久违的光明•…它带给你怎样的思考和启迪呢？请根据所给材料，请自选角度，自拟题目，文章不少于800 字。
优秀习作：在阳光下行走和苗我喜欢在阳光下行走——题记雨天，向来是阴冷的，细密的雨丝仿佛定格在天地间连成一幅巨大的画卷。
树木在雨中瑟瑟发抖，像一个无助的老人；小草也蜷缩着，胆怯的躲避着冰冷的雨滴；地面上积着大大小小的水洼，每一个都灰暗浑浊。
可就在雨后初晴时，一切都变了。
树木挺直了腰秆迎向阳光，经雨水冲洗后显得愈加精神，活像一个朝气蓬勃的青年；小草呢，也舒展开了自己的身姿，尽情的享受阳光带来的温暖；地面上的小水洼们明亮了起来，成了太阳的一面镜子。
阳光温暖了一草一木，照亮了世界。
在阳光下行走，我沐浴温暖，享受着万物的勃勃生机。
何玥，一个年仅十二岁的花季少女，在XX年4月被查出肿瘤,学校为她为她捐钱时，她分文不要，让父亲把钱捐给了更需要的人。
9 月，病情更加严重。
当她听说自己生命只剩三个月时，她毅然决然地将自己的器官捐给需要的人。
2025高考英语步步高大一轮复习讲义人教版必修第二册——选择性必修第四册进阶写作答案精析进阶写作答案第一章应用文写作一、实战演练Dear Glen，I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 1, Senior 3. I am writing to invite you to join us to climb a mountain next Friday，which is the Double Ninth Festival.Mountain climbing serves as a traditional activity on that day.Standing on the top of the mountain，we can enjoy broader horizons.We will gather at the school gate at 4：00 p．m.on that day.The school bus will take us to the Qingyun Mountain.Bottled water and snacks will be offered.And there are stone steps up to the mountaintop，so it won’t be so challenging and tiring.We would appreciate it if you could join us.Yours sincerely，Li Hua 二、实战演练Dear Sir or Madam，I have read your advertisement for a junior reporter at the “Campus V oice” section in the English school newspaper and I show great interest in it.I feel quite qualified for the position so I am writing to apply for it.I have been learning English for more than 10 years with a good command of oral and written English，which enables me to communicate with others fluently.Moreover，not only am I good at researching and presenting information in a compelling and informative way but I am also experienced in interviewing and st but not least，I’m outgoing as well as warmhearted，which makes me get along well with others.If given the chance，I plan to fully utilize my skills and work diligently to contribute to the “Campus V oice” section.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua 三、实战演练Dear Mr Smith，I’m glad to provide you with some suggestions on your upcoming trip to Beijing during the MidAutumn Festival.Beijing，as the capital of China，offers a rich cultural experience.The Palace Museum showcases Chinese history.The Tian’anmen Square is a symbol of China.The Great Wall offers breathtaking views.You can also explore hutongs(traditional alleyways) to experience traditional Chinese culture.As for fine food，you can try Beijing Roast Duck，Zhajiangmian and Bingtanghulu.By the way，use the subways，buses or taxis to get around.Renting a bike or using shared bicycles is also convenient.I hope these suggestions will be helpful.Enjoy your trip to Beijing during the MidAutumn Festival!Yours sincerely，Li Hua 四、实战演练Dear Anne，I’m writing to convey my sincere appreciation for your kind help and care during my stay in London，without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.During the week，the comfortable room，delicious meals and especially your friendly family members all made me feel at home，leaving me lasting memories.Moreover，guided by you，I was honored to have a chance to visit those tourist attractions in London and be exposed to such an amazing culture as well as beautiful scenery.It was your generous help that enabled me to have a better understanding of your country and culture.Thanks again for your kind help and I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by showing you around Beijing.Yours，Li Hua 五、实战演练Dear Wilson，How’s everything with you? I’m excessively sorry to tell you that I can’t attend your lecture concerning Internet Plus.I’m writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret.The reason for my being absent is that my mother is seriously ill，so I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip for an urgent matter.I will care for my mother.To be frank，I am extremely interested in the topic of Internet Plus.Therefore，it is really a pity that I will miss it.I wonder if there are any relevant materials of the lecture.If so，I can learn it by myself when it’s convenient.I want to extend my apology to you once again.I hope it won’t cause you much trouble.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology.Yours，Li Hua 六、实战演练Dear Mr Green，How is everything going? I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted for the upcoming English Evening.The play is based on the story of Hua Mulan who，after disguising herself as a man，joined the army instead of her father in the Northern Wei Dynasty.To us，however，the adaption of such an epic is quite challenging and we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play.So would you please spare some time to revise the draft script attached to this email? If possible，may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?Any of your professional advice would be highly appreciated.Best wishes.Yours truly，Li Hua 七、实战演练Dear Michael，Learning that a study trip will be held，I’d like to recommend a wonderful destination：Nanjing.Here are the reasons.As an ancient capital of six dynasties and a modern city with highquality development，Nanjing has much to provide for a study trip.For example，the grand museums and solemn monuments will undoubtedly educate us students not to forget history and motivate us to cherish the present.Meanwhile，efficient and convenient transportation adds attraction and vitality to this charming city.A study trip to Nanjing promises to be fruitful!Yours，Li Hua 八、实战演练Dear Li Jin，I’m going to study Chinese in Tianjin this summer vacation.I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding relevant courses in your school.First of all，I want to know how many students there will be in each class and if the courses focus on listening and speaking practice.Besides，I wonder whether I’ll have the opportunity to communicate with Chinese students，which will surely be a good chance for me to learn more aboutChina.At last，I would be grateful if you could tell me whether accommodations are included.I’m looking forward to your early response.Yours faithfully，Chris 九、实战演练Dear Terry，I’m glad to know you desire to be a volunteer of the Sunshine V olunteer Club.As a member，I do think it is worthwhile to be engaged in voluntary work.I’m writing to share with you the details concerning it.A wide variety of regular activities are scheduled on a weekly basis，such as visiting the nursing home and organizing events to raise people’s awareness of environmental st weekend we collected books for the children in remote areas who have little access to them.We make great efforts to spread warmth and care，and it does pay off.Once you decide，please fill in the attached application form and send it to me.Eagerly looking forward to your participation.Yours，Li Hua 十、实战演练Dear Australian friends，On behalf of our school，I feel greatly privileged to convey warm welcome to you.We are delighted to have you with us.To make your stay here memorable，various activities will be arranged to enhance our mutual understanding and experience different culture.As planned，we will hold a talent show where everyone can show their outstanding performances.Classes on traditional Chinese culture are also scheduled，such as papercutting，Chinese opera，calligraphy，etc.，followed by a giftexchanging activity.Additionally，you’re invited to pay a visit to surrounding tourist attractions.I sincerely hope that you can enjoy yourselves and wish you a pleasant journey.Thank you!Yours，Li Hua 十一、实战演练NOTICETo promote our traditional Chinese culture，“Tang Suit Design Contest” will be held in the school hall next Friday.Every participant is allowed to hand in only one entry，which must be designed on your own.Besides，each piece is required to be displayed with a brief introduction of your designphilosophy.All entries will be submitted to the Students’ Council before next Tuesday.Those that stand out as the top ten will be awarded.Pictures of the winners’works will be posted on our school website.Every student studying in the International Department is welcome to take part in the competition.The Students’ Council十二、实战演练World Environment Day on CampusJune 5th,2023 marked the 50th anniversary of World Environment Day，with the slogan “Beat Plastic Pollution”．In honor of this occasion，our school organized various activities to sensitize students about the urgent need to combat plastic pollution and promote sustainable practices.The event started with an engaging presentation by environmental experts，who highlighted the detrimental impact of plastic and emphasized the importance of reducing，reusing，and recycling plastic.Then a plastic collection drive was held so as to encourage everyone to bring in their plastic waste for proper disposal.Additionally，students participated in a postermaking competition，creating thoughtprovoking artworks that showcased the importance of sustainable alternatives.The response to these activities was overwhelming.It is through such collective efforts that we can hope to “Beat Plastic Pollution”and create a cleaner，healthier environment for future generations.English Club 十三、实战演练Last week，I participated in our school sports meeting，competing in the 400meter race—a thrilling and unforgettable experience.On hearing the sharp whistle，I dashed out，the wind rushing against my face and the crowd’s cheers echoing around me.My attempts to match the pace of fellow runners proved challenging，but I did not give up.I pushed myself to the limit and crossed the finishing line with all my strength.I was glad that I took part in the sports meeting，which not only pushed my limits but also made me realize the importance of persistence.十四、实战演练Dear schoolmates，V olunteering is playing a crucial role in students’ overall development.With the approach of winter vacation, it’s high time that we took up volunteering.A willing heart to volunteer provides us with massive benefits.V olunteering not only makes us feel connected with the community but also is beneficial to our wellbeing.Blessed with a sense ofpurpose in life，we are offered an amazing opportunity to learn valuable skills.There are different ways of serving people，ranging from volunteering at children’s home or libraries to virtual volunteering，such as helping pupils with schoolwork online.Why not throw ourselves into volunteering? It makes us a better person and creates a better world.Yours sincerely，Li Hua 十五、实战演练The Person I Admire MostWhen it comes to the person I admire most，I can’t help thinking of Fan Jinshi who is an archaeologist and a guard of Dunhuang.After graduating from Peking University，Fan Jinshi chose to work in Mogao Caves，Dunhuang.Although the living environment was terrible，she was deeply attracted by the works of art and desired to protect them for the future generations.She and her team overcame difficulties，explored scientific concepts and built a “digital Dunhuang”，which has balanced the relationship between cultural relics protection and tourism.Fan Jinshi is called the daughter of Dunhuang.She deserves the respect of all at home and abroad.第二章读后续写第2节技法指导技法三A few weeks later，when I almost forgot the contest，there came the news.To everyone’s surprise，I，an immigrant，won first place in the writing contest.Hearing the good news，I felt a sense of joy surging through me.I leapt into the air and shouted out loud，“I made it！”During the award presentation ceremony，I was invited to deliver a speech.Patiently and confidently，I told the audience how I once didn’t love writing and now enjoyed writing and how I realized the value of perseverance with the help of my teacher.I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation.With the trophy in hand，I entered the office.My teacher rose from the seat and came up to me.“Congratulations！” he said，slapping me on the back.He grinned from ear to ear as I showed him the trophy.“I owe my success to you，” I said sincerely.“Without your encouragement and belief，I wouldn’t have succeeded.”He laughed，his eyes shining with excitement.“I knew you had it in you.I’m proud of you for notgiving up.” Whenever looking back on this incident，I feel extremely grateful to him.It was my social studies teacher who encouraged me to realize my potential and thus changed the course of my life.技法四实战演练Ⅰ.1.Relieved，Jenny told the truth to everyone.2．Feeling scared and helpless，Jane sat beside a tree and held her shoulders in her arms to make herself warm.3．They hugged and kissed with tears rolling/pouring/streaming down their cheeks. 4．“I...I don’t know，” he stammered, his voice trembling with fear.5．If she had not quarreled with Tom, they would have enjoyed a great time near the lake. 6．Mother hugged the twins tightly，whose faces were glowing with excitement.7．Since he continued speaking about wanting to share his paintings with the world, I knew what had to be done.8．I thanked him，saying that not only did he mend my shirt with his craftsmanship but he also repaired my dream with sportsmanship.9．It was at that moment that I was overwhelmed with gratitude to my teacher.10．A cold feeling crept over his heart and made him shiver.11．Drowned in happiness，Jimmy dashed out of the school gate like a free bird.12．Seeing such extraordinary beauty, I think every cell in my body woke up.Ⅱ.But Molly insisted that they should wait and keep the book.She didn’t place the illustrated book on the bookshelf，hoping Rick would show up soon.A kid might make all kinds of promises and fail to keep them.But Rick was so sincere and eager that Molly believed he wouldn’t break his promise.A kid’s promise is more valuable than the cost of the book.The book would rest in the drawer still until Rick showed up.Then on one sunny morning，Molly found a little boy running all the way towards her bookstore holding something.The little boy was exactly Rick.Rick pushed the door open and rushed to the counter holding his money box.Molly excitedly pulled the drawer open，took out the illustrated book and walked out from the counter immediately.She knelt with one leg and smiled at Rick，handing the book to Rick.Rick’s eyes were shining looking at the book，and he put the box on the floor and held the book.“I think you guys had better make your deal here at the coffee table，”said Rex.Molly winked at him delightedly.The sunlight came through the glass window and cast on the little customer and the nice lady.第3节语料素材一、实战演练1．Her face lit up with happiness as she received the presents prepared by the children.2．They jumped to their feet at the news, with their eyes filled with joy.Hearing the news, they jumped to their feet with joy in their eyes.3．Overwhelmed with gratitude, I couldn’t say a word.4．I was so deeply moved that tears welled up in my eyes.5．Hearing the news that his father passed away, his eyes welled up with tears.6．She got lost and it began to rain, a deep sense of despair overwhelming her.7．Her face turning pale, she stood there, tonguetied.8．My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.9．At the thought of the frightening bear, a sense of fear welled up in him.10．He was half dead with fear when he found he was surrounded by wolves.实战演练1．Having known others’ attitude, he shook/trembled with anger, holding his clothes firmly. 2．Filled with anger, Mike was unable to speak a word.3．I was about to explode and waved my fist at him.4．I was ashamed of my bad performance in the contest.5．I stared at him in shock, with a small sound of disappointment escaping my throat.6．What surprised me was that there was a path here.7．A look of surprise crossed her face but she soon calmed down.8．Uncontrollably, a wave of regret washed over me as I heard the bad news.9．If only I had not left the farm alone!10．If I had followed his advice, we would be having fun together.二、实战演练Ⅰ.1.She jumped up，dashed forward and hugged the boy tightly.2．Standing beside the empty road，they looked up into the sky, feeling the precious peace. 3．As night was beginning to fall, Jane sat on the grass, staring at the vast sky, frightened and hungry.4．With a bunch of flowers in her hands，Mindy stood beside the sea and looked down at the flowers with a smile，wondering what to do tomorrow.5．She crept along the path，bent over swiftly and cupped her hands around the butterfly gently. 6．With her heart beating wildly，the innocent girl，held by her mom and screaming withexcitement，unwrapped her delicate gift box which she had been looking forward to without any hesitation.7．Every one of us on the bus looked on and laughed crazily.Ryan struggled to his feet，dusted the jacket and made his way to an empty seat.8．Looking straight into my eyes，Mike stroked my hair, whispering，“You are the most beautiful girl I’ve ever met.”Ⅱ.1.the twins got up early, tiptoed to the kitchen and scooped some flour out of the bag their father slid into the kitchen，patting the twins’ shoulders and comforting them in a soft voice they carried the breakfast，advanced upstairs and woke up their mother2．I signaled to him with a thumbsup, feeling proud of him He smiled, took a deep breath and got ready for the race，eyes brimming with determination every runner shot like an arrow三、实战演练1．The gentle breeze stroked his head，as if comforting all his tiredness.2．I closed my eyes and daydreamed in the speeding car.Winding rivers, lofty mountains, deep alleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascination.3．The sun looked at her with a glowing smile and the flowers nodded merrily towards her. 4．The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven，whipping against the branches of lined trees.5．On the day back to school，dark clouds hung low in the sky.The rain poured down，with cold drops and angry winds slapping my face.I was drowned in floods of warm tears and freezing rain.四、实战演练1．Festivals let us enjoy life，be proud of our customs and forget our work for a little while. 2．The precious tricycle not only helped me through that tough period，but also carried Father’s love forward into the far，far future.3．Seeing the paper bag，I felt as if it had been reminding me that I should pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me every time I meet someone in need.4．No matter how ordinary a job is，it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our respect. 5．Cold as the rain was，great warmth filled his heart like never before.6．It dawned on me that we should always be an honest person whatever situations we are in.7．I am firmly convinced that the slight power of every person can make our country more prosperous.8．All the students came to realize that everyone wants and deserves to be treated with respect，dignity and warmth.9．It is not how much we do but how much love we put into what we do that benefits our work most.10．The gift you give is not something your loved one keeps，but a voluntary contribution towards the people who really need it in their lives.第4节分类集训一、When my Monday came，I again took the bus to KMTV alone and waited.Everything was familiar this time.But hearing the musical sounds and applause from time to time，I felt my heart was pounding with excitement and nervousness.Eventually，it was my turn.Taking a deep breath，I calmed down.Confident，I went to the piano and began to play.Easy，so easy! Fun almost...right up to the coda at the end.I suddenly realized I should not be at the end! My heart jumped to my mouth.I had skipped a part.A huge part.How did that happen?Somehow my brain went to work and I continued playing.I tried to smile at the camera and played the rest smoothly as if no skipping had happened.After what seemed an eternity，I stopped playing.However，it turned out that my performance had probably lasted barely a minute.Surely the result was as expected—I wasn’t the winner.On my way home，I surprised myself by feeling more relieved than disappointed.I could not pretend that my performance was best.In truth，the other three were far superior.When I came back home to talk about “The Big Skip”，Daddy smiled，“It may not have been noticed by someone who doesn’t know Schubert’s ‘Ave Maria’．Your movement was smooth.You didn’t fall apart.All in all，a worthwhile experience.”二、No sooner had I picked up my phone than Lisa called me.“Belle，how is it going? Do you still need my help？” Lisa asked.“Thanks，Lisa.Everything is OK.And I’d like to tell you about it，” I said.I told her exactly what had happened，and specifically described how I had solved the problem.Lisa praised me for my quick wit.Then I asked her to teach me German in case I needed it later.She promised.By the end of the holiday，I could have already communicated with her in some simple German words.So I was ready for the new term with confidence.When the German teacher entered the classroom in the new term，I felt I’d seen her somewhere before.What amazed me was that she came over to me，saying，“Glad to see you again！I’m Florence.” I was surprised to find that she was the daughter of the lady that I had helped during the holiday.What a fantastic fate! As our new foreign teacher，Florence was patient and considerate.We all respected her and took every lesson seriously.I even made friends with her mother，so I had more opportunities to practise speaking German.I was resolved to visit Germany the next summer holiday.三、Giving or keeping? I struggled with myself.Giving it? Hardly could I imagine life without the model car! After all，it was my most precious treasure，which I had been proud of.My heart kept aching at the prospect of giving it away.Nope! I shook my head determinedly.Glancing at mymother’s expectant eyes，I couldn’t help sobbing.Keeping it? Definitely，it would otherwise upset Alex.Torn between the two tough choices，I was totally at a loss.Nevertheless，deep down，I could feel my affection for Alex.Yep! I resolved to do the right thing.In the moment of parting，my model car went with Alex.Though I was crushed to see it go，my heart sang when I saw his beaming face as he tightly clutched it.Seeing the thumbsup from my mother and sister，I did swell with relief，pride and joy，for I knew it was not a gift；to some extent，it was our concern and love for him.Plus，sharing the model car also strengthened our bond，which，I was fully convinced，would always uplift him.An effort made for the happiness of others lifted us above ourselves as well.四、Then came the final testing day.The whole class gathered in the science classroom，watching breathlessly as Jeff carefully loaded their selfmade robotic hand onto Sergio’s right arm.It fitted quite well! So excited was Sergio that his arm trembled slightly.Having put a baseball on the desk，Jeff signed to Sergio to pick it up.Slowly，Sergio extended his right hand and reached for the ball.Successfully he caught hold of it and everyone present broke into cheers! Holding the ball，Sergio couldn’t contain his tears.Never in his life did he expect to catch something with his right hand!The lifechanging gift for Sergio drew huge attention.Jeff and his students became an instant hit and various media competed to cover the news.When interviewed about the intention of the project，Jeff said，“I intended Sergio’s robotic hand to show our support for him.Meanwhile，I hope to foster students’ scientific spirit through this handson operation.” His students stated that Jeff challenged them to transform abstract concepts into reality，from which they benefited greatly.Soon voluntary donations poured in，which would go to the school’s scientific research and help students develop better.五、Ruby walked over to my mother，we girls holding our breath.We waited to see who would shout first and what terrible things would be said.“We are sorry about the flowers.The girls will fix them and help weed the roses，” said Mom.My sisters and I looked at each other in horror，but Ruby smiled through her tears.“I know we’re particular about these roses，but they’re very special because they remind me of my mother.”Soon both women were down on their knees examining the damaged bushes together.A few weeks later，the plants all came back to life.My mother and Ruby worked together on the roses all summer and many summers to follow.So did my sisters and I．A friendship was formed between the families.Ruby became part of our family，spending many happy hours at our house，especially during countless birthdays，graduations and weddings.And the rose fence wasn’t a fence any longer.My mother had turned it into a bridge.六、Suddenly，I remembered the door to the basement.I dashed to the door and opened it withoutany hesitation.There she sat on the top step，quiet as a mouse，head down，ears hanging down.She had been following me，as she always did，and I had casually closed the door on her.So she had to wait quietly for me to find her.I don’t know whether she assumed that she was being punished，but it was clear that she was hurt，for she behaved differently this time.I held her in my arms tightly，telling her how sorry I was.I touched her head and rubbed her belly gently，telling her that she was not making trouble.She let me hold her for exactly one minute and then suddenly ran off，returning with a toy for me to throw.At that very moment，Dottie taught me a valuable lesson：Forgive quickly because forgiveness is to light a lamp not just for others but also for ourselves.Life is short.There is so much love to offer and receive and so many toys to chase.。
2021届新高考英语二轮复习概要写作步步高（11—15）11.阅读下面短文, 根据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容概要。
Most students experience a lot of stress while preparing for exams, as both their parents and teachers expect them to get high scores. Students who feel anxious are likely to experience problems like difficulty in concentrating while studying, confusion, feeling stressed while looking at difficult questions, feeling blank, sweating, sleepless, etc. Under such circumstances they end up scoring less than they could have. Therefore, it’s extreme ly important for students to learn about how to overcome fear, so that they can take their examination confidently, finally earning good grades .Here are a few tips on ways to overcome exam fear.There are many students who take studies lightly, leaving everything to be studied at the last minute. As a result, when exams are around the corner, they feel scared, as they don’t know where to start, and what to study. So the easiest way of overcoming this problem is to start studying much before the exam. Another common mistake that many students make is that they don’t make an effort to understand the subject. When they have memorized things without understanding them, the chances of forgetting are more. Therefore, it is vital to understandthe concept before memorizing it. In this way, you will never forget any important point. Besides, that the exams are coming does not mean that you have to sit with your books for the entire day, and students should take regular breaks to relax and refresh their mind. However, they should avoid watching too much TV and addicting themselves to the Internet, in which way, they are more likely to waste time.A part from the tips above, here are some points that will help students cope with exam-related anxiety. For example, before the exam, avoid studying anything new or having conversations with your classmates about what they have studied and how much they have studied, both of which will make you more nervous. During the exam, if you get blank after seeing difficult questions, ignore them for the time being, and deal with those you find easier. Once you have completed them, go back to the difficult ones.12.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
2025高考语文步步高大一轮复习讲义板块十写作学案85作文书写——比天还大的事说作文书写是比天还大的事，你可能觉得有点夸张，不以为意。
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这位阅卷老师的话可能有些极端，却道出了高考作文评分中，书写影响得分的客观事实。
江苏省教育科学“十三五”规划重点课题“基于大数据技术学业质量精准评价与指导的服务平台建设及应用研究”阶段性研究成果表明：在大规模考试的阅卷中，写字水平和作文成绩之间存在显著相关性，结果验证了语文考试中作文的“印象分”是存在的。
不少考生自认为写作水平不错，可就是考场作文得不了高分，为此十分苦恼，百思不得其解，这其中的原因大概率与书写有关。
在此就同大家聊一聊这个话题。
活动一检查书写状况，强化书写意识(一)书写就是分数，书写就是素养高考阅卷工作一结束，便有一篇“字帖版”作文答卷流出场外。
请看这篇“字帖版”作文答卷：这种答卷一经流出，便引发众人热议与追捧。
这背后反映了当今高考对一手漂亮字的渴慕之心。
这种字体的练习，必定非一日之功，但不可否认的是，它可以深刻影响考生的高考成绩。
1．书写就是印象分，印象分很大，决定“生死”，这种情况从古至今都存在。
下面请看来自一位阅卷老师的手记：干净、工整、美观的卷面是得高分的王牌，丑陋、潦草不清的卷面是一场打不赢的“官司”。
干净、工整的卷面，会让人眼前一亮；美观、艺术的字体，会让人仿佛六月里喝了雪水，那种神清气爽的愉悦感是无以言表的。
卷面好的作文，阅卷老师会想方设法地找理由给分；卷面欠佳的作文，阅卷老师则会按照最低标准给分。
卷面的好坏将直接影响你作文得分的高低，尤其是在阅卷的最后几天，阅卷人进入审美疲劳期的时候。
一篇文章定“生死”，而“生死”皆由书写定。
这种情况在古代科举制度下已然存在。
2016年江苏卷文言文阅读选的是张岱的《家传》，他是这样记载他的祖父张汝霖的：“幼好古学，博览群书。
描写步步高的作文步步高作文1步步高点读机是叔叔送我的新年礼物。
步步高点读机可漂亮了。
点读机呈长方形，就如一本大书本。
正中央是个圆形，里面写着“步步高”这三个白色的字。
点读机的机面是淡蓝的，显得十分恬静，一看到它，浮躁的心就会安静下来。
点读机的右边是各种按钮，如测验键，学习键，听课文键等等。
步步高点读机的功能很多，是学习的好帮手，又是小朋友的好玩具。
最吸引我的是步步高点读机里的.宠物升级了。
只要我不断地学习、听课文、辅导、背单词和测验，一定时间后，宠物就会跳出来，对你说：“升级了，升级了。
”也就是说宠物的年龄会增长，只要你不断地玩步步高点读机，宠物就会长大长大再长大，不知道100岁的宠物会是什么样的呢？我好期待哦。
现在，我的宠物已经三岁了。
我只知道两岁的宠物是最搞笑的了。
它没穿上衣，只穿了一条短裤，一会儿对着你扭扭屁股，一会儿转过它那胖呼呼的头，对着你眨一眨眼睛。
看着这个滑稽的宠物，我觉得我的心在飞扬。
这台神奇的步步高点读机，我太喜欢你了。
步步高作文2今天,我到李教师家去补习,一走进阳台,就看到阳台里摆着数盆长得勃勃生机的植物,有杜鹃花、桂花、茶花……但我一眼就喜欢上了那盆生机勃勃的“步步高”。
“步步高”在众植物中显得如此与众不同,单纯而执着。
说它单纯，那是因为“步步高”没有花，也没有果，除了唯一的茎，就是无数条飘展的狭长的叶子；说它执着，是因为它一味地绿,一味地成长,从不停步，听老师说，正因为这样，就把它从新年的花市中抱了回来。
一条粗壮的茎上四周飘垂着无数条两尺多长,三寸宽的狭长的叶子,墨绿色的的茎直直的.，粗粗的，一个劲儿向上伸展，最底下叶子枯萎脱落的地方露出黄褐色的的叶轮。
茎的四周密密麻麻地遍长着一片又一片的叶子,各条叶子很有规律地长在不同的轮上。
叶子长得很快,不用几天又长着了新的叶子。
步步高墨绿的叶子向下垂着，远远望去，好像一个墨绿的圆球，在灿烂的阳光照耀下，叶子发出墨绿的光芒，可引人注目了。
《步步高》竞赛优秀作文9篇：在阳光下行走文题在线：材料两则：1、阅读下面的文字，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
材料一：仅仅活着是不够的，还需要有阳光、自由、和一点花的芬芳。
——安徒生材料二：三毛说，每个人的心里一亩田，用它来种什么？种桃种李种春风。
其实每个人内心，都有一块隐形的田，每个人都在忙着种植和收获，有人在心田种下温情的种子，收获安定与幸福；有人种下善良的种子，收获喜悦与感动；有人种下欲望的种子，收获苦闷与折磨；有人种下罪恶的种子，收获痛苦与惩罚。
心田里，唯有种满阳光，才会收获春光明媚。
请根据所给材料，请自选角度，自拟题目，文章不少于800字。
2、阅读下面的文字，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
《翻滚吧，阿信》主题曲《完美落地》中唱到：“我会用尽所有力，奋力地跃起在天际。
我会更用力呼吸，飞到另一个灿烂天空，完美落地。
我相信，有努力，会开启久违的光明……” 它带给你怎样的思考和启迪呢？请根据所给材料，请自选角度，自拟题目，文章不少于800字。
优秀习作：在阳光下行走和苗我喜欢在阳光下行走——题记雨天，向来是阴冷的，细密的雨丝仿佛定格在天地间连成一幅巨大的画卷。
树木在雨中瑟瑟发抖，像一个无助的老人；小草也蜷缩着，胆怯的躲避着冰冷的雨滴；地面上积着大大小小的水洼，每一个都灰暗浑浊。
可就在雨后初晴时，一切都变了。
树木挺直了腰秆迎向阳光，经雨水冲洗后显得愈加精神，活像一个朝气蓬勃的青年；小草呢，也舒展开了自己的身姿，尽情的享受阳光带来的温暖；地面上的小水洼们明亮了起来，成了太阳的一面镜子。
阳光温暖了一草一木，照亮了世界。
在阳光下行走，我沐浴温暖，享受着万物的勃勃生机。
何玥，一个年仅十二岁的花季少女，在XX年4月被查出肿瘤，学校为她为她捐钱时，她分文不要，让父亲把钱捐给了更需要的人。
9月，病情更加严重。
当她听说自己生命只剩三个月时，她毅然决然地将自己的器官捐给需要的人。
她是伟大的，她捐出的器官挽救了三个人的生命。
高中写作步步高一如何写好简单句简单句( 1 )简单句的基本句型(1) S(主语）+V（系动词）+P(表语）主系表结构是由“主语+系动词+表语”组成，用以说明主语的特征，类属，状态，身份等。
系动词不能表达一个完整的意思，必须加上一个表明主语身份或状态的表语构成复合谓语。
连系动词有三类:（1）表示特征和存在状态的be，seem,, appear, look, smell, taste, sound;(2）表示状态延续的remain,stay,keep,continue,stand;(3）表示状态变化的become,get,turn,go,run,fall,come,grow.如:1. Traffic in cities is getting heavier and heavier.2. Anyone should be honest and helpful to his families, teachers and classmates.本句型中表语可以由名词，代词，形容词，副词，介词短语和分词等充当，如：1.He (主语) is (系动词) a boy. (名词作表语)2.She (主语) looks (系动词) beautiful. (形容词作表语)3.He (主语) is (系动词) in good health. (介词短语作表语)4.The students (主语) became (系动词) annoyed. (过去分词作表语)简单句的基本句型(2) S（主语）＋Ｖ（谓语）＋（Ａ）（状语）主谓结构是由“主语+不及物动词”构成,常用来表示主语的动作。
此句型的句子有一个共同特点，谓语动词是不及物动词，能表达完整的意思,后面可以跟副词、介词短语、状语从句等。
谓语的修饰语叫状语,状语可以出现在句首或句末，有时无状语。
如:1. Great（定语）changes（主语）have taken place（谓语）in my home town（状语）in the past ten years.2.She（主语）sat（谓语）there alone, reading a novel.（形容词alone和分词短语作伴随状语）3.翻译下列句子：（1）她感到很愉快。
第二节话题写作——说理议论10个高频写作词汇情景专练1．advantage n．优点；有利条件，优势相关链接disadvantage n．缺点写作素材现在，越来越多的学生都把时间花费到了网络上面，网上聊天，网上购物，网络游戏等等。
在网络的世界里，我们得到了很多帮助，但也有些负面影响。
例如许多学生因沉迷于网络游戏而耽误了功课。
请谈谈网络对学生的影响。
写作训练(1)所有的事情都有益处和害处。
显然一些问题能够在微博的帮助下得到快速解决。
Everything_has_its_advantages_and_disadvantages. It is clear that some events/problems can be quickly solved with the help of Micro Blogs.(2)众所周知，每件事情都有两面性。
随着微博在学生中越来越流行，毫无疑问微博的一些缺点也在日常生活中显现出来。
As we all know，every coin has two sides.As Micro Blogs are more and more popular among students，there_is_no_doubt_that_some_disadvantages_of_Micro_Blogs_also_appear_in_our_daily_life.(3)现在我的同学中有很多人喜欢业余时间上网。
我认为网络会给我们带来好处也有坏处。
Now many of my classmates like to surf the Internet in their spare time.I_think_Internet_ can_bring_us_both_advantages_and_disadvantages.2．popular adj.流行的相关链接popularity n．普及，流行increasingly ad v.越来越多地texting messages发送短信写作素材1写作训练1(1)现在，网上聊天已经在学生中越来越流行。
作文步步高2016年9月
第一段落：
听说那边的梧桐树叶子都黄了，风一吹，就哗啦啦地响，好像
是在跟路过的每个人打招呼。
阳光也特别给面子，透过叶子撒下来，地上都是斑斑点点的影子，走在上面都觉得心情好了不少。
第二段落：
晚上了，街上的灯都亮了，像星星一样。
我翻开一本书，那些
字儿就像活了一样，跳到我眼前来。
有的讲梦想，有的讲坚持，看
得我热血沸腾的，感觉自己也能干出一番大事业来。
第三段落：
昨晚下了一场大雨，今早起来空气都是新鲜的。
我走在小巷里，脚下湿漉漉的，两边都是老房子，感觉自己就像穿越了似的。
偶尔
还有鸟叫声，清脆得很，真是好听。
第四段落：
找个咖啡店坐坐，点个拿铁，看着窗外的人来人往，感觉就像在看一场电影。
有时候我就这么坐着，什么都不想，就让咖啡的香味在鼻子里飘来飘去，心里就觉得特别舒服。
第五段落：
爬到山顶，眼前就是一片云海，感觉自己就像站在了天上。
远处的山连绵不断，看得人心胸开阔。
深呼吸一口，感觉整个人都轻松了，什么烦恼都没有了，只想一直这么待着，看看风景，感受一下大自然的美好。
